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Wei Feng 18 - Folk Tale - The tale of the Jade Beauty and the Boy with a hole in his heart
A Folk tale of the Virtuous Flipper region

The tale of the Jade Beauty and the Boy with a hole in his heart


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Once upon a time, in a village far away, there lived a little girl.

She was fair of face, and strong of mind.

She had the grace of a dancer, and the wit of a philosopher.

She was blessed by the heavens with astonishing talent and beauty.

Soon enough, her talent was recognised by a wandering cultivator, who knew the girl to have been blessed.

He took her away to the land of immortals, where she grew up strong and powerful and beautiful as the dawn. Many sought her attention, but she refused them all. For her heart had been captivated long ago by a little village boy. One day, she knew, it was their destiny to meet again.

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Once upon a time, a little boy was born with a hole in his heart. A tiny, tiny hole, almost un-noticeable.

He grew up with a loving family and made many friends among the village children. Among them was a girl, fair of face and strong of wit. As they grew, he fell in love with the girl, and desired with all his heart to have her.

Yet the girl was blessed by the heavens. And when she was found by a wandering cultivator and taken away to the lands of the immortals a pit opened up in the boy's heart.

He lived, adrift and mourning for the life he had dreamed of, until one day he found a peculiar ring. This ring was haunted by a powerful spirit, who offered the boy a way to become an immortal cultivator and see all his dreams come true, if only the boy would help the spirit free itself.

Almost without thought, the boy agreed, and the spirit began to teach him. The boy grew in power swiftly, able to match those who had trained for years in the space of months. But he knew if he wanted to achieve his goal and find the girl he could not languish here.

The boy took all his savings and set off for the Immortal world.

Upon the road, he met an injured man on the side of the road. Without thought, the boy offered his help, but the man was really a powerful bandit. He struck out at the boy and when all was said and done, the boy was left for dead on the side of the road, with nothing but the clothes on his back.

And the hole in the boy's heart grew a little wider.

Many months later, the boy came to the gates of the sect where the girl had gone. Many sought to enter this mighty place, yet few succeeded. But the boy was brave and skilled, and though he had not trained for so long as many he managed to pass the tests and be admitted.

There, he finally saw the girl again, though only from afar. For though he had passed the gates he was still of lowly status, and the girl was a great treasure of the sect. And his heart was gladdened and began to warm again.

But another saw the boy's interest. A young master of the sect, who believed that the girl should be his alone. The young master arranged to train with the boy, and under the guise of a match beat him within an inch of his life, crippling the boy's progress.

And the hole in the boy's heart grew a little wider.

But the spirit of the ring was knowledgeable and powerful, and with its help the boy recovered, determined to grow stronger and avenge himself and see the girl again. He recovered and trained for many months, and finally he cornered his adversary and avenged himself.

But the young master's father was a man of great importance and arrogance. When he discovered what had happened to his son, he grew wroth. He sent the girl away to another sect and enacted his own revenge upon the boy.

The boy, realising that his beloved was gone and that he could not hope to stand up to the father, fled. Yet his enemy never gave up and hounded the boy day and night. The boy could sleep no where in safety, every friend he made betrayed him or died.

And the hole in the boy's heart grew.

Finally, the boy came to a valley of secrets. In it he found great treasures which raised his strength immensely. With these treasures he finally struck down the father and all who had followed him. All the friends who had betrayed him he slew in the name of the friends that had preferred to die.

And the hole in the boy's heart grew.

Many years passed, and the boy faced many more trials, growing in strength all the while. Until finally he met the girl once more. The girl was still strong and brave and witty. As strong as he. And for a time, the boy was happy.

But then once more he looked at the world, and his jaded eyes saw threats and terrors all about him. So once more he sought power from the wise spirit.

The spirit though, had grown weary. It had brought the boy great power, yet the bargain was unfulfilled.

"Have I not given you all the dreams you sought? Give me my freedom, see our bargain done, and I will once more aid your growth."

But the spirits words angered the man. His dreams were not fulfilled. He was still too weak, for it was possible he could still be defeated. In his rage, the man conceived of a new plan. If the spirit would not aid him then he would take the spirits power for himself.

He wove a great ritual, telling the spirit all the while that he was working to free it. And so he did. The ritual enacted, the ring broke and the spirit was freed. But the man had perverted the ritual, the freed spirit was instead damaged and broken down and finally consumed wholesale by the man.

And the hole in his heart was a yawning chasm swallowing all that it could.

Seeing what he had done, the girl grew afraid. She begged him to stop, but the hole in the man's heart was too wide. He would not stop until he could fight all the world if he must. He possessed the girl now, and he would allow nothing to take her from him.

Long years passed, and the man grew stronger, and crueller. He weaved great rituals, and even when the heavens turned against him and rained great lightning upon him, he was unmoved.

Stronger and stronger he grew, until the pursuit of greater strength became all that defined him. He became a monster, that lived in a tomb and could only stand the touch of light for instants in a day.

The girl grew old, her skin lost its shine, and the man grew disgusted by her appearance. His love turned to dust, for her aging showed that she was weak.

Yet still, he would not let her go. For she was his, and he would allow no other to take what was his.

Some say that the monster still lives, slumbering in his tomb beneath the great empty desert. His hunger so great that it drains the very lifeforce from anyone who enters his territory.

Some say too that the girl too still lives, growing more aged, yet the monster grew so strong that he would not allow even death to take her. They say her calls still sing out, warning travellers away from the territory that she is forever trapped in.
 
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Wei Feng 19 - JingShen Negaverse 2 - Turn 9: Sudden Reversals
4191 words. I have no idea how I wrote this so fast. Also, can't fix the subtitles being in a separate box from the rest of the "updates" for some reason.

Link to Jingshen Negaverse 1

Jingshen Negaverse 2 Turn 9: Sudden reversals:



TemporalLobe said:
News from the great battlefield:
TemporalLobe said:
Sighing, Junjie examined the latest reports from the great battlefield. They were poor indeed for the righteous path.

The righteous path alliance under the Strength Purity sect had suffered yet another devastating blow in their war against the Demonic Powers.

At the urging of the Seven Divine Sabre Palace, Yao Zhihao and her Flood Dragon Gang, supported by the Seven Divine Palace and the Elder of Day himself, set out to entrap Elder Fleshharrower of the Demonic Altar.

Instead, Wei Xun of the Heavenly Time Shatter Sect had counter ambushed them. Facing two Demonic Nascents, the Elder of Day received the news that the Sabre Palace itself was under assault from Sun Dixang, leading his Devil Twin Concubines. Hearing this, the Elder of Day quit the battlefield and fled back to the Sabre Palace.

Yao Zhihao was forced to use a teleportation treasure to escape, finding refuge with the Golden Devils, but the main forces of the Flood Dragon Gang were destroyed, taking their entire Core Formation and Foundation building strength.

Here their stories conflict. Yao Zhihao has alleged that this was a calculated betrayal. That while she was occupied with Wei Xun, the Elder of Day allowed Fleshharrower to destroy her Flood Dragons without opposition, only quitting the field after. The Elder of Day claims that they were simply forced to flee when news of the dire situation of his sect arose.

Privately, you suspect that Yao Zihao's story is the more accurate one. As you learned to your cost, the Sabre Palace was in the habit of betraying their business agreements.

Regardless, the news was cause for both private celebration and cursing. The devastation of the Flood Dragon Gang, perennial allies of the Golden Devils, brought a smile to his lips. That the Sabre Palace, who had wrought such damage to the heart of his little Jiao, were suffering as well, forced to use a number of their sect protecting treasures. Well, it almost made his heart twitch with glee.

