Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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The Thousand Song Siege - Mission Report
Second Elder, I know you asked for this information as often as possible as it is crucial to our interaction with the Righteous Coalition.

Firstly, some words on the Qi Condensation Juniors who were sent to the north, to relieve One-Boat, One-River Pass. They fought nobly and well, and have evacuated seventeen thousand mortals during their time there to safety. Another twenty-two thousand have been killed, but evacuating mortals in the face of a Blood Path assault is no easy thing. No major settlements in the Pass have fallen yet, but the evacuation is crucial before any proper siege lines are established. I would weigh this as a Bare Success, though our juniors fought hard.

Now to the Siege itself. I know we spoke of the power of the Single Pillar cultivators, but it is another thing entirely to see it in action. Rina Callista can go blow-for-blow with Core Formation Elders, and wherever Aretaphilia Myia is, her juniors are capable of standing against those many small realms above them. Any weakness in defence can be shored up instantly, and coupled with the somewhat unsavory - yet undeniably effective - healing powers of the Floros girl (note that our regular report on her will be coming in later, but there are no signs of fullblown Blood Path corruption as of yet. She has grown somewhat more difficult to kill, but all methods in Appendix A barring 1, 2, and 6 should still suffice in the event she must be put down) meant our losses were beyond minimal. We lost no walls, and casualties among us were in the hundreds, though of course in the thousands for our allies. It is difficult to get a full count on those dead, but I do not find it unlikely we have killed between ten and twenty thousand Blood Path cultivators during the Siege.

This was a Triumph. I can see a note from Elder Sheng saying he thinks it's a "huge success", and is very pleased. The Fearless Line is likely to be re-established, and I suspect the view any Righteous Path power might have as to invading and seizing Golden Devil cities has been set back an immense amount.
 
I suspect the view any Righteous Path power might have as to invading and seizing Golden Devil cities has been set back an immense amount.
Well, this is very interesting in regards to our probable war against Jingshen.

As for the Good Seed Reports, almost an ouch. That was close for Rina, meanwhile Aretaphila's done good work. Oh, and there's also Katha who rather than dying might actually be able to start becoming a Single Pillar if so wanted during her... second or third turn? So uh... Mind telling us your reaction Swordo?
 
Well, this is very interesting in regards to our probable war against Jingshen.

As for the Good Seed Reports, almost an ouch. That was close for Rina, meanwhile Aretaphila's done good work. Oh, and there's also Katha who rather than dying might actually be able to start becoming a Single Pillar if so wanted during her... second or third turn? So uh... Mind telling us your reaction Swordo?
I have no idea.

I had planned something for Katha watching enviously at whoever got the nat 100 for Yuan this turn but then it happened to her.
 
Caius Venandi 2 - Trials for the Yuan Secret Realm
Caius Venandi 2 - Trials for the Yuan Secret Realm

Caius regretted his decisions over the last year. His cultivation continued at a slow pace, and his skills slowly grew. Now instead of just the vision of a hawk, he could take on the vision of a snake. The colors were disconcerting but so useful for tracking living beings. Apart from those skilled in the Stealth arts, one day he'd have to find a solution for that.

But his decision to enter the Yuan realm was undoubtedly a foolish one. But after hearing of another ten just like him that had committed to the same idea, Caius took the plunge. Entering the Yuan was risky, and the Golden Devils refused to fund every cultivator that desired a ticket. Nepotism and contribution points were spent in droves, while contests were held for those special few.

With his family being only a minor house, and his stay with the Golden Devils short, the second son of the Venandi entered one of the competitions, this one with the goal of recovering a package. Of course, the package holder was a 10th Heavenstage cultivator, and only 3rd Heavenstage cultivators and below were allowed to attempt this contest. Needless to say, this didn't go well at first. Even with 1 cultivator against a hundred.

By now a month had passed, and Caius had yet to see the 10th stager for longer than 10 minutes. The skill, the speed, the strength were miraculous to him, but Caius only had to get lucky once. A second month passed, and he received an offer from 20 of the other cultivators that sought to entrap the elder, but the second son refused, not due to pride, but because he didn't believe he wouldn't betray them.

Another month passed, and this time Caius managed to see the 10th stage cultivator for a full hour. Sure they were on the other side of the horizon, and true they clearly noticed him, but it was progress.

A third month passed, and Caius finally managed to get within 10 li of the cultivator. He had been forced to run longer than he had in his life, and he only managed it thanks to an ambush by ten other cultivators. But it was the closest he had gotten yet, and with seven months remaining, he would take it. He could have done without the elder turning towards him and winking. He still didn't know how the 10th Heavenstage cultivator had made him realize that it was a wink in the first place.

