Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Old Jingshen having to raise the Servant Elders to Nascent Soul level would probably be one of the better outcomes if we want to destroy the Jingshen and take their core lands in the future. Incite tension between them and Old Jingshen, back them just enough to feed Jingshen's paranoia and wait for the fireworks. Before removing the Jingshen Nascent prospects we should reach an agreement with the Servant Elders. The agreement doesn't have to be about anything in particular, just something so that Manual can say they reached an agreement and tweak Jingshen's paranoia.
 
Lipita Delphi 14 - Lipita Delphi & Anastasia Outi - On the Matter of Maleficarum, Pt. 1
TURN 11, OMAKE 14 [Lipita]
Lipita Delphi 14: Lipita Delphi & Anastasia Outi - On the Matter of Maleficarum, Pt. 1

Anastasia Outi itched fiercely, the flesh beneath her skin and the channels of her meridians tingling and demanding blessed relief. The sensation was uncomfortable but she restrained herself from trying to alleviate the discomfort knowing the futility of the effort from past attempts. It was a familiar unpleasantness since the most recent Hundred-Year Trials and her encounter with that Fifth Sea hunter. Her physical wounds from being set ablaze with merely a glance from that terrifying opponent had long since healed but her body still carried a ghostly echo of that fierce consuming heat devouring her from within. Her convalescence in the aftermath had been sheer torture swathed as she was in liniment and bandages and feeling the scorched nerve endings regrowing absent a way to alleviate their newfound sensitiveness without setting back her healing.

Scouring her bronzed flesh with steel wool hadn't helped as had other increasingly drastic measures so she'd found herself diving into meditation and will-strengthening exercises to withstand the ever-present haunting. Surprisingly, tending and grooming her mount had proved a useful distraction probably because the Beast-Bond link gave her mind useful practice in processing unfamiliar sense experience. Thus in the pale light of dawn, Anastasia was outside in the stables of one of the many checkpoints scattered across the length of the Scorpion Road that traveled through the territory of the Golden Devils Clan in the Organ Meat Desert.

"Alright, how about Elaphia? It's a nice solid name of Optimatoi heritage. I believe there was once an Elaphia counted among the Nascent Souls of the Clan before we were driven to the desert." Anastasia suggested, slowly combing dust and sediment from the fur of her mount.

Crowned with a magnificent rack of antlers formed from exquisite orange red wood, Anastasia's bonded magical Yew Deer turned its head to look at her imperiously then back away dismissively. Through the link between their spirits, a clear sense of rejection flowed from the spirit beast.

"You know, we've been partners for several decades now ever since I rose into Foundation Establishment and I broke you free of the brute who'd enslaved you but I still have nothing better to call you than Deer." Anastasia grunted exasperatedly, moving around to the other side of the deer to attend to its coat. "You've rejected every name I propose and then some. You clearly haven't adopted Deer as your name but you are being remarkably picky about everything else."

As a bonded spirit beast, the Yew Deer benefited from Anastasia's cultivation base even as shallow into the second great realm as it was. Its intelligence and comprehension had improved from the union as in turn had Anastasia's stamina and ability to digest certain flora. True to its elevated status, Anastasia felt her mount consider the matter with surprising introspection and reply with a feeling of disagreement, exploration and anticipation of revelation.

"Huh, the names don't fit eh? That's why you reject them. You're looking for something that resonates with your being, your history and your will." Anastasia paused in consideration. "I can understand that. Surprisingly deep thinking for an idiot who let himself get captured by a mortal but maybe the heavens do have sympathy for fools." She grinned in reminiscence of their first meeting.

"Hey!" Spluttering, Anastasia stepped back and wiped at her face with the sleeve of her tunic, frantically trying to clean off the glob of poisonous spit that the deer had lobbed at her. He did not like being reminded of the weakness and treachery that had led to him being captured.

"Did you have to get it in my mouth, seriously?" Anastasia complained as she uncapped a canteen and rinsed out her mouth. "You're picking up bad habits from those camels. You could really kill someone mortal with that attack."

The deer was unapologetic, snorting in reply. It sent a clear sense of satisfied revenge for the insult and stamped a hind leg on the stone floor of the stable. Standing near even with the head of the average Third Sea native mortal, it was an impressive figure of primal strength, capable of easily bearing Anastasia even with the surprising weight the Blood of Bronze added to her slight constitution. Currently it radiated a sense of smug self-satisfaction as its rider sulked beside its bulk.

A slim figure in simple legionnaire armor entering the entrance of the stables drew the attention of the duo. The young man called out, "Pardon the interruption, ma'am. There's a letter here for you, Centurion Outi."

Taking the letter and thanking the courier, Anastasia opened the missive curious as to the unexpected correspondence. Maybe Matthaios was finally replying to the letter she'd sent him a couple of months ago.

For the attention of Centurion Anastasia Outi.

Greetings Senior,

Please forgive the unannounced dispatch of this letter. I am Lipita Delphi, the attendant you hopefully recall assisting you in your purchase of feedstock from the Chimaera Echidna Ranch in the Beast-Raising Forest in the early months of this year. I have begun preparations for an expedition of great peril but also immense promise in reward. In anticipation of this venture, I have sought to improve my grounding in some of the more esoteric aspects of cultivation. In our interaction you provided an illuminating insight to the nature of maleficarum or curses as they pertain to the workings of cultivators. I have independently begun exploration of the topic but I was hoping that you could provide greater elucidation on the subject particularly as you mentioned that you were familiar with an accomplished curse-worker. In addition, your heritage as a member of the Outi legacy is of great interest in the matter of the operation of karmic effects associated with curses and blessings.

I hope that this request finds favor with you and that it will not be too much of an imposition on your duties to offer such wisdom as you are willing in this matter. I would be most appreciative of any assistance you could provide. The favor would most assuredly be returned from my resources in my own right and my capacity as a scion of the most ancient and august lineage of the Delphi.

May the Imperator's grace ever be with you.

Your clanswoman and sister-in-service,


Lipita Delphi

"Huh, certainly a bold junior that one." Anastasia mused after reading the letter. "Don't know where she got the idea that I'm an expert on curses but it's very flattering to be sought after. I'll have to see what I can scribble down, definitely reach out to Matthaios if he ever gets around to replying my correspondence. It would be nice to talk to someone fun, you know, since Iphigenia's gone now."

A trace of mourning slipped into her voice as always when she thought of her departed friend. She pulled away from delving into memories of their time together and set to finding ink and paper. The reply wasn't going to write itself.

AN: (1206 words) @Alectai @no. @ReaderOfFate Please threadmark. This is part 1 of a collaboration with @AlphaDelta
 
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Is like the OverGod took (another) personal attention in his life and clan to the cheering of beings outside his Dimension that took a ridiculous amount of their own energy and time to help him :p :D
Truly it seems the Golden Devil strategy of contacting eldritch creatures from beyond their universe for power is continuing to pay off.
Other cultivators may say that nooo such behavior is dangerous and ends up in death and copious amount of tentacles.
But we know better.:D:D
 
Seems to me like the Jingshen had stolen the Nascent Tribulation treasures that should have been ours in the first place, had we been able to spare time to go looking for them. Taking those treasures from the Jingshen would be merely restoring the treasures into the hands of their rightful owners i.e. us.

Or the Heavens stole what should have been our fortuitous encounters and discoveries and gave them to the Jingshen, which ends in the same result.
 
Katha Theodoros - Good Seed Background
Katha Theodoros



Second and last of this generation of the Theodoroi, once the famed vanguard of Optimatoi who once commanded much affluence and a strong bloodline of tireless and indomitable warriors over the ages, now little more than a crumbling homestead and empty pillars in place of the living.

Katha's mother, Riala, was a great hope for the Theodoroi, for in her was a genius unmatched in their family for generations and who might yet have been another Rina Callista - except that she died at the hands of the Grand Elder, in a lecture before the Heavenly Star Trial that cost many dearly. Her mother was a genius, through whom the Blood of Bronze flowed strongly, expressing much of the Theodoroi's legendary tirelessness.

Katha inherited her quick mind and her beauty, but not her talent. The Blood of Bronze is barely present in her. It may never express itself properly in her, though her skin remains bronzed enough that her heirs may yet develop a spark. A low hope, but a hope nonetheless.

So consigned to mediocrity, the only thing that saved Katha from forever remaining in her genius twin brother's shadow was a combination of mindset and spite. Her brother, who inherited their mother's strength of blood but lacked her ruthlessness, still struggled to find meaning in cultivation after witnessing the loss of his mother and the withering of their father, when his meridians were shattered in the Trials. Katha, who saw the same, saw the only path she could take beside her brother. Maybe even surpass him.

And so she dedicated herself that way, taking up her father's sword now that he could no longer wield it. And she would conquer the Heavens themselves, one stroke at a time, until she or the Heavens were finally spent.

Excellence or Death, and in Death, Excellence. It was the only path.

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High Concept: Sword Intent, all day and everyday. If one does not have talent, then once must seize the bull by the horns and wrestle it to the ground if need be. With sword in hand, cleave the Heavens!

Started: 16 Years Old, Turn 11 (Current Lifespan Limit: Turn 35)
Current Status, circa Turn 16 Start: Healthy, 116 Years Old
Cultivation Years: 235 Cultivation Years, 5th Pillar (Late) of Foundation Establishment
Additional Impact: +26 Total
The Hornsword (Reforged into Raincutter): +2
Theodoroi Family Bronze Piece (Reforged into the Oathshield): +2
The True Blood of Iron: +14
The Hand of Spite: +8
Life-Saving Treasures: 2
Turn 11: +1
Turn 12: +1, -2
Turn 13: +0
Turn 14: +1
Turn 15: +0
Turn 16: +1, -1
Turn 17: +1
Tribulation Treasures: 1
Turn 15: +1
Lifespan Enhancement: +0 Years
Special Treasures: The True Blood of Iron - The ancestral bloodline of the Iron Legions, the tip of the spear of the Sea-Conquering Army. The bloodline of champions, trading fortitude and cooperation for singular excellence on the battlefield.
Starting Perk: The Single Point: Tempered by the death of her mother and the maiming of her father, this seed's Dao is already partially formed and developed.
Cultivation Goal: 13th Heavenstage Orthodox, then from there the Emperor's Pillar
Plot Coupons: Nada. Zilch. She's a poor baby.

Turn 11 Fate
Gained 212 Cultivation Years, leaping from the 1st Heavenstage to the 12th in a mere ten years at the feet of a Horned Scion Beetle, Nascent Soul overseer of the Yuan Man-As-Mountain Array. As a parting gift to an inferior aspirant, also acquired the Hornsword, a piece of the beetle's horn hewn into an indestructible, impossibly-tough and sharp, vaguely sword-shaped implement. The vagaries of Fate ensure that her destiny will not be spent fighting and struggling for every scrap of power.
Turn 12 Fate
Katha entered the Qiguai Secret Realm, but Fate simply opposed her. Her first attempt to recover an artifact saw her gain an ancient piece of Theodoroi Family Bronze (+2 Impact) from an ancestor millennia ago, powerful enough to be forged in spear or shield, one of high renown. After finding it, she was ambushed and beaten down by a furious Jingshen scion, avoiding the worst of his blows through use of a treasure. She fled, and he pursued her, looking to win glory for himself by killing a promising cultivator of another Clan. Hunting her down, he forced the use of a second treasure, and then forced her into a field of torn space, crippling her meridians and leaving her for dead, only the space tearing itself to pieces preventing him from killing her entirely. She left immiserated and weak, barely alive.
Turn 13 Fate
One of many fighting back against one of the Bramble Towers fuelling the growth of the Poison Maze, Katha descended deep beneath the tower, where she discovered one of the reagants of the Maze's unnatural growth. While the Maze itself merely used it as fuel, the Purified Ironblood that lay under it and served as a source of occasional, difficult-to-digest energy was far beneath the ground. As she passed through, she seemingly moved through portals and space in ways that were not quite correct, reaching near the heart of the Maze itself, an area guarded with all manner of ghosts and zombified beasts.

The reanimated corpse of a guardian beetle there peculiarly let her pass, despite being in the top echelon of Core strength. She reached a pool of pure iron - the very idea of Iron, of strength, rigidity, invincibility. Naturally, she did what any sensible person would do and attempted to absorb it all into her body. Instead, it rose up, transforming itself into a person of iron, and attempted to possess her entirely. For seven days and nights she grappled with the pure Ironblood, and in the end she walked out... changed. The rigidity of the Blood of Iron had melded into her very being, her words more metallic, rust occasionally appearing on her, needing to be sanded off.

Yet for all this, she had earned a body like none the Clan had seen in millennia. The True Blood of Iron (+14 Impact) made her powerful in ways that the Blood of Bronze did not, for the Blood of Bronze was the blood of those who worked together, the sons and daughters of the phalanx. The True Blood of Iron was the sword of the lone warrior, the shield-shattering blade of the mighty. While recovery was next to impossible, so was harm - with speed, strength, and resilience alike, few could truly harm Katha now, though she found herself with a substantial vulnerability to water.

A Core Formation Elder would be the minimum to harm her with an ordinary blow, though she could be harmed in other ways. She was nearly twenty times heavier than she had been, weighing far more than iron should. Without the use of Qi to lighten her steps, she would shatter chairs, sink through floors, and leave holes in the ground. Relatively invincible, her blows were incredibly quick and deadly - though her mind could no longer keep up with the speed her body was capable of outputting, making battle far more difficult than it seemed - even striking at Qi Condensation enemies was difficult when one could not control one's speed.

She left, causing a Foundation Expert to flee as she did so, enabling the bare success of the overall mission.
Turn 14 Fate
One of the four tasked with taking down the Four Bandits, Katha was dispatched along the the pretence of a goodwill Bandit-Hunting mission in the Yuan Clan's territories. While embroiled in a number of other adventures - including an unusual occurrence where she had to protect the dignity of Abel Angelus from a thirsty Yuan scion at the edge of a sword - soon enough the four of them headed into the Eternal Deep, where Armus successfully located the Four Bandits: Hou Ju, Huang Bo, Lian Zan, and Tian Zedong. Thusly located, allowing their Hunt to finally begin, the four of them quickly discovered why the Four Bandits were hidden away in the Eternal Deep, when they unleashed their puppet, the corpse of a Nascent Seven-Stinger Wasp.

