Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Hmmm.

I wonder if Impact can be burned to, for example, permanently reduce whatever malus Deadly Tribulations gives us... Like, a -10 Impact for a reduction of malus by 1 may sound minor... Until a dozen Good Seeds cooperate to reduce the malus by 20.

Would probably be restricted narratively to when the Good Seed is undergoing Core Formation Tribulation, or something equally dramatic.
 
Hmmm.

I wonder if Impact can be burned to, for example, permanently reduce whatever malus Deadly Tribulations gives us... Like, a -10 Impact for a reduction of malus by 1 may sound minor... Until a dozen Good Seeds cooperate to reduce the malus by 20.

Would probably be restricted narratively to when the Good Seed is undergoing Core Formation Tribulation, or something equally dramatic.

Way beyond what we can do anything about.
 
Getting Haoshen before the end of the turn means we'll have enveloped two of the Outer Clans - the ones tasked with playing the merchant to the plains specifically - and we'll have a knife poised to the gut of Cloud Jade City where the Servant Elders live.

As suspected, the critical element will be handling the defenses of the Underworld Spirit Palace and the Nascent Souls that live there.
 
Jiang Chrysanthos 12: The Grave of the Phantom (Collab with Zeno Angelus, Lipita Delphi, Gaius Antonus)
The Grave of the Plantman

a/n - Zenos Angelus, Lipita Delphi, Gaius Antonius, and Jiang Chyrsanthos collab (hopefully no typos)
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The weather was as clear as the day the plantman made his last stand at Pleuron not a century ago. In an unassuming part of the fortress, from which all Golden Devils hail, there lies the entrance to a mausoleum. Some of the entombed were transported with the retreat from the mountains, many legions more added after the shame of their retreat really settled in. Still, they are heroes, one and all, giving their lives in the hope of victory.

The entrance to the mausoleum was well-groomed, unlike the Golden Devil Zeno who sat near a flagstone, engrossed in the care of his father's sabre. His scarred right pointer finger still arcing lightning every few breaths.

The next person to appear didn't seem to have much of a desire to speak. Inwardly, Gaius cursed - he really was hoping to not run into anyone he knew. A foolish desire, considering how many lives Muyi had touched. His long hair, which he had tried to so carefully groom, was already beginning to fall out of place, a few ruddy green strands falling in front of his eyes. Everything about The Seeker's appearance seemed degraded and worn down; even his clothes looked shabbier, but it might have just been that they hung looser than usual.

A long, uncomfortable silence passed between the two old friends. Gaius reached a hand up and touched his chin, perhaps a sign he was craving a smoke. A bit of unruly stubble was poking out, far from his usual fastidiousness when he came to shaving.

After a while, Zeno looked up from his work, studying the new arrival carefully. A slight grin bloomed on his lips. "So, that's what it takes for you to stop smoking, friend?" His raspy voice echoed faintly between the sturdy walls.

Standing up, Zeno carefully rummaged through his satchel, ensuring not to damage the prepared sake bottle. After a long search, he pulled out the tea set, all too familiar to the both of them, starting the heating formation on his kettle. "Don't leave me hanging and share some stories while we wait for the others."

After a moment of hesitation, Gaius took off his hat and sat beside his old friend. "I suppose I do have some stories." He rattled out in a somewhat worn and ragged tone. "None of them too glorious, but stories nonetheless. Got run out of my father's homeland under threat of death, for one, not too proud of that adventure." He propped up one knee and rested his arm atop it, gazing out into the landscape.

After chuckling at the tone his story was delivered, Zeno asked further. "Well, for all the grief you accumulated, it seems to have concluded fairly well. You still live after all." After a moment of thought, he hastily added. "Got any plans for your ascension? As you can see, Amaranth practically swam in a cloud of success. HA!" Zeno took back the cloth around his right forearm and showed the severity of his new scars marring much of his upper body, lightning faintly arcing between the lines.

Gaius whistled loudly. "I heard you got close - didn't realize it was that close. Big balls on you." He chuckled quietly. "You're supposed to fear a tribulation, crazy bastard. Who am I to talk though?"

"As for my own ascension… well, that's just that thing. I got too cocky, thought I'd get everything I needed in the Yuan Realm, even while protecting a Junior at the same time. Now… I'm not entirely sure how I'm gonna do it. Most of the way to the Thirteenth, my progress was smooth, but that's come to a halt." He scratched the back of his neck, the border between his purified spine and unpurified brain itching. "Another ten, fifteen years of this…."

"If there's one thing that this foolish junior can say for certain, it is that senior Gaius Antonius will never flinch back from the demands of the pinnacle." Softly voiced, Lipita's interjection still carried far on the wind.

Raising a cup of tea, Zeno hollered. "Hear that, Gaius? You don't stand alone on your way to kingship. You will realize your dream!" Swaying to the side and lowering his volume to talk to the person behind Gaius, Zeno said. "Ah, don't be shy. Come, friend. We still have some tea brewing." After beckoning their new arrival closer, Zeno got another cup out of his seemingly endless supply in his satchel. The stone way they used to seat themselves provided comfortable warmth to their bodies after a long day, the stony surface no problem for these seasoned cultivators.

Drawing near slowly and painfully, Lipita shuffled over to the two older men, a slight limp in her right side. She bows in greeting to both before taking the offered cup of tea. She took a brief sip to sample the beverage before speaking, "not bad tea, truly. Certainly better than anything a certain old fool ever brewed. Try a pot he'd made, and you'd think that he was contemplating the Dao of blind regret, practicing with his tea making." Lipita's voice remained even, and the focus of her gaze fixed on Zeno.

"It can be easier to cultivate regret." Jiang Chrysanthos found themselves interjecting, their voice hoarse from disuse. At the attention their sudden arrival drew Chrys bowed, their presence bashful. "Forgiveness, I did not intend to distu-"

"Oh, thank goodness," Gaius smirked upon seeing the unfamiliar fourth person. "I was beginning to think my mother, secretly alive, would be the next person I saw. I've done a poor job of avoiding awkward conversations today." He smiled, sunken eyes beginning to draw back into an expression of genuine amusement, which seemed not to fit his current state. "No troubles at all! Come on, give your piece."

Zeno chuckled all the while, handing out another cup. "Thank you all, truly. Zeno is the name."

Accepting the implicit order, Chrys took the cup and drank deeply before sitting beside the others, wrapping their robes underneath them. "Jiang Chrysanthos, but please, Seniors, call me Chrys if it suits you.
"I have found that as one cultivates themselves, they must surrender easier paths. If one is unprepared or unlucky, this can lead to losing treasures unexpectedly." At this, they frowned, looking south towards another smaller mausoleum. "It can be difficult to accept your own mistakes after such a loss, but to reject them is a form of giving up."

The tea truly wasn't bad at all, Lipita mused. A subtle blend with a strong flavour that revealed itself slowly over the course of several swallows. Of course, the greater enjoyment was to be found in projecting her ire at the senior to her side. Gaius was certainly familiar enough with her spiritual presence to pick up her mood. Their old business partner Jiang Chrysanthos was a surprising addition to this gathering but a welcome nonetheless. Perhaps Gaius would take some heed from the words of the Expert and pull himself out of the most unbefitting slump he'd gotten himself into. No wonder he'd been unaccompanied by his partner Scylla, the bullying adopted young mistress would not have stood for such presentation.

"Indeed, Senior Jiang, good fortune and bad follow each cultivator on the path of advancement, and we can only receive what is given to strive gamely onwards. The Heavens have no eyes for us, so we own our choices and their consequences in full. No other may relieve us of them." Lipita considered why they were all gathered here.

In stark contrast to the well-groomed surroundings, all four legionnaires attending this ceremony looked worn and bettered—each marked by their service scars both visible to others and hidden. And yet, for all this, their appearances seemed to fit the scene.

"He deserves something bigger than this, don't you think?" Gaius spoke up after a while. "A man like that, dying so suddenly, his remains thrown in a little stone box to be visited at the leisure of his Clansmen. One year of celebration, then left behind. Seems unfair after such a heroic life."

"Hmm," Chrys pondered, accepting an offered refill. "He never seemed to care for the forest outside Pleuron. At least not when we spoke that one time. Although I was very young back then."

Speaking up, Zeno added. "He cared for very little, but battle and justice, true. But consider friends. It bore fruit. Word on the vine has it that a junior Good Seed, a true genius loci of Pleuron, has arisen out of his sacrifice! His dream lives on with a chance to grow and nurture its own dreams no less!"

"I never personally knew the legate Jin Muyi, but several members of his mounted legion received supplies for their companion mounts from our family. His deeds were an inspiration for many both within his forces and outside. In my induction, several of the more commonborn Aspirants looked to his example as motivation for how high one could rise without the long shadow of wealth or legacy." Lipita joined in.

"I can't say I knew Senior Muyi well either. Served under him in one campaign, but I was just another Legionnaire then; I hadn't done much worthy of attention. I had only one real conversation with him." Gaius sighed fondly, hopping off the perch and gently running his fingers down the mausoleum's door. "What was it he told me? That's right; he said that the ability to sit still and quiet your thoughts is a skill, and it was one I needed to hone." He smiled softly. "I've gotten a little bit better at that, I suppose, though I'm still not good."

Zeno chuckled. "Sounds like the advice he gave his daughter one day when I visited his estate. Mind you, she needed it, just like I needed to visit the Dawn Fortress for my training. I wouldn't have met my beautiful wife without his advice, come to think of it. Truly the best kind of teacher."

Lipita smiled as she recalled something. "Miss Gui Hua was one of a number of seniors I reached out to when attempting to help my Victor Wulf with his difficulties employing the necessary Formations of a legionnaire. The first advice she gave me was exactly as you described, to have him learn to sit still."

Sipping on their tea Chrys focused on letting go of the bitterness that came upon them. It was an old pain that had no place here. "Hehehe." They couldn't help but laugh a little at that. They were in a graveyard, mourning the death of a hero, but pain had no place.

"Learning how to sit still, huh…." Gaius mused quietly. "I've heard rumours that Muyi's cultivation aptitude was above average, but not exceptional. Hence, he rejected the unorthodox stages that are so commonplace today; perhaps that's where he got that bit of wisdom. And here I am - one hundred and twenty, almost at the Thirteenth Heavenstage, and I'm moping."

Still laughing at themselves, Chrys couldn't help themselves; at least they would say so if anyone asked. "Do you not mope sitting still? I always did."

At Chrys' words, Lipita winced, her still healing Dantian reminding her that she was technically still convalescing. She'd aimed for the 12th Heavenstage ever since she'd begun to study and practice cultivation. Now having broken through into the Great Circle of Qi Condensation and paid a hefty price in the effort, she found her convictions wavering. What would the words they were pondering mean in this case: sit still and quiet her thoughts. The man who uttered them had advanced up the ranks and through great realms with renowned strength even without taking a single step of the path of unorthodoxy. Forgo her plans as the idle wishes of youthful fancy? Or was there more to her dream? She'd never aspired to the Single Pillar, only wanting to fortify her foundations before breaking through. Too much thinking and worrying got her dizzy now.

In the silence following their words, Chrys looked towards Lipita and frowned. "Stop that, don't get caught inside your head so easily," they said before cursing and bowing. "Sorry, I should watch my own tongue before condemning others."

"Thank you for the kind words, Senior Jiang. I saw no offence intended." Lipita assured Chrys. "Too much time in bed contemplating the possibility of an end to my journey as a cultivator has not been the most helpful, one could say. Certain assumptions require reflection now that I have tasted the bitter truth of experience."

Zeno cleared his throat before speaking, still raspy despite the enthusiasm. "Don't worry, Lipita. With that experience, your foundation is all the better for it! And, looking at how you handle yourself now, your posture is certainly benefitting from it." Slowly gathering his supplies back, accepting the cups back from Gaius, Lipita, and Chrys and washing some water Qi over them to clean them, Zeno put his tea set back into his satchel. Once done, he stood back up while fastening his sabre to his waist.