The fourth month passed, and the group of 20 made their move. Their trap was well made and well planned, but it wasn't enough as the elder showed just how wide the gap between the 10th and 3rd stage was. Caius simply watched as the elder, who he finally realized was male, ran past the horizon once more. Shaking the sand off his legs, he sighed, continuing his journey shortly.

The problem, Caius mused, was that stalking a person was very different from stalking an animal. The 10th stager reacted to him, even if it had taken him 5 months to see that. In his defense, the elder's reaction was subtle and took place across the horizon. Changing the path to follow to a more treacherous one, increasing their pace, and on one memorable occasion leaping across a river at its thickest point. But now Caius knew that he needed a new plan.

"This is a horrible plan." Muttering to himself, the second son of the Venandi stared at the roaring rapids of the river, then to his raft. He needed to get ahead of the 10th Heavenstage cultivator to stand a chance, and the river was the only way to do that. This close to the mountains, however, presented many more dangers, such as if he was swept too close to lands of the Devil Bees. Caius launched the raft and began to scream.

Caius never wanted to do that again, for days he thought he was going to die, and his heart still raced at the memory of some of the turns. But for the first time in six months, he was within 5 li of the 10th Heavenstage cultivator, and for once they hadn't noticed him. He was buried in the dirt for once, being able to prepare the ground was truly a massive advantage. Now he had to hope for an opportunity.

He didn't get one.

The seventh month came, and he arose from his hiding spot as the elder passed him. With what he had managed, now Caius was able to remain with 10 li of the cultivator on most days. Thankfully the 10th stage cultivator was content to simply remain just ahead of the group instead of outracing them. He had to give them a chance after all.

In the eighth month, Caius had his chance. When an ambush of the twenty cultivators occurred, he closed on the treasure, aborting immediately when it looked as if the elder was going to win the fight. The ninth came, and Caius continued to follow, now able to get within 8 li. Chewing his lip, the scion pulled out his bow and experimentally aimed at the elder. At this distance … maybe? It would beat his record of 2 li by four-fold, but then again that had been before he cultivated.

Muttering to himself, Caius tried to figure out a way to hit the elder, as by now, he had realized that recovering the treasure wouldn't be possible for another 20 months. "With a good tailwind, maybe another li. Another li thanks to the strength gain … well, that's halfway at least." Sighing to himself, he tried to think of what to do. "Can't get close enough without him noticing, I can't risk the 20 not catching him, there are no more rivers to get ahead of him, I stand no chance in a fight, and he's too far to hit. Not that it'd matter anyway." Chewing his lip, Caius stared at the elder for minutes, until he realized there was one option available to him. Standing up, he pulled out an arrow, aiming up into the sky before loosing it vaguely in the 10th Heavenstage's general direction. Cupping his hands to his lips, he screamed out a word. "PARLAY!"

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That's like, actual Xanxia protagonist luck. What's next, an ancient Gold Devil Spirit Severing master who's been hiding under a rock waiting for the right disciple to come along and be taught all his secrets?
 
Holy shit, some people got really lucky. Congrats Swordo for taking first place in the Cultivation awards. I guess the trick was making your character a Sword Cultivator while being named Swordomatic!

Abel, Wei Feng, Paulus, Zeno, Aris, congrats to you guys too. :)

And Chron's Aretaphilia decided to carry the entire mission on her back from the looks of things, holy crap.
This was a Triumph. I can see a note from Elder Sheng saying he thinks it's a "huge success", and is very pleased. The Fearless Line is likely to be re-established, and I suspect the view any Righteous Path power might have as to invading and seizing Golden Devil cities has been set back an immense amount.
Well. Well well well. This, in hindsight, is a pretty foreseeable consequence of doing amazingly well at a siege while the Righteous Powers are watching. "Siege the Golden Devils? Nuts to that!" "Yeah, sure, right, of course you take out the Single Pillars as priority targets. (Good luck with that btw.) That still won't change the fact that the rest of them are hard as balls to kill and are Formations masters."

... Also, come to think of it, the Ascension Blood would have powered up all our Qi Condensation juniors too huh. Which means that our QC juniors performed pretty well too. Not as impressively as the people at the siege, not as eye-catching, but it was probably notable.
 
The Omakeless, the Fated to Die
I've updated the Fate penalty for those without omake for long periods of time. I think the rest speaks for itself.