The rest of the battle would be one for the records, but Katha's personal effort involved neutralising their leader, Hou Ju, and the Seven-Stinger Wasp. The toughest of the four, she thought to exchange blows with the Wasp, hoping to break through and strike Hou Ju. Her Body of Iron, she hoped, would be enough. They exchanged strikes and she was skewered, yet she continued on through the blow, riding up the stinger and killing Hou Ju instantly with a single strike. However, she was crippled, the poison on the stinger leaving her meridians burst and her dantian boiling. Her immense weight was almost too much for her to carry, let alone move quickly with. In addition, she suffered lasting injury to an eye, which absorbed the brunt of a spray of venom, leaving it blinded for the foreseeable future. Recovery is, while not impossible, not expected for several centuries in light of her unusual constitution and the Clan's loss of knowledge on healing the Blood of Iron.
Turn 15 Fate
Katha was sent to deliver a small package to the base of the Obsidian Tower, carrying with her a carved rune on her very flesh, graven by Elder Duca. She claimed it would help her avoid spying eyes from 'Elders of all stripes', as she approached the Obsidian Tower itself. Dropping it there, it seemed to disappear into nothing, and she found herself seen. Not by the cultivators guarding the tower, but by the tower itself. Some ancient malice looked down on her, spiteful and cruel. The sight alone would've been enough to kill her, but instead it carved her. Invisible forces bit at the near-invincible flesh on her hand, leaving four symbols behind, forming a small array on her four left fingers. The Hand of Spite (+8 Impact) allowed her to carve at the laws of Earth (though not the greater Heavenly Law), engraving small, temporary exceptions to things like gravity - and if used correctly could even stop the flow of time for the barest fraction of a second for an enemy. While each option was weak individuality, the sheer versatility would grant her many paths to victory in future.
Turn 16 Fate
Katha re-entered the Yuan Realm, having reached Foundation Establishment. Here, things did not quite go as they have done previously. Where previously she had simply swung through and gained everything she wanted and more, this time the realm seemed to abhor her very existence.

Katha found herself meeting with her Beetle mentor again - a meeting that left her nearly dead. It attempted to teach her a concept with a massive and powerful attack, which she could not comprehend. The attack failed to convey the lesson and merely resulted in her being Badly Wounded.

She continued deeper into the Yuan Realm, where she would face off against a peculiar dream—a trap made of the memories of those long dead. To gain their powers, she needed to carefully outwit these departed souls. However, she failed entirely, becoming even more wounded. She should have died, but she used her treasure to escape from the trap of the dream (LST used. Dead --> Badly Wounded)

After encountering failure after failure, she moved deeper into the Yuan Realm, seeking a rather unusual puzzle made of rust, seemingly designed to kill her. Despite facing death at every turn, she managed to navigate through it. In this realm, there was a concept of refinement: making what was once weak stronger by cutting away the extraneous. By the end of this ordeal, she successfully made her way through the rust trap and rust puzzle, massively advancing her own cultivation (+80 CY)

At the last, she found a most peculiar puzzle, in a part of the Yuan Realm that had never been explored before - at least not in living memory. She was forced to open a path for others to follow, but being the first would no doubt yield greater prizes in any case.

As Qi came from the skies, spacetime itself twisted, and Katha found herself in a realm in which she would live the same day over and over again as a mere mortal woman, trying time and time again to preserve that woman's family against grievous odds. Each time she failed, her memories of who she had been faded a little more, and she failed many times. Yet in the end, as she almost became that woman from many millennia ago, she succeeded, saving her family to live but one more day. Her memories returned to her, along with a burst of Qi so perfectly delivered that her cultivation sped forward in leaps and bounds (+50 CY)
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Omake Links:
Turn 11 (Total: 5,070 Words)
1 - An Unruly Beginning [LST] - 1,173 Words
2 - A Fool's Decision - 3,897 Words
Turn 12 (Total: 30,115.5 Words)

3 - A Prodigal Prodigy [LST] - 4,813 Words
4 - A Set of Reflections - 2,866 Words
5 - A Chance Intermission [Collaboration with TehChron/Aretaphilla Miya] - 1,666.5 Words (3,333/2)
6 - A Bridge Too Far - 4,310 Words
7 - A Passing Grade - 4,666 Words
8 - Disputes and Distractions [Collaboration with Kaboomatic/Ninth Prince] - 1,649 Words (3,298/2)
9 - Fist Things First [Collaboration with TehChron/Aretaphilla Myia] - 10,145 Words (20,291/2)
Turn 13 (Total: 52,460 Words)

10 - Abductions and Assholery (Part 1) [Healing Treasure][Collaboration with Kaboomatic/Ninth Prince] - 5,197.5 Words (10,395/2)
11 - A Matter of Reflection (Part 1) [Collaboration with Tautological Templar/Constantine Nikeodemos] - 3,833 Words (7,666/2)
X1 - Interlude: The Art of the Hunt [Jingshen Bei Wulong 1] - 7,530 Words
12 - The Stranger Lurks (Qiguai Part 1) - 6,279 Words
13 - Initiation to the DI [Collaboration with TehChron and ObsidianNoir] - 2,764 Words (8,292/3)
14 - The Rising Blood and the Silver Archer (Qiguai Part 2) - 14,173 Words
15 - Red Rain and Bad Blood (Qiguai Part 3) - 5,822 Words
16 - Mysterious Heroine XXI [Collaboration with ObsidianNoir/Qinglong Shu] - 2,811.5 Words (5623/2)
17 - Duty, Actually [Collaboration with TehChron/Aretaphilla Myia] - 4,050 Words (8,100/2)
18 - Abductions and Assholery (Part 2) [Collaboration with Kaboomatic/Ninth Prince] - 0 Words (16,743/2 * 0, Wordcount given to Kaboom)
Turn 14 (Total: 56,682 Words)
19 - An Oath And A Promise [LST] - 2,741 Words
20 - The Razing of Chunwang [Collaboration with Alectai/Rina Callista and TehChron/Aretaphilla Myia] - 6,079 Words (18,237/3)
21 - The Trial of the Revenant - 12,405 Words
X2 - The Blood of Iron, An Investigative Record - 6,342 Words
22 - A Study in Silver Steel - 9,188 Words
23 - Dinner with a Shepherd [Collaboration with BungieONI/Cerina Polya] - 7,485 Words (14,970/2)
24 - The Little Soldier - 7,188 Words
25 - Just A Little Rusty [Collaboration with ObsidianNoir/Qinglong Shu] - 5,154 Words (10,308/2)
Turn 15 (Total: 49,912.5 Words)
X3 - The Dragon's Empty Hoard [Trib Boost][Jingshen Bei Wulong 2] - 6,319 Words
X4 - A Report on House Theodoros, circa. 280 E.K. - 5,405 Words
X5 - The Winds of Fate [Jingshen Bei Wulong 3] - 7,203 Words
S1 - Vignettes From the Bathmother - The First Guest: Lipp Galanis [Collaboration with Septimus Magisto/Lipp Galanis] - 1,181 Words (2,362/2)
S2 - Vignettes From the Bathmother - The Second Guest: Chang [Collaboration with YungSapling/Chang] - 0 Words (4,740/2 * 0, Wordcount given to Fungus)
26 - Changing Seasons [Collaboration with Gaius Antonius/no.] - 4,536.5 Words (9,073/2)
27 - The Parable of the Board and the Nail [Collaboration with BungieONI/Cerina Polya] - 4,360 Words (8,740/2)
S3 - Vignettes From The Bathmother - The Third Guest: Ajax Tripedes [Collaboration with CuriousRaptor/Ajax Tripedes] - 0 Words (6,164/2 * 0, Wordcount given to Curious)
28 - Crisis of the Middle Life [Collaboration with TehChron/Aretaphilla Myia] - 4,266 Words [8,532/2]
29 - Unorthodox Daycare [Collaboration with ObsidianNoir/Qinglong Shu] - 5,259 Words [10,518/2]
S4 - Vignettes From the Bathmother - The Fourth Guest: Qinglong Shu [Collaboration with ObsidianNoir/Qinglong Shu] - 0 Words (2,625 * 0, Wordcount given to ON)
X6 - The Favour of Heaven [Jingshen Bei Wulong 4] - 8,378 Words
30 - The Four Bandits [Collaboration with BungieONI/Cerina Polya] - 3,005 Words (6,010/2)
Turn 16 (Total: 110,903 Words)
31 - Faith and the Future - 9,005 Words
X7 - The Long Road Ahead [Jingshen Bei Wulong 5] - 4,400 Words
32 - Venomsteel and Rusted Iron [Collaboration with Kaboomatic/Ninth Prince] - 0 Words (10,485 * 0, Wordcount given to Kaboom)
33 - Unending Spite - 4,885 Words
X8 - The Misfortune of Birth [Seven Crucibles Hunger 1] - 3,610 Words
X9 - The Limits of Nurture [Jingshen Bei Wulong 6] - 7,781 Words
34 - Five Element Tribulation - 22,262 Words
X10 - What Comes Around... [Jingshen Bei Wulong 7][Collaboration with Gaius Antonius/no.] - 12,131 Words (24,262/2)
X11 - The Techniques of Katha and Wulong - 7,164 Words
35 - Passing [Judgement] - 3,325 Words
36 - A Little Bit of Housekeeping - 12,978 Words
X12 - The Limits of Nature [Jingshen Bei Wulong 8] - 3,765 Words
X13 - A Righteous Path [Jingshen Bei Wulong 9] - 9,574 Words
37 - Lunch with a Wild Friend [Collaboration with BungieONI/Cerina Polya] - 5,920 Words (11,840/2)
38 - Down To The Roots [Collaboration with Gaius Antonius/no. and Flavius Eirenikos/Theaxofwar] - 4,103 Words (12,309/3)
Turn 17 (Total: 5,142 Words)
39 - The Dawn's Vanguard - 5,142 Words
Current Total Wordcount: 310,285 Words
 
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Seems to me like the Jingshen had stolen the Nascent Tribulation treasures that should have been ours in the first place, had we been able to spare time to go looking for them. Taking those treasures from the Jingshen would be merely restoring the treasures into the hands of their rightful owners i.e. us.
Since they're currently squatting in lands that are rightfully ours, those nascent tribulation treasures could also be considered the rent we're owed...
 
Aristoteles 'Aris' Kalokagathos 13 - In the Empire of Songs (pt. 2) [Year 179]
Aristoteles 'Aris' Kalokagathos

In the Empire of Songs (pt. 2)

Year 179

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Sha Yu Had fallen.

The months had blurred together in a dance of feinting and counterfeiting. Eking out small victories, large forces prowling around each other without ever pouncing. The enemy looked for the decisive advantage to crack open and eat He Jian. They looked for openings to stop that from happening, for as long as they could.

Already fifty of his own two-hundred dead, nothing to be recovered, even with his Horn. Hundreds of casualties in other legions.

What a waste.

He looked at the map again.

A blue circle indicated as He Jian amidst a sea of red.

He was swimming in the red.

His ears rang.

Suddenly, two red drops appeared on the blue circle.

He frowned, displeased at the omen.

Another red drop outside the circle, nearly invisible against the bright red backdrop.

Three Monkey Hill – wasn't that where he was now?

He raised his hand to his face.

Wet.

He pulled it back.

Blood.

How long had he been awake? Two months? Three?

He still hadn't recovered from that tussle a month back. His head ached.



"—athos!" "Centurio Kalokagathos?!"



He looked up and at the entrance of the makeshift command tent.

A golden-haired youth, Ninth Heavenstage. He belonged to one of the other legions. Not of his centuria.

The boy was taken aback by his half-lidded look. He hadn't time to look presentable. He had to think and at some point fight. The rest was superfluous.

The legionnaire was well-trained however, debriefing him in a clipped cadence.

"Reporting an engagement fifty-two li to north-by-west, at Li Da Wen Farms. Squads five and seven are down to three soldiers. Forty-six Demon casualties, including an expert, presumably First Pillar."

Aris dabbed a bronze-nibbed pen in ink and indicated it on his map with rigorous accuracy, jotting the essentials down in less than a second.

Aris didn't focus – focus needed to be conserved.

"Copy. Atipathes is in charge until I return. Move the command centre in an hour as planned."

Then, Qi was in his legs and he was out of the tent.

He expelled Qi in a series of staccato bursts, signaling his orders in code to his troops.

"Prepare for assault, 112 li from HJ, 345° 18'. Attack vector: 40 li to approx. 135 li, 33° to HJ."

His enemy had dug himself in there, he knew with some certainty – his men had been screened by enemy skirmishers at every turn when they had tried to approach.

He let out a second, muted burst of Qi, the indented recipients some five hundred li from where he was. He had to hope it would be enough.

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The three Bronze-blooded survivors of the battle were quite rattled. He supposed it must have been quite the fight.

Aris put his hand on his horn, feeling an echo of joy and belonging course through him.

He brought the wicked thing to his lips.

One blow of the horn. It was a mournful and terrible sound.

He looked upon the three survivors. They were expendable. If they didn't die here, they would elsewhere.

War was writ across his entire being now. War did not feel, war crushed thousands between its cogs with unfeeling unpliancy. His one Pillar resonated with a pleased hum.

War. Its name was War. Bellum.

Not a fight, nor an engagement, nor a reprisal, nor a battle. Full-on war. He hated and loved it. He dreaded it like an old foe and desired it like a long-missed paramour.

Over sixty spectral figures rose from the lifeless figures of his comrades and dead Demons.

Ten more Golden Devils had gathered around him, rallying to the communicated staging point.

He spoke to them, but mainly to the three survivors of the skirmish with the Demons.

"Are we ready for battle?"

Solemn nods and grunts of affirmation followed. Most were unsettled by the casual display of necromancy.

Most pointedly did not look at the reanimated spectres or the horn by his side.

Something in him burned and grated, the emotional pain rubbing against his numbness.

He bared his teeth, letting a hair of the carefully-hidden reservoir of pure rage spill out.

"Are you disgusted by this, devils? Do you resent me for calling to my side your compatriots who have earned their perpetual rest, devils? Do you fear me, devils?"

More were here now. Some twenty living Scions of Gold, ready for combat.

They all recoiled a step or more.

"If you do, devils, then let me end your fear here now. Better to die at my hand now and serve as a spectre than let your fear eat your wits and heart whole."

He Breathed in, and his next words quivered with Qi.

"YOU ARE CALLED TO DEATH, DEVILS. YOU WILL DIE HERE, DEVILS. I ASKED WHETHER YOU WOULD RATHER DIE NOW OR LATER, DEVILS?!"

"WE DIE AT YOUR COMMAND, CENTURIO!"

His nose was leaking blood again.

He felt his arms and legs again. Good.

"Good."

He breathed in through his mouth, tasting blood on his lips.

"The spectres cover the centre of the force, you strike at the flanks. Murder, don't wound. Don't conserve your strength, don't survive. Murder and kill."

"COPY, CENTURIO!"

He smiled. He raised both his hands high in a gesture of prayer.

"Imperator Imperatorum, defend us in this day of battle. Be our safeguard against the wickedness and snares of the Foe. May Thou rebuke Him, we humbly pray. And may Thou, Lord of the Blessed Host, through your faithful servants, destroy the Foe entire and all evil men that walk with Him, who prowl the worlds, seeking the ruin of Man. ᾱ̓μήν."

"ᾱ̓μήν"

His men echoed in turn.

"To the slaughter, then."

--​

They cut through the few elements of resistance on their way like hot butter.

No units of sufficient strength to challenge them. Infuriatingly, not enough to expend one of the uses of his Horn for.

His spectral soldiers were faster than his men, floating across the landscape like shades, striking like vengeful ghosts.