Standing up and facing Gaius before the mausoleum doors, Zeno inquired. "And you Gaius, to take some worry off of your weary bones, I'll add some stones off of my stipend when I can so you are able to take the throne waiting for you. How does that sound to you?"

Gaius rubbed the back of his neck. "I don't know if I could accept something like that. You're a Centurion; you can't just think about your own advancement anymore, right?" He tapped his foot anxiously as he tried to gather his thoughts. "Well, you've been a Centurion for a long time, but like… you're a strong one, strong enough to turn the tide of battles. You just came back from the front lines, and you're headed to another frontline once we finally go to war. You've got a hundred men to worry about already, plus yourself."

Zeno countered, annoyance seeping into his voice. "None of them are crazy enough to seek Kingship alone and the King of our 302nd, we already support with our missions. Even lady Myia accepted help from her family! Think, Gaius! What is one more King for me to support? Besides, If I learned anything through the tribulation of Amaranth, it's the sheer power a king could wield, and we will need that might for the era ahead!"

"Besides, Kings are supposed to be greedy", Chrys added, before breaking into a short coughing fit, "j-just pay him back later."

"I think Senior Gaius is more worried about his fiancee." Lipita teased with a grin of her own, "Her fiance is receiving money from outside, for shame. Why I heard Centurion Xin had a thorough interrogation when she made a deal for my tutelage."

Gaius blushed and awkwardly shifted from foot to foot. "Now look at you, Zeno, you've got everyone bullying me…." He hung his head in defeat after a moment before turning on his heel to gaze into the distance. "Fine, but I'm going to pay you back twice over when I can. I have one final card to play, and some more funds for medical treatment will help make that possible."

Zeno nodded his head, content with the result. "It's settled then; the lone Seeker will have friends equipping him for the road ahead!"

Gaius combed back his hair bashfully. "Won't hurt to have, I suppose. Considering where I'll be going, I'll need to get everything right, bring exactly what I need."

"Where you'll be going? Do you mean the frontlines?" Lipita asked nervously, already certain that it wasn't anything so innocent. "Or some kind of special solo mission? Or maybe…" Her mind supplied one possibility, one she was reluctant to consider.

"I'm going to a terrible place, one it would be rude to discuss in front of this man's remains." Gaius shot back bluntly. "You shouldn't worry for my safety until you've fully recovered, Junior. Er, I am glad to see you're doing so well, by the way."

Lipita's eyebrow twitched at the sheer audacity of her Senior. "So soon after you got hurt, after all those years preparing for the Yuan Lands, you want to-"

"Like I said." Gaius interrupted, holding up a hand. "It's not something that we should discuss in front of Jin Muyi's remains. But yes, I will be entering that place; it's the last Secret Realm available to me while I'm still in Qi Condensation, and I'm in a unique position."

Zeno blinked several times, eyebrows furrowed in consternation. "You're going to ascend in there? Gaius. That…. that's what happened to…." After his sputtering attempt to protest, the Centurion sighed. "Kings! Foolish tyrants, the lot of them. I'll be content with a single victory over you today."

Sighing, Zeno gathered himself. "Mentioning fools. Do we want to take our ceremony for this beloved fool of ours inside?"

Slowly opening one door and beckoning them inside, Zeno asked the group. "Do any of you know the exact location? I could swear the board message called it a subwing, but of what?."

Chrys shook their head and looked towards Gaius, who shrugged in a noncommittal fashion. "Not sure. I've visited this place a couple of times, but both times I was totally lost. They build a new part every so often, and I've no idea how it's determined. It's an architectural nightmare."

"I've only ever seen the Delphi mausoleum," Lipita remarked. "I don't think I've gone inside a public one before. I'm not sure you could keep something like that organised."

Nodding at the truthfulness of that statement, they head inside.

Entering the mausoleum as living legionnaires would be an experience if they visited right before or after the peak times of strife. Without the dangers of the trials looming, the halls of the mausoleum did not see many visitors. Walking through the intricately carved door, the four of them got into the reception floor without any trouble. They saw one giant room, with murals on the roof, depicting feats of valour accomplished long ago. The room itself was vast enough to comfortably allow a legion to stand, almost empty outside of times of true strife like the trials. Few legionnaires manned the reception, and the guards, most likely bored by the monotony of their duty, passed the time by lightly sparring in groups of four.

After all, when Devils were done making use of their dead, there wasn't much left to bury.

The room, while ominous, was lightly furnished, having only some couches and the occasional elegantly carved False Sun Crystal lamp. Several large doorways adorned each wall, labelled by a time period; as time went on, this mausoleum expanded to make room for new generations of the honoured dead, so new sections were always being built. Most of the doors represented a millennium-long period(again, Devils don't leave much behind to bury so that you could pack them in tight). Still, for periods of great bloodshed, a door might cover only a single century.

The newest door led to a section still being carved out but would likely be one of those representing a shorter period. Added to commemorate the start of Grand Elder Konstantinos' reign, it had existed for less than a quarter-millennium. Still, it would be filled up after another hundred thousand deaths or so.

"I suppose you're here for the newest sub-system? You don't seem old enough to be mourning anyone before then." A voice inquired in cool, clipped tones. As one, the group looked upwards towards the voice and saw a misty, incorporeal form of an old, thin woman taking solid shape before them. Through a pair of thick glasses, she observed the four with an indifferent expression.

Ghost Art practitioners, like all other forms of necromancers, were uncommon among the Golden Devils. Sure, the production of Gravebronze borrowed some necromantic principles. Still, Devils were a people who prided themselves on practical, dependable, well-made equipment - ghosts were just too temperamental and unpredictable for their tastes. This old Custodian, at the peak of Foundation Building, apparently didn't get the memo.

Taking point for the group, Zeno answered. "That is correct, Senior. We are here to honour Jin Muyi. Could you please guide us to his resting place?" tightening his grip on his satchel.

The Custodian's eyes seemed to light up in a morbid fashion. "Aah, heroic Jin Muyi; quite a controversial figure, that one." She gave a wistful smile. "He was somewhat of a struggle to entomb, I must say. No Gravebronze coming out of him, and in fact, most harvesting attempts outright failed - physically, he broke down in such a…." She caught herself after a moment. The group was visibly baffled by her lack of attention for them.

"Forgive me; after enough time one learns to find fascination in such things. I am Leona Thrakis, the head Custodian of this mausoleum." The old woman pursed her lips together into something resembling a smile and gave a shallow bow.

"Fascinating is a good way to describe his life, I think, but that slip up shouldn't stop us from our endeavour. His resting place, please?" Zeno said with a tense smile on his lips.

"Yes, yes, I understand. Busy times these days. Right, this way." Leona replied, turning on her heel and taking off toward one of the doors at a brisk pace. "The current era's sub-wing is here. He should be, hmm, about five hundred fifty levels down? I shall guide you there; the lights don't always work perfectly when we've first installed." She continued to ramble, trusting the visitors to keep up.

Gaius, taking a moment to realise they were moving, stumbled as he caught up with the old woman and his fellow visitors. "Five hundred fifty levels? Pardon my ignorance, but… just how deep can the sub-wings go?"

"Deeper than you'd think, Junior." The Custodian explained plainly. "The caskets don't need much space, but they add up over the centuries. And as long as there's even a little bit to bury, you get a casket - one of the more comforting guarantees of life in the Clan, I feel. Strong or weak, we all get a respectful place of rest."

As Zeno jogged along, he asks. "Are bodies the only thing you bury because our stranded juniors would like to lodge a complaint, no?" Looking backwards to see the others already drooping from the fast pace Leona was setting.

"…Oh, right. Yes, perhaps we should slow down a moment, Senior?" Gaius said, trying to be polite.

"Oh my, I didn't even check their cultivation, did I? How silly." Leona tittered and pushed up her glasses. "I had assumed you were all Centurions."

Forget being mistaken for Centurions, Lipita grimaced; her body was protesting being vertical for so long. This protest took the form of pulses of incandescent pain from her limbs into her spine, turning her spinal column into a good replica of a canal filled with molten magma. She was forced to shorten her stride and finally spoke up. "I must apologise, but I will have to beg your leave to ease the pace. It appears I am not as recovered as I'd hoped."

"Why don't you walk in front, Lipita?" Gaius put gently, hesitantly patting Lipita on the shoulder. He still wasn't sure how he should approach his Junior after everything had happened. She didn't seem to hold any hard feelings, but how could he be sure it was so simple? Best to keep things polite and not get in the way of her stubbornness.

"Sounds like a good idea to me," Zeno commented idly, side-eyeing their guide in the mausoleum. "Surely such a mistake won't occur to our esteemed Senior again." Thinking for a moment, he offered Lipita. "I could also give you my heavenly iron boots for now. It would allow you to hover and prevent your wounds from getting worse." clacking his boots together to show himself hovering with some speed from one horizon to the next.

"I would have to unfortunately decline. Your boots are attuned artefacts and what speed I'd gain would be negated by the… discomfort of acclimating to your aura as I am." Lipita confessed.

Zeno could only nod. "True enough." Checking the pace of the others, Zeno placed himself at the back of their new formation.

"I would also appreciate a slower pace, Custodian Leona", added Chrys, their eyes noticeable wider than before. "My own cultivation leaves me uneasy here." a tone of self-critique audible to the others.

Taking on a new formation, they continue the rest of the way at something approaching a mortal's leisurely walk rather than a centurion's.

Lipita repressed a shudder as the group passed the two-hundredth level. The necrotic emanations just got stronger the deeper they went. So many remains packed so closely within the walls… at this concentration, it almost felt like The Harrowing.

No, not quite. These were lingering intents captured in death unfocused and indirect, unlike the curse of her blood which had a base animal cunning, striking at weakness and distraction, lulling unobservant Delphi into complacency when they thought they'd grown accustomed to the torment. This pressure was not an attack, merely a neutral force, born from the sheer number of remains present.

Zeno soon noticed their youngest Junior trembling and shot a furtive glance at Gaius to ask the obvious question. 'Do we want to know'?

Gaius replied with a combination of a rather complicated look and a brief tilt of the head that roughly meant 'Long story, ask me later.' before glancing backwards at Chrys, who by their confession was also ill at ease. 'What do you know of him?'

Zeno's simple combination of looks and an almost imperceptible raising of his shoulders established Chrys to be of a dependable family, their method of silent communication unable to convey more detail.

"We should be almost halfway to the bottom now," Leona explained, waving a hand and releasing a thin stream of qi to get a particularly recalcitrant lamp to turn on. "Each sub-wing is divided in two ways; first by time, then by rank. The first hundred levels are reserved for Aspirants, 101-400 for Legionnaires, 401-500 for Centurions, and everything below that for Legates, and, Imperator forbid, Nascent Souls. As more remains are recovered, they are placed into the nearest available location. I'm sure you understand why."

Indeed, that was rather intuitive. A Legionnaire would most likely be visited only by fellow Legionnaires. Better then, to not needlessly subject Qi Condensation Juniors to the pressure at the bottom levels.

It was a bit ghoulish, but Lipita could imagine Chemos at home here. For all his irreverence, the Expert had the utmost respect for the solemnity of memory. She knew that he'd personally added several compatriots and sworn companions to a Roll of Names of his own. They might not have been of the Delphi bloodline, some not of the Golden Devils, but they'd been boon friends and honoured them with a shrine in his Palace, the incense of contemplation ever lit for their lives so long as he drew breath.

Zeno butted in. "Then how do you tend to the tombs of Nascent Souls, like lord Alexios? Are there so few emanations of Dao to allow you to work there? And what about Qi concentration?" With every few doors they pass, the ornaments on the walls became more and more ornate. While before there were only a few splashes of colour, now some parts depicted heroic battles or favourite pastimes. Each one was unique in appearance, and everyone had a section.

