Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Xiao Yingzi 29 - [Turn 9] [The Backyard]
Another one that probably could be better. Hopefully it's still enjoyable.

Xiao Yingzi 29
[Turn 9]
[The Backyard]

"Well, isn't this an absolutely frankensteinian set-up." Victor said, as Xiao Yingzi showed him the training room where she fought the pathwork man.

"What does frankensteinian mean?" She asked him curiously, as he knelt to examine the corpse of the creature in question.

"It's from a story." He answered, before turning to her with a raised eyebrow. "So you think that this… patchwork man is worth my help in clearing up the Sanctius House with you?"

"You would also get your pick out of whatever other research materials we find." She pointed out. "And the creature demonstrated several uses of electricity that you might find intriguing."

"I have my own ways of accomplishing the things you mentioned." He replied, shaking his head. "The really useful thing here was what the spirit knew and since you killed it, anything new I place inside would be me starting from scratch."

"Even the healing?" She asked, kneeling down next to him. "I assumed that it had some aspects attached to the design of the body itself."

"There probably is." He replied, shrugging. "And I'm intrigued by it. But my current focus is the study of how to harness heavenly lightning with my own methods rather than others. I need that to align all of my pillars in time."

"I can lower the cost of providing my own lightning to you by 20%?" She offered, calculating her profits with what she could get out of the Sanctius House against their current deal.

"20% for all time?" He replied, grinning at her.

"You would still be getting the corpse and most of the equipment here." Xiao Yingzi pointed out, "And I can recognise when there is a fair amount of tribulation lightning still stored here. 20% until for let us say fifty years?"

"With the trials coming up?" He raised an eyebrow at her. "There is no guarantee either of us will survive. 50% and it's a deal."

"50%..." She agreed, shaking her head. "But I get the first pick from any other items we find. If you want anything, we can negotiate for those items separately."

"Glad to work with you again, Yingzi." Victor said, grinning as he raised a hand.

"And I you, Victor." She replied, clasping his hands with her own.
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It had taken several days for Victor' century to arrive at the Dawn Fortress. They had taken that time to properly clear the Sanctius House. It was something Xiao Yingzi was certain she could have handled herself given time, but with two centurions to deal with issues, it was far faster and more organised.

They had several other spiritual encounters but nothing that seemed to be quite as hostile as their previous encounters. There was a worrying mannequin with an ominous aura strapped to a table with seals for example but it didn't threaten them. There was also a set of caltrops in a compartment meant to seal it from external qi that they didn't open.

Nevertheless they had made several finds that were significant, even if they didn't completely understand how many of the items worked. Once they had cleared the house however and legionnaires arrived to study what they had found, they turned their attention to the backyard which seemed to have it's own sort of wonders and terrors. It was a towering greenhouse, the size of the home itself though lacking it's maze-like corridors.

The qi in the air and most of the resources seemed to be concentrated on a large mound of earth with spiralling pathways with rivers of water that flowed upwards from the ground before falling into a hole in the top. Between those pathways grew beautiful red flowers that tickled a memory in the mind of Xiao Yingzi. "Are those Step-Up Herbs?" Victor asked, as they gazed towards the garden from the backdoor.

Xiao Yingzi's eyes widened as she remembered them. It was something Antonius had found a few decades ago in a place called the Three Waters Valley. A coveted herb that greatly increased the absorption of qi from the atmosphere, it had allowed him to gain nearly twenty years of cultivation despite his injuries.

Now, it was less useful to the average golden devil as they cultivated through spirit stone rather than ambient qi and so the herb wasn't very useful for them, but based upon a quick estimation the amount here could at least raise a hundred aspirants regardless of talent into the third heavenstage using merely the qi at the dawn fortress.

Even those in the fifth or sixth heaventage could gain over five years of cultivation if they took in the plains. If they could find areas with even higher ambient qi, the gain would be even higher. And for a plains cultivator, the herb was far more effective meaning one could trade them for a number of spirit stones which would be useful for a clan cultivator.

Though if they could find a place where the ambient qi was even higher… "We should clear a path and look closer." Xiao Yingzi replied. "Do you sense any threats?" It was unlikely he had when she hadn't, but it was better to ask.

The path between them and the herbs was filled with rotting bushes and vines cut in the shape of beasts. Rather than reply, Victor tossed a stone before moving back behind the door and when it landed with a thud, one of the bushes moved in a thoroughly beast-like manner. "Reanimated plants," Victor noted. "Likely fed with beast cores and made mobile through their memories and power."

"They seem to be mostly scorpions." Xiao Yingzi pointed out, looking over the shapes. "Taken from the scorpion stables perhaps?"

"The clan breeds several species." He replied, considering her words. "We should be careful, they could be capable of anything."

Xiao Yingzi nodded and held up her spear while Victor drew back his glove. "Let's take care of them then." She said and with that, they moved.

Most of the plants were rooted to the ground and barely came to the heights of their knees. Creatures of the heavenstages, easily ignored. There was a large scorpion stalker - big enough to ride on - that turned towards them as they entered the greenhouse properly. Unlike the rest, it was as strong as them and pulled itself off the ground as they approached.

Xiao Yingzi was too swift for the smaller scorpions to get to her and she raised to confront the larger creature. It raised it's right front claw and wrapped it around Xiao Yingzi's spear, holding it in place. Victor came from the other side, too strong for any of the smaller scorpions to pierce his skin. If they tried to grab him, their touch burnt them away.

There was a flash and Xiao Yingzi summoned her own lightning, freeing herself from the scorpion's grip before she summoned a larger blast of lightning and fried it away entirely. Unfortunately, while she had slain the current foe, the sound of vines snapping indicated that she had only summoned more enemies as the garden was filled with the sounds of scorpion plants uprooting themselves.

"It's not dead yet." Victor called out to her, pointing at the ground where she stood. Xiao Ying jumped back and as they watched, vines began to regrow from the ground where the Scorpion Stalker had been rooted, unbothered by it's 'corpse' being burnt apart by lightning.

"They regenerate?" Xiao Yingzi asked, vocalizing her thoughts. "Or perhaps the body we destroyed wasn't their true body." She held up a spear and began charging it with lightning in order to penetrate the earth and strike the creature at its source.

"Let me try." Victor replied, shaking his head. "I have more stamina than you do." He raised his two gloved palms up, facing each other with a conical metal piece between them. As sparks began to move between the gloves, the metal piece began to float between them before spinning, filling the air with a sharp keening sound.

As it spun faster, the sound became sharper before finally reaching it's crescendo. Then with a burst of power, the bullet flew from between his hands and smashed into the earth where the roots of the scorpion plant were. They dug deep, glassing and ripping apart the area with lightning until it finally lost all power and stopped.

Xiao Yingzi dispersed her own technique and jumped to where it had hit . She quickly dug around the ground before drawing out a shattered glass orb wrapped around with incinerated roots that emanated rapidly fading beast qi. "We need to destroy these cores to finish them off permanently."

Victor nodded and Xiao Yingzi turned to the first threat she could sense, a jumping scorpion leaping towards them from over the herbs. "I will keep the plants off of you." Xiao Yingzi said and then she threw her spear before he could reply. Her electrifying spear flew through it, causing it to wrap around the weapon and fly back through the air pulled by its momentum.

Then she raised her palm and the sparks along the spear exploded, blasting the plant creature with lightning and she watched it fall apart under the strength of her spear. Then it stopped in mid-air and by her will, it changed its direction, falling back into her outstretched hand. "You handle the bodies and I'll strike their source?" Victor asked, causing her to look towards him.

She nodded in reply. Either of them could do either duty, but he had higher cultivation and higher amounts of qi allowing him to keep it up longer. They worked their way to the other groups, making short work of any scorpions they came across, or any other plant-like creature that came into their path. They were dangerous creatures but with two centurions, it ultimately wasn't much of a challenge.

Finally, they arrived at the hill and began to examine it. Xiao Yingzi had been able to sense the altered flows of qi from the entrance but here, she could feel it from patterns that seemed to be focused towards allowing the plants to grow. "So what are you going to do with this?" Victor asked her, looking at her bounty. "The Fortress would pay a fair bit to gain access to it."

Xiao Yingzi shook her head. "I may have some other ideas." She replied, before turning to him. "I believe I'm going to create my own century."

Victor raised an eyebrow at that reply. "Tell me more."

And she did, outlining her plans to his surprise and then critique.
 
Year 188 Interlude - The Teacher Returns To His Students
Diaxiang sat in the air, gesticulating with one hand.

Below him the bees marched, and danced, the traces of human blood he'd placed in them some months ago serving to puppet their bodies to his will. It wasn't a Beast Taming art in truth, but it was enough to interfere with Xia Xinyue's control.

She looked up at him and snarled, trying to wrest control from him as she herself flew surrounded by her swarm.

Honestly, it was refreshing. Corpse Gulper had constantly shifted between licking his boots and plotting against him. If he'd been killed during a proper plot to seize power that had left his apprentice in charge, it wouldn't have been so punishing. It wasn't that just the boy he'd raised betrayed him and tried to kill him, it's that he did it so stupidly. He had, he thoughts, been too lenient. Too willing to let his apprentice make his own mistakes, discover the truths about the world that were available to him in his own way. It had killed him, and it had ended his Sect.

Xia Xinyue was named the Hive Queen in the Devil Bee Sect. Amongst the people of the Verdant South, she was known by another name. Buzzing Apocalypse. Her ability to command hundreds of thousands of bees from afar made her able to strike without exposing herself, and her raids on the Yu Clan were a thing of legend. Her failed strike at the Divine Tunist Sect a century ago had left her dangerously exposed, and that had led to the rise of her junior, Lin Gengxin.

Both talents. Xinyue was only six hundred years old, and Gengxin was four hundred and thirty. Even for Blood Path that was a mighty accomplishment, but it had left them untempered in many ways.

The bees swarmed at him, and Old Cannibal simply tore them into pieces, blood worming its way out of their bodies, slicing and tearing as it did so. Thousands of Devil Bees fell from the sky, screaming in agony before their deaths.

He huffed.

"Xinyue, why are you here?"

She looked at him imperiously. She was a peculiar-looking woman, he had to admit. She had the blonde hair of the Golden Devils, but lacked their larger eyes. Despite that, her eyes were blue as the sky, and she herself was quite plump. One of the Core Formation elders he'd disassembled for information when he'd first arrived at the Devil Bee Sect had described her as a slim woman, a 'true jade beauty'. With that in mind, he suspected she cultivated a body cultivation art that allowed her to resist poisons, and was probably made more effective the heavier she was. He himself had briefly cultivated the Nail-Forging Poison-Imparting Art in his youth, allowing him to temper his fingernails and toenails, and even infuse most poisons into them provided the dosage was small enough, providing him both another offensive means and some minor immunity against all poisons. They had left his toenails and fingernails a viridescent shade of green, of course, but that was a small price to pay.

She looked up at him.

"Gengxin said you were lecturing. I refuse to be left out."

He smiled benignly.

"This was a lecture more suited to Lin Gengxin, but as I previously mentioned, you are both welcome to any of my lectures."

It had proven difficult at first to get the two women to listen to his teachings. Threats could not truly teach, and he had no desire to bribe or cajole. Instead, he merely offered lectures to one or the other, and made it known he would not prevent the other one showing up. They spied on each other - and him - relentlessly, and their rivalry did all the work he might have otherwise had to do.

Moments later, Lin Gengxin flew down, the Mistress of Seven Poisons looking at Xia Xinyue with barely-restrained fury.

Diaxiang clapped his hands.

"Good! We can begin. Firstly, with questions. Are there any thoughts on our last lecture?"

Xinyue spoke.

"We attacked the Saber Palace, killing some insignificant rats. We were then driven off, taking little loot and gaining no cultivation for our efforts. I have thought on this, and there are many answers. Will you finally give me the truth today?"

He smiled.

"Yes. Four hundred years ago I obtained a copy of On Solved and Insoluble Mysteries, by Ioannes Meliae. A brilliant map, who established several theories I had considered but had not been able to flesh out. I suggest you try and arrange for the theft of a copy from the Golden Devils - Konstantinos mocked me in Emperor Peafowl City with its name, and only a fool lets a defeat go to waste."

He looked at the two. They were both sitting patiently, listening. Good.

"The truth is not so complicated. The two of you cannot work together, so you look for a short-term future where one consumes the other, or, more ideally, consumes me. Conversely, I need to you exert control in the Devil Bee Sect, so I must not consume you. This tension between your desires and mine is the cause of your confusion. You believe ultimately that I am aiming to destroy you in some sense, whether that be an ultimate betrayal to found my new Sect, or misuse of you to weaken you relative to myself. Meliae wrote about the Blood Path Dilemma - where two Blood Path cultivators might wish to consume mortals in a city. If they both restrain themselves and eat a few and allow the population to recover, they do well. If they both gorge themselves, they do worse. Conversely, if one gorges and one does not, the gorger grows much more powerful and can consume his rival to boot. So the best decision is always to gorge."

