Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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I see much wisdom here.
The problem comes if we do so before we find legitimate evidence of a betrayal on their part. Because a large part of why our vassals are so happy with us is that we treat them kindly and allow them to grow. If we give the impression that we'll only allow those who are truly loyal to us to grow to a significant size, with all others severely cut down if they approach that status? Then that just asks for every vassal that starts to grow to plot their freedom from us. After all, who can trust that the fates of even the most loyal vassal might not turn and see them lose the trust of their superior in a few centuries?

And the Hong Xuan are the first to reach that important stage, whilst we're also plotting something of a diplomatic assault on the Jingshen vassals to flip them. Even worse, the reason for us no longer trusting them isn't because they screwed up. It's because we fucked up repaying a major debt to them. So we need to spend effort regaining favour with them soon. Hell, if we spend wealth or influence to obtain them the items to heal all the cripples OUR cultivators caused, that's likely to offset a fair bit of the problem. As we should be able to acquire them a lot easier than a vassal clan like the Hong Xuan.

That said, if we do unearth evidence that they plan to betray them, I am definitely going to vote in favour of cutting them down to size. Particularly if we've spent some effort trying to fix the errors made here. Because then we'd still seem a just liege lord.
 
Aretaphila Myia X5 - Silver Clouds, Been in the Sun
Aretaphila Myia X5
Silver Lining, Been in the Sun

It was a bright, sunny day at the beginning of the rest of Aretaphila's life.

For the first time in...as long as she could remember, the Myia's soul was finally, truly at peace. Free of the anxiety of missed opportunity. Free of the desperate drive to prove to herself that she was worthy. Free of the fear of letting her family down.

A clear summer's sky filled her vision, the light of the sun reflecting off her newly forged Silver Bell Physique. And for the first time...Aretaphila simply luxuriated in the sensation that came from absolute belief, absolute confidence. The knowledge of a harsh trial overcome, that only the worthy could accomplish.

The Territory of Kings.

It felt good.

Damn good.

When she listened, Aretaphila could hear the song of the grass swaying beneath her feet. The wind caressing her skin and hair. The birds chirping an-The Loud Belching.

A single eye shot open - sky-blue shot through with iridescent gold - she saw as a similarly cyclopean figure floated down into the plain before her. Incredible musculature, with a massive mohawk erupting from their head. Grinning toothily, Aretaphila only had a moment before her senses were overwhelmed by the horrific smell and it's clashing harmonic beats.

The sensation was choking! Overwhelming!

With a cough and a sputter, Aretaphila reached for her newfound power and manifested a ghostly silver bell behind her. It swung, striking the first note within her Dantian and Body. Emanations of her Dao spilled forth, desperately attempting to change the song of that stench into something that could be survived, maybe even tolerated!

"Oh?" The monster before her muttered, "Quite the precocious lil' Junior, arentcha?"

A new force slammed down upon Aretaphila, the notes of her Song twisted and morphed from Dao-Waves into the physical things, transforming from the vibrational tuning of the universe into base strings and onomatopoeia!

Nascent Soul!

Aretaphila gaped at the danger she was in, even newly ascended, only for the foul assassin's even fouler stench to fly straight into her mouth, driving the Single Pillar King to her knees in a fit of gagging that nearly drove her unconscious from the asphyxiation. Clawing desperately at her throat, the Myia scion began churning the far far more potent Qi within her dantian, purifying the blood that had taken in the tainted air. The stench persisted, yet it strangely was not infused with Nascent Dao-Magic.

It just stank horribly.

It took several minutes of gagging and wheezing, but eventually Aretaphila's body was purified of the lingering effects, and a stiff breeze had blown from the west to keep the majority of the foul odor downwind.

Eventually, she managed to stand tall enough to sketch a hasty bow at the Nascent Soul, "T-this Aretaphila Myia apologies for offending Senior!" The shorter woman managed between hastily swallowed gulps of air, "Can this Junior ask Senior Sister what she has done to offend?"

"Nothing!" The larger woman shouts back, the force of her voice causing the metal forming her face to ripple slightly, "Lady Yao here can overlook a bit of precociousness!" Two ludicrously massive arms spread in magnanimity, "So don't get so worked up!"

Before I die? The shorter woman grouses to herself, "Then I'm guessing Senior won't mind if I have a drink before we get to business?" With waiting for an answer, Aretaphila sits down on the grass of the floating island, withdrawing her already opened bottle of brandy.

Before beginning to chug it.

The burning becomes far more tolerable, the smokiness of the wood that it had cured in penetrating her senses and driving away the awful stench. Foundation Establishment had enhanced Areta;hila's senses, and her tolerances besides. Truly, this drink was intended to be imbibed by Experts of the Optimatoi.

Fire settles around her belly, and Aretaphila feels the warmth settle her dantian even further. Perhaps if she'd had time she could've spent it cultivating? This Three Millennium Turtlemaple Brandy really had been a priceless treasure!

Satisfied, the silver bodied cultivator placed the now empty bottle by her side. Single eye closed in contentment.

"Hey."

Once again her sense of peace was ruined, but with the the potent alcohol now suffusing her system she found it difficult to care. Languidly, she stared at the Nascent Soul who was likely getting ready to kill her.

"Not gonna share with your Senior Sister?"

There were a few of the bottles left. What was one or two when she wouldn't even get to enjoy them? With an expression of will another crystalline bottle appeared in Aretaphila's hands, this one completely unopened. With a casual toss, the priceless drink found its way into the hands of 'Lady Yao', a name that was steadily becoming more familiar the more often Aretaphila heard it.