Alastor Cheimos
Bonus: nan
Fate: Alastor died, a misaimed Glass Spear striking him from the Array during a minor rebellion.
Impact: 0 (+0)
Cultivation: Dead
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 100 (+0)
Health: Wounded --> Dead

Anuka Vatatzes
Bonus: nan
Fate: Anuka was killed in turn by drinking tea with an old woman whose son was killed by the Golden Devils for rebelling. Poisoned, she died gasping.
Impact: 1 (+0)
Cultivation: Dead
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 61 (+0)
Health: Wounded --> Dead

Carvos
Bonus: nan
Fate: Carvos nearly died, charging into battle against a Foundation Establishment bear. He managed to live, but was horrifically wounded.
Impact: 0 (+0)
Cultivation: 8th Heavenstage
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 55 (+2)
Health: Wounded --> Dead --> Badly Wounded (LST) --> Wounded

Daedalus Khimaira
Bonus: nan
Fate: Daedalus tried and succeeded in saving Carvos, but was mauled and killed in turn/
Impact: 3 (+0)
Cultivation: Dead
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 141 (+0)
Health: Lightly Wounded --> Dead

Eirene of Nowhere
Bonus: nan
Fate: Eirene attempted to mediate a conflict between two cities, but upon coming up with a treaty both could be happy with was poisoned by malcontents, and barely survived with the use of a powerful treasure.
Impact: 12 (+0)
Cultivation: 12th Heavenstage (12 turns from FB)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 209 (+0)
Health: Lightly Wounded --> Badly Wounded --> Lightly Wounded (LST Interrupt) --> Healthy

Mograine (Leon12431)
Bonus: nan
Fate: Another of the Indomitable Thirteen who fell. Like so many, Mograine never reached his tremendous goals, dying on a simple mission to the Longevity Stork Clan. Ambushed by a Core Formation Blood Bandit, he was sucked dry and slain in an instant, a miserable end to one of the heroes of Pleuron.
Impact: 9 (+0)
Cultivation: Dead
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 134 (+0)
Health: Badly Wounded --> Lightly Wounded (LST Interrupt) --> Healthy (End of turn) --> Dead

Shennong
Bonus: nan
Fate: Shennong advanced apace, cultivating well but doing little else.
Impact: 2 (+0)
Cultivation: 10th Heavenstage
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 156 (+17)
Health: Healthy --> Wounded --> Healthy (LST)

Syntyche Theophylaktos
Bonus: nan
Fate: Syntyche Theophylaktos managed to cultivate apace, finding a small Qi-Ball Beetle, a derivation of a dung beetle that rolled Qi into physical shape, leaving tiny pills that could be eaten. She discovered a great cache of these (+10 cultivation-years)
Impact: 9 (+0)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment 3-Pillar (Mid)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 188 (+24)
Health: Lightly Wounded --> Healthy (End of turn) --> Healthy

Tasos Basilakes
Bonus: nan
Fate: Almost dead of old age, Tasos sought a treasure to extend his lifespan. The Roulette Life Pill was a pill linked to seven others - once all were taken, one of the pill-takers gained life from the others, and the others were badly damaged. He, however, was unlucky, and found himself permanently crippled by use of the pill.
Impact: 10 (+0)
Cultivation: 12th Heavenstage (6 turns to FB)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 209 (+0)
Health: Healthy --> Crippled

Tharros Ateleioti
Bonus: nan
Fate: Killed after his breakthrough, the remainder of the Seven Great Bandits began a campaign that required the intervention of the Second Elder, butchering their way through Stork lands. Tharros was one of many sent to help stem the tide, but caught against a powerful Core Formation enemy he could only die
Impact: 6 (+0)
Cultivation: Dead
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 100 (+0)
Health: Healthy --> Dead

Theoron Strophios
Bonus: nan
Fate: Theoron used a treasure to survive his encounter with one of the Great Stork Bandits, and consequently managed to advance his cultivation to some degree, though not overmuch.
Impact: 3 (+0)
Cultivation: 10th Heavenstage (1 turns to FB)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 111 (+0)
Health: Lightly Wounded --> Healthy (End of turn) --> Badly Wounded ---> Lightly Wounded (LST) --> Healthy
 
It also granted her a single piece of its horn which it polished into a sword (+2 Impact). The Hornsword granted her no abilities, but was hard beyond any imagining and could slice through most lesser materials with ease.

@Swordomatic This seems really fitting considering that she went into the Realm with the hilt of her mother's shattered blade. Using that as a blade to a her mother's hilt would be pretty symbolic in her taking her mother's place as the new hope of the Clan.

Also, the WUXIA VIBE of reforging the broken blade and making it new and better(And i guess LOTR).

