Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Also, I'm not joking and I advocate for dabbling in / experimenting with Blood Path.
The definition of Blood Path, as per what the Curse affects, is actually surprisingly broad.

From Discord, I'll paraphrase, but bloodline granting counts, organ transplants count, blood donations count, and so on. If you're infusing another person's cultivation into yourself, the Curse is going to hit that.

This means that the Clan's bloodline research is Blood Path.

Now, how does this not auto-hit us with the Curse? It's because the Curse is a matter of a gradient. It doesn't immediately apply at full strength.
As an aside, I'm not sure if Lin Fan's nature was ever actually known properly by the Clan, his omake stopped very, very early. It's quite plausible he was in 'execute this guy' territory.
Lin Fan was alive from Turn 1 to 6, I believe. While yeah, his author left around Turn 4, it was still a fairly decent amount of time.

As for the Clan knowing:
Lin Fan - Remains at 4th Heavenstage, minor crippling has slowed progress drastically. Took on many bandit hunting missions. Facing an enemy he was ambushed and lost three fingers. Investigation shows use of Blood techniques - but only on acceptable targets.

This was his very first Fate. The Clan was well aware.
 
The only way to find out whether it is possible to stop being Blood Path is to experiment with it ourselves. All it takes is a little nibble. A small bite. We could limit our diet to our worst enemies, as Hu Ai does. It couldn't hurt, could it? We can stop any time. Just a small bite. What harm could it do?
Also, I'm not joking and I advocate for dabbling in / experimenting with Blood Path.
If you're serious, then I will respond seriously.

Your earlier assertion is flatly false. There's blood path all over. We're still hunting down blood path of various sorts in our lands. If we want to experiment with cleansing blood path corruption, then we can do that by capturing existing blood path, ad experimenting on them. It's not like we're lacking in mad scientist types in this clan.

Actually, that could be an interesting idea for a Good Seed - mad scientist type who wants to understand (and muck with) the hatred of the heavens and its effects. Starts by trying to figure out how to frob Heaven's general disapproval of the Blood Path on an individual basis. (Can we soothe heaven's wrath against an individual on this matter? Can we intensify it? Can we cure Blood Path corruption? Can we force on someone who hasn't actually practiced Blood Path (yet)?) Eventually hopes to make the Single Pillar breakthrough by figuring out some way to cheat the tribulation.

The Altar Lord got that idea directly from the Will of the Altar (in other words, the Will of Soup Chef.)

So, I doubt it's a matter of that, Sirrocco.

Like, there isn't any inheritance between each of the Altar Lords besides the next one eating the other in order to overthrow them, unlike with the Devils which were and still are super succession-based.

EDIT: Also, him being the Thirty-Second Altar King isn't new information. This was stated way back in the first Altar Lord meeting.

EDIT2: One moment, looking up where it was first mentioned. I do recall it was said prior to this update, that's for sure.
Assuming that's correct? Well, I can be wrong. It was news to me, at least. Apparently I missed it the first time through.
 
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Assuming that's correct? Well, I can be wrong. It was news to me, at least. Apparently I missed it the first time through.

Its possible that tidbit didn't make it past the Discord, theirs a spreadsheet on their with names and details on many of the Flipper Regions Nascent Souls (not all of them by a long shot, its not complete). The 38th generation part of his title has always been on that.
 
Its possible that tidbit didn't make it past the Discord, theirs a spreadsheet on their with names and details on many of the Flipper Regions Nascent Souls (not all of them by a long shot, its not complete). The 38th generation part of his title has always been on that.
OHHH, that's where I was remembering it from.

In his name section, looks like it directly calls him: Thirty-Second Generation Altar King.
Assuming that's correct? Well, I can be wrong. It was news to me, at least. Apparently I missed it the first time through.
Yeah, it wasn't in thread, my apologies.
 
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Some more chaos up north is good business for us. Hang in there, Altar Lord!

In some ways re-establishing the Fearless Line was a double-edged sword in that it risked accelerating the end of the war, but it looks like that guy's got a few contingency plans left to go.

On the topic of fixing blood path corruption, think about it this way: do you really want to live in a world where eating other people for power has no major consequences? That's the kind of thing that turns into a nightmare very fast. Best to keep those shackles on.
 