Relaxed from the heat of the brandy, she watched as the snake dwelling in the larger woman's eye socket lapped against the other bottle's contents, attempting to dive its way in before being caught between the thumb and forefinger of its host. Between the two passed a short hissing, before Lady Yao simply quaffed it all in one go, biting into and chewing the crystal bottle after draining the brandy in its entirety.

"That's good stuff!" The woman said with another belch, this one more tolerable thanks to the effects of the shared drink on her and Aretaphila herself, "Alright Junior, as thanks for the booze I'll give you a boon!"

"Please don't kill me." The Myia replied immediately, eye turning back up to face the sky. It'd really suck to die here after accomplishing so much.

Yao began laughing uproariously, clutching her absurdly defined stomach as she bent over. Alas. Looked like mercy for a three thousand year aged drink was too ridiculous a concept to be stomached.

"Kill ya?" The Nascent Soul cultivator smirked at the younger girl, "Junior I'm not here to kill you. Can you imagine the earful I'd have to deal with from the Old Man if I went after you?" The smirk grew, "No one's got time for that."

Friendly nascent soul. Yao. Complains about lectures from the "Old Ma-" "Oh by the Imperator." A heat rushed to Aretaphila's cheeks, "I'm so sorry, Lady Yao!" The shorter girl tried to stand up, stumbling from the growing fog of inebriation as she rose, "I didn't expect someone like you to show up!"

"Yeah, you shouldn't!" Yao replied cockily, "Only reason I'm here at all is the Old Man's request, and you're lucky he did!" A...a meatlog-shaped finger wagged at Aretaphila, "Jiao from the Jingshen showed up picking a fight, but I managed to drive her off pretty easily." She patted her belly, "Dunno what a greenhouse flower like that was thinking, ha!"

The wagging finger halted, before stabbing out at the shorter cultivator. To Aretaphila's senses the wind around her changed, shifting from flowing currents to grasping hands which carried her into the air. But the warmth from the brandy was still coursing through her system, and as a result of that comforting heat she simply leaned back and relaxed into the sensation.

"Anyway, time to take you back to the Dawn Fortress. Old Man wants to give you a sermon about something or other."

Aretaphila nodded as she rose further into the air.

"Now, before we get started and he starts looking again let me grace you with this Lady Yao's timeless wisdom!"

"This Junior Sister is eager to receive your guidance."

"Heh! Alright, listen up." Lady Yao paused, before leaning tilting her head back to shout into the heavens, "When the old man starts lecturing, always do the opposite of what he says! Old man's a softie, but because of that hes way too cautious about everything. Take it from me! I'm an expert at sitting through him rambling at you for hours on end!"

With the air caressing her and the brandy sinking deeply into her dantian, exhaustion from the day's trials finally made itself known.

"Means the opposite." Aretaphila replied, "Got it."

The onset of sleep was so swift she hadn't even heard Lady Yao's response.

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"Hello again, Tesserarius Myia." That same voice, heard only a scant twenty years ago, rang in her ears, "It's my understanding you've had something of an experience very recently."

The light of the sun reflected off her silver body, as Aretaphila crushed down the antipathy towards the Grand Elder rising in her heart.

"No trouble with the breakthrough, I hope?" Old Gold continued, voice taking on that same curious inflection that her own grandfather so effortlessly infused every one of his words with, "I'm glad to see that it isn't the case."

The taller man, even stooped, bent down further to look the Myia in her eye, "I suppose this is about the lessons from before the most recent trials?"

"...Yes." Aretaphila finally responded, the buzz of the brandy still having its effect upon her, "I apologize, Grand Elder."

"Nothing you need to apologize for," Manuel Konstantinos smiled agreeably, before beginning to pace around the Single Pillar cultivator, "In many ways, giving you all a target to hate was part of the point. Tell me," The Grand Elder paused, "You were one of the ones who supported the risk I took with the Trials before last, were you not?"

"Yes." She bit out in response.

Manuel hummed, "That sensation of betrayal you feel. That is what many felt a hundred years ago, before the Cannibal War came, after which we put that trials behind us in favor of focusing on the future. A future which has just come, wouldn't you agree?"

"...Yes." Aretaphila finally replied, the warmth coursing through her body loosening her more rigid self control.

"Then you should understand, Tesserarius." His sky blue eyes met her own, the unfathomable darkness concealed within the very irises at their core grasping endlessly. The perfect reflection of the inverting fog which she had walked through on her way to her breakthrough. An abominable, cursed strength. But one which carried the weight of the Clan on its back.

But in the depths of that darkness, just like before, Aretaphila found that she did understand even through the haze filling her mind. The world was cruel, and it was necessary to temper themselves through risk in order to carry on past it. The struggle was neverending, and there were ultimately cruel and unnecessary losses. Yet the Clan had to carry the burden of that cruelty - the callousness of that reality - because the only other choice was oblivion.

And that was the Truth( Dao) .

"Good, good!" The Old Man rubbed his hands together in grandfatherly cheer, "Now then, congratulations are in order on your breakthrough young Myia, for you are the second Single Pillar King in Clan history! That you managed to persevere and reach this point after so much toil and trials is worth being proud of, considering my own-"

As if on cue, the fog of Brandy she'd drunk overcame Aretaphila's senses once again. But within that pleasant and fuzzy haze the words of Lady Yao rung true.

"Of course, as I explained during that lecture Tesserarius, as a Single Pillar cultivator you should know that you may be targeted by Nascent Souls again. In which case, the best thing for you to avoid such attention and survive to your full potential you must not stand out whenever possible."