At the same time, the news brought trouble. That that Old Monster, Dixang had managed to tame both the Devil Bee Nascents was far from welcome news. In less than two centuries, he would be free to return to the desert. Though he would likely go for Konstantinos first was scant comfort, for even if the Jingshen were able to raise up a third nascent and conquer the accursed devils, this would only give them parity in numbers. Never mind that one was purported to be an accursed poison mistress.

Secondly, the destruction of the Flood Dragon Gang meant that Old Gold had another Nascent prowling his lands once again for an unknown period. As a member of the Righteous Path Alliance, she wouldn't move against him directly, but even her presence would give Old Gold a freer hand and hamper your ability to conduct espionage in the devil lands.

Fortunately, it was almost time for the centennial winnowing of the Golden Devils. Old Gold would probably be far too focused on his own defence to make true use of the breathing room he had been granted.

Now, what to do…..

[] Subsidise the spirit stone trade – Cost: 8 wealth. While the war continues, this action may be repeated at a cost of 2-4 wealth per turn. Gain: Goodwill.

The Righteous Powers have suffered another grievous blow. At the same time, with your new lands beginning to generate spirit stones you have a relative glut. Offer the righteous path a slight reduction on the price of spirit stones. You'll lose some wealth, but the gain in goodwill will help more in the long-run.

[] The Gouge of the Sabre. Cost – Unknown amount of goodwill.

Alternatively, you might instead raise the price of spirit stones. The main righteous path are in desperate need of spirit stones to continue their war. Put out that you believe Lady Yao's account. That the Saber Palace are a disgrace to the righteous path, too treacherous to be trusted. Until they are brought to heel, the price must go up. The Golden Devils would almost certainly follow your lead here, which might decrease any effect this has on your relative goodwill balance compared to the Devils. Increase in relations with the Flood Dragon gang. Gain between 5 and 15 wealth this turn. Gain a very warm feeling for screwing over Saber Palace even further in revenge for little Jiao. Baffle the Golden Devils.

[] Heal the Wounded White Tiger – Cost 4 Wealth for a temporary boost (between 2-4 turns, rolled). 10 Wealth to bring to full strength permanently.

Your Western Defences against the Devils have long gone untested. Some of the fixed spirit cannons require repair, and the defensive arrays are badly corroded. Repair the cannons, send to the plains for new arrays. This will leave you well prepared for war on the Devils in the future.

[] Rebirth of the Vermillion Bird – Cost 6 Wealth. Discounted as you can recycle major parts of the existing defences.

Fortunes have changed much in the desert. Your Southern Defences against the Cannibals are no longer needed. But this means that your defences to the south are now badly out of position. That the foes you face here were from the Righteous path does not mean they do not raid. Build your defences and secure your new holdings tight. Also decreases internal squabbling as defences and territories for each family are firmly laid down.

[] Attempt to Raise a New Nascent – Cost 30 Wealth. Currently a 15% chance to succeed. [WARNING YOUR CURRENT TERRITORIES CANNOT SUSTAIN 3 NASCENT SOULS. PLUNGE TO 0 INCOME NEXT TURN. WAR TURNS MANADATORY. IF NEW TERRITORY IS NOT GAINED SUFFER ESCALATING PENALTIES]

[] Pour Wealth into your Core Formation Elders – Cost 15 Wealth.

None of your core Formation Elders is particularly likely to achieve a breakthrough at present. Spend wealth like water to attempt to hasten their ascension to the peak of Great circle. Will result in a random increase of between 0-15% to the chance of the Raise a New Nascent soul action.

[] The Battlefield's Call – Cost: Lady Jiao Jingshen or Junjie Jingshen. [WARNING: HIGH RISK]

The righteous path is desperate for Nascent Soul level combatants. Lend them one of yours. Potentially significant rewards including nascent soul level treasures and a large amount of goodwill from the Righteous Path alliance. However, who you send may never return. May also leave you vulnerable to Old Gold. Even with the threat of the winnowing, could he resist?

Ozymandias said:
Oh hey new turn. Sees [] The Battlefield's Call.

Nope.jpeg.


Pokingatthings said:
Hmm. @TemporalLobe: Why is Yao hanging around the Golden Devils? You specifically didn't mention the Flood Dragon Qi condensations, so presumably they're still stuck on the Great Battlefiled. Shouldn't she go to them?

TemporalLobe said:
She doesn't trust the rest of the Righteous path at the moment. The SPS and Sabre Palace have promised compensation after the war, and strongly hinted that if she doesn't come back to help the amount will drop considerably, but… well would you trust that offer?

"Hey, we know we screwed you over last time. But please come back and help fight a bunch of other nascents with us. We'll pay you a bit more to apologise for last time. Pay no attention to the fact that if you die it would very conveniently remove any need to pay out a ruinous amount of money and your Sect would be completely done."

Junjie certainly wouldn't take that deal.

UNCLEPENNYBAGS said:
Ok. Devils are distracted and with a second nascent hanging about sneaky plots are a lot trickier. Time to push for our wincon.

[] Plan LOADSOFMONEY

-[] [CLAN FOCUS]: Exploitation. You have recently received a very large parcel of new lands. Begin exploiting them.

-[] Junjie – Generate wealth. -

-[] [JIAO FOCUS] – Generate wealth write in – Reduce the time taken for new lands to reach full wealth generation by use of your supreme diplomatic skills.

--[] Your new lands are bare of mortals and infested with Blood path relics. What population does exist is all to used to paying their tolls in blood and flesh, rather than labour and spirit stones. Go to these lands and speak with the leaders of these mortals and the new leadership. Show them the new way, and extol the value of serving the Jingshen. No longer need they fear to have children that they or the children might be eaten. No longer must they watch the butchery of their own at the whims of callous gods. Instead, they must simply mine, where a man might win his fortune in but a few days or weeks of work.

-[] Subsidise the spirit stone trade.


Keeps up our cred with the RP Alliance without costing us too much. This is even more useful, since they're down 2 Nascent Souls (Yao and Elder of Day), with a big bill coming due at the end of the year. So, they're gonna need a lot of money to help crash build stuff.

Not spending anything on our Core's yet. The base chance increases over time and I want enough in the bank that we can take this in one turn and the raise a nascent action the next before we push the button. The last thing we need is to raise a good prospect only to have some jealous rival cripple them while we're gathering breakthrough money. Or worse, Old Gold find out and do some intrigue stuff.

Enkidu said:
Is it wrong that I really, really want to take Gouge of the Sabre? Not just for revenge. Or the money (though both are very nice), but for this:

Temporallobe said:
Golden Devil's baffled.

I really, really want to see Old Devil's face if we do this.

Also, screw those backstabbing Saber assholes.

SarcasticVoter said:
Enkidu said:
Also, screw those backstabbing Saber assholes.

:rolleyes: Ah yes. Those backstabbing assholes. Not like we've never put a knife in someone's spine, right?

Enkidu said:
I am allowed to be hypocritical occasionally. It's a Xianxia staple afterall.

Worried voter said:
I like Plan LOADSOFMONEY, but I'd prefer to take [] Rebirth of the Vermillion Bird as well.

Xianxia Newbie said:
Do the righteous path even raid? Is this actually an issue?

TheManintheHat said:
Xianxia Newbie said:
Do the righteous path even raid? Is this actually an issue?

Yes. The Flood Dragon Gang are (or were) an entire group of Bandits, with enough power to raise a Nascent Soul.

Even beyond that, there's a danger of the good old fashioned "Oh a group of terrible bandits attacked all your settlements and fled into our lands. We graciously killed them all for you.

Their loot? No idea, they weren't carrying much. I'm afraid they must have stashed it somewhere. Still, I was kind enough to take care of the problem. Now since you couldn't perhaps you can show me some face and pay my Clan's medical expenses?"

Righteous path is all about power games and deniability. Look at how many good seeds get 'accidently' crippled in tournaments.