They were fifteen li from where he thought his enemy was, approximately.

His men had heeded his orders well, flocking to his force by the dozens. They were now a force over two hundred strong, next to the sixty-or-so dead.

The ball was rolling now. Any advantage would have to lead to a much greater one. Played right, he could summon a force a thousand strong from nowhere and throw a spanner into the enemy's plans. Not merely a tactical victory, but a strategic one.

He Jian was lost, all knew that. But an immaculate retreat would save them men and face, both priceless commodities.

The city needed time. Time he could purchase for them. Time he himself could use to feed his enemy into war's maw.

The terrain around him was ruined. A muddy, stained field of shades of brown, the grass ruined by malignant Qi and destruction.

On the horizon, amidst the torn hellscape, a force gathered. Dots of pink and red flesh around a few dozen black-and-red ones.

Many smaller Qi signatures, about a thousand. A handful of lesser experts in the middle of their formation, but nothing more. It seems his true enemy hadn't taken the field yet.

There was little to be won by waiting.

"Men, advance in formation!"

They jogged forwards at a pace even the most athletic mortals would struggle to match.

From the flanks of his formation, the occasional bright flash of bronze shot out towards the enemy formation. No return fire.

When they were within hundred and fifty metres of each other, the enemy reacted as a beehive shaken.

Masses of junior Demons swarmed towards them, skin red with the marks of lashes and other cruelty. Shock troops.

Pathetic.

"Devils, close formation!"

The flanks of his force flowed towards each other and sealed his spectres behind a wall of bronze.

The fastest sprinters of the Demons were only a few seconds away now.

"Brace!"

Shields and spears were set, defensive techniques activated, the resonant hum of Bronze Qi a familiar and comfortable rhythm that made their bodies heavier, their footfalls more confident, their arms stronger.

He stayed back, towering half a metre above the lines of battle, kept aloft on a shield borne by four spectres.

Then, the tide struck the wall of bronze, meaty thuds drowning out their battlecries and desperate shrieks.

They were butchered like carcasses in the grinder, his men not yielding an inch.

As the enemy Demons fell by the droves, realization quickly struck Aris. These were dregs, whipped into a frenzy by someone who knew full well what he was doing.

His enemy knew about the horn.

Surprising, such knowledge was not common even in the clan. He supposed his enemy thought to bait him into using it a second time on this group.

To what end, Aris could only wonder. An advantage acquired here was still an advantage. He'd have less spectres to command than if there was a pitched battle with many casualties on both sides, but if he raised these dregs he'd have the forces to enter such an engagement with greater numbers than he would normally be able to.

A frenzied half-naked Blood Demon leapt three metres over the battle lines, heading straight towards him. His sabre left its scabbard for a bare moment and the battle-mad junior was cleft in two.

The only way this made sense was if his enemy foresaw a great opportunity to use his horn at some near point in the future and sought to deny it to him. Perhaps another battlefield nearby?

He consulted his mental map of the battlefield.

Fifty li west from where he stood was a large Strength Purity force, supported by bear cavalry. Eighty li to the north, deep in enemy territory, a smaller Saber force. Hundred li to the north-west a large ragtag band of Flower and Arrow bandits and Gemstone Justice auxiliaries around a Strength Purity core.

He let his senses spread out across the terrain around him, blocking out the din of battle. That suite of sensory arts he had purchased had been worth every dearly-earned contribution point. Being a superior commander meant above all having superior information.

He detected no large expenditures of Qi or other anomalies over the cacophonous hum of ambient Qi and lesser active arts. No large-scale battles nearby.

Then a miniature pulse.

Innocuous enough, a few Strength Purity sensory specialists of the force fifty li away activating a cycle of perception arts. No one would have thought twice about it.

Yet the simultaneous activation meant that they all had the same reason to start looking at something at the same moment. Coupled with the timing…

Before him, the battle was winding down, a sea of gore before an unbowed line of bronze-faced killers. A handful of bronze-clad warriors lay unmoving amidst the gore, their shining armour tarnished by mud and blood.

He let out a short sequence of Qi pulses. He raised the horn to his lips. The core of the Demon force, still standing some few hundred metres away from them, seemed to brace.

Then, his men broke formation and darted off at a fast run, westwards, further away from He Jian. He drew the Horn into his storage ring again.

Their opponents seemed dumbstruck.

They eventually gave chase and tried to harry their flanks, but the spectres moved faster than peer immortals and as always proved an excellent deterrent by out-flanking skirmishers, bogging down lightning strikes and making setting up any sort of concerted attack a frustrating proposition.

After a while, the Demons regrouped and gave up their pursuit, and his men continued to the presumed site of battle.

It might be nothing, Aris thought, and he could be wasting valuable momentum and the opportunity to feed more demons into the grinder on a whim. Yet he smelled mischief, and the foreign, murmuring voice in his head muttered caution.

Being a superior commander was not only having superior information and a superior intellect, but also knowing when to trust your intuition and when to throw it into the wind, he liked to imagine.

--​

Hours later, their force came within a li of the position of the Strength Purity force.

As expected, or perhaps entirely unrelated to his expectations, they were currently locked in pitched combat. Some three thousand Strength Purity troops against…ten thousand? Twelve thousand? Perhaps as much as fifteen thousand Altar Demons.

His men moved across the ruined, muddy terrain slowly and cautiously.

They had split up and were slowly encircling the site of battle from both sides in a pincer manoeuvre, aimed at the enemy's flanks. His spectres would lie in wait in the enemy's back, making use of their superior speed to strike at the enemy's most exposed spots. Normally, it was folly to attempt stealth on flat terrain against an enemy that was on its guard, unless you were really good at it.

Yet they had been far away enough when the battle erupted, were in a position to make a beeline for the battle without having to hurry, and their enemy was distracted. Reinforcements could either be in time or be in a position to flank or ambush. Seldom both, unless they knew exactly when and where to be.

He hadn't informed the allied commander of his approach. Too risky, both in terms of signalling their approach to the enemy and trusting the Strength Purity commander to act sensibly. Perhaps he was a strategic genius who would use every one of his men to the utmost. It might even be likely.

Yet Aris was entirely sure of his own capacities. An undead Strength Purity warrior under his command would be used to its greatest effect. They were generally weaker than the living version, but operated in perfect unison and obeyed his commands instantly. Individual strength – which the Sect's members so clearly possessed – did not mean nearly as much as perfect synergy in warfare.

Perverse, to consider that whether they were more useful alive or dead depended on the acumen of their commander.

They were within striking distance now, on the horizon the clear shape of a cultivator battlefield.

Two large blobs, one white-and-blue, the other red-and-black, with a large zone between them swarming with small groups doing battle in squads or as individuals. Flashes and booms rang out from a handful of spots where experts did battle. Here and there on the battlefield the large shapes of bear corpses were visible, their lives spent in a first charge.

His allies were being pushed hard, but were reaping a deathly toll from among the Demons. Yet it didn't seem to be enough – the Strength Purity Sect would likely not win this battle.

Occasionally a larger force from either side sallied forth and was rebuffed. The dance would continue until one side had the advantage, then that side would surround the other and attempt to destroy it.

Crude and ugly – this was how warriors, not soldiers, did war.

He would show them a thing or two about tactics.

A high whistle rang out, and he pulsed his Qi. One. Two. Three bursts.

As his force ran the last hundred metres, he finally signalled to the enemy commander. Push.

And then they were onto the Demons, two arrow formations slamming into the teeming mass of Demons, a third force of spectres hovering near their back at a distance.

He was at the head of the southern flanking force, the tip of the spear, the wings of the arrow flaring out from him. The other one was lead by his tessarius, Thyrsis.

His enemy had had only bare seconds to brace, and Aris' charge cut though the first five lines with relative ease.

One burst of speed, his bronze sabre sharp with Sword Qi and he mowed down nearly two dozen Demons, spraying severed limbs and viscera everywhere.

His Vanguard was behind him, flowing into the breach he left with bloodthrist, tearing open the small wound he had made in the enemy formation and making it a gaping one.

Yet it seemed these Demons were no pushovers – they solidified into a compact defensive circle after a scant few seconds.

His arrow formation blunted as their charge lost its momentum and now resembled more of a reverse triangle, the wide side against the enemy lines. The numbers were against them; they were a hundred soldiers on each flank and sixty spectres in the enemy's back. Based on a quick count, the main body of the enemy was about five thousand strong.

Their enemy immediately moved to engulf and surround Aris' flanking forces with superior numbers. The Demon commander was very well capable of tactics if needed, or so it seemed.

An enemy expert muscled his way through enemy lines, heading straight towards Aris to tie him down. A large man, wearing a heavy suit of black armour and a large polearm. Three heads were spiked on each of his pauldrons. Mid Foundation Establishment.

Aris lashed out two, three times in quick succession before the armour-clad titan reached him, cutting down handfuls of Altar demon juniors. Just as the halberd came down for a first strike, the main Strength Purity force crashed into the Demon formation.

The halberd came down, fell onto Aris' armoured shoulder, cracked lamellar and then stopped its movement. Aris was pushed two inches into the muddy soil by the force of the strike, but was otherwise unharmed.

He didn't see his armoured adversary's reaction behind his helmet as he immediately made use of the opening to plant his sabre into his opponent's gut.

Then a flying kick by a young Strength Purity expert wearing a bright white tangzhuang pulverised his opponent's head, splitting and tearing the metal of his helmet. The armoured demon slumped, and Aris withdrew his sabre.

His men pushed into the enemy lines with renewed vigour, passing him and the white-clad expert by in their charge.

The expert turned towards him and bowed.

"You come Heavensent, Golden Devils. I didn't know there was another force close-by. I am Major Fengxiang Da."

Aris returned the bow.

"Centurio Aristoteles Kalokagathos. We are here on our own objectives, they just so happened to require us helping you."

The young – he couldn't be more than a hundred-and-fifty years – commander titled his head. He was powerful, Aris felt. Late Foundation Establishment. A true talent. He was marked with scars and his soul felt solid.

Then he gave a small nod, beckoning towards the centre of the Demon force.

Hah, it seemed this Fengxiang understood some things quite well.

They charged forward side-by-side, carving a cruel line through the gathered demons.

They sought out enemy experts and slew three of them. Aris was the perfect anvil, durable as Bronze and with a near-perfect defence. Fengxiang proved to be an exceptional hammer, his axe kicks obliterating all before him.

The battle had turned, and at the back of the enemy formation, small groups of Demons started breaking away from their formation to flee.

His spectres sallied forth and cut them down time after time.

Just after finishing off the third expert – a diminutive woman with a bald scalp and frighteningly large fangs – the enemy commander had calmly walked towards them, the tide of battle parting for her.

She was – for all intents and purposes – an incredibly plain woman, almost to the point of suspicion. She was tall but not overly so, an angular face beneath chestnut brown bangs. She wore a plain brown hanfu, unadorned and rough-spun. Aris activated his most demanding spiritual insight art and identified six Pillars in her dantien.

Her voice was deep and weathered, her tone dry and clipped.

"An unwelcome surprise, Devil. We finally meet, Major."

Fengxiang responded easily.

"Well, we need not fight. Leave and we shall –"

Suddenly, in the middle of his sentence he shot forward with a pulse of killing intent, and a mere moment later the enemy commander was bent double over a horizontal kick to her gut.

In that moment, Aris imagined he might even grow to like the Strength Purity commander.

Then, he seized upon the moment, and glided forward with his sabre high, prepared to end the fight with a guillotine cut.

Then, the Altar Demon's skin bubbled, and a grey chalk-like substance emerged from her form in rapidly-blooming twisting shapes, growing metres in a bare moment, obscuring her form and seemingly trapping Fengxiang inside. His sabre came down, and cut about half a metre into the hard substance before it became stuck.

A voice rumbled from deep within, the tone as emotionless as before.

"You mistake inaction for unpreparedness. You will not make this mistake again."

Corpse Bone Manipulation: Execution

A dozen spikes shot out from the grey mass where the Strength Purity commander last stood.

An instant later, the mass shuddered and reached out towards Aris with blinding speed, seeking to engulf him. His sabre was still stuck.

A sword cultivator sharpened the soul, not the sword. A truth everyone seemed to forget despite its ubiquitousness.

He wasn't the most dedicated to his path. He used the sword because it was convenient, a commander's weapon. Easy to replace in the beginning and immune to degradation at higher levels. To cut was simple. To punch, destroy with one's fists and manipulate bodies to cause hurt was difficult.

The sword was the ultimate cutting implement, and therefore the ultimate offense. The body was the root of everything, and therefore the ultimate defence, if one treated it properly.

He released his sabre.

The top half of the grey mass now nearly five meters in diameter was cut cleanly off. In the middle, an unimpressed-looking Altar Demon commander stood out amidst the flat surface which now reached to her shoulders. Like a statuette from a mold.

A yanmiaodao appeared from nowhere and shot towards the brown-clad women like a missile.

Bone growths appeared along her arm and she parried the flying sword with a sharp clang.

That's all the time he needed.

From the still-intact part of the bone growth, Fengxiang flowed upwards, more than he burst or moved.

He seemed unhurt, his soul flaring with Water Qi.

"Seven Thousand Streams Leading to Enlightenment"

"Third Confluence"


He spinned around in what seemed like a roundhouse kick, but moved too fast for even Aris to see.

Bone growths started forming on the Altar Demon commander, but it happened so agonisingly slow.

Then her upper body was torn nearly shoulder-to-shoulder, as if cut into by a giant, blunt cleaver.

She twitched once, and Fenxiang shifted slightly, projecting a dozen booming strikes too fast for his eyes into the maimed corpse of the Altar Demon. In a flash, her body was pulverised, punctured by wounds the size of small fists.

The remaining bone growths around him dissolved.

Fengxiang nodded towards him.

The back of his foe was broken. All that remained was the cleanup.

--​

A scant hour later, Aris looked out over the site of a slaughter.

Altar Demon juniors were stacked like bushels of wheat, interspersed with white-and-blue clad Strength Purity disciplines, shining bronze heroes and the occasional giant bear.

The Strength Purity contingent had left.

He had told Fenxiang that leaving the corpses of his comrades be would be the fastest path to victory. Fenxiang had held him with a hard look for near a minute, then he had agreed.

He had told his men there was a poison expert among the Demons, and that the corpses were contaminated. That the Golden Devils would take care of the cleanup with their constitutions.

Aris hummed pleasedly. What a bounty. Twelve thousand dead. He wouldn't be able to raise the enemy commander and their top experts, but all others would be at his command.

His men kept watch.

He raised the horn to his lips.

The moment exactly before he blew into the instrument, a man appeared before him as if from thin air.

Aris hadn't time to react, and even so, any threat could be better answered with twelve thousand soldiers than without.

Air passed through the horn, and the familiar mournful tune rang out.

The stranger clapped his hands, some sort of substance in his hands muting the sound of the clap.

The tune was cut short.

Aris' eyes opened wide.

"It seems you forced me to use my contingency after all, little Aris.

My name is Wen, and I look forward very much to consuming you."