Wei Feng
Bonus: LST
Fate: Wei Feng entered the Yuan Secret Realm, and tried to enter a Core Formation Trial. It struck with sufficient force to kill him every time he tried to move through it, but Wei Feng was well used to dying at this point. He managed to solve a trial which largely involved enduring fire, and reached the end, finding a Cloud-Stepping Lotus (+6 Impact). It drank Qi instead of water, but one could pluck the petals and affix them to your feet, allowing you to run through the air as you did along the ground. New petals grew once a year, and only lasted for about an hour at a time, but they were an immense mobility advantage when used. He used the Lotus to escape, though he was struck down by a stream of Fate-Defying Poison Fire, nearly killing him even with the use of a treasure, and disabling his regenerative capabilities. He was badly wounded, but managed to nonetheless absorb a large amount of the Fire into his cultivation technique, pushing him forward by 30 years. During the Thousand Song Siege he slew another Foundation cultivator, but was largely ineffectual owing to his terrible wounds.
Impact: 21 (+6)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment 2-Pillar
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 158 (+57)
@Humbaba Good Sir, may i interest you in trying Cloud after stocking up on LSTS? Cus that is way more impact then i had when i went in. And we know now that Impact + LSTs are the really big drivers in terms of success in there

I suspect the view any Righteous Path power might have as to invading and seizing Golden Devil cities has been set back an immense amount.

Honestly the best thing. Showing them that deterrence to make it harder for them to vote for attacking us for the Jingshen.
 
@Swordomatic This seems really fitting considering that she went into the Realm with the hilt of her mother's shattered blade. Using that as a blade to a her mother's hilt would be pretty symbolic in her taking her mother's place as the new hope of the Clan.

Also, the WUXIA VIBE of reforging the broken blade and making it new and better(And i guess LOTR).
She actually told her brother to keep the broken hilt, heh.

Nothing says she couldn't have broken her father's blade when she was fleeing the Jingshen scions, though!
 
Carvos - Carvos is dragged back
Carvos is dragged back


The way home was punctuated by angry shouting from Hera as she dragged him through the desert through the streets and into his home. Hera was still scolding Carvos as she hauled him into his sickbed The man himself was still grinning despite everything that happened. After all, when he had heard of the big fight how could he not join it despite being wounded he went anyway.

" only you only you Carvos would try to fight a foundation building cultivator while WOUNDED I thought I understood you then you go and then you go and do something as moranic as this" Screeched Hera as she tied him to the bed but Carvos was not paying any attention this pain was an old foe of his one that stuck and he could not punch it but what if he could then he could fight it then...

"Carvos what are you thinking I know that slightly wider smile" interrupted Hera her voice dangerusly calm her eyebrow on her left eye already twitching in anticipation of her charges answer that she got immediately

" is it possable to punch pain te fight I am having now is not fun" he replied grin widening there was a pause the air became still and then Carvos was sent into the land of dreams by a furious Hera who was determined to beat this stupid idea out of his mind.

@ReaderOfFate here is an omake I would like a healing tresure for Carvos as bonus
 
Anuka Vatatzes
Bonus: nan
Fate: Anuka was killed in turn by drinking tea with an old woman whose son was killed by the Golden Devils for rebelling. Poisoned, she died gasping.
Impact: 1 (+0)
Cultivation: Dead
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 61 (+0)
Health: Wounded --> Dead
She didn't contribute much, and died without anyone to care, but such is the life of many a Golden Devil.
 
Corvos- The Animal Wrestling Training by Corvos
the Animal wrestling training by Carvos

Carvos grunted in pain but despite that, he was happy he was fighting he pushed against the bear's hands gripping head-sized paws like a vice. The great might bear snarled and exerted itself further causing the Battle hungry cultivator knees to buckle slightly causing pain to course through Carvos. But he did not break he did not yield he held his ground. However, that was all that he could do as he had for the afternoon he was not going to win he knew this but that did not matter he was having fun and he was learning how his body worked and to train his endurance. it was just then his knees gave way with a final roar of triumph the bear pinned him to the ground leaving both combatants panting.

" That was well done Carvos you managed to last much longer against my third strongest beast for the whole afternoon im impressed," said the beast tamer that Hera had paid for this training regime after she had caught him trying to escape from his sickbed again. Instead of the usual tirade of rage that she usually displayed, she muttered to herself about him being a hopeless moron and had dragged him to the beast tamers. were she had paid one of them to allow him to train against his might bear as long as he did not kill or wound them severely.

To ensure this and to punish him for trying to escape from his sickbed she had taken his axe away from him. Carvos had merely shrugged and had begun to wrestle the bear from weakest to strongest until his current defeat. Even so, Carvos was grinning as the bear got off him and stood back up getting up as well his only reply to the tamer was

"that was fun I would like to fight this bear again now "

the tamer merely sighed as this was the fifth time today and gestured to the bear who immediately let loose a roar in a challenge that Carvos resipricated both combatents charged towards each other and their contest of strength was joined and the air was filled with the snarls of man and beast.

@ReaderOfFate here is my last omake of the day
 
At this point, I can't see the rolling for Good Seeds who haven't had new chapters written in a while as anything but an insult. Either contact the writer and come to some sort of agreement, or put the character on ice and let the lack of progress compared to other Seeds serve as a 'punishment', if you feel one is necessary.