Xinyue looked bored.

"This is known. What else do you have to say?"

He sighed.

"Old Konstantinos wins because the Golden Devils are excellent at co-operating. They restrain themselves. Conversely, I lost, not because of any personal deficiency, but because I cannot reach sufficient heights to conquer the Region on my own, but neither can I trust my subordinates to act in the interest of something greater. This is not an easily soluble problem, in truth. Nascent-level binding artifacts are limited in number, scope, and do not work so well for Nascents of differing strengths."

"So, why the Saber Palace?"

"It was an example. To weaken the Saber Palace will cause them to retreat like a turtle into its shell, allowing us to strike at the Yu Clan, Chuan Clan, the Joyful Blacksmiths and even the Great Drunkards. Confused and without a leader, there will be an extended period of time in which the Verdant South will not be able to resist us. A more sensible strategy for me if I wished to advance my cultivation would be to kill one or both of you, or to misuse you in such a way you were wounded or weakened against the Saber Palace. Conversely, I have shown my hand - I wish for you to be strong, able to run rampant over our enemies in the Verdant South, and ultimately for you to rise into Mid Nascent Soul each, leading your own glorious Blood Path factions. Fools wrestle one another off the ladder to escape a flooding well, and all drown. Sensible people simply climb one at a time, sacrificing the weakest or those who cannot speak in their own defense where necessary."

Gengxin smiled at him. She was plain - drab, even - for a Nascent Soul, and it was surprisingly difficult to keep his attention on her for more than a few moments. She simply slipped out of the mind when not beign focused on, and for a moment he was concerned she had poisoned him again.

"Yet you cannot prevent us from plotting against you, and trying to kill you. Just like your former apprentice, Corpse Gulper."

Old Cannibal stood up midair, and cracked his back, stretching this way and that.

"A fool gives into despair because he has been betrayed once. The grand project of forming a true Blood Path power is no easy task. You might think me foolish for trusting once again, but what other alternative is there? Eat one of you, kill the other, and rule in these mountains until Konstantinos or Strength Purity dig me out of them? I intend to trust you two as I trusted my traitorous disciple. Perhaps you will betray me and eat me. Or perhaps we will rise to power unheard-of together."

He leapt down out of the air, landing on the ground lightly.

"In either case, both of you will need to prepare your finest warriors, your swarms, pull together what disciples you can. Let me show you my sincerity by feeding you the Chuan Clan."
 
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"Yes. Four hundred years ago I obtained a copy of On Solved and Insoluble Mysteries, by Ioannes Meliae. A brilliant map, who established several theories I had considered but had not been able to flesh out. I suggest you try and arrange for the theft of a copy from the Golden Devils - Komnenos mocked me in Emperor Peafowl City with its name, and only a fool lets a defeat go to waste."

Truly Komnenos has been a filial father to teach his ungrateful child so well.
 
Altar Lord: Blood Path is a horrible weapon used to defy the heavens

Old Cannibal: Blood Path is a perfectly fine route to power, you've just got to LISTEN to me and act sensibly damnit!
 
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The Righteous Path might need to rethink their projections of how quickly the Demon War is going to end. You know what, they might actually be right about the timing but not the victors. An organized Blood Path sect can ravage their backlines and pull away desperately needed support from the Fearless Line. It is utterly ironic that there are three Nascents in the Golden Devils and Jingshen who could have cleared out this nuisance before it became a gaping wound but Strength Purity thought too little of Old Cannibal.
 
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Minervina Barda 26 - The 698th Legion. The Three Starred Furnace.
Minervina Barda 26th: The 698th Legion. The Three Starred Furnace.

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Legion Name: The 698th Legion, commonly referred to as the 'Thrice Great Furnace.'

Lineage: The 698th is one of the few legions to have been consistently staffed and on the rolls since its founding in the latter part of the first millennia after the arrival of the Sea Conquering Army. It was first founded by Elder Zosimus Panopolis, an Alchemist who is reputed in some legends to have been one of the first to discover how to grant 3rd Sea natives the Blood of Bronze.

Legate: Legate Auxillary Cassius Panopolis. A Great Circle Expert who has taken on the mantle of Legate in the absence of a Core Formation candidate. Known as the Peacemaker, he is renowned for his excellent diplomatic and administrative skills, he is often requested as a neutral arbiter in disputes between legions and vassal states alike.

Sigil: A silver pill furnace surrounded by three bronze stars on a black field.

Motto: Per Ignem ad Lucem "Through fire to the light"

Territory: Disdaining the responsibility to patrol or garrison any notable territory, the Legion instead maintains control over a number of Spirit Herb plantations and Beast hunting grounds. Most of these are focused around the Pill-Forge Forest, a region in which the 698th is considered one of the top 10 landowners. The majority of the Legion maintains the Enclaves that serve as the 698ths dormitories, strongholds and refineries at dozens of major forts and cities throughout Clan territory for its Legionnaires.

Headquarters: The Argent Pinnacle. A fortress and refinery in the Pill-Forge Forest. The tallest structure for miles around, its gleaming spire can be spotted from the Dawn Fortress on clear days.

Composition: At the time of writing the Legion has 6821 Qi Condensation Disciples and 91 Foundation Building Experts. The Legion's only Core Formation Elder in recent history, Furnace-Mistress Amelia Panopolis, was slain during the trials of 100 KM. Her son and Great Circle of Foundation Building Expert Cassius has been safeguarding the Legion since then.

Description: The 'Thrice Great Furnace' is a very loosely organised Legion that holds no territory or cities. Its atypical structure instead sees its members cluster in fortified enclaves outside most of the Clans major Scorpion Road forts and trading cities. In these Refinery-Forts they work together on the production of a sizeable percentage of all the Cultivation aids and consumables in Golden Devil territory.

The Legate and his most trusted Centurions operate a specialised sub-section of the Clan Contribution Board from a rare and treasured Division Anchor that is kept at the Legions greatest fortress, the Argent Pinnacle. Legion members can access this 'Private Board' from terminals anywhere in Golden Devil territory. Here the Legions Alchemists can access a heavily discounted supply of common reagents that the Legion either gathers itself or buys in bulk using Legion Contribution Points. This is also a valuable tool for members looking for work, as the Legions large staff of administrators and communication officers work tirelessly to ensure the most valuable contracts and opportunities in the Alchemical field are shared on this sub-board first before hitting the wider contribution board.

This practice has been the source of some controversy in the past, with critics feeling that this goes against the communal nature of the Clans approach to resources. To date though the Legions vital role as the most consistent large scale supplier of life-saving pills and bottleneck breaking elixirs has ensured that no Archgetes has taken exception to its practices. During the times of Trial or when the Clan goes to war, the Private Board is rapidly militarised, converting the Legion from a loose confederation of aligned cultivators into a potent industrial force, ensuring that the correct supplies and medicine are sent to the correct fronts of ongoing conflicts. While they scarcely ever march in Formation under a shining Hoplite, many battles have been won by the speedy arrival of a supply caravan bearing the 698ths sigil.

Outside of an expectation to remain productive, maintain a reasonable Cultivation schedule and a positive Contribution Point balance, the 698th keeps an extremely laissez-faire approach to its member's activities. The Legate and his officer cadre prefer to use incentives and the Private Board to direct members activities during peacetime. While almost all 698th Legionnaires follow some kind of Pill or other Craft Dao, it's quite typical for members to pick up a subspecialty or branch out into some other area of Cultivation in order to round out their skills. The Legion has a significant number of sub-groups and Legacies handed down over the centuries. For example, the Brotherhood of Mercurious is an ancient tradition of warrior-alchemists who turn their vitriolic green Pill Flames into potent weapons and constructs. Some of the Legions most prominent members are Poison Masters, who frequently take secondment missions to frontline legions, eager to test their latest concoctions under battlefield conditions.

While not a rival for the specialist medical legions, the 698th does have a healthy tradition of raising up talented Spirit Doctors as well. When not working on medical research or assisting with medicine production, these expert practitioners earn a large share of the Legions Contribution Points placing themselves under secondment of various front line units. The most common interaction between a rank and file member of a different legion and a member of the 698th is being patched back together after a particularly fierce battle.

Socially, members of the Thrice Great Furnace have a reputation as loners and eccentrics who reject the close camaraderie of traditional legion life in preference for the solitude of a laboratory. This author, however, was pleasantly surprised by the strong sense of community he found in each of the Enclaves he visited while researching this piece. I found a tradition of researchers and crafters who take great pride in their work and relish the opportunity to contribute to the furtherance of the Clans ends in a way that allows them to remain close to their families and maintain a more settled lifestyle than is offered to many of their peers. The pecking order in these enclave communities is usually established through friendly competitions of alchemical prowess. Communal events with much feasting and music, I could not imagine how nerve-wracking it must be for the participants to attempt their difficult crafts when surrounded by such noisy onlookers, all of whom are also experts in the field and quite willing to chip in if they think you're doing something stupid.

Since, outside the Trials, members are rarely found on the front-line of conflicts they have something of a reputation as a sinecure for those who fear direct combat. This rarely goes beyond friendly ribbing between Clan-Mates though, as a certain percentage of Thrice-Great do earn Points by doing secondment work as Spirit Doctors and Poison Masters, and any Legionnaire with an ounce of sense knows better than to speak badly of the man in charge of the healer's tent.

Trivia:
  • The 689th has a small but bitter long-running feud with the Soup Sect. Both sides claim the other is guilty of stealing a particularly potent recipe for Establishment Attacking Broth, an invaluable elixir for those facing down their first Tribulation.
  • At meetings where only 689th members are present, the Legionnaires will often use an alternative set of titles that reflect their emphasis on the Pill Dao. These titles are Ember, (Qi Condensation) Blaze, (Foundation Establishment) Furnace, (Core Formation). Non-legion members are encouraged to not use these titles, as it's seen as over-familiar at best and insulting at worst.
  • The name 'Thrice Great Furnace' is a reference to the Legion's founders most powerful tool and weapon. Said to have had been able to manifest power in the Nascent Realm and to have been lost during the great diaspora from the Hard Shell Mountains, the Legion has funded a great many exploratory missions to try and recover it over the centuries but none have ever succeeded.
  • The 689th is one of the Legions often labelled as a 'Family Legion,' one of those legions whose membership is in some way dominated by one branch family of the Clan. This assertion is of dubious historical value. Certainly, the Panopolis are well regarded as the founding family of the Legion and have featured heavily throughout its history, but more often than not the Legate of the Thrice-Great Furnace has not belonged to that family.
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Another 1700 words! @Kaboomatic @Humbaba @ReaderOfFate

I started writing a separate Omake where details about Min's legion were important and then realised it would be more fun to throw them all into the essay above first.

The 698th might make a good home for any other alchemically minded Good Seeds, people should feel free to use the ideas here if they like. Let me know if you do and I might edit in a 'Notable Members' section.
 
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Maria 33 - Maria and the Three Masters Part 1
Maria and the Three Masters (Part One)
Maria Turn 10 Twelfth Omake

The fort's starting to feel like a cage. She can't explain it, not in any reasonable way, but something about the walls, the doors, the constant monotonous repetition of the damn place is eating away at her. She's going to snap. She can feel it. She's going to snap like a damn twig, caught in a tiger's jaws. So she's taking more missions, and more, and more, over and over, praying some damn thing will finally scratch this impossible psychic itch she's picked up. Squad's starting to sweat it, but at the same time, she can see them pulling together. Practice honing them into a blade. Georgy finally starting to slot into place, too – finding his spot in formations, syncing his system faster.
She's proud of them. She's proud, in an odd kind of way, of Draconis, who's taken a pile of dawnfresh dumbasses and honed them into soldiers worth the bronze. But it doesn't help. She's still biting back the itch every damn day. Her temper's a roiling mess, snapping over nothing, barely catching herself before the anger comes boiling out of her and she takes some fucker's head off over bullshit.

The squad comes around the bend into the homestretch on route tortoise. The walls rise up over the road like looming executioners, with every step bringing her closer and closer to the scaffold.
Being stupid, murmurs the Red Place.
Shut up.
It's a damn fort, not a jail cell. You leave it every day.
Said shut the fuck up.

It's been like this for weeks. The Red Place skittering about in the back of her head, trying to drag her away from-
From-
This. From the grind. She's been loosing her temper with it more and more. Given that it is her temper, that's fuckin' impressive.