[] Plan these lands are our lands

-[] [CLAN FOCUS]: Exploitation. You have recently received a very large parcel of new lands. Begin exploiting them.

-[] Junjie – Generate wealth. -

-[] [JIAO FOCUS] – Generate wealth write in – Reduce the time taken for new lands to reach full wealth generation by use of your supreme diplomatic skills.

--[] Your new lands are bare of mortals and infested with Blood path relics. What population does exist is all to used to paying their tolls in blood and flesh, rather than labour and spirit stones. Go to these lands and speak with the leaders of these mortals and the new leadership. Show them the new way, and extol the value of serving the Jingshen. No longer need they fear to have children that they or the children might be eaten. No longer must they watch the butchery of their own at the whims of callous gods. Instead, they must simply mine, where a man might win his fortune in but a few days or weeks of work.

-[] Subsidise the spirit stone trade.

- [] Rebirth of the Vermillion Bird

Loadsofmoney but with taking the forts too. Might slightly slow down our Wincon but leaves us less vulnerable squabbling over the new toys or to Storks deliveries raiding our new stuff.

I'madoggonow said:
Plus, the Storks might have been righteous originally, but they might well be demonic now given their overlords.

MaximumParanois said:
If we don't take [] The wounded white tiger then doesn't moving Jiao to the New Lands leave our Western Flank open?

TheSharksandtheJets said:
Thanks to our spies, we know that the Golden Devils lost their spymaster in the last winnowing, and that their new one hasn't managed to re-establish their network amongst us yet.

In addition, even if they did somehow find out, they're almost certainly going to have to concentrate on defending themselves against the winnowing. Given that last time they didn't they got most of their Core's killed.



QuestioningNewPlayer said:
Ok, people keep talking about our Win condition, what is that exactly.

PatientLoreExpert said:
Getting a third Nascent soul. At the moment, the Golden Devils only have 1 Nascent soul to our 2.

However, despite our number advantage, the Golden Devil's will have some nasty clan treasures as a last-ditch protection. In addition, Old Gold is very, very strong on the defence. Finally, the golden Devil's are formations specialists. Their Cores might be able to successfully launch a nascent soul level attack with a battle formation.

Killing any nascent is very difficult, since they tend to have lifesaving treasures and can run away very fast.

Getting three nascents mean we can use Junjie to pin down Old Gold, while Jiao and our third go around doing damage and forcing them to expend their one shot clan protecting treasures.

QuestioningNewPlayer said:
But didn't the latest update say that since someone called Dixang has three Nascents we'd still b ein trouble even if we took out the Golden Devils?

PatientLoreExpert said:

Sarcastic Plotter said:

Yes said:

Enkidu said:
Ffffffffffffffffffffffffuuu…………………………………….





TemporalLobe said:
[] Year 182 – A slap to the Face
TemporalLobe said:
It had all begun so well. The new lands were bearing fruit. Your lowering of Spirit stone tariffs to the battlefield had won you much goodwill.

Junjie had been taking the rare chance to enjoy a sunset when the communication had come in. Yangshen Fort and Haoshen fort on the Western border had fallen to a surprise riad of cultivators riding giant scorpions. The commander of Wangshen fort, knowing he could not hope to stand off a force capable of defeating the other forts, had retreated to summon aid. He'd reached part of the main family that had a communication stone with you only minutes ago.

Even for a Nascent soul, it would take many hours to reach the area. Hours in which more damage might be done.

Worse, you could not go alone. If the worst had happened, if Konstantinos or Yao were there. Junjie had once been confident that outside his own territory, he would be able to defeat Old Gold. Had been, until old Gold had handed Old Cannibal so simply, inflicting such a thorough defeat on him. And if he was involved, then he had had hours, perhaps days to prepare the ground.

So summoned his Granddaughter. Together they flew toward the fortresses, though he bade her follow him at remove.

The sight that awaited them enraged him. The forts destroyed. The great soul canon, bulwark of the defensive line, that which would allow an early nascent to hold out against a mid, was destroyed. The mine useless. And fleeing away, not even hiding their characteristic bronze skin, were a troop of Golden Devils.

In his fury, he dropped.

"Good! Good! Good!", he shouted.

"You Golden Devils think you can simply ravage my lands like the Demonic filth you are? You have another thing coming, you dogshit trash! This old man will teach you all a lesson." And he brought his will down, raw power seething towards the invaders.


Only to be blocked, a dagger imposing itself between the attack and its target, deflecting it away.

Old Gold stood there, bronze skin stretched so thin over him that he appeared half a corpse, one hand holding the dagger that had defleceted the blow. At his waist was a cleaver, the artifact gleaming terribly.

"Konstantinos!" Jinjie spat.

"Yes, it's me.", said the other old man agreeably. "Is this war? Are you coming into my lands to fight me? Know that-"

The Old Monster chuckled.

"Calm down, my friend. This is merely some hotblooded Flood Dragon Gang bandits merely overacting. The loss of all their brothers recently has made them mad with grief."

Junjie felt as if he were about to spit blood. The audacity to come into his lands and lie to his face like this.

"Flood Dragons? Every one of them has your bronze skin, your devil eyes! Do you think I am a fool?"

Manuel smiled.

"Of course not, my esteemed friend. But look more closely. Can you see the insignia of the Flood Dragon Gang on their robes? We Golden Devils make no demands on our Clan. If some hotblooded young men wish to join the Flood Dragon Gang, who am I to prevent them?"


Junie's face reddened. Blood pumping from his bitter heart as rage lent him strength. This liar. He dared?

"So if they are only Flood Dragon trash, why protect them?"

The skeleton shrugged.

"Lady Yao has been distraught since the loss of her juniors. She asked me to safeguard them, as she has so few juniors left."

Junjie growled.

"So you are preventing me killing bandits in my own land? Very good!" Junjie's smile was a rictus as he narrowed his eyes in hatred. "Why don't I just-"

Konstantinos interrupted.

"Invite out your daughter? Please do, I have missed little Jiao since our last encounter. I am... most eager to continue her education. After all, she's simply hiding to the northwest, waiting for your signal, isn't she?"

The scorpions of the invaders continued to move, growing closer and closer to the lands of the accursed Devil Clan.

Junjie Jingshen smiled. It was a cruel, nasty thing, full of promise.

"So you know? What does it matter. If I bring both of us out-"

Manuel swept in even closer, raising his cleaver.

"Do you think I'm afraid of you? Bring out your daughter and fight me together if you want. If you want a war, then I'll bring you one. If you think you can beat me, two against one, then come. I remember when Sun Diaxing beat you into a pulp, Junjie. Do you remember what happened to Sun Diaxing?"

The Bronze Devil tossed his dagger from hand to hand, waiting.

"I will want reparations for this." Junjie would not be bullied by this Demonic trash. Not on his own lands. Not with waiting and watching little Jiao just beyond the hill.

Konstantinos gave him a personable grin. He hated it.

"Of course! I guarantee all your losses will be made whole. As much as I wish to protect these young Flood Dragons, I could not in good faith let them damage you and have you suffer."

Junjie's lips pursed, and he began to relax a little. This was how the game was played, after all.

"So, less tariffs along the Scorpion Road? Spirit stones? What do you propose?"

Manuel's grin grew wider. Junjie, really, really hated it.

"Of course not! For the Clan to pay compensation would be most inappropriate. No, as you mentioned we are merely Demonic filth, and such an agreement would merely be insulting you. I spoke to Lady Yao, and she has promised to make good any losses from the compensation the Seven Divine Saber Sect pay to her. Given your Righteous Path owes her such a sum, there is no way they would ever default."

"You expect me to wait decades or centuries to be repaid?!" Junjie screamed. This trash. This filth. How dare he. HOW Dare he?

