Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Maria 28 - Dodging Echoes (Part Six)
Dodging Echoes (Part Six)
Maria Turn 10 Seventh Omake

"So who else?"

"From here? Us, some Flood Dragons, a few Divine Sabers-"

"Euugh."

"I know, I know, but it is what it is. Anyway, a couple of Strength Purity, Ganbei's squad from the Drunkards, and some itinerants."

"…That's it?! I thought all the sects were putting people forward!"

"The promise of the Righteous, Pris. Buys you a cup of bad wine as long as you've got two obols."

"Still. What's the excuse?"

"The usual. Big push coming, they must conserve their numbers, blah blah blah."

"This. This is why Strength Purity has no vassals. If we had to deal with this shit every day, we'd snuff them out too."

"Stow it," growled Draconis. Priscian and Cecilia shared a knowing glance and shut up. Nikolas, being Nikolas, didn't seem to understand.

"But. Sarge. Come on. It's ridiculous."

"You want to know what's ridiculous, legionnaire? Getting an order from a superior officer to shut your mouth and then keeping talking."



Maria snorted with amusement. 'Conis had to make captain soon. He was just too good at talking down to people to stay where he was. She couldn't have pulled that off as well. Not when she agreed with it. Might honestly be the most insightful thing she'd ever heard out of Cecilia's mouth. Not that it was true of all of them; there were enough examples of decent, reliable cultivators to undercut that generalization pretty cleanly. But Gutless Heaven, the way they ran their sects…



They'd moved out an hour ago, ten miles behind the Drunkards so as to break up their numbers. Keep them from losing everyone at once if they got hit. The Flood Dragons would follow on after them, then the rest. Not the swiftest strategy in the world, but anything that got to the Caravan would be an improvement. The stealth arrays emblazoned on their shields and armour should keep them away from the prying eyes of the Noble Knowledge Sect.

Hopefully.

Still. Best they be quick. And Draconis was probably right to keep them quiet. She dropped her own head a little and sped up.



The no-man's land between the Line and the meat grinder that was the front had only gotten bleaker since the last time she'd seen it, which wasn't surprising. That seemed to be the constant, out here. Gradually, entropy wore down the wreckage of towns, villages, cities, and the open wounds of battlefields until everything was grey and blunted, all texture smoothed out by the wind and colour bleached away by the sun. Even now, in the cold pre-dawn light, it felt dull and colourless. This was what war was like, for the foot soldiers of the great powers. Baring witness to the havoc your seniors wrought, and praying to any God that might listen they wouldn't wreak it on you. The thought drained the humour from her.



They went on in silence for another two hours, flitting from wreckage to wreckage, until at last the rendezvous slithered out of the darkness. Not a very special place; the corpse of some small-town granary, ceiling collapsed long ago. Then again, that's probably why it'd been picked. She brought a hand up for stillness, and the squad froze.

Thin edge of adrenaline ran through her. She let it pass. No need to lose her temper just yet. Instead, she lay down her shield, stepped away from it, and carefully, gently, flared her qi.

Counted the seconds, trying not to hold her breath.

One. Two. Three…

Felt the counterflare. Once, twice, pause, then a third.

She responded – two more flares.

One last response.

Breathed out.

"Clear," she murmered, gathering her shield back up again and feeling the stealth array wrap around her like a shroud. "Let's go."



And then they ghosted inside one after another. The inside wasn't much better than the outside – nothing more than a circular wall and the splintered beams of the roof – but she had to admit, any cover was better than the grim exposure outside. Besides, she could see stealth arrays smeared roughly over every free surface. Crude as hell. Even she could tell that. But they'd work.

Ganbei was perched opposite the entrance, legs crossed, her unit sprawled around her barring two working a portable still.

"Paleface."

Maria smiles a little.

"Pisshead. Got here okay?"

"Mmm. No contact. You?"

"Nothing."

"Good. Caravan's due in four hours, everyone else is coming in after you. Settle in. My darlings can teach you humble desert charmers how to drink."



They didn't, but only because Maria wouldn't let them. Instead, her squad had started setting up rough defences. Nikolas was rescribing the stealth arrays – apparently too horrified by their inefficiency to let them pass – and Cecilia was trying to teach one of the Drunkards how to play Ludus. It was going about as well as could be expected.

She'd traded a few more affectionate barbs with Ganbei, then settled herself on the far side of the granary, pulling out 'On the Nature of the Flame.' Tempted as she was to try the contemplation of a single point again, she couldn't risk it. All it would take was one lucky divination and they were done. The manual was the next best thing.



Time passed. The others filtered in, one by one. Flood Dragons. Divine Sabers (Liming shooting her the faintest nod – Maria freezing, before nodding back. The closest either one could manage to courtesy.) Then –



Are you fucking kidding me?



Shanshu's sharp, lined face amongst the robed and shrouded itinerants like a spark among tinder. Her eyes flickered about the room before settling on Maria. She froze. Then her lips curled downwards, and she looked away.

The manual in Maria's hands was suddenly a foul, cloying weight. She had to force herself not to drop it. No. No, she would not be ashamed of this. If the old bitch didn't want to teach her, that was one thing, but she couldn't stop Maria learning. She'd paid for this, not stolen it. Something like defiance drove her head back down, and set her eye ripping along the pages.

Her teeth were clenched, she realised suddenly. Clenched so hard she could feel the muscles in her jaw spasming. Gods. Of all the fucking missions, why did she-



Stop that.

She blinked again.

Oh, you're talking to me now, are you?

She has done nothing wrong. Or do we measure all actions by whether or not you like them, now?

Silent. Completely silent. For months. And that's the first thing you say to me.

Stop whining.

Where the fuck have you been!?




There was an uncomfortable pause.

Protecting you.

In total fucking silence?!

It's – complicated.

Well, that's nice to hear. Complicated. Lovely. Thank you.

Stop whining I said. I'm back, aren't I?

And that's all the explanation I get? You were protecting me, its complicated, stop whining? Gods, you're a fucking asshole.

You don't understand.

No! No, I clearly don't.

Maria-

And her! Her you defend?! The cow who-

Was right that you turned away from something and now there were consequences to that?




Another uncomfortable silence.

Shut up.

No.

Bastard.

Probably.




The old joke just pissed her off more. She sat on the anger. Tried to focus on the book. Lasted all of five seconds.

What do you mean protecting me?

Something was going to hurt you. I had to make it stop.

What?


It didn't answer. She gritted her teeth around a frustrated snarl.

Red, I swear to every God there is, I will fucking hurt you somehow. What was going to hurt me?

Still nothing. But it was a different type of silence, now. The silence of an unspoken secret, not separation.

…Fine. Fuck you.



She went back to the book, fighting back a growl as she went.



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Priscian felt them before anyone else. His face stilled. Tilted up slowly.

"Incoming," he murmured.

The other sensors in the room had done similar, faces turning towards the door.

Right on time.



And then the caravan came through.



She'd figured it was going to be bad earlier. If the escort had been thinned out, then gods alone knew how badly they'd hit the mortals. But this… this beggared belief. There had been seven hundred refugees expected.

Only sixty were still alive.

Four cultivators led them inside, wrapped in rags and loose cloaks. She couldn't make out their allegiance. Then again, did it matter now?



One of them, tall, dark-haired, exhausted on a level so profound it radiated off him, yet somehow still smiling, stepped forward.

"Hi," he said. "Guessing you're the cavalry?"

"Fuck," muttered Draconis. Maria nodded.



Ganbei rose. Diplomacy in situations like this tended to fall to the Drunkards. They had the least enemies.

"That'd be us, alright," she said. "Mixed bag. Hope you don't mind. I'm Ganbei."

"Grinning Jin, currently," replied the escort. "Or Book of Names. Might know that better."

The Flood Dragons sat up at that, muttering to each other.

"…The Book of Names?" asked one of them. The man nodded, still smiling.

"Yeah."

"…Huh."



"You're a Flood Dragon, then," said Ganbei.

"Yeah."

Her brow furrowed a little. There was the briefest flicker of qi flares as they signed and countersigned.

"…Shit."

"Yeah."

"What happened?"

"Altar," said Names. "Commander Divine Strike did his best, but… well. Eight of them, one of him, do the math."

Eight. Fuck.



There was the quietest squeak from behind Names, and he turned.

" 'S okay," he murmured, voice gentle. " 'S okay. They're friends."

Something small and pale lunged into his arms, and he cradled it as he rose again. It was the girl. Smaller somehow than Maria had expected, and she hadn't been over-estimating. Wu Diao Shi was tiny. Malnutrition, maybe, she thought. Or just… blood, maybe. Bloodlines could be complicated. Either way, her little face was glancing around fearfully at the assemblage.

It made sense. After all this, there probably wasn't much more frightening for her than a cultivator.



"Names," she whispered.

"It's okay," said the Flood Dragon again. "I know. But they're here to help. They're going to get us somewhere safe."

"Yes!" Said Ganbei. She had her best "mad-but-friendly auntie" voice on. Gods alone knew how it must have come off, because Shi recoiled like a viper had been waved in her face. "Friendly. That's us. Good, friendly, responsible-"

"I don't like her," muttered the child.

"…Eh. You should. I'm very charming after a glass or two of Baijiu. Would you- no. Child." Ganbei was visibly flailing for words. "Perhaps a light rice wine?"



Gods. Alright. Maria wasn't good with grown ups, but she knew kids, and this was clearly only going to get worse.

"Hey," she said. The broken-glass burr had grown up in her throat. Shi squeaked again. Maria stood, slowly, letting the girl see her empty hands as she came. When finally she drew level, she bent at the waist a little, putting her face to face with Shi.

"I'm Maria," she said, simply. "You okay?"

Shi considered that for a long moment, eyes drifting warily across her face. She'd have to be careful, here. The kid had seen things that no-one should. Maria couldn't patronise her, but neither could she come on too strong, either, or she'd turtle and that would be that.

"…No," said Shi eventually.

"Makes sense," said Maria. "We're friends of Names."

"Jin," said Shi.

"Yeah?"

"He killed him and took his name, and put it in his book. So he's Jin. Grinning Jin."

Maria nodded slowly.

"He has a lot of names?"

"I think so."

"Okay. I've only got one."

"Yes. You said." Shi kept staring. Something calculating had entered her gaze.

"Have you killed people?"

"Yes." No flinching, no screwing around. Be direct.

"Are you good at it?"

"Killing people? Yeah. Very."

"She actually is, it's really quite upsetting," chirped Ganbei. Maria kicked her without turning away.

"Won't kill you, though," she said. "Jin would stop me, for one. I'll just kill anyone he tells me to. And my friends-" pointing back towards the squad, all watching, "will do the same. They have to do what I say because I'm in charge."

Another long pause. Shi was looking at the squad. Then she turned back to Names.

"Do you believe her?"

"Think I do," said Names, grinning wryly.

Shi nodded.

"Alright then. Thank you," she said to Maria.

"You're welcome."



She straightened, and looked at Names.

"You want to talk tactics?"

He gave her a long, searching look. Then that ever-present grin broadened a hint.

"Yeah. Sure."

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Really do not like this arc now. At all. @Kaboomatic @Alectai @ReaderOfFate , may I please have a threadmark for this piece of shit?
 
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Xiao Yingzi 22 - [Turn 9] [A Lifechanging Battle]
Mostly just something I wrote for fun. It does demonstrate Xiao Yingzi with her spear-boost and without her spear-boost.

Xiao Yingzi 22
[Turn 9]
[A Lifechanging Battle]

"Shield-sister," A voice called out to her. She glanced up to see a well-muscled man walking towards her. Like her, he was wielding a spear and swinging it casually to warm up. "Would you be the centurion known as Xiao Yingzi?"

"That would be me," She answered, pushing off from the ground and stepping up to get a better look. She took a moment to look around and see the other centurions watching the exchange but making sure there was some distance between them. "Who would I be speaking to?"

"I am Regimand of Taurus," He placed the spear on the ground and turned to her with a grin. "Your shield-siblings have claimed that you have immense skill with the spear? I wish to speak with you!"

"The Taurus family is renowned for its skill with the spear among many other skills," She complimented him, extending a hand to him. He certainly had the Taurus bronzed physique and his cultivation was even with hers. "It is always good to meet a fellow student."

"May I join you and exchange pointers?" He asked, clasping her hand. "True masters of the spear are rare even here where it is a favored weapon. I must compare notes."

"It would be my honor," Xiao Yingzi replied and nodded. "I had just finished my warm up. Perhaps a spar?"

Grinning, he tightened his hold on your hand. Then without warning, he swung his spear at her causing her to dodge but with his iron grip, it was difficult to move and left her in an exposed position.

As he brought down his spear once more, she swung at his hand causing him to jump back with a smirk. Xiao Yingzi took that moment to adjust and then they were both facing one another, waiting for the other to attack.

Then, almost as one, they moved to clash.

She was faster than him, unburdened by the Blood of Bronze and her spear struck his flesh. He had the Blood and likely expected to be able to take it, but her spear was sharp. He felt the thin blade of bronze dig into his wrist and jumped back in surprise.

She leapt after him, trying to take advantage of his distraction. Then as soon as he landed, Regimand immediately pushed forward, managing to strike her with his thrusting spear. This time it was her who stepped aside, knowing that he could take more damage than her because of his strong bloodline.

As his spear tasted empty air, she thrust forward herself, stabbing him in the thigh and sending him sprawling. Using the bronze edge of her spear, she aimed towards his throat - a quick jab to demonstrate her victory when he rolled aside and jumped upwards, raising a hand up in the air.

One of the other centurions threw a shield at him and he caught it without looking away from her, inclining his head slightly in acknowledgement. She did the same and waited until he had equipped the shield, then once more they stood against each other waiting for the other to move.

And together they leapt at each other, him with a shield now but her with only a spear. The battle was closer now, and they clashed for a few minutes burning qi to increase their strength and speed to keep up with the other.

She was running out of breath when she finally threw herself forward with a spear thrust, hoping to end the battle quickly. His bronze spear dug into her ribs as she reached him and he held up his shield between her and him.

She then moved to the left, away from the edge of the spear but he managed to push her back with the shield. For a moment, she found herself in the air before she quickly righted herself and stabbed her spear to stop herself.

She landed, taking a moment to gather her strength. The bronze edge of his spear had stabbed into her ribs and had caused a small wound. It wasn't serious and easy to ignore but there was a steady stream of blood flowing down now.

She looked up and saw her opponent looking at her with an eyebrow raised. "You aren't fighting me seriously, are you?" He asked her, shaking his head. "With my shield, I am at full strength at least in terms of martial arts but you are still holding something back, aren't you?"

Xiao Yingzi sighed. "Yes," She agreed, getting back into her stance. The whispers of the spear filled her mind, telling her the best method to defeat him. "But that stops now."