She keeps walking. They hit the gate. Step through. A chill rolls over Maria's heart. No. No. She can't do this. She can't stay here.
Girl-
Ignores the whispered desperation.
"Draconis, you're on debrief," she mutters. He shoots her a querying glance. "Going back out."
"Been doing that a lot lately," he murmurs. It's not accusatory, but she feels her hackles rise.
"Need to stretch my legs," she said, shortly. "Debrief. Go."
And then she's in to the dispatch office, signing in, snatching up a scout run, signing out, gone. The world stretching out before her. It should feel good. It should feel better than good. But it doesn't. The itch is still there.
Fuck it. Keep going.

The mission's an easy one. There'd been signs of something in the ruins, out past the Gloom on route phoenix. Nothing concrete, or at least nothing the patrols had caught, but no-one wanted some cunning little prick working their way past the line by inches just because they knew how to cloak their qi signature. Best to be certain.
Maria, if she's honest, gives not one fuck. It's just something to do. Something to keep her moving, something to get her out.
Imperator's sainted *taint*, girl, it's just a fucking fort.
What part of "shut the fuck up" are you not getting? Should I do you up a chart?


Pushes past the Gloom, out along the road, and stops. Turns her eye out over the ruins. She's about halfway along route Phoenix now. That bastard hill's warped qi is raking at her qi sense, distorting everything. Fucking uncomfortable. Still, not the end of the world. She's not a specialist. That's Priscian's gig. She'll do things the old-fashioned way.
She swings her spear up over her shoulder, and steps off the Line into contested territory. Half-enjoys the little frisson of fear-excitement-tension that comes with it; safety is purely theoretical, now. The itch isn't gone, but at least she doesn't have to pay attention to it.
Out further, into the ruined streets. Used to be a town, apparently, before one of the big battles hit it. Cross-roads market at the heart, tea-houses and inns around it, houses and schools around that. Nice place, she has to imagine. Safe. A spark of anger flickers in her chest briefly at the thought – the dead whose only crime had been not realizing even the Wei Princess could fail.
She crushes it. No time for that now. Has to focus.

Previous mission had found evidence of habitation in an old tavern, along with the flickerings of an active qi system. Nothing had come of it. That's where she'll start. She finds it easy enough; the roof's still up, making it nigh unique in this place. She peers in through a broken window. Nothing. Just broken tables, a smashed-in bar, and a thick coating of dust.
So much nicer than our bed in the dormitory. So much more *picturesque.*
She ignores the wittering. Steps inside. She's hit by a thick, mouldering scent, stale air and decay. Underneath it, though, something else. Sweat. Sweat and raw meat. That's… interesting.
Readies her spear. Moves, slowly, deeper into the tavern.

The Red Place has shifted, suddenly. She can feel its attention focusing razor-sharp through her eyes.
Lot of corners, lot of turns. Check your blindspots.
Yeah.


Nothing in the public rooms, but there's a corridor behind the bar. Private rooms, she has to imagine. Smaller, no windows. Far easier to defend. She lets the tension run through her, drawing her muscles up into a readied state, stepping slowly into the darkness.
Three rooms she can see, all on the right, away from the street. Okay. Game of chance, then; if something's here and she opens the right door, well and good. She opens the wrong one, it'll know where she is, and that'll give it the tiniest advantage. Can't have that. So she stacks the deck. Goes as still as she can, closes her eye, listens, breathes.
Descends into the quiet like it's a pool. Feels it flow into her mouth, nose, ears. Becomes aware of the currents in the air as it shifts and flows invisibly. Deeper. The mice in the walls become skittering behemoths as they run back and forth. The cockroaches beneath the floorboards shiver and click, each sound immortal and deafening. Deeper. The wood creaks and groans, aching under the weight of this place, counting down the seconds until at last, at last, it can collapse and die.
Deeper.
Deeper.
There.

The third room. Something's there. Silent as the grave, still as ice and darkness, but breathing, and that's what gives it away. Each breath disturbs the air just the slightest bit, and these days, her flesh enhanced and sharpened by the might of the Tenth Heavenstage, that's all Maria needs.
Okay. So. Conclusions. Nothing mortal holds that steady. Cultivator, then. Coalition Guerilla would have identified themself by now, unless they're conscious – and this fucker's definitely awake, breathing's too controlled for anything else. So unaligned, or Alliance. Hasn't been an unaligned in contested territory for a long while. Too much risk for not enough reward. Not impossible, but unlikely. So…

She grins.
Good. Now let me, growls the Red Place. She can feel tendrils of control extending through her. The grin dies.
No.
What?
No. This is mine.

Confusion, anger, rising fear.
Why? I can-
Run away when I need you. I can fight well enough.
But-

It wants to fight. She can feel it. Aches for it, suddenly, desperate for a chance to cut loose.
Well. Tough shit.

Maria explodes into motion, charging directly through the walls between her and her prey. They crumple like paper beneath her weight. The thing is faster – it's cutting sideways through the door and towards the bar before she's had a chance to turn. But she's fought faster than this before and won. It might be quicker, but she has reach. Flicks her arm. The spear cuts out through the storm of shattered wood and paper-
And something screams. Something a long, long way from human.

Got you.
She lashes out again, slicing downwards to try and widen whatever wound she's made. There's a hint of resistance and another half-scream, but it's not a good blow and she knows it. Fuck. Close, then. She's managed to turn her momentum at last, and now she's powering towards the target. It's pulled loose already, and she's sprinting after it out the door of the corridor, back into the tavern, then out into the street. At last, she can see it; a lanky thing, taller than her or any human she's ever met, hairless, earless, its head a thin grey angle cutting through the air. It's shrouded in something halfway between cloth and skin, colourless, trailing behind it but moving like a living thing.
Flesh Golem. Has to be. Some fucker from Noble Knowledge has gotten creative.

She bolts after it, out into the streets and back towards the line. The golem is creative, though – every few seconds it'll jack-knife turn down an alley or side-street, flow over short walls, lunge through broken windows, anything to try and get her off its tail. As of yet, it hasn't tried for a straight confrontation.
The red place is scratching at her mind, still trying for control, but she forces it back. The thing's loose cloud of fabric-skin lashes out to wrap around shattered door, swinging itself into a turn she can't match. Maria tries anyway. She cuts down with her spear to bite into the earth, bleeding off momentum and twisting as best she can. The damn thing is too fast, though – it's already scuttling up the wall of the building, aiming for the roof. She fills her mind with predicitions; if it gets up there, she'll lose it in seconds. Too many ways it could go for her to check them all, every wrong one giving it more time to escape. She has to lock it down, now. Again, that sudden deep awareness of everything. Wind currents. Distance. Weight. All of it feeds the calculation. Still skidding, but she can adjust for that. Yanks her spear loose from the crevice it's hacked into the ground, brings it back, looses.
THUNK.
The golem screams. It's voice is shrill and rasping, like a falcon's. The spear has hammered home through the loose fabric cloud, caught the edge of its torso, and stapled it to the wall.

Maria's grin opens her face like a wound. The Red Place is a howling, frustrated mass in the back of her head. She ignores it.
Hers.
And then she's moving, each step heavy with the promise of violence. The Golem's halfway up the wall. She'll have to jump. What, she thinks, with joyous sarcasm, an utter tragedy that is. The leap propels her through the air like a sledgehammer, and as she goes she's twisting, leaning forward, curling it into the sweetest punch she's ever thrown.

So she's furious when the golem leans bonelessly to one side, and her fist goes *through* the fucking wall.
What happens next is one of the most frustrating fights she's ever been in. Her spear's holding the golem in place, but the damn thing seems to be all joints, twisting and bending like a reed in the wind. It also, she at last discovers, has arms, and they're slapping out at her over and over to claw and slash away with feather-light blows that rip her flesh open in deep, gouging wounds. In turn, all she can do is try and feed it punches and kicks, but even then she's screwed because one arm's buried in the wall still, and she can't pull loose without losing her footing. At best, she's landing half of what she's dishing out, and even then they're glancing at best.

This carries on for about three minutes. She's trying to fight off the Red Place at the same time, though, and that's what finishes things. A clawed hand arcs around to take her face off, and as she jerks back, the Place manages to take control of her arms. One takes hold of the spear, the other yanks loose from the wall-

And the spear splits in half.

As they fall, she watches in silent fury as the Golem pulls itself off the now-shortened spear-shaft and flies up the wall, vanishing onto the roof top.
Then Maria's back hits the ground.
---

…You fucking idiot.

Wait-

YOU FUCKING IDIOT. WHAT WAS THAT?! WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT?!

I was trying-

I HAD IT! I HAD THE WHOLE THING! WHAT, YOU COULDN'T LET ME HAVE IT!?

Girl, it was a fi-

I CAN ALSO FIGHT, YOU STUPID SHITHEEL! WHAT, YOU HAVEN'T BEEN PAYING ATTENTION THE LAST SEVENTY YEARS?!

I was-

WHAT?! WHAT WERE YOU FUCKING DOING?!

I was protecting you.



Wait.

Do I seem. Like I need. Protection?!

It's- it's what I'm for-

Do I strike you even a *little bit* as needing ANYONE ELSE to defend myself from one measly flesh golem *that was running away*?!

Not-

You worthless fuck, I have managed for most of my life *WITHOUT* you-

NOT THE FUCKING GOLEM.



Explain.

I-

Explain or Imperator help me I will find Destasia Duca herself, and I will *tell her about you*. In detail. And she will scrape you out of my head so she can cut you apart and find out what makes you tick.



You won't like it.

Oh, WON'T I?! Well I haven't liked anything to do with you for a fucking while now, so I'll at least be used to it.

…Your dao. It'll hurt you.

…What?

It'll hurt you. When we were getting close, before, I- I felt it. It was… I don't. I don't have words. There aren't any. But if you go back to it again, it will hurt you.


Maria lies there for a long moment, staring up at the sky, seeing none of it. She can't think. She can't speak. She can't even move.
The anger has filled her up too much for that.

How *dare* you.

You don't understand-

How fucking DARE YOU, YOU LYING-

I had to protect you! You couldn't-

THE MOST IMPORTANT THING THAT I WILL *EVER* DO, AND YOU FUCKING *SABOTAGE* IT. MY GREATEST FUCKING SERVICE TO THE CLAN. AND YOU DARE- *YOU DARE*-

Maria-


But it's too late.
They go beyond words, in her head. Her and the Red Place, they sink into a kind of furious, insane psychic argument where language is pushed aside and all that's left are torrents and gouting wells of feeling. For once, *she's* the angry one; a mad, swirling locus of fury, aimed directly at the Place. It's trying to defend, but it's no good. Maria pours her fury and scorn on it, her betrayal, until it's begging her to stop.
She doesn't.
The rage goes on. Her purpose, her will, all of it subverted by a portion of her own mind. And it has the cheek to try and pretend it wanted to help?
It pleads with her. Tries to make her understand. Its reason for being is to protect her. To defend her from the pain and sorrow and cruelty of the world. So often, she's ignored it. So now, here, against a foe that is the *entire damn universe*, how could it not do what was necessary? How could it not-
But no. No, she doesn't listen. The emotion is too great. So she drowns it out with surging, roaring fury, driving the Red Place deeper and deeper into her own mind until at last, at last, it goes quiet.

Maria lies there, panting.
The hate's a roiling mess. But it doesn't matter. For the first time in – decades, maybe? She's alone. In the echoing silence of her own skull, she can find only her own thoughts.
It's strange. Painful. Ecstasy.
Irrelevant.
She drags herself up again, breathing slowly, and takes the broken spear-haft in her hand. Short, now. Closer to a long knife, or short sword. It'll do.
She has prey, and she has a chance. Fight hard enough, and she can find her fucking Dao. And this Golem, it seems, can fight.
She starts to walk.
---

The roof, as she expected, has nothing. Creature's long gone. Her first instinct is to head back towards the line, see if it's tried to cross, but she doesn't. The thing's been here a while. If it was trying to cross, it would have done so by now. But it didn't. And think of the design – long limbs, that weird cloud of loose flesh, flexible – good in a fight, certainly, but better at evasion and escape. It's stayed near the Gloom, too, to cloak it's qi signature. It's trying to hide.

A spy? Keeping track of the patrols to let other forces try and punch through more easily? Or perhaps an unexpected reinforcement? Perhaps an assassin – waiting for its target to get within range.

In any case, it's a start. She doubles back to the tavern. Still a savage mess. Her earlier dip into demolition hasn't helped much. But as she starts to sift through the wreckage, things start to show up. First? Corpses. Two or three, and fresh too. No-one she recognises. The apparent age and the weakness of the flesh suggests mortals. They're short great hunks of their flesh, cut cleanly away from their ribs and thighs. The wounds are almost surgical. She thinks of those claws as they raked through her face. Carnivorous, then. And smart enough to store its food.