Manuel shook his head.

"You have to understand, this is the most I could do. Yao'er truly wanted to wreck all your mines and even kill both of you to gain vengeance. She was most intent on destroying your Righteous Path's source of Spirit Stones to make the Saber Palace pay for their... indiscretions. I was with much begging able to talk her down to this. She said, and I apologise for the phrasing, you could either 'That old man can fuck off or fight. If he wants to make my juniors suffer than as many clansmen as he has, I'll kill.'"

The creature's grin grew ever-wider even and Junjie shook with his rage.

"Do you truly expect me to-"

Old Gold's grin faded, and he spoke over Old Jingshen.

"Let me explain something. My Golden Devil Clan is not easily bullied, and neither are our allies. If your Righteous Path thinks they can simply slaughter the noble Flood Dragons and leave unmolested, they are truly fools. You think your Righteous Path can slap us, but we can't slap you? Do you think we will simply sit down and take every kick like an obedient dog? I came here to tell you that there will be a substantial increase in the tariffs until the Seven Divine Saber Sect has repaid their debt, as interest on your Righteous Path misbehaviour. I of course know they will happily repay you, so do not consider this as us bullying you. We are merely transferring a debt owed, that you might collect on it at your leisure. If you dislike it, please, complain to the Saber Palace."


This was too much.
"What has that got to do with us? We were not the ones to betr- to fail to protect the Flood Dragons!" He burst out. "You think just referring this to the Saber Palace means you are not slapping my face, Konstantinos? Perhaps I should bring my daughter out!"

Old Devil merely shrugged.

"If you don't like it, you can always leave the Righteous Path. Of course, then such a debt could not be transferred, and we could simply fight about it. I won't stop you. We can see who would win, Clan facing Clan, just like Alexios wanted."

Junjie trembled as he looked down at his lands. Ruined forts, a cracked cannon, and a shattered drill in a worthless mine. But if he attacked… Konstantions had had days to plan. And if the slightest possibility existed that the was telling the truth? That Yao too was waiting in the wings to take her chance? The Jingshen might fall here and now. Or be forced to use something he could never recover.

"You will pay for this, Konstantinos." Every word dripped the promise or retribution.

Old Gold smiled, and tossed his dagger lightly into his other hand.

"If you feel your neck has gotten tired, Junjie, come see me at any time. I'll lighten it by a head."

And then he left, leaving Junjie to his rage. Looking out over his broken territory.

There would be a reckoning.



Enkidu said:
TemporalLobe said:
[] Year 182 – A slap to the face

I do not like that title. Reads:



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Goddamnit.

MaximumParanois said:
….

Can someone pick up that phone. Because I CALLED IT.

Should I see if I can get the Mod's to rename me Properlyparoid now?

TheManintheHat said:
…..

I'm…. I'm gonna take a bit of time away from the thread before I say something I'll regret.

I know we were warned of the weakness but… damn.

Depressed as hell said:

Temporallobe said:
Because you were weak. Because the Golden Devils knew you depended on their need to concentrate on the winnowing. Because they know as well as you that if you get another nascent soul they will fall and this will cost you. Because the fall of the Flood Dragons cannot go unanswered and you are the only nearby righteous power. Because the Righteous Powers alliance was arrogant enough to tell Lady Yao that they would not compensate her until the war with the noble Devil Alliance was done, and stupid enough to warn her that they would pay her less if she did not walk back onto the Great Battlefield and offer up her neck for slaughter.

Interestingly, this entire situation might never have come about had the Strength Purity sect Elder Glorious Strike been less conniving. Old Gold would likely have accepted the current land distribution or a slightly worse one in exchange for an alliance to kill Old Cannibal. Instead, he was allowed to leave, in the hopes that he would either die or massively extend the Devil Bee civil war and potentially return to trouble the Golden Devils in 200 years. If the Golden Devils still exist by that time of course. Instead? Well… you saw the results.
 
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Wei Feng 20 - Interlude - Making Medicine part 2: The Eight Hundred and Eighty Eight Technique Palace:
Making Medicine part 2: The Eight Hundred and Eighty Eight Technique Palace:

[Turn 9]



Flying. It's warm and dark and she's flying.

Or maybe she's floating. It's like her head, her arms, her legs weigh nothing.

It's nice.

Except, maybe she was flying after all? Because now she's falling. Her stomach flips and the wind is howling and the darkness is flashing like lightning in a storm.

Impact.

Her head snaps forward, then back.

She's gone.



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The Sect Technique palace is a miracle for training and improving disciples, and like most such miracles there has been much argument over how best to employ it. There are trade-offs to the sect technique palace. It can reveal strengths or talents utterly unknown to the cultivator, so it is usually felt that the sooner a disciple can be taken there the better. However, some argue that an often-unacknowledged truth is that the natural gifts of a cultivator and the path they dedicate themselves to are not always the same.

From that perspective, it is superior to allow the young cultivator to form an idea of their possible paths first. Then take them to the technique palace, that they might receive the art that best suits not only their talent but their disposition.

The seventh legion takes something of a mixed approach here.


They stood before the Legate. Ranks of upon ranks of new qi condensation cultivators. Their armour gleamed under the noonday sun. Their spearpoints shining as they listened with rapt attention to his words.

"Soldiers of the Seventh Legion!" And the crowd, already at attention somehow straightens even further.

"Over the past few years, you have struggled to achieve the impurity expulsion stage and become true cultivators. At the same time, you have been given chances to see down which path your way might lie. You have had the barest taste of the roads of pill refining, of beast rearing and spirit herb farming and of the many other paths a cultivator might take." He booms. "Indeed, if you inhaled too deeply, you may never have been able to rid yourself of the taste of beast taming or herb farming!" He laughs, loud and strong.

"Now you are true cultivators, and you are being given the opportunity to enter the Eight hundred and eighty-eight technique place. The palace knows you, understands you in ways that even you yourselves do not. IT will show you arts that will be truly suited to your bodies and minds. That allows your abilities in single combat not to utterly shame the prowess of the legion. They will be your weapons and your armour, every bit as much as your legion regalia.

So, step forward, sons and daughters of the seventh legion. Step forth to receive your arms. "

And so, rank by rank, two by two, they march.

==

The technique palace is strange. There were stories of training pagodas used by other sects have her expecting some sort of combat trial. Instead, she finds a somewhat mundane looking archive. Scrolls line the walls stretching into the distance, and warm sunlight peaks through large windows onto large desks and stools, where archivists might work.

The most obvious sign that something is wrong is that no-one else is here. Of those who marched ahead of her, of Nicarus who walked beside her, there is no sign.

The light that streams in through the windows is wrong. The angle of the sun is that of the early morning, not midday. Unlike the harsh desert sunlight, its brightness is soft and the room is dappled with the shadows of trees that did not exist where the palace was placed.

On the nearest desk, a flash of darkness catches her eye. An ink stick and inkstone, both blacker than the moonless desert night. Besides them lies a brush, a small pitcher of water, and a scroll of bamboo.

Carefully, almost gingerly, she approaches. She looks over the other desks, but all of them are bare.

On the scroll, in simple and plain calligraphy, is written a single question.

'Who are you?'

It's obvious what she is meant to do. She checks the inkstone, hesitantly touching it with the very tip of her finger. The stone is bone dry and unnaturally cold in the warm room. She goes to lift the pitcher of water and finds it far heavier than she expected. It takes both her hands to lift it, and when she tilts it to spread water on the inkstone the water shifts so fast that it upsets the balance and she barely stops herself from throwing the entire contents of the pitcher onto the stone.

She picks up the ink stick. Like the stone, it too is cool to the touch, but it grinds easily against the stone, producing shiny black ink that glistens wetly in the sunlight. Finally, she picks up the brush. Of all the items, this feels normal under her hands. Slowly, in blocky, plain handwriting, she writes her name upon the scroll.