I'm willing to cut off or throttle spirit stone trade as a result of us going for Jingshen's core mines. I really don't want RP outright winning this one yet.
 
The collapse of the war should have come two decades ago, but I have sustained it a little longer. We are at all moments a heartbeat away from losing, and we cannot afford to lose yet. By distracting and forcing the Righteous Path into various other fronts, we can buy more time. After that, there is only one card to play, but..."

My takeaway on this is more of that it's semi-good. He seems to be going for any excuse to not let the Righteous Path recover, to keep them on the battlefield. So if things do blow-up when we strike against the Jingshen due to low dice rolls, i can see him doing stealth stuff to ensure we don't get steamrolled by a coalition because his goal is to buy time and extend that war-state.

Reverse would be that a War of Attrition hits us as well, but thems the break if it's a bad roll

Blood Path corruption boils down to 'must eat people'. If you happen to have some way around the requirement to do you can generally sneak by. Demonstrating Purity (as it is called over in the Righteous Sects) is as simple as using Spirit Stones, Qi from the air, or Beast Cores to cultivate. If you still can, you're not fully Blood Path.

Muyi is safe as long as he can still partake in Spirit Stone Soil instead of just being kept powered-up via being watered with blood ;)
 
It seems that an unintended cost of refusing to help the Altar Lord more directly is that he's having to go harder and harder to compensate for the continued flow of Spirit Stones.
 
My takeaway on this is more of that it's semi-good. He seems to be going for any excuse to not let the Righteous Path recover, to keep them on the battlefield. So if things do blow-up when we strike against the Jingshen due to low dice rolls, i can see him doing stealth stuff to ensure we don't get steamrolled by a coalition because his goal is to buy time and extend that war-state.
True, but it's also in Altar Lord's interests that we do get retaliated against by the Righteous Path, it pulls heat off him, forces us to cut off spirit stones to the people attacking us, and forces us into his arms if things get too hot to handle. If he's got any way to make it messier than our best case no friction scenario, he will.
 
While the girl is 'soft' (for a cannibal). I am sure that old cannibal will have a field day with a young and probably talented NS that actually listen and is willing to collaborate.

And his harem grow once more. Kek.
 
While the girl is 'soft' (for a cannibal). I am sure that old cannibal will have a field day with a young and probably talented NS that actually listen and is willing to collaborate.

And his harem grow once more. Kek.
You must mean Manuel harem.
In case you have forgotten obviously this entire thing is part of old cannibal's desperate attempt to return to his childhood friend Manuel after he left him for the altar lord.
 
Aretaphila Myia X6/Katha Theodoros 5 Collab - A Chance Intermission
Aretaphila Myia X6/Katha Theodoros 5
A Chance Intermission

It seems like a common sense thing to say, but the desert sun burns. Not simply the kind of baking heat that you expect from the omnipresent source of hate and death that the shining orb in the sky ordinarily is.

No, the heat pounds, as if trying to stubbornly jam a rusted stake through the skull. Presumably in tune with a heartbeat, but could such a cursed thing ever truly be connected to ones own self? Is such self-hatred possible?

One Aretaphila Myia considers this, stumbling through the City of the Emporikipolis while drunk.

Yes, it is possible.

Having just achieved her objective of two centuries, and then been forced to bear the scrutiny of two Nascent Soul cultivators within the span of a day, the diminutive King decided that getting drunk was an entirely appropriate response and celebration of her achievement. Thus, she had gotten drunk.

Thus, she had foolishly spent her hard earned money on something only a few short days ago, only to have forgotten about it.

A token for entry to the Yuan Man-As-Mountain Array for a Qi Condensation Cultivator, and in all the excitement of breaking through and then getting drunk, Aretaphila Myia had completely forgotten about it. And then told the Archegetes that she was going to the Great Battlefield of all things. As quickly as possible!

Yet another reason to drink, and so she did.

Thankfully her drinking binge had not left the newly ascended Expert too poor to afford a simple, ratty cloak to ward off the worst of the sun's rays and judgement. Still, it was with an aching head and poor coordination that the Silver King marched towards the Caravan Stations, seeking a ride back to the Waycastle Myia to make her preparations for joining the column set to move out. Stll, this left her with no time to use the Yuan ticket, or even exchange it for one that matched her current rank.