She keeps digging. Papers. Lots of them. The handwriting is sharp, clean – she's reminded of the wounds on the mortals – and written in some incomprehensible code she doesn't even try to understand. The pictograms make no damn sense. Still, the golem wrote them. They must be important.

And then she hits the jackpot.

Beneath the papers, in the crater that was its room, she finds pictures. Hand-drawn ones. Simple little scrawls; birds, mainly. The view out of the tavern's window. A few faces she doesn't recognise, in Noble Knowledge robes. They're good, but more importantly, they're precious. She can see it in the way they're folded carefully into one another, and wrapped in fabric. The golem must have drawn them itself.
So say you're a golem, she thinks. Made in a lab, somewhere. Every part of your life controlled and programmed. Say you're set loose on a mission, and for the first time, ever, you have something resembling freedom. And you can draw. No-one stops you. No-one around who can stop you.
How much would those drawings be worth to you? Your only real possession that you can say, definitively, is your own.
And what would you do to get them back?


She smiles, mirthlessly.

And sits.

And waits.

---

Takes less than an hour, in the end, but this time it gets the drop on her. She'd tried to hide herself as best she could, piling the rubble back up on herself, but the golem clearly isn't fooled. She'd expected it to go through the door.
Instead, it punches a hole through the ceiling and descends on her with a horrible shriek, claws scything through the air and detritus. Maria lunges out of the pile and rolls away.
The thing ragdolls back to face her, standing in the crater it's made. For the first time, she can see its eyes; three of them, set haphazardly in its head, one brown, one blue, one black. All disturbingly human. It's mouth is a razor-slash across its face. Inside, teeth lurk, jutting out of its jaw like stalagmites and stalagtites.
"Give them back," it keens.
She blinks. Most flesh golems can't speak. But then the words filter through, and she smiles.
"What, these?" The drawings are still wrapped up safely in their cloth, jutting out of her breastplate. She taps them. "Nah. Think I'll hang onto them."
"THEY'RE MINE!"
"Eh. Finders keepers, and all that. But I tell you what. How about we have a little wager, hmm? Fight you for 'em."
The golem screams again, warlike and furious, and charges. Maria's drawn her spear-head knife already as she comes forward to meet it.

This fight's better than the last one. She lets herself slip into the joyous, violent, half-conscious state of thoughtless brutality. She doesn't try and reach for the Red Place. She can't trust it. Besides, she can do this alone. She and the Golem dance with each other. The cloak of skin-fabric flows and glides. She parts it with elegant cuts. There is no blood from the wounds, but the golem's arms come forward in graceful sweeping arcs. She ducks beneath them, spins away – her knifeblade orbits her in a lethal halo. Brings it back around for the creature's shoulder. Crumples out of the way and snaps back up into place, already riposting with snarling, snaggle-toothed bites.

Maria's caught, briefly, in a rush of fondness for this thing. It doesn't realise how much it's helping her, how every flickering ballet of strike and counter-strike is stilling her thoughts and dragging her higher, closer and closer to that open, clear-eyed place where her dao will speak to her. And it will. She can feel it, already. It's waiting for her.

Then the thought is gone and she's back in the fight, a blurred creature whose edges intermingle with her enemy's. The knife alone is clear and clean, arcing and diving like a bird, the tip grazing and slipping through the golem's flesh, sharp and hard but never quite deep enough to open it. The dance is something primal, now. Tighter than it was. They'd been gliding about the room before, but they're locked down together instead, their feet stamping and sweeping back and forth. She can feel the tension of it; that blurred sensation undercut by sharp, mechanical beats. Their bodies are flowing. Their blows are precise.

Back and forth.
Back and forth.

The repetition has set her grinning – and she's winning, too. Maria can feel it. A lethal, homicidal joy is filling her up, and in those three eyes she can see despair. The golem's trying to pull away, now – the fury is leaving it, and its tactics are coming back. She doesn't let it, closing in as it draws back, intercepting whenever it tries to get clear.

She's rising, still. Closer. The revelation, the truth, is shimmering on the edges of her sight. She's close. She's so damn-
Clawstrike-redirect-hamstring-cut-
-close she can almost-
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-taste it, Gods, within *inches* of it-
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-the last few moments-
And there. At last.
As she takes one last step forward and lodges the knife blade into the golem's skull from beneath its jaw.

There is a moment of silence and stillness as she looks at it and it looks at her. Transitory. Liminal. It is dying. She is rising.
"Thank you," she says, and means it.

And then she's gone.

---

Her dao is here. She can feel it. All mortal senses are gone, in this moment, but *it* does not need such pettiness to express its truth. She opens herself to accept it-

No.​

-and thus the rejection rattles through her soul like a hammerblow to her unprotected heart.

Fool. Imbecile. One who chooses ignorance.

Did you think you could cast aside this revelation, freely given, without consequence?​

She does not have words for the emotions that fill her. Grief, horror, self-loathing – all seem too small, too petty, for this sea of feeling.
Deep within her mind, where she has locked it away, she can feel the Red Place's sorrowful regard.
I tried to warn you.
She falls. She falls forever, and knows she deserves it.
---

When she comes to, she's curled up in a weeping ball, and she's not alone. The Golem's corpse lies next to her, discarded like a crumpled ragdoll. She becomes suddenly, horribly aware of its drawings, still packed into her breastplate.
There are dead people nearby, too. She turns her head and makes herself look. A Noble Knowledge cell. Six of them. Their deaths are not clean. She can see fist-shaped holes punched through torsos, skulls spread out across the floor in thick, pulverised paste, arms ripped loose, legs shredded. It was a slaughter, she thinks, dully.

Their killer is still here. She watches the Honourable Sibling as they shake the last few drops of blood from a gauntleted hand.
"You have passed the foothill," they say, tone still and even.
"It-"
"I know." They do, Maria realises. She can't begin to understand how, but… they do. "Will you continue?"
She thinks about it. Stopping would not be impossible. Not if she wanted to. There were other Daos. Breaking through to foundation would be simple enough.
It's a nice thought. She entertains it for a moment, and then, regretfully, shakes her head.
"Yes."
The Sibling nods.
"Then you're ready."
They reach out a hand, and Maria pulls herself upright. But she doesn't follow them. Not yet.

Instead, she turns back to the Golem. The drawings are still clean, she realises, miraculously. That's good. She uncurls the claw fingers, carefully, and puts the little cloth package in its hand.
---

Okay! Let's start the second arc of the turn and, like... the last one on the fearless Line. Hopefully I might get to write something in turn 10 *before* turn eleven rolls around. @Humbaba @Alectai @ReaderOfFate , may I please have a threadmark?
 
Abel Angelus 20 - Qigai Clan Article
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The Qiguai Clan Doorway, an Introduction by Stavros Zappiadis

There is only one consistency to the Qiguai secret realm and that is that it is inconsistent. When you pass through that doorway you can find yourself in any sort of environment. Desert, forest, underground caves or even in the sky. For this reason you must be prepared to sustain yourself for the entire duration of your stay with no help from your environment. You must bring your own food and water or find ways to not need them. Fortunately air will generally be available although that might just be a case of survival bias. Not many that arrive in an airless void or underwater are likely to come back.

It is still useful to learn to survive in many different environments. Everybit that you can get from the environment should help to advance your cultivation. After all, the only reason you are subjecting yourself to this hellscape is because of the high levels of qi that saturate everything. So every bite of food or sip of water you can get from the environment without poisoning yourself will advance your cultivation.

I suggest bringing air fruit seeds. As the name suggests so long as there is enough qi they can grow just feeding off air. Also rock fruits seeds as a backup and to provide a little variety to your diet if worst comes to worst. Both don't taste all that great, but they will sustain you.

With that we come to the end of expected useful advice. All further advice becomes increasingly circumstantial depending on what sort of environment you arrive in. If you want to look up more specific advice for each possible environment then I suggest you read my collection of essays.

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Abel Angelus 21 - Lectures part 2
Lectures part 2
"The next lecture is simpler. The Soul is the thing that understands and comprehends, the thing that understands the Dao and pursues truth. It does not obey physical laws for the most part, and once coupled with sufficient understanding of the Dao and Qi can exert its will on the world. The thing we tend to think of as the Soul, though is the connection between Soul and Body. If broken, the body is killed and the Soul goes elsewhere, though I cannot say where. This is the truth of the Nascent Will. It snaps the connection between Soul and Body, leaning on the understanding a Nascent Soul has of that same connection."

Does that mean that the connection between the body and soul is my qualia forge? I am really surprised that I seem to have a more poetic name for it than the people here. Always before it has been the reverse. No wonder Nascent Wills can't learn or change if they have lost their qualia forge. That is really awful. I don't know what happens to souls and it seems like even the very well informed don't know, but losing my qualia forge would doom me to hell, but worse because I couldn't even appreciate just how much of a hell I was in. I have to bow my head in thanks to those poor souls that subjected themselves to that to help protect the clan.

"For our second lecture, I will be strumming on that connection, as though a string on a lyre. Your job is to try and replicate that feeling after I do so. It will be unpleasant and dizzying. For those with the patience, even a Qi Condensation disciple can develop that feeling into an effective suicide art to prevent interrogation. I will disrupt the connection between soul and body three times over three weeks. At the end of the month, if you cannot replicate the feeling, my experience has taught me you are unlikely to do so. If you can succeed, we will proceed to the final lesson."

He is going to fiddle with my qualia forge! That's, I can't. Is it too late to back out now? What if he messes up would I still even be me? I shudder and just as I am about to raise my hand to ask to be excused I feel it.