Anna Komnene.



Nothing happens.

Until writing begins to appear on the scroll, far faster than a human could write.

Anna Komnene. You will be judged.

The scroll rolls itself back up, then flies off into the archive. She leaps to her feet, raising her arms into the basic combat stance of the legion.

Nothing happens. Again.

She doesn't lower her guard. The legion trainers had taught her enough to know that just because the enemy was unseen did not mean they were not there.

She waits for almost fifteen minutes, tense as a coiled spring, but nothing happens. Eventually, she concludes that she must be expected to follow the scroll.

So, she sets off, her footfalls echoing in the empty room. Halfway down the first aisle, she hears a rustling noise behind her. Ingrained training kicking in, Anna spins round and lashes out at whatever is coming for her.

She hits an open scroll, and….

She twirls her spear and strikes forward. The shaft falls like a thunderbolt, lightning shining at its tip.

The scroll slams backward from the force of her blow, as she staggers. To her side, she hears another clatter and a blow to the side of her head leaves her spinni….

The axe is heavy in her hands. Facing her is a single spearman. Foolish. Spears are ideally suited for group engagements. She charges, the spear thrust misses her ribcage by inches and the axe comes down, shattering the spear into so much kindling.

She falls to one knee. The scroll that hit her folds itself up and flies backwards again. Another swooshing behind her…

Fire flies from her fingers. Her qi drops precipitously but no matter. Her opponent is a ball of screaming flame. She cackles as she smells the cooking fle…

Another,

They drown on dry land, clawing at their faces as the water closes over them.

She pulls up her arms to shield her head.

The needle sinks into flesh, holding back the rot that has infected the arm. It will not last long, but it will buy her time to burn out the infection with her qi.

She curls up into a ball on the floor.

Metal qi resonates with the bronze singing in her blood, as sword qi deflects off her impenetrable carapace.

She is buffeted by another blow.

The vitality of wood flows through veins. She flexes and her neck snaps to the side like a supple branch, avoiding an arrow that would have pierced her eye.

And another,

Earth rises into a shield around them. Blocking off the noises of the battle. Beneath her hands, the patient writhes, driving the barbed spearhead further into their wound.

Another,

An all cloaking shadow, hiding her from all that would harm her.

Another,

The stinging sensation of the poison on her lips. It's fumes choking at her lungs yet leaving her alone unharmed.

Another. On and on.

A single slice. If the heavens come before him he will cut them down. If all the earth is his foe he will cut it down. One slice is all he needs.

A never-ending parade of memory.

==

She starts awake to find herself sitting at that first desk. Of the inkstone, inkstick, pitcher or brush there is no sign. Instead, three jade strips are placed upon the desk. She touches each in turn.

Divine Needles of Asclepius

An art focused on the uses of needles and medicine, that required a doctor's knowledge and precision to bring out its full potential.



The Melodies of history


A demonic tunes art, meant to read the histories of whatever fell under their sway. It had great potential, but was obviously a foundational technique for another art.



The Body of Gold


A body technique focusing on knowledge of medicine and alchemy to enhance the qi flows, bone-marrow, and musculature of the body.



All three arts either demand considerable knowledge or help to obtain it. She sweeps the jade slips into her pouch belt pouch and stumbles towards the door.

The Noonday sun greets her. A clanking of metal attracts her attention, and she turns to see Nicarus stagger out of the palace door.

She goes to support him, but her own balance is off and she nearly falls into him instead. Then a tanned hand grabs her arm, and Centurion Perdix is lifting them both.

"Easy now, easy. The technique palace is always rough." He pulled them off to the side, where there were benches and water waiting.

"Sit down, have a drink." Gratefully she half collapse into the seat. "Small sips. Some people get a pounding headache after visiting. If you start getting light sensitivity, tell someone and go lie down with a cloth over your eyes. Don't try to tough it out."

Peridex grumbled something under his breath before marching off to collect the next set of arrivals staggering out of the exit. Anna sat on the bench, sipping her water as she recovered.

Finally, a few minutes after the last of Peridex's cohort slipped free of the Palace's grasp, he claps his hands for attention and everyone scrambles into ranks.

"All right kids, time for the post palace talk. Firstly, with one exception, you're under no obligation to tell anyone anything about what arts you got. That said, I advise you to share at least the name or some of the basic effects of the art with your fellows and trainers. That way we can offer the best support to help you develop. Trying to keep the fact you got a spear art secret mostly means you'll never get to practice against real opponents and be about as useful in an actual fight as someone using a sandal to attack a sandstorm."

One oddly cheerful legionnaire looked ready to speak up at that. Peridex pre-empted him.

"And no legionnaire Aristhes, the sandal is not a great artifact, and the person wielding it isn't a nascent soul." Peridex's eye rolling was visible from an impressive distance away.

"The one exception to the rule that you don't have to tell anyone is if you've pulled out art from the palace the clan hasn't seen before. A list of known arts will appear on the contribution board for your perusal. Finding a new art will be worth a sum of contribution points. If you have found a new one and conceal it, then I promise you that the discipline hall's punishment will seem like a pleasant dream next to what I will do to you."

"Secondly, I must inform you that the arts you have received are very strong for Qi condensation practitioners such as yourselves, but they are not the strongest that exist. Some of the family arts held by some of the larger families within the clan, or those found by great luck may be greater. For those few of you who may one day reach the lofty heights of foundation building, you will find that these arts find their ending there. However…" He glared as his voice boomed. "…I will emphasise again. Do not think that these arts are weak or lacking. Forty years ago, most legionnaires would have given their right arms for arts of this quality. Good men and women died to give this chance to all of you. Do not dishonour their sacrifice." A palpable sense of intent filled the air.

"Now then," His tone turned jovial once more, the pressure that he had exuded vanishing like the breeze. "…to prove there is no reason not to share at least the names and themes of your arts, I personally received the arts of the opal spear and the art of the ruby snail. A spear art that dazzles and confuses and a defensive art that restricts my movement."

He spread his hands. "Trite descriptions perhaps, but I assure you with over twenty years of practice, their foundations are deep and strong. Now." He clapped again "Talk amongst yourselves. Free time until lights out. You are also free from your normal duties for the next two days. We leave to return to our regular posting at dawn on the third day. Enjoy yourselves, but remember that anyone who delays that departure will find themselves using their next sum of contribution points to remove the boot prints of the rest of the century from their behinds." He grinned. "Clear?"

"YES SIR."

"Good. Fall out." He turned and strode off.

"So… what did you get in the sparring circle of hell?" Nicarus pipes up from beside her.

"The archive, you mean? "A medical needle art, a body strengthening art requiring a lot of medical and alchemical knowledge and some sort of investigative technique." She replied.

"Wait, do you mean archive? Didn't you get taken to a hellish training ground with a pure white doll that beats you up for hours before finally spitting out a set of arts?"

==

She flies, and falls. Flies, and falls. There is something…

It's warm. She can feel something warm covering her. Like a warm fire on a cold night.

There is something. Something. She. Has.. To…

Impact

Back into the dream.


==

Holding her in his arms, a firebird races back towards friendly lines and medical attention.

======

AN: Have a bit more of Anna's story.
 
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Wei Feng 21 - At the Fearless line
The Fearless line

Weak

Objectively, he knows he is strong. Terrifyingly strong, for a qi condensation cultivator.

Useless

There are none in qi condensation who can match him, though with her new technique, Maria could come close. Yet his higher cultivation would still tell.

Pathetic

He could even make that rarest of claims, that he could truly fight across realms. Fight against early Foundation establishment as a Qi Condensation and not be crushed.

And yet

He could not stop the destruction around him.