Lipita scanned the walls and thought she'd figured out a bit of the solution to Senior Zeno's question. Dao emanations from a Nascent soul were frightful things as her first encounter with the Archegetes at induction had proven. They could affect the connection of body and soul more directly than all preceding great realms, but that was the known limit. At the very least, she could observer the mechanics of Demonic Tunes employed in the array work. Dampen and counter with opposing energies. A dead Nascent lost much of the strength they had in life; with a Nascent to assist, you could study the specifics of their Dao manifestation and focus your warding. Although this was partially guesswork based on the limited testimony she'd read of those Legionnaires who'd participated in the Archegetes special lectures immediately before the last Hundred Year Trials.

"It's always a custom job, with a Nascent Soul. Very difficult to handle; that's why you need a Ghost Artist to do it. I was raised for this job!" Leona snapped her fingers, summoning a wisp of ectoplasmic flame. "But Dao emanations with no will behind them aren't as deadly as you'd think. Dao is mostly Will, after all. Still, harvesting a Nascent Soul's body is a painstaking process, taking months if not years."

A nostalgic look fell upon the old woman's face as she explained. "I was the one who took apart that Cannibal whippersnapper, you know. Grand Elder Alexios too. Intense experiences, both of them."

"Interesting; thank you for your service then, Senior!" Zeno thanked her while curtseying shortly without seeming to lose his stride.

"It's no trouble. I should be the grateful one. The death of a hero is a sacred and precious thing. To be able to brush up against it, even distantly… it's a beautiful thing." The Custodian seemed almost ready to cry before composing herself. "Grand Elder Alexios' loss was a devastating blow to the Clan, but we can at least be comforted that it was an exemplary death. Perhaps the only way it could have been better is if he'd looked the man who did it in the eye, but from what I was told, he was killed from above and behind." She sighed sadly.

As the group went deeper and deeper, the air grew mustier, a stale taste infesting every breath they took as the surface grew ever more distant. The discomforting pressure on the spiritual senses of those present also grew heavier, like a vice squeezing a little bit tighter as they went. It was not malicious, not angry, just dense.

Lipita found herself swimming in a melange of latent will. So many dead so close together made for a morass of lingering echoes. Surprisingly her body tingled in affinity, even in death the Blood of Bronze attuning itself to like, a common bond unbroken in life and, evidently, death.

Through it all, the Custodian continued to occupy the group with her rambling. As thoughtless and creepy as she could be, she nonetheless prevented the trek from becoming a near-silent trudge, which would have been far worse. "Indeed, you cannot know the value of a man's life until it has ended. A good death, one which leaves a lasting impression, is a thing of deep significance." Leona lovingly ran her hand along one of the caskets as she spoke, this one containing one of the many Centurions killed by the Heavenly Star wielder in the recent Trial. "And in my four hundred thirty years, I must say Jin Muyi was among the most impressive of all those I've interned. Not one legendary end, but two. Oh, if only they would unredact the story of his second death. I wish to know the whole of it, warts and all."

Ignoring the comments about warts, Zeno forged on ahead. In his mind, he went over the list of items he took with him for this gathering. Cups, sake from Magnus that he seemed to like according to Muyis' legionnaires and, the most important of all, an open mind.

He mused. All of them are important, not for Jin Muyi, but for the living. In life, he was influential for many in the clan, not always because of any sort of personal connection, but his actions always rippled. When he moved, something changed. The higher focus on cavalry in recent times is only one such change.

"I find myself repulsed, Custodian Leona," Chrys said at last. "To find any meaning of death? Once I hoped to, but when attempting to ascend with such a Dao, I found myself struck down and crippled," they added, gripping their left arm that still showed the lightning bolt scars.

"Instead, I found that to die is to become frozen, no longer able to change ourselves or others. And this ice remains a wound within those who loved us, what meaning is there in death here, better to live. always better to live."

"That is a powerful way to face life. I must commend it." Leona replied with a grandmotherly smile. "Indeed, it is foolish to chase after death, but to be ready for it, to accept it when it is worthy of your life, I see no sin in that."

"But can it ever be worth your life if in death you curse all those who remain? How many thousands would one death have to save to be worth that?" Chrys asked back. "I fear our idolising of death just weakens us further, like an improperly tempered blade."

"Animals, humans, nations, mountains, stars. All of it ends. All of that time is borrowed." Leona retorted, gaze sweeping over yet another tomb. "Living, existing, is to emerge briefly from the water, To seek further life is not a sin, but one day it all returns. I don't see the despair in such a thing."

"Returns to what? An unfeeling heaven? or a rotting turtle," snarled Chrys, as sparks jumped up and down their left arm.

"The turtle? A speck. Heaven? A single spark. This is one star among numerous others, and it too will one day expire. No, it all goes back to something more, bigger, something we don't even have words for." The Custodian paused for a moment, uncharacteristically considering her words. "It's not lost; that essence shall resurface as new life someday. Like water, it becomes vapour, forms into clouds, and falls as rain. Even in the desert, every once in a while, we get a big storm."

At this Chrys paused, a frown on their face. "It feels cold, to consider human life as just water. but you have some truth; I can feel that."

After deliberating for a moment and turning over the words like a puzzle Chrys continued."To die is to stop, like a river running dry. But the river's water can still be found elsewhere, and the path of the river bed remains. Cassandra once spoke of rivers of shadows when we were young. How she followed them to us. Even without water, there is still a purpose to these rivers."

Leona nodded. "That's right. And it's not all without meaning. Here's a riddle: what happens when a man drinks a cup of water? It enters his body, and eventually, all of it will leave in various forms, returning to the world outside his body. But what was left behind, even after the water has all left?"

At this, Chrys smiled at Leona. "You have already sent me into deeper thoughts than I've had in decades, a riddle as well? Hahaha. Please forgive me, honoured Custodian, but I will have to meditate on this."

"That's good. It would have been foolish to answer right away." The old woman laughed fondly. "And with that, we have arrived."

At last, the group arrived at the very border of the Legate levels, where Leona caught Lipita's arm and paused the group. "Be wary from here on; the Legate Wills can catch the ill-prepared off guard. Stay behind me, and I will guide you through safely", and with this, her arms glowed, and faint wisps circled the group.

Following behind her, they only took a couple of turns until Leona stopped once more before an archway covered in stone vines. "I will remain outside. I have already honoured this hero enough," she declared before fading into the walls of the mausoleum, the only sign of her presence the faint wisps of light.

At an unspoken signal, the group stepped forward as one under the archway and looked up upon the countless visages of Jin Muyi.

Every hero cast a long shadow, and no pedestal did not conceal its fair share of scandal. Lipita wondered what hidden secrets and silenced shames lay interred with the Elder they had come to pay their respects to. It was in spite of their flaws that the Clan revered their champions laid low for who could claim righteousness under the Tyrant Heavens. Do they serve the Clan, advancing its interests? Was there utility in drawing attention to this deed and sweeping that misstep under the rug? Cynical considerations, sure, but undoubtedly ones that had been well and truly made before events had led to their current destination. It was enough, she supposed, that she knew what could be said. Sometimes you had to trust that the old monsters who spent the lives of their subordinates like water in the name of the Clan had honour lest you saw shadows everywhere.

To be a Hero was to shine a light upon the people that sheltered, guided, and empowered them. Chrys remembered each moment of his life that the Elder entombed here had touched, both directly when he saved their own life outside Pleuron and indirectly when he and the other Indomitable 13 saved Chrys' parents and siblings within Pleuron. There could be no more extraordinary deed within the Clan than to place oneself between the monster and the innocent. And Jin Muyi had done that again and again. Not even becoming a monster himself had stopped him from being a hero. If anything, it just pushed him harder, as he denied the destiny the Heavens had no doubt laid out for him.

Seeing the burial place of his honoured teacher, Zeno bowed low in the tradition of the turtle world. His metallic ash-blond hair glittered in the low light of the room, with the others standing beside him, performing their acts to honour him.

Catching sight of Gaius and Zeno bowing low, Chrys remembered themselves and knelt before upon the dry earth as their parents had taught them, an artefact of their history before the clan. Chrys counted the seconds, one for each virtue, before standing once more.

Lipita followed the example of her seniors in bowing before the tomb. Her bow is long and deep as befitting a Hero of the Clan, forcing weak flesh into submission, no trembling or shaking here to bring dishonour to the personage entombed before her. The subtle honours of Delphi family tradition escaped sight, unable to pierce mind and memory. Within the ever-present mental construct that is the basis of the family's legacy arts, Lipita engraves the setting around her within her Palace of Memory. Wherever she journeyed, an echo of this grave would be carried with her, a phantom to remember a ghost.

Gaius reached into a pouch, retrieving a series of large vials, which he placed in a semicircle around the tomb. "Whatever it is that happened to you, no one would hold it against you. You were so strong of mind, more so than anyone else I've ever known." He retrieved a knife, which gleamed impossibly in the dimness of the room. Even the way it moved seemed subtly strange like it was more real than the world around it. Gaius had gone to a lot of trouble to even borrow this for a single trip: A knife of pure Celestial Bronze.

Raising the blade to his wrist, Gaius continued to speak. "With this, Jin Muyi, I honour you. Know that no matter what happened, no matter how your body changed, no matter what some thought of you, you were a true comrade, a true Clansman to the end." With that said, he slashed open his wrist, filling each vial most of the way before corking it. This was a gesture with two meanings: first, that Jin Muyi was theirs by blood, no matter to whom he had been born. Second, that even if he became a beast, a true demon that hungered for the blood of men, he was accepted with open arms forevermore. A few drops missed and dribbled out onto the stone, and after he was finished, Gaius did his best to wipe it off completely. With a burst of qi and a tremendous flex of his forearm, the bleeding stopped almost completely.

After everyone was done, Zeno retrieved the ceremonial sake from his satchel, handing out cups to everyone and filling them one by one in a single slow motion. Succeeding the emptying of the sake into the cups, Zeno mused into the room, a glint of green visible in his eyes. "His dream, to protect the weak no matter the opposition, echoes from this place. Huh. What a shining luminary!" The bottle fell into the worn-looking satchel lying beside him with nary a sound thanks to paper enveloping it midfall.

Chrys lifted their cup but didn't drink yet, eyes locked onto the stone, "Almost like he is standing with us still."

Lipita looks down into the small vessel in her hand. "Each life safeguarded from death to stand spear uplifted in service for the Clan is the mark of his legacy."

"It's an odd feeling to be enveloped in another's guiding principles." Gaius mused, taking a drink - the one drink a week he was allowed, in his current condition - and shaking the cobwebs of exhaustion out of his head. Perhaps he'd lost a bit too much blood, considering his recent poor health. "So these kinds of feelings really were what lay within his heart, all the way down. It was hard to tell what the man was thinking sometimes."

"I'm sure Custodian Leona would tell us that that is the beauty of death." Chrys sighed, finally downing his sake. "How it is only in death that the full value of a life can be known."

"Well, only with death have we dreamed the last of our dreams for this turtle world. After that last dream we can look back at the dreams achieved." Zeno philosophises, swirling his own cup with one hand.

A faint smile lingered on Lipita's lips as she swallowed down the sake. The burn running into her throat was warm and welcoming in the sombre darkness of the tomb. Handing the cup over to Senior Zeno, she turned to Senior Gaius, extending a weave of qi familiar to any Legionnaire. "One last salute for a fallen Elder? The Hoplite bears us all, from Junior to Elder, the strength of Bronze working together to overcome all."

Emptying his own cup in one big gulp before placing it down, a grin framed Zeno's face. The motion and warmth running through his body was all too familiar, the link to his kin reinforcing his body and spirit in ways no other technique could. "A salute to the teacher living on in our dreams!"

Lipita and Gaius had trained together for over a decade before venturing into the Yuan mountain range. Linking together in a Hoplite formation was a well-practised manoeuvre they slipped into like no time had passed. Extending the reach to the others was as simple as breathing, all those hours drilling that loveable oaf, Victor Wulf bearing fruit.