T̡͓̯̱͔̝͎ͅh̡̖̖̖̠̘̞̮̼̙̖͙̗̜͕̦̳̬̱͞ḙ̵̢̗̖̝͙̘̰͕̬̠͇͝͡͝n̢͜҉̶̝̤̙ ̨̯͎̝̤̭͓̙̟̮͜͞I̶̷̢̻͓̼͇̘͉̘̲̣͉͉͝ ̫̗̼̟̣̣̲̪̲̜͟͝f̣͉͙̩̳̠̠̞͖̤͇̰͖̣̣̀͞ͅę̟̠̱̖͝͡e̡҉̢͇͖̺̻͉̜̠͔̫̲͎̥̥͡l̶̨̘͈̼̲̲̯̮͔̰̻͍ ͈͕̭͉̭̯̰̜̗͟͞ͅi̸͙̬̟̙͈̦̫̼̭̲̖͔̠͍͡t̷̢͖͓̼̤̱̮̙̯̘͡ͅ.̛̛͍̬̤̬͙̟̳͇͞ ҉̶͎̣̭͕͈͓̱̼͓̟̰̫͚͓̲̳̪̙́͘̕ ̛̫̱̲̩̟͕̝̰̞͈͓̗͈̦̻̬͜Á̷̛͇̯̱̳̼̼̙̻̤̪̯̬͙̲̹͇̱̫͠ͅl̞̭͖͔̫͈̱͟͡l̴̘̹͎͔̥̲̥̗̀́ ̧̩͕̰̳̹͎̰͍̮͕͖̘̭̳̖̣͠ͅc͏̛҉͝͏͚͉̭̜̞͔̫̭ͅͅo̶̵͉̟̣̲͖̟n̛̲̪̙̪͈̺̝͓̪̞̺̳͚̞̕̕͞ͅs̴͙͔̯̩̮͖͚̼̲͈͚̤̩͞u̡̢̧̝͚͕̹̹͎͜͝ḿ̮̺͇̖̙̮̺̟̹̯̪̼͖̮͇̝͢͠͝ì̷̗̝͇̬̥̟͕͎͙̮̠͎̖͇̜̬͚͢͡ͅń̸̪̲͈̥̫̫͙̬̹͍̕g̴̴̦͙̞̠͕̟̦̭͔͜ ̴̨͠҉̣͙̹̼̫̩̲̞̦̣̫͙̞̬̦̹͇̼͢ͅw̸҉̻̗͇̯̫r̷̴̳̝̗̮̬̮̼̞̭̦͎͎̭͚͓̠̪͞ò̢̗͖̖̗̫̖̙̹͇͙n̡̥̱̳͈̱̖͔̰͕̰͍͕̱̦͎͕͇̗͝g͢҉̴̧̜̪͍̜̫̮͚͟ͅn̡͖̫̪̯̰͇̼͘͠ȩ͉̤̰̻̤̠͚͈͕̫̠̝̠͖̕̕͡s̸̡͎̩̤͖ͅs̵̨͔͈͙͇̲̫̻̩̝͖̻̜.̼͖͉̳̘̦̹̹͕͔̫̮͘ ͏̠̜͎̞͙̹̻̯̪̤̬͔́͝ ̡̨̛̬͉͚̮͔̰͉͈̀E҉̙̦̻͚̟͙̻̮͔̣̫͡ͅv̨̡̯̣͈̱͉̫͔̕̕͢ͅe̷̸̜̹̪̦̭̠̖̞͙̘̯͙̗̝̝̕͘͜r̸̴͏̧͕̱̲͙̙͕͙̟͓͔̞y̶̢̹̬̱͎̩̯̼͙͉̩̲̭̜͘͘͞ţ̤͈̤͚̟̻̯͎̪̥͙͈͓̖̗͎̠̟͜h̡͓̭͍͔̟̖̻̕i̶̸̡̢͉̯̬͍̩͓̱̪̞͎̼̝̜͇̱̝̘̳ͅń̴̛͏̝̯̖̺͔̼̪̳̪̬̻̪̪̜̹͈̲̤ͅģ̴̨͉̟͖̼͍̻̝̟̜̞͈̺͎̫ͅ ̨̢̛̤͇̫̦̗̜͖̮͔̮̮̤͙̬̤̪̻͘͠i̸̡̯̻̫̩͕̺̘̙̲͈͘͢s̝̙̖̩͔̥͚͙͟ ͢͏̳͖̬̗͉̪͍̱̪̫̭w̖̙͎͚͖͘͟͝͠r̛̛̜̲͙̹̗ǫ̛̩̟̪̜͎͍̫͕̗̹͔̪͓ǹ̴̢͓̦̪̫̀͜g̴̦͈͉̦͓̪̖͇̘̝͘̕.҉̡̫̯̪̝͍͓̤̲̩͓̪̩̪͙̣̜̳͢͞͡ͅ ̸̢͝҉̗̲̳̥͙ ͏̨̫̳̥̝̤̩͕̙̘̞͔̳̕T͏͠҉̼̺̤̹͔̱̫̱̤͙̺̯̼̮h̸̢̧͏̻̖̦̖͚̼̮͝ȩ͖̝͎͈͚̳͔̖̪͢͡ ̴̕͝͠҉̠͉͉̜w̵̯̠͇̗̣̠͙͜o͏̸̧̫̣̫͈̬̙̰͞͝r̷̢͖͙͎̖͉̤͜͞ͅl̢͟͏̧̛̣̬̬̹d̸̢̼͎̜̩͍̼͉̹̺̟͟ ̶̮̹͎̗̞̖̹͖̙̩͚͎̘̱̺̞͔í̠̩͖̼̲͍͖͘s̷͖͙̻̦̱̘̙̦̤̞̰̮͕̤̘͔͜͝ ͏̸̢̨̛͎͖͕̯̥̬̲͉̺̼̜̜̭̭͉̪̹͔ͅw̶̵̢͉̦̩͇̤͘r̨̨̡̧̗͕̬̳̹̙̻̺̙͍̀o͏̵̷̖͎̹͍͙̜͚̠̬̗͘ͅṇ̸̘̥̘̹̳͍̺̺̀͝ǵ̦̠͚̲͈̝͍̬̭̹͔̀.̬̝̦͖͚̞̤̮̯̤̣͇̩̜̭̗͕͓͖͞ ̧̜͓͙̰͟ ̧̟̪̰̲̤N̷̢̨͎͖͉̠̫͍̳̮̺̦̼͖̺̤̲̫̝̳o̧̨͙͙̳̥̜̠̤̮̞̭̘͕͈̦͓̘̼ ̴̨̩͔̮̥̳į̡̲͇̭͎̟͉̤͕͔̮͉͙̮̖͔̮̝t̶̢͙̰̜͈̻̝̼͖̳͙̖͓̩̺͍͓̠͍͎̀'̕͡҉̤̜̗͓͇͚̗̪͙̙̦͔͔͈̘͠ṣ̸̛͉͚̣͠͝ ̨̱̫̙̻̞̥̲̯̣͚͉̝͇̱̜̬͔̣͟͠m̡̥͔̪̱̙̞̹̭͠è̴̶̴̠͇̱̺̗̳̖̝̹̩̟ ̸̢̡̥̻̩̠̥͓͍̣̦̰͙̞̣͕̰̯̥̖t͏͠҉̢̱̩̜̼̳̰͙̙̝̟̩̺̣̗̲̲͙͡ͅẖ̸̳̱̜͖̯̻̼͈͘a͡͏̶̟̳̰̳̦͈̞͍̫̳͟ţ̩̙̳͇̜́͟'̴̡̦͚̪̻̱̼̤̦̗̙͓͈̥̱̀ͅs̡̭̖̫̥̤̻̣͓͍͜͡ ̕҉̷̧̮̯̱̗̙͎͈̱̯̮̫̝͇w̵͓̩̺̖̯̻͠ŗ̷̬̠̠̜͈̗̬͔̲͞o̴̟̰̳̹̮̼͠n̶̵̡̼̯̱͇̙͈̩̱̖͕̲̞͓̳̝̪͙̠̙g͏̢̤͖͖̠̝̦̪̜̀ͅ.̢҉̰̫͔͈̙͚̩͕̜̖͕̙͉̫͇ͅ ̡̞̪̙̹̘̰̀̀͡ͅ ̴̡͈̺̮̠̝͉̜͇̰͍͕̪̦̫̲̗̭̙́͞ͅÍ̵̴̬͚̳͎̜̰͡ ̨̰̱͕͉̝͚̖̜͇̦̖̖̀̀h͏͏̴̻̪͇̤̪̹̮̞͖̥̳̣͕̗̫ą͚̖̳̱͍̹͕̙̙̹̀͘t̷͍͕͙͚̬̟͎̦̦̞̜̟̹̦ͅȩ̷̲̦̰͇͇͎͍̲͕̜̣͔͞ͅ ̧̛̟͈̞͇͔̮͉̬̞̤̗̞ȩ͜҉͔̹̬̜͈͕͍̰̹͕͙͓̖͈v͞҉̶́҉̻̺͈̖̖̺͖͍̝̪e̕҉͉͙͍̲͓̩̬̭͔̰͙̀͠ͅr̛̘̜͚͕͙̤̪̭͟͜ͅý̷͖̦̩̲̠͖̜̜͘o̸̢̝̞̗̯̕n̡̦͚̥͉̼͇̦͚͖̜̯̣͓̻̠̙̦̩̕͜͞ͅe̶̵̢̞̪̻̤̞͖͇̣͚̙̜̘͇̹̫͜͜.̸̨̫͙̟̲̣̖̝͙͖̻̱͜͠ ̵̛͇̰̤̲̱̞̝͟ ̨̭͍̤̥̘̰̞̯͉̩͓͈̥̥̤̦̙͟͞ͅͅN̷̡̛͙̜̼̝̞̻̠͔̫͈͍̮͓̮̻͖̦͍o̶̵̷̸͍̫̬̲͙̫̱̟̘͖̭̬̹͎̟͈̖̞͝,̷̳̱̬̖͢͟ ̧̛͍͎͇̗̺̱̼̝̼͙̩͢͠ͅÍ̢̩̭̯͚̯̭̠̰̤͇̪̯͜͡ ̷̷̛͎̘̻͔͉̩̻͘͟l̷͞͏͙̙͕̬͓̻̙̲̤o̷̗̩̖̯̝̘̬̹̟̗͘͜͠v̡͟͞͏͔͇̱͖͔̤e̷̙͓͇͎͓̤͚͔̞̼͡ͅ ̶҉̯̪͈̬͙̮̩̖͈̤͉̫ͅͅę̧̣͙̯͖̭͈̙̹̺̣̭͉͕̜̩̰̕͘͘v̶̨̛͓͉͈͚̹̰̞̜̖̰̖͡e̢̨̱̜̮̻̙͔͖̮͈͟͟ͅr҉̷̶̠̰̣̭̯̫̭̺́̕y̕͏̷͖̘͕̪̙͕͍̻̱̰͕̘͖̺́͘ơ̷̞̥͎̲̺̤̠͕̪̙̙̹͇͖̯͚̠͠ͅǹ̤̜͉̟̞͍̪̭̕ͅe̷̸̲̘̰̻͖͢͞ͅͅ.̷͞҉͍̥̤̳̟͇͚̩͖̱̳ ̀҉͉͈͎̺̜̫̫̯̲ ̶̢̬͔͖̺̼͇̭̰̻̤̖͟Ņ͜͡҉͏̯͚̯͓͈̺̤̼̝̪̰̙̭̲̺̫͉͖o̡͇͖̝̱̝̮̹̭͞,̸̧̛̻̰̹̭̮͍͚̱͔͚ͅ ̸͏̙̜̹ͅÍ̷̠̻̬̰̲͈͔͎̖ ̶͚̺̱̻̣̞͙̱̪̫̲̜́j̵̶̢͖͎̟̬̪̳̣̙̞̥̣ͅͅu̷̴̖̩̙̫͔̙̝̞̪̫͇̼͉̠͢s͘҉̘͔͚̗̜͕̞̕͜t̛̬̜͍͈̘̀͟͢͡ ̴̵͙̰͈̝̭͕̤̪͖̘́̀͡c̵̜͓͔̜̥͓̲͎̱̘̙̮̯͓͘͜a͕̞̥̳͚̦͙̫̯͙͘̕͞͞n̷͖̘͚̟͢'̹̬̰̤̜̬͙̻̤̖̲̜̫͚̗̘̫̀t̢̪̙̙͈̩̟̠͙̺̰͈͚̖͇͔͔̻͖͢͞͞ ҉̗͚̘͇̩t̶̨̺̖͎̲̥͓͉̜̖̭ḛ̸̸̡͇͈̱̬̗̘̭̜͎̰͍͕̟̖̜̜͍l̴̷̴̦̩̝̝̟̤͎̭̕͞l҉̶̫̹͚̟͉̮̙͍͈̱̟̲͉̳͉̪̪̤̙ ̵̶̭̲̩͚͎̱̀͘ṯ̴̸̺̟̻̜̫̠̪̯̻̤̝̻̤͢͜͞ͅͅh̡̭̬̤̞͞͠é̞͎̞̦̜̩̬̯̝̝͇̭̠͢͝ͅ ͢͟҉̛̻͙͇͍̗̼͔̻͙̘̭͍̟d͞͏̴̲͕̠̗͎̙̰̝̩̤̫̀͟ͅi̸̸͍͎̻̲̜̞̹͕̝̺͖f̢͙͕̮́͘͟͝ͅf͏̶̶̵̡̻̥͎̝̺̰̻̟̗̬̣̤͓̠ȩ̵̧̩͉̲̤̯̱͡͝r̶͙̳͕̫͈̗̼͇̪̼̀͠ͅͅé̴̤̣̼̲͙̠̹̮͟n̞͖͓̥̬̗̪̙̖̦̘͖̜͘͟ͅc̸̨̮͉̟̲̯͕̮̖̩̫͙͇͇͇͕͡è̷̢͍̦̮̯̰̪͓͓̺̰̬̱̩̮̲̞̤̼̩͡.̳͇̘͔̦̳̰̮̻͙̮̟̺̯͕͈̩͎̻̕ ̷̛҉̡̡̥͇̪͚ ̸̸̵̧̬̥̪̙̪̭̬̜͕̝̠͇̤̖̘̗͘I͏̠͇̳͓̩͈͇͍̩̜̩̰̤̣̜͔͙̟͠s̡̧̱͖͍̠̜̦͖̱̬̬̦͓ ̢͇̣̳̳͖̖̩̱͎̞̹̩͇͖̜t̜͉͈̬̝͕̖̠͍̬̺̣̤͖̲̟̫̖͡͝͠h҉͉̬͙͓͍̟̗͎̩͍̦̗̥e҉͕̣̹̱̫͉̹̺̣̞̻̘̗̠͓̦͔̼̘̕͞͠͠r̨̪͖͕͈̯̬͙̦͇̳͚͟͞ͅe͏͏̷͖̠̱̞̼̹̙͈̳̞̣̺͇̠̺͇͓̙̕ ̴̕͠͏̩͎̫͓̯̱͖͉̬̘̣̝͍̘a̛̼̩̤̱̤̼̗͚͙̲̝̤̫͔̫̝͚͠ ̡̩̬̭͙̭̠̣̟͈̺̤̣̫́͞d̶̨̡͙̜͈͖̻̟̦̫̣̘̼͡i̶̧͉̖̩͙̬̻̞̟̘̤̖͍̞͇͎͔̻͠f̡͓̻̺̯͓̤̤̠̞̼͕̘͉̕f҉̨̪̮̱͙̦͜͠é̷̜̥̖̠͙̯͔̯̗̦̻̰̣̩̭̙̰͚͘r̛̛̤̹͓̭̥̬̜̝̣͚̪̳̬͟͠ę̨̮̬̳̟͟ņ̤̘̯̞͕̤͈͕͓͓̠̲͠ć̨̛̠̩͎̝͈͔̖̹͡͝ȩ̶̧̣̯̪̗̝͇̤̰͙̲͇̞̥̗̣̜͘͘ͅ?҉̸̴̡̻͖̼̯̘̥̰̠͉̫̖̤̲̣͉̥̳̳͝



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I do not go to Manuel's next lecture. I resolve to get to the 12th heavenstage. I will never let that happen to me again. I have to learn how to defend myself against it. I am going to all the secret realms. The risk of death in them is nothing compared to the risk of that happening to me again.