He always says the opposite of what he means.

"Understood, Grand Elder." Aretaphila nodded confidently. His message came through loud and clear.

"Excellent," Manuel Konstantinos replied with a heavy sigh, "Considering your families reputation over the centuries, I'd be concerned if you had proven to be as...Prone to drawing attention to yourself as your forebears."

"I'll be sure to make you proud, Grand Elder."

"Good, good." Old Gold placed his hands behind his back, "Now then, as congratulations for your accomplishment, I hereby promote you to the rank of Eximo Centurion."

Even with her senses dulled by the heady warmth of her drink, Aretaphila still managed to properly salute, "Thank you, Grand Elder."

"No need to thank me," He chuckled good naturedly, "Your abilities are simply too broadly useful to limit you to a specific unit quite yet. Maybe once you've proven yourself a bit you'll be assigned to a Legatus capable of putting your talents to their best use. In the meantime; may I ask where you intend to go for your first assignment?"

The Myia scion blinked, "Do you need to ask?"

Old Gold's countenance sharpened into a frown, the look of a disappointed grandfather admonishing a stupid child, "It'd be a terribly frivolous use of my power when I can simply ask to satisfy my curiosity."

Meaning he already had and was now just planning to test her for being a liar! But the joke was on the Old Man, Aretaphila hadn't been thinking at all!

"The Great Battlefield," She blurted out, "I wanted to join the columns there and see the Plains for the first time." And her family's great legacy as well.

"An auspicious choice," The Grand Elder replied, giving Aretaphila a knowing glance, "Still, I suppose the Siege should suit your abilities. The columns will be marching out within the next few weeks. I suggest you get everything prepared for your departure." A gnarled hand casually waved her away, "Dismissed."

Sketching another salute, Aretaphila turned and departed the chamber she had been deposited into. Her Song even now sketching out a path through the building she had no memory of entering.

"Centurion…" A voice whispered at her from the Shadows, "Remember: Don't draw attention to yourself."

She nodded, the Archegetes' true intention understood fully.

"As you command, Grand Elder."

A.N.: So yes, Aretaphila probably won't even remember this series of conversations in the morning. But if she does, and anyone asks, she's going to say she did so entirely deliberately and played that off smooth-like. First omake for Turn 12, gonna go for another LST there.
 
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Katha Theodoros 4 - A Set of Reflections
Katha Theodoros 4 - A Set of Reflections

[First Turn 12 Omake Here]

"The body is a vessel of Qi. Qi is gathered through the breath, harnessed in the stomach, refined through the Dantian and expelled through the Meridians." The beetle nodded, more to itself than to anyone else. Still poised in a Mundra of Reflection, it turned its gaze onto Katha. "Demonstrate your understanding to me, applicant. Open your Meridians and test your limits."

Katha did so, gathering Qi as best as she could. But compared to the beetle, her grasp was effervescent and immaterial, a pathetic gesture. If one who had opened their Meridians could hold water by cupping their hands, she in comparison would be a leaky sieve, unable to retain more than the barest portion, not enough to slake even a dying man's thirst.

The beetle merely shook its head at her, and Katha sighed. Its disappointment was both palpable and becoming frustratingly familiar to her. The last year had been spent expanding her awareness of her own acupoints; she always had a vague sense of them, but a general feeling will never compare to iron certainty.

The pain was excruciating. She had needles stabbed into every one of her acupoints with expert precision, then wiggled in fractional hair-widths to hew that understanding down to the bone. That alone took many weeks, then many months as she learned to harness Qi despite the pain, to better temper her foundations through controlled hardship.

All the while, the Array poured Qi into her, the vast majority of it impossible to grasp but more than enough to elevate her Cultivation by leaps and bounds.

Now, she sensed the beetle would do something worse.

"Enough. Stand still." No sooner had it said it did Katha's body go rigid on its own, fully in the thrall of the Scion Beetle's will. Her breath quickened momentarily as she wondered what the next step would be, until she felt the beetle's limbs press hard into each of her meridians. Then, they became flush with power.

And then more power flowed.

And yet more power. More and more, power was drawn into her, the power of the Array impressed into her like a river into a gourd. It threatened to overflow, shatter the vessel, yet the beetle continued, seemingly heedless, even uncaring of the strain placed upon her body.

Filled to nearly the breaking point, the pain became excruciating. Katha cried out, yet the beetle continued, forcing power and power still into her meridians - no, she realised, worse than that, it forced her body to gather Qi to its own exacting specifications. Filling them to breaking point, the absolute limit that she could bear before they would burst.

Then, abruptly, with no margin for error, the beetle stopped, forcing her Meridians to bear the Qi. Then it released its limbs from her Meridians and her body from its indomitable will, once more taking up a Mundra. Gasping, Katha fell to her knees, searching for succour, yet as she tried to release the Qi she found her body simply would not relent. Wracked with pain, she tried to push herself onto her feet, but could only manage a kneeling posture, facing the beetle.

The Horned Scion Beetle regarded her with frustration, but not cruelty. It would not exact its frustrations on her, for that would go against its purpose. The Man-As-Mountain Array was designed to empower a single scion, and it would do no good to have that scion punished simply because this crop of seeds were pitiful compared to previous batches.

Still, it spared no opportunity to belittle her inadequacy. But she was used to that; she did it often enough to herself. "It is done. Next, we shall expand your Meridians further and forge the Dantian into a suitable furnace. Learn to operate normally under such circumstances within this time and you might even amount to something."