He nodded appreciatively before steeling himself. Once more, they waited for the other to move. This would be the final clash, they both knew it. A part of her felt like she was almost savoring this moment, enjoying the kinship this battle brought between her and the centurion. It wasn't something that she experienced often.

Their previous clashes meant that she knew what he could do and he knew what she was capable of. But he had no understanding of what she could become with the spear guiding her. Her instincts urged her forward, and the whispers of the spear urged her to throw caution to the wind, to challenge him with her full might.

He took a careful stance, with the shield covering his body and his bronze spear pointing towards her. Heeding the whispers of the spear, she didn't bother with a feint or some form of technique. Instead after drawing out as much qi as she could in an instant, she rushed him.

She snarled as she moved and he froze, taken aback by her sudden ferocity. It was a momentary freeze, one from which he recovered quickly. However, she was already in front of him and too close to reach with his spear. Her free hand slipped underneath his shield and with a pull, she wrenched it open.

His shield flew open and as he struggled to stop her, his eyes twitching in the manner that suggested his thoughts were racing farther than his body. Rather than use her spear, because she knew he'd be able to react in time, she brought her free hand up again and lightly touched his chest.

A light spark jumped from her to him at the moment of contact, a mere hint of her finishing blow. He froze at the sensation, even though it was merely a cosmetic effect. Before Xiao Yingzi could say anything, he lost his balance and collapsed up the floor. She looked down at him and gave a smile. "I believe that is my victory." She told him dryly, holding out her hand for him.

He blinked for a few moments trying to understand what just occurred, before sighing and giving her a smile back. "Yes, it is." He replied, grabbing her hand and pulling himself up. "Good match."

Xiao Yingzi inclined her head. "Good match."
 
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Minervina Barda 25 - The wrath of the Memory Stealing Shade
Minervina Barda 25: The wrath of the Memory Stealing Shade

Jingshen Hui 'Mist Turtle' Lui was a respected member of his Clan. An Expert of three centuries standing, he had seen all manner of horrors emerge from the blood-soaked desert to haunt his family and its domain. In all that time he had stood as an unflinching bulwark, shielding his juniors so fearlessly he was nicknamed after one of the most durable Spirit Beasts known to his people. It had been his great honour to be given charge of protecting this city and its valuable mines from all of the Clans many enemies.

Today, his hands shook. He clamped down on the motion almost instantly, but he feared the Disciples who brought him the news saw it.

"Another sighting?" He asks again as if it might change the answer.

"Yes my lord, the Dark Lady was seen down on by the market again. The commoners are terrified, most of them only remember going to bed yesterday. It seems most of them have lost between 12 and 16 hours to the Memory Demon."

There was an awkward pause, and Lui could almost feel the collective will of the Disciples urging their spokesman on. Sweat heavy on his brow, he bows lower and clasps his hands together in a great show of subservience.

"Honoured Master, this Disciple fears he must ask that Senior take action. This spirit is clearly beyond the means of mere Qi Condensation disciples to contain. We are…. Uncertain… how many times we have tried and failed now. Disciples Long and Hanying are unable to even rise from their rooms anymore, so muddied have their thoughts become. We fear the damage might well be permanent at this point."

With clearly rehearsed motions all twenty of Lui's strongest disciples put their palms together and shouted the ritual request. "JUNIOR ASKS FOR SENIORS GUIDANCE."

Lui sighed, looking at his beloved students, many were nephews or cousins, he certainly viewed them all with the proud eye of a father. He rose from his meditative pose, taking up a huge trident of white jade in his left hand and answering his followers salute with his left. He was the image of an indomitable warrior, more solid than stone. "Senior hears your pleas, sleep easy and be about your duties, know that I will personally take up the hunt and banish this fiend."

After much applause, praise and jubilation, the Disciples disperse, content in knowing that the problem would soon be resolved.

Lui on the other hand visibly sagged once he was sure he was alone. He leaned heavily on his trident, taking a moment to rest his head on its cool surface. What the Disciples didn't realise was that this was the fourth time they had asked him to step in and intervene.

He trembled, centuries of iron discipline undermined. "At least, I remember them asking at least four times…."

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Minervina had not been having a fun time lately. The city was increasingly on high alert, with the guards and locals starting to get more than a little jumpy. Feints and maneuvres by other Golden Devil Experts had drawn away much of the local Jingshen garrison, which should have made her job easier, but it was like every set of eyes in the city was constantly on the lookout for infiltrators. It wasn't a large town and most of the locals knew each other on sight. Without advanced stealth or disguise techniques, she had been spotted dozens of times already. On each occasion only deploying her various mental poisons had allowed her to escape without bloodshed.

As a result, the locals were increasingly terrified and confused. Most of the mortal population had taken to shunning the streets entirely, and the local Cultivators refused to move in groups of less than a dozen for fear of encountering the terrifying Memory Stealing Spirit. Which did make snooping around at least a little easier, though it did mean the sentries were very much on guard.

It had taken two weeks of ineptly skulking around the mining compound by night and squatting amongst the penniless residents of the cities slums during the day, but Minervina finally thought she had everything in place. Sneaking a note into Magnus's depressingly opulent rented mansion had been simple enough. She departed the humble apothecary hut she had been sleeping in on midnight of her 15th day in the city with a few kind words for the woman that ran it along with a handful of minor medicinal pills for her failing kidneys.

Getting to the mining compound only took another dozen doses of mental venom. Over the last few nights, she had painstakingly planted a dozen small containers full of carefully prepared hallucinogen all over the area. Each was marked with a variation on the spell seal she used for the Deathly Opiate Orchestra, one that allowed her to inscribe a time delay before the effect would activate.

The compound was still and silent as she made her final approach, wary sentries on the walls and gatepost keeping a weather eye out for intruders of all sorts. The air had an expectant hum as if the Jingshen Cultivators had been waiting for some kind of assault for a long time now.

"Well, it's probably not going to play out quite as they expected." Calling on all the power of her Late Stage Foundation, the Poison Mistress snapped her fingers and sent forth a subtle, but profound, wave of power. At this invisible signal, the dozens of carefully prepared cauldrons burst open, spilling her latest masterpiece into the air.

Six Silk Veils of Mourning or as it was more commonly called 'Confusion Concoction' was a recipe she had only ever found referenced in the Scarlet Crow Scroll. She believed it had once been a speciality of her branch of the Clan, and now that she could observe its power in a live test she could see why it was such a closely kept secret. Colourless, odourless and almost tasteless, it travelled quickly through the air and even only a few mouthfuls would have devastating effects on Qi Condensation Disciples. Its efficacy against Foundation Establishment Experts varied somewhat depending on Dao and Consitution, but even a Peak Expert should have only a scant few minutes before he is addled beyond easy recovery.

If all it did was fog the mind, it would be a valuable but far from unique recipe. Properly brewed Barda lineage Confusion Concoction did far more though. It drastically heightened the victim's stress and fright response, all while subtly twisting their perceptions so that just about anything that moves will register as a lethal threat.

The first screams and Qi explosions signalled the success of the Poison Witche's strategem as she slowly and carefully made her way through the servant's entrance. Its two guardians were far too busy fighting each other in an increasingly spectacular duel to notice her.

"These Jingshen do love their flashy tools," She remarked under her breath as one guard lost an arm to his companions flying sword. Fortunately for him, the sword was gleaming with magmatic heat, so the wound cauterised instantly. His erstwhile clanmate was less fortunate, as he was torn apart by a single-use talisman that looked something like an exploding ball of barbed wire.

Similar scenes played out all around her as she descended through the Jingshen stronghold. She would have to be quick, the Concoctions primary flaw, beyond being ruinously expensive and time-consuming to craft, was that the effects wore off fairly quickly. Her previous forays into the compound had only penetrated so far, so she wasn't entirely certain of the Drills location, but she had a general idea. She took to the stairs and kept going down, past more and more scenes of chaos and slaughter. She took a moment to feel sorry for the Jingshen's mortal servants, they would no doubt make up the majority of tonight fatalities, but in the end, it couldn't be helped. While the Golden Devils rightly went to great lengths to safeguard their mortal vassals, Minervina would happily exchange a dozen of her enemies employee's for one Bronze Blessed life.

Eventually, she reached the mineshafts deep below the fortress, and from there it was a simple task to find the Drill. A towering monstrosity of a thing, it was still running even in the wee hours of the night and the violent grating sound it made as it chewed through the raw veins of Spirit Stone led her to its location. It was a whirling column of white jade, gold filigree and a masterwork of finely carved arrays and spiritual craftsmanship, she took a moment to take it in before she set about trying to despoil it.

She was so distracted by her artistic admiration that she almost didn't notice the hulking presence in the corner of the room. Only almost. She kept her distracted pose, curious if the Righteous Cultivator would throw away his pride and attempt an ambush. Emilia lingered and roiled just under her skin, ready to pounce at the slightest aggressive motion.

Hui Lui ground his shimmering stone trident into the dirt of the mineshaft, frustration and hate tainting his melodic voice. "What brings you here Devil. Your charade might have got you this far, but I will permit you to take not one more step forward, even if I must spend my life in the effort. You know your kind are unwelcome in this land. How dare you crawl out of your blood-soaked abyss to bring your black arts to bear on my juniors. I will grind your bones into dust and send them back to your infernal fortress to let them know my Clan will not tolerate such insults."

Since it was clear that the Jingshen Expert wasn't inclined to attack without a chance for the traditional exchange of insults Minervina turns to face him. She placed her hands casually on her hips and a curious expression on her face. She quickly notes a band of blue silk on his arm that's slowly turning black, a powerful protective charm designed to block poisons of all sorts, she judged it to be the work of a Core Formation Elder. A truly heavenly treasure. Her venoms would need time to sap its reserves of Qi.

Well, witty banter wasn't her strong point, but it only seemed fair to take the Jingshen man up on the offer. Besides Magnus should be along shortly, and his support should remove any doubt from the contest.

"Did you think us 'demons' deaf, dumb and blind? Do you not think we count every stone that flows down the Scorpion Road? Every Pill and Treasure that comes back up from the Plains? Did you think your high and mighty little family could sit here in your pitiful fortresses forever, stockpiling the means to destroy us at a whim and that we would simply do nothing? Perhaps you thought that the shared stench of the Righteous Path would serve to ward off the predators in the night? That the likes of Strength Purity and Sabre Palace would stir themselves from their ivory thrones to aid you?" Her smile was a wicked thing, if the man wanted to see her as a demon, Minervina was more than happy to play the part. "Well, your minders are busy with their own problems and now the time has come to see who is strong enough to claim this desert for their own."

"Every word that drips from your mouth is just another venomous lie." The prideful warrior hisses. "Fitting at least for the so-called Poison Witch of the Golden Devils. Oh yes, we know who you are." He lifts his talisman wrapped arm, its length stained roughly one-fifth black. "My Elders had the forethought to give me everything I need to defend this Drill from pests like you. Now, I will give you this one chance, Witch. Break your spell, free my Juniors from your black arts and flee. I might yet look the other way while you run back into the wastelands you call home."

'Ahh' Minervina thought to herself 'So that's why he turned down the chance at a cheap shot in favour of all these theatrics.'

There had been the slightest wobble in the warrior's tone on the word 'juniors.' He must genuinely care about at least some of the hapless disciples killing each other up there. She watched the black trickle another millimetre up the enchanted sash and made a decision. The time for talking was over, better to rile him up and see if she could encourage a mistake.

"I'm terribly sorry" She lied "Theirs no cure when the malady is this far along. Looks like your oh so wise Elders did a better job watching out for you than you did for them." She saw terrible pain cross his features and recognised it immediately, it was a pain she was deeply familiar with after all. The agony of letting down your juniors. She knew just how to twist the knife.

She shrugged her shoulders casually, twisted her lips into a mocking grin and said lightly "If only they had put someone competent in charge here, they might have lived."

The hurled trident came at her faster than the mortal eye could follow. It flew with far more than mere physical force behind it. It hit the stone tunnel wall with the force of a charging dragon. The impossibly loud crack of impact could be felt all through the city a half-mile above them and the resulting cloud of choking dust and flying fragments would have crippled any first realm cultivator in seconds.

Minervina however, had not been a first realm Cultivator for nigh on a century, she predicted the rage-fuelled attack and sidestepped it with casual grace. A swirling cloud of mist summoned by her Water Pillar suppressed the debris and left her unhampered. Sharp devil eyes latched on to Hui Lui, who looked to be in the process of mystically conjuring his weapon back to his hand.

"I'm pretty sure we were supposed to have a bit more back and forth before the exchange of pointers? I'm sorry, I don't know how you Righteous guys usually play these games." As she speaks the Golden Devil crushes the Ash-Born Viper Pearls she has been keeping hidden in her palms since she walked into the chamber.

Her Vipers had evolved once more as her power began to scrape at the boundaries of the Great Circle realm. Where before they were substantial constructs made of spite and venom, now her completed Circles of Flesh and Soul could affect a far more complete transformation.

Two serpents as broad as wagon wheels and over thirty metres long sprang from her outstretched palms. They were living, stinking creatures made of powerful flesh and bone bound in granite-tough scales. Their eyes gleamed with feral intelligence and their fangs and short horns radiated the power of her Death Pillar.

The serpents initial impact more than rivalled that of the Jinghsen trident and they were canny enough to pincer the bulky warrior, preventing him from dodging. They smashed the enemy Cultivator several metres into the stone wall before setting about him with their fangs.

Minervina drew her sword from her spatial pouch and called forth an aura of black flame. "Since you were thoughtful enough to offer me my life. I'll return the favour. Stay down and Old Jingshen has one less expert to replace today."

Hui Lui''s enraged cry was all the answer she needed as his hands, glowing with emerald power, emerged from underneath the massive snakes. Somehow he had gotten a grip on each of the serpents throats and with a mighty effort, he snapped both their spines in a single motion before casting their broken remains aside. He was covered in wounds, the horns and fangs of the serpents having scored a dozen hits or more. The Sash was still suppressing the venom, though it was now three-quarters black and growing more stained by the moment.

Still roaring defiance, Hui Lui wrapped himself in a cloak of stones and came at the slender poison mistress with the power of an avalanche. Crude arrays in the ceiling of the shaft flared, and spat sparks, desperately trying to prevent a cave in, but neither Cultivator could afford to hold back.

Stone armour met netherflame, and the stone cracked, withered and flaked away. However much he struggled, Lui couldn't land a blow on the Devil woman, whose movements flowed like water. Every crack of her sword on his armour almost rent it asunder and putting his hands into the greasy flames that cloaked her was bitterly painful, despite the protection from his Sash. He lost track of everything but the next attack, confident that he could end this if he could only get his hands on the slighter combatant.

Minervina on the other hand kept a close eye on that Poison Suppressing Sash. Keeping pace with a peer cultivator who focused on close combat was eating through her Qi reserve at a rapid pace, but the treasure was reaching its limit much faster.