Her senses cast out, a song sketching out a path to walk even when the eye was too blurry and unresponsive to guide the body properly. And in doing so they came across what must have appeared to be the answer to her prayers:

A Junior of the Clan, barely broken through the First Heavenstage.

With a speedy shuffle, Aretaphila made her way over to the taller, redheaded member of the Clan.

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Katha was lost.

It was not particularly surprising, all things considered. The girl did not often spend time in Emporikopolis, considering its relative distance from the Theodoros Estate. Trivial for a cultivator to cross, and her father and grandfather often did as they managed the affairs of the family's spirit stone mine, but for one who had only just taken their first step on the path to Immortality it was way too fucking hot Imperator above.

Still, the mustering orders were not at the outlying towns, but in the city proper. And now that she was a cultivator of the Clan, she was expected to join the Legions and serve along the line, perhaps even climbing the ranks in the future. Dimly, Katha wondered how long she would remain on the line of battle before she would ever reach the rank of Principales, but she quickly chased those thoughts away.

Mulling over her lack of talent would not help her overcome that self-same lack of talent. More prudently, it would not help her overcome her current predicament. Which brought her back to her initial problem: she was lost.

It bothered Katha to have to ask for directions and seem like a country bumpkin, or a shut-in heiress, but there was little to be done. The hustle and bustle of Emporikopolis did not help her either; everyone here seemed to already know exactly where to go and how to get there, with little time to spare for a little girl new to their way of life.

She sighed. Maybe she should have just gone with Rathos instead. Or listened to his plan to get grandfather to pull some strings and get them assigned to the same Legion. But she was so headstrong and so determined to make her own way that she never once considered that something as pedestrian as finding the reporting office to be an obstacle on her road to glory.

Looking around, Katha wondered if she'd ever find her way. The Auxilia Legion she was posted to was not scheduled for maneuvers for at least another week, but she was not about to bumble about the city like a lost child!

It was at that moment that destiny arrived for young Katha, like a harsh glare of sunlight reflecting off a metallic surface, straight into her face.

"Are you lost, Junior?" A harsh, grumpy voice near-groaned at her, "You seem lost. Where are you headed? This Senior Sister here can guide you!" Then an arm smacked what was a diminutive chest, which elicited a brief hacking cough.

The formal lexicon took Katha by surprise, used as she was to comparatively lax country life and the confines of a very small, very tightly-knit family unit. She struggled to remember the lessons in etiquette that her grandfather tried to pound into her - sometimes literally - that later Rathos had to revise with her before they both gave up on it.

But the longer she thought, the more time she wasted, and the silver senior in front of her was already standing askance, hip cocked and head tilted as if judging her response, assessing her worth through something as simple and superficial as manners. She probably should have learned more about this instead of ramming her head against a brick wall all day, everyday.

Lacking anything else, Katha tried her best. "A-Ah… This one was assigned to the 722nd Training Legion, scheduled for muster at the Glauron Fields. Would Senior know the way there?" She swallowed, hoping she had not put her foot into her mouth. "A-And what might be a good inn and tea shop in the city, as well? This one has not been here often, and does not know much."

"An interesting question, Junior!" Aretaphila groaned, having to tilt her head up to meet the Aspirants gaze. But the noon-time positioning of the sun scored brightness into her own eyes, sending her own skull into an even greater state of pounding agony. She grimaced past it to focus on the younger woman's inquiry, "Glauron Fields can be gotten to by taking another carriage to the Fortress itself. Who taught you that we mustered the Training Legions in Emporikipolis? No, no, follow me and this Senior Sister here will guide you."

With a shuffle and stumble, Aretaphila limped around the Aspirant, face grimacing at the pounding agony of her skull the whole time. Another near-silent ringing emanated from her Physique, and the Myia scion had once more charted out a path back to the Caravans.

"So," Aretaphila said after shuffling along for a few moments, "Why are you in such a rush, Junior? The Dawn Fortress isn't going anywhere!"

Katha had lost her tongue, because as she quietly read through her orders, she realised that they mentioned going to Emporikipolis to fetch a caravan to the Dawn Fortress. And she'd already wandered past five travelling inns, a cart stop, and a dozen peddlers offering travel for contribution points. It was all she could do not to cup her face in shame and she could already feel her cheeks burning.