It hurt to even speak. Still, she managed a few words. "What… did you do…?"

"This is the amount of Qi your Meridians can currently bear without bursting, down to sixteen degrees of fractionalisation. By the end of your time in this Array, you will have a keen sense for the absolute limit of your capacity. As your tolerance grows, I will increase it, until once more you feel this level of strain."

It clicked its mandibles. "It will be excruciating, but you are inferior, and the benefits are minor, yet permanent. If you are going to be worthy of the Man-As-Mountain Array, you will master the absolutes of your limit, so you can always grasp for them, regardless of the circumstances you find yourself in."

She knew that already. The pain was indeed all but maddening, with further agony said to follow on the road to Immortality. But she would not, could not, let such an opportunity pass. Not now, not ever. "Then… I'll do it…"

"Hmph. Only words. A Golden Core Junior would have long surpassed your progress by this point." It chittered this time, mandibles clacking. "But none have come in a long time. The Array will not stay idle until your time is done. I will teach you, and you will learn."

Katha nodded unsteadily. She would excel, or die.

The Horned Scion Beetle tilted its head quizzically, almost as if it had read her thoughts. "Death is not and never has been an option," it replied matter-of-factly. "You are simply a container for my wisdom. You will learn."

Slightly foreboding, but promising all the same. Katha remained kneeling for many more hours, still coming to grips with the burning, crushing pain that lingered across her body.


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"...Hold on, you what?"

The moment Rathos had set the teapot on the stove, his curiosity became too great to bear and he asked the question. It was just them in a cavernous old home, grandfather and father both away to manage the family holdings, and the twins had tried to settle back into their groove.

Which was when Rathos Theodoros, genius of the Theodoroi and last hope of the household, learned that his sister had climbed eleven small realms in a single decade. It explained neither her newly pale complexion or the silver streak in her red hair, but it was enough to drive him to drink.

Such was his shock that he took a sip of scalding hot tea, just to spit it all across the living room. It would need to be cleaned, but it had to be done. Tradition had to be adhered to.

Katha rolled her eyes as he idly flicked a minor cleansing array, designed and installed back when the Theodoroi were much better off. "Oh, stop it. You're being overly dramatic."

"Overly dramatic?! Your skin is pale! You climbed eleven small realms in ten years! You are on track to becoming a Single Pillar King!" Rathos clutched his head with both hands, laughing. "You're the first unorthodox cultivator this family has seen in millennia! Katha, you've finally made it!"

This made Katha uneasy, so she settled deeper into her chair, cupping her tea with both hands. She sipped it, savouring the bitterness and texture. Oh, how long it has been since she's had anything better than warm leaf juice. "That's the thing. I don't think I did. I don't think I earned this, Rathos. Fortune simply landed in my lap."

"And? We're Golden Devils, Katha, and more than that, we're Theodoroi. We already have some pretty terrible luck." Her brother poured himself another cup and set it on the table. "You've gotten a clean break for once. If you don't like how you earned it, then become worthy of it."

Katha took another long sip as she frowned at her brother. "I have no idea how you figured out an answer that quickly. Did you read it in a book somewhere?"

"Hah, no. I've been grappling with that feeling all my life."

"Ah, so being a nerd makes you worthy of the Blood of Bronze."

"For your information," Rathos said pridefully, "I am an Array Engineer. I create wonders with a chisel and a hammer. So yes, yes it does."

"The Blood of Bronze is more than boorish warmaking or the tireless manufacture of miracles," said Tormenos Theodoros, his voice ringing from everywhere and nowhere. "It is a commitment to the Clan, a defiant shout against the Heavens."

The old man appeared soon after, stepping forth from the darkness with their father by his side. Both men were smiling proudly, and Katha saw her father surreptitiously wipe away tears of joy. She felt torn between a multitude of emotions; thankful for his support, relieved at their grandfather's support, resentment and suspicion at his intentions, but most of all regret about her circumstances.

It would have been a triumph, a true moment of glory, had she slain a great beast or secured a great treasure with cunning before achieving such power. Yet, it was down to the tutelage of an ornery beetle and excruciating pain, neither of which felt earned.

And the way her grandfather looked her over, the gleam in his calculating eyes that seemed to miss nothing, brought chills down her spine.

She and Rathos each rose to greet their grandfather and Patriarch, but he quickly waved with his hand. "Please, the both of you, sit. The two of you have done well, especially you, Katha. It is this old man," he said, falling to his knees, "Who should be welcoming you home."

Tormenos sniffed, and only then did Katha realise their grandfather had been crying. Rathos made to help him up, but their grandfather continued to kneel, gnarled old hands clasping his kneecaps. Soon, their father joined him, kneeling as well. Not wanting to show disrespect, and not sure exactly what was going on, Katha and Rathos knelt as well.

Whilst Rathos procured two more teacups quickly and poured for his grandfather and father, Tormenos clasped Katha's hands with his own. The difference was stark now, his skin a deep bronze and hers pale, so pale it was hard to believe she was of the Optimatoi. He looked at her, sighing deeply. "Oh, Riala," the old man lamented, "How I've disrespected you. To think, our clan would bear two geniuses, not merely one! Forgive this old man, Katha, for all that's happened in the past."

It was a lot, to see the old man she'd known to be a harsh, exacting and demanding taskmaster beg for forgiveness. How much of this was genuine, and how much did her grandfather simply want to remain in her good books, now that she had demonstrated such swift progress? Or was it simply that her newfound progress had made her someone in his eyes, now that she could potentially be part of the resurgence of the Theodoroi?