As the fight reached a pivotal point, Minervina seemed to launch an attack powered by pure desperation. A single sword slash with all her weight behind it landed on Lui's stone armoured brow, shattering his earthen armour and dazing him. However, the wild strike had pulled the Devil off balance, leaving Lui with the chance he had been looking for. He thrust out with both hands and surged forward, intent on grappling the slippery woman.

The witch slapped him with her off-hand, gouging three long lines into his exposed face with her nails, but he gladly took the blow in exchange for putting his hands around her throat. With a roar of victory, he prepared to snap her neck just like he had her conjured servants. Finally, he could rid his town of this Demon and then rush to save what he could of his beloved juniors.

Only, nothing happened.

His muscles froze as if his veins had turned into ice. His QI refused to flow and even the seven Dao Pillars that resided in his soul seemed weakened. It felt as if they might shatter at the slightest gust of wind. Despair seized him as he realised what must have happened, but he couldn't even turn his head to see the ragged remains of his life-saving treasure sloughing off his arm as it turned into worthless scraps of stained cloth.

Minervina let out a long, slow whistle as she eased out of Lui's frozen grip. "I gotta admit, your Elder didn't half-ass that talisman of yours." She waved the fingers of her left hand at him, his blood still glistening on the nails. "Even after absorbing everything else, it blocked the brunt of three doses of Core Formation Scorpion venom. You even have a good chance of surviving, if your heart doesn't give out before the paralysis wears off." She leaned close and tapped the unmarred side of his face in a fond gesture. He teetered from side to side under the gentle pressure, his consciousness starting to fail. "Stay strong! I'm rooting for you. If you do survive, tell the Jingshen higher-ups that the long days of milk and honey are over, the Devils are coming to haunt their nightmares." That was the last thing Hui 'Mist Turtle' Lui heard before he slipped into oblivion.


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As dawn rose on the wounded city, Minervina was already well outside the walls. She turned to look back on the place with an almost fond expression. After the impromptu duel, the ritual to poison the Drill had gone off without a hitch, and Magnus had shown up eventually, a little late but equipped to do his part. Hopefully, the Drill would be out of commission for several years.

She tapped her spatial bag fondly as she turned towards the horizon and started the long trek home. She had even had time to loot the place on her way out. The bounty of Core Formation Spirit Stones she found in that overseer's office was going to fund her advancement for a long time.

She hadn't been greedy, she had left one of the valuable stones out where Magnus would find it. He deserved the bonus for all his hard work on the Qi Venom, even if he had been late to the party at the end.

She didn't feel the slightest bit guilty about pocketing the other eight though. She had climbed through literal shit for this mission, and she deserved to be rewarded appropriately.

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Another 3500 words, this one fought me every step of the way, but I think I am close to a personal best for wordcount per turn and we aren't even at the Trials yet.

@LordEdric That's the last part of the Drill Attack. Let me know if anything doesn't fit what you wrote before or if you want me to change anything.

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If all it did was fog the mind, it would be a valuable but far from unique recipe. Properly brewed Barda lineage Confusion Concoction did far more though. It drastically heightened the victim's stress and fright response, all while subtly twisting their perceptions so that just about anything that moves will register as a lethal threat.

Congrats, you made fear toxin, Scarecrow Poison Witch

Another 3500 words, this one fought me every step of the way, but I think I am close to a personal best for wordcount per turn and we aren't even at the Trials yet.

@LordEdric That's the last part of the Drill Attack. Let me know if anything doesn't fit what you wrote before or if you want me to change anything.

@no. @Kaboomatic @ReaderOfFate Threadmark please!
3.5k and my best doesn't reach 2k. I like the battle scene with the drill. It works nicely.

Are you going to save Juniors again this trial?
 
[X] Spirit Oasis

That was one of the places we tried to support some rebels against the Cannibals, and which the Jingshen took over (and probably stomped and pacified) after the war.

I want to know more about it. I want to know what it's like.

How are the people there doing under Jingshen rule? Are they discontent? Are they content? Are there rebels? Or did Jingshen Clan, because it was going to be a big moneymaker of a province, decide to very thoroughly pacify it and make sure it would be unfeasible for it to break away?

People've mused about getting the Heavenly Bandit Kingdoms or the Grand Scorpion Sect to break away from the Jingshen, but man I wish we could get the Spirit Oasis instead. :V Unfortunately that's totally not doable; HBK and Scorpions are rebellious or suppressed, whereas Spirit Oasis doesn't have any such modifiers on the map, and is a big money-maker due to the healing springs in it, so the Jingshen wouldn't ever let it break away.

But it would be cool if it happened. Ah well.
 
I'm predicting old cannibals going to target chuan clan, it's the furthest away besides the drinkards from the stronger righteous powers in the region but mainly has a secret realm he can access and right next door to the blacksmiths who should be ideal targets for his new sect to consume as they suck at war and aren't as into defense as their sorrowful counterparts.
 
Ah yea those, I figured it'd still be a good base because of the portal to strengthen disciples compared to my next best guess which would have to be the blacksmith's.
I'm unsure if he want's to go for that at first however as while yes filled with weak blacksmith mortals he's surrounded on all front's by nascent's of the entire verdant south. Of them there are 4 major power's that are noteworthy.
The Yu clan is decked out for devil bee repellant by the other verdant power's. Great Drunkard are naturally strong body cultivators and only get stronger the more they drink. Bear Enslavement are similar to the drunkard's in natural toughness if different in execution.
And Saber Palace is saber palace, even if they got smacked by old cannibal last decade.
 
The Builder 5 - The Village Mission Part 2
The village- part 2- The Pillar Men arrival.

Alternative tittle. How the village elder stop worrying and embraced brotherhood's life.



So here we are, already I can say that improving the road to this place can bring some booms to the village. We will need to coordinate with the brotherhood at large since I cannot leave this place. If everything else fail and none can help, then it will my joy and pleasure to build the road myself if needed be when this mission is over.

Anyway, nice place, my ears can already listen the sounds of children laughing and some of the adult voices having joyful, be the tone, conversations. This is a good start; I believe we will truly be a good addition for this place and this place to us. This place has a nice breeze, we know from our studies that it has a nice weather, not that many problems with spiritual beasts and/or bandits. They even pay their taxes at the right time.

From here we cannot see but it should be a small oasis close by where this place takes it food and farm some reasonable high-quality tea (for mortals). They see to have to import some food from what second brother have read from the documents that we had access. Which is one of the reasons we got this array specialist with us. Truly a first heavenstage array master is a blessing that we could not even dream to have when the brotherhood started all those years ago. With his aid we have so many ways to help with everyday live and with resources production.

Looking up at a (small) hill I notice that while the defenses of this village have their own charm and certainly lots of love. Well, he must admit that this is making his hairs raising a little bit from how weak they look. This certainly is something they will request to work on while they are here. All this sand, bits of rocks and barely compressed sand are not top of defenses. But they could be hidden the true defenses. And one more reason to be glad to have brought a master with them.

"Master Zhao Duyi, do you see any sighs of formations? By our research, this village should have some under their protection by our glorious clan!" I look up at one of the carts where our array specialist is. He looks somewhat bashful. But in a good way? He does like the attention of that my junior brothers and sisters give to him. and they should give him plenty, after all he has knowledge that can save their lives.

Master Zhao faked a cough, like he likes to do to before talking, maybe to gather his thoughts? "I don't see any that is active, we passed some walls in that ruin that had some designs that are no longer active. And please, call me brother Duyi". I resist the urge of making a frown while thinking. I do have some impressive eyebrows to add to my already impressive wild looks so even a little bit of a frown can make me look angry. Brother Duyi still getting used to me and us with him. And he does get scared easily for some reason.

"Hum, silver lines more material to us to use, maybe some array that is new to you, ancestors willing I mean." Master, I mean brother Duyi nods at my comment.

So, we pass, the probable mundane, sand walls and see some clay houses, some stones houses. Is that a house made with leather and bones? How lovely! I really want to study how that was build. Almost all houses have personal touches, from small bones, plants, colors even hair! added in braids to one of them. At the center there another wall, also made of sand and earth, in an elevated ground, the construction, behind the second walls, seems to be made of solid rock. Now that he thinks this again the village itself is on an elevated ground, like he already commented, almost on a (true) hill. This area is located at a point on the desert that have tiny dunes so is easy to see the horizon. The ruins did not have the high ground. Maybe this is the reason to relocation? He truly hopes it was this and not so other, sad, reasons.

For a moment in arrow speed sequence of thoughts, He see, with his mind eyes, the fortress of the clan, he saw himself smiling at his really talent son, his lovely, fluffy and pregnant wife entering their new house, and then, in another flash, he is frowning while leaving the fortress and returning to the brotherhood after the curse of heaven took them from him. This time resisting frowning was hard. He shook his head. These flashbacks are getting easy to shake off. He already prays for them every night. And them live on his heart. So, until he dies and rejoin them and become part of the great horde trying to kill heaven together with the rest of the ancestors. He must be firm. He is no longer 'xxxxx'. But He still is the first brother in the brotherhood of sand, dirt and dust. And the builder will do his job of being the flagship that show what a senior brother should be for his lovely juniors. Which start with a good first impression and is reinforced by actions and feelings.

So, with a smile still on his face that is growing and returning to his eyes. He then slaps his hands, hard, using the 'iron Arhat fist technique'. Which make a loud metallic sound. While raising himself on a Pillar of earth with 'Pillar raising art'. These glorious, genius, seniors. How they come with these things? These individuals surpass the combine skills, resources, tears and sweat of the entire brotherhood. We only got 'builders breath style: all is one' and he will the first to say that is unfinish product that they are shamed that is not as easy to use and have no clean way to measure. It also hard to fine tune. And they have yet to get an exact idea of how to teach others other than trying and trying until the brothers get closer to his breath style, where he was again? Oh, right presentation. He starts to bulk up his muscles with QI, he had done so after his done raising a small pillar. He not crazy to try three arts at same time. And start to talk with a baritone voice while his brothers start to raise pillars too (the 3 that know that tech) while trying to look like (muscled) elders/cultivators looking for good seeds (it is very specific look), while the rest of the brothers flex their muscles it the most impressive ways they got. This was already a scenario that the brotherhood thought and planed for. Just like how to motivate juniors, how to talk and how to coordinate.

So, with the attention of the village on us, and with all the shiny eyes of the kids I talk in a baritone voice that I projected to all to listen.

"Hahahaha, we have finally arrived, us the defenders, the clan in their glorious monetary might decided that you all could have a bit of help with us seniors. We are here to protect, to aid, and to join yourselves in the daily struggle of life" after I descend, I nod to 7th​ brother, Hou, and 25th​ brother, Tang, to do the same. Already knowing what to do 6th​ brother, Jingguo, jumps and take the main pillar to himself.

"While we talk with your elders and the adults. Why not, little ones, listen and train under this senior here" pointing to my brother "brother Jingguo had trained many to the first step of cultivation (more than 3). Clean your ears and listen well to his lessons and you can go far. also, if you all behave. We will share some treats (candies) will you to commemorate your first lesson!" I say with some bombastic movements while my brothers make some movements that show their might while directing the focus to me. Even Mister Bull was energetic, and the horses receive some props to make them look better they also got some care in the last part of our travel. Mister Bull is a little sweaty, but that it was intentional, making it shine more in this morning Sun. and preparing him to cultivation if it ever that blessed to succeed.

"So where will talk? We also must show to you the papers showing this is an official mission by our Glorious Clan!" the people start to look at some particular well dressed elder that had the face of someone that worked hard in his entire life! Great! He already like this senior!

"what?!" he also looks overwhelmed and his eyes are dilated only to then focus and contract again, his face got more pale, my previous experiences show that together with the posture that he had is a 'fight or run' posture. And elderly can turn to 'fight, fight and FIGHT!' Even if just by harsh language. Better to adjust then.

I make a loud cough and a gesture behind my (vast) back to turn down the energy of our presentation, not brother Jingguo he already got the kids full attention and that impact in the lessons and cultivation is above 'mere' everyday communication failure. I bend my knees a little bit, select voice with a calmer tone, that transmit more safety. And slowing start to talk while showing the palm of my hands (thankful, still with my gloves on).

"The clan wish me to protect this place, hunt the bandits and spirit beast that you have grudges on if any of those exist, and destroy other danger to you all, and provide all that I can. I am a 6th​ heavestage cultivator, with a long list of brothers and friends. There much I can do for this village, either with the so-called mundane task or the ones that will protect you from evil cultivators. So, I bring some of my greatest treasures, which are my brothers…" I say while raising my arms and put them on my brother shoulder, also to delay the (probably very harsh) talk that the elder in 'fight mode' will start that he will probably regret even without us doing nothing to aggravate the guilty. Being a leader is hard. Still, I like this guy, he had prepare to move a step in a way to cover the next adult in this group this is a beautiful show of an elder protector!

"I bring seeds from exotic and very expensive teas" that make he stop and shallow.

"I bring our own food, military rations. So that we do not disturb your own reserves" this make him become more thoughtful, I start to adjust my posture to be closer to his one while 'tapping' my brothers' shoulders with my hands to make them to adjust their own posture to the rest of the group. Like I said, forth brother trained us in good PR. A nice giant is good and some occasions. And terrific in others.

"We bring some of the so-called mortal tools and gears to your everyday live and some long-range weapons to your hunters and warriors" I say the last with a bit more of baritone and focus. The men close by straight the backs. Good.

"We bring ration for these animals, the bull will help me with the some of the farming and other tasks, the horses will be used to have a fast communication with the city and other villages. Depending on your needs and demands. Since I will use my own salary to get more resources and help in other tasks, like cultivation aids" there a shine to the crowd eyes, but the last two words had trigged the elder. So, I quick sit on the ground and with my hands gestured to my brothers do the same, my 'mortals' brothers had succeeded in becoming part of the crowd and help the rest by example by sitting quickly. Once more breaking the elder flow. I must allow him to release this pressure to not form grudges. But I must do so in a way we can easily overcome. Big guns time it is.

"I bring with me Master of formations, Brother Zhao Duyi!" that make the eyes of the elder go wild. And they all need to look up since we are now seated. We all know the wonders and terrors of arrays. If the touch of one is missed for as long as I am afraid it was. Then Duyi will well receive here, "I request and paid for some of his valuable time, he will do the essential work" do not comment about cultivation formations, do no comment about cultivations formations.

"I know every day life arrays and I will do this village cultivation chamber!" said my brother. Bollocks. Yeah, I cannot stop the elder now. I have done too many times already, at last it is our master. If there someone that, even angry, an elder will not complain too much is an array master.

"Then, I request, Master Zhao, to you to focus on the everyday things and if possible to booster our walls" the elder started, so far so good, he have not even raised his voice or got up since he decide to sit too (after all his people had done so).