As Chrys accepted the invitation to the formation, they couldn't help but remember each time they had performed it in the past and the faces of each comrade they had performed it with. Yet with the warmth of the clan's blood surging within their veins, all their doubts and regrets seemed to fade; there was only duty and honour.

The figure of the Hoplite was usually a shadowy apparition, a helmeted Legionnaire nondescript with bronze shield and spear. Not this one. Here rising imperious and defiant was a distinct relief. Still rendered in the spectral darkness of the projection but reflecting a familiar form.

Somehow, the figure felt easier to shape than usual. Each of them could perform a Formation with nearly the same ease as a standard technique, yet this seemed to practically flow out independently. The projection resembled Jin Muyi very closely; the same hard, strong features, the same unusual roughness of his false skin. It wasn't perfect, of course - none of them could say they had truly memorised Muyi's face to the most minor feature. This was the idea of Muyi, an echo of his life; the real thing would never return. The closeness changed the usual blank legionnaire, gaining a face, even some kind of identity so close to the honoured dead of the Clan.

Spear crashed against shield, and four voices lifted together in an uproarious call. "Honoured Elder, Juniors salute!" Their voices echoing loudly in the small room, no doubt heard by the Custodian outside.

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There was a comfort to found in such traditions. It did not ease the pain so much as put it in a new light. It became something productive, something that could be examined and understood. Through mourning traditions, the pain of loss becomes something to be grasped, which can be perceived in full and made use of.

"It's not so bad, is it?" Gaius smiled peacefully. "We grasp so desperately for more and more time to keep existing, but that borrowed life will always go back eventually. You'd have to transcend past Heaven to prevent that, but there's probably another limit waiting still. Something even higher above that will no doubt swallow us up when our time is spent. But slipping away isn't always so terrible."

Zeno nodded. "True. For all that his lack of presence now can be felt, the way he died had a profound impact on us all. For the better, I would argue. Why else would the Clan lionise him so, if not for his deeds achieved despite the opposition?"

"We idolise him, and so our lives will echo his. As we echo him, he lives on, and so more echoes are born." Chrys answered, their words at odds with their earlier arguments, yet no less accurate. No voice was needed to be raised against the truth of that statement of fact, and all knew it.

The five remained like this for a while longer, the four juniors in silent meditation while their hoplite remained saluting. After what would have been an age to a mortal, the hoplite of Jin Muyi faded away, and the four petitioners stirred.

Lipita was the first to break the silence. "War beckons with Jingshen", she whispered. "Many will die in the east, perhaps even some here. Death is an ever-present companion in the ascent of cultivation, and so many will fall away at each step. All we can ever do is struggle and stand unflinching."

"That's right." Gaius nodded resolutely. For a moment, his usual vigour seemed to return to him. "This isn't a brief spike in activity; it's still speeding up. Zeno, Lipita, you can feel it too, right? Connected to you like this, it's even more clear." Something unfathomable, even to Gaius, flashed behind his eyes. "An ocean of blood is going to wash over the flipper, maybe beyond. A time of legend. A time of terror."

The divinator among them nodded. "A Great Era is upon us, no doubt." Raising his scarred index finger, Zeno continued. "Clan records indicate us never benefitting from these times, but I have a feeling this time will be different…we will make it different!" clutching his sabre with one hand, like a vow to himself.

"We will ride the tides of fate this once instead of being pulled under." Added Chrys.

Gaius tilted his head, pupils dilating as if he were trying to focus on something. Indeed he was, but it was so far beyond his feeble awareness as to be laughable. "I can't help but wonder, though, what was the catalyst? Callista's tribulation? Muyi's heroics? The Grand Elder's ascension?"

"Who knows? Maybe like a ripple in a pond, the trigger was 500 years ago and only now are we able to see it. It might be worth hunting for it, though. What do you say Gaius? Want to find the spring from which this great age grew? I'll pay." Offered Chrys.

Gaius chuckled at the casual assertion of such a monumental task. "Sure, why not? I'll find time to squeeze it in." He smirked sarcastically.

Lipita shook her head at her seniors' need to know. The first thing you learned when you had the means to accumulate a wealth of knowledge was just how little you or anyone actually knew. The shadows of history and fate were unfathomably deep and the horizon of possibility ever distant. Sometimes all you had was instinct.

Shaking his head at the amusing thought, Zeno added. "Our fates are never clear, at least as far as my divination can tell. It always comes down to a myriad of factors. Some we can discern, but most lie buried under the sands of time. If we searched together, we might just find a point of origin. Though I doubt we will learn the full story anytime soon."

After deliberating for a moment, Zeno asked into the chamber, facing the others with his hands at his side. "Are we in agreement? Do we search for the origin of this Era?" Noticing her hesitance, Zeno urges Lipita to explain.

"My life's work is to exorcise the curse upon my family, the Harrowing, that cripples the greatest of us," Lipita explained, thinking out loud. "I had thought it a difficult task as is, but perhaps I stand to gain a better standing by seeking to unravel the mechanics of the Heavens? The Delphi were afflicted because we were repugnant, foreign to these Nine Seas, yet now the Clan is lifted up with the rising fortune of a Great Era. Perhaps this is another sideways means to freedom? I will assist your search as best as I can."

"That really is one hell of a thing, isn't it?" Gaius remarked, taking a seat against the wall to catch his breath. After a few minutes of exertion and already Gaius was looking half-exhausted. "Well, since I'm going to be in your debt, I'll pay it back by chipping in with your search. Sounds fascinating anyhow."

Gratitude seeping in his voice Zeno explained. "That's all I ask. We won't be the ones finishing it anyway. But it would allow others to start with a foundation of research." Catching a glance at Gaius, he asked. "Maybe we should continue out of here, if only so our honoured Custodian may attend to her other duties again?" Placing his satchel back where it belonged, Zeno took one last view of his teacher's tomb, his feet already leading him out of the room.

"Agreed, and as I said, I will happily support this quest." Said Chrys as they bowed one last time to Jin Muyi's shrine and turned back towards the entrance.

Gaius wiped the sweat from his bow and stood up to follow them out, bowing to the tomb as well. "So long, Jin Muyi. You worked hard; take a well-earned rest, and we'll handle it from here."

Lipita trailed the departing group. She was not looking forward to the flight of stairs upwards, but she still felt inspired. Who knew mausoleums could be so encouraging?

The four departed; that was all there was to it. They were all very busy people, after all, and these were busy times. Lipita and Gaius would begin their reconciliation on that day, but that is a story for another time.

Jin Muyi would never return, but his legacy - the lives he saved, the future heroes he inspired - would carry far beyond his life. Fate, as ever, swirled imperceptibly, frothing and churning, but the Golden Devil stepped forth to meet it.
 
Lipita Delphi 23: Zeno Angelus, Jiang Chrysanthos, Gaius Antonius & Lipita Delphi - The Grave of the Plantman
TURN 12, OMAKE 8 [Lipita]
Lipita Delphi 23: Zeno Angelus, Jiang Chrysanthos, Gaius Antonius & Lipita Delphi - The Grave of the Plantman

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Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest] Original - Fantasy

The Grave of the Plantman a/n - Zenos Angelus, Lipita Delphi, Gaius Antonius, and Jiang Chyrsanthos collab (hopefully no typos) __ The weather was as clear as the day the plantman made his last stand at Pleuron not a century ago. In an unassuming part of the fortress, from which all Golden...

AN: (8776 words) @no. Please threadmark. It was a pleasure to do a larger Collab with such new and old writers. I believe we did Jin Muyi justice taking into account the official celebration as described by occipitallobe.
 
Zeno Angelus - The Grave of the Plantman
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Assign Mildgyð to Underworld Spirit Palace. He will try to Fanatically Aid the Clan. Not sure if Mildgyð is mid foundation @Alectai, @TehChron, @Humbaba, @ReaderOfFate, @Kaboomatic LST for omake bonus.

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Making 9 fold heal gause was beneath Mildgyð Galene. The ingredients were fairly easy to acquire in the Heavenly bandit kingdom, but the preparation was just so tedious as well as requiring very expensive equipment to make. Any alchemist that could afford the equipment would have better things to do with their time. Fortunately that is what apprentices are for. Hoards of clan members eager to help the Flood Dragons and sign up for a work study program emphasis on Work. In lue of pay they would be allowed to take their equipment home with them when the job was done which nicely negates worries about them damaging the expensive equipment. Although if they did ruin their equipment their path likely would end here. They would never get out of the debt hole.

Mildgyð's hand snapped out grabbing an apprentice's hand full of ingredients before it could drop them into the cauldron. "Do you want to blow your eyebrows off Hmm. No? Then why are you adding foegrass before devilvine?"

The unfortunate apprentice paled "The devilvine isn't ready yet honored senior!"

"Did you start preparing the potion before you even finished reading the recipe and instructions? Don't answer, of course you didn't. Just jump into brewing without checking that you have everything ready. You think that we are just overflowing with prepared expensive ingredients ready and available to hand, no need to check after all the value of the ingredients is nothing compared to the value of your time. That's what you think, hmm?"

The apprentice is trembling and Mildgyð figures he has sufficiently made his point. He points to the ruined potion "Clean this up. The value of the wasted ingredients is coming out of your cultivation resources."

Mildgyð walks away shaking his head. There were times he despaired for the next generation. It's one thing to be unable to innovate and adapt. Not everyone has what it takes to be a genius alchemist, but not being able to even follow basic instructions.

Mildgyð was not one of the bright stars of his generation. He had hopes when he started out. Maybe manage to perfect that one step elixir. But it wasn't to be. Everything Mildgyð did was standing on the shoulders of giants adding no extra height at all. A living copier of existing potions and recipes adding nothing.

Still that was alright. Not everyone can be a genius creating amazing new creations. Someone has to replicate and repeat their work or there wasn't any point in those giants in the first place. The giants of that past had wide and spacious shoulders.
 
Hmmm.

I wonder if Impact can be burned to, for example, permanently reduce whatever malus Deadly Tribulations gives us... Like, a -10 Impact for a reduction of malus by 1 may sound minor... Until a dozen Good Seeds cooperate to reduce the malus by 20.

Would probably be restricted narratively to when the Good Seed is undergoing Core Formation Tribulation, or something equally dramatic.
I generally expect the possible results of impact burning to be related to the character's story. Like Abel might be able to burn impact to cause an industrial revolution or create a possible action that can improve wealth without having to take it from someone else.
 
Good Seed Profile - Lipp Galanis
Lipp Galanis


A middling cultivator from a moderately prominent House, Lipp has a simple dream: to create a brand new Turtle Child.

A simple chain of logic led him to this goal, around the age of seven or so. The greatest scourge of the Clan are the once-a-century Trials. The reason the Trials are as bad as they are is that the enemy is striking down from a realm rich in Qi to one that's bereft of it. The only way to permanently redress this situation is to restore the flow of Qi to the Third Sea. For that to happen the Sea needs to be home to a Turtle Child. Therefore Lipp will learn everything about Turtle Children, create a new one, and once it eats the rotting corpse of its predecessor to grow to full size it's going to fix everything.

Lipp may have skipped a few links in creating the logic chain. Nevertheless, he's become more and more committed to the idea over the years, to the point of obsession. Abandoning the martial traditions of his House, Lipp has thrown himself into winning a place for himself in the Beast-Raising Forest. To give his wild ambition a threadbare cloak of respectability, he's come up with a number of theories on how turtle-shelled Beasts can be used to aid in defense of fortifications, including a thus-far crude plan for a turtle-centered array for strengthening city walls.

Lipp's obsession has resulted in an eclectic education. He's learned veterinary medicine to better understand the inner workings of a turtle, geology to understand the continent a Turtle Child must bear, chemistry to help him understand the geology, history to help him understand the events that led to the Turtle Child's death, blacksmithing because he had an idea for a cool turtle-shaped shield, and so on. He's even done quasi-forbidden research into the Path of Consumption to ensure his new Turtle Child will be able to consume the corpse of its sibling.