Did it matter why he was begging for her forgiveness? Didn't it matter? Had the old man not been a source of much of her struggles, a cold figure in the aftermath of tragedy when she and her brother both needed warmth?

It was a lot to manage. But Katha could not settle upon a judgement. So, she forgave her grandfather, even if she continued to hold him at arm's length. Whatever his intentions, he was her grandfather, and she his granddaughter. He worked for the betterment of the household, and right now that meant supporting her and Rathos in every way that mattered.

"Of course, grandfather," Katha said in response, though she could not affect the tenderness in her voice. It was excusable as nerves, as all this had been quite sudden, but Rathos already knew that she would be skeptical. "I'm… I'm sorry, it's just been a long day, and I've only just gotten back. And then there's One Boat Pass…"

"What, already?" Rathos exclaimed.

"I received the orders just as I returned," Katha nodded. "We're leaving in a few weeks, so all legionaries have to prepare their equipment and head for muster by then." She sighed and stretched, arms above her head. "Dammit, and I lost my helmet and cuirass back at Yuan as well… Wonder if the blacksmiths do rush orders."

"They're going to hate you so much," Rathos murmured softly, before taking a sip of tea. But he had been used to a sister who was blind and deaf, not a swordswoman who had endured a decade of excruciating pain and emerged in the Twelfth Heavenstage.

"Huh? For what?"

Rathos sputtered, nearly dropping his cup, but he recovered splendidly, balancing it on the tip of his finger and catching all expelled liquids. Which did little to help him come up with an answer. "I mean… You know! Blacksmiths hate you! I don't know why, they just do!"

Katha sighed and crossed her arms under her chest. "Yeah, they do… But why, though? I'm just there to refit my cuirass, what's so wrong with that?"

None of the three men present thought to remind her that legionaries do not typically refit their cuirass seven times in three years. Such secrets were better kept than told, and even Old Gold would rather not steal this secret.

"There will be no need for that," Her father had quickly offered. "There should be something within the vaults. Isn't that right, Elder?"

Tormenos coughed. "Yes, absolutely. The hopes of the Theodoroi rest within you now as well, Katha. Please, take your pick."

Katha blinked. That was strangely convenient. She'd forgotten that the Theodoroi were only old and decrepit now. The family had kept a great deal of equipment and material from past generations, alongside ancient, if fragmented, records from before the Optimatoi were chased into the desert. "I'll do so by today. Thank you, grandfather."

As both Rathos surreptitiously heaved a sigh of relief and Elder Tormenos looked askance, Shu Enya engaged his first and only daughter. "But we have some time now, Katha. What happened at the Secret Realm?"

Katha inhaled sharply. Right, where to start. "My grand ordeal started when a scion of the Jingshen Clan, who had come to the Secret Realm as well, offered me to camp with him at nightfall."

Quietly, her father began to draw his sword, but Tormenos quickly placed a hand lightly on his forearm. There was no need for that, now. The time to castrate the Jingshen would come another time.

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In the dusty depths of the Theodoroi Estate, where the tatters of ancient texts were preserved such that what wisdom remained might yet guide the clan, Tormenos Theodoros poured over the histories with only a gemstone light as companion.

Katha had returned, and she had won a great prize from the Man-As-Mountain Array. He was blind to have overlooked such a talent, of course his most gifted daughter's children would both be brilliant in their own right. Now all that stood in the path of young Katha's tribulation was a strong Dao heart, and he had no doubt that the girl possessed a core of iron. Molten iron, one yet to be cooled by introspection and tempered by experience and hardship, but a core nonetheless. For her, he had nothing to fear. And with two brilliant talents in a single generation born, the Theodoroi had nothing to fear either.

But her skin was pale, lacking the bronze of the Optimatoi. Her hair, once a fiery red just like her father's, now bore a single shimmering grey streak in its midst. There was a presence in her blood now, an awakening of a power that had never been there before. Similar to the Blood of Iron that flowed in all their veins, but yet different.

It reminded him of Saria, dear sweet Saria, who had such promise but lacked the talent of her sister. The Theodoroi were in even more dire straits in those days, and they could only support the cultivation of a single superior scion then. Between Riala and Saria, there was no contest. Perhaps someday, the daughter he had married off will agree with this perspective.

But the blood that had flowed through his second daughter's veins was known, the mythic Blood of Silver. What Katha now expressed was similar, but only superficially. She was not Silver Blooded, but not Bronze Blooded either. Something else lurked within her veins, purified by the Dantian she had forged from the infusion of the Array.

This must stay within the family. This is a matter exclusive to the Theodoroi, he was certain of it! The secret that lurked within her blood could only be answered through the blood of their ancestors. And something of those answers might yet survive.

And so Tormenos continued to search, as the night grew long and then turned to day. Tireless, relentless, he searched ceaselessly.

For the sake of family, for the future of the Theodoroi, he could do nothing less.

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So that'd be the Clan's third Single Pillar cultivator now, and in the next few updates, we're gonna get our fourth in. I'm hoping that's gonna get a fun reaction in the main story, considering how rare they usually are.
If nothing else, I imagine that the Altar Lord is going to care. The fact that they're on the front lines repelling his efforts against the Righteous sects (and doing so pretty effectively) is another interesting wrinkle in that one... and the fact that we're about to go to war with the Jingshen is, I'm sure, another.

I suspect that his feelings on the matter are currently somewhat complicated.
 
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I suspect that his feelings on the matter are currently somewhat complicated.
He knew from the start that we'd be unwilling to side with him, precisely because of what he surrounded himself with.