He was cut down. And the mortals died even as he healed.

No matter how much he stood up.

Die, and heal.

No matter how much he fought.

Intercept a fang of qi with his right arm. Block a sword thrust with left. Regenerate.

Itchy Fang cut down his mortal charges all the same.

A giant qi construct in the form of a jackal's head with a snake's fangs flashed out. His flames burn at it even as it crushes him to death, but it still crunches on three wagons of mortals before his flames can spread far enough to dissipate the construct.

All he can do is stand up, and die. Again. And again. Buying miles with his life.

"Do you feel it? That itch beneath your skin. Like ants wiggling inside your bones? Does it hurt yet? Does it burn? Whatever technique or inheritance or bloodline you are using, you will come to know regret. Can you end it of your own will, I wonder? Or will you still live, even as you claw your own flesh from your bones in a desperate attempt to. make. it. stop."

But his life alone cannot buy them. And slowly, when he is too slow, when he dodges the wrong way, when the attacks are spread too wide or are too numerous to overcome, the number of refugees dwindles.

==

It takes many miles, and far too many lives for Itchy Fang to give up the chase. Perhaps he was concerned about running into more experts at foundation level having expended so much qi. Perhaps he feared another would feast on the remains of his victims, stretched out over so many miles. Perhaps he simply grew tired of the endless chase, when his quarry showed no sign of succumbing to his art.

All that mattered was that he was gone. Those that remained, the survivors, would live. Objectively, this was victory.

Yet, as he looked back across the remains of the caravan he had tried to protect, at the terrified faces of his charges, and the hollow, shattered trail of wagons left behind them, all Wei Feng could feel was that same impotent anger he had felt facing Itchy Fang.

There would be a reckoning for this.

Then he turned his back on the trail of the broken. He would see his remaining charges to the lines. Place them into another's charge. Then? Then he would test his Dao heart against the rage of Heaven.

It was time for him to step into the next realm.

==

On the back of a broken wagon in the middle of a ravine full of corpses, whole in body, but empty of Qi, Wei Feng meditates.

Overhead, dark clouds gather.

It is said that a heavenly tribulation is eight parts vital force to two parts killing intent. In the transition to Foundation building, the vital force serves to purify the burgeoning dao pillar the cultivator seeks to build. But the heavens bear a great deal of hate for the Golden Devils. For them, a tribulation is instead eight parts killing intent to two parts vital force.

On the fearless line, where tens of thousands of cultivators fight and die, tribulation clouds are never far from the horizon. Breakthroughs are regular occurrences, and from sheer experience, many could tell the strength of the cultivator attempting breakthrough by the density and colour of the clouds.

No one looking at the clouds above would have said this was tribulation targeting a qi condensation cultivator. At least, no-one who did not know how much Heaven abhorred those who dared to step beyond the ninth heavenstage. Combined with their hatred of the Golden Devil clan, it made for a truly terrifying sight. Many times stronger than a regular tribulation, and glowing with killing power.

Surrounded by a vital force intensification array, made to force the killing power of the heavenly lightning back into vital force, Wei Feng focuses.

What am I?

Am I a phoenix? Destined to die and rise again?

What am I?

Am I the boy, watching in horror as a cultivator beats his sister and denies his kinship to mere mortals?

What am I?

Am I the horrified adolescent, watching as a village is butchered? Watching as the survivors are obliterated, their fates irrelevant compared to the chance to destroy their butcher. Watching treasure burst forth from the earth, as heaven smiles down on the annihilator?
What am I?

Am I the wanderer? Enduring the mockery reserved for one who could barely reach the second heavenstage after over two decades of cultivation. Enduring the endless torture of the Cauldron. Who would sell the very clothes from my back to save another mortal life?

Who am I?

Am I the soldier at war? Reliant on cunning and stealth, knowing the legion cannot arrive in time to help?

Who am I?

Am I the Phoenix of Pleuron? Who entered as probably the most ordinary among the Thirteen and emerged broken, but Legend.

Who am I?

Am I the
cripple, searching desperately for a cure?
Am I the
playful senior, sporting with his comrades?
Am I the
teacher offering wisdom?
Am I the
uncle doting on his junior?

Who am I?


I am Wei Feng. I am all of them.

What do you believe?

I believe in Justice.

And the lightning rained down.

=

Justice? Let us see.

The rage of the heavens arced through his body, electricity ravaging and tearing at his body even as the true power of the strike sought out the cracks in his spirit, hoping to shatter the newly forming pillar.

Show us justice.

It arced through his thoughts, its touch birthing demons of doubt to assail him.

The mortals cower beneath the wrath of the cultivator. An unloved and much maligned son of the village returned to repay all the slights and cruelties visited on him in his boyhood.

Show us.

A village, houses torn apart by something much larger and stronger than a human. Corpses litter the streets, torn apart and half eaten. A trail of bones stretches out to the east, scattered like rain.

Almost worse are the obvious signs of looting. This had been no beast attack. At least, not alone. Some beasts might care for one precious metal or another, but those that sought out such things to integrate into their bodies were oddly discerning. This had been a raid by the Abyssal Devil bees.

And he could not hope to catch up to them.


The lightning arced through his heart, seeking heart demons to awaken.

Show us.

A child clutched in his mother's arms. Both screaming as Itchy Fang's qi burrowed through their bodies. They die in agony and terror.


It struck his newly formed Dao Pillar.

Show us.

'Watch.'

The young cultivator, adrift in their own arrogance, suddenly begins to tremble as another presence overcomes his. He is sent for discipline. Chastened, he stands in the town square to apologise. It is clear he is only following the form of his punishment, he does not believe his own words.

Then to his decurion. Slowly, they draw out his history. They find the scars on his spirit and help them fade. Eventually, that young cultivator stands again in that town square. This time his apology is truly meant.


'See'

He could not hope to catch the ones who did this. But perhaps he didn't need to. Why else did the legions exist, if not to do what one cultivator alone could not. Drawing a talisman from his belt, he began composing a message giving his location and the heading of the Devil Bees. Minutes later, a paper crane leaps into the sky, flying far faster even than a devil bee.

Three months later, he receives the news that the raiding party he had reported had been intercepted and destroyed by a legion detachment.


'Know'

A great bird of fire immolates Itchy Fang.

Is this truly enough? This paltry understanding?


'No.'

'Oh?'

Lightning flared, purple and white crashing through into the Dao pillar itself-.

'It is a foundation. Nothing more'

-and dispersed, dancing about the pillar and reinforcing it.

You will fall, as so many others have.

'Then I will just have to rise again.'

==

He opened his eyes, and felt blinded. A storm of lightning was still raging around him, but no longer did he feel his own death approaching. Instead, the lightning was filled with vital energy, flowing into his new Dao pillar and back out again, flooding his body and refining it, elevating it with the power of his nascent dao.

Vital energy flooded out into his body, seeking flaws and impurities to wash away even as it strengthened him. Yet he had passed through the tenth heavenstage of body purification. There were no flaws to be found, and so instead of first expending itself to fix the flaws in his body, all the energy could go to improvement of the base.

His Dao pillar, now truly established, could contain far more qi than even his expanded Dantian. Power flooded into his Dantian and Pillar. Five times as much volume as he could have possibly contained as a qi condensation. Yet he had purified his qi in the great trial of the eleventh heavenstage, allowing him a much greater efficiency with his techniques. The purity of qi he had achieved did not leave him as he stepped into the Foundation building realm.
With these benefits alone, a cultivator stepping from the eleventh heavenstage into foundation building could fight equally against a 4th Pillar expert. But with his phoenix salamander constitution and his ability to call upon the true power of the phoenix and transform for an instant, he was far more than even that.

As a newly born First Pillar, he could stand against a great circle of Foundation building.