Concept: A budding mad scientist with an impossible dream to chase

Cool Thing: Eclectic skill set. As long as something is even remotely applicable to breeding Turtle Young, he's at least dabbled in it.

Current Status: Healthy
Age: 100
Additional Impact: 16
Life-Saving Treasures: 2
Special Treasures: None
Lifespan Enhancement: +0 Years.
Tribulation Enhancement: None
Cultivation: 10th Heavenstage
Cultivation year equivalent: 163
Cultivation Goal: 12th Heavenstage.

History:

Omake:

Turn 12:
Lipp Galanis in: Through the Stomach (874 words)
Lipp Galanis in: Thinking Ahead (483 words)
Lipp Galanis in: Entirely Too Much Soup (1422 words)
Lipp Galanis in: Shaving Points (1168 words)
Training Juniors Collab: Unequal Exchange (3353 words)(Collab)
Lipp Galanis in: High Roller Haven (826 words)
Lipp Galanis in: The Bat Cave (921 words)
Lipp Galanis in: Hearth and Home (1351 words)
Lipp Galanis in: Falling With Style (1630 words)

Turn 13:
Lipp Galanis in: Fetch Quest (1850 words)
Lipp Galanis and Abel Angelus in: Microscoop (1011 words)(Collab)
Training Juniors Collab: The Note That Desolation Plays You (3072 words)(Collab)
Lipp Galanis in: Leaving the Hothouse (1770 words)
Lipp Galanis in: Growing Thorns (1483 words)

Turn 14:
Lipp Galanis in: Down in the Muck (2886 words)
Lipp Galanis in: At the Threshold (2443 words)
Lipp Galanis in: To New Friends (3467 words)
Lipp Galanis in: A Frank Conversation (1148 words)
Lipp Galanis in: Training Expeditions and Legitimate Grievances (2433 words)

Turn 15:
Lipp Galanis in: Soup for the Soul (1339 words)
Tulia Carbo in: The Weight of Expectations (514 words)
Vignettes From the Bathmother (2362 words)(Collab)

Turn 16:
Lipp Galanis in: Seeking Scraps (2618 words)
Lipp Galanis in: Time's Winding Thread (Part 1) (2102 words)
 
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Lipp Galanis in: Through the Stomach
Lipp Galanis in: Through the Stomach

Barely a year into his training, Lipp has already caught the attention of Elder Duca three times.

The first time he was thrown down a well with about twenty other Aspirants. None of them could quite figure out why, and most thought it was secret training. But Lipp understood. When you need something to hold clean water, that thing must be kept meticulously clean. Some of his turtles eat water snails, and if those snails are given water that differs even slightly from what they're used to, they will sicken and die in the space of a day. The work of that day was not glamorous but it was necessary.

The second time Elder Duca needed ten aspirants to pass her instruments while she took apart a giant scorpion and put it back together with two extra hearts. The creature died immediately, of course. But still, the sheer audacity of the attempt was nothing less than staggering.

The third time was less than a month ago. The Elder needed assistance with a new project built on two previous ones - the prototype of the Scorpion Wasp. The creatures were still undersized, only about as long as Lipp's arm. That was the only reason he survived the encounter. And now that he's finally back to active duty, Lipp has come to realization:

He's in love.

Not with the Elder's captivation eyes or the aura of impossible power. He's in love with her mind, which is surely the Clan's greatest treasure. Lipp wants nothing more than to crawl into her ear and live inside her head forever. But this is impractical at the moment. If he is to worm his way into her mind, he'll have to do it one thought at a time. Give her a spark of inspiration and see the blaze she produces. He must share his greatest insight to date with her.

He must cook for her!

Lipp sets up six large pots, filling them water and beginning six fires at carefully controlled temperatures. It would be easier to cook one at a time, of course. But the differences in the dishes will become most apparent if every other factor is the same.

The first pot needs the second most expensive ingredient - the meat of the Bull Defeating Oasis Monkey, a creature in its 1st Heavenstage of Qi gathering. Someone else had already eaten the core, but chose to sell the meat. At least enough of it to create the Thick Empowered Oasis Monkey Broth. The meat of a creature that took its first steps up a mountain with no peak.

The next pot gets filled with the meat of an extremely ordinary Oasis Monkey, killed by a mortal hunter. The Thin Basic Oasis Monkey Broth is the same in many ways, except that it's made from a creature that's entirely mortal. To consume both in succession is to come a step closer to understanding the difference between the two.

Now, as anyone who's dissected a pregnant monkey knows, before a monkey embryo becomes a monkey, it's a kind of fish. And before that it's a kind of worm. So the next two pots contain the Creamy Lungfish Chowder and the Warm Worm Stew. The progression from greater complexity to lesser complexity continues.

The next pot contains the Ten Times Strained Seawater Soup. A portion of water taken from the ocean is put through finer and finer sieves, until what's left behind are the smallest, simplest organisms of all. Surely the first to be created, the same way a smith must be a blacksmith before he becomes a whitesmith.

The last soup is the same thing, except that two more ingredients are added. First, a deadly poison. When used on a man it will tear off his limbs and his head. Then each of those will be torn apart into fist-sized chunks of meat. And this process will continue, seemingly without end. Very expensive, but very much worth it. Because once the poison is neutralized, the resulting Fractal Shredding Poison and Antidote Soup no longer contains the smallest and simplest organisms, but their shredded bodies - the very basic stuff of life that's present in every creature - not only the worms and the lungfish and the monkeys, but even in Lipp and Elder Duca.

A great master once expressed the theory that all life originated in a soup perhaps one or two orders of magnitudes simpler than this one, simply by coalescing into chunks. If so, by recreating that soup a man could create life from scratch. It's not a likely path of Lipp's goal, but it's one he personally favors. Because it it panned out, Lipp would become known as the Primordial Soup Chef. By taking away the man's title, Lipp would further erase traces of his crime, and is that not justice?

Precariously balancing a dozen bowls of soup, Lipp begins making way to Elder Duca's chambers. This is the height of presumption, but the Elder will understand, he's sure of it. And of course there is no question of being stopped on the way there. Because who would bring this much soup to somewhere they didn't belong? It would be crazy.

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Lipp is staying far from the front, probably doing chores. I'd like a LST as a bonus.
 
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You should always have at least 1 LST in reserve unless it's impossible. There's a training juniors mechanic that's better returns than the Cultivation Boost.

I would say it is perfectly in-character for Lipp to sacrifice a safety net in favor of the relentless pursuit of advancement given his romantic intentions for Elder Duca. He may very well be the craziest character we have seen and that is saying a lot considering some of the people we have seen as Good Seeds (RIP Jin Muyi). I look forward to seeing this character develop and hope that Elder Duca plays a core role in his future story. I will be rooting for the Lipp-Duca ship as I find something oddly adorable about the socially ostracized mad scientist being swept off her feet by an idealistic junior who loves her brilliance and unique take on experimentation.
 
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Good Seed Profile - Angeliki Calimeris
Angeliki Calimeris
The Calimeris family is a medium sized family of the Golden Devil clan, known for usually containing one or two Foundation Building experts at a time.

Angeliki is a short young woman with long golden hair down to her shoulders. She looks almost dainty, favoring flowing clothing with long sleeves that trail down past her hands. With bright green eyes and a face well suited for smiling, she is nonetheless viewed as fairly unremarkable. The second daughter of her family's current generation, she is… Average. Average talent, average resources provided for her by her family. She is trained in several weapons, among them the spear, the sword, twinned daggers, and hand axes, but she has no particular preference towards any of them, drifting from one to the next on a seeming whim. The very picture of a 1st Heavenstage cultivator, still forming the barest foundations of her path, she nonetheless has a strange and uncanny sort of luck to her, always seeming to slip out of danger by one coincidence or another. Those who know her well comment that she must have been born under a lucky star.

Concept: Extremely Orthodox Cultivator with a strange and uncanny luck for getting through deadly scrapes. Coincidence or Providence?

Cool Thing: Favored by the Heavens…?

Somehow, despite being a Golden Devil, Angeliki is favored by the Heavens in some way. What, if anything this means for her, remains to be seen.

Current Status: Healthy
Age: 18
Additional Impact: 0
Lifesaving treasures: 0
Special treasures: None
Lifespan Enhancement: +0 Years
Tribulation Enhancement: None
Cultivation: 1st Heavenstage
Cultivation year equivalent: 0
Cultivation Goal: 9th Heavenstage
 
Angeliki Calimeris 1 - Born Under a Lucky Star
Born Under a Lucky Star

Everyone said she must have been born under a lucky star. She wasn't quite sure she believed it, herself. To her, it seemed like her 'luck' only kicked in at the last possible second. Like when she was three, and tumbled down three flights of stairs, only to land at the bottom entirely unharmed, to the relief of her older sister Calliope, who had been babysitting her at the time. She still hadn't told her parents about that incident.

Or when she was ten, and the spirit beast her cousin Andros kept in a cage to study had managed to break free one night, and it had tripped over a rug just as it was about to pounce on her. According to her great uncle Alexander, the Foundation Building Patriarch of her family, the extra moment had been just enough time for him to arrive and slay it before it could kill her. She still shuddered, at the memory. She had barely understood what was happening, but she was sure that awful bug had been about to kill her. Felt like it /should have/ sometimes.

But she didn't feel like either of those incidents made her lucky. They just made her break even, escape certain death by the skin of her teeth.

What had happened at sixteen, the night she had begun cultivating…

She shied away from the memory, even now.

No. No matter how much she should be dead, no part of her wanted to call what happened then 'luck'.

She stared out over the moonlit sands morosely. If she really was lucky, she felt like she should feel it, more often.

Her thoughts turned slowly to the future, instead of the past.

War.

She looked out over the landscape sprawling out in front of her with a quiet frown. She had started coming out here alone ever since that fateful night she had begun her path as a cultivator, enjoying being alone with her thoughts in the cool night air.

It helped her put them together better. Her family and her friends thought she was a bit slow sometimes, she knew. She supposed it wasn't their fault. She didn't communicate herself well to others. Things that made sense in her own head seemed to come out wrong when she tried to explain them. Like her weapons training. She knew she was being flighty, but none of them felt right yet. Or not that they didn't feel right, but-

She shook her head and focused more on her surroundings and less on her thoughts. The rough texture of the rock beneath her, as she leaned back into this small nook between two hills. She liked this spot because with the rocky terrain obscuring her view behind her and to her sides, she could stare out at the narrow strip of sand in front of her with nothing built in it, and imagine it carried on forever. No people. No expectations. No trying and failing to explain herself. Just the cool desert sands lit only by the faint light of the moon, forever.

She lets herself watch for a few minutes more, before her thoughts drifted back to that word.

War.

She wouldn't be able to just sit around drifting through her lessons any longer, waiting for everything to feel perfect. Tomorrow, she would be heading to the Quigai Secret Realm, against the advice of her family, and the warnings that her luck wouldn't last forever. And at least in a Secret Realm, she could avoid what had happened back then, two years ago from happening again.

Her Great Uncle insisted she was being superstitious but he hadn't seen-

Her teeth grit, avoiding the memory.

She would grow strong enough to not need her luck in the secret realm. She would. Either that, or she would meet her own end, that vaunted good fortune finally running out far from home.

No one else would be killed by her 'luck'.

She watched the sands until dawn began to rise, then stood and wordlessly began her walk back home.

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I'll take an LST as my turn's omake reward, and Angeliki will be entering the Quigai Secret Realm this turn.
 
Good Seed Profile - Auspicious Nine(Adopted)
I have had the Good Fortune at being allowed to adopt Auspicious Nine with permission from @BadAtScreenNames & Occipitallobe. I plan to do them justice.

PROFILE


NAME: Auspicious Nine

FIRST TURN: 10

COOL THING: Tree-Man (see backstory for details - Vital Golden Arbor variant)

BACKSTORY: There are many odd creatures that wander the Third Sea, born of the divine power of cultivation and the crucible of the world. Few, however, can be said to be stranger than that great champion of Pleuron, Jin Muyi. The hero's transformation as he recovered from his wounds transformed him into an entirely new form of life; the first demonic tree man to ever exist.