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@Alectai, @TehChron, @Humbaba, @ReaderOfFate, @Kaboomatic To a successful secret realm so that never happens again.
 
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Axia Quintia Heroforge Figure
I expected to get this done after I posted the omake I was working on, but my procrastination has gotten so bad that I've written over eight thousand words on things other than that omake. So I'll just post it now, here's Axia, Gaius' fiance, who will feature prominently in a few upcoming works of mine.




 
Xiao Yingzi 30 [Turn 9] [Sanctius Loots]
Probably the last bit from the Sanctius House. I originally meant to actually show the characters studying these but I'm bored of this arc so just have a list of ideas. If anyone wants to use any of the items here or create an item and attribute them to the Sanctius House feel free.

Xiao Yingzi 30
[Turn 9]
[Sanctius Loots]

See below a list of objects found when digging through the Sanctius House. There are more that are not identified - some considered too simple to list and others already promised to other individuals and as such kept confidential. Many of these objects may be available for sale or rent for the common legionnaire.

Identity Divining Compass:

A compass with the letters of the alphabet at its side. Rather than pointing in a direction, it points towards the letters and spells out names which form as ghostly words at the center of the compass. According to the notes found, it spells out titles and nicknames for the individual who is holding it. They are supposed to be highly accurate divinations that comment on their deeds and nature, but so far all the titles it has given are highly generic - a foundation building cultivator with the blood of bronze was identified as 'Centurion'. It does seem to be able to differentiate between power levels and identify individuals to some extent.

Beast Devouring Divination Cube:

A palm-sized piece of glittering sapphire carved into the shape of a cube glowing with power. Staring into its sides floods the viewer with images of natural environments from grasslands, plains, deserts, jungles and even seas. They carry impressions of inhuman senses and seem to create a path for the user through that environment. The notes revealed it to be an ancient artefact from before the death of the turtle-child. It was used to navigate the jungle before it became desert. By feeding it the cores of beasts, one would imbue the object with their knowledge of an area. By drawing on the knowledge of multiple beasts, it would allow one to know the threats they may face, the treasures they may find and the paths they need to avoid or get closer to these. It could also be used as a divination device. By reading fate through the perspective of multiple species, one could in theory glean more information then with a simple human perspective.

The Step-Up Herbs:

A set of relatively famous herbs that require a very specific environment to grow. Once ingested, they greatly increase one's respiration of ambient qi for the purposes of cultivation as the energy is drawn into the body and used to perfect it. The amount of increase is dependent on both the eater's natural efficiency and the amount of ambient qi present. The name comes from its ability to almost guarantee a jump up a small realm for an ambient qi cultivator in the plains. This is of course only true for the orthodox heavenstages. For golden devils who cultivate using spirit stones in the desert it is less useful, but it is nevertheless considered priceless in the Dawn Fortress where it means going from Aspirant to Legionnaire. Note at the current capacity, the garden available can generate one hundred doses every twenty years.

Mannequin-Bound Poltergeist:

A Poltergeist bound to a mannequin. It was first discovered bound to a chair with tapes made of sealing talismans that covered its limbs and mouth. When released from it's bindings, it gave off a dao-shaking wail and began to float freely in the air. It telekinetically manipulated the environment as a measure of attack and seemed to delight in chaos and destruction. Overall, it was a deteriorating threat lying somewhere between Foundation Establishment and Qi Condensation. Given time to weaken more, it could be bound by a junior and be turned into a powerful weapon that would accompany them up to the Foundation Building.

Ancient Cedar Immortality Bark

Bark from a Cedar Tree incredibly well-preserved to the point where the preservation magics have become a part of its aura. It is immensely ancient and has a powerful aura of immortality. Though it seems to have become degraded in time despite the efforts placed on preserving it, the conjoined auras of immortality and preservation make it ideal for any form of life extension. Given its unique history however, it may be worth holding for one with the right dao.

Vase of Whispers:

An artisanal vase with hypnotic jade swirls on its surface. When looking at them, they seem to dull one's mind and make them more susceptible to mental effects or possession. The vase is sealed tight but whatever is inside still seems to emanate strange whispers that manifest at the edge of one's hearing. Upon listening closely, those whispers become clearer and begin to possess one's mind, repeating words of denial and defiance. The words creep into your mind firming your belief and strengthening your resolve. Merely listening to them fully causes one to break out of the possession. Seemingly a tool to train juniors for the feel of spirit-binding or breaking through possessions.

World-Observing Mathematics Printing Device:

A simple typing device that seems to be designed to type on it's own. However, rather than listen to the reader it constantly prints out a series of numbers with an unknown meaning. When deprived of either ink or paper, the typing stops but when added it continues unabated. Studying the numbers reveals that the series continues even without writing implements and when allowed to continue, it begins with the latest number in the series. Different locations alter the series as do different types of paper and ink. It seems to identify the quality and quantity of qi in some manner but while we can identify individual series, we currently lack any knowledge of what the differences mean entirely. To understand it, painstaking and repetitive research is required.

Soul-warping Jade-Printing Device:

Another strange writing device similar to the last except that this device uses slips of jade. However, while the previous one would write on it's own accord, this device would only begin to type in the presence of an individual. As far as we can tell, it seems to print anything the user thinks though the result is best when the user thinks at it directly. Without direct instruction, it seems to begin to dispassionately describe the user and their surroundings. With direct instruction, the device gains a unique style and flourishes for each individual. This style seems to be distinct from each individual's personal auras even if the information printed in the device is what they dictated. The reasoning for the changes in aura seem to be a transformation of thoughts from one format to another. For humans, it is somewhat useless as it is merely transformed into the mind of another human but when transforming the thoughts of beasts into those understandable by men it may be invaluable.

Beast-Mind Encyclopaedia:

A high memory jade slip containing information on spirits and spirit beasts of various kinds. By understanding the aura of the information stored in the jade slip, we have realised that it matches the aura of the Beast-Devouring Divination Cube when channeled through the Soul-Warping Jade Printing Device. It includes an encyclopaediac library on practically every creature or spirit within the desert or even the jungle before it alongside several others that the legionnaires seem to have added over the years.

Endlessly Exploding Caltrops:

Visually, it is a caltrop made of jade with incredibly sharp spikes capable of puncturing even foundation building. Tests show that should they puncture anything, they would attempt to break it down and draw in its qi. The qi would be drawn into arrays carved deep into the jade and then released as an explosive force in the direction of what it punctures. Useful but the unique aspect of it comes from its ability to reuse the energy it sent out by creating a suction effect after the explosion effect. The same energy that had been used before can be drawn in again, creating a lesser explosion. This would continue until it ran out of available power, ideally distracting any enemy it was used upon . Primarily designed for use in the desert, in a qi-rich environment the qi would not run out allowing the explosions to increase in power until the caltrops break.
 
I really like the endlessly exploding caltrops and the device that appears to basically be a variation on the theme of "Ouija board."
 
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Maria 34 - Maria and the Three Masters (Part Two)
Maria and the Three Masters (Part Two)
Maria Turn 10 Thirteenth Omake

The first lesson goes about how Maria expects. She shows up early. The Sibling picked out one of the training courtyards. They're meditating when she gets there, calm and still, eyes closed. They have a wide, healthy bearth of space around them, but beyond that it feels like half the fortress is here, whispering to each other and staring.
She doesn't quail, but it's a close-run thing. She's in a loose training robe today, in the Turtle style, and her feet and hands are bare. It felt appropriate. She didn't want them thinking she was arrogant, or- or rude. It doesn't seem to have worked, though; everyone's godsdamn staring at her. At the edge of the crowd, she can see Cao Pai Mei, his face set in a charming, avuncular smile. She'd almost buy it if his eyes weren't locked on her and dripping with scorn.
She makes herself look away. Damnit. Focus.

The Sibling's eyes open as she steps in. Calm. Empty of judgement. There's a scar running down over the left one, and it's milky-pale and cataracted. An old wound, she presumes. They smile, gently.
"You have come."
She nods. Feels like she's getting her captain's pins all over again.
"Yes."
"You are ready."
The screaming, agonizing descent, wrapped up in her Dao's rejection, echoes in the back of her skull. She swallows.
"Yes."
It comes out more defiant than she wanted. The whispers and stares are getting worse. The Sibling nods.
"Good. Then Maria, Captain of the 263rd​, Second Scorpions Legion, Bearer of the Blood of Bronze, and proud child of the Golden Devils, I name you my student."
The room goes silent. The stares start to burn. Maria forces her eye closed, and bows deeply, in the turtle style.
"Thank you, Master. I swear to you on my name, blood and legion that I shall not fail."

And then everyone goes mad.

In hindsight, it's better than she expected. At least a quarter of the room are cheering and shouting congratulations, and most of them aren't Optimatoi. A few of Ganpei's old disciples are pouring out Baijiu in celebration. Nameless and a few of his friends from Strength-Purity are offering bows and sparring practice. Even Liming, standing behind her master, is… well, not bellowing condemnations, which for her is practically a ringing endorsement.
They're still the minority, though. The rest of the crowd is snarling "demon" in a variety of less-than-pleasant ways.

She'd expected this. The Sibling was well-respected. A Foundation Establishment cultivator in good standing, not far from Core, and the kind of hand-to-hand fighter you saw once in a generation, if that. They'd turned down students from almost every major sect and got away with it, too, and that needed the kind of political savvy you read about in political manuals. And now taking on a demonic student? It would, at best, be seen as rudeness, if not a direct insult.

The Sibling, however, seemed unperturbed, still smiling at Maria. After a few moments, they stood, and raised their hands.
"Perhaps," they say, "those who disagree with my choice would care to express their grievances one at a time?"

"Oh no, Master," says Cao Pai Mei, with his usual nigh-obsequious politeness. "I am sure none of us would dare question your wisdom. Who may demand a master of such potence and virtue explain their reasoning? Certainly not I. But perhaps instead you might assist me? In my foolishness, I am blinded to the glory of Mount Tai. The honourable Captain is known as strong and brave to all who have served alongside her. Yet, many others too may number such honours amongst their deeds. What unique virtue is it the Captain boasts that was so absent amongst her peers?"

The Sibling's smile stays still and serene on their face.

"Ah, my friend. I see your mistake. You assume it is I who chose her, or she who chose me. Such an idea is not surprising, given we are born mortal, and still in our weakness see through their limited eyes. The truth is simpler. Virtue is that which occurs when the Dao of the individual is in concert with the Dao of the universe. In this moment, that synchronicity requires me to serve as the Captain's Master. Similarly so, it asks she serve as my student. Would you ask me to deny it?"
Cao Pai Mei's face freezes for a moment. When he continues, he let a hint of surprise, worry, and confusion slip into his tone.
"Master, again, my foolishness blinds me. Do you claim to know the will of the Universal Dao?"

There was, again, silence. Maria forces herself to breathe. This was dangerous ground, and bordering on fatal. To know your own Dao was a great achievement. To know the Universal Dao was miraculous. Even Nascent Souls only managed brief glimpses. Some even said that a personal Dao was the closest anyone could get, the filtered version that wouldn't burn your mind out of your skull. And now the Sibling was invoking it. Worse, by doing so, the Sibling was implying they knew better than everyone else in the damn sea.
…This was going to get them killed, wasn't it?

But they merely smile, and duck their head briefly.
"I would never claim so great an achievement," they say. "But my friend, answer me this. Does the Personal Dao not dictate our actions?"
"Of course," says Cao Pai Mei, looking for a weakness.
"And is the Personal Dao not a view, however small, however distorted, of the Universal?"
The Divine Saber's face distorts a hint, behind his genial mask, into disgust. He knows where this is going.
"Of course," he allows, grudgingly.
"My own Dao led me to this student," says the Sibling. "And in her, I see echoes of another path. How weak I would be, how churlish, to turn aside the demands of that Supernal truth at the behest of mortal trivialities."