"the last cultivator had leaved this village long ago and the ungrateful bastard had done so after we invest so much, that unfilial son of mine, that…"

"brother Tang, brother Yang, brother Yin (my sisters continue to prefer being called brothers for the most part)" I said loudly. "I wish that until this village have two or more cultivator or until one of our brothers replace you guys you are to stay here even after our mission finish, do you accept this weigh, this responsibility?" "Yes, first brother!" said the three in one voice. I firmly nod to each. To allow time to elder fix his face by closing his wide-open mouth and fix his posture.

"Even with being the lesser among the golden devils, we take our responsibility seriously" I said, shifting one my legs, to make myself more human (according to the fourth brother), 'mortals' notice 'unnatural' lack of movements, the small adjustments that 'mortals' muscles need to do to not tired too much or not harm themselves. "many among us, are like me, orphans and like me, my people have start with no cultivator in their backgrounds, some of us are yet to finish the first step and become cultivators of the first heavenstage". Pointing to my brothers and crowd. "I knows hardship and I thankful for all our glorious clan has done, and it demands that someone" I said and point to myself "me" then at the village "that had change my own name to 'builder' " I give a small pause "to do my all for you". "and for at very last the next five years, we will do so".

I offer my hand for the elder to shake. He jumps and hug me. Yeah, I like this guy.

End notes: the next one I will put the suggestion that I already got and explore what 'everything we can do' looks like. Carte blanche is a scary and great thing when give to the builder.
words count:2619 (counting everything).
@Kaboomatic another omake^^.
 
Xiao Yingzi 23 - [Turn 9] [A Haunting Battle]
Xiao Yingzi 23
[Turn 9]
[A Haunting Battle]

Xiao Yingzi walked into one of the rare abandoned houses in the Dawn Fortress. It was used to be the home and workshop of a Legate specializing in spirits and ghosts, but he died during the trials a hundred years ago. He had set up an array beforehand that had summoned his ghost upon death and bound it in the service of the clan while leaving instructions on how to control the ghost if needed.

Unfortunately with the administrative troubles at the time, his instructions weren't followed up on and by the time they were, he had degenerated too much to be controlled by that mechanism. Now, there was a request to exorcise him and it was only recently that he had degenerated to the point where a Centurion like her could handle it. Taking a deep breath, Xiao Yingzi walked up to the haunted house.

She knew she had to exorcise him quickly. The ghost was maddened and weakened, but he was still the ghost of a Legate. Despite that worry, it also made this exorcism more tempting. She wondered what secrets the ghost would be able to tell her and what she could find in his workshop. Taking a deep breath, Xiao Yingzi kicked open the door.

The hallway was lit up by a faint glow from an array of qi-radiating lamps along the way, but the room was mostly illuminated by the bright light of the sun coming from outside the house. There was a table in the middle of the room with spirit stone shards arranged in layers on it. Ghostly wraiths stood outside the array, feeding upon it's emanations and in the center stood the ghostly legate bearing the power of one in the great circle of her realm.

Without waiting for it to react, Xiao Yingzi drew a grave-bronze knife and threw it into the ghost's eye, pushing it into a wide-eyed rage. It roared at her in fury, it's mouth tearing apart too-wide with the sharp, animalistic teeth where there should have been human ones. Briefly, Xiao Yingzi recalled the reports noting he cultivated through beast cores.

She quickly took a deep breath and spread her fingers in a circle to conjure qi to exorcise the spirit. It was a simple technique she had picked up for the mission to banish the ghost, but her inexperience cost her a few moments. The ghost leapt up at her, reaching her faster than she could finish the exorcism technique.

Xiao Yingzi quickly summoned her spear, heavenly lightning coursing through it and stabbed the ghost's outstretched hand. The clawed hand exploded into ghostly qi, letting out smoky wisp instead of blood and with a blood-curdling wail, the spirit fell into the ground in retreat.

Before it could pass through the ground fully - and potentially leave behind the grave-bronze knife - Xiao Yingzi finished the exorcism technique and using the knife as a targeting mechanism, she banished the spirit out of the house.

Several of the ghostly wraiths erupted from the array and followed after the banished spirit while several others targeted her in furious vengeance. She picked the grave-bronze knife and spun her spear around her, casting a quick shroud of lightning to protect herself from the wraiths and as they hissed angrily around her, she considered her situation.

Unlike the Legate, these were the spirits he collected from his enemies and as such lacked the blood of bronze that made the knife work as a viable anchor for exorcism. That said, if they weren't clan then she had no reason to be gentle here.

As her shroud dissipated, she casually tossed the wispy knife into one of the remaining wraiths, watching at it passed through it entirely. With a sigh, she held up her spear with both hands and charged it with lightning while preparing to confront the ghosts.

She chose a few of the wraiths that were closest to her and sent a rough blast of lightning through all of them. The wraiths dissipated with tortured screams while the rest responded by repeatedly attacking the spear, only to be burnt up when coming in contact with nascent-will infused spear burning with tribulation lightning.

She tossed the spear away from her and watched as the foolish wraiths rushed to attack it, not ignoring her entirely. Like moths into a flame. As soon as they all gathered there, Xiao Yingzi set a surge of lightning towards them using the spear as an anchor, burning all of them away with unexpected ease.

Well, Elder Teleos' voice came to her. That was the first step done far more easily than expected. With the Legate separated from his arrays and spirit stones, he'll be far easier to hunt down and destroy.

Xiao Yingzi nodded as she walked up the table. The spirit stones were high grade meant for Legates but they had been depleted of qi severely. Still useful for her certainly, but only equivalent to a few day's worth of cultivation rather than the decades they'd otherwise be. The ghost will also be starving and desperate, while also released in the Dawn Fortress - free to torment both mortals and juniors before it completely dissipates.

You've weakened it enough that a few legionnaires drilled well in their formations would be able to handle it fairly easily. He replied, though his tone implied he saw her point. Still, it's better to take care of it ourselves while it's still dazed and confused outside.

She looked around and collected the gravebronze knife, checking to make sure it wasn't damaged or adversely affected. With a nod to herself, she turned and walked out of the door to confront the ghost of the Legate and the wraiths that still followed him in death.

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The ghost was still howling outside of the house when she arrived, likely uncertain of it's new location after spending nearly a hundred years within the familiar environment of it's house. The lesser wraiths surrounding him had thrown back their heads and screaming in turn, amplifying the sound into an unfocused formation.

Immediately, Xiao Yingzi understood what she was facing. These weren't the ghosts of enemies captured and put to work as the ones she faced before were but instead loyal centurions who served in death as they did in life. They were weaker in comparison to the previous wraiths, weakened to Qi Condensation as the Legate was weakened to Foundation.

However.... she could feel how synchronized they were and how they amplified the qi of the Legate. This would take some doing. She adjusted her grip on her spear. Especially if I want to do this gently. With a sigh, she dispelled the lightning on her spear. She glanced at the smoky wisp coming out of it's eye and then, while aiming directly for that, she tossed her grave-bronze knife at him with her full strength.

The ghost sensed her killing intent however and moved, the knife slammed instead into the ghost's armored chest and bounced off. Xiao Yingzi grimaced, realizing that this wasn't going to be as easy as she'd hoped. Already, his wounds were being healed by the loyal ghosts around him who gathered qi from the air and channeled it into him to restore him.

The ghost opened it's too-wide mouth and wailed at her, causing the very air to vibrate. She grimaced as the discordant scream tore at her ear-drums and shook her bones. Then the centurions joined it and the power of the wail increased many times, turning into an impromptu formation rather than a single technique.

As she felt it dig into her mind, she raised her spear and held it in front of her, drawing upon its power. She took a breath of relief as the nascent will infused within the spear began to shield her from the ghostly wail that somehow seemed to target her very soul. Physical pain was easy for her, but she needed to learn how to defend against any spiritual pain threatening her.

Taking advantage of the distraction caused by it's wail, the spirit lunged at her with the spirits of the centurions following behind it. She raised her hands to defend herself as the Legate struck her properly for the first time. It didn't attempt to strike her with it's remaining clawed hand, instead slamming into her body.

She threw out her legs and rolled backwards with the force, her spear grazing the ghost's arm as she did so. She jumped to her feet as it jumped back, wary of the spear and she steadied her weapon as the centurion wraiths rushed her.

Three of the wraiths pressed upon her from the front, smashing at her as the Legate had done while two others clawed at her feet. Their individual assaults weren't particularly dangerous, but it allowed the Legate the time to recover and press down on her again.

Xiao summoned a burst of qi and jumped away, considering how to put them to rest as she moved through the air. Her lightning would make it easy for her as they were demon spirits by the measure of heaven and heavenly lightning would destroy them as surely as the sun banished the night.

But they were compatriots who chose this state willingly to serve the clan and the only reason they had been so reduced was the clan's own neglect, understandable as the reasons behind it were. The mission parameters had given her the freedom to deal with them as she saw fit, but she was loath to use such violent measures.

As she landed upon the roof of the house, she felt a strange emotion come into her mind. It wasn't something that altered her perspective like rage or joy, it wasn't something that blocked her thoughts while loudly begging for attention like pain. It was something that built up over time - a symptom of a larger issue.

What is this feeling I'm experiencing, Elder Teleos? She asked as she summoned lightning on her spear. The ghost wailed and charged at her, much like it had done just before moving through the air unhindered as it reached for her position on the roof.

This is… probably frustration, Xiao Yingzi. The Elder explained, voice barely a whisper in her mind. Ah, that made sense. She spun the spear around and felt the charge increase. Before the Legate could react to her new weapon, she jumped in front of it with a burst of her qi.

This close, the fallen Legate had no time to react as she slammed the surging, lightning-infused spear right into his chest with all the power and might she could muster. For a second, the ghost resisted… some spectre of the will that withstood tribulation so very long ago still remaining within the elder.

Then with an otherworldly wail, it was torn apart as the lightning exploded inside it and then those pieces were burnt into oblivion as more sparks jumped from her spear, endlessly generated by her will and qi. As she began to fall, she tossed the spear aside as she had done before.

But the ghosts of the centurions ignored it, moving at her with righteous fury. Their wails synchronized as they moved on her but without the Legate to focus it, it was no threat to her. She summoned a surge of lightning on her body and channeled it into an aura that spread outwards from her, inflicting the same fate on the centurions as the legates had suffered.

She landed and raised an armored gauntlet, summoning the spear to her hand. With a metallic thump, it spun into her palm. Then she looked at the house, which was the reward for completing the mission and sighed. I need to get stronger. She told Elder Teleos, tasting that new emotion that surged inside her.

She could sense her elder's attention on her and she felt him try to form words to console her, before finally he gave up on that. Yes. He agreed, unable to reply with anything else. Yes, you do.
 
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Xiuying Ten Jiang 22 - The Flames of Life
Xiuying Ten Jiang 22 - The Flames of Life

Xiuying's time with the Stork Clan had been very good to her. Her noodles were greatly appreciated by all that came to eat at her noodle wagon and she had even made good friends with three Stork Clan chefs. Though they did not share their clan's recipe for life-extension noodles, since they were a secret clan recipe, Xiuying did learn a few new cooking techniques and a couple of new recipes as well.

It was really interesting how the Stork Clan used cooking alongside their pills for their longevity arts, whatever those were, not that Xiuying particularly cared. She'd spent quite a bit of time helping her new friends gather certain ingredients that were difficult for them to obtain without taking a lot of time out of their clan duties which were necessary since they had only just settled in their new lands after all.

It was a task that turned out to be more dangerous than Xiuying originally thought. A number of ingredients on the list that she had to gather were from powerful spirit beasts that loved human meat or were located in perilous places where a single misstep would result in grievous injury or worse. A few items could only be found in places that were taken over by bandits and criminals that had no intention of getting along with either clan.

Despite the risks, Xiuying undertook her task with the utmost seriousness. She had been straying off the path of Sword Law so she would force herself back onto the path of Sword Law. Every single cut that she made throughout this endeavour was not weak or listless. Every cut that swung out from her sword was one that sought to decapitate the foes in a single beautiful cut. No cut that Xiuying made was a mere shallow flesh wound. Every cut was equally swung with her entire being.

Many beasts and bandit scum were decapitated without ceremony, their significance and presence disappearing from Xiuying's mind after their demise for a practitioner of Sword Law does not take pleasure in the result of their cutting but only in the cut itself. Obstacles that stood in her path were cut away with the blade of want. Such was Xiuying's determination to sharpen herself once more.

It was to her great annoyance as she would later discover that her friends from the Stork Clan had only wanted her to gather the stuff she could get in the markets and warehouses. They'd assume that she would not be foolish enough to try and gather any ingredients that would normally require several people working together to obtain. Unfortunately, Xiuying was an idiot so the idea that she wasn't supposed to get everything on the list had not occurred to her.

However, for going above and beyond for their newfound friendship and needs, the Stork Clan chefs gave Xiuying two things. The first was a Lifespan Ignition Pill and the second was a faulty Lifespan Philter. The Lifespan Philter was said to be able to enhance one's lifespan when drunk. The one Xiuying obtained, however, was faulty and while it did grant its drinker an extended lifespan, the effect would only last a few days making it practically worthless, unless one had a way to use that temporary lifespan in a more permanent way.

That was where the Lifespan Ignition Pill came in. As the name suggested, it allowed a person to use their lifespan in order to fuel their cultivation. For most, burning away one's life to become stronger was a risk that could either result in early death from reaching their lifespan's end sooner than expected or rise up and become powerful enough that the sacrificed decades becomes a mere drop in an immortal's multi-century lifespan. For Xiuying, it was a way to make full use of the Lifespan Philter and suffer none of the drawbacks of the Lifespan Ignition Pill.

So what if the enhanced lifespan was only temporary?

Why not burn up all that false lifespan and use it to further refine one's cultivation without damaging one's actually lifespan?

That was what Xiuying did. After drinking the philter, she could feel a slight change in her or so she thought. It was quite hard to tell whether your lifespan was longer without having actually lived it. Still, Xiuying trusted that her friends weren't messing with her and trying to sabotage her cultivation. Popping the Lifespan Ignition pill in her mouth, she swallowed it with a drink of water and waited for it to take effect.

The first sign that it was working was a strangely warm feeling in her stomach. Before Xiuying could brace herself though, the warm feeling rapidly turned blazing hot. Even though it wasn't actually burning her, it was like there was a roaring fire burning crazily in her stomach. Despite the unbelievably uncomfortable burning sensation, Xiuying did not feel pain. Not only that, she could feel her cultivation grow as the burning sensation continued. Perhaps it was because the extra years of her lifespan that she got through the philter were not truly hers that she felt no pain. In any case, she needed to quickly make use of the wealth of spiritual energy that she was now feeling.

No doubt this would be hurting immensely if she had not used the Lifespan Philter and burned up her own true lifespan instead.

As the false extra years of her life burned away, she willed the flames of her spiritual energy to circulate her qi around her body, spreading the heat through her meridians. The fire within her was starting to grow even stronger, the heat rising with very real burning pain. Then without warning, a loud sound reverberates in Xiuying's head, like a wordless prayer or song, followed by her burning Qi suffusing every corner of your body. It was like the day she had broken through to the first stage of qi condensation and began the first true step away from her mortal life.