He was not, however, the last.

When Jin Muyi regained consciousness and left the grave/sanctuary of roots and vines he had slept in, some tiny fragment of him was left behind. Not much, admittedly – barely an echo of his qi – but enough. It lay in that cradle, and slowly, it consumed the qi that the root system fed it, the ancient blood of long-dead fifth sea cultivators trickling in drop by drop. It grew. It developed. And then, a hundred years later, it awoke.

Or more accurately, they. From the tree came twelve demonic tree people, new born and very, very confused. They were physically already fully grown, their human aspects seemingly young adults, and they possessed some language skills, but beyond that, nothing. To make things even more complicated, further investigation showed that all of them possessed the blood of bronze to some degree or another, albeit mutated to a massive degree.

The twelve were, to begin with, protected and cared for by Pleuron's governing family. There, their personalities started to emerge. Of them, Auspicious Nine was the first to go out into the wider world. A curious, clever young entity, he devoured every book he could get his hands on. Having completed his studies, he decided to do the only thing that made sense.

And joined the clan. Right before the trials.

Yeah, his definition of sense is… flexible…

DATASHEET

CURRENT TURN: 16

HEALTH: Healthy
Healthy (Turn 10 Start) --> Wounded (LST interrupt) --> Healthy (Turn 11 Start) --> Dead (LST) --> Badly Wounded --> Wounded (Turn 12 Start) --> Lightly Wounded (Turn 13 Start) --> Healthy (Turn 13 End) --> Wounded (Turn 14 End) --> Healthy (Turn 15 Start)

AGE/LIFESPAN: 120/500 Years.

IMPACT: 5 (Effective Cultivation: FE4)
0 (Turn 10 Start) > 5 (+5, Turn 12 End)

Woodflame Token (+5) - A talisman seized as spoils from a defeated Jingshen daughter. Allowing Nine to transmute wood energy into flame energy at a moment's notice, reducing his weakness to flame and allowing him to use it as a powerful attack. Good combat and utility function.

CULTIVATION: Foundation Establishment 2-Pillar
1st Heavenstage (Turn 10 Start) --> 3rd Heavenstage (Turn 11 Start) --> 6th Heavenstage (Turn 12 Start) --> 9th Heavenstage (Training Juniors) --> 1-Pillar, Early (Turn 13 Start) --> True 1-Pillar, Fortified (Turn 14 End) --> Foundation Establishment 2-Pillar

CULTIVATION YEAR EQUIVALENT: 150
21 (Turn 10 Start) --> 33 (+12, Turn 11 Start) --> 47 (+14, Turn 12 Start) --> 67 (+20, Training Juniors) --> 100 (+40 from Breakthrough, Turn 13 Start) --> 110 (+10, Turn 13 End) --> 120 (+10, Turn 14 End) --> 150 (+30, Turn 15 End)

CULTIVATION GOAL: Orthodox

OMAKE BONUSES: 2 LST
Turn 10: +1 LST, -1 LST
Turn 11: +1 LST, -1 LST
Turn 12: +1 LST
Turn 13: +1 LST
Turn 14: +1 LST, -3 LST
Turn 15: +1 LST
Turn 16: +1 LST

TRAITS, TECHNIQUES & SKILLS:

Ascension Blood - Sometimes being slow has its upsides. Following the events of the second Hundred-Year Trials of the Era Konstantinos, the Clan has developed an infusion to thicken the Blood of Bronze for juniors of the 4th​ Heavenstage and lower. Those infused have purified their bloodlines, making them stronger, equivalent to standard Foundation Establishment progression.

Grudge Vessel of Gu

Verdant Bough Regrowth

Dream Chasing Nightmare Bridling Sutra

Gui Hua Dao Fa
Quoted from Mochinator: "It isn't technically a Golden Devil tech since it was taken from the Saber Palace for Gui Hua by her mom, but i guess she could have passed it down so that it can help protect her Father's Clan since Gui Hua herself is heading off to the Flood Dragons (if i ever have the mood to write it out)
But appearance-wise, think Sai from Naruto up to FE
At Qi, movement is beyond the wielder and they can only use it to display constructs (basically Avaterseque bending of rock walls, grasping vines, falling rain drops etc)
Core is when the more mind fuckery stuff happens where each construct radiates the Dao of Painting so much that the enemy is forced to looked. It plays with their heart and distracts them
Core is when the more mind fuckery stuff happens where each construct radiates the Dao of Painting so much that the enemy is forced to look. It plays with their heart and distracts them
But easy way to treat it is Sai from Naruto's painting except elemental based due to it supposing to be from Ghosts of a elemental type being the ink"
Fuller description: Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest] Original - Fantasy


IN-PLAY HISTORY​

FATE LOG:
Turn 10: Auspicious Nine was his name, yet his fate was moderately inauspicious. Facing the Trials, he was hunted for the traces of Bronze in his blood, and for his inexperience he suffered. Were it not for the use of a timely Treasure, he almost would've died, and it was only the intervention of Jin Muyi pulling away a number of Hunters to lay a greater siege at Pleuron that allowed him to escape with his life. He managed to reach the Third Heavenstage (+12 Years), following the same plodding cultivation schedule as his progenitor.

Turn 11: Auspicious Nine continued his absurd run of bad luck. Almost slain by a rampaging Revolting Vilefart Boar in the Foundation stage as he attempted to recover a herb, he survived with the use of a treasure alone, and despite that managed to cultivate to the 6th Heavenstage (+14 Years).

Turn 12: Auspicious Nine like so many others was deep in Jingshen territory, fighting a rather unpleasant Flame cultivator who used a trio of mobile cannons as her weapons. He managed to ambush her, only to be ambushed in turn, and forced to flee. Driven up onto a mountain, he triggered his tribulation, reaching into Foundation Establishment. Coming down the mountain he slew the enemies pursuing him - his enemy had been the daughter of a Core Formation Jingshen Elder, and from her body he seized the Woodflame Token (+5 Impact), allowing him to transmute wood energy into flame energy at a moment's notice, reducing his weakness to flame and allowing him to use it as a powerful attack.

Turn 13: Auspicious Nine was the first to have to return in the adventure beneath the fortress. The great whirling dead-zones that drank Qi caught him first, along with Simon. With the quick and decisive use of a potion was able to throw them both out, but remaining a few seconds too long left him exhausted and depleted, unable to continue in the expedition. (+10 CY)

Turn 14: "Auspicious Nine had spent the better part of a decade seeking to cultivate insects and cultured fauna for the sake of advancing his own alchemical research. Reaching the limit of what could be done at the early stages of Foundation Establishment, he entered the Qiguai Secret Realm in search of inspiration, or at the very least opportunity.
Within the first day the eyes of his ancestor appeared to be looking upon him; he had encountered a Centipede of surpassing potency despite being in the upper reaches of Qi Condensation strength. A remarkable find, and if he could secure a breeding population, then the possibilities-!
Over the course of ten months, three weeks, four days, and two mysterious nights he tracked the Centipede to its home - aided in no small part to his own nature, to be sure. A small hole in a cliff wall, a tunnel that lead into a vast, glittering cavern. Within which lay an atmosphere thick in ambient qi, and rich in potent lichens and plants to feed the glittering swarms of beetles that fed on them. Excited, he began taking samples en masse, determined to swiftly take back enough to Clan territories to remake the environment in miniature.
He did not notice the Core Formation Patriarch Centipede until it was too late. A barbed stinger smashing him into unconsciousness with an injection of paralytic venom.
"Invader." Was the word he heard first, dripping with scorn as he was brought to wakefulness.
"The likes of you is not welcome here, let alone to steal from this Realm to empower those who carry your befouled blood," Mandibles chittered in reprimand, "But fortunate as you are, Invader, that I lack the time to mete out proper punishment. As it happens, there is a great deal of waste from this time's…Well it doesn't matter to you, the Heaven's have more important matters to manage. Survive and leave. Or don't."
Auspicious Nine was left, chained into a tunnel deep within the Array. Subjected to intense amounts of pressure fell upon him, trapped within a whorl of crushing sea that assaulted him with the terrors of the deep. In desperation the Treeman sought to desperately swim along the current back to air, but his unnatural physiology could only endure so much, forcing the usage of a treasure to find the nearest pocket of air. (-1 LST). When Auspicious Nine awoke, he found himself upon an island drenched in perpetual twilight, where no light nor stars could be found. Hesitantly, he sought to use his talents and body to take from the land and heal, but it was not to be. The island was host to a den of Reverse Sea Eels, creatures that could only live above the waters as their bodies channeled the might of Heavenly Qi perhaps too strongly. They struck the Treeman deeply, fangs and scales seeking to tear apart their first meal in years, and in desperation Auspicious Nine was forced to use another treasure to retain his life, if only barely. (-1 LST).
The whorls of space churned, even as he desperately sought to flee the blind seas in which he had been entrapped. But the gifts he had been given could only do so much in the Qiguai Secret Realm, and it was only through the usage of a third treasure that he managed to breach back into the relatively safe territories of Realm, finally free of the terrors of the Reverse Sea in which he had been trapped. (-1 LST).
Horribly injured, he returned to Clan lands. Far poorer, but perhaps wiser for the harrowing experiences he had faced in the Qiguai Secret Realm.

Turn 15: "Auspicious Nine was assigned to a task of seeking out an old herblore teacher from the Plains. He was asked by the teacher to go and find this man who had been making a living selling herbs at the mouth of the Poison Maze for decades, but hadn't taught anyone else since he was crippled thirty years ago. He was to bring the teacher back, a task made difficult by the fact that he did not know where exactly to start looking for the man.
The old herblore teacher had gone missing after one of his old students died in the Poison Maze, never to be seen again. He would return with Auspicious Nine and lend his aid to the Clan if he could aid the man in finding his student's corpse.
The body was found at the edge of the Poison Maze, next to an old tree with red flowers blooming all around it. The body was perfectly preserved, sitting on a sea of gorgeous blooming flowers. Auspicious Nine thought that was peculiar, and wondered why the body was not damaged by the effects of the nearby Poison Maze. He suspected it might be a trap, and so he waited until nightfall before approaching the body.
He crept up behind the body just as a snake emerged from the corpse, a red flower pattern on its back. Auspicious Nine slew it, and returned the corpse to the teacher. The Redflower Snake Gallbladder (+10 CY) he recovered was a potent boon to his cultivation once cooked properly into a pill."