Maria takes another breath, and feels herself relax. It's a smart play. Cao Pai Mei can't push without asking about the Sibling's Dao. That's the kind of question no-one likes. Given how much of Coalition politics is based around everyone playing nice, he can't ask about it without spending political capital – and the Sibling's popular enough to hit back. He can't counter by arguing for inefficiency either; Maria's record for completed missions is damn good. Picking up a new style just enhances that. Even the Demon angle's going to be hard to play, given the amount of work the Golden Devils are doing on the Fearless Line right now.
She watches his face as he searches for a move.
"Your wisdom, master," he says, voice calm, eyes seething, "is unparalleled. Thank you for educating this foolish one. My friends! I bid you return to your studies. We have disturbed the Honourable Sibling and their… student… long enough."
And he's gone, flouncing out of the courtyard with the Divine Sabers on his heels.
---

It's a very public, political start to her tutelage. Thank every enemy of heaven, it doesn't go on that way. The next day finds them outside the fortress, fifty miles away from the Line, in a mortal farmer's field. She doesn't question how the Sibling got dispensation for that. As is, they've a large communion stone and standing orders to get back to the fort the instant they hear a damn peep.

"To begin, a question. What is strength?"
Koans. Okay. Not how she's used to training going, but she can handle it.
"Will," she says. "Commitment. Consistency. Wisdom."
"It has many shapes, it seems!" The Sibling's voice is light and amused. Maria reddens a little. "You are correct, however. Much of strength is built on the foundations you have described. There are others, too. Clarity and perceptiveness. But these things are not necessarily strength."
She crosses her arms and considers.
"…Power?"
"A synonym and a definition are different things. Try again."
She crushes the rising irritation in her chest, and thinks.
"…The thing the means you can ensure what you want to do gets done, the way you want it done, even when someone else tries to stop you," she says. The Sibling smiles.
"Well put. Translation of potentiality into reality is how I think of it," they say. "And yes. That is strength. Or, as you have stated previously, power. Every form of cultivation offers that, usually in a certain field. More specifically strength, as it is conventionally thought of, is the power of the flesh – lifting, carrying, tearing, crushing. It is with these attributes that we shall concern ourselves. Watch."

They rise, breath in, breath out, and begin, slowly, to move through their kata. The speed's just for clarity's sake, Maria realizes. A learning aid. It works. Very quickly, she comes to three realisations.
The first; that this is simple. Every move is almost austere – the body shifts only to maximise the blow delivered. No frills. No frippery. Just efficiency.
The second; that this is fast. The Sibling is teaching now. If this was a fight, she doubts she'd even see them move.
The third; that this is ruthless. There's no other word for it. She can see, in her mind's eye, the bodies of the Sibling's enemies distorting and coming apart as each strike is delivered to the weakest, softest point of their body. Fingers caught and snapped, ribs cracked just right to send them spearing into lungs, throats crushed like over-full sausages. The motions might be simple, but gods. The results would have a horrific, gory pageantry to them.

It's brutal.
It's magnificent.
It's perfect.
Yeah,
agrees Maria, watching strike chain into strike into strike with relentless perfection, yeah it is. The Sibling catches her eye and smiles again.
"This," they say, not stopping, "is strength. You may also call it the Black Bull's Dance."
---

As soon as they're done, Maria's thrown into the kata. The Sibling's not one for fucking around, it seems. They run her through it slowly, without comment. Then they have her do it again, correcting each motion.
"Why?" she asks before she can stop herself. The Sibling, currently critiquing the spread of her fingers, shoots her an inscrutable look.
"Why what?"
"The- fingers. Why? Master," she adds lamely. "Just – so I can understand."
"Do you think words could help with that?" they ask, tone mild but with a hint of frost.
"…Yes?"
"To aid in pressure distribution and to maximise force per-square-milimeter in your fingertips."
"But- how will that-"
"And thus the problem with language is revealed. We are studying a body art. What knowledge you will find in a description will be pale and paltry. Only through motion will you find illumination." She fights down the frustration again. She wants to understand, gods damnit. Can't she do that? She doesn't ask again, though.

They run the kata a few more times. Then the farmer comes out to plough the fields, and the Sibling sets her watching every motion he takes.
"Focus on the shoulders," they say. "And the feet."
That goes on for a while. She thinks the farmer gets self-conscious half-way through, because he starts shifting around so he's behind the plough more than he needs to be.
After that, it's strength building exercises. Those she understands. Then it's the kata again, some moving meditation, more strength building, more watching. Only when the sun sets do they stop.

That becomes the pattern of study. Lessons once a week. She practices alone every other day, around squad training and patrols. Runs through the strength building exercises, then the katas. (Tries it in the training courtyards once or twice, but the stares become so blatant, so hungry, that it throws her off. Nameless helps her out, in the end; he has a private ground made up in his quarters, and the Strength-Purity are much, much better at being discrete.) The Sibling sets her observation exercises too. Watching birds as they take off, or mortal labourers heaving blocks.

Maria's missing something, though, because none of it's clicking.
"They won't explain it either," she hisses through gritted teeth, as she works her way through the fourth kata; the footwork is finicky as hell. "They always just – 'words are insufficient, and worse, misleading.' Doesn't make a LICK of sense!"
"I thought," says Letha, without looking up from the heavily ciphered paperwork in front of her, "that it made a great deal of sense, the last time you explained it."
"That was before I got stuck!" She twists into the punches that finish up the sequence. They're surprisingly therapeutic. Might even be cathartic if she didn't have to lapse right back into the whole thing again. "I keep trying to break it down, try and – there's got to be something I'm missing here. But it makes no damn sense; there's no fucking common thread. Everything's unique to the situation."
Letha gives a sympathetic hum. "Well," she said, "I'm sure you'll get it."
"Yeah," growls Maria, and prays she isn't wrong.
---

Four months in, the Sibling's starting to show the first hints of strain.
"You complicate things," they grumble. The two of them have been sitting, watching the fish in a river leaping up out of the water, and the fishermen watching them, their spears arcing down to catch them.
Maria shoots them a glare. Proper student humility wore off a while back. The Sibling didn't seem to mind.
"Don't complicate shit," she mutters. "Do what you tell me."
"No."
"Yes!"
"You do what you think I tell you. There's a difference."

Maria's been reigning in her anger for months now. It's a miracle she's lasted this long. Now the boughs are breaking.
"Well fuck, Master, what else do you expect me to do?! I do the work you set! I practice every damn day! And yet, somehow, it's never fucking good enough! And you don't explain what's wrong!"
The Sibling brings their begauntleted fingers to their nose, and pinch.
"I can't explain what's wrong," they say, as calmly as they can manage, "because you wouldn't understand."
"How the fuck do you know, you've never tried!"
"Do you think you're the first student I've ever taken!?"

She's never heard the Sibling shout before. Their voice goes hot, and loud enough that the fish startle and the fishermen stare. It shocks her into a brief moment of silence. They breathe, and fight for calm.
"You aren't," they say. "You aren't even the hundredth. I promise you, your issue is not something words can solve. Honestly, words might be the problem."
There's a flicker in her head, when he says that. Her eye narrows.
"…Say that again."
The Sibling gives her a sharp look.
"Why?"
"I think – just- please, master. Say it again."
There's a pause.
"Words might be the problem. You keep… intellectualizing everything. Making yourself think. That's good for a scholar, not a fighter."
"…It's how I learn," she says, slowly, but even as the words come out of her mouth she knows it's not true. In the Dawn Fortress, they'd drilled the motions into her head until she could do them without a hint of thought. Repetition and live practice to grind spearfighting so deeply into her body she could do it like she breathed.
But that wasn't what she was doing here.

She thinks of her Dao again, and the searing rejection.
"…I need to understand," she tries again. The Sibling shakes their head.
"You do understand," they say. "I've seen it. The katas would be good if you let yourself just… do them. Instead, you-"
"I can't just-" she stops. "That's what I've always done."
Pause.
"And," she stops again. Breathes. Makes herself speak. "And look where it's got me."

The river's quiet rush and the fishermen's spears, diving and rising, are the only sound. Then the Sibling looks away.
"Do you know what my Dao is?"
She shakes her head.
"Death. Interestingly, not as monstrous as many assume. They always assume it is an end. The final gasp. They're wrong. Death is much simpler than that. It is a liminal thing. Without it, there is only stagnation. Immortality becomes… nothing. An unchanging, eternal stillness, in a world of unchanging eternal stillnesses, forever. But Death?"
They smile, briefly.
"Death ensures that we do not see that world. It clears room for the new. It gives meaning to the old. And it allows for transformation. You see, every day, we die. When we end a task, the version of us that existed in that action – that performed it – they cease to exist. When we begin a task, too. When we do… anything, really. Moment to moment. Death and rebirth. We just don't think about it. Because death is also terrifying."
They finally look back at her.
"You died, when you fell from your Dao. You died because the parts of you that so drew its ire – the arrogant parts, the frightened ones – had to die, to progress. It hurt. It frightened you. I understand. But it cannot be the end. Do you understand? It cannot stop you. That way lies only a half-life, fearful and sad."

"I don't understand," she mutters.
The Sibling laughs.
"I know you don't. It's alright. Neither did I, when I stood where you did. I have a better idea."
And they drop into a fighting stance.
"Let's try the practical, instead."
---

She thinks about that for a long time, when they get back to the fort. They'd sparred for a while. Things hadn't changed, but they had loosened, somewhat. But now she lay in her bed, staring at the ceiling, unable to sleep.
"And look where it's got me."
She falls. She falls forever, and she knows she deserves it.


Closes her eyes. Holds the anger that boils up around her tongue.
We're afraid, murmers the Red Place.
She hisses out an angry, brutal breath.
Yes.

Gods. How long, now? How long had this been rattling about in her head, and she'd been ignoring it? For fuck's sake. For fuck's sake. She's not a coward. How had she-

There's a crunch. She looks down. Her fingers have shredded the bedframe. She hisses out another breath, and tries to make herself calm down. After a while, the anger seeps away a little.
Gods damnit. Is this you?
No.

She believes it. There'd been more bleed-over, lately, her emotions mixing with its and vice versa, but not now. This is all her. Or at least, half her, half it. Their fear, honestly come by on both parts.

Fuck.
Sleep's not going to come. She forces herself up out of bed, scrubs her face, and rises. Pulls on the loose red garments she wears beneath her armour. Stalks out. She doesn't think about where she's going, but when she finds herself striding into the training courtyard, it's not exactly a shock. Eyes on her again. A handful of Strength Purity, working their way through katas. A Bear Enslavement practicing some qi technique she doesn't recognize.
And of course, a dozen Divine Sabers, led by Cao Pai Mei. Because the world is fucking cruel.

Maria makes herself ignore them. She takes one of the empty training circles, and starts working her way through the ninth kata of the Black Bull's Dance. One of the rougher ones – lots of tearing and crushing. Her finger placement's shot to hell, too. Locks her attention on that, moving through it slowly.
Behind her, Cao Pai Mei laughs, quietly.
Her teeth grit without bidding. She breathes out. Relaxes. Keeps going.
"I must say," he says, conversationally, "when the Honourable Sibling took you as a pupil, I assumed the results would be more… interesting."
"Did you," she mutters. Index finger needs to curl into it more. She's sure of it.
"Yes. After all, who has not heard the legend of the Black Bull's Dance? The Funereal Brother Sect were some of the greatest fighters to walk the Third Sea. Only their numbers kept them from being a major power. And yet the latest inheritor of their art is… well."
There's muffled laughter from the Divine Sabers. Pissant little sycophants. No. Focus. The hands, she's here for the hands.
"Perhaps that's to be expected. After all, you honed your skills fighting bottom feeders, didn't you?"

That does it.
Maria rises out of her kata and turns, the anger a clear, humming song in her head.
"Bottom feeders?"
Cao Pai Mei smiles like a cat.
"You have a better description for the Battle Blood Cannibals? They consumed mortals. It's a wonder they lasted so long. Not that we aren't grateful for your efforts getting rid of them. Someone has to kill pests, after all."

It's a trick. She knows it. It's a trick to get her to dishonour herself and give him ammunition against the Sibling. It's obvious, too, and that's almost more insulting. He doesn't even think she's worth the effort of a real tactic.
Well. Let's see how he likes it when she serves it back.
" 'Course," says Maria, smiling sharply. "Public service. We're good at Blood Path. As you know, I'm sure."
His face doesn't change, but she sees his eyes flicker.
"Do we?"
"Well, given we saved the Jin Empire for you."