She couldn't admit something as simple as reading her orders wrong to the silver senior so kindly helping her. So she quickly shoved them away, her mind racing faster and faster to find a good excuse. "Ah, this one hoped to make a good impression with the Centurion, so this one might find good advice and speed one's path… Is it not common practice to report early?"

"There are as many ways to make a first impression as there are stars in the sky, Junior." Aretaphila replied with a slight slurring sound as she shuffled down the road, "Networking and appearing reliable compared to your fellow Aspirants are entirely worthy endeavors!" A memory, unbidden, rose to the fore at that thought, "Why, I remember when I myself first arrived at the Dawn Fortress! It feels like only yesterday that Old Alexios died, and the Princess was just a swaddling little babe, not even past the first Heavenstage."

The Silver King squinted at the glaring, hateful sunlight, "By the Imperator, the years go by so fast." She sniffed, before pausing to retch up phlegm in an incredibly unladylike manner, but what did she care? If making a drunken ass out of yourself was good enough for a Nascent Soul, then by the Seven Hells it was good enough for Aretaphila Myia!

"But the thing that really stands out at the camp isn't something simple like discipline, or drilling." Aretaphila paused, reflecting on those early days, "Any dumb ass with a stick and square of bronze can do that. It's expected. It's basic." The Songstress shuffled along, not looking back at her Junior but still tracking her through the emanations of her Dao, "If you want to really make an impression to a Centurion you need to stand out! Be memorable." She paused, a thumb jerking back towards herself.

"Like me, hehehe!"

Aretaphila chuckled mirthfully at the joke for a bit longer, continuing her slow and careful shuffling through the agonizing headache. Desperate for a distraction, she asked her erstwhile companion, "So, why do you want to make an impression on your Centurion, Junior? Nothing too scandalous, I hope!"

It was definitely a test, Katha had decided by this point. No one could be so blase about all this. One would have to be inordinately powerful or a complete outcast, and this silver senior was definitely…

Katha considered her current attire and the fact that she now smelled like brandy. She shook her head. The silver senior was probably not an outcast.

No, stinking like an alcoholic was too obvious, this had to be a test of some sort. Far too obvious, far too excessive. She mentioned Elder Alexios, who served before Manuel Konsantinos took the chair of Archgetes, so this was someone who was around a long time. A Cultivator who has lived at least two hundred years, maybe even three hundred. Someone who survived the Trials twice. Maybe a Centurion, or a Tribune, or even a full Legate. An important person.

If only she could see underneath that raggy cloak the senior wore. There might be some form of identifying insignia she could use to get any sort of idea of the kind of veteran she was dealing with. There was something to all this, and naturally, she was too blind to recognise it.

She'd have to play the fool's card, then. The only thing she could do was be forthright… Well, not too forthright. "This one does not believe she can be memorable in the same way," she replied, keeping her voice as even as she could. "This one--"

Aretaphilla laughed, then clapped her on the shoulder loudly. "Enough with 'this one' or 'that one', Junior! Just say what's on your mind!"

Katha found she had been holding her breath and released it. Her heart was pounding. Right, no pressure. "I'm not the sort of Heaven-Defying Talent that the Indomitable Thirteen are, or even like you. I'm just a talentless hack - so if I want to make my mark, I have to fight for every bit." She shook her head and scoffed. "Though brown-nosing wasn't ever going to be the best plan either. I already can't stand it."

Aretaphila stiffened the slightest bit at the red haired Juniors words, the mention of those fellows from a hundred years back shocking her ever so slightly back to sobriety, "I wouldn't say that." The shorter woman continued, patting Katha once more on the shoulder, "When each of the Thirteen stood before the measuring stone to discover their talent for cultivation, do you know what they found?"

Aretaphila paused for a moment, her gold-flecked blue eye casting back at the younger woman's ponderous expression, "I don't either! But I can tell you what I did: Not some Heaven-Defying Genius. Do you know how many of those have appeared in the past hundred years, leaping into the 9th Heavenstage in the blink of an eye like a Carp through the Dragon Gate? A hundred, two hundred years ago we called that Heaven-Defying. They'd have been considered an epochal talent, even! But of the Indomitable Thirteen, no, they weren't Heaven Defying talents at all.