This time though, Xiuying could feel the fire of the Flame Immortal tempering her body, strengthening it as well as burning away all the imperfection and unneeded elements of her physical being. Old injuries, residual damage, even the tiny bits of toxic material that were present in every spiritual pill that remained in the body, and every physical defect were being used as fuel to temper her very being. Then, just as suddenly as it occurred, the blazing fury of her soul flame began dying down, eventually settling down back to its normal state, albeit burning larger and much hotter than before.

Xiuying stood up, having assumed the lotus position at some point, and grimaced at the black sludge that covered her body and soaked into her clothes. She'd have to burn her clothes since it was nigh impossible to cleanse all the impurities from them and wearing tainted clothing was not a good thing for any cultivator. Her body felt incredible though. She felt not just stronger but tougher and more agile too. She'd read about this back during the classes she took to become a legionnaire.

Tenth Heavenstage, the body purification stage of the unorthodox path, and the first of the four Olympian Pillars.

Xiuying had not been aiming to break through to the tenth heavenstage. She had been focused on healing from her injuries that she had received back in the secret realm so that she could attempt a breakthrough to Foundation Establishment without being hindered by any injuries. She'd taken the Lifespan Philter and Lifespan Ignition Pill to help fortify her cultivation base before she attempted the breakthrough.

According to her Sword Manual, once she'd reached ninth heavenstage, she needed to work on getting to Foundation Establishment. The manual did not say anything about tenth heavenstage. In fact, it didn't seem to have any references to the unorthodox path of cultivation.

Was it bad or good that she'd reach tenth heavenstage?

That she didn't know. The only thing she could do now at least was start preparation for her breakthrough to Foundation Establishment. From what she knew, it was much harder to enter the realms of Foundation Establishment if you were past ninth heavenstage. It didn't help that the Golden Devils apparently had much more dangerous tribulation during breakthrough, even for a regular ninth heavenstage qi condensation cultivator.

Even the tenth heavenstage would greatly increase the risks of tribulation so Xiuying had her work cut out for her.

But first things first though.

Xiuying needed a bath.
 
Paulus 11 - Good Seed Report
Paulus 11 - Good Seed Report

Strategos,

This is a record of Jingshen cultivators I encountered while pursuing leads into the smuggling ring. This record, while not exhaustive, will contain what I understand about their backgrounds and techniques at the time of writing.

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ENTRY 1: The Magistrate

Name: Ma Kunfeng

Cultivation: Approximately ninth heavenstage of qi condensation.

Background: Ma Kunfeng is the younger brother of Ma Jeitei (see entry: The Gambler) and a successful businessman. Recovered information showed that Ma Kunfeng cultivated the Magistrate's Cruel Grasp and Seven Supreme Steps techniques and was proficient in both to the expected degree given his cultivation.

Treasures, Techniques, and Armaments: Ma Kunfeng made use of a heavenly treasure scroll called The Nine Halls and Eight Trigrams. The scroll itself is made of Three Clouds Silk wrapped around Eternal Song Jade and is durable enough to function as both a life saving treasure and a weapon. The Magistrate's Cruel Grasp is written on the scroll and it seems to be designed as both a cultivation manual and a way for junior cultivators to make use of the techniques written on it.

When supplied enough qi the scroll will manifest Jade hands from its back. The hands vary in scale from life sized to one story in height depending on the qi supplied. If fed beyond their maximum size the hands will break into two hands half the size and resume growing.

The techniques do not seem to be compatible with the Blood of Bronze.

AN: This thing is bullshit. Submitted for bronze capping and sealing so I never have to fight someone with this again.

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The Jingshen agent rose to his feet and pulled off his bindings with tiny jade hands reaching from his back. The array cuffs snapped as if they were made of dry grass, unable to resist a cultivator's strength with the arrays themselves subverted by the Magistrate's Cruel Grasp.

"You'll regret this, Devil scum! Once my Lord Brother hears of what you did he will have your head, Clan or no Clan." he spat out as he retreated in a blur, crossing the space of seven steps with each motion.

I sighed and summoned the Hoplite. It came at my call, arms raised in an imitation of my own stance. Then I threw the spear.



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ENTRY 2: The Gambler

Name: Ma Jeitei

Cultivation: Foundation Establishment 1st Pillar (assumed)

Background: Ma Jeitei is the leader of the Ma Clan, a subordinate of the Jingshen. The Ma control a full city's worth of resources despite their relatively low strength among the Jingshen due to their absurd ability at creating wealth. Ma Jeitei was the one to elevate the clan from a minor group of ruffians to their present heights. Rumors collected in Jingshen lands suggested that the Ma are to be invited to be Overseers in new Jingshen territory gained by the war agreement should they prove they have enough funds to develop it.

Treasures, Techniques, and Armaments: Ma Jeitei made use of a Punchstone, a treasure that allows the holder to strike several levels above their displayed cultivation for a brief period. He also carried on him an Albatross Transforming Needle presumably to use as a life saving treasure if things grew dangerous.

Ma Jeitei's claim to fame is the possession of a soul attacking technique that could be used from Foundation all the way to Golden Core. Using the owner's own soul as a medium, conditions could be set on targets in close range, penalizing them if they became unable to fulfill those conditions. Ma Jeitei was also subject to the conditions imposed.

Limits unknown.

Ma Jeitei was observed using the technique to force opponents to sacrifice qi, which he paid with stones instead of his reserves.

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He stood on the back of an Eagle of Bronze, regarding the two Jingshen Scions below with trepidation. The two cultivators, one a middle aged with a stern features and a sharply hooked nose and the other a round faced youth with more rings than not on his fingers, regarded him in turn.

"You made a mistake trying to escape here, boy."The elder of the two spoke, rolling a polished stone gracefully between his fingers, "None of your stinking Devil friends will find you in this secret realm. Your formations are worthless without more of you, isn't that so?"

The Devil spread his hands wide in welcome and flashed a conspiratorial grin at the two. "Great! You won't have anything else to blame when I kick your ass."

The Gambler snorted and flicked his fingers, replacing the stone with four small round tokens cut from spirit stone. "Ante."

The space between the Devil and the Gambler flickered and four round tokens of flickering qi were drawn from the gasping Devil. The Eagle screeched in rage and the round faced youth fingered his rings, and the battle was joined.



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Entry 3: The Collector

Name: Jingshen Kai

Cultivation: Foundation Establishment 1st Pillar (assumed)

Background: Jingshen Kai is a young scion of the Jingshen clan. Possesses a reputation as a brute and a gambling addict. In recent years he has regularly been seen hanging out with Ma Jeitei and many have attributed the latter's meteoric rise to the assistance of the Jingshen scion.

Treasures, Techniques, and Armaments: Jingshen Kai carries on his person hundreds of disposable treasures he uses en masse in combat. The treasures carry a wide variety of effects and notably, Jingshen Kai did not seem to know what the majority of them did before using them.

Chief among his treasures and the only long term ones on his person was a set of 30 rings that were forcibly fitted on both hands. The rings allowed one to interact with karma using the skills of a Tunist. Jingshen Kai demonstrated no proficiency in their use beyond a few forceful tricks.


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"Jeitei!"

The Collector watched in shock as The Gambler's body fell, head crushed in massive bronze talons. His murderer staggered drunkenly, blood pouring from his eyes, ears, and mouth as his body struggled against damage that wasn't dealt to it. The Devil's soul had to be a mess by now, that's how it always went, right?

The Collector made a fist and gripped the invisible strings that touched every person. It was more difficult now, with Jeitei dead. The strong lines between The Collector and Gambler were slack and barely of any use in locating the Devil's own strings, but he found it by simply grabbing everything in the area and pulling with all his might!

The Devil roared in agony as The Collector pulled on his debts to a dead man, Jeitei's Ante was still in effect! The Devil struggled against a force he couldn't perceive, had no hope of defending against. The Collector grinned with sublime pleasure as the Devil danced on the end of his rope.

Then the last whisper of Jeitei's soul flickered out and the lines between them vanished altogether. The Collector had a brief impression of Jeitei's remnants rushing towards the beleaguered devil in a mirror of all the victories Jeitei had over others in the past. The Gambler had lost, and to victor go the spoils.

The Collector watched in horror as the Devil's power swelled and bloodshot eyes rolled towards him, looking at him as if he were already dead.

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Deceased.

AN: Remaining treasures have been submitted to be capped and sealed or repurposed as appropriate, but I'm keeping the Stage-Smashing Pill.

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Got some inspiration for how to do omake 10 in the middle of the night and knocked this out. I will likely do a few more of these in the future, perhaps including images depending on what's accepted.

I tried something new here, hope its enjoyed! Getting close to 40k!
 
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Thats a good point! I was visualising the effect of the Doomsday signal from Kingsman, but thats a better reference.

I'm being selfish this turn. I don't want to spoil my chance at Quigai.
At this stage, the Clan would be better served by her exploration of the Unorthodox Cultivation at Foundation Establishment than any number of juniors Minerva could save this Trials. Concentration of power is key now.
 
People've mused about getting the Heavenly Bandit Kingdoms or the Grand Scorpion Sect to break away from the Jingshen, but man I wish we could get the Spirit Oasis instead. :V Unfortunately that's totally not doable; HBK and Scorpions are rebellious or suppressed, whereas Spirit Oasis doesn't have any such modifiers on the map, and is a big money-maker due to the healing springs in it, so the Jingshen wouldn't ever let it break away.

But it would be cool if it happened. Ah well.
It's also fortified. Jingshen put 15 Wealth into fortifying it against the Cannibals. What I'm hoping to do is flip HBK and later conquer or flip the Sixty Kingdoms Alliances, which is almost as good as taking the Spirit Oasis itself. Siege.

Ah yea those, I figured it'd still be a good base because of the portal to strengthen disciples compared to my next best guess which would have to be the blacksmith's.
I'm unsure if he want's to go for that at first however as while yes filled with weak blacksmith mortals he's surrounded on all front's by nascent's of the entire verdant south. Of them there are 4 major power's that are noteworthy.
The Yu clan is decked out for devil bee repellant by the other verdant power's. Great Drunkard are naturally strong body cultivators and only get stronger the more they drink. Bear Enslavement are similar to the drunkard's in natural toughness if different in execution.
And Saber Palace is saber palace, even if they got smacked by old cannibal last decade.
I think they'll go for Saber Palace again.
Three years ago, three Nascent Souls from the Devil Bee Sect struck the Saber Palace itself. They ruined the defensive arrays, butchered the disciples there, and even defiled the grounds surrounding the Divine Saber itself. They had some manner of ritual to weaken it, and only the return of the Elder of Day summoning the many Nascent Wills there allowed the Divine Saber to properly hold.
They carefully ruined the defenses and baited out the Nascent Wills which will make it easier for them to invade next turn. They've still only got a single Nascent and Wills are consumable resources.
 
Thats a good point! I was visualising the effect of the Doomsday signal from Kingsman, but thats a better reference.

I'm being selfish this turn. I don't want to spoil my chance at Quigai.
I'm going to the secret realm too and saving juniors, that is why I have 3 LST saved up, who knows, I might pull a Rina. I just hope I'm in good enough shape to enter that other secret realm next turn
 
Aristoteles 'Aris' Kalokagathos 12 - In the Empire of Songs (pt. 1)
Aristoteles 'Aris' Kalokagathos

In the Empire of Songs (pt. 1)

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Two weeks after he entered and immediately thereafter exited the Qiguai Secret Realm, he arrived at Ward Thunderbolt, where his centuria was stationed together with Leo's. He found a fledgling Strength Purity expert nominally in charge of the tiny fort making up this part of the fearless line. The man clearly running the show, however, was his friend Leo.

He had found it exceedingly difficult not to grin during the debrief of the events of the past few weeks, taking place in the commander's office in the spartan hilltop fort. After running through the necessary formalities, thanking the new commander that had replaced his wounded predecessor for accommodating him and his centuria, he had his private debrief with Leo.

"So laid down plainly, this Demon almost succeeded in bluffing his way past one of the wayforts, but you met his bluff straight-faced and ruined his gambit with a timely intervention from our old friend Diokles, scattering his troops and forcing the Demon to flee. This at the cost of the previous commander – Steelgong – being wounded, which puts you as the most senior expert of this little fort."

Leo nodded, an angelic look of righteousness plastered across his features.

Aris grinned in truth this time, looking up at his mountain of a friend.

"As I expected."

Leo looked at his longtime friend and companion, and spoke conspiratorially.

"You had some measure of success too, or so it seems."

Aris nodded and produced the two pills he had acquired from the Qiguai Secret Realm from within his storage ring. Leo's eyes hit up and he let out a low whistle.

Aris replied to the unspoken question.

"I'll be taking them tonight. I'll stick around for a few weeks to consolidate my first gains and evaluate the battle-readiness of my centuria – then onto where things are hottest. I won't be able to make much use of the pills if I stand around doing nothing."

Leo snorted.

"Hah, ever the offensive commander you."

Aris shrugged.

"There is something decidedly dreary and common about defending a fixed position. Routing an enemy when you're behind a thick set of walls and layers of Arrays is as prosaic as a drill. Routing an enemy when they're the ones behind the walls, now that's a victory."

Leo made to rebut, but Aris interrupted;

"But yes, that move of yours was impressive. Most defensive commanders see turtling up as the pinnacle of strategic acumen. You were a turtle that thought like a lion. That's why you won."

Aris cleared his throat as they moved through the rows of tents to inspect the mended breach in the wall.

"Anyhow, I've gotten the sterilized report on the war's progress. Care to fill in the blanks?"

Leo nodded and spoke in a clipped cadence.

"Callista was here ahead of time as you said, and apparently intervened in a timely fashion in a clash between the enemy's top talents and the Allies'. A large cohort of crack Saber irregulars has joined the fray and moved to reinforce. They are now behind enemy lines, generally doing their own thing. They're led by one Fang Tai – nasty piece of work and hates devils. Stay out of his way."

He and Leo took the stairs up to the wall's walkway and parapet, soldiers bowing respectfully and moving out of their way.

"For the rest, we have seem to hit a lull in the fighting. Allied central command says it's a natural ebb; the Demons licking their wounds for a while before striking back with a vengeance, but there's nervous chatter."

Aris looked at him inquisitively.

Leo threw up his hands.

"I don't know, but there's talk of a gambit, something dangerous. Well, neither is much of a surprise. Of course there's gambits, and of course the Demons are not here to water the plants – but everyone's on edge."

They looked out over the landscape of brownish-green grass. Aris breathed in deeply. What an abundance of Qi. Like the richest places in the Wheat Fields, but then amplified thousandfold. Every breath of his drew in a verdant luxury of life. He imagined mortals barely needed to do anything to start cultivating. A thousand breaths and one would wake up an immortal.