For a moment, he simply breathed. Exulting in the euphoric sensation of being so much more than he had been.

Then he looked to the west and moved.

==

Itchy Fang barely had time to scream as an enormous firebird engulfed him, rendering him to ash.



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AN: Feedback appreciated. Typo hunting later. I didn't have a big concluding fight with Itchy Fang because frankly, once Wei Feng ascended, he just wasn't strong enough to need one.
 
Wei Feng 22 - (Non-canon) Interlude: The Eighth Prince's week
Anyone else kind of finding the Eight prince hilarious from these stories?

*pokes muse with a stick for signs of life*

*Muse mumbles and rolls over gently*

The Eighth Prince's week

The Eighth Jingshen Prince was having a terrible decade.

Admittedly, not as bad as the two centuries the Ninth Prince had been having. The Eighth Prince had tried to feel sorry for him, being targeted for personal mockery by your hated enemies in the form of calling one of their powerful young masters by your title was unfortunate. That someone had set the city's alarms to go off at the news of a "Golden Devil Infiltrator" whenever he approached the city for an Elder's meeting might, in retrospect, have been going too far. As might the fact that the prank had been copied across many of the clan's cities and fortresses, including the Ninth's Prince's own.

In your defence though, you had only been responsible for one of those. There was no reason for the Ninth Prince to have employed several criers stand outside the palaces' of every other prince and princess to loudly announce the news that the Golden Devil's copy Prince had perished every day for a decade. Jiao, your -kind/caring/accepting- incredibly annoying elder sister had merely told them accept it and meditate on the Dao.

Sadly your younger brother took after your very elder sister Jiao in sheer insufferability, because it seemed that even that was not enough. Earlier this week you'd managed to free up two full weeks free of cultivation. Days you could spend more than a few hours aware of the world around you. You'd returned to your quarters for some well earned relaxation only to find two foundation establishment's having sex in the middle of your rooms.

Everything would have to be cleaned. The Heavens only know how many more had been sent to your rooms at your sibling's behest while you'd been away. There are rugs in there dating back to the Wei Dynasty! Cleaning them of any taint without destroying them entirely would be the work of weeks or months! Not to mention the cost of disinfecting the rest of your rooms and ferreting out if the sixth prince or the first princess had snuck in any nasty surprises.

Your planned two weeks of relaxing decadence were thoroughly ruined. Until you came across a man dressed as a sheep attempting to access Jiao's chambers.

Sheer absurdity had led you to question who he was, rather than call for the guard. He'd replied that he was "Lady Jiao's husband".

You wanted to claim credit for this. You really did. You wanted to know which blighted genius among your siblings (aunts, cousins, nephews, whatever) had come up with it. On the other hand, what you didn't know couldn't be used against you. Or dragged up by the old ghoul across the desert.

So instead you kicked the door open and wandered off.

Let's see her stick that in her dao of acceptance.

Her pretending not to know what you were smirking about the next time you saw her would make it all the sweeter.
 
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The Great Bath Controversy - Reactions from the Mediasphere:
now you mention it...we should probably give her a good long bath to kill the fleas and other parasites off, just to be sure
Hmmm.

The Great Bath Controversy - Reactions from the Mediasphere:

Longstanding Alliance Broken as Golden Devil's Forcibly Bathe Allied Leader!

You've heard of the War of the Beard, now we have the War of the Bath!

"I'm not even sure how she avoided water for that long" - New Flood Dragon recruits baffled by how leader of the Flood Dragons evaded water for centuries.

Elder of Day comes out in shock support for Golden Devils: "My disciples had to wear pegs on their noses." "About time someone forced some cleanliness down her throat. Working with her was Ghastly." The Strength Purity Sect has declined to comment.

Water Load of Nonsense: Flood Dragons and Golden Devils split over demands that Lady Yao take a bath.

Jinghshen Clan offer Lady Yao a free stay at their Oasis Spa Resort.

Brave Bandits and Dirty Peasants: the inside story of the Flood Dragon Gang

There's a snake in my eye! New Lady Yao action figures now available. Fires Expanding snake missiles , with Bonus "turns water black" action. Suitable for young Masters and Mistresses ages 4-9

Flood Dragons Reveal they have recruited 12 New Core Formation Elders! Details are sparse but these Elders have been described as having a great liking for Dogs!

A New Secret Beast Realm? - Details have today emerged that one of the Flood Dragon's new Elders is said to have lived for some time "on the back of an enormous dog". This matches no known area, and speculation has begun that these Elders may have emerged from some hidden secret realm. Many parties have expressed interest in this rumour.

From Righteous to Demonic? Concerns have erupted today after claims that a Flood Dragon Elder was overheard discussing "differing tastes of blood". The Elder of Day has called for an investigation into whether the Flood Dragons, long associates of the Demonic Golden Devils, have fallen into the Demonic Path. The Flood Dragons have not yet responded to request for comment.

AN: Because I saw a "What's in the Headlines piece" earlier today, then read this comment. Then I remembered @nothingtoseehere 's Bucephalus times meant that Newspapers were a thing in this universe and then this came to mind. Yes, the new Flood Dragon Core Formation Elders are Yao's Fleas that have learned to take human form.

I make no apologies for the advert for Yao's action figure.
 
SPS NEGAVERSE Turn 12 - Council Meeting
SPS NEGAVERSE Turn 12 - Council Meeting

"Report." commanded Wei Ning, thirty-second Wei Princess and undisputed strongest member of the Righteous Path in the Virtuous Flipper region.

The Elder Council of the Strength purity sect was not meeting in their usual surroundings.
Instead of the usual opulent surroundings of their fortress, instead they were meeting in seven waterfalls city, near the current battlelines. They had commandeered the palace of the city's ruler, which meant that the Elders were only forced into moderately degrading accommodations.

Elder Inexorable Fall, Elder of Logistics, was a beautiful figure, unless you looked at her eyes. Her eyes drew in all those who looked at them, sucking them into a whirlpool that spoke of the death of all things. She spoke first.

"WIth the triumph at Thousand Song, we have pushed back the Noble Devil Alliance. Reports indicate that the populations of mortals in their conquered lands are dangerously low already. With this defeat and their dwindling" her lip curled "… supply of mortals to fuel their cultivation the Noble Devil alliance are again closer to the critical state where they will entirely turn on each other to feed. We estimate that, barring unforeseen developments, within twenty years the Blood Altar disciples will turn on each other entirely.

However, it appears the leadership of the Noble Devil alliance know this as well. The Lord of the Blood Altar and Lords of the Heavenly Time shatter have resorted to desperate measures " She produced a jade slip, pouring qi into it to display the memory within to all.

An image appeared, great vines and trees flowing with poisonous qi, growing and spreading across field and forest. The sun passed behind, showing this was occurring in a span of mere hours. Where the poison passed, life died or twisted into abominable forms. The Elders shared grim looks.

"It appears that they have ceded the territory of the Flowers and Arrows sect in its entirety to the Noble Knowledge sect."

"We cannot allow the Noble Knowledge sect to expand the Poison Maze so far. Even with the Poison crushing siege at full strength, it has already proven nearly impossible to fully prevent the maze from growing. If they expand so far, preventing the complete proliferation of their poisons will be truly impossible."

"Grim news indeed. Quan Yi, what is the status of our Allies?"

Quan Yi, the broad chested Elder of Diplomacy, stood and delivered his report.
"Sadly Elder, it is poor news from the South. The Verdant South still trembles in fear of the three terrors of the Abyssal Bee Sect." He carefully avoided looking at Elder Glorious Strike. "Old Fish of the Chuan clan was injured in the fighting, and his lands ravaged. On the positive side, he has brought himself and most of the Clan's strength here to add to our efforts in the war."