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A/N

This one was on the drawing table for nearly two months, and takes place during the previous Song mission. Bear with me, Aris' story will reach the present shortly and all of this will remain very much relevant for the turn to come.

@no. @Kaboomatic @ReaderOfFate
 
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Can we viably raid for those treasures? The post about them indicated that Jingshen could use them all to overpower us if pushed to the wall. I don't know if that could be done in response to a raid though.
 
Can we viably raid for those treasures? The post about them indicated that Jingshen could use them all to overpower us if pushed to the wall. I don't know if that could be done in response to a raid though.
Basically, Old Jingshen has the ability to pop two Nascent Souls whenever he wants, and apparently has for some time. The deal is that possessing the treasures is only half the equation: you also need cultivators willing to destroy their Cores to ascend, and just how deeply unpleasant a process this is has been elaborated on at length, let alone surviving the tribulations. The Jingshen have four elders ready to do it, but they're not actually Jingshen, so ascending them basically destroys the Clan's internal politics due to how much of it is based around blood relation to the big honcho. This is in addition to the fact that they don't currently possess enough land to support more Nascent's, so if they ascended one it'd mean immediate war with the Golden Devils out of pure necessity.

All of this means that the Jingshen Clan's current strategy is to wait until they manage to raise a proper full-blooded scion to Nascent Soul at just the right moment and then sweep Konstantinos in a 3 to 1 quickly enough that the spirit stone trade isn't seriously affected. There's some time pressure for them, due to the fact that the Devils got most of the former Canibal territory and seem to be making ties with other factions (most alarmingly the SPS), or could even try to raise another Nascent Soul themselves, but Old Jingshen isn't going to hit the metaphorical 'Big Red Button' unless he's gotten all his ducks in a row or is facing an absolute emergency. Which being outnumbered by invading Nascent Souls would absolutely constitute, but intense raiding probably won't provoke.
 
Another big play here would be to not only steal the tribulation treasures but also replace them with fakes. Then we bait the Jingshen into thinking he has an amazing opportunity if only he raises more Nascent Souls right now, so that he overreaches and in a way that makes it clear he's the aggressor, and then when we don't back down he goes to suddenly spring some Nascents on us, at which point their ascension fails and we deploy five Nascents on our side to cleanly conquer all their lands.
 
Can we viably raid for those treasures? The post about them indicated that Jingshen could use them all to overpower us if pushed to the wall. I don't know if that could be done in response to a raid though.
The most prominent plan at present is an invasion assigning our Nascents three mission objectives any one by the Nascents with Manuel would count as a win. Manuel is the keystone tying down old Jingshen. Yao is raiding into Jingshen land aiming for the tribulation Treasures with intelligence support from Manuel. Kleisthenes is going after the prospective candidates to subvert them or kill them. Jingshen can respond to only two of these and one absolutely has to be Manuel.

The other plan, my plan, is a heist. Manuel and Yao go for the Treasures. Kleisthenes keeps old Jingshen thinking Manuel is at home/Diplomancing the candidates. The clan focuses on intrigue in the heavenly bandit kingdoms to provide cover.
 
Katha Theodoros 1 - An Unruly Beginning
Katha Theodoros 1 - An Unruly Beginning

Once, the Theodoroi were a power amongst the Optimatoi. They were renowned, feared even, for the power they once commanded, their Blood of Bronze truly indomitable. Tireless vanguards and peerless scouts, legend speaks of Elder Mistra Theodoros, who fought alone atop a mountain top beset by monsters and jealous foes for a century without rest or pause, ceasing only when the mountain had been swept clean of beasts and foes and blood and sinew and she went home once more, not even winded.

The Theodoroi were once a power amongst the Optimatoi. Once. Now, no longer.

The collapse of the Sea Conquering Army and the slow and inevitable winnowing of the Optimatoi to the far reaches of the Third Sea took much, cost much, and the Theodoroi suffered for that loss. The clan soon fractured, splitting into a thousand disparate heirs, many who died and others who still persist. The main house of the Theodoroi, who still keep their names and records, are now barely a family at all.

One hundred years ago, the Theodoroi's fortunes finally began to change, for a young girl was born whose blood of bronze was mighty and concentrated, a Good Seed on the level of the Callista Scion - and hope that the Theodoroi may produce a Core Formation Elder for the first time in millennia.

This is not that girl.

Her name was Riala Theodoros. She was a genius, who climbed the heights of Qi Condensation and began forming her Foundation before she was even a hundred. And she died, scant years before the Trial when the Heavenly Star descended.

She died at the hands of the Grand Elder, seeking to inculcate the lessons of the Dao and paying dearly for it.

And with her death, the Theodoroi are finished.

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Before she passed, Riala found love.

It caused a minor scandal at the time, but there was little the clan elders could do but appease their rising star. She married another, a cultivator of little talent whose blood had nary any bronze in it. But though Riala Theodoros was a genius, she was still a girl, still in love.

That love bore her two children - twins - and now they are all the Theodoroi have left.

One would be a genius just like their mother, whose blood was bronzed and who never tired, sleeping little even as a babe and tirelessly pouring over old texts and philosophies as if they gushed like river water. One would become the hope of the clan, who might yet reclaim some measure of face, who may yet bring the Theodoroi back to eminence.

One would be a Good Seed.

Katha Theodoros, the other, was born normal.

The Blood is weak in her, for she took after her father, not her mother. Beautiful even as a child with bright red hair and sharp gold eyes, this was a poor salve for the young girl, who sought to be more than a pretty face, an array wife to stretch the Theodoroi's rotting edifice another generation while all the hopes were placed on her genius brother instead.

A brother who had grown wary of the heavens after their father's meridians were shattered in the Heavenly Star Trials just scant decades ago. A brother whose lesson learned from their mother's demise was to double down on caution. A brother who buried his nose in books because he was afraid of what he could do!

The temerity of this boy! To be afraid of his own strength!

"Your brother is not like that, Katha, and you know it." Her father seemed older now, so much older. He had reached the 9th Heavenstage years ago, but the Trials had arrived before he could attempt to break through. Now he was retired and already greying, the wounds to his meridians too great to recover - and his talent too poor to expend treasures on. He would die raising children and living like a mortal, a pitiful fate - but perhaps kinder than the Heavens intended, considering he survived the Heavenly Star. "It's not enough to just purify the body; one must hone the mind as well."

Katha shook her head severely in reply, which made her father sigh. "That's the thing, his mind's honed plenty. He's got everything in life laid out for him already, just waiting for him to take his first step, and he's busy reading about acupuncture."

"The needle arts are valuable skills for cultivators of all sorts, Katha," her father said patiently.

"Okay, sure. But then what does pottery have to do with anything?!"

"A great deal. Before one molds, one must find good clay, good water, good hands and good fire - and we aren't savages, we eat with utensils. You know, I made your mother a full set of cutlery when we were--"

"You aren't answering my question! Why does he get to read about useless things when we are at war?"

Her father stopped, mouth slightly ajar. Then he breathed, a soft exhale as he realised what his only daughter was truly getting at. "Ah, forgive me Little Blade, I may have eyes but I have missed Mt. Tai. It isn't about him, is it?"

She clicked her tongue but said little else. Then Katha turned towards the door, stopping only to stand in the door frame to be framed by the light. "I'm taking him out sparring," Katha said to her father, without looking back.

Her father smiled tiredly, though she surely did not notice. "Don't break him too harshly, Katha. Your grandfather will be cross again."

"It's just sparring! Only nerds get bruised by sparring!"

Then she set off, a gravebronze sword at her hip, its scabbard bound in pigskin and branded with the triple-layered brand of the Theodoroi. A set her father knew well, for it was his not so long ago. Maybe she'll be able to make use of it now that he never will again.

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Katha returned the next day, missing a full day of meals but returning in time for dinner. Her father opened the door to find Katha leaning on her brother, her face red and her legs like jelly. Rathos was beside her, covered in bandages from the neck up despite the blood of bronze bolstering his constitution. The single eye that peeked out from the cloth was completely unamused.

Their father merely sighed. "How many repetitions?"

"She lost count," Rathos replied blandly. He shrugged. "Which is why we're late. Grandfather got madder and made her do it all over again. Do we still have the ointment, father?"

They did. But their father shook his head. "This one can be a lesson in moderation. Bring her in, we are about to eat."

Katha whimpered, but at least she was home again.

Perhaps it would be prudent to prepare some means of escape in the future.

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[Omake Reward: LST]
 
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Auspicious Nine - Further Ruminations on Progress
Further Ruminations on Progress
Auspicious Nine First Omake Turn 11

Taken from the personal diary of Auspicious Nine.



The march of progress is a powerful – in fact, unstoppable – drive. This is unquestionable. History has shown us that only through greater understanding of the world, and better application of that understanding – that any society – be it clan, sect, or religious death cult committed to the worship of trees – can survive.

Take language, for example. Without the invention of the hyphen, that entire opening paragraph would be very uncomfortable to read.
However, while progress may be unstoppable, its adherents are not. Occasionally, we who's highest goal is the greater acquisition of knowledge in all its forms must accept that our simple bodies must take precedence. The reasons can vary; the need for sustenance is the most obvious, but there can be many others.
Such as getting the shit kicked out of you in the trials because you enrolled in the legions at just the worst possible time. That one in particular can be a bitch.

Now, some individuals (who will go unnamed, even if they ARE assholes who suck and really should not be talking about things they know NOTHING about) may say that, given the natural regenerative properties of the Demonic Tree, and of course the excellent – nay, unimprovable! – healing reagent recently created FOR the Demonic Trees by a young scholar of great promise, one should really get over the damned trials and get back to practice.

They may pretend they do this for the betterment of the clan and the individual within it, but of course, the transparency of their lies is obvious. The real reason they do it is because they are ASSHOLES. Instead, a more sensible course of action is firstly to appropriately re-establish boundaries by ensuring that certain NAMELESS INDIVIDUALS WITH NO REAL INTELLECTUAL DEVELOPMENT BEYOND WHAT ONE WOULD EXPECT TO FIND IN A NEWLY-HATCHED SCORPION, AND NOT A SPIRIT SCORPION, LIKE, A NORMAL SCORPION by informing them they have no idea what they are talking about and then applying appropriate physical force to ensure the point is made, preferably with a chair. Then, while one is spending time in the Pit for gross insubordination despite the clear and obvious provocation, begin reconstructing said healing reagent.

And perhaps writing to one's siblings who have now also begun training. One's sister, Seven, in particular, since she has a weak constitution that perhaps one worries about a little. As a good elder sibling should.
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Thought I'd knock this out since we're getting near the end of the turn, even if my inspiration is a dead slug full of salt and cruelty. I do love writing Nine, though, arrogant little douche that he is. The Pit is from @JanusIIV 's first omake for his good seed Janus, which just *SLAPS* , so I wanted an excuse to cram it in. @no. , @TehChron , @Alectai , may I please have a threadmark?
 
Gaius Antonius 62 - Final Preparations
Gaius Antonius Omake #62: Final Preparations​

The Hard Shell mountains truly were an impregnable fortress.

Whereas the Organ Meat Desert that the Golden Devil Clan called their home was a superlative deterrent against invasion, due to the suffering and resource drain it inflicted on any force that attempted to cross, it did not actually empower its masters. The mountains, on the other hand, were far easier to defend, what with their convoluted routes, perilous peaks and deep caves. Any faction that made their home in the mountains ought to be a fierce military force in their own right, Gaius thought. It was only natural, in a home made entirely of fortresses.

Which was why the sheer weakness of the Yuan Clan made The Seeker feel a bit sick. Rather than raise mighty armies and use this position as a staging ground for fierce battles, those old scholars sat around, coasting off the income from their Secret Realm. You could barely even call them a clan of Cultivators - they were more like a family of stewards!

Gaius frowned and lit a cigarette; that was a bit harsh, wasn't it? Perhaps he was just in a bad mood today. Beside him, Lipita tried her hardest to stifle her nervous fidgeting, composed as ever. "This is it, kid. For the next three hundred and sixty-five days, we'll be tested by the world around it. You can already feel the heat, can't you?"

Indeed, both Junior and Senior could keenly sense the sheer weight of the world around them, even at the bare edges of Yuan territory as they were. Qi, the quintessence of creation, flooded the ground and the air, begging to be used. With every passing hour it got denser and denser, so much raw potential that it felt like miracles might spontaneously occur - soon, they would. Gaius didn't understand how the Man-As-Mountain array worked; no one did, save for perhaps the Yuan Patriarch, who wasn't talking. Somehow, the vital energy that the Third Sea so sorely lacked was coming roaring back, to levels of density which greatly exceeded even a living sea.

Scylla restlessly milled about within the barrel on Gaius' back, swimming back and forth in a manner similar to a man pacing in anticipation. She clearly wasn't sure how to process such dense qi in the air - for a Sacred Beast, it would have to truly feel overwhelming.

"Yes…" Lipita said quietly, still adjusting to the sensation. As the qi density skyrocketed higher and higher, the necrotic essence of the Turtle Child's body was carried out of the ground and into the air in larger quantities than normal. The psychic pressure on his Junior must have been three times the usual intensity, yet still she remained resolute. "It's like I've been looking through one eye my whole life until now. Everything is so much more."

"That sounds about right. Us poor bastards, we're stuck in a world that's drying up. Honestly terrifies me to think about it. So let's not think about it; we're too weak to do anything anyway." Gaius removed his cigarette, gesturing to the north-east. "Instead let's think about getting stronger. The strong get to think about the future. We'll start by heading along the eastern border…"

As Gaius reviewed the traversal plans with Lipita once more, he thought back on all the hard work he'd done to prepare himself. Last time, he had taken the Qiguai Secret Realm too lightly, which nearly cost him his life. This would be different.

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To cover any gaps remaining in his skillset, Gaius had trained with many different weapons. He'd already possessed a degree of training in spears, axes, polaxes, shields and staves, but he pressed his mastery much farther in the past decade, so as to perform up to his standards if he had to scavenge someone else's weapon.

There was no real trick to this; just endless drilling. He'd even taken on difficult missions whilst using some of these weapons, so as to make himself improve under pressure. It was frustrating at times, feeling like a waste as he brushed up so many different approaches to reach the level of the one he already used. Still, this broadening of his skills felt meaningful; Gaius' awareness in combat grew a little bit sharper, his instincts a little bit more refined, and he felt as if he understood the profundity of close-quarters combat a little better than he had before.

Furthermore, in preparation to step into a greater realm of power, Gaius realized that his greatest strength, his breadth of capabilities, could use further improvements. While he utilized and body, weapon arts often, plus soul and curse arts in a more limited capacity, the actual ways in which he fought were simply too limited. Some Cultivators could hone themself to a perfect edge in a single area, but that was never Gaius' intention; he wished to eat of every plate and drink of every cup, and take whatever worked.