He turned to Leo and nodded.

"Let's warm up nice and steady. If there's something brewing on their side, that should make the stragglers here easy pickings. I'm itching for a pound or two of Demon flesh."

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Aris ran the wide-eyed fleeing Demon through. Ninth Heavenstage, pockmarked with blood-filled pustules, in an accidental and perverse imitation of the ails of adolescence.

He withdrew his bronze sabre from the Demon's gut, casting off the blood with a swift movement.

That was the fourth band of Demons in a day. The last few weeks had been anything but leisurely.

Oh he had had time to settle in and felt close to solidifying his one Pillar, and months had passed by without much incident after he had arrived on the Fearless Line.

Then the rumors had been confirmed – the Demon Alliance had through terrible sorcery and artifice raised up a Hungering Abyss Tower, capable of tearing a hole in their lines as easily as tearing through wet paper.

Many of the present Golden Devil cohorts had been drawn from the forts to do battle at the Abyssal Crag. His and Leo's centuria had been stretched almost to the breaking point, trying to fill in the holes in the Fearless Line.

The battle there had resulted in a terrific victory, destroying the engine and scattering the Demon army.

Then all those dispersed Demon dogs had washed over the Fearless line, battle-ready, humiliated and with a burning desire to fill their belly with flesh elsewhere.

The last stragglers of this particular group of sad washouts were being hunted down by his squads, the clattering of weapons and screams of battle sounding from afar.

He heard a laborious gurgle from below him.

The Demon junior had raised himself up on one arm, clutching a bone dagger in his other hand. Frothy blood bubbled forth from between his clenched teeth, his face contorted in a rictus of pure hatred.

Aris looked down, and cocked his eyebrow at the desperate struggle of the Demon.

"Nnnggrrrrrr…."

Aris swiftly kicked him in the ribs, hearing a few bones snap like twigs. The Demon rolled away for a few metres, dagger sailing through the air.

He crossed the distance to the dying junior, and planted his foot on the Demonic cultivator's neck.

"For your resistance and grit, I will allow you to tell me your name."

Aris eased the tension on his neck a hair.

"Ggggrrruuuhh….Lei…Qiang."

"No one will remember you, Lei Qiang. Now die."

He applied a tad more pressure, and crushed the poor junior's windpipe and spine with a sickening crush.

Aris gathered the consummate killers he was fortunate to call his subordinates, set fire to the corpses, then moved out again – casting a wide net so as to intercept as many enterprising bands of roving Demons as possible.

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Weeks after, something strange happened.

The chaff had been weeded from the Demon stragglers, the desperate and foolish slaughtered wholesale.

Now, the cunning and organized ones remained. Engagements got sparser but trickier, enemies retreating when they started to suspect they were being lured into a pincer.

A twelve hour march from Ward Thunderbolt – still being held by Leo – Aris and his centuria encountered a small band of roaming Demons. All in Qi Condensation – no more than six – ragged, hungry and desperate.

They had taken the bait; a squad of five legionnaires had engaged them and given the imperceptible Qi signal to the other squads to encircle and destroy, while the baiting squad retreated towards the centre of the dispersed Devil formation. A classic, but it worked so delightfully often with Demon dregs. They would think they'd caught a tasty morsel – a wounded or tired squad of Devils, coming back from a battle – giving chase once his men started running, not noticing they were being drawn into the middle of an encircling formation, making any escape impossible.

Their troops had destroyed the small demon squad almost immediately upon encircling them – the few pathetic stragglers disintegrating with minimal force.

Surveying the corpses, the men however had made a disconcerting discovery.

Aris and his command squad at the centre of the formation had arrived when half of his centuria was already clustered around the corpses.

He gave the Qi signal to the squads still out further afield, who were slowly making their way to the site of battle, to disperse and create a cordon around his position once again.

His men parted for him, revealing the six corpses stripped of their clothes and laid out next to each other.

Carved crudely into their very bodies with deep red gouges was a message – addressed to him, it seemed.

TO

THE

DEVIL

ARISTOTELES;

MY

TREAT
,

SEE

YOU

AT

HJ

- "W"



Aris looked impassively at the corpses.

"Burn them."

Aris felt a manic grin creeping onto his features as he turned away from the casualties and his men.

It seems he wouldn't want for excitement this campaign.

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@Kaboomatic @ReaderOfFate @TehChron
 
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I think they'll go for Saber Palace again.
They carefully ruined the defenses and baited out the Nascent Wills which will make it easier for them to invade next turn. They've still only got a single Nascent and Wills are consumable resources.
Come to think of it, that's pretty much the same plan the Jingshen Clan have for us, so I wouldn't be surprised if the Devil Bee Alliance is trying the same thing on the Saber Palace.
 
Come to think of it, that's pretty much the same plan the Jingshen Clan have for us, so I wouldn't be surprised if the Devil Bee Alliance is trying the same thing on the Saber Palace.
"The Devil Bees clearly used their new formation to shatter defenses and kill unprepared enemies in the Verdant South. I do not know why the various Powers there did not warn one another - one assumes none of them wished to be the only one laid waste to."

They both snorted at the hypocrisy of the Righteous Path.

"Or perhaps they merely used it the once against the Seven Divine Saber Palace. I am unsure. Still, they returned, laden with treasures and lives. More treasures than I could have ever expected. Secret arts, a magical Blood Saber technique I believe you yourself bore witness to. Why?"

Manuel gestured again, not wishing to answer the rhetorical question.

"The Seven Divine Saber Palace. Only hints, but enough to piece together the truth. Why did the Devil Bees leave so handily? Why did they lose a Nascent Soul? Tribute is the answer for the first, and treachery over the tribute likely the second. For the assistance in settling internal disputes, the Devil Bees found themselves paid generously to invade Clan territory. I suspect the more they take, the more they gain. The Saber Palace gains a much-needed reprieve, and settles accounts with two of its sworn enemies at once. I do not know who fed Child Corpse Gulper that technique, but imagine if you were badly wounded. Such a war would be a disaster for the Clan, even at the cost of Corpse Gulper's life. Such a disaster would mean war to the knife with us and the Devil Bees, war for decades and perhaps centuries as we fought to reclaim our lands. The Devil Bees would be preoccupied seizing their new territory, and pouring resources into it."
It was at that point he understood. He had bent his will towards uncovering the secret, the contractual agreement between the Devil Bees and Saber Palace. What, precisely, were they being paid for? Unfortunately, a contract signed and sealed in front of many was not so covered in darkness. It was ironic, but his Dao lent itself best to uncovering the most hidden things, those deepest in darkness. For those partially in the light and merely unknown, it was... difficult. It could still be done, but it was not uncovering deeply-hidden secrets in the hearts of men, it was just an obligation between two parties not to speak of an agreement.

It had taken some twisting, and eventually following a thread of guilt and misery from a Saber Palace cultivator, one who in their heart wished nothing more than to hide the contract, to hide away their shame for co-operating with the Demonic Path forever, but he had managed to uncover it.

Destruction, not death. Level as many fortifications as possible, simply put.

Manuel frowned.

Sensible. Ordinarily the Devil Bees would not try to crack fortifications without some superb advantage, it not being their area of talent. They were raiders, not engineers. But if they did, and managed to lay the southern Clan lands low and vulnerable to future raiding, it would encourage them to raid again and again, removing their threat somewhat from the Verdant South. If they failed, well, there were less Devil Bees to bother the Verdant South.
I think Old Cannibal considers it ironic revenge for Child Corpse Gulper to use the same Bee tactics as were paid for by the Seven Divine Saber Palace.
 
Gaius Antonius 42 - Crucible in the Sky, Part 5
Gaius Antonius Omake #42: Crucible in the Sky, Part 5

Keep moving. Keep moving. Keep moving.

Gaius couldn't stop anymore. Staying still, in such a debilitated state, would get him killed by the wildlife. He had to reach the palace, in the hopes that some kind of safety lay inside. And so he walked, leaving a thin trail of blood droplets behind him.

The tilt of the ground got more and more shallow as The Seeker approached the end of his journey; he was thankful that this was the kind of mountain with a relatively gentle slope, and not a harsh spike of earth. Even as he was now, the climb was long, but not hard on its own. Finally, he crested the final ascension, arriving at the peak. Nothing lay above him but the ground, and before him was the palace.

Massive in scope, the palace had an ethereal quality. It sprawled across the mountain peak in all directions. In fact, it seemed almost too large to even fit the peak on which it sat, exuding a feeling of dreamlike awe. All along every wall, colorful lights flickered and danced in the darkness of the night, illuminating the ground below somewhat and casting warped shadows in every direction.

Before the gate stood a truly massive man in dark blue armor, even taller than Gaius and far thicker at the chest and shoulders. Gaius bowed to the man, overjoyed to have finally made it. "Hello, sir. May I please enter the palace? The sword in my dreams, I know it's waiting for me in there. I need to bring it with me!"

The door guard was silent, his face as impassive as stone. In fact, 'stone-like' could describe the man well. His body was distorted with huge muscles, his massive hands were like boulders, and his face was like a brick that learned to scowl. There seemingly wasn't a single hair on him, and in one hand he held a truly awe-inspiring staff of dark wood with subtle silver embellishments, from one end of which hung three gold rings. The only thing about the man's appearance that stood out were his earlobes; while the ears themselves were ugly, squashed and swollen from a lifetime of traumatic blows, the lobes were soft, unmarred, and stretched as if by heavy earrings.

After repeating himself several times to no response, Gaius limped ever closer to his goal; a beautiful palace like that had to have equally beautiful beds. He could rest, so very soon. These fantasies were interrupted as the doorman's staff, as thick as Gaius' forearm, was held across the door, blocking him once more. Finally, that enigmatic figure was looking at him.

The guard opened his mouth, and an almost impossibly deep voice emerged. "Dreams are dreams. The world is the world. One should not touch the other, no?" The gravitas with which he spoke was like that of the mountain itself.

It was as if a pit trap had opened up beneath Gaius' feet, so sudden was the rush of dread. His body couldn't take more violence, not now. He did his best to keep any trace of fear from entering his voice, and almost succeeded. "If it's really just a dream, then I won't find it in the palace. If it's real, then it isn't a dream. Either way it should be fine, right?"

The guard's glare only grew sterner. "There is no need to look. There is nothing within these walls but desolation. Go home, Mara."

"My name isn't Mara, it's Gaius! Your lies are pitifully weak; no one would send a doorman to guard an empty palace. What is really in there?"

"Of course you are Mara, try as you might to cloak yourself in civilization. I can smell your overpowering hunger from here." The doorman said, his expression going from derision to disgust.

Gaius' eyes narrowed. "Do I really have to fight you?"

"Of course not. You could also leave."

The two grew silent, looking deep into each other's eyes. To Gaius' frustration, no matter how much he peered into the other man, he could not see anything of consequence. Nothing whatsoever could be read in the face, body or aura of this mysterious man; no falsehoods, but no truths either. The rising tension boiled over, and the lights from the castle with dappled the ground almost seemed to grow in intensity.

Gaius' sword struck the doorman's staff with such force that the air rippled for a moment, and the duel explosively began. Gaius lept over a low sweep and struck three times from above, but was denied all three times, and pushed back by a thrust which he blocked on the flat of his sword. The doorman followed, and their battle quickly fell into a steady rhythm of strikes.

The two went back and forth, neither landing any hits, but Gaius felt nothing but despair in that moment. The doorman was playing. The huge man used only enough strength to stop each attack, and matched it with an exactly equal amount of strength in return. Gaius was really, truly trying his best, and the guard didn't even consider that a threat. He snarled; fine then, he would use everything.

The Seeker dove beneath the earth and circled around his enemy like a shark, briefly surfacing to hack at hit legs. He was blocked each and every time, but that was alright. He could still keep this up a while longer, if nothing else.

He shot out behind the doorman and tried stabbing him in the back, only to be repelled once again by the man's deceptively quick movements and seemingly omniscient instincts. He tried to dive back down but it was already too late - the doorman's huge hand shot out, taking ahold of Gaius' wrist.

With a peculiar throwing technique, he flung The Seeker into the air end-over end with only the movement of his arm. Unfathomable technique and obscene brute force; this nameless soldier possessed both in bottomless abundance.

The staff shot up, but Gaius was ready. Catching the butt in his hand, he stopped his rotation vaulted over his opponent, throwing a kick from above. The doorman's free hand rose up to block it, and Gaius seized upon the opening, stabbing his sword into the man's back. What Gaius didn't expect was for the doorman to accept the blow, then turn and jab that staff right into his face.

Gaius bounced painfully across the ground, badly jarring his injuries. He slid to a stop and got up to his hands and knees just in time to see the door guard finish pulling the sword from his upper back. That hadn't been a grazing blow -the last half a foot or so of the blade was soaked in blood. If the massive man was phased, he didn't show it.

The doorman snorted contemptuously and brought the sword down on his knee, breaking it in two. "A weak weapon for a weak man. Get up, Mara." Gaius looked on in disbelief. No, no, this couldn't be happening. Not this close to his goal!

"Whatever is the matter? Are you ready to leave yet?" The doorman mocked, sneering down his nose at the Devil. "No, it seems a spark of blasphemy remains."

In massive, bounding strides, the doorman ran at Gaius and brought his staff down on the smaller man, who summoned his Aegis with both hands, deflecting the weapon away and going on the attack. His middle punch, the most well-trained move in his arsenal, crashed home against the doorman's sola plexus, pushing him back a few inches. Gaius followed up with several more middle punches, a low kick and an elbow to the head, only for the giant to shrug off the punishment and seize his head.

Damnit, what the fuck was this man made of? It was like punching a post made of pure Gravebronze. With a casual disdain, the doorman took off running and slammed Gaius' head against a tree, felling it with one blow. For the second time that day, Gaius' vision swam sickeningly. "Your defiance is infantile. Surrender." He rumbled, his voice never rising above that even tone.

"Fuck you!" Gaius growled, drawing his last knife and stabbed it into the doorman's hand with all of his strength. It made it through the giant's armor and went in about for inches, forcing him to drop Gaius, who immediately struck him in the face with a roundhouse kick.

Once again Gaius tormented his body, throwing himself at the implacable doorman again. Dodging his punch by a hairs breadth, Gaius clambered up his body and put him in a rear naked choke. It was like wrapping his arms around a five-ton mass of meat, seemingly endless in substance. He squeezed the giant's neck as hard as he could, only for the doorman to slam his elbow into Gaius' broken ribs, forcing him to let go, then whirl around and sieze The Seeker's wrist.

A bizarre type of twisting pain Gaius had never experienced before shot up his arm, as the doorman wrenched his shoulder down just by applying torque to his wrist. Manipulation of momentum; Gaius understood it well from countless hours of grappling training, but never before had he seen it done like this. Despite his best efforts, The Seeker was forced to the ground and forced to hastily block the huge man's blows with his free hand.