That we're then proceeding to take all those things he offered to bribe us with with our own hands is mostly just us following through with that.
 
Damnit Swordo. Making me rather curious just what her blood trait will be. Admittedly, I don't think it's going to be a magical metal or anything like that. But all that talk about her core being iron has me wondering if she isn't iron, or even perhaps steel?

Also rather curious what the traits of Blood of Silver would be, but that's a question for the QMs rather than you.
 
I'm seeing a lot of misconceptions here

If we give the impression that we'll only allow those who are truly loyal to us to grow to a significant size, with all others severely cut down if they approach that status?

Yes because if their not completely loyal they will try to stab us in the back if they are strong enough. Word of QM is that if the vassal gets strong enough they will rebel no matter how high their opinion of us.

Then that just asks for every vassal that starts to grow to plot their freedom from us. After all, who can trust that the fates of even the most loyal vassal might not turn and see them lose the trust of their superior in a few centuries?

That is every vassal. Their all planing and trying to get strong enough so that they can overthrow us and be in charge. Them plotting against us is part of the nature of having vassals.

Even worse, the reason for us no longer trusting them isn't because they screwed up. It's because we fucked up repaying a major debt to them.

No, we already payed the debt which they extorted out of us for minor assistance against a blood path power that wanted to eat them. Given how they are the vassal here not us we are currently really annoyed at having to pay through the nose to get them to do even a little of their share of the work. The good seed help was just an added bonus of us being really really nice.

So we need to spend effort regaining favour with them soon. Hell, if we spend wealth or influence to obtain them the items to heal all the cripples OUR cultivators caused, that's likely to offset a fair bit of the problem.

Why should we spend our hard earned resources to placate a people who are so intransigent?

As we should be able to acquire them a lot easier than a vassal clan like the Hong Xuan.

They can acquire them just as easily, they just have to part with some of the enormous wealth we gave them and pay their tariffs to pick up some healing treasures.
 
I'm seeing a lot of misconceptions here
I'm seeing a lot of bald assertions here, without a lot to back them up. I'm not going to claim for myself that you're incorrect. I don't know for sure myself... but declaring something forcefully doesn't actually provide any particular supporting evidence. Could I ask that you offer some supporting evidence?
 
I'm seeing a lot of bald assertions here, without a lot to back them up. I'm not going to claim for myself that you're incorrect. I don't know for sure myself... but declaring something forcefully doesn't actually provide any particular supporting evidence. Could I ask that you offer some supporting evidence?

Sure, here's what the QM said on vassal loyalty

your Vassals will rebel almost no matter what.
 
Sure, here's what the QM said on vassal loyalty

I think you're mistaken.

It's saying "If you are weaker than your vassal, of fucking course they'll declare independence because you no longer have the strength to tell them to fuck off"

That being said, the difference in power between a Minor Power and a Great Power is like night and day. That statement is just saying "Don't count on your vassals to have your back if your back is to the wall, because they'll chose continued life over any amount of loyalty."
 
Which is why we should assimilate all other cultivators. They can either get the blood of bronze and join the legions or they can take a hike and leave behind the cultivation resources for us to use.
 
Which is why we should assimilate all other cultivators. They can either get the blood of bronze and join the legions or they can take a hike and leave behind the cultivation resources for us to use.
That's just impractical. Remember, our vassals aren't just tying up resources, they are also people we can delegate work to, who have different specialties than the main Clan and so are useful for different things. Do you remember the Simmering Soup Sect?

Also, it's a good thing to have a group which aren't Bronze Blooded but within our territories and are at least nominal allies, considering the Curses we draw upon ourselves. After a Trials, us recruiting from our vassals is probably a big part of how we recoup our numbers.

Like even when we conquer the Flipper, we're going to make most of the Sects our vassals instead of just redistributing their land. (I say most because there are the Blood Path sects, after all.)
 
Also, it's a good thing to have a group which aren't Bronze Blooded but within our territories and are at least nominal allies, considering the Curses we draw upon ourselves.

Actually the curses hit the vassals too. Serving a criminal is enough to make you a criminal in the eyes of the heavens.

So whenever you guys are like all we treat the vassals really well why would they every betray us? Well we are causing them to face thin Qi and upping their tribulations. That's the kind of thing they have to really really hate about us.
 
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Sure, here's what the QM said on vassal loyalty
Yes. But there's a difference between having a large vassal (which the Hong Xuan are) and having a dangerously large vassal. Which as far as I'm aware, they aren't because Manuel wouldn't have been dumb enough to let them claim that much territory. Us carving off territory from a dangerously large vassal will be seen as good sense by the other vassals, because it shows that we're keeping an eye on them and also strong enough to 'easily' suppress a problematically large vassal. Doing it for a merely large vassal when we're the ones that didn't hold up our end of the bargain well which lead to them being pissed off at us is the problematic circumstances I was talking about.

No, we already payed the debt which they extorted out of us for minor assistance against a blood path power that wanted to eat them. Given how they are the vassal here not us we are currently really annoyed at having to pay through the nose to get them to do even a little of their share of the work. The good seed help was just an added bonus of us being really really nice.
And this debt you say we repaid? That's represented in large part by the two missions we failed at this turn. So it's definitely an extremely bad image if we use the fact they're pissed at us because we very shoddily paid off the debt to them in order to justify taking territory off them. Likely including the territory that was partial payment for their help, of which the debt was one of the the other parts!