First and foremost among Gaius' skills were his capabilities as a scout. He was very sneaky when he wanted to be, despite how much he tended to physically stand out. His senses, of course, were fantastic. Naturally keen, honed much further by his Dao, and able to be even further enhanced by sacrificing some things to enhance others, Gaius' perception was in a league of its own, arguably matching mid-Foundation. Finally, as a Bronze-Blooded body artist, his endurance was exemplary. Still, scouting alone would not bring success in a place like the Yuan Realm - he would need to do battle.

The Seeker primarily fought using Bronze-based body arts to profoundly enhance his strength, speed and toughness, and similarly Bronze-based weapon arts to cleave through enemy defenses whilst protecting his own weapons from shattering. In hand-to-hand combat, he would sometimes use qigong - simple curse arts to strike the enemy's acupoints and cause intense pain, though ultimately he was more of a dabbler than a master in this. An extremely common way of doing things; Golden Devil through and through. He had built upon this foundation with a smattering of telekinesis - both touch-range to resist being disarmed and mid-range to throw more accurately and recover fallen weapons.

All of this was supported by the True Aegis, his ultimate bread and butter. A profoundly efficient defense that was easy and fast to summon and very tough relative to the small amount of qi needed to conjure it. In addition to halting an enemy's advance, the repulsion effect allowed him to quickly reverse the momentum of a fight and retake the offensive.

Then, of course, there was the Earth-Gliding Technique. The name wasn't very charming, but that was fine; Gaius was never any good at naming something with more than two words. He dreaded the day he found some legendary weapon and had to figure out what to call it. Simply put, it was a Core-level technique which he had grasped in Qi Condensation; it was only natural that it was overwhelmingly powerful. Though its limitations prevented him from building his combat style around it, when Earth-Gliding was usable it allowed him to reign supreme amongst his peers.

Beyond all this, his skills were best described as "all over the place." He could exorcise spirits as well as an Eighth Heavenstage soul artist, weave a hex with the same complexity as a Seventh Heavenstage curse artist, and identify arrays in the field with as much reliability as… well, array-crafting skill didn't map to cultivation level as well. As reliably as a pretty good array-smith, then. Not the kind of things that made a difference in a serious fight at his own level, but they made a lot of jobs much easier.

The entire ensemble was very functional, albeit lacking in flash. But Gaius couldn't shake the feeling that this was all incomplete somehow. Not incomplete in the normal sense - every Cultivator is an eternal work in progress, after all - but as if there was a piece preventing him from entirely functioning as well as he could be.

Day and night Gaius continued to think this to himself - what could he be missing? What vital piece was stopping his fighting style from reaching its true potential? Ranged combat was somewhat of a weakness of his, but he was not entirely crippled there; he could at least throw knives wrapped in Bronze-aspected sword qi. Still, he figured that was a good avenue to pursue at this juncture.

After much deliberation, Gaius came to a somewhat common conclusion, albeit not one which was common among his clan: Needle-Slips. Hollowed-out glass needles, carved with arrays on both the inside and outside by talented array-smiths. These could be filled with qi to activate the inscribed techniques, though a certain minimum level of proficiency in the element or discipline was needed. Though more expensive and much harder to activate than jade slips relative to their level, they made for better weapons and could be packed more tightly - a perfect tool for getting out of a pinch.

As someone who had dabbled in many areas, he could activate needles inscribed with a broad array of elemental effects, making for a potent, if expensive, ranged weapon. Just over one hundred of these were strapped to different parts of The Seeker's body in various places, with a case containing additional ammunition in his compression pouch. It was immediately clear to Gaius why Needle-Slips weren't common among the Clan - most Devils tended to operate in squads, and their traditional art of formations was designed with such in mind. Taking so many long solo missions as Gaius did was somewhat unusual by comparison.

But perhaps the most major training Gaius had put himself through was that of toughness. The Seeker had already been a hardy person, but he had painfully learned in Qiguai that it just wasn't enough; he had to become impregnable, or as close as he could get. Day after day, he performed relentless conditioning on his limbs on a level beyond the usual. Specialized body techniques were not his goal; what he wanted to increase was his overall resilience, which would be active 100% of the time by virtue of being a simple fact of his body. Compared to techniques, altering one's own baseline abilities was far slower and more agonizing.

A common exercise Gaius performed was to put a bowl full of sand over an intensely hot flame, until some of the grains began to crystallize into glass. He would strike this sand over and over with every part of his hands, thickening the skin bit by bit. When he was done with the sand, he would move to a bowl filled with solid iron spheres, each half an inch across. Gaius would relentlessly strike the spheres like he had the sand, and by the end his hands would be badly discolored and swollen to the point of near-uselessness.

Then, the foot conditioning would begin. Then, the knees and elbows. Then the forearms and shins. There was a different routine for each, and different kinds of surfaces he would strike. Day after day, The Seeker brought every inch of his limbs to the edge of shattering, just to squeeze out a tiny bit more performance. This would pay magnitudes if he could endure it; the better the baseline a body technique built upon, the more dramatic the result, after all.

Of course, it was not only the limbs alone that had to be toughened; on days when he wasn't exhausted, Gaius would have Legionnaires beat him all over the torso, upper arms and thighs with iron rods. He would attempt to maintain a horse stance and perform breathing exercises as they did so, further increasing the difficulty of the conditioning. Once, he even attempted to cycle qi while being beaten, but that proved to be a fruitless endeavor; the qi immediately rushed to his skin on reflex to turn away the blows, which was the opposite of what Gaius wanted.

It wasn't just his physical toughness that Gaius wished to hone, however; he would need to improve his spiritual sturdiness as well. In Qi Condensation, attacks which struck in an entirely non-physical fashion tended to come only from curse and soul artists, but such things would not remain true as he advanced. Pure specialists tended to become less and less common with each great realm, although those with Dao specializing in a single art were always around. Thus, enemies capable of bringing curses and soul attacks to bear against Gaius would become far more common. Furthermore, as a King he would occasionally find himself targeted by Core Formation enemies - in such cases, any weak points would spell his doom.

It was toward this end that Gaius ever so carefully replicated the exercise taught to him by the Archegetes. Strumming on his soul like a lyre-string was as agonizing as usual, but he could tell he had more room to grow in this area. Every day, after the end of all his other exercises were complete, he would pull the connection three times. That alone was enough to induce intense bouts of sweating, internal bleeding and occasional vomiting, as each time he did it he stretched the connection to its limit. It took all he had the energy to endure, but over the course of years it added up, and Gaius found himself with the most durable soul anyone could possibly attain in Qi Condensation. A perfect foundation for applying defensive soul arts.

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"There really isn't enough time, is there? We buy ourselves so many extra years to live, and yet we use it all up so easily." Gaius took a deep breath and smiled, enjoying the crisp scent of the mountain air. All that training, and he couldn't even reminisce on his progress. He would fall down a hole of 'how could I have made more progress on X?' and 'was Y the best option to add to my repertoire?'

"It's a very frustrating feeling, Senior." Lipita quietly agreed, checking the condition of her weapons to pass the time. "I suppose it's good motivation: 'climb higher, and you'll have more time to get it all done'. Of course, each time you reach a higher realm, the number of things you want to do increases tenfold…"

Scylla burbled quietly within the tank, audibly flapping her lips as if to indicate her agreement.

Sweat was beginning to pour down both of their faces, so Gaius released a qi-filled breath that stirred up the wind and made it swirl around them. The Serene Breath - a foundational wind technique that lead to many others for those who chose to specialize in wind, it was far too weak on its own to do any good beyond a Fourth Heavenstage battle. And yet this was one of the most popular techniques in the Clan, for exactly the reason Gaius had just used it: cooling off in the blazing heat.

"140… no, 150 degrees fahrenheit. It won't be much longer now. All of that energy building in the air will be released at once." Or at least, he hoped it wouldn't be much longer. Any more heat and the regents in some of his supplies would begin to melt and spoil. He couldn't afford a true storage ring, which perfectly preserved its contents; a compression pouch merely reduced the volume of things stored inside.

"How are the mortals in there still alive?" Lipita panted, fingers twitching at her hip - she wanted to take a drink from her canteen, Gaius noted. The fact that she didn't spoke well of her discipline. "Heat like this just kills them, doesn't it? And won't the tide of spirit beasts kill them too?"

"They've got shelters to endure the event. I'm not sure how it works exactly, but every town has one. Of course, the shelters can only hold so many people, so towns without steady access to cultivators have to control their populations a bit." Gaius explained, glad to have something to distract him from this awful heat. "Doesn't help that the Man-As-Mountain array makes humans want to fuck like crazy, just like any other animal; being cooped up in there, a mass of raw nerves and instinct - can't imagine it's pleasant."

"They really are an afterthought, aren't they? Mortals, I mean."

"In most places, yeah. We're of a superior culture, Lipita - not everyone is so civilized." He left quite a bit out, of course, but it wasn't far from the truth as far as he saw it.

Sharply and quickly, the heat started dropping back to normal. Qi did as it was meant to do, and began to create.

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Don't ask why they're using the word fahrenheit in a fantasy setting. I just can't be bothered to convert to metric. Plus, I'm of the camp that believes fahrenheit is a more useful scale for human comfort - 0 is very low, 50 is right in the middle, 100 is very high, etc.

I wanted to fart something out in case one of my two collabs wasn't finished in time, and it's looking like one of them will not, so here ya go. Sort of a training montage thing, I guess. I wanted to ruminate on the skills Gaius has developed thus far, and where he can go from here.
 
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Don't ask why they're using the word fahrenheit in a fantasy setting. I just can't be bothered to convert to metric. Plus, I'm of the camp that believes fahrenheit is a more useful scale for human comfort - 0 is very low, 50 is right in the middle, 100 is very high, etc.
It's also weirdly more scientifically grounded than you'd think.

0 on the Fahrenheit scale is the freezing point of a specific brine solution, the coldest stable temperature Fahrenheit was able to measure for calibration purposes. 96 was supposed to be body temperature. The numbers are a little weird, but they're chosen to make it easy to mark scales and subdivide the temperature range into halves, quarters, and so on.
 
Then she set off, a gravebronze sword at her hip, its scabbard bound in pigskin and branded with the triple-layered brand of the Theodoroi. A set her father knew well, for it was his not so long ago. Maybe she'll be able to make use of it now that he never will again.
I apologize if this has been mentioned in the Excel, but are you planning to go for the Yuan array this turn? The build-up really gives of a feel of the Wuxia Martial Artist seeking fame and fortune with sword on their hip.

The pulp action fan in me squeals at the idea of her strolling into the Yuan SR and showing her nerd of a bro how things should be done. Admittedly, it's pretty risky with just 1 LST.
 
I apologize if this has been mentioned in the Excel, but are you planning to go for the Yuan array this turn? The build-up really gives of a feel of the Wuxia Martial Artist seeking fame and fortune with sword on their hip.

The pulp action fan in me squeals at the idea of her strolling into the Yuan SR and showing her nerd of a bro how things should be done. Admittedly, it's pretty risky with just 1 LST.
That's the best part. 👀

I'll probably be dropping another 4-5k words of omake today or tomorrow to help boost the chances a bit, even if she can't get another LST. We will have to see how things go for her, though, but I fully expect Katha to die horribly.
 
That's the best part. 👀

I'll probably be dropping another 4-5k words of omake today or tomorrow to help boost the chances a bit, even if she can't get another LST. We will have to see how things go for her, though, but I fully expect Katha to die horribly.
Good news: unless you specify in the spreadsheet to take extra risk, she can't die in a secret realm. She'll leave after using an LST. If you wanna be extra spicy I could specify that she won't leave early, or to not use her LST unless she's crippled or dead.
 
Aristoteles 'Aris' Kalokagathos 14 - In the Empire of Songs (pt. 3) [Year 179]
Aristoteles 'Aris' Kalokagathos

In the Empire of Songs (pt. 3)

Year 179

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The man before him looked normal enough, for an Altar Demon expert.

A beautiful grey-and-black hanfu with small lilac flowers embroidered around his shoulders and hem. Almost feminine, but his strong figure dispelled any notion of effeteness. His hair was pitch-black, and he wore it to his waist, a few silvery locks starting at the edge of his hairline. It almost looked natural, but it all looked too polished, too clean. He was pale, but not deathly so. A long, slender visage with pronounced cheekbones, thick eyebrows and pearly white teeth. Thin lips just a tint redder than was natural. No visible weapons, a small band of silver on his right index finger.

Seemingly at the cusp of the Great Circle of Foundation Establishment, but his cultivation was fuzzy and difficult to read. He smelled vaguely of sweet lilac and vanilla, almost masking the earthy tones of fresh soil. He had appeared from nowhere, which meant he had flown or dug. Not a mote of Earth Qi to be seen, but Aris could add two and two together.

Concerning, dangerous, but not extraordinary.

Yet every pore of his body screamed that the creature before him was a more terrible foe than he had ever faced. That not a thing about the charming young master was as it seemed, and that he was in mortal danger.

His blood pounded heavily in his ears, the high screech of his nerves drowning out rational thought.

"You see Aris, I'm somewhat of a collector."

He continued in a singsong-like cadence, a very slight drawl to his words, spoken in a warm baritone.

"I usually go by that moniker, even. Collector. Wen Li is such a base name. Will you share tea with me for a second, Aris?"

The hazelnut eyes of the monster before him beckoned gently, yet firmly. A question, but not a frivolous one.

In that moment, Aris realized he had known only two kinds of fear before. One the one hand, ice-cold terror, the terror of war, the coldness of numbers, pure powerlessness and apathy of greater forces. On the other, the hot dread of a miscalculation, a situation gotten out of hand, an essential piece forgotten.

He now felt horror, the kind which the philosophers in the Old Tongue called formido. Neither hot nor cold, this fear was the void of existential fear, draped like a blanket over one's body, it settled into bones and marrow. This was not only insignificance or panic, this was a fear to act, to breathe, to be.

Under the gaze of that timeless void of horror, his Dao was as nothing. How could one stake a claim about a truth when one lived under the pall of absolute nothingness, when one's basest being could be specifically unmade? He would not be destroyed because greater forces would uncaringly crush him beneath their heel, but because they specifically desired him to not exist.

Aris bit his tongue with all his might. His metal-like incisors punctured and tore through the thick flesh. A ball of blood welled up in his mouth, and he had to swallow one, twice, thrice in as many seconds to clear most of it.

He decided then, that this was a most excellent second pillar and made it so. Formido. Horror.

Yet it was poison, and required an antidote. Virtus. Excellence and courage both. Henceforth, that was his third pillar, and Aris stepped into Mid Foundation Establishment.

The wound in his mouth was gone.

"This one thanks the magnanimous senior for the valuable lesson."

Aris bowed deeply.

Wen's eyes narrowed a fraction of a hair. Not the answer he was expecting.

He completed his bow, and no longer saw a man standing before him, but a gaping maw in the fabric of reality, a wound in the world.

"This one would be honoured to share tea with his esteemed senior."

Aris crossed the distance. Slowly, deliberately. He didn't dare avert his eyes from the thing in front of him. He pulsed his Qi once to his men – hold. Then another sequence of pulses.

At the edge of the gaping black wound, he stopped.

He dropped down in seiza.