The mood in the Discord thread about this seems fairly upbeat, but this entire exercise just feels ghoulish to me.
 
At this point, I can't see the rolling for Good Seeds who haven't had new chapters written in a while as anything but an insult. Either contact the writer and come to some sort of agreement, or put the character on ice and let the lack of progress compared to other Seeds serve as a 'punishment', if you feel one is necessary.

The mood in the Discord thread about this seems fairly upbeat, but this entire exercise just feels ghoulish to me.
There isn't much else to do. This quest is structured to allow contributors to generate omake. If you're not doing that then you're not acting in alignment with the quest mechanics. There's an official way to acknowledge a lack of interest via Retirement. Putting a character on ice affects the other good seeds who are moving apace with the quest and showing up. It's a roleplaying quest where the penalties only really kick in after a prolonged absence of several weeks.
 
To me is just a really busy person that outside RL have to ?speed read? 400k material per turn. and roll for more than 50+ good seeds while trying to custom each fate reward and etc.

this is xianxia land that we were warned that is a deathworld. Which is one of the reasons why I build the builder as a GS that dies and pass the duty/mission to the next one. I expected a even deadly experience. and I say that giving how light (to me) the two bad rolls that they got in secret realms^^.

edit: yeah retiring the GS is pretty much the golden end in their perceptive. guaranty good life? here? this a blessing of heaven above heaven.
 
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The issue I'm seeing is that, well.

I will not and should not ever, ever write a Good Seed for this quest, because I would most likely end up getting banned from the site. If my creativity crashed, which it often does, the looming threat of consequences for a character I've invested time and effort into would send me into a neurotic death spiral, and then I'd have an ugly public meltdown somewhere in the process of watching said character die by inches due to my own mediocrity and inability to keep a muse alive.

And I may well be projecting my own issues onto a hypothetical other poster, but.
 
Abel Angelus 36 - Yuan Fate reaction Part 1

Yuan Fate reaction Part 1

No, not a club, a tube of some sort. That Devil pointed at him and with a bang a metal ball the size of a head flew out of the tube directly towards Dang. Dang scoffed, no matter what defensive arts the Devil was using he was certainly underestimating Dang if he thought a metal ball would cause him any damage no matter how fast. When it reached him he contemptuously swatted it aside with his iron fist techniq-



There was a blast of heat and light and Dang Jingshen knew no more.

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Good to know that my new explosive shells are working. I wonder why that guy attacked me out of the blue like that? Also good to see that the qi gathering arrays drains the qi out of attacks just as well as everything else. That giant fireball arrow was amazingly powerful for qi condensation. It was bigger than some formation level attacks I have seen. I consider going out and looting the treasures that guy must have had, but it isn't worth leaving my arrays. Whatever he had they will be drained like everything else around here.

"He killed Dang!" "That bastard!"

I look over at the blasted mountaintop that that guy shot at me from. I guess he was named Dang? There are now three more people on that mountain top shaking their fists at me.

They quickly learn that their qi attacks are no more effective against me surrounded by powerful qi gathering arrays than Dang's were. I am similarly limited in my offensive options against them and they are easily able to shoot my cannon balls out of the air. No chance of catching them with a surprise explosive shell then. Besides I only have one left.

I might have been better off not trying to shoot them at all because it clues them in that qi free projectiles work. Not that their arrows are much more effective; I can easily block and dodge a mundane arrow at this distance. Eventually we both give up shooting ineffective projectiles at each other.

They seem to be focusing on a ritual of some sort. They should know better by now, but it's better to be safe than sorry. I look closer using my spyglass. I recognize some of that. A Heaven Bribing Heathen Smiting Formation that's a Jingshen formation, an expensive one. They must really be angry but still what do they expect to manage with my arrays draining all the qi around this area?

I look over at my mostly completed preparation for calling down heaven's lightning for my tribulation and start doing some quick math. My body is quicker then my brain because by the time I finish my calculations I am already on my bicycle riding right off the cliff at the edge of my mountain. Before I hit the ground 3 li down I hear a deafening

Crack

Along with a light so bright that even looking away with my eye's closed It is still blinding. Then I land on the ground thankful that I had the foresight to splurge on shock absorbers for just this sort of situation. I ride away as fast as my legs and wheels can carry me. Shame about the loss of my preparation. Still even with this set back I am still coming out ahead for this trip.
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@Alectai, @TehChron, @Humbaba, @ReaderOfFate, @Kaboomatic, @No Threadmark and LST please.
 