Which is why we should assimilate all other cultivators. They can either get the blood of bronze and join the legions or they can take a hike and leave behind the cultivation resources for us to use.
Oh god no! This goes completely against the build we chose at the start. If we tried to start this now, we would die. And even if we chose the option which this belief represents at start, that would have left us with only 70% of our region under our control. The remaining 30% would have been under the control of rebels. Which almost certainly would have meant our death after they flipped to the Jingshen or ended up being a part of either the Devil Bees or Cannibals.

Or worse, means that the Strength Purity Sect wouldn't have been talking to us as the better option would have been to support one of the Righteous rebel factions to overthrow us. That way they'd keep the Cannibals penned in whilst not making it so that Jingshen has control over the majority of the desert as there's another major Righteous Sect to split it with them.
 
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That's just impractical. Remember, our vassals aren't just tying up resources, they are also people we can delegate work to, who have different specialties than the main Clan and so are useful for different things. Do you remember the Simmering Soup Sect?

Also, it's a good thing to have a group which aren't Bronze Blooded but within our territories and are at least nominal allies, considering the Curses we draw upon ourselves. After a Trials, us recruiting from our vassals is probably a big part of how we recoup our numbers.

Like even when we conquer the Flipper, we're going to make most of the Sects our vassals instead of just redistributing their land. (I say most because there are the Blood Path sects, after all.)
I don't have the quote but I'm pretty sure our vassels also suffer from our curses.
 
No, we already payed the debt which they extorted out of us for minor assistance against a blood path power that wanted to eat them. Given how they are the vassal here not us we are currently really annoyed at having to pay through the nose to get them to do even a little of their share of the work. The good seed help was just an added bonus of us being really really nice.
No its represented by the 10 wealth we paid them. Not the missions.
Not true actually!
Much of the Hong Xuan repayment is not happening in simple coin, but much is in contributions in-kind. Labour and assistance from Clan cultivators makes up a substantial portion of that repayment, and those cultivators willing to go south to assist the Hong Xuan will earn Contribution Points for their labours.
The mission was indeed part of the repayment.
 
Sure, here's what the QM said on vassal loyalty
Slicing down the quote to only the bit that supports you really doesn't reflect well on your argument. Let's look at the whole thing.

For Vassals, Opinion and Strength.

Low enough opinion and high enough Strength? They'll rebel? Middling opinion and high enough strength? The same. You must have strength, but low enough Opinion can drive vassals to plot against you regardless of Strength, and if you're weak enough your Vassals will rebel almost no matter what. Given Minor Factions do not have Nascent Soul cultivators (that's why they're Minor Factions), though, they'll very rarely do it openly unless you are unable to suppress them. However, they might look to ally with other Nascent Souls and pay tribute elsewhere - only by offending them very badly can you convert them into Rebel Factions.
So... do we have enough strength? Blatantly so. We have Nascents. They don't. We're adding more Nascents, and more land (which came with more vassals, but didn't add any to the Hong Xuan allotment). By comparison to them, we're stronger than we were at game start, not weaker.

Let's quote the background blurb on the Hong Xuan.

Sit, junior sisters and brothers.

You are Hong Xuan, as am I.

I am Hong Xuan Fang Zhi, a member of our mighty Clan, and tasked with your introductory lesson on the geography of the lands which we rule. Those of you who are found to have quick minds and strong talents might find themselves able to attend the Vast Choosing - or the Flood Tournament, as some have called it.

We are a mighty lineage, stretching back over five thousand years.

Of course, not the mightiest, but only fools look back on the past and concern themselves that their ancestors were not kings over all. We are mighty compared to most, and that a few are greater than us is merely reality.

Remember, the Golden Devils rule us. Oh, not formally. We are named allies, and merely pay for assistance in matters such as security and trade, tariffs levied on our goods and mercenary payments made, and so on. It is a light yoke, but it is a yoke. Do not offend them, or unduly insult them. When you understand the history of our people, you will understand it is a history entwined with the Devil conquest of the region, a master we would prefer to live without but cannot stand apart from.

Still, understanding will come in time. For now, a basic primer on the lands you reside in.

The map.

We will go around the varied territories, understanding our powers from the perspective of an outsider. For until you succeed in the Flood Tournament, you are truly only ever an outsider, no matter your name.

If you enter our lands from the north, you will firstly pass the Towers of Ruin.

Our grandest defensive work, funneling the rage and power of the Watchful Father and his children into a magnificent line of towers, pouring fire on all who might attack us. Even the Golden Devils when conquering these lands saw the depth of our defenses and preferred to leave us be, merely exacting tribute rather than ruining their forces further.

From there you will go south, to Pyre City. It is named such as it watches over all our volcanic territories to the west, and those who work the mighty Fire-Arrays are located there. Hot and unpleasant at the best of times, the volcanoes oft spit out Spirit Stones, and the groaning, shifting earth reveals new lodes of such quite often. Pyre City is the heart of our wealth, the true seat of power. Three million mortals such as yourselves live among our territories, yet only a hundred thousand strive in Pyre City. It is not much of a place for mortals, and those who live there tend to die early deaths, trading life for wealth. If you fail in the Choosing, perhaps you will be sent there.

The Watchful Father is the key spirit, the great animating soul of the volcano there. Our friendship with the Father allows us access to his bounty and power. From him we direct arrays of energy to the Towers of Ruin, and only cultivators who are nearly the Second Tier - what the Devils call the Seventh Heavenstage - can go there and survive. The Qi is potent and destructive, yet directing it has made us the second-most powerful Clan in the territories under the Golden Devils, eclipsed only by our masters.