He was offered a cup from somewhere. He accepted without further thought. Lemon balm tea.

He stared at the hole in reality. He murmured a prayer over the tea.

"I thank the Imperator, Lord of Hosts, for this mercy he has seen fit to bestow upon me. I praise his name in this respite, as I do always. ᾱ̓μήν."

Aris took a polite sip. The being before him cleared its throat.

"Prey continues to have ever-more fascinating ways of making themselves interesting in their final moments."

He tutted softly.

"Ah, but how I sound like my terrible Sect brethren now. This is the last of this talk you'll hear from me Aris, I promise. Ah, where was I. My contingency. Very good thinking Aris, you followed the breadcrumbs excellently, with a small helping of…Fortuna, you might call her."

A small pile of salt was now on the ground before him, just at the edge of the gap.

"Wheel-affirming Exorcism Salt. Precious and highly situational. It interrupts the formation of vengeful ghosts for a single moment. Usually not enough to stop their formation entirely, except for very weak ones. And even then requires impeccable timing. For an artefact such as the one you possess however, a moment is all one needs."

He heard the thing before him take a sip.

"Let me answer the rest of your questions in quick succession. My objective is you. The objective of my seniors is winning – those happened to overlap somewhat, that is why I could counter you using this. If you had not come here, we would never have met, I would have been disappointed but ultimately it would have been for the better. I go only for the best, and go through significant lengths to get it."

"You see, I consume with great moderation. Only those of exceptional worth and skill. That makes me a slow cultivator but an exceptional polymath. How you specifically, a Scion of Gold, you might ask?"

A small, nearly-feminine laugh.

"That is a closely-guarded secret. A few flashes of genius from a sect that might sometimes have a few too many. I call it my Bronze-Eating Acid Stomach Technique, but the name could be more inspired."

Aris bowed his head a hair.

"This one thanks the honoured senior for his explanation. This one however also has the unfortunate duty to inform the honoured senior that his machinations will fail."

A few seconds pause. A hint of benign paternalism crept into Wen's voice.

"You have one more use of that thing, Aris. I can block it again, then you're done. Resistance is only brave when it is useful. Facing the inevitable with courage is noble, riling and raving against it is pathetic. You needn't worry about your men; I will slay them of course, but I will not consume them. I am not here for them."

"Senior makes various assumptions."

Reality reasserted itself in Aris' mind and instead of the gaping wound, the man now stood before him again, towering over him. Some of the fear crept back into Aris' bones, but it not only drained and paralyzed him now, it also fed him.

Suddenly, a deep, sonorous laugh rang out from deep inside Wen.

"I've seldom seen someone exceed the worth I've set on them, but I'm very open to being surprised, Aris."

He turned around, walked some twenty metres away from Aris, and opened his arms wide.

Aris put down the cup, still nearly filled to the brim with tea.

He summoned the horn from his ring.

He brought it to his lips.

Wen titled his head ever-so-slightly, bringing his hands to within half a metre of each other, ready to clap.

Aris blew, but no sound emerged.

His adversary quirked his brow.

From behind Wen, a spectral army appeared, led by a small contingent of Golden Devils. At its head a small, mousy man with a large two-handed sabre strapped to his back. His old classmate, Diokles Aseius. A small flame of black fire danced above his forehead. He was already Late Foundation establishment.

The first row of the ghostly host were summoned experts, thirteen in total.

Wen kept his eyes fixed on Aris, not looking over his shoulder once.

Aris spoke calmly.

"Honesty compels this one to say that I did not plan for this specific scenario. Yet I had to account for knowledge of the Horn getting out, all the more since someone already seemed to know in great detail who I was. My friend Diokles has a special affinity with death. When I first used the horn around him, I found that he could also control the spectres. It required little further research to figure out how to allow me to transfer one of its uses to him directly. Costly, but even if it foiled no specific counters to my horn, having two separate ghost armies instead of one is a strategic boon when the enemy at large isn't aware of the possibility."

Wen laughed a short, harsh laugh.

"Very well then. What will you do with your newfound advantage, Aris?"

"Attack."

The ghostly army flowed across the terrain, Foundation-level ghosts leading the charge, Diokles at the fore of the force.

Aris burst forwards with a sabre, his favoured yanmaodao clenched in his right hand, bronze shield in his left. Two straight-backed bronze sabres were summoned from Aris' ring and boomed towards Wen.

A moment later, Diokles was behind Wen, miaodao blurring in an upwards cut aimed at his throat.

Five ghosts – all Mid Foundation strength – attacked Wen from above with ghostly claws and fangs. Two lesser ghosts emerged from the ground beneath Wen, spectral spears aimed at his legs and lower abdomen. Killing intent was so thick in the air as to be palpable.

In that moment between moments, Aris thought that was the end of it. Diokles was the most dangerous offensive expert that he knew of in late Foundation Establishment. Even among Clan Great Circles, there were only a precious few who could weather a cut with killing intent without being wounded.

Wen's eyes were still locked on Aris. Hammer and anvil, Aris needed only to absorb the first strike. Even if this combination only wounded Wen, their ghostly army gave them the advantage. Aris realised his fear was gone.

Then, the edges of Wen's figure became fuzzy. His body moved simultaneously in two different directions. His flat hand shot out with booming force and obliterated Diokles' windpipe with a metallic crunch, before his comrade had had time to complete his cutting motion. He flew back a dozen metres.

Simultaneously, two fingers shot out towards Aris, cleaving through his shield like hot butter. Aris hadn't had time to blink, let alone activate a technique. The two fingers struck his sternum and shattered it, his ribs splintering under the residual force of the impact. Aris' vision went dark momentarily, and he hit the ground with absurd force.

He came to a mere second later, blood streaming from the corner of his mouth. Wen was surrounded by ghosts now, though no sign of the seven spectres that had launched the initial attack, nor of his two flying swords.

Aris looked at Diokles. His small comrade looked to be choking on his own blood, the life draining from him rapidly, twitching spasmodically on the ground. It was only his familiarity with the man and near-two hundred years of experience that led him to believe it was an act.

Oh, he certainly was wounded and would die if he was struck again. But 'nearly dead' for Diokles meant 'still very much living'. He was truly an incredibly useful tool, a glass cannon that could withstand destruction once.

The contingent of Golden Devils with Diokles had also nearly closed the distance to Wen. He identified two lesser experts – they would contribute little. And then a burst of relief and joy. The undeniable large body shape of his best friend Leo Kalenos among the forefront of the host, armed with spear and shield, his face hidden behind a bronze mask, his aura that of a Qi Condensation junior. They had heeded his commands well.

The Kalenos family was an insignificant one, but they had one single asset; a truly excellent cultivation masking technique. Leo hated using it. Why would you hide a good instrument behind a layer of rust just to deceive your enemy – or so he reasoned. But even he could see the necessity in using it, if the situation was particularly dire.

A second wave of ghosts was about to attack Wen. One late, three mid, four early Foundation. That was all they had left. The previous attack was the dress rehearsal, this the real deal.

He shared a glance with Diokles and Leo. Fate hummed in Aris' bones, his Pillars resonating like a bronze gong.

They were called to this moment. Chosen.

They needed no signal, they knew.

Aris jumped up and dashed forwards. He emptied his storage ring of sabres, a rain of twenty-six swords booming towards his foe, moving just a hair faster than he did, sabre outstretched forwards from his chest with both hands, shield discarded.

Fivefold Meditations on the Path: Obsidian Asura's Finger of Death

Leo crossed twenty metres with a single step, his spear aimed at Wen's throat.

Thousand-Armed Bronze Arhat's Lance

Diokles jumped eight metres up, twisting in mid-air, throat still leaking blood. Around the diminutive Devil, lesser spectres winked out of existence, and his miaodao acquired a spectral green edge. It fell down like a guillotine towards Wen.

God of Death Eats Ten Thousand Vengeful Spirits

Wen would not, could not survive this.

His form became fuzzy again, and moved in four directions this time.

Yet Diokles' warblade was in three different places too, forcing Wen to parry the pernicious edge with his bare hand. It left an ugly black line every time.

A fourth Wen moved towards Aris' flying sabres. In three, four clawing strikes they were torn from the air, not without causing miniature cuts along Wen's hand. He plucked the last one from the sky, asserted his dominion over it with a pulse of Qi that tasted of blood, and cut straight through the four most dangerous spectres advancing on him. The metal then dissolved under the two virulently opposed kinds of Qi racing through it.

The four forms of Wen resolved into two, one closing his hands around Diokles' baleful sabre, the other merely standing ready.

Aris and Leo then reached Wen. Aris thrust his sabre towards Wen's chest. It struck the Altar Demon full on, but did not dig deeper than the upper skin.

God of Death Crowns a Prince of Ghosts

All ghosts disappeared. The green edge on Diokles' sabre flickered out and appeared around the tip of Leo's spear, looking a thousand times more dangerous. Wen's eyes opened wide.

Got him.

Wen's two shapes instantly resolved into one, releasing his hold on Diokles' sabre, and he moved with all speed to stop Leo's spear. Diokles' sabre fell down on his shoulder unobstructed, causing little damage.

Wen's hands grazed the tip of Leo's spear, and he lost most of his fingers in the attempt.

The spear continued its trajectory towards Wen's throat, and punctured trough skin, esophagus and cartilage.

It was a simple feint. Leo was less offensively powerful than Diokles, but many times more experienced in combat between equals. Diokles killed, he did not fight. Leo was always the distraction, the one that kept the enemy busy while someone else went for the killing blow. Even if Wen had immediately seen through Leo's masking, it was unlikely he would have thought of Leo as the greater danger. If an ultimate technique came from anyone, it logically would be Diokles.

Yet Leo would be the one who could bring the payload to its destination unfailingly.

Diokles could transfer the Ghost Qi one more time. Once Leo completed his thrust, Aris' saber – already embedded in Wen's chest – would finish the fight.

Leo's spear was halfway through Wen's throat.

Then, something broke. Like a paper seal on an envelope.

They were all thrown back dozens of metres with a flash.

Aris crawled up.

Before them stood a Core Formation Demon.

It looked like Wen, much like the nose of a gargantuan snake looked like the rest of its hidden body. Like the tip of an iceberg resembled the rest of the underwater mass.

This was the source of his horror, this is what he had felt and dreaded so.

Wen's body was untouched. From his mouth emerged smoke and flame, teeth still a perfect white. His nails were long, sharp and black.

His voice was that of a demon in truth. Distorted and deep like a nightmare.

"I admit to being impressed, little Aris. I seal my cultivation away to be able to obtain gains from those lesser than me, but who are still exceptional in some way. You made me release my handicap and thus the possibility of eating you gainfully. It is an honour and a pity both."

"My pride however compels me to slay you all. It is a sad day indeed – I will weep for you."


Wen brandished a whip dotted with interspersed bone razors on both sides. Black Qi played around the edges.

He twitched his hand, and Diokles was cut in four pieces. Dead.

He twitched again, and Leo's head was cut cleanly off. Something shattered, and Leo's body and head dissolved into bronze sand. Aris felt a pang of relief. Leo had bankrupted himself on the treasure. With good reason, it seemed.

Wen looked at him.

Time slowed to a crawl and flowed like molasses. Aris probed his dantien. Sixty per cent remaining. A shard of a Core Spirit Stone in his ring, which could be drained about half before Wen was onto him. Effectively one hundred thirty-five per cent of his personal maximum Qi storage, expressed in Qi Condensation spirit stone equivalents one thousand two-hundred fifty-six units.

If he burned it all and used all of his techniques…

It would have to be enough.

First to buy time.

Golden Deva's Sahasradala Opening

His uppermost acupoint exploded with energy, the small seed of Qi planted in it sprouting into a full, bright fruit immediately, greedily sucking in Qi through his meridians and other acupoints.

His mind was quickened, thoughts brighter, clearer to his mind's eye.

Golden Deva's Ajna Opening

The slumbering nodes in three acupoints on his forehead exploded, the meridians between them instantly filled with a flood of Qi harvested from his other meridians, turning the small spot into a miniature triangular Qi reactor.

His perception sharpened manifold, straining his brain and eyes. He felt a terrible headache building as the veins in his nose burst. He could see Wen's motions clearly now.

Now to survive the onslaught.

He drained the spirit stone shard about halfway in that moment between seconds, the Qi greedily consumed by his two active Arts, only little of it lingering in his meridians.

Fivefold Meditations on the Path: Golden Deva's Immortal Body Art

All his acupoints sealed shut and he altered his Qi flow in a way that had taken decades of practice. It still felt unnatural, like breathing underwater.

His Qi flowed perfectly circular, his internal Qi system perfectly cut off from the Qi of the outside world, unable to respire Qi or use any technique. Yet the content of his now-closed system was rapidly being drained by his active arts.

He was down to fifty per cent of his maximum capacity. It wouldn't be enough.

Black Asura's Shakti Expulsion Art

His dantien emptied, Qi flowing into his acupoints and meridians, augmenting his perfect internal flow, a sloshing maelstrom around a depleted dantien.

He had hoped he wouldn't have to resort to using this.

A nonsensical technique, near-emptying one's dantien in one large expulsion of Qi. In any normal cultivator, a truly absurd waste, and a good way to instantly pass out.

Yet his Qi remained perfectly inside his body. As long as its sister technique, the Golden Deva's Immortal Body Art, was maintained, he could operate normally with a strengthened perfect defense.

Once it was released, he would be less than helpless, weaker than even a fit mortal.

He hadn't time to move. His thoughts and perception were quickened, but his body remained agonizingly slow.

He would have to trust his uncle's Art and hope it would be enough.

Wen's hand twitched, and the whip came for him.

Wen was fifty-six metres away from him. An unlucky Golden Devil junior who wanted to leap to his aid some hundred metres away was cut in half by the whip's Qi emanations without the least bit resistance. One hundredth of a second later, the whip struck Aris.

It carved neatly through his saber, inscribed lamellar and scored a line across his arms and chest, blackening and destroying his bronze flesh.

Yet he held.

Wen's eyes opened a hair in surprise.

Then the whip came down again, with greater strength and without hesitation.

The edge cut his helmet in two like an apple, and burned a black line deep into his scalp, forehead, nose, cheek and shoulder. His Qi flow shuddered but held.

Only now did the first cut radiate pain. With his enhanced thought, he marveled at the speed of his opponent. Pure, terrific offence. This was the real Wen.

Yet his rapid thoughts immediately reached a second conclusion. He would not survive a third strike.

Blood and ashes, he had hoped that one of the allied elders would have picked this up. Wen was exposing himself here in the open.

The whip lashed out a third time, killing intent deepening the Qi of the weapon to an ever-darker shade of black. He heard Wen mouth a technique name, spoken so rapidly as to be unintelligible to near anyone.

"…God Flaying Heretic's Scourge"

Nothing to it then.

Aris released his techniques, and with an expression of will broke the Starlight Mirror shard in his storage ring. As he dissolved into starlight, he saw Wen instantly turn away from him and murder dozens of Golden Devils in a flash, not wasting a bit of momentum. Over the next few moments, his Core Formation adversary managed to murder most of his century and Diokles' relief force.