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Constantine Nikeodemos 2 - The Mausoleum
Constantine Nikeodemos 2 - The Mausoleum

Like most of the major noble houses of the Golden Devil Clan, the Nikeodemos' power stems from two primary sources. Most prominently, of course, is their bloodline. There's no special gimmick inherent to it, but nonetheless the linage consistently proves fruitful and produces capable cultivators, which is, at the end of the day, the most basic requirement to hold any meaningful power in the Third Sea. House Nikeodemos's long and proud history of serving the Clan stretches back into antiquity, they have a pedigree of heroism and never fail a chance to display it. That being said, there are plenty of noble dynasties in the Golden Devil Clan boasting unfathomable histories, potent inheritances, and reputations for valor. Depressingly often, this does not translate into much material fortune, proud and ancient lineages hovering barely above poverty, or simply passing into the long night. House Nikeodemos doesn't boast of it in the same way they do of their martial prowess or ancient legacy, but what fundamentally sets them apart from their less fortunate peers is not their fecundity or strength, but the 600,000 total mortals that the House directly governs.

If a young Nikeodemos scion fails to match up to the expectations of his family to achieve glory through cultivation, then they are undoubtedly greatly ashamed at failing their ancestors and clan in such a manner. They are not, however, discarded into a corner to be forgotten about. Instead, the House quietly shuffles those who cannot stand in the limelight as heroes to take up the less glorious tasks that maintaining a major noble house requires. In specific, they set about governing House Nikeodemos's vast material possessions, the great stretches of land and prosperous cities all requiring guidance from upon up high to maintain order and productivity, to ensure that the wealth flows back into the coffers of the House. Taxation and mortal management are no glorious things, but they are part and parcel of maintaining the little empire the Nikeodemos' have accumulated, and it is from their efforts that the House enjoys its exalted position. And it was their ranks that Constantine long thought he was going to entire, his noted diligence and intelligence but lack of talent for cultivation earning him a nice, cozy position as a governor of some major settlement, playing his part in the constant battle to hold back the desert and serve the Clan from a nice, comfortable, safe, lazy seat of telling mortals what to do and filing paperwork.

Alas, it was not to be. Certainly, he could blame whatever bastard found that new substance the Clan had been using to boost bloodlines. It was "only" by a fifth, on a rough mathematical scale, but that was still no small boost in power and so Constantine, along with the rest of the scions who were weak enough for it to work properly, underwent the procedure at the earliest possible opportunity. For everyone else it worked as expected, but Constantine ... he was special, as it turned out. "Blessed." A decade of sandbagging undone in a single, horrible moment. Worse, the apparently drastic transformation had convinced the Elders that he must be their own version of Rina Callista, some former irrelevant bookworm suddenly gaining drastic power and now clearly set for a magnificent fate. And from there it had all spiraled - someone had the genius idea to concentrate the artifacts on his person to maximize the chances of survival and growth, as a new Single-Piller cultivator was just the shot in the arm the House needed.

It was there, Constantine groused, where the heart of the problem really laid. Face. The House had undergone tragedy before. Perhaps nothing quite so shocking and severe as losing all their Core Formation Elders at once, but tragedies and setbacks nonetheless, and they had been recovered from in due time. But that was the issue - the House didn't have centuries to pull themselves back together. Even the moment after the Trials had ended things were already in motion, with the Clan inflicting a stunning and total defeat on the Cannibals ... but one that the Nikeodemos' had been in little position to assist or take advantage of, the Harbingers of Victory having been absent from the Golden Devil's greatest triumph in recent memory. It was a humiliation, and already new, fresh bloodlines were awarded swaths of the conquered lands and turned eager eyes to the vulnerable House's vaunted privileges.

For all that ancestry and tradition defined the Clan, it was remarkably meritocratic in its governance. Your status was defined by what you provided, and the land was no exception. House Nikeodemos fundamentally ruled their miniature empire because they were effective at running it and provided significant amounts of skilled manpower. For this, they were awarded more and more land, granted greater privileges, and overall earned and kept themselves a lofty position amongst the nobility of the Golden Devil Clan for a very long time. But this could all be taken away. It had, with other, less fortunate Houses. Once the Myias and the Theodorsi had also been grand, vaunted Houses with vast demesnes, but once they lost their power, the land and the wealth didn't take long the follow.

Sertorius's breakneck ascension to Core Formation had served to stabilize the situation and stanch the bleeding of influence, but simply having one Core Elder wasn't enough to truly maintain the House's position. It had been the numbers and the consistency that truly cemented the House's status, and if they wanted to keep it, they needed to restore that prior state of affairs, if not go even further. It was a Grand Era, after all, and thus far the Nikeodemos' had been left behind. Hence, the almost obsessive focus on raising new scions. That was the reason why his family wouldn't just let Constantine slip away, not before when he had shown a glimmer of promise, and certainly not now.