OMAKE LOG:
57,650 words overall total (net)

TURN 10:
Auspicious Nine 1: The March of Progress (858 words)
Auspicious Nine 2: Decision Making: The Demon Tree's Perspective (629 words)
(1487 words total)

TURN 11:
Auspicious Nine 3: Further Ruminations of Progress (406 words)
(406 words total)

TURN 12:
Auspicious Nine 4: The Passing of a Legend (838 words - Life Saving Treasure)
Auspicious Nine 5: In the Halls of Phantasmagoria (4152 words - Teaching Juniors collaboration with @Kaboomatic)
Auspicious Nine 6: The Pursuit of Progress (16150 words)
Auspicious Nine 7: New Life, New Lessons (Collaboration with @ObsidianNoir)
(21,016 words total)

TURN 13:
Auspicious Nine 8: Homeward Bound (3300 words)
Auspicious Nine 9: Home Sweet Home, Pt. 1 (1875 words, Training Juniors Collab with @Gore17)
Auspicious Nine 10: Research Material (1271 words, Training Juniors Collab with @CuriousRaptor)
Auspicious Nine 11: Chance Encounters in the Dark (1130 words, Collab with @AlphaDelta)
Auspicious Nine 12: The Many Molds of the Blood (4820 words)
Auspicious Nine 13: Six Degrees of Separation (3750 words Collaboration with @BlueHelix)
Auspicious Nine 14: Seniors who Lead Effectively Deserve Double Honor (2150 words Training Juniors for @Gajoti)
Auspicious Nine 15: The Flesh is Weak but the Spirit is Willing (2530 words Training Juniors Collaboration with @CoreBrute)
(20,826 words total)

TURN 14
Auspicious Nine 16: Deviant Physiology Pt 1 (200 words Collaboration with @The Fourth Monado )
Auspicious Nine 17: No Son of Man May Overcome Here (1350 words Collaboration with @Gajoti)
Auspicious Nine 18: Deviant Physiology Pt 2 (1100 words Collaboration with @The Fourth Monado )
Auspicious Nine 19: Look Above and See Grandeur (6300 words)
Auspicious Nine 20: Break Them Down and Build Them Back Up (1800 words)
Auspicious Nine 21: What Strange Beings these Mortals Be (1375 words Collaboration with @Xantalos )
Auspicious Nine 22: Office Politics (1135 words Collaboration with @BlueHelix )
Auspicious Nine 23: Fallen Powers of the Virtuous Flipper Region (1225 words)
Auspicious Nine 24: Partners in Crime (1850 words)
(16,335 words total)

TURN 15
Auspicious Nine 25: The Testing of the Devouring King (382 words, Collaboration with @Juugo, @ReaderOfFate)
Auspicious Nine 26: Every Fall, Every Fumble is a Faggot of Failure fueling the Furnace of Fortunes Most Auspicious (900 words)
(1,282 words total)

TURN 16
Auspicious Nine 27: Nega-Verse 1 - The Path Not Taken (1000 words)
 
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Auspicious Nine 4: The Passing of a Legend
TURN 12, OMAKE 1 [Auspicious Nine]
Auspicious Nine 4: The Passing of a Legend

The revel around the crypt in the deep mausoleums of the Dawn Fortress was a spectacle at odds with its location. The vaults of the honored dead buried several floors beneath the great citadel of the Golden Devil would seem the last place to find exuberant merry-making and celebration given the grim markers of mortality that inescapably defined the space. Yet perhaps it was because of the nature of the their present location that those present lifterd their voices uproariously. The clink of bottles against cups, saucers to gourds, filled the air as legionnaires drank voluminously gathered around a more recent addition to the crypts.

Standing at the periphery of the gathering where drifting revelers paid little attention, a silent figure observed and wondered. Full length cloaks and soulsteel masks were not exactly standard attire for parties or memorials but who was going to question the fashion choices of a cultivator. Auspicious Nine congratulated himself on his continued successful concealment and infiltration of the one year celebration of the internment of Jin Muyi. Well it probably didn't count as infiltration if there was an open invitation but really who cared about such minor details. No one had remarked upon his inhuman physiology which meant well deserved progress in his mastery of the subtle arts. Athena should have been ashamed of him for doubting his prowess although there had been… unfortunate lapses in the early days.

No matter now. He had unparalleled access to the lamentations for the late elder. Auspicious Nine carefully noted down the behaviors on display just as he had each day for a year now since the crypt had opened to visits. Early observations of the gatherings around the statue on public display had been uncomfortable work in the open sun with lots of boring waits interspersed with interesting insights. Today the members of Jin Muyi's own Mobile Infantry, the 99th​ Legion, had gathered in honor of their fallen ex-legate. An auxiliary legion prior to their assignment to the then Foundation Establishment Expert in the wake of ruinous Hundred-Year Trial, the force had been wholly transformed into a capable combat unit melding mounts and riders into the trademark formations of the Clan. This legion boasted the most adept practitioners of the Philoctetes variant of the Kataphroktoi Formation, no wonder there, since their legate had been the one to innovate it.

"Jin Muyi, may the Imperator welcome you into his halls in glory!" "For the honor or the Hero of Pleuron, Jin Muyi!" "Faithful to the last, our elder, our legate!"

So many toasts, so many shouted reminiscences of campaigns fought together and victories won. These were men and women who knew personally the legend so many were mourning. Auspicious Nine shifted uncomfortably, scratching at his chest. That last meal was making him uncomfortable, in fact, he'd been in discomfort for a while now. No time to waste on that, a seeker of progress could not let physical failings hold them back, so he pushed it aside. Here was a chance to learn more about the man who'd transformed beyond humanity and given rise to his family. He'd never asked, never considered what linked him and his grove to their progentor but now all he had were snatched memories and guesses.

Sighing beneath the blank face of his mask, Auspicious Nine could not will himself to leave until he answered this pull to know, to understand. Perhaps when he was done here he could see the human offspring, Gui Hua, was it not? Maybe there he would find an answer to satisfy this compelling interest.

Walking up to a very inebriated legionnaire - if the unsteady gait said anything - he poked her in the back as she was taking another swallow from a wineskin.

"Oi, watch it! You almost made me spill my wine." The legionnaire spluttered, turning around at the unexpected interruption. Looking up and down Auspicious Nine's form with unsteady eyes, she mumbled a question. "What are you an attendant here? Didn't know they went for spooky. Want to come with me to the corner for a little fun time?"

Ignoring the inane request for coitus, Auspicious Nine asked over the crowd. "You were telling your friend about how Jin Muyi saved your life against the Blood Path during the Cannibal Wars. I'd like to hear more."

Perking up at the chance to speak, the woman slung an arm around Nine's shoulder, almost shouting in his ear. "So there we were up against those bastard Cannibals, trapped in one of their human ranches…"

Auspicious Nine held himself back from violently resolving the assault on his person and deigned to suffer the indignities of this fool's company. She had something he sorely lacked and now wanted to uncover: a relationship with the legend, Jin Muyi.

AN: (838 words) @no. @Alectai Please threadmark. I think this is off to a good start. Requesting an LST
 
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Lipita Delphi 24: Achille Adephos & Lipita Delphi - War Material
TURN 12, OMAKE 9 [Lipita]
Lipita Delphi 24: Achille Adephos & Lipita Delphi - War Material

War! The word spread throughout the legions of the Golden Devils racing outwards from the Dawn Fortress to more distant outposts.

War with Jingshen! Rumor had already spoken of increased tensions with the Clan's sole remaining competitor in the Organ Meat Desert. The three way detente that had kept an uneasy peace for centuries had been broken with the defeat of the Battle Blood Cannibals and now the two powers circled each other like two tigers sharing a mountain… hmm on reflection given that this was Jingshen, perhaps it was better said that a tiger and an overstuffed boar could not live together in peace.

War against Jingshen to honor the Golden Devil's word! Jingshen Jiao had struck at Boss Yao'er while she was protecting the scion of the Myia in her Single Pillar tribulation and the Golden Devils could not let this insult to their staunchest ally stand. Face demanded a reply, reparations from those jumped up merchants, and the Golden Devils were more than willing to shake down those weak-spined lily-livered cowards at the ends of the Hoplite's spear.

War to raise the strength of the Imperial Optimatoi against dark days looming! Fell whispers from the Verdant South spoke of a great calamity boding ill fortune for the Clan in the years to come. That most despised of foes, the Seven Divine Saber Palace, - good for nothing hypocritical brutes that they were - had somehow managed to turn their self destruction to evil ends by raising up another of the Clan's ardent foes. Old Cannibal, Ancient Blood Devil, Sun Daxiang had been left to eat his fill by the petty politicking of the Righteous Path and given leeway to rise to become the third Late Nascent in the Virtuous Flipper Region. That old evil would surely not have forgotten who sent him fleeing from the Desert and would return to seek redress when his oaths of exile released their binding. Now was the time to seize power, to claim the wealth needed to secure the Clan against extinction.

There was so much talk swirling around but to Achille Adephos it was all white noise besides a more pressing issue. How had that Waterfall Defying Carp escaped him? Was he not the Heavenly Fishing King of the younger generation? Had he not won a Will of Albatross Flying Fish Pill and consumed it to strengthen his Dao-Heart and firm up his will?

Sitting at his workstation and rubbing the bandages that secured his wounds, Achille replayed the events that had occurred in his journey to the Heavenly Bandit Kingdoms. He was transported back to that long infiltration culminating in frantic struggle. During his travels along the rivers and lakes of the Jingshen vassal kingdom, his spear and fishing rod had overcome all challenges, reaping a great harvest of beasts that had brought him much goodwill when he distributed the excess of his catch to the commonfolk. Eventually he had made his way to a great spirit lake where he cast his line hoping for a worthy catch. Oh he found that alright.

He could remember clearly the first sensations of excitement as his line was reeled out with shocking speed and then the great delight when he realised he'd hooked a dragon among fish. He'd strained his spiritual senses along the channel of his fishing line and could not hold back the exuberant whoop as he identified his catch. Reeling in a Waterfall Defying Carp would have been nice feather in his cap not including the wealth of materials its body could provide him for all manner of array constructs. It was not everyday you encountered a proto-dragon equivalent to a Foundation Establishment expert.

He'd striven long and hard against his prey for several hours. Several times he'd almost been dragged of his perch into the lake as the fish raced back and forth in the water, saved only by using the Unyielding Grip arrays he'd inscribed on his fishing boots. In fact, that alone would not have kept him on the shore if he hadn't also employed Mu's Ground Works, an Earth-aspected qi technique he'd picked up doing maintenance on irrigation arrays for the Clan, useful for shaping the land into ditches, steps and minor earthwork.

Firmly planted on the shore, he'd had to defend himself from the Carp's attacks. An awakened spirit beast that was peer to his own advancement had more than brute physical ability going for it. Cutting jets of water, hard hitting shots of water, rending whips formed from liquid and more were sent against. The Carp proved an adept elementalist with a ready supply of material for use. Yet, he'd deftly overcome each attack holding his own with the use of thrown array bombs to disrupt attacks and confound the beast. In the end, it was not his technique that failed him or his body but his damned fishing rod. The beast had been flagging after unsuccessfully trying to overcome and had tried a desperate escape. He'd held on grimly and then - disaster. The line had snapped with a great crack, freeing his quarry, and the backlash had torn open his newly healed wounds from the last Hundred-Year Trials.

Sure the telling of his duel from those commonfolk who'd observed the hours long struggle had created a legend useful for his mission in the foreign lands, but it stung sorely to have gotten so close and yet fallen short. A second defeat could not be permitted ever again in such a manner. Rising from his desk, Achille set out with a sure destination.

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Linus Delphi had long since come to regret taking up the position of councilor in the Delphi family. Sure the perks were nice, increased access to funds to support his exploration of the bars and drinking halls of varied towns and cities, the respect of his family members and an ear to all the gossip the family gathered. However the responsibility of the position wore upon him, the costs paid in blood and suffering for the good of the family never left. His greatest regret was that he didn't have time any longer to give free reign to his imagination, to craft and design as his wonder led him. Teaching that Kokkinos girl had been the most fun he'd had in years. The project she'd set upon was utterly fascinating if a very long-term and audacious ambition. Orichalcum, sun-gold, was a legend now to the Clan but those who had interest and access to the histories of the Golden Devils could uncover legends of its wondrous properties.

Idly dreaming about what he'd craft if he could get his hands on the material, Linus kept up his disguise technique in the lobby of the store of the Delphi merchant house in Emporikipolis. He leaned against the wall appearing nothing more than a resting junior as Secretary Pelagos scanned the room looking for the councilor. Not finding the elder, Pelagos hurried off clutching the bill from several drinking establishments that had been delivered to his desk this morning, claiming damages for goods and property by a certain rowdy elder.

Watching the departing secretary, Linus kept his place against the wall. The store was bustling, cultivators making purchases of weapons, tools and supplies. War was on the horizon and legionnaires were stocking up now. His interest was captured by a snippet of conversation he caught between an increasingly frazzled-looking attendant and a Foundation Building expert. Piqued, he drew closer.

"...this is one of the best fishing rods we have available. You've seen most of the rest." The attendant lifted up the rod in question from the case.