The room goes very quiet. Maria pantomimes embarrassment, covering her mouth, staring into Cao Pai Mei's eyes the whole time.
"Gods. I'm sorry. That was rude."
"Yes," he grinds out. She can see him trying to find a way to turn this to his advantage – intersect insults aren't enough. She steps in quickly to do it for him.
"How about I make up for it? Short a sparring partner. Why don't you come tan my hide for a bit, see if that works out the kinks."
It's laughably obvious, but it's the kind of laughably obvious he'll expect. The Golden Devils have a reputation for bluntness, and an offer like this – taking a beating in a sparring match – wouldn't be out of place in the tea houses of the Righteous. They just usually dress it up more. Of course, he'll need to put a bow on it himself…
"Perhaps I might give you a chance," he says, stepping into the circle. "I'll leave my sword outside the ring."
"Sure."
He glares at her easy agreement.
"…And tie a hand behind my back."
"Very decent of you. You mind if I stick with the kata I'm doing? Practice makes perfect, and all that."
He smiles coldly, eyes seething again.
"Of course."
"Much obliged."

And then they're fighting.

At the beginning, it's a release. She doesn't have to try and twist this, or present it right, or phrase it carefully so the locals don't get nervous. She just has to beat him senseless. He isn't expecting her to be as good as she is, either; very quickly, she gets him snapping out cuts that would make sense if there was a sword in his hand, but here are nothing more than glancing blows. She watches him realise his miscalculation. She's rattled him, if he's making mistakes like that. Joy boils in her veins at the thought.
But it's brief, and then he's turned the fight around again. Worse, she gives him the chance; a beat's hesitation is all it takes trying to line up a punch, and he explodes, leaping at her and firing off a stream of brutal chained kicks she barely manages to avoid. Then he's in control; palm slaps to disorient, heel strikes and ankle hooks to fuck up her footwork, tearing holes in her defence and punishing her with them. She's lucky to dodge one kick in ten, too – she's feeling that trademark Golden Devil slowness weighing her down. He's fought her clan before, she realizes.

Fuck. Fuck. What the heavens was she fucking thinking? He wanted to bait her into a fight. All she has to do is lose, and he can turn this around on the Sibling. And she's going to lose. He's foundation. She's tenth Heavenstage. One bound hand doesn't mean shit, he could have hacked off a leg and she'd still have gotten her ass kicked. Damnit. She has to think, she just needs to think, but he won't give her the fucking time-

A palm catches her on the jaw, then reverses into a backhand that sends her spinning to the ground, head reeling. Dimly, she hears the raucous laughter of the Divine Sabers.
"Ah, well," says Cao Pai Mei, voice dripping with false kindness. "I think the junior was a little over-excited."
Her mind's fuzzy and full of stars. That might be what does it. She's just not thinking as she rises up again and settles into the stance for the first kata of the Black Bull Dance.
"Oh! It seems she's not finished yet! Well, legionnaire, I'm sure I can offer a few more pointers."
The words should mean something. They don't. Instead, she watches him take up his stance-

And moves.

Simple.
All of it's simple. He tries for a leg sweep again, so she stamps down on his ankle and hears the crack. That leaves his leg extended, so she punches his knee and watches it bend. That pulls him off balance, so she leans into a headbutt and smells the iron-tang of blood as she breaks his nose.
He falls.
She steps in. Sees the weakspots. Shifts her body. Throws out two punches – hip and shoulder. Crack crack. He screams.
She steps back.
There's a pause as her brain, still scrambled, tries to piece together what just happened. He's already healing, she can see. That's… normal, right? Yeah. Yeah, that's normal. And he's snarling now. Angry. Closing.
She doesn't think. She just moves. He's faster than she is, but it doesn't matter – if he hits her, she hurts him. The kata's just teaching her the easiest way to do it. He lashes out at her face, but she just ducks under it and that puts her in position for a double-punch into his side. His knee comes up to stop her, but that's fine – she can put one of the strikes into the knee instead, oh, like the fishermen did with the spears, and that's put his leg out of action again.
It's simple.
That's the point.

And then there's someone big and heavy and familiar between her and Cao Pai Mei and she can't think of what to do.
She feels something cold press against her head. Tingles. Funny. Should she- Oh. Oh. Qi. Yeah. Qi running through her head, kind of like feathers. The world starts swimming back into focus.
Maria blinks. The Honourable Sibling watches her eye for a moment, checking for concussion.

"I WANT-!" Cao Pai Mei is bellowing, but the Sibling doesn't seem to be listening.
"Are you alright?" She nods shakily. They smile. "Good. That was excellent."
Then they turn back to the furious Saber leader.
"I must apologise for my student," says the Sibling. "That last exchange was subpar against one of your stature. In her defence, we are still early in her training."
"Your student broke my nose," hisses Cao Pai Mei. The Sibling nods.
"Yes. Iron God's Forehead, the technique is called. Thank you for giving her the chance to practice it."
"I WILL HAVE HER-" begins Cao Pai Mei, but that's as far as he gets.
"No. You won't. You'll leave her alone. Because if you do not, we shall all of us face a coalition tribunal. They will ask why, in this sparring match with a junior, you inflicted brain damage. Under normal circumstances, you could of course admit that it was simply an accident – which it was, correct? But this is war, my friend. You would have removed an efficient and decorated officer from service. That will merit more than a slap on the wrist. More than that, you will have interfered in my attempts to tutor a successor. And I have friends too."

There is a long, fraught, silence. Maria realizes how many eyes are on them. She tries not to panic.

Then Cao Pai Mei bows slowly. When he comes up, he's back to everyone's favourite uncle. She can't even see the hate in his eyes.
"I must commend you on your tutelage, master Sibling. The Black Bull's Dance is a sight to behold."
"Thank you. I, in turn, must thank you again for tutoring my junior. This is a lesson I doubt she will forget."

They smile like liars at one another. Then Cao Pai Mei is gone, and the Sabers follow after like bewildered puppies.
The Sibling pats her on the shoulder.
"Another lesson tomorrow," they state.
"I've got patrol," says Maria, still dazed.
"I know. It's a short one. I'll meet you at the gate before you go."
---

It's the next morning, and she's trying so hard to balance "panicked student" with "successful captain". The squad isn't helping – Nikolas is shooting smirks at every Divine Saber he sees, Cecilia and Priscian keep staring at her like she's Rina fucking Callista, and Georgy keeps alternating between deeply cynical and naively amazed. And that's before she gets to Draconis, who draws level with her as they march towards the gate.
"Lan Hua," he whispers, "informs me that Cao Pai Mei is in notably foul humour."
"Shut. Up."
"In fact, she has no memory of him ever being quite this upset-"
"Sergeant, whatever goes on between you and your girlfriend is not my fucking concern."
He snickers and draws back. He's proud of her, but that translates into affectionate sarcasm, and she'll be eating that for a long while.

None of which is, in turn, as bad as the looks she gets as she steps into the dispatch office. Nameless is behind the desk today – he took an arrow to the knee on some stupid adventure she hasn't asked about – and he gives her serene smile #47, 'deeply amused at your expense but also very impressed'.
"Don't," she warns.
"Your choice of routes today," he says. She blinks.
"I- What?"
"Your choice of routes."
She stares. Then she takes hummingbird out of habit.
"Do you know," says Nameless, "that the best way to throw you is to be nice to you? You panic most agreeably."
She snarls.
"Oh fuck off."
"Well done."
"He had a hand tied behind his back and no sword, and I got very lucky."
"Still."
She waves him off irritably, praying to the Imperator that the heat she feels in her cheeks isn't a blush.

And then they're out of the gates. In the middle of the road, their iron-clad arms crossed, is the Honourable Sibling. The squad comes to a halt behind her, muttering to one another.
The Sibling has a leather bag at their feet. She has no damn idea what's in it.
"Student." Their voice has no warmth in it, just austere authority.
"Master," she squeaks.
"Come forth."

She glances across at Draconis, but he's gone into full parade rest, and through sheer sergeantly authority he's got the rest of the squad doing the same thing. They could be mustering back at the Dawn Fortress. This, she knows from experience, is an impenetrable defence, especially at formal occasions. No help there.

She steps forward.
"When a student has proved themselves, it is custom for the master to grant them their Hands," intones the Sibling. "It has been a long time coming, but at last, you are ready."
They hand her the bag. She opens it. Inside are two heavy black spirit-steel guantlets, set into vambraces, cowters, rerebraces, and shoulder-pads – full sleeves of metal. They're simple, functional things, just as good for punches as they are grapples.
She looks up. The Sibling smiles.
"Not gravebronze," they say, "but they'll do for a student. Perhaps, when you're ready for mastery, I shall find a Golden Devil smith for you."
And then the smile takes on a gentle quality.
"Do you trust yourself again?"
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I've gotten into the habit of making major characters in Maria's story on Heroforge before I write them. The first one I did was, in fact, the Honourable Sibling, so I figured I'd link them here in case anyone wanted to see. @Alectai @ReaderOfFate @Kaboomatic , may I have a threadmark please?
 
Abel Angelus 22 - Meridian Opening bottleneck
Meridian Opening bottleneck
Meridians are blocked because of impurities. Ok fine. The problem is that no one I ask will define what an impurity is! I can feel them, but I hardly have a chemical spectrafer in my body. When I ask they just say things like "It is the build up of that which holds you back." or "Remnants of mortal frailty". No one will give me a solid definition. Preferably a chemical one. I am almost certain that the knowledge exists, but the indexing system of the contribution board is not helpful and I have to pay for every paper I read with all the same stupid purple prose! AHHHH! It's enough to make me tear my hair out.

In the end it was easier to just collect the impurities from someone that had successfully cleaned their meridians and test them to figure it out myself. It isn't as if chemistry is unknown here. Well yes it is somewhat hidden knowledge and it seems like no one can resist adding loads of woo woo, but well within my classification level. There is really no excuse for everyone being so dodgy about the subject.

Oxidized iron attached to bilirubin proteins or in other words rust and the stuff that makes poop brown combined in a complex molecule. Really was that so hard to say! Why does everyone have to be so poetic about literal shit!

I designed a machine to remove the shit. Really lucky about the iron rust being magnetic. Even luckier that bronze isn't! I just need some magnets and clockwork.

It is really a neat little device. Not sure what it reminds me of. Oh well I am sure it will come to me later. I strap myself in this is going to hurt, but really lots of things in cultivation seems to hurt.

"They called me Mad Mad! But I'll show them! I'll show them all" And pull the big metal switch.
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@Alectai, @TehChron, @Humbaba, @ReaderOfFate, @Kaboomatic Show them! Show them all!
 
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Well there's your problem right there; you're trying to treat a metaphysical problem as a purely physical problem.

Kind of a toss-up whether you end up accelerating your cultivation by pulling a bunch of purely physical glop out of your body, or whether you end up doing the whole "burst meridians and fuck up your cultivation" by grabbing stuff that's in the meridians and pulling on them hard enough to yank them out of alignment somehow.

Because it's entirely possible that the impurities that come out during cultivation are some physical manifestation of an abstract/metaphysical/magical process.
 
Well there's your problem right there; you're trying to treat a metaphysical problem as a purely physical problem.

Kind of a toss-up whether you end up accelerating your cultivation by pulling a bunch of purely physical glop out of your body, or whether you end up doing the whole "burst meridians and fuck up your cultivation" by grabbing stuff that's in the meridians and pulling on them hard enough to yank them out of alignment somehow.

Because it's entirely possible that the impurities that come out during cultivation are some physical manifestation of an abstract/metaphysical/magical process.
All comes down to the fate roll. However the very act of writing this Omake should improve the chances of things working out.
 
Yeah but, interestingly enough -- or perhaps perversedly amusingly enough -- it could be the case that since his path of cultivation is "Try to apply some things and methods and sciences I know of from my past life to this life!" -- that his path of cultivation or Dao works because... well, because he walks his path thoroughly.

So, in other words, the most amusing/annoying result: it works, but in hindsight it doesn't fully make sense as to why it should have worked. :V

It's probably because Cultivation is pulling 'away' from the Laws that Heaven imposes upon? Which means that by researching and applying the scientific knowledge and theories of another universe, you are transubstantiating the Laws of this Heaven with that of your own Laws. It's just that your pursuit of "Making All This Crap Make Sense, And Discovering The Underlying Rules And Laws That I Know Must Underlay This Universe!" is -- trying to, at least -- impose or align with the more underlying or bedrock laws of his universe. Or at least, the laws of this universe as attempted-to-be-found-by-your-perspective.

But, leaving him with the temporary impression of "Okay, this appears to have worked for subjective reasons rather than objective-laws-of-physics-reasons argh!" would be the most amusing outcome.

Until eventually he advances further upon the path and finds out more about why the universe is the way it is, and about the Laws of Heavens. At which point, he reassures himself of his desire to find out the truth and physics of the world and etc, etc.
 
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