Needless to say, Constantine was feeling the pressure. After a few days of 'preparation,' his new treatment and the crushing implicit expectations had gotten to him. Increasingly being driven up a wall, he had turned to the one place he was sure he could find privacy, for all he had avoided it for so long.

The Mausoleum of House Nikeodemos.

***

How to describe the Mausoleum? On an elementary level, you could call it the tombs of the clan, where they kept their deceased ancestors since evacuating the Mountains. It was very big and very deep, placed at the center of the House's grand Keep. A grand temple carved far into the sand and stone in memorial of the revered dead, twisting further and further into the ground, and always, always under expansion.

To Constantine, it was a haunting and horrifying thing. As a child, he'd had nightmares of the walls of plaques and statues to long-dead kinsmen, feeling the gazes of a thousand spirits come to punish him for disappointing his parents. He'd looked down the grand cavern in the center of the construction, upon which stairs wound around and alcoves were carved from, and saw no end the Mausoleum. In his mind, you could walk forever and only find further and further catacombs, all the while the air grew thinner and colder until it would eventually suck the life from you to join them.

His family had never understood his attitude, and eventually Constantine understood to keep such thoughts to himself. Now, however, reeling from his entire life having been turned on its head, the scion sought to touch upon the peace and purpose they all seemed to take from the place. Maybe if he meditated in the place where his ancestors rested forever, he'd be able to touch upon a fraction of the storied bravery he was now expected to emulate.

Five minutes into the descent, he was having second thoughts. Wanting to avoid the shrines set up for people to meditate at, he'd decided to go deeper, but although his feet no longer ached from the endless decline like as a kid, walking past walls so thick with plaques you couldn't see the stone behind it, avenues branching off to tombs after tombs, and of course the statues was having an effect on his resolve. It felt like those great clay armies the mortal barbaroi would construct for their chieftains, but instead of mass-produced peons to aggrandize some perished king, the mausoleum held masterfully crafting artworks depicting a great hero in the apex of their life, accumulating over thousands of years to form an endless marble legion gazing upon their descendants. If Constantine hadn't a specific destination in mind, he probably would've second-guessed himself, but he carried on.

Time felt difficult to keep track of the further you went, the only sources of light being the flickering of candles and incense, the only sound your muted footsteps and subdued breathing, the only sensation the ever-increasing sense of pressure from the depth - and the corpses of cultivators from a time when the Clan was far mightier and didn't need to melt their own deceased down for material. He'd been told that if a mortal were to traverse far enough into the crypt the sheer power emanating from the tombs would kill them and Constantine believed it.

After a while, it became too much, and he stopped for a breather and to recuperate himself. Sitting by the entrance to an unusually large sepulcher, Constantine noted the jarring gash where some treasure had been pried off the wall, like a scar from a traumatic surgery. The House could replace the decorations and cover up such distasteful sights, but grandfather insisted on leaving them - a reminder, he said, of what their failures had costed. Even Constantine, the cynic he was, felt an angry twinge at the sight of someone's final resting place defiled like that. Trying not to dwell on the matter, or if one of the treasures he now owned had perhaps come from here, the scion moved on.

At long last, he arrived at the grave of Sextus Nikeodemos. A young master who had achieved much acclaim for his accomplishments in the field despite his lack of talent at cultivation or raw power, always trying to compensate for his weakness with sheer effort and willpower. Friendly and encouraging, he'd made many relationships with his family and comrades in the field, sticking up as a notable rising star. His career had culminated in a final fit of heroics during the Great Plain War as one of the cultivators the Clan had sent as an expeditionary force, sacrificing his life to save several of his fellows from a raging blood path combatant. For his efforts, the House had commissioned a grand statue to be made of him to be placed in front of his (empty) tomb, a grand honor for someone who had never escaped Qi Condescension and a testament to what Sextus had accomplished regardless. There had been a celebration, his immediate family and many others bearing witness to the sealing of the ossuary. Constantine would always remember how proud Sextus's parents had looked seeing the effigy erected even as tears streamed down their faces, his siblings swearing to emulate his example as best as they could. It was the height of what a Nikeodemos scion could accomplish, the ultimate reward, to have your loved ones weeping proudly as a sculpture of you is placed outside your empty grave.

Sextus had also been a good friend of Constantine, although that didn't get written down on his plaque. He had sat down and comforted his nephew when a young Constantine was feeling down, introduced him to a world outside of the keep and trying to become as strong as possible. They'd shared books and traded stories, talked about what they planned to do in life. He'd had awful luck with his romantic pursuits, and although he joked about it, Constantine knew it actually bothered the scion a lot. Sextus had been the one person in the world that he'd been the most honest too, although not even he had been told the full truth about Constantine's "lack of talent," if probably suspected it. All of this ... dust in the wind. Something only Constantine remembered now, and once he inevitably perished, not even that. How was ... how was that something to be celebrated?