"They were just stubborn." The Myia scion said, remembering those three days, "Stubborn fools who refused to go down without a fight."

"Everyone else who didn't have that stubbornness to them died, after all." The Silver Senior turned to the Aspirant with a shadowed grin, "So don't worry about how fast you start. What matters is how long you stay in the game. That way, more people will get an opportunity to hear your name too. Isn't it better to arrive later with a bang than to arrive early only to be cut down first?"

"Stubbornness…"

It was a lot to take in. All her life, Katha took it for granted that such stubbornness was inherent to talent. It never occurred to her that those who had climbed so high, who had achieved so much, might never have been granted that greatness. Instead, they clawed towards it, seizing it with both hands, and marked it in their sign for all the world to see.

It was one strange silver senior's word against what she knew her whole life. But she had spoken with such certainty, it was like she had been there at Pleuron herself, an integral cog in the machine of the Miracle.

Maybe that was why her mother risked it all and lost it all at the hands of Old Gold. Not because she sought a swift path to power for the sake of defying heaven. But because she was simply too stubborn not to grasp greatness with her hands when the opportunity came to her.

It was a lot to think about. Katha had opened her mouth as she turned to the silver senior to thank her. Only for her expression to blank.

"Ah… Isn't this where we ran into one another? I think we might have walked in a circle."

Aretaphila paused, the sun's glare finally enough to cause her to sweat, "G-good eye, Junior!" She muttered, "You've got a keen sense of memory and attention to detail, exactly as I'd hoped!" The smaller cultivator tried to bring herself up to her own full height, but the embarrassment of the situation atop her pounding hangover left her wanting to crawl into the fetal position, "But don't worry!" Even so, through the pain Aretaphila desperately sought a way to retake control of the conversation.

Then, the answer hit her.

With the sound of an illusionary gong, an ephemeral silver hammer appeared at Aretaphila's back: The symbol of her Dao Emanation. With a swift and light swing into her back, Aretaphila's Single Pillar resonated, clearing up her drunkenness if only for a moment, and casting out a wave of Song that mapped their environs, and seared the route to their destination brightly into the King's mind.

"Now that you've seen through the illusion cast by this Senior, I've dispelled the illusion so that we may continue to your destination!"

But even if the mind was willing, the body was still weighed down by exhaustion and powerful spirits. So it was that Aretaphila desperately attempted to affect poise and regal bearing, even as she half-stumbled, half-shuffled her way towards the Caravans once more.

When they arrived, Katha made the effort to bow towards her silver senior. "Thank you for your thought-provoking advice, I will dwell upon it to discover my own truth. And for the other advice as well. I'll make sure to leave a good impression." She stood up, smiling politely but also tilting her head. "Though, might I ask for your name? I don't believe we've introduced ourselves."

Aretaphila cast her mind back towards the conversation, and the fact that on top of being a Senior Sister to this young Aspirant, she was supposed to have a whole bunch of other expectations to live up to now. Her electric blue eye shifted back and forth, before landing on the Caravan preparing to depart for Waycastle Myia, based on the family sigil emblazoned on the flags it was flying.

"Don't worry, Junior Sister. This one's name isn't important." The Myia nodded, "As an apology for my discourtesy, and not showing you to a decent Tea House, let me give you this small token to save us both face." Aretaphila paused, mind racing at what she could possibly bribe the girl with when something came to mind.

Something perfect, in fact!

With a nimble twist of her silver fingers, Aretaphila produced a jade token that she slipped into the Aspirants tanned hands, "Though it does not amount to much, I hope Junior Sister can consider this apology enough for this Senior's rudeness."

Turning around, she waved backwards to the younger cultivator, "Remember my words! If you can live up to them, then surely we shall meet again someday!" Tiny legs flexed, finally obeying the command of their master, and with a burst of Qi Aretaphila Myia leapt through the air, landing atop one of the carriages in the caravan.

Wrapped in a weathered cloak, silver skin glinting in the sunlight as her hands rested on her hips, a fetif breeze blew and drew her figure into stark profile. Like a gleaming statue that reflected the sun's light into bright, searing rays that blinded the onlooker.