Loyal Amopaon, decanus of his first contubernion. Lovely Polymedusa, his century's signifier. Fearless Polydora, second to Amopaon and his optio's designated successor. All were erased, their lives wasted.

The last thing Aris saw before he was whisked away was Wen's face, a pleased smile playing around his features. His eyes promised one thing:

We shall meet again.

Then, Aris was gone, whisked away to a secluded gorge near Turtlebone Mountain.

He Jian fell mere weeks after.
 
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Paulus 16 - Wu Shuang and the Pillar of Mud
Paulus 16 - Wu Shuang and the Pillar of Mud

Day 1

An auspicious day to begin a new journal. In a few hours our band of brothers will be entering the Secret Realm to reap some of the benefits there. We have long prepared for this day. We will split into small parties and plunder some of the lesser treasure areas before returning to delve some of the more dangerous locations. The lesser locations are all fairly below the view of the more powerful factions here and we should encounter no problems monopolizing their benefits and then with those benefits combined we will be able to thrust any single group out of our way as long as they are below core formation.

Our teamwork is flawless. Our studies are exhaustive. There is no way anything can go wrong.

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Day 7

Sand Dancers! Who the hell brings Sand Dancers to a hotzone? I told Hakish time and time again to retrieve a Flawless Edge treasure before engaging but instead he decided to switch things up with his stupid Sand Dancers strategy.

Even if you, future me, have forgotten this day in the future I'm sure you can imagine what happened next. Hakish dove into a scuffle between three Daoists, hoping to attach a dancer to each one in the conflict and they merely turned and crushed him before turning back to their own problems. To make matters worse the victor looted Hakish's control schema and turned the Sand Dancers on me by reversing the friend or foe sutras!

I had to abandon the location entirely and flee using a Ghostly Step talisman, one of the few I have remaining, and that bought me enough time to kill the Dancer before the controller could catch up. The Sand Dancers are too damn fast for their stage and the only reason this worked is because the thief sent too few after me. I worry about where he sent the rest,

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Day 11

Heaven truly leaves a way out even in the direst of situations. That fool Hakish must have secretly encoded the signatures of each of us brothers in those Sand Dancers before heading out. Each one of us was attacked by Sand Dancers in the days following his death and I suspect at least half of us have perished due to the hunters following them. I myself was attacked three more times before I stumbled into this cavern.

The qi here is strange and thin and none of my treasures work in this space. If there is anything good about this it is that I suspect that the Sand Dancers will be unable to track me inside. It has been a day since the last attack and I have gotten much needed time to rest and catch up with my journaling before I get out of here.

I think I will wait another few days to ensure my hunters give up on the chase before climbing out. If I pop up now only to find them lurking around my last seen location, I wouldn't know whether to laugh or cry before death. Besides, I think there is something good to be found here.

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Day 12

This is a miraculous space.

I was not mistaken in my earlier assumptions, there is indeed something good to be found in this place. The qi becomes more and more dense as I descend into these twisting tunnels and my treasures can once again be activated. It is still a far cry from my own prepared cultivation chambers but I have not yet reached the bottom of these caves. If things continue this way then I could advance my cultivation while waiting for those hunters to give up! I'll just spend a few more days exploring.

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Day 15

I have reached the bottom of these caves. The qi density here is truly astounding, the highest I've ever encountered in the wild! Cultivation is almost as easy as breathing and I truly wonder if this is what those great sects experience all the time.

It would be perfect if not for all this blasted hissing.

The situation progressed as I expected with the qi density increasing the deeper I went into the caves. A bit before the density reached something acceptable I began to hear an incessant hissing on the edge of my hearing and I delved further to discover the source.

Not ten minutes later the cramped caves abruptly opened up into a truly gargantuan underground cavern. The opposite wall is so far away that I can barely see a suggestion of it even when using a Farsight Treasure and the space between is covered in water as far as the eye can see. A shallow pool, barely knee deep but one that continues long enough that it has its own horizon. The entire space is lit as if it is daylight, but I have been unable to determine the source of the light other than 'above'. I suspect a natural bewilderment formation has come into being down here, a phenomenon that promises a wondrous treasure protected at the center.

I have yet to discover the source of the hissing but it has grown loud enough to interrupt my meditations. I could retreat into the caves until I can no longer hear it but...no I don't believe I will. How could a cultivator run away before even determining what stands against him?

At the very least I'll discover what all the fuss is about.

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Day 17

After a day of wading through the waters I discovered the source of the infernal hissing. It was far too loud to remain nearby so I have waded back to the edge of the pool before beginning this entry. The qi concentration is about the same anyway.

The water here is crystal clear and clean for drinking, so imagine my surprise when at the center of this place I discovered a massive pillar of bubbling mud! Hot mud bubbles out of the earth ceaselessly, piling up upon itself so much that it has already created a mountain of muck that would be a challenge to climb in its own right even if it hadn't inexplicably remained in a tightly contained pillar instead of spreading out as I would expect.

The hissing, that infernal hissing, came from jets of superheated air escaping from the gaps and folds in the mud that change unendingly as the entire formation bubbles. Thousands, perhaps hundreds of thousands of folds burbling into existence only to release the air caught within before the next fold forms from its back. I spent half a day examining it but I couldn't figure out anything about how it worked and my Life-Reading Compass tells me that touching it would be a fatal mistake.

Regardless, whatever danger it has doesn't seem to be active. I will try and put it out of my mind until it is time to leave.

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Day 18

I will not stay in this blasted place one second longer! That hissing never stops, never quiets! Even in my deepest mediations I can still hear the infernal hissing. I'm leaving this place today! The hunters must have given up by now.

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Day 21

The way is shut.
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Day 24

I returned to the cavern at the base of the tunnels. The qi here is enough to cultivate with. If I can break through...perhaps learn something about the law of space...maybe I can break out of here.

This has gone beyond discomfort, I have only a few weeks of food rations left. To sustain myself through cultivation will extend that somewhat, but my time is limited at best. I
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If anyone else finds this journal. Take heed of my wisdom and try and escape as quickly as possible. Perhaps whatever method sealed me in here will be delayed long enough for you to slip away.

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Day 30

I have grown used to the hissing, I think. This is not to say I can ignore it, no. It still fills my every waking and sleeping hour, no matter how deep into unconsciousness I sink, but I believe I've determined a pattern in the sounds.

It is an entire day long, but it sounds as if the hissing repeats itself over and over. It is consistent enough that I can time my cultivation by it. Patterns can be comforting with enough repetition. Perhaps this will eventually be true here as well.

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Day 37

Hello future me. It has been some time since I last wrote, I have been so busy you see. What am I talking about, you know this already. After all, there's no way I'll fail to escape at this rate.

My cultivation has advanced a whole stage. A whole stage in just one week! This is far and away the best cultivation rate I've ever experienced and it is all thanks to that wonderful hissing I was cursing some days ago.

How could it be so, you ask?

You recall that I said the hissing repeated in a regular pattern? Not only that, but following the pattern in my mind as I cultivate improved my cycling speed tenfold! Such a miraculous treasure, no wonder heaven has tried to seal it away down here.

Could it be the remnant pillar of a great immortal? If I can decipher the meaning behind the hissing then perhaps I could get a glimpse of their great Dao. The beginning of the pattern is coming again soon, I have to stop writing or else I'll miss it. This time I'll try and continue for the whole repetition.

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Day 38

Bah! I almost managed an entire repetition, but I lost the pattern along the way. Still just like that I've advanced almost half a stage. I can't let this opportunity pass me by, I'll get right next to the Pillar tomorrow to hear it clearly. I've already missed the start for today so I'll take it as a day of rest.

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Day ??

I did it, I managed a whole repetition of cycling. I didn't manage to stick closely to my normal Ten Thousand Treasures Refinement Method but I managed to track the pattern of the hissing for the entire day. As I expected the benefits are… significant.

As I write to you I am already at the cusp of breaking through a third time. In the past few days of attempting to follow the pattern I already broke through for the second time down here. Just a few more and I'll be ready to form a core.

I was worried since my Method stops at the Great Circle but the gifts of this place continue to astound. If I can just follow the pattern I can break through I am certain of it. This is not some delusion born from desperation. The more I cultivate here the more certain I become that this is only the surface of this pattern. The hissing it...it's almost beginning to sound like words.

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Day ??

I have determined a word.

I cannot write it here for fear of disrupting the pattern. The moment I understood the word I spoke it and...something changed. A palpable sense of displeasure descended on the place and I ended up hiding in the mud for a few days before it vanished. It doesn't happen when I say the word in my mind but I feel that if I say it aloud or write it down, if I externalise it in any way, there will be a problem. I don't know what happened but I don't seem to be in too much danger.

I'll write again soon, the quill is difficult to hold with my claws.

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Day ??

Three words seems to be my limit. Try as I might, I cannot manage to vocalize another one. This is frustrating, extremely frustrating. I can feel it right on the tip of my tongue, right on the edge of my awareness. It's such a simple one, I'm sure I've said it before outside of the pattern but when I try to use it within the pattern it invariably fails.

This is just so frustrating, so unbelievably frustrating. If it wasn't for that blasted displeasure I could at least force it out, but when I try the air grows thick like molasses and taut like the surface of a drum. Speaking is too difficult, if I force it I'm sure something will break. Something...something will break.

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Day ??

Damn them. Damn them. Damn them. Damn them. Damn them. Damn them. Damn them.

Try to limit me? When I'm this close? I'll shake off the chains of heaven! I'm so close to a breakthrough I can taste it.

Just two more words for the full seven pillars and then I can learn the rest of the pattern. I can already see it in my mind's eye, taste it running down my beak like the sweetest ambrosia. My wonderful core of mud is only a few steps away.

Challenge me? Threaten me? Send your blasted tribulation as many times as you want.

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Day ??

I've failed. My beautiful core. I-

Those bastards sealed the qi here with their lightning. I hid in the mud from their eyes, and it protected me. The cost was too steep.

The pillar is diminished and back below ground, it
It is too hard to hear the pattern.

Damn them I was so close. SO CLOSE!

I just need a little more qi to finish my breakthrough, I think I can remember the rest. I can remember the rest.

They made a mistake. The lightning opened a path in the seal above. My wings will carry me out of here before the seal recovers..

I just need a bit more qi. I have to find some. Their paltry leavings will not be enough. I need more than they're willing to give.

I hear thunder again. I can't endure another strike without the pillar. I have to go now. I'll find some more and come back. Yes.


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Word Count: 2336

Another little interlude for a location I dreamed up a long time ago. Literally!
I've imagined this place as the origin of the Blasphemer Beasts, an example of which was featured in Paulus 5(part1) and Paulus 5(Part2) .
Feel free to use it if you're interested in the place, or the Beasts.

@no. @TehChron
pls
 
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Lipita Delphi 15 - Tournament in Hong Xuan
TURN 11, OMAKE 15 [Lipita]
Lipita Delphi 15: Tournament in Hong Xuan

Seven Tourneys City was a fine enough city Lipita conceded as she wandered through the streets. The carriage ride had been long and her cultivation during the journey had been as unpleasant as always so the chance to stretch her legs and explore the sights was a welcome diversion. Together she and Senior Gaius had taken up the large packs containing their belongings just outside the outer walls of the city and walked in on their power. Entry had been smooth with their obvious lineage and the paperwork meticulously prepared beforehand for this assignment saw them past the gatekeepers without a fuss.

Once they were within the city proper, Gaius had turned to her and offered, "I'm going to take a walk about, see how things have changed and get a sense of the lay of things. Want to join me or do you want to do your own exploring?"

Lipita had considered and then declined the invitation. "No thanks, senior. I think I'll find the experience of the city much more accessible when not shadowing a freakishly tall scarecrow."

She ducked down to avoid a large hand reaching to ruffle her hair at her pronouncement. Gaius grinned down at his impertinent junior. "Alright, enjoy the sights. Don't do anything I wouldn't do, we're guests here. Find us a place to bed down at least for the night, we can get more permanent accommodations tomorrow if necessary. Meet up back here in the evening after sunset."

So Lipita found herself strolling through the city, observing and recording everything in her Palace of Memory. The brick roads and high walls were well built and great thought had obviously gone into the design of the city evident in geometrically perfect buildings and partitioned districts. The people were a more typical representation of Third Sea nativity than she was used to in an urban environment. The one distinctive element was the prevalence of pigmen among the general population.

Huh, thinking about it apart from that aspirant adopted by the Pentekonter family she hadn't had much interaction with the race of demihumans. Emporikipolis had certainly had a few in residence as befitting its melting pot nature as a trade city but she'd never really spoken to them. Here, they filled the streets doing all manner of labour, bringing in the fruit of the land. The Weeping Children were immediately north of the city, seven active volcanoes spitting out all manner of wealth from their fiery interiors and only condemned men and the beleaguered pigmen plumbed its dangers to retrieve the great bounty therein.

Her tour of Seven Tourneys City brought Lipita to a trade district and she took to browsing the wares. Talking with the merchants was an interesting experience which highlighted just how foreign she was. The traders in Seven Tourney City were polite and very self effacing unlike that cheat Chow Jin back home. Her heightened senses and spiritual acuity made the mortals open books to her. Surprise, wariness, fear, caution, interest and more; an interesting melange of emotions colored auras and physical responses when she came up to stalls and make inquiries as to what was being offered. Even now as she conversed with the stocky middle-aged woman attending to a stall in the open air bazaar, she could make out ripples of consternation as others took notice.

"How much for those Scarlet Rushes, good lady? They look to be in excellent condition." She politely inquired, her appraisal honest.

The dark haired and dark eyed trader quickly responded. "These are ten pounds a tael, honored lady. The young mistress has a good eye. These rushes are of the best quality, every measure taken to preserve their potency."

Lipita made a low sound in surprise under her breath. The price quoted was a bit cheaper than back home but then again the Hong Xuan Clan had their prized Isles nearby and the floating islands were green with growth, herbs and crops growing en masse there. After a bout of brief haggling that followed, Lipita left with several purchases bemusedly noting that throughout the sale the stall owner had only looked her in the eyes once at the onset and afterwards kept her gaze determinedly elsewhere. The distinctive markers of the Delphi bloodline it seemed were very disconcerting here.

It was getting late in the day when Lipita took a break from her wandering. She'd followed the major arteries of traffic exploring districts of differing wealth and purpose, passing by estates flying colorful banners that indicated the residence of influential families and through streets of lesser graced homes. The city positively bustled with humanity which made sense. The time for the Vast Choosing, or the Flood Tournament as some called it, was upon the city. There were many mortal youths out and about, all focused on some task or the other. Lipita considered them and the difference between herself and their situation. These young men and women had gathered to compete in in a series of seven tournaments to earn the name of Hong Xuan and avoid the ignominy of becoming peasants fit only to serve their betters. She, on the other hand, was a scion of a venerable bloodline who had ascended beyond mortality before her first decade.