Alright, time to get creative. Grabbing the doorman's wrist in turn and sinking most of the way into the ground, Gaius zoomed between the giant's legs, flipping him over onto his back. From there, Gaius got out of the ground and wound up his leg.

Gaius wasn't stupid; this guard had obviously gotten much more lax on the defense after breaking Gaius' sword, confident he could take the blows and wanting to get things over with. How arrogant - he would pay for taking The Seeker so lightly. Pivoting on his other foot, Gaius smashed a soccer ball kick into the back of the doorman's head, sending him tumbling across the ground.

"Are you ready to let me go in yet?" Gaius asked, his breathing hard and heavy. "I can do this all day."

Scoffing, the doorman, summoned his staff to his hand and advanced on The Seeker once more. "You have no stamina left, nothing that can win you this fight, nothing that can get you through those gates. I will say it again: go home!" The giant scolded, bringing the staff down with both hands.

Throwing up his good arm to block the overhead strike - at which point it stopped being a good arm, letting off faint creaking sounds from within - Gaius was astounded by the sheer force of this impact. Nothing in Qi Condensation could hit this hard. But that doorman didn't feel like Foundation Building; he didn't feel like anything.

A small Aegis appeared on Gaius' wrist' then began stretching and distorting, more than he had ever pulled off before. From a disc, it became a thin band which spiraled down Gaius forearm from his fingers to his elbow, holding his broken hand together.

"I have... a steadfast heart... and that is INVINCIBLE!"

Gaius' powerful, sturdy bronze hand, tempered through endless hours of conditioning, struck the doorman in the throat with a spear-hand. His already-broken fingers shattered entirely - some snapped in half until shards of bone protruded through the skin, others simply crumbled so much that they hung loosely, like a sack filled with fluid. But the strike did its job. Finally, the implacable enemy was injured, dropping The Seeker to clutch at his throat gasping and gurgling.

It finally arrived; that precious, beautiful thing all fighters dream of: the third wind. Letting out a passionate battle cry, The Seeker threw himself upon his towering foe, his determination propelling him onward as if it was a physical force.

Gaius hammered blows into the doorman's face, chest, head and neck, pouring every ounce of himself, who he was and all he had ever been, into the attempt. He used his mangled hands and his broken leg, striking with any part of those extremities that was still whole. Hand chop. Backhand. Roundhouse kick. Front toe kick. Palm thrust. Palm heel. Straight punch, hook punch, uppercut, short upper. He brutalized the massive man, denting his armor until it began to crack and battering his head like a spedbag. It was not entirely useless; blood was drawn, sometimes. Small bruises bloomed in places.

The doorman, however, was not impressed. Surging forward, he seized Gaius' wrists and slammed his forehead into The Seeker's face. Cartilage gave way as Gaius' nose broke. He we immediately struck by a second headbutt, which knocked out one oh his front teeth. The sound was extraordinary, like a man being bludgeoned by a warhammer.

Throwing Gaius down onto a flat stone like an animal to be sacrificed on an altar, the doorman pummeled Gaius chest repeatedly until he spat up a worrying amount of blood. His fists fell like meteors, but the worst part was the coldness of the act. This man's fighting contained no killing intent whatsoever, not even any violent intent - this was simple labor. There went three more ribs.

"A steadfast heart, you said? That is the source of your strength?" The gatekeeper rumbled, pressing a broad, calloused palm to Gaius' chest, pushing him down against the rock with incredible strength. "This gluttonous heart, so healthy and so strong... it puts you through so much pain." He pulled his hand back a few inches and made a claw shape with his fingers. "Perhaps I should remove this heart, so full of base desires, and save you from it."

With his less-mangled hand, Gaius lashed out and seized the back of the doorman's head, surging forward and smashing his knee into his opponent's face. The Seeker roared; this was not the end, not yet.

Sinking down to his knees into the ground, Gaius then propelled himself back upward, tackling the giant with all of that momentum plus the remnants of his own strength. Yet more strikes fell upon the hairless, boulder-like head of the gruel guard. "WHY! WON'T! YOU! DIE!" Gaius screamed, futilely pounding the brute's head like he was forging an axe.

A massive hand closed around The Seeker's head, and the doorman leisurely sat up as Gaius tried to break free. Getting to his feet, he hoisted the Devil into the air. "The same reason as you: my purpose is not yet fulfilled. Unlike me, you can still break free."

Gaius wasn't listening. An expression of desperate anger flashing across his face, he swung his body upward and wrapped his legs around the doorman's head, forcing him to the ground in an armbar. "I'll never stop! You WILL let me in!" Gaius yelled, sitting on the man's back and wrenching the massive arm with all of his strength.

Yes, yes, he still had a chance! If he could destroy this arm, he could pick this big bastard apart! He was going to-

At that moment, Gaius' every thought was obscured by a feeling of pure kinetic interaction. The doorman turned to face him and exhaled with unfathomable force, buffeting him with gale-force winds. Perhaps a healthy Gaius could have withstood this but he was not healthy. His fingers slipped, he stumbled blindly backwards, and near-instantly a stony fist was buried him his gut, forcing all the wind from his lungs.

The doorman sighed and got to his feet, perhaps exasperated that this pest had been bothering him for so long. "Try as you might, it all leads you to to doom in the end." He coldly mocked, summoning his staff back to his hand.

A dark blur slammed into The Seeker, the spiritually strengthened wood of the doorman's staff striking Gaius' jaw with a horrendous bokk sound. Once again, Gaius' body gave way, as his jaw cracked in half with a sickening wet sound. More teeth than Gaius could count in that moment went flying, and the sheer unreality of the situation weighed down on Gaius.

Soldiers train to suppress their fear, to react in the worst situations. But eventually, a person hits a point where their body is so badly broken that they can no longer fathom it. The idea that this shattered thing could be their own physical vessel becomes too much to psychologically bear. This phenomenon is colloquially known as traumatic shock. It is often called a death by pain, but this is not quite right; it is a disconnect between mind and body caused not by the pain but the inability to comprehend one's own injury.

In that moment, Gaius' struggle finally ceased. He stood there, a physical ruin, dazed and confused. Was this real? Was this actually happening to him?

The doorman's staff answered him in the next moment, striking him across the chest and folding him over it like wet laundry. Several more ribs went kaput, and Gaius vomited up what must have been half a pint of blood.

"You have no weapons left." The big man said solemnly, a simple statement of fact. For this was indeed a fact. His hands were ruined. His leg too. His ribs were a joke. He couldn't even bite anymore. For the first time since Gaius was a little boy, a feeling of intense helplessness washed over him, and without his conscious mind realizing, he took a step back. "Why... why..." he wheezed out, barely comprehensible.

For half a second, Gaius thought he saw the mysterious man smirk, but that expression was gone immediately. with a simple push, Gaius was sent onto his back again. The gatekeeper knelt on The Seeker's chest and raised a calloused fist. "You are strong of spirit, Mara; your yearning heart is not yet defeated. That strength is your only admirable quality. As an acknowledgement of that strength, I will continue to pacify you until you are satisfied."

Over and over those huge fists hammered into Gaius' face and head, slowly driving him into the stone. Most of his remaining teeth shattered or fell out. His nasal cavity caved in entirely. Small patches of skin began to detach and stick to the gatekeeper's hands. This was the dismantling of a human. In a short while, it was done.

The gatekeeper hoisted Gaius up by the neck, lifting him into the air and gazing dispassionately at his handiwork. Whatever he saw, he seemed satisfied.

Through thick layers of despair and natural opioids, Gaius heard the doorman's voice, dispassionate as ever. His eyes, swollen shut, could see only blurred shadows. The battle was finally over; there would be no more miraculous comebacks, no bursts of hidden stamina. His entire body felt distant, immovable, restrained beneath ten tons of cotton. "It's time for you to go home, Mara. Begone from my sight, back to the world of struggle, passion and suffering."

They were moving somewhere, Gaius thought. A trail of drool rolled out from his mouth and down his obliterated jaw, dripping down onto his right foot. His legs swung to and fro, and he felt a cold wind caress his hair. He was hanging over something.

"Farewell."

Gaius Antonius, The Seeker, fell.

From where did he fall, and in what direction? He had no idea. He thought of nothing at all, as his consciousness dissolved into soul-stuff and raw Being.


And here's that gatekeeper. Not described at all in the fate text, he's entirely my own creation. The battle with him is by far the most surreal compared to the other three. As I'll explain later, it's up to the reader's interpretation how much of this arc is real, how much is illusion and how much is metaphor.

I based him not-so-subtly off the blue-skinned Guardian from Samurai Jack, being a brutish door guard who's more of a metaphor than a character, existing to break the lead physically and psychologically as a test of his character. I might find a way for him to appear again in the future, though I'm not sure how yet.
 
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Xiao Yingzi 24 [Turn -???] [Nemesis vs Teleos]
Re-posting this. Last time I thought I had a better way to set this up, but it was growing into whole thing which I didn't really feel like writing. Ending may not be that strong, but hopefully it's entertaining.

Xiao Yingzi 24
[Turn -???]
[Nemesis vs Teleos]

The World shook as battle was joined.

Gaea wailed as Nine Stygian Pillars - so vast that they dwarfed the mountains - fell from the sky to pierce her body, sending not spouts of blood but water from the five rivers of the underworld. The ground was washed away at her feet to reveal the ash of the Asphodel and the corpses of the long dead rose around her merely as a consequence of the power raged through the world.

Then the sky changed as the winds gathered into a cyclone, rising into the sky and growing even vaster than the Pillars that surrounded it. At their height formed black clouds that raged with violent lightning - not the tempering tribulations of Ouranus but the wrath of a Heavenly King who would not be denied what was his right.

That was the battle of gods, so high above her that she almost felt like a mortal supplicating at the foot of Oympus once more. But she wasn't that, not anymore. Her Divinity - meager as it was - extended from her soul as the reanimated corpses struck at her blindly and were burnt away in retaliation.

Gathering herself, she looked upon the distant battle with her senses and quickly took in the other details that mattered.

The Sea was present but conspicuously not acting, instead awaiting the outcome of the battle.

The Invaders also made no move, as if this wasn't conflict that they had engendered.

Then there was a familiar spike of power nearby, with a presence akin to bronze polished until it reflected. The Divinity of so-called Perfection. She growled as she recognized it, taunting her and inviting her to join him at a place of his choosing. She gave a last look at the battle on the horizon before deciding that she would be of no use there.

She would enact her own vengeance where she could.

She willed her soul to push her body beyond its limits and took to the air, leaping over mountains to stop over the tallest one in the area. That damnable bronze-skinned artisan lounged upon a beautifully crafted chair with his feet on a similar table, watching the conflict play out while smoking a pipe as if he was in his home.

"Teleos!" She snarled out in rage and gestured to the horizon. "Look at what you have done! We welcomed you into our home and then you ripped it all apart!"

He turned to her as if he had just noticed her. As if he wasn't the one to purposefully reveal himself. "Ah, Nemesis. Long time no see." He said, greeting her jovially. He put a finger in his ear and pulled it out. "Something must be wrong with my ears, because I swear I just heard quite an accusation from you."

Her hands moved on her whip and her knife. "Are you denying your crimes?" She asked, rising anger kept in check by righteous will. "Was it not you who set in motion the events that turned brother against brother?"

He raised an eyebrow, taking a moment to puff some smoke. "I merely offered my friend a place where he could truly shine." He replied, smiling back at her. "That his newfound ideals made their way back to his home and caused a split in your family is unfortunate, but certainly not something I could have orchestrated beforehand."

"Then you agree that you were the cause?" She asked, drawing her knife and pointing it at him. "Do you agree that these events were orchestrated by your hand, irregardless of whether it was a plot or not?"

"This is hardly something to do with me." He replied, shaking his head. "My Army hasn't acted. This is explicitly an internal matter, but the request of Pluto himself."

"Hades." She hissed at him. He shrugged and smiled genially. "Then why are you here, taunting me? Don't pretend like you don't know what you're doing."

He put the pipe down, smoke still billowing from it. "I'm really just here to talk." He said, raising his hands to placate her. "With your dao… sorry, Divinity of Divine Retribution I'm hardly going to be the one to fight you when you think I've wronged you."

Just as she had conditions where she had certain advantages, so did he. She knew that facing an alchemist and array-master of his caliber in a ground of his choosing was going to be difficult. "What else is left to say?" She asked him, changing tactics.She spread her hands to indicate the battle around them. "My family is going to tear itself apart and your Army is going to feast upon our remains like the vultures you are."

"Yes, many people are going to die as a result of this." He agreed, sighing. "Is it so wrong to make sure that one of my friends isn't going to be one of them?"

"As if you care." She replied, gritting her teeth. "Why aren't you there for any of the others then, huh? What's so special about little old me?"

"Most of the rest are waiting for things to play out." He replied, looking for a moment away from her and at the distant conflict. "Of the ones that aren't, you are the only one I can stop."

"Oh?" She taunted him, raising an eyebrow. "Is the famous wordsmith at a loss for words?"

He turned to her with a grim look. "Are you going to be the one to tell the likes of Heracles that he isn't justified in his vengeance?"

She grimaced. "No." She replied, unable to muster a greater response. Then something in his reply gave her an idea and she tried to keep a smile from her face. "And what about Ares? Aren't you going to stop your dear friend from risking his life?"

"Mars," He corrected her, more out of habit as he thought about how to answer her question.

She grinned at him. "Ar-res." She said, stretching it out in a mocking manner. His demeanour immediately shifted as a dangerous look came to his eyes. Finally. Just a little more of a push. Enough to make him strike me first.

He pulled down his feet from the table and finally looked at her with a truly serious expression. "I don't usually care about names, Nemesis." He said carefully. "But Mars chose his name not out of political convenience but because it represented what he felt he had become. If you insult the name he's chosen, then I will make you regret it."

"I suppose you couldn't stop him even if you wanted." She continued, as if the last exchange hadn't happened. "How far is he now? Much, much further than you are, certainly. You never really had the talent to keep up with him."

"Neither do you," He hissed back, surprised by her sudden change in tactics.

She shrugged, hiding a smile. He was always prickly about that. "Certainly, but I never considered myself a peer to an Olympian." She told him, feigning nonchalance. "But hubris was always the flaw in your so-called perfection."

He gripped the table tightly but didn't say anything in reply. Just a little more… "What's wrong?" She asked, almost tasting her victory. "Why don't you say anything..." Her speech slurred at the end and she felt her feet buckle. Her eyes immediately went to Teleos, who was already moving - flipping his table at her. She caught sight of the pipe tossed in the air, still spewing smoke - poison!. "You- !"

Strength flooded into body as her soul swelled with righteous vengeance and she flicked out her whip. It traveled faster than her eyes could follow, igniting with flames of divine retribution but it stuck the upturned table that expanded into a fragile aegis that was able to repel her first blow.