Much like they blinded Katha, who after the spots disappeared from her vision, could no longer see the Silver Senior. Vanished, gone just as suddenly from her life as she had appeared.

She blinked, squinting at the sky as she wondered what had happened. Was that a strange spirit journey? Did she get pranked? Peering at the jade token in her hands, clutched between her finger and her thumb, the aspiring Cultivator could only wonder what it could offer her. She had not said what it was for before she vanished.

And the hell was that technique? How did she vanish in a flash of silver?

She spotted a carriage bound for the Dawn Fortress and shelved those thoughts for later. She will mull over them shortly, in the comfort of an uncomfortable, overly public Legio barracks. That promised to be fun.

Katha shook her head, pocketed the token, and proceeded down the path of her destiny.

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It would only be another five days before she realised the token qualified her to enter the Yuan Man-As-Mountain Array, which was due to open soon. A month after that the young Legionary resolved to risk it, delaying her departure to the Great Battlefield.

And it would be over ten years before Katha Theodoros, her skin lightened and her bangs streaked with a flash of silver, ever found out just who she met that day in a sun-baked market square.

Aretaphilla Myia. Heiress of the Myia Clan. Member of the Indomitable Thirteen. Key component of the Miracle at Pleuron. Thousand Songstress, and Silver Bell. But more important than all these: Attendee to the three Lectures that lead to her mother's death.

And now... Single Pillar King.
 
Kakos Alexeikeravno - Good Seed Background
Kakos Alexikeravno - Good Seed Background

From a once-great clan of array carvers, the Alexikeravno have been driven nearly to destruction by heaven's unrelenting wrath.

Family legend has it that the progenitor of the clan once produced and promulgated an array that was so offensive to the heavens that their hatred of him settled implacably into his blood, and the blood of his descendants. What is known is that yes, the heavens hate this family, with a deep and petty hatred. Children of the bloodline must be born inside of carefully constructed arrays, lest they be struck down by tribulation lightning the moment they leave the womb. They have not had any members enter Foundation Building in generations, as the tribulation there has been invariably lethal. At the same time, they all enter Qi Condensation, if only because trying to survive the mercurial wrath of the heavens with no cultivation at all is functionally impossible. Still, there are compensations.

The first is that ever-malleable bronze has adjusted to their new condition. Tempered by the hatred of the heavens in the form of repeated tribulation lightning, they have developed the Bronze Spire Body - one remarkably resilient to lightning of all kinds, especially that of Heaven's Wrath. It is at the point where the energies of lightning can even be used to cultivate... if they are mild enough to survive in the first place. Unfortunately, heaven's wrath against the Alexikeravno does not tend to come in "mild".

The second is, well, that Heaven's Wrath is finite. Wrath that is assaulting one house is wrath not spent assaulting another. In general, the other Golden Devil families who have reason to know about them tend to consider the Alexikeravno to be a bit of a good luck charm... as long as they are not close enough to be caught up in the blast radius. It's not all that strong an effect, but there's enough truth to it that they're not wrong.

The third is that the family has survived, and it too has the malleability of bronze. Avoiding the all-destroying wrath of the heavens has been a matter of critical importance to the Alexikeravno for generations, and while their solutions are not perfect, they do work. This has given them enough protection to keep the family alive, and enough skill at the associated arrays to make a decent living applying said arrays on behalf of other Golden Devils. It helps that in their case, the hateful eye of heaven is fixed specifically on the blood, as they've developed a few moderately effective techniques for hiding the blood in their bodies from heaven's gaze. Again, these things are not perfect - much understanding has been lost since those long-ago days when the family could brag of the occasional Core Formation expert... but they suffice. The family endures.

Kakos is not satisfied with merely enduring. He has been born into an age when the Golden Devils are clawing their way out of the pit that the heavens have consigned them to... and he intends to do the same. More than that - the wrath of the heavens is blind. It can be fooled. It can be turned. He intends to see it broken to the plow. He has learned what he can of his family arts, and he shows a particular genius in them - an intuition for that hatred which dogs the steps of his family. He sees little glimmers of the underlying truth behind the formations that keep his family alive. He intends to wield it against the enemies of the clan... and possibly demonstrate that the lofty heights of Core Formation are not so out of reach to his family as some might think.