Looking up at the statue that Sextus had fought so hard to earn, Constantine tried to remember why he'd come here in the first place. He'd wanted to touch upon that bravery, the alien emotion that had driven his cousin to end his life for the sake of a stranger, to put himself in such danger over and over until the reaper came to collect. But staring up at that marble statue he couldn't help but ruminate on if the various flaws he saw were mistakes made in its construction, or holes that had appeared in his memory. He didn't feel any better, or braver, or anything but angry and afraid. Sextus had been a hundred times a person than his cousin, and he had died in his twenties in some foreign ditch at the hands of a blood-drunk animal. What the hell was he supposed to do? With that, Constantine came to a revelation.

He couldn't do this, not even if he'd wanted to. He didn't want to die, not anywhere but his own bed after a good, peaceful life. It didn't matter how much it shamed his family, he wasn't going to sacrifice himself so that his House could keep its vaunted position. They could find some other shmuck to take up the mantle of chasing that Callista girl's shadow, because he was -

"Hey."

Constantine's soliloquy came to an abrupt end as he whirled around in a heart-stopping moment where he believed somebody had somehow heard his thoughts. Standing awkwardly to the side was Decius, the House's previous favorite prodigy and Constantine's older brother. They had never been close, and needless to say after Constantine underwent the procedure, things had become strained. For a moment, lurid, paranoid predictions of some kinda revenge plot out of a bad novel being enacted whirled in the scion's brain before he was able to calm his startled mind and restore sanity. Instead, there was just a long moment where the two waited for the other to say something, and after a few false starts, Decius managed to go.

"I, uh, wanted to apologize. And give you this." He said, stepping forward, sending Constantine through another confused double-take."

"Oh, no, it's okay-" Constantine tried to protest, knowing that really he should be the one apologizing for running his brother's dream when he didn't even want to do this in the first place.

"No, I insist." Decius continued more confidently, holding up an object Constantine didn't immediately recognize - a token of some sort? "I've been acting immaturely for far too long and intended to keep this to myself. But after thinking about it, I realized I was being selfish and foolish, sabotaging the future of the House for my own gain." He pressed the token into his brother's hand, which Constantine limply accepted, still not understanding quite what was going on.

"This really isn't necessary, Decius," he protested, trying to future out what was going on, but his sibling was on a roll and barreled on.

"It - it is. I need," oh imperator is he crying "to make amends to a lot of people, but you were the most important among them. It cost the House and myself a ... great deal to get the invitation, but you're the best person suited to use it." Decius almost seemed ready to go for a hug, but thankfully managed to pull himself together before things got too painfully awkward.

"Look, it's okay. It really is, I never held a grudge about it." Constantine reassured his brother, trying to help him calm down. "I'll, uh, make sure to prize this forever!" At that, Decius seemed to brighten, and gave his brother a shaky smile.

"Thank you, Constantine." There was another long silence, and finally, Decius turned to go, but not without one final message. "Good luck - I'm sure you'll make it." Wait, what.

Now more than a little concerned, the scion waited for his sibling to disappear into the distance before furiously trying to figure out what on earth he had just made a heartfelt promise to accept. It didn't seem to be some kind of dangerous object, and it wasn't until he realized what the barbarian markings on the token meant that it all clicked together in one horrific realization.

It said Yuan.

And that's when Constantine's heart fucking stopped.

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The issue I'm seeing is that, well.

I will not and should not ever, ever write a Good Seed for this quest, because I would most likely end up getting banned from the site. If my creativity crashed, which it often does, the looming threat of consequences for a character I've invested time and effort into would send me into a neurotic death spiral, and then I'd have an ugly public meltdown somewhere in the process of watching said character die by inches due to my own mediocrity and inability to keep a muse alive.

And I may well be projecting my own issues onto a hypothetical other poster, but.
I mean, I feel for you. But like…
You can wipe away the penalty by just writing a single omake. Just throwing down a thousand words per turn is enough to get you a bonus every time, a small multiplier to tilt things in your character's favor a bit, and hold off that penalty. Everything after that is just to increase the multiplier.

It's extremely easy to keep a good seed alive if you're not ambitious with them. A minimum of effort suffices. This punishment for absence is for characters whose players have completely abandoned the quest.
 
And I may well be projecting my own issues onto a hypothetical other poster, but.
Yeah you
You kind of are.

After all, its not like you need more than 2 to 3 hundred words to keep your seed alive, to gain a bonus, a healing treasure or an LST or something else.

Occi's not just gonna drop people's seeds unless they ask, otherwise what happens if they take a few months off and want to come back to write an omake?
 
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