He took to the air, holding his chair in his hands. As he tried to make distance between them, she followed, body and soul empowered by her Divinity. She nearly stumbled as the effect of the poison increased with her movements, but she forced herself forward while holding out her knife to gut him as soon as she got close.

Though she caught up quickly, he held up the chair between them and kept it there. She hesitated, not knowing whether to go through it or manoeuvre past it. She spent a moment trying to figure out a trick and that moment cost her. The poison slowed her just enough that he was able to move away clear.
"Teleos, you bastard!" She screamed, chasing after him with both her knife and whip in hand. "You tricked me!"

"I thought that was the point!" He shouted back while trying to keep ahead of her with all of his might. "Weren't you also trying to taunt me into striking first?"

She snarled as she tried to catch up with him, but she couldn't. "What about all of that stuff about talking to me and saving my life? Was that all just a distraction?" She asked, trying to let the very real hurt show in her voice.

"No!" He replied, coming to a stop all of a sudden. "But was there any other way you were going to stop or listen?"

She didn't bother to wonder or reply, just flew into him with her speed and struck him in the gut with her knife. His chair fell from his hand and he spit out blood. Then he grinned and in a puff of smoke, his body turned into the damned chair and she looked to see him where the chair had fallen.

She raised her whip to strike at him but then she stopped, sensing another power at the distance. Despite herself, she couldn't help but look to the horizon where the battle of the two brothers had so far been at a standstill. Then a giant red armored legionnaire grew to a size that matched the Pillars and the Storm.

She turned to Teleos and growled. "You damn liar!" She spat out, pointing her knife at the giant. "That's one of your army's formations, aren't they? You said they wouldn't interfere!"

"Look closer," He replied, making no move to run. "It's still an internal matter."

She frowned and turned to the giant, focusing her intent on it as it began to strike at the storm above it. Beyond the chorus of bronze hearts beating as one was an aura she recognized. It was different - an officer's hand on a soldier's shoulder instead of a brutish fist breaking bones - but it was still unmistakable. "Ares."

"And others." Teleos told her. "A legion born entirely from those of your kin who had been wronged by your king." He wasn't lying. Even as he spoke to her, she could begin making out individual auras that she could recognise. "Is there any wrong side here?" He continued prodding her. "Is there any need for retribution?"

She looked at him and sighed. "No." She replied, feeling the power of her Divinity leave her. There was no justification she could use here. "No, there isn't."

As the power left her body, the poison began to affect her and she suddenly found herself falling without the energy to keep herself afloat. Teleos came over and caught her, as she knew he would after going to so much trouble to keep him alive. "You know what you'd really look great in?" He asked, pausing and then giving her one of his most annoying smirks. "My arms."

She became acutely aware of the fact that if she had the strength, this would have been an amazing tactic to get within stabbing range. "I'm going to stab you." She forced out as he lowered them to the nearest mountain. "What did you poison me with anyway?"

"Hydra Venom." He replied, shrugging. "Utterly deadly, but if you even have a touch of a dao it will only paralyse you and fill you with immense pain."

"I don't feel any pain." She informed him, trying to move her limbs but finding them filled with a strange lethargy. She felt like she could physically move it, but for the life of her she couldn't muster the will to do so. "I've been hit by that once. This doesn't feel like that."

"I mixed it with lotus extract," He answered, smiling in that damnably smug way. "My own design for non-lethal take-downs."

She sighed as they stepped on the mountaintop and he placed her in a seated position against a rock so that she could see the battle. "You had it planned out." She mused. "I never had a chance, did I?"

"Maybe if I was still the person you knew me as." He told her, not smugly but with a sad nostalgia. "But I've found opportunities to grow in ways unrelated to my cultivation."

She sighed again as she turned towards the battle, the storm being driven back with two forces now arrayed against him. "I definitely would have flown to my death if you weren't here." She mused again. "Even without my divinity empowering me. What makes you think I'll join your little merry band of golden devils?"

He groaned. "Please don't use that name again." He asked her. "It might stick."

She smiled for a second. "Don't dodge the question."

"I think… I think you never had a stake in the current regime." He said, trying to explain his reasoning. "I don't know if you'll join us entirely, you certainly don't have to but I think our laws and our ideals might appeal to you. Certainly my superiors are better than your king."

She sighed. "So you've grown then." She said, changing the subject. "Have you given up on advancing further?"

"Certainly not." He replied, affronted. "I've accepted my limitations, but..." He considered the perfect allegory before smiling. "But let's say I don't intend to go gently into the night."

"Keep my mother out of this." She joked weakly and he smiled at her, sticking a tongue out. It felt nice for a second, to forget the war and the law and her family. It felt like old times.

Couldn't she just stay that way?

It was nice.
 
Rina Callista X4 - Interlude: Redmoon 1
Rina Callista
Interlude: Redmoon 1

Frustration was a feeling the Altar Lord had become accustomed to in his life. Frustration at the tyrannical Heavens above, blocking and punishing any tactic that might see their influence reduced. Frustration at those who bore the Soup Chef's sword and saw the sword itself to be beautiful--rather than the cause it was forged for.

Frustration at how those who should be his allies could not be swayed to his side. He understood the reasoning--even respected it to a degree, they would not be such capable allies if their principles were up for negotiation. But still! To stand divided against the uncaring skies above is to die separately--to be literally written out of history as so many others had before.

He only prayed they came to see sense before it was too late.

His journey back home from the cave he had used as shelter while sending his simulacrum to the Dawn Fortress was slower than it could be--the Wei Princess had her eye on this part of the Region, and the undulations of his Nascent Soul would be easily detected if he flew. He wasn't in the mood for another lecture at the moment, so he did what normal people did and walked.

That his reverie-fueled trance-walk saw him covering hundreds of li every hour was simply practicality speaking. There was little to be seen in this part of the Region anyway--mostly foothills, poor villages striving to survive against the beast tides of the mountains while not quite having as much power to cultivate with. A liminal place too poor to attract strong cultivators, but too dangerous to make mortal habitation a regular thing--outside of the occasional group of mountain nomads or herders.

What these lands were--to one of his stature--was quiet. Hence why he meditated here while meeting with Konstantinos. No unexpected interruptions--precisely how he liked things to go.

That the view was pleasant was merely an added bonus--a place away from the madness of the Battlefield and away from the Altar, where he could let his mind waft away, free from the obligations of his position--if only for a moment.

A flicker on the edge of his awareness--and even the illustrious Altar Lord did not bother stifling a sigh. Of course, some things never changed. The Heavens were tyrants, the Blood Path savages, and men would ever seek to seize that which they did not earn through naked force.

Well, he supposed he was feeling a little peckish, a short diversion to vent a little of his frustration wouldn't cost him too much now, would it?

The Altar Lord turned his gaze to the small village in the distance, the clouds of smoke visible even from here, and slightly quickened his pace--his form little more than a flicker of red light to any who would witness it. The might of a Nascent Soul remained a marvel to him even to this day--the Soul finally let loose from the shackles of the flesh, to wield the Dao in defiance of the Heavens.

If only defiance was enough--without power, one would simply be tolerated until the line was crossed, and then erased.

He jerked to a stop within the village--smoldering embers and skeletal structures remaining of what was once a modestly successful settlement. Unwashed and shabby looking men celebrating in what was once the central square. The smell of cooked beast meat filled the air. Not even well cooked even--too much in a rush to celebrate their victory to do a proper job of it.

Of course, the smell of the burning bodies didn't help either--he glanced to the pyre where the men and boys of the village had been piled--and the more fortunate women and girls who didn't survive the attack.

Such savagery.

He heard the chieftain bellow some nonsense about how their gang had grown strong, that the destruction of this village was some great deed on their part as opposed to the natural result of a gang of cultivators attacked a small village that would be lucky to have a dozen Qi Condensation protectors--maybe with a mortal militia with some old obsolete crossbows if they were lucky.

He snorted--infusing a wisp of his Nascent Will into the gesture. The fires were snuffed out, and the bandits looked askance at the sudden intrusion. He folded his hands into his sleeves as he waited for them to notice him.

It didn't take them long. The chieftain--some broken toothed little shit who somehow managed to bumble his way into Late Foundation Establishment brandished an axe "Oi! This ain't any of your business Immortal!" He bragged, as his men rallied behind him . "Don't think you'll be able to take on the Broken Sun Bandits so easily?"

What a droll name. Not even anything creative The Altar Lord encompassed the square within Will, dividing it many ways as he prepared to strike.

And he noticed something--an ember of lifeforce in the village well--a survivor? He absently turned his attention away from the bandits, marching over to the place that had caught his attention, ignoring the blustered shouts to get in formation and the clattering of crossbow bolts against his robes.

With a gesture, he extended his Will into the well, wrapping it around the lifeforce--and gently pulled it up into the light. A slip of a mortal girl, dressed in rough homespun, hair gone white--was it fear or some odd constitution?

A ripple of undetectable Will did a brief assessment--malnourishment and exposure, slight hypothermia--no particularly exotic constitution or other traits though. Her gaze was fixed on him though, despite her still chattering teeth.

An axe broke against his neck. The Altar Lord gave a quiet tisk of irritation--and clenched the spirits of the bandits. They went stiff--Rigor Mortis asserting itself on the brink of certain doom.

He never took his eyes off the girl though as he clenched his mental fist--the bandits giving off miserable screams as their blood and flesh suddenly imploded into orbs of--mostly pure--Blood Essence, shattered bones clattering to the ground, bleached white in moments and left hollow as the marrow itself joined the collection. The beads collected before his upraised hand, useless bits discarded as the essence and cultivation concentrated to a peak.

"Your tormentors are slain." The Altar Lord began, the orb of blood essence hovering above the palm of his hand. "It is beyond my power to raise the dead, but you are free to do as you will… So, tell me." He met the girl's gaze. "What will you do with this?"

She met his gaze unfalteringly. "I will see their bones buried, and their ghosts set at peace."

"Even after the suffering they wrought upon you? Even after your kin fell to their intemperate hunger?" The Altar Lord asked.

The girl nodded. "Even then. Whatever they were in life… It's just too sad to still be mad at them."

The Altar Lord mulled that over--and nodded, accepting the answer. He considered the matter for a moment, weighing the time spent already vs how much he had allowed for this trip.

Yes, he could afford a little time.

The orb vanished, drawn into his cultivation base. "Let me tell you a story…"

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He was the bearer of an ancient trust--one established in the wake of the greatest war in the history of all Nine Seas. A peerless expert rose in those times, gazing upon the world--upon an order that exalts the mighty and heaps scorn upon the meek--and found it displeasing to his eye.

Through many adventures and many schemes, he reached the peak of cultivation--acquiring strength that none known could match. He turned his gaze then to the great Order, and declared war upon it--a decree enforced at the tip of a great sword.

He then ascended into the firmament to wage his great battle--but understood that his war could not be won alone. Thus, he saw to it that the people of his homeland could be made ready to join him. Peerless weapons secreted throughout the Sea. Battle Skills and Techniques that gave no care for talent, the favor of the heavens, or wealth. Only one's Will and Desire could lead the way, sharpening the terrible blade on those who would stand against them in defense of the Heavens.

Yet it has been many years since the master passed his trust down, and his followers have grown indolent and corrupt in his absence. Where once they were bearers of terrible weapons aimed to the cause of Liberation--now many worship the weapons themselves, seeing them as a divine right to breed suffering for their own exaltation.

Today, only a bare handful remember the original Cause, the remainder a stream of savages exulting in Consumption for its own sake. The exceptions numbered less than a hundred.

He was so very tired.


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The Altar Lord suppressed the coughing fit that threatened to surge after that admission--but something about his expression seemed to be noticed by the girl. Mentally, he sighed and began to extend his will--no sense in letting a witness to his weakness appear...

She was hugging him.

Why?

Why was that happening?

"It wasn't a mistake." She says, patting him. "If the world is wrong, if it lets things like this happen, then it deserves to be fought." She said, conviction clear in her words and in her eyes. "As long as you're still alive, as long as you can still fight, then you're not beaten yet, right?"

She sniffed. "That's what mom said, when she put me down the well. 'While you're alive, things might still change.' If the world wants people to be evil, if it wants there to be bandits everywhere and people turning into monsters, then it needs to be stopped."

She backs off, flushing. "Oh! Forgive me Master Immortal, I just thought you sounded sad for a moment." She bows several times.

The Altar Lord laughed--far more warmly than he had imagined. "From the humblest origins can the Dao be found." He mused to himself. "You are correct of course, the cause is worthy--the most worthy cause of all. That there are setbacks from time to time is just natural."

He clasped his hands behind his back. "I have an offer for you, child."

He bit his tongue, and a single drop of blood was spilled--suspended before his face. "If you wish to join me in my crusade, I will grant you a legacy--a measure of power, and a measure of knowledge to guide you upon your path."

Truth be told, the power was mostly just what he collected from the bandits here, but even just touched by a Nascent Soul for a short time, it would carry a certain gravitas of its own.

"I will give you no illusions, to walk on this path is to commit from the start. You will touch one of the greatest weapons ever forged, and refine it through a crucible of battle and conflict. The strength of your foes will become your own, as will their karma. The world itself will become your enemy until it breaks before you. Chances are, you will die long before you amount to anything at all. You are far more likely to be twisted into yet another savage, overwhelmed by the power of the Blood and seeking it for its own sake."

The bead of concentrated Blood Essence hovered between them.

"Knowing all of that, will you walk this path?"

The girl didn't hesitate for a moment, kowtowing three times before him. "I will walk this path, show me the way Master."

The Altar Lord smiled, and shook his head. "Not Master--not yet--you couldn't bear the karma of being my disciple. Rise."

The girl rose to her knees as the bead of Blood Essence entered her brow, suffusing her body--a torrent of Blood Qi purifying her body, forcing out impurities--and carrying with it a hint of knowledge--of cultivation techniques and battle skills that could serve as a foundation for any disciple to find their own way.

"Should you remain true--then present yourself to me at the Demonic Altar when you have the might of Core Formation." He ordered. "Until then, use the disciples of the Sect as you will. Crush them, devour them, convert them--but expect them to do the same in turn to you. Travel the Region, learn from it, find the Dao. And should you find yourself with the cruel Heavens at your mercy."

He clenched his fist, sending a shock through the air before them.

"Do not, hesitate."

The girl passed out as his Will invaded her ephemeral soul--certain alterations made to her memory of the event in the off chance someone decided to interrogate her. He didn't believe he had said anything sensitive--but one didn't live to be a Nascent Soul by leaving anything to chance--and a strange and mysterious immortal could be attributed as one of the many Blood Path Legacies throughout the Region rather than his own personal plan.

He clasped his hands back before him as the girl slept, her new Cultivation Base already assembling itself according to the foundational data he had introduced into her mind sea. He wasn't in the habit of doing the more traditional interpretations of Cultivation.

But when a Good Seed of that quality crops in--well, what kind of overlord would he be if he didn't find some good soil to grow in? He is a villain, not a savage after all.
 
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