Overall Concept: Initially, he's an array crafter, with a specialty in arrays that (for everyone else) are mostly useful in tribulation assistance. Relatively early on, he's going to develop and then improve on a "blasphemy" array, powered by his own blood, that can draw down tribulation lightning on a prepared location. This will be followed by progressively larger and more impressive versions - "Ten Blasphemies", "Hundred Blasphemies", Thousand Blasphemies", "Ten Thousand Blasphemies", and so forth. He'll also be experimenting with other aspects of Heaven's Wrath, most certainly including Blood Path corruption. Eventually, he'd be pulling off things like hiding the blood within his body, and using arts that project darts of it at others, with the intent of forcing it into their systems and thus pushing them along the Blood Path without their consent... while also filling their veins with the Hated Blood, causing tribulation lightning, and then killing them for Karma because the Heavens have been convinced (however temporarily) that they're Golden Devils. Of course, when the heavens realize this, they hate him all the more, but he'd be shuffling that hatred off onto his blood, where he can weaponize it.

Admittedly, there are issues here. Any plan that's built around making heaven hate you more so that you can weaponize that hatred against others is not a safe plan. Also, he's going to need to develop ways to recover blood rapidly, and he's going to need to keep developing them as his requirements increase. He's going to need to refine his family arts as well, to cloak himself sufficiently from the ever-increasing intensity of heaven's gaze. That's in addition to all of the offshoot research he needs to actually make use of it all. Finally, he's really, really not Righteous-friendly. He might get along reasonably well with some of the Noble Knowledge types, though, if he ever happens to encounter them. He certainly wouldn't be opposed to the idea of sharing some of his arts. As far as he's concerned, the more people there are out there messing with the heavens, the better... though of course it would have to be in a way that was beneficial overall for the Golden Devils.

Primarily arrays, with a strong secondary in Demonic Blood Arts (without ever actually going Blood Path), and eventually arts and "poisoncraft" that use his own blood as an active ingredient.

He'll be going for 13th Heavenstage and the Single-Pillar breakthrough, because his entire identity is built around hating heaven right back, and he simply can't see the opportunity to piss the Heavens off that hard and not take it. Ideally, he'd be doing it more or less at the same time as someone else who was also going for Single-Pillar in the hopes of making Heaven feel unhappy and conflicted about having to prioritize between them. This Good Seed is heaven-defying to his core.

General stats: quite a lot of talent at arrays/research/comprehension, durability more or less standard for a Golden Devil, poor agility, poor strength, pretty good qi control, not bad accuracy.



Overall Concept TLDR: The son of a family that is particularly hated by heaven, with some (but not enough) built-in resilience to the inevitable results, Alexikeravno Kakos has decided to hate Heaven right back. He intends to learn the laws that influence Heaven's actions on this earth, learn how to twist them, and then utterly abuse that to the detriment of both the enemies of the clan and the Heavens themselves.

Starting Perk: His clan's Bronze Spire Body is at least as much of a disadvantage as it is an advantage on the face of it, but between his family's existing fragmented lore, an impressive ability to grasp associated principles, and a relentless personal devotion to opposing the Heavens, he intends to change that.

Name: Kakos Alexikeravno
Age: 16
Cultivation: 1st Heavenstage
Cultivation years: 0
Health: Healthy
Impact: 0
Life Saving Treasures: 0
Lifespan Enhancements: 0
Other Treasures: N/A
Cultivation Goals: 13th Heavenstage, Single-Pillar


So... before I ping a collaborator, is this legit? Anything I need to add/change?
 
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Initially, he's a formations crafter, with a specialty in formations that (for everyone else) are mostly useful in tribulation assistance.
As a heads up, in this quest, Formations are basically like techniques but with multiple cultivators pooling their power in order to make something stronger than the sum of its parts.

Think the Hoplite Formation, Kataphractoi Formation, and so on.

Arrays, on the other hand, are runes inscribed onto a surface that channel Qi in order to produce an effect. They're more akin to magical-artifacts.

Think the Glass Spear Array, the Golden Eye Array, and so on.
Threadmarked, but a quick note.

Most cultivation stories when translated I've seen use formation and array for more-or-less the same thing, or two entirely different things.

For the purposes of this quest, Formations are cultivation techniques like any other, but designed to be practiced en masse. Basically 'battle formations' but magical and cultivator-ey.