"Not good enough. It needs to be better. I thought the Delphi would have better but I'm becoming sorely disappointed." The Expert was obviously injured with bandages peeking out from his collar and arms but that did nothing to soften his brusque dismissal of the offered wares.

Interrupting just as the attendant was about to reply in frustration, Linus dropped his disguise and waved her way. Recognizing the elder, she bowed swiftly and moved away thankful that someone else more authoritative would be dealing with the headache that had been plaguing her for several minutes now.

Standing across the young man, Linus confirmed his earlier impression. This was Achille Adephos, touted loudly by the Adephos family as a promising scion with great gifts in array work. Reports from juniors who'd worked under him confirmed that he was truly skilled if very lacking in social graces. This could be interesting.

"I'm Elder Linus of the Delphi. You'd have to forgive us, but the attendant was accurate that these are the best available fishing rods for Experts we have on sale." Linus said.

Achilles grimaced. "That is unfortunate. I'd hoped that you'd have something up to my standard available but it looks like the Delphi are a disappointment along with the other stores."

Turning to leave, Achilles was stopped by Linus speaking. "I said that these were the best available for sale, not the best that could be provided. Tell me what you need the rod for and maybe I can assist you."

Achille returned, hopeful. "I need a fishing rod that can withstand the strength of at least a peak spirit beast at Foundation Establishment. It should be capable of letting me catch a Waterfall Climbing Carp, nothing less."

Eyebrows lifted at the very specific requirements, Linus spread his hands in welcome. "For such a commission, I would be honored to craft it myself. However given the specifications that you've provided, consideration will not be standard."

"How much?" Achille bluntly asked. He'd spent a decent chunk of his funds on healing but he would be able and willing to provide payment in this senior Expert could truly deliver.

"Word of the talent of Achille Adephos has reached my ear. Your family is making very sure of that. One of my juniors, Lipita, told of an interesting innovation you've developed with the Heaven's Furnace Entrapment array. I've been hearing very favorable things from other interested parties. I'd like to commission your design for mass production. War is upon us and business for portable arrays of such potency would be good. What say you to a partnership?"

Achille considered the offer and begun to negotiate. "What kind of partnership do you propose? I've registered my design and as such would like half the profits from all production, in addition…"

As Linus haggled with the young man, he couldn't help but smile within. Sometimes being the leadership had its perks.

AN: (1850 words) @no. Please threadmark. My regular collaboration partners come through again. I really should stop worrying them with all that I have taken on my plate. Thanks to @ninjastar
 
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Year 224 - One Hundred Days of War
Jingshen Jiao tapped her foot nervously.

There was something about this she didn't understand. Didn't quite grasp, though she felt she had the most of it.

A little over three months ago, the Golden Devils had come boiling over the border en masse, ten or so of their Legions. Nearly a hundred thousand cultivators when all was said and done, sixty thousand in the north and forty thousand to the south.

On paper she could raise four or five hundred thousand herself to deal with the incursion, but not quickly. Prevailing on the Bei Family meant favours and wealth to be repaid, and that alone was a problem. The True Jingshen were moribund and mobilizing at the pace of an ant - a hundred thousand versus the eight hundred thousand they could in theory raise? The Devils were fearsome in mass combat, but not that fearsome.

She had been taken by surprise, and Father had been of even less help than she expected. He'd flown south, muttering about his latest mortal concubine.

Insanity.

She could see the shape of it, though. The monster in the guise of an old man - she shuddered, thinking of what he had done to her - had discovered their trump cards. The collection of treasures designed to ease tribulation into Nascent Soul. He had sensibly decided to try and even the board by striking deep into Jingshen territory and either doing enough damage to demand a treaty, or finding some way to steal or destroy the treasures themselves.

The few Legions made sense as well. Manuel Konstantinos was known for the traps he laid in his own land, the neverending patchwork of spies and attacks that were joined together throughout Golden Devil territory. Outside of his territory, his only strength was the strength of his Legions and his formations. No doubt he'd hidden the vast majority of his Elders in a single Legion, and had stationed himself nearby. If she attacked the wrong one... he'd leap out, assisted by sixty Core Formation Elders in a Hoplite Formation. Enough to put her on the back foot in a massive way - even badly wound her, or do the same to Father.

Still, they had two Nascent Souls and he was striking with one. Yao Zhihao was confirmed to be within Golden Devil lands, which made sense. If it were otherwise she would've left Father here to defend and gone and razed a few cities to the ground, shattered Spirit Mines, that sort of thing. An uncontained Nascent in the back lines was usually enough to force an enemy to back off.

She tapped her foot still. Haoshen Fort was well-prepared, and her... surprise was in place. Yet she couldn't shake the feeling she was overlooking something.

She ran her hand over her bald head. She itched, and that was never a good sign. Something was wrong, and she wasn't quite sure what. All the factors were in their favour, but...

Better to act cautiously regardless.

It was a week later when two Legions arrived to lay siege to Haoshen Fort. Apparently a circumvallation had been raised around Yangshen Fort, and the invaders were trading lives like water to try and crack the walls on occasion. Nearly ten Golden Devils died for every Jingshen in the Fort, but... she knew that would only last so long. The Spirit Cannons would run dry soon enough, and the Fort would fall. It wasn't overly important, but if it could buy more time she could figure out what was happening.

Two Legions, and the Callista girl in command of one.

She was simply too visible, and Jiao had been looking for a way to kill her ever since Konstantinos had threatened them with annihilation if they did. She chuckled. The old man really hadn't understood. Raise a third Nascent Soul, kill Rina Callista, and bring Manuel Konstantinos into Jingshen lands to die or be crippled... it would've been rather perfect. Still, it had needed to wait a little longer.

Bronze rang against steel as the spears of the Hoplites challenged her cultivators on the wall, and for two days Jingshen Jiao waited, lurking. Feeling. Haoshen Fort was drastically undermanned, as she had sent on forces to reinforce Yangshen earlier, a decision that would pay dividends now. She had lured her prey in, and now she would strike.

As the first Devil cultivators climbed over the walls, Jiao rose up.

She turned her hand palm-up, and a small flame ignited upon it.

She spoke.

"Accept your death."

Hearts stopped, breaths ceased, Qi no longer flowed and blood froze in the veins of those who heard it. Qi Condensation cultivators simply died like ants, and Foundation ones struggled like flies in amber seeking escape from her inexorable will. They would accept this. It was inevitable.

With a sentence, seven thousand Legionnaires died.

The Core Formation Elder in charge of the Legion rose up to face her as the ants busily began retreating, and she struck him down with a fist. A single blow and he died, face puffed up like some sort of angry animal before he realised she had torn out his heart.

Letting the scattered remnants of the first Legion flee, she picked out Rina Callista far below.

She let her retreat a little, identifying her various peculiar Dao-spells, cataloguing them as she prepared her blow. The key here was to not overuse force. If the old man was lying in wait, he'd come as soon as she struck a powerful blow, waiting for the moment of overextension to harm her.

She waved a hand idly, and force crashed down, splitting the ground and-

The Callista girl simply slipped out of the way. How had she done that? Curious.

Three more small emanations of force, and each time she managed to avoid it. They weren't serious blows, but they certainly should've crippled even Core Formation Elders, let alone some unorthodox Foundation Establishment heretic.

Jiao breathed in, accepting what was. This was the truth. How best to approach it?

Two more blows, and she could see the girl getting ever-more desperate, but fleeing further and further.

Jiao frowned.

If she let her flee any further, she'd be out of range of her prepared countermeasures.

No.

It'd have to be here, and she'd risk the wrath of the old man.

She clenched her will, warping space and lifting the girl up to her. She was... slippery, and the effort suddenly grew greater, as though she was trying to grasp onto an oiled-up pig while drunk, not moving the universe as she desired it to be. A few moments later and she'd lose her, and the attempt to crush her to death with a sliver of her will started demanding more and more strength.

Enough.

Time to end this.

She felt power rise in her, accepting the blow that would come from her hand. A mere consequence of fate, the only way to deal with the ant before her. She had not chosen, merely seen the end of this and accepted it as the natural order of things. More power rose in her, enough for a strike at nearly full strength.

Enough power to end the girl.

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Manuel watched, and waited. Moments before he had thought to save Rina Callista, but her uncanny ability to avoid Lady Jiao's lesser attacks had changed that. Jiao would need to use a proper strike to kill Rina, and that would leave Jiao open to a counterattack.

If she had been the only Single-Pillar King of the Clan, matters would've been different. But a Foundation Establishment cultivator, no matter their talent, was an excellent trade for an advantageous strike on a Nascent Soul. So he waited for the blow to fall.

Then, out of nowhere, a woman leapt up.

Manuel's eyebrow raised. He had seen this young woman in a jade slip in a report.

"Maria?"

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With inarticulate rage, the woman below her screamed.

Jiao would not have normally taken notice of a Qi Condensation cultivator, except that her scream brought lightning and thunder from the sky.

A bolt of dark-blue lightning struck down, and Jiao suddenly realised she was in the middle of a tribulation. If she didn't kill the ascendant...

She struck down, a wave of force obliterating the Qi Condensation ant, the creature who had dared interrupt her! She felt a connection somewhere snap as her fist obliterated the soul that inhabited the body, every last piece of thing that had dared to interfere with her returned to the earth as it should be.

Yes, it was interfering with a tribulation, but what choice did she have? As to balance out her act, Heaven struck at her, a bolt of lightning with power enough to level cities.

Jiao raised her hand, blocking it, wincing for a moment as she did, feeling the pain go through her arm, and down to... down to the spearpoint sticking through her chest. Some old carved spear made of stone... what? Why?

She moved, tearing her own flesh to escape - and the spear struck again, a blow puncturing her kneecap and shattering the bone. She dodged, seeing the face of her assailant - a face that had haunted her nightmares, Manuel Konstantinos. Her attempt to dodge just saw another blow smashing towards her arm, slicing deep into a tendon.

She cursed.

"Old man, you've gone too far today!"

Manuel Konstantinos's eyes burned with an unholy fervour, as he struck again and again, not speaking, merely striking.

Jiao raised her hands, dodging from side to side, attempting to grasp or block or something, but to no avail.

No matter what she did, the spear struck her.

A few moments later, she smiled.

"I knew you'd come here. I prepared for you!"

With a thought, the gemstone set in one of her rings shattered, and the old True Nascent Spirit Cannon she had brought into the Fort fired. A massive blast of energy, sufficient to badly injure even a Nascent Soul a stage above her.

She laughed, and he remained silent, eyes looking curious as the massive energy wave pierced through the air, seeking him.

"I got this Light Qi from an enemy of yours! It can't miss. And it burns the shadow, Konstantinos! What are you going to do now?"

A smile came onto his lips, and she jeered at him.

He moved, and the energy continued to chase him. He dodged upwards and downwards, and it locked onto him, searing through the air ever-faster. She grinned. Good. Good.

The trap was worth it. Years of income saved, a betrothal made and a Prince killed, and an ancient cannon made operational for one final shot. It would work, though. And with Konstantinos out of the picture, the Desert would be theirs entirely.

As the blast homed in towards him, the old man's smile grew ever-so-slightly wider. He raised the spear he held, and as the burning light came to a point, he blocked it with the haft.

The energy burned and raged for a moment, and then the light went out.

How? How? How?!?!

None of this made any sense. He somehow blocked the Light Qi she had painstakingly prepared? He could simply strike at her at will, and nothing she did could stop him? None of this made any sense. If he was this strong, why not destroy Old Cannibal earlier? Why... had the warning Old Cannibal given them been true? No. He couldn't have planned all of this from the beginning. It wasn't possible!

For the first time, he spoke.

"I did say what I was going to do, Jingshen Jiao. I am in fact certain I described what I would do to you for attacking the Callista scion. But then, perhaps I was unclear."

His smile split into an unnerving, inhuman grin. Like a monster with the flesh of a human being draped over it for decorating, trying to ape something it didn't really understand. Didn't really want to, even.

"Let me explain further."
 
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