The Sleeping Brothers are weaker, tired, old. From them we gain a great deal of Spirit Stones, and they are survivable even by mortals, for a time. Eventually the sulfur and gases will overwhelm and kill a mortal, but that is their lot.

The Weeping Children spit out all manner of wealth, yet are tremendously dangerous. Only condemned men and pigmen go there, but much wealth is made.

To the south further along the Scorpion Road is Seven Tourneys City. The Choosing is held there. Each year, seven tournaments, great contests held to establish the skill and worth of each Hong Xuan scion. You are trained and taught before them, but if you fail - you may find yourself mining among gases and heat. Only the finest and hardest-working can carry on the Hong Xuan name. For those who fail completely, you will be stripped of your Hong Xuan lineage, made mere peasants, though your children will be given one last chance to return. For those who perform well, you can find excellent skilled work - from smiths to warriors, all come from the tournaments. The greatest of you may walk the path of immortality, as I have done. Five hundred thousand mortals live there, the greatest city outside of the Isles.

Then west, to the Grand Stairwell. Our grand creation. Nearly fifty li in length, and wide enough for six wagons to pass side-by-side along the slope, with two staircases for those who walk either side. Much wealth, much labor is spent maintaining it, and it is honorable work. One who finds themselves to be a worthy craftsman in the Choosing may become a builder of the Grand Stairwell, a truly honorable trade.

We will return to the Isles lastly, but for now, we shall continue around.

Sunrise City contains two hundred thousand mortals, and is largely a city kept alive by trade. The road by Pyre City is dangerous, as fire-spirits and rockmen emerge from the earth to kill without thought, and for those who are not walking the path of immortality, taking the other road is wiser. It is a mere waystation on a road, and is taxed well enough to justify its existence. A poor performance but not a complete failure in the Tournament might be sent there to work as a trader, or a laborer, even.

The Low Forge is a work of some brilliance. It took four Golden Core Elders to build and maintain it, but it takes advantage of a massive amount of waste heat piped here through arrays from the towers. The heat is used to build truly impressive feats, mainly massive castings of iron and the like. The waste Qi is also infused into weapons and armor - though it is not overly strong, we are able to produce enough Spears of Flame to equip every immortal, as well as many skilled mortals.

Second-to-last are the benighted Pigmen Encampments. They are our servants, and we pay them for the tasks they undertake. Far stronger than a man, and more resilient besides, they are slow and ponderous, but excellent at difficult labor such as mining. Many die in the mines each year, and they serve as laborers across the entirety of Hong Xuan territory. They are the reason those who bear the Hong Xuan name are not given over to such terrible labor, and only those who fail in the tournament are sent to die in such a way, to remove the shame from our glorious clan. There are around eight hundred thousand or so pigmen, and they live everywhere. Of course, they are not permitted to walk the path of immortality or bear the name Hong Xuan.

Of course, you all live in the Hong Xuan Isles. The mightiest constructs in the world. Kept aloft by a direct link to the Watchful Father and his many sons, fire-Qi keeping the souls of the islands awake and our people far above the ground. Spirit Stones are used to help manoeuvre the isles, and they are green with growth, herbs and crops growing en masse here. One and a half million of us live here, though of course not all bear the name Hong Xuan. After all, we do need servants and laborers, woodsmen and farmers. It is this construct that left the Golden Devils unwilling to conquer us - to break through our towers and lay siege to our islands as they were weak and battered from two great wars? Unthinkable! And so we signed the Treaty of Misty Hill, that even today governs our rights and relations with the Golden Devils.

Now, you have your history books. Begin reading. I will return in three hours and test you on what material you have learned. If any of you find this too boring, or would prefer to ignore me... well, you can enter the Tournament without my guidance, if you wish. It would be my pleasure to see such lazy fools lose their name.

Well, what are you waiting for? Read!

So... it's not that they're somehow significantly increasing in strength to dangerous levels. They have always been strong, and only lightly yoked. They don't like paying tribute, but they can't survive on their own. So... basically they have enough strength to be allowed to have an opinion on what manner of vassal they are. We've treated them somewhat poorly recently - paying with poor coin, because we prioritized other things. We decided that they weren't the thing we wanted to focus on, we reaped the rewards elsewhere, they suffered for it, now they're pissed. That's entirely reasonable. I'm sure that if we'd decided to prioritize them and had gotten a massive success, they'd be singing our praises right now.

We shouldn't be punishing our vassals for being pissed that we neglected them.
 
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....Literally what are you talking about

The intent seems to be "They're upset because we repaid them in a backhanded fashion, so it's not unreasonable for them to be grumbly about it"

Which, you know, is fair. I'd sure as hell be pissed off in the same boat. As long as it doesn't escalate to rebellion though, sure.
 
The intent seems to be "They're upset because we repaid them in a backhanded fashion, so it's not unreasonable for them to be grumbly about it"
That's distinctly different from neglect

Them being grumpy about the assistance being fumbled is one thing, but characterizing it as us being lazy...?

Let's be real, hiring out the time of our good Seeds is worth actual money for resolving things the Xuan should be able to handle themselves.
 
That's distinctly different from neglect

Them being grumpy about the assistance being fumbled is one thing, but characterizing it as us being lazy...?

Let's be real, hiring out the time of our good Seeds is worth actual money for resolving things the Xuan should be able to handle themselves.

Yeah, it wasn't neglect, it was just--as stated--a poor distribution of manpower and resources that led to that outcome. A fumble, not active neglect (Though I imagine some firebreathers in universe are probably portraying it as such)
 
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