Arrays are a kind of usually fixed magical artifact that can produce a certain effect in a certain area. They're generally less flexible than other artifacts (you cant pick up the Glass Spear Array and go wandering around the way you could with a magical glass spear), and less durable, but much easier to produce for the same level of effect.
Relevant quote.

TL;DR: It'd be anti-tribulation Arrays, not Formations.
So... before I ping a collaborator, is this legit? Anything I need to add/change?
Everything looks correct to me.
 
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As a heads up, in this quest, Formations are basically like techniques but with multiple cultivators pooling their power in order to make something stronger than the sum of its parts.
Darnit, I knew that. I even got it right once up at the top... and then my mind jumped tracks, and I got it wrong every other time. Fixed now. Thanks.

So, since you're officially a collaborator, can I consider you pinged?
 
Darnit, I knew that. I even got it right once up at the top... and then my mind jumped tracks, and I got it wrong every other time. Fixed now. Thanks.

So, since you're officially a collaborator, can I consider you pinged?
Pretty much, though I wasn't the one who threadmarked you this time. Someone got there while I was writing my post, it seems.

Oh, and by the way, would you like to join in Turn 11? Fates aren't done, and you could hop into Yuan. The next Yuan opening is way in Turn 17, after all.

Secret Realms tend to be great for those with aspirations of Kingship. 288 cultivation years really aren't a joke.
 
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Pretty much, though I wasn't the one who threadmarked you this time. Someone got there while I was writing my post, it seems.

Oh, and by the way, would you like to join in Turn 11? Fates aren't done, and you could hop into Yuan. The next Yuan opening is way in Turn 17, after all.

Secret Realms tend to be great for those with aspirations of Kingship. 288 cultivation years really aren't a joke.
Sure! What the heck. Yuan sounds like a blast. I'll see if I can rep out an omake fast enough to get an LST for it, too.
 
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Kakos Alexeikeravno did not remember his father. He had been premature, and his father had died in childbirth. By all reports, Kalos had been a good, quiet man, who served his community as well as he could with helpful arrays. He rarely cultivated. He had attracted the affections of a good woman from another minor family. They had been happy together. She had borne him two children, each of whom had survived long enough to become cultivators and serve the clan themselves... moving far away so that heaven's hatred might not concentrate too strongly to be borne. When Althaia found herself with child a third time, they were delighted.

Then came the Trials.

As his mother raised him in the aftermath, he heard stories. His oldest brother had died in the legions, defending the Clan. His middle brother had survived, crippled, and then fallen to the Lightning. His parents... they had been forced to flee unexpectedly when their town fell. It was going to be okay. The Legions were holding. They had still had time to get to a place of safety, and to set up another birthing array. It was not okay. The stress of travel sent his mother into premature labor while still on the road.

His father tried.

Kalos Alexeikeravno did what he could to hastily assemble a Heaven's Eyes Blinded array around his wife, to protect her and her unborn child from the inevitable. Heaven's eyes remained on them. He tried again and again, but his skills were meager. His cultivation was weak. His materials were poor. It was not enough. Finally, weeping, with no time left to try again, he told his wife her loved her, took off his array-covered robes to lay over them, and walked away to receive the lightning in their place. He had been a good, quiet man. Althaia Alexeikeravno had been a good, quiet woman... and the Heavens made it clear that simply being good, quiet people was not enough.

Kakos Alexeikeravno was raised rather differently than his brothers. They had been raised to endure. He was raised to fight back.

@ReaderOfFate assuming that counts, I'd like an LST, please. If it's not enough, let me know and I'll toss down some more.
 
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Lipita is currently crippled and working out her daring folly in Yuan but she would love to reach out to another Curse Bloodline, particularly one whose ill fortune has some similarities to the Delphi plight. I think that there are now officially 4 Curse variants of the Blood of Bronze.
 
Lipita is currently crippled and working out her daring folly in Yuan but she would love to reach out to another Curse Bloodline, particularly one whose ill fortune has some similarities to the Delphi plight. I think that there are now officially 4 Curse variants of the Blood of Bronze.
At this point I'm starting to wonder if we were also hit with a Curse of Mutation. The sheer number of these offshoots is getting out of hand :V
 
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