Standing in the long shadow of a building with her pack, she reminisced about the limits of mortality she'd left behind. Today, she'd born a large amount of belongings that had to equal her own weight, at least, for hours without rest while traveling and she was not weary. Her constitution, cultivation and constant use of the Century Oasis Formation made the effort light exercise. Across from her in a sparring yard, several youths were panting visibly strained as they'd practiced for such brief minutes. Such is the nature of cultivation,, she mused, to advance we become both more and less of what came before.

A sudden commotion in the yard caught her attention. Several youths led by a tall girl were ganging up on a boy, hassling him viciously until one of the supervising instructors - 4th Heavenstage she could tell - angrily came over and broke them up. A brief increase of the qi flow to her ears made her privy to the stern dressing down that all involved received before the whole group was dismissed from the yard. Lipita observed as the target of the gang scurried out just ahead of his attackers, looking backwards frantically at the following gang who looked very interested in continuing the events of the yard prior to the interruption. Out in the street, the boy looked in both directions of the road before surprisingly coming over to Lipita.

"Greetings, honored mistress of the Golden Devils, this lowly one would beg your pardon to share the shade in your company. Much apologies but this one is weary and would like a brief rest before moving on." Close up, the boy was not much more than 16 years of age. Deeply tanned skin, a well muscled figure and callused hands spoke of a person well familiar with manual labor and the outdoors. His speech belied his appearance, well-mannered with the clarity of competent tuition.

Lipita kept her gaze on the boy asking her leave, all the while studying the pursuing teenagers who has stopped as the boy made his request. A slight incline of the head in assent and the boy darted over into the shade simultaneously trying to get close her that any interaction with him would intrude upon her but not too close. His pursuers radiated frustration to Lipita's senses but it seemed her presence was enough deterrence as the leader turned away and went down the street, her lackeys following. Lipita could practically feel the tension leave the boy at her side as he followed the gang's movement down the street and out of sight. He remained in the shade for several more minutes, commendably wary of lingering ambush before moving to leave.

He stood in front of her and bowed deeply. "Thank you, most generous lady. This peasant is Lu Gan and this one is very grateful for the graciousness of your allowance."

Rising and turning to go, Lipita stopped him with a question. "Why were those youths after you and please drop the humble presentation?"

Clear struggle over responding to the request showed in Lu Gan's features, but he replied. "I am an entrant in the Flood Tournament and have been training with that group in preparation. They find my presence distasteful among them as I am a child of a contender who failed their Vast Choosing and lost the claim to the name Hong Xuan."

Lipita cocked an eyebrow at his response. "I don't suppose that's too common but it seems a bit much for all that group to be against you for just that."

A short pained laugh slipped out of Lu Kang. "Perhaps things are different in the lands of our great rulers, the Golden Devils, but here those who are superior do not like being reminded of the possibility of failure."

"That would be their folly then." Stepping forward, Lipita moved a way down the street. "Accompany me a moment, I believe we are headed in similar directions and I could use a local guide to a good inn."

Behind her, Lu Kang froze in hesitation for a moment before hurrying to catchup with her. "Why would you want or trust my guidance? You hardly know me. I don't even know your name" He asked as he walked beside Lipita.

Lipita smiled and looked at Lu Kang directly. "The name's Lipita Delphi. You're one of the few people who've looked me straight in the eyes, even when you were acting all obsequious. That interests me."

Lu Kang processed that in silence as he accompanied the strange Golden Devil that had saved him from a painful beating by Fang Xu and her gang.

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Finding a suitable inn had been easy enough with Lu Kang's guidance. The Hong Xuan boy was interesting and Lipita had arranged to meet up with him early the next day at the sparring yard they'd first met. She'd returned to the agreed upon meeting place to await her senior only to be dragged along in a hurry into his dealings. Of course, Gaius Antonius would find a way to trade pointers with a Qi Condensation champion of the Hong Xuan tournaments.

The venue for the bout, Shield-Halberd Arena was not prestigious, if one was ranking Seven Tourneys City's varied fighting halls. With the capacity to hold about 5,000 people, it was little more than a sideshow, a place for juniors to test each other. In fact, that was the source of its name, an archaic bit of wordplay meaning "paradox" - because an arena with such few spectators isn't really an arena at all. Nothing particularly important went on here, but it was good enough for Gaius and Long An.

"Are you really sure about this, Senior?" Lipita asked nervously, eyeing her tutor's massive and imposing opponent on the other side of the arena. The man was very fit and everything that all her senses told her pointed to a disciplined and well trained fighter. His cultivation base was secure and well founded, no hollow core there. Long An stood among the forefront of cultivators in what the locals called the Second Tier , the 7th Heavenstage and above, and the difference in a single small realm that Gaius had wasn't a decisive advantage. Listening among the crowd as the fight was prepared had informed Lipita that the opposing fighter was well renowned for his mastery of the Ten Ton Swallow Style, used to great effect to sweep the competition before him in previous tournaments. It would be an embarrassing start to their mission in the Hong Xuan lands to lose immediately to a local and be seen as arrogant fools who'd overreached their strength's grasp.

"Of course I am, Lipita." Gaius grinned, continuing to warm up without skipping a beat. "What am I risking, a little pain?" He scoffed at the very idea. "Diplomacy isn't always done through words, my adorable Junior Sister. Sometimes all you can do is exchange pointers and build a connection with your body. Watch closely."

Lipita wanted to say more, but eventually swallowed down her protests and composed herself. "I'll do that, Senior. Good luck." With that, the Delphi dismissed herself and went back to her seat. There was no stopping Gaius Antonius when he got fixated on a goal, nearly a decade of training under him had taught her that very well.

The fight that ensued was a beautiful spectacle of martial excellence. Twin swords versus paired iron fans, Golden Devil against Hong Xuan; the two warriors wove and danced in a dazzling interplay of combat ability. Again and again the two men threw themselves against each other, clashing in the ring with ferocity that would have seen either dead if their weapons hadn't been dulled for the bout. For all that the floor of the arena became dyed with sanguine markers of the resilience on display. In the end it came down to a contest of qi techniques, Gaius' Aegis striving to hold out against the Form Transformation of the Ten Ton Swallow Style. Ultimately, it was the Aegis that broke allowing through an unrelenting throw of the qi enhanced iron fans that shattered Gaius' swords and threw him out of the bounds of the ring.

Lipita had been enthralled by the blistering pace of the challenge and the loss by ring out was a disappointment after seeing her senior push himself so hard. She reminded herself, the tournament rules prevented the Seeker from going all out. In a real encounter outside a duel, Gaius Antonius had the better hand. Concern had her standing up among the uproarious crowd looking for her senior. Thankfully, he soon came into view, waving casually as though he wasn't bleeding from several wounds. Foolish man, thinking he was invincible.

After they'd gotten Gaius treated and away from the appreciative spectators, they headed out for dinner. Gaius picked a restaurant that was apparently okay if not the best, Lipita in tow. Soon enough, Junior and Senior were seated at a sturdy oak table with big, hearty portions between them.

Gaius was clearly famished from his earlier exertion, voraciously devouring his meal. Lipita, on the other hand, didn't have much of an appetite. Staring into her wide bowl of noodles piled high with crab, leek, cucumber and more vegetables as though she were scrying some distant image, Lipita spoke up, carefully picking through her words. "If I may be so bold, Senior... I don't understand how you could find that fun. I don't hate violence, but... to me it's something I just have to do sometimes."

Gaius reached a hand over and mussed up Lipita's hair. It was a game he'd started using to teach her vigilance which she'd done well in avoiding his touches but this time she let him succeed. "That's because this wasn't violence, Junior." Gaius explained as best he could. "Sure, we were hurting each other, but something being violent doesn't mean it is violence. It was an enthusiastic and friendly expression of our arts, a pure exchange of ideas."

Lipita could only nod automatically, not quite sure how to respond to that. She could understand that perspective in part but she didn't share it as she was now. Enduring pain for gain, sure, but violence in a physical exchange was definitely not in a Delphi's preference.

"It's fine if it doesn't click for you, you know." Gaius said. "Every Cultivator is a little different and so is every Dao. I have no use for brown-nosers; you're here to learn, so don't mindlessly say yes just to get my approval, you hear me?"

"Yes, Senior!" Lipita exclaimed earnestly, before a slight flush of embarrassment reached her cheeks. Damn it, the man had a way about him that pulled at people close around which was at odds with his awkwardness. "O-or rather... I understand, Senior?"

Gaius laughed fondly and split his chopsticks, preparing to chow down. "Just eat the damn food, kid."

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Lipita escaped early in the morning from their shared room in the Traveler's Rest inn. Gaius was fired up after his fight with Long An and he was intent on getting her entrapped into training in body arts alongside other young Hong Xuan disciples. He explained it that there was only so much that one person could teach, especially someone as relatively young as him. Lipita had made obviously clear her wish to specialize in less physical disciplines, as her family tended to do, but Gaius declared firmly that he would be ashamed if he let someone under his care become a wimp. Apparently she may have been a nerd in his view, but by the time he and his father's people were done with her, she would be physically on par with her average Clansmen.

The desire to flee the physical torture Gaius had in mind lent wings to Lipita's feet as she sped through the streets of Seven Tourneys City. Her agreed assignation awaited and she intended to honor her word as given. Lu Kang was already in attendance when she arrived, running through staff drills. From the sweat that stained his clothes and the sense of his spirit, he'd been at the exercise for a while. She stood back unannounced merely observing for a few minutes before confirming her suspicion.

"You're bad at this." Lipita's voice carried in the early morning air startling Lu Kang who dropped his staff in surprise and tripped over it turning around.

"Ow, ow…" Lu Kang muttered as he rubbed his sore forehead from where he'd fallen. Lipita extended a hand to help him up, having picked up the abandoned staff.

"If you're dropping your weapon in drills, you're going to get slaughtered in the Iron Tiger Tournament." Lipita bluntly noted. "From what I've seen, my ten year old cousins could take you on and have even odds of winning."

Rising to his feet with Lipita's support with a downcast look on his face, Lu Kang didn't deny the observation. "I know already. My chances at earning any place in the Hong Xuan Clan with fighting ability are nonexistent."

"Why aren't you trying any of the other disciplines?" Lipita asked. "I know that the contests for the Choosing select for skill and worth in not just combat. Craftsmanship in stone and metal is also considered. The builders of the Grand Stairwell apparently select from such persons for their trade."

Lu Kang looked up at Lipita, frustration in his tone. "You think I don't know that. Learning craftsmanship good enough to qualify requires an apprenticeship and no one capable is going to offer it to the son of a failed peasant. I've some experience with blacksmithing and stonework but not enough." His voice trailed off at this point. "At least with combat, I thought I could work my way through the basics but even that I'm horrible at."

Oh, dear Imperator, he might actually be about to cry, Lipita thought. Well then that would certainly not do.

A broad smile stretched out across Lipita's mouth. "Well, it looks like you're in luck. You have won yourselves the instruction of a scion of the Delphi family. That name has earned its due regard in the production specialties and if anyone can whip you into shape fast enough, it's me."

Lu Kang was startled at this declaration. He stammered in confusion, surprised that anyone would make such an offer let alone one of the Golden Devils, overlords to the Hong Xuan. "Yo-you would d-do that for me? Why?"

Lipita shrugged in reply. "I'm here to participate anyway. I lose nothing valuable and potentially gain a well-placed contact. Besides, teaching you is a good excuse to get out of some of that sadist's torture." She shuddered, thinking of the hell awaiting her back with Gaius.

Hope began to lighten Lu Kang's bearing and he kowtowed ardently at Lipita's feet. "Many thanks great senior. This, Lu Kang, will never forget your beneficence and will certainly repay it back when he is able."

"Stop that and get up. You can repay me much later by getting yourself into the Low Forge and wrangling me an invitation. Those Spears of Flame they produce are interesting." Lipita turned away, embarrassed. We don't have much time to get you ready. The Bright Monkey and Solemn Mountain contests start soon enough and I'm going to need to brew a lot of potions to cram enough expertise into you. No time to waste, let's go!"

Clambering to his feet heedless of the dirt staining his clothes, Lu Kang followed after his new master.

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Gaius was not impressed by his disciple's new commitment. The only concession he made to Lipita's newly assumed responsibility was to incorporate Lu Kang into the physical training he put Lipita through. Otherwise it was full press in training. Lipita made nary a complaint at the pressure, she recalled the commitment she'd made the first time Gaius had introduced himself in her workshop. The Yuan Secret Realm was coming up in a few more years and her life depended on being ready the extreme danger of the expedition.

All the same Lipita managed to establish herself commendably in training Lu Kang. Stamina boosting potions, memory enhancement tinctures and more alchemical products were brewed using the bounty of the Hong Xuan Isles. These were low level supplements that were of little use to a cultivator but to a mortal getting a crash course they were absolutely essential. Lipita rented out a small blacksmith and attached workshop for masonry and Lu Kang practically lived out of the building spending every moment practicing. His father the disgraced, Lu Tong, and mother, Lu Beifei, could not believe the good fortune that had fallen into their son's lap and did everything to assist him, providing food and clothing among other minor aids.

The most impressive teaching tool was Lipita's use of a supplemental technique to the Palace of Memory, the Courtyard Atrium. It allowed Lipita to share access to her Palace of Memory with Lu Kang in a vaguely lucid dream while he slept, imprinting information slowly like on a jade slip. Willing mortals had less resistance to invasive qi techniques than even cultivators with their mental defenses suppressed. Lu Kang might perhaps not have been so willing had he known that Lipita practicing the Courtyard Atrium technique on him in Qi Condensation risked his brain melting out of his ears if she got the slightest flow of qi wrong. Or maybe not, he was very desperate to avoid being condemned to die working the mines and Lipita was herself well practiced with the Mind Seizing Binding to avoid egregious mistake. A few painful migraines, misaligned senses and minor changes in personality were small prices to pay for such speed in learning.

Lipita herself prepared to complete the assignment from the Contribution Board. She had chosen to be part of those that the Hong Xuan juniors must test themselves against. A good performance here would create closer relationships with many Hong Xuan juniors. In a few centuries, this would trickle up, and the Golden Devil Clan would find themselves with more loyal Hong Xuan scions in positions of power however few remained through the attrition of advancement. To fail would be to insult or even cripple such juniors during their tests, damaging the Clan's relationship with their vassal directly. Gaius was aiming for the combat contests and leading her to participate herself to work out kinks in her fighting ability. Where Lipita aimed to shine was the crafting contests, an excellent display there would be a good boost to the Delphi name and draw interest and commerce from the most powerful vassal under Golden Devils. Good business meant greater support for her own advancement which she would certainly need to walk the unorthodox path. Gaius was a testament to the expense of the travail, consuming Foundation-level elixirs worth more than man mortal settlements like they were tea.

Her goal of relieving the Delphi of the Harrowing hang over the ever distant horizon but she worked to grasp that impossible dream. These were just the first steps in her journey.

AN: (4080 words) @Alectai @no. @ReaderOfFate Please threadmark.
 
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