"However, it seems unlikely that any further major forces from the south will come to our aid. Even if the Bees were to be somehow dealt with, I believe that none of the other powers will move whilst the Saber Palace's Elder of Day is in residence."

The room chilled at the mention of the Elder of Day. His poorly concealed attempt to wipe out the Flood Dragon Gang had instead driven one of the few Nascent souls they had been able to recruit all the more firmly into the hands of the Golden Devils. Worse, with his own flight, they had gone from having enough nascent souls to slightly outnumber the Noble Devil Alliance (at 12:11) to spending decades being outnumbered. A poor position, especially since with Heavenly Time Shatter and the Noble Knowledge Sect allied, fully six of the eleven opposing Nascent souls specialised in fields known for Esoteric or Realm jumping effects.

That he had barely enough of a fig leaf to hide his attempt behind, and that Wei Ning was needed in the North, were all that was saving him from a very unpleasant lesson. Nethertheless, if the war was won the Saber Palace's 'contributions to the defence of the Righteous Path' would probably be seeing a sharp increase.

"To the East, the Blacksmiths continue to support us with weapons and battle artefacts. Further east of course, is the Desert. The Jingshen have offered us a discount on Spirit Stone prices, though their increased feuding with the Golden Devils has resulted in them having to reduce other contributions."

"As to the Golden Devils, they have moved from strength to strength. With the benefit of time, our spies have confirmed that they have weathered their centennial storm in far better shape, proportionally speaking, than any of our previous records show. Of course, they are still a shadow of the terrifying monster they once were, but their resurgent strength is of some small concern."

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"Elders, I recognise that the bulk of our attention must go to containing the threat of the Noble Demon Alliance. Yet, a garden untended today might grow terrible weeds on the morrow. The current situation in the desert benefits us, we should take steps to ensure that the Jingshen and the Devils continue their current state of unwinnable contention. - Effects will be rolled.


Archivist Sima Qian wants to [] Create the Grand Archive. [2 purchases]
"Elders, I recognise that the situation is fraught and that funds are somewhat tight. However, we have lost much in this war, and the enemy has revealed many new capabilities. Creating the Grand Archive will not only ensure that we do not forget our allies, but that we can interview all our disparate fighters and record the enemies techniques for analysis while memories are still fresh, the tales are not too embellished, and the fighters have not returned to their various sects or clans." - Will give moderate bonuses to actions opposing the Noble Devil alliance members in future.

Elder Yao Zhengsheng wants to
[] Press the South for Material support [1 Purchase]
Elders, the South is beset with its own problems, and say the cannot spare their cultivators. Surely then, they should instead contribute in other ways. [Generates 2 purchases next turn, may cause resentment with poor rolls]

Marinated in Brine said:
Temporalobe said:
[] Deploy the Desert Rats [Minor Purchase]

Ah yes because the last time we got directly involved here ended so well for us. Why I believe it got us…. checks…. A resurgent Devil Bee sect that's busy eating the South!
Clearly we need to do this again. I can't wait to see what it spits out next!

The Eyes have it said:
Temporalobe said:
The Verdant South still trembles in fear of the three terrors of the Abyssal Bee Sect." He carefully avoided looking at Elder Glorious Strike.
Elder Glorious Strike is still in the doghouse, huh?

Anarchist Lorekeeper said:
Elder Glorious Strike is greatly favoured by heaven, in that this has been an unparalleled opportunity for her to meditate on her Dao of Bitterness.

Which is to say, yes, her fellow Elders are still very annoyed that her plan to constrain the Golden Devils by keeping one of their Principal enemies alive has instead caused a Second Tier superpower to form and start messing up the South when we most need them.
Themotivatedmask said:
Anarchist Lorekeeper said:
Which is to say, yes, her fellow Elders are still very annoyed that her plan to constrain the Golden Devils by keeping one of their Principal enemies alive has instead caused a Second Tier superpower to form and start messing up the South when we most need them.
That's not really her fault. We voted for it after all.
Thus_falls_the_Sword_of_Fate said:
Themotivatedmask said:
That's not really her fault. We voted for it after all.
In Grand Xianxia tradition, it doesn't matter who agreed, it matters who you can blame.

I_WANNA_BE_THE_SEED said:
Why do the Golden devils get so much narrative focus?

The Eyes have it said:
I_WANNA_BE_THE_SEED said:
Why do the Golden devils get so much narrative focus?
Because they used to be a superpower before Heaven cast them down. People worry about a resurgence. Which is a bit silly since they've only got on mid-level mid-nascent to their name, but kicking them around gets brownie points from the rest of the Righteous path.

Let me dig out Lorekeeper's world history post and Temporal's clarification of the Golden Devil political situation

Anarchist Lorekeeper said:
A brief history of "the world":
You live on the corpse of an enormous*, immature turtle, surrounded by a 'sea'. You know there are other, still living immature turtles out there with their own civilisations living on them. For some reason these are called 'seas'. You are part of the 'Third Sea', which encompasses the (dead) turtle and a substantial portion of the waters around it.

The death of your turtle is the reason that rising to spirit severing is borderline impossible. Much of the qi in the atmosphere came from the turtle child, and the food brought to it by it's parent.

Long ago, far before the death of the turtle, your worlds (Turtle's backs) were invaded by people who were not born on the back of turtles of any description.** They were known as the Sea Conquering Army.

After a battle lasting uncounted millenia, the army was gradually driven back. During these wars the Heavens cursed the Army and their descendants mightily. The Golden Devils are the last descendants of that long ago people, still suffering under the yoke of Heaven's curse. Despite, or perhaps because of their constant persecution, they cling to their ideals*** like a drowning man to a float. Which is not to say they do not also cling to survival. They are not a Demonic Sect for nothing, and for all they eschew the blood or ghost path, they do not hesitate to extract anything they can from the corpses of their enemies.

Some more uncounted Millenia later, sometime after the Sea Conquering Army had been driven back, a man emerged on your world. He is now known as Demonic Soup Chef, inventor of the blood path. He was a master of consuming energy fields bigger than his head, rising to a level never seen since. In his final known act, he killed the Turtle you stand upon, extracting its organs and using the surrounding sea to make soup of them. He then vanished, apparently to challenge the great Parent Turtle.

To give you a clue about his power level, the Demonic Altar itself was something that appeared after he spent a night in that spot thinking. Not even something he intended to create, just appeared from him spending less than 12 hours thinking.

Then some asshole Wei Prince found it and ate almost all his siblings in an attempt to become a god. The first Wei Princess escaped him and founded the Strength Purity sect to oppose him, before eventually dying fighting him.


*The size of quite a few planets strung together.
**You think. Certainly not any related to the one you live on at any rate.
***Frankly, they care far more about not inflicting unnecessary suffering on people, and specifically mortals than you… and you're by far the best among the 'Righteous'.

Temporalobe said:
In regards to the politics surrounding the Golden Devils:

The Golden Devils match a lot of your ideals. They also provide a useful buffer in the desert, with the jockeying of the desert powers ensuring that the spirit stones flow forth at low prices, each side wanting support and coin to fill their war-chests.

Finally, they are array and battle formation masters, terrifying on the defence. Such expertise is valuable.

That said, they are still demonic, and you are righteous. They defile corpses (to your view), the Heavens that you follow would prefer they die. You are the leaders of the Righteous Path, and many of your nominal 'followers' naturally despise them. Finally, you helped lead the last coalition that pushed them out into the desert, which failed to wipe them out only through the sacrifice of their leader, the last Spirit Severing cultivator in the Third Sea. This attack took advantage of a then weakness from their intercession against a particularly vile blood sect attack.


AN: 2.2k words. Mostly written before Muyi's fate came out. I haven't put info on Kleisthenes or Manuel's new spear in there because they don't know about them yet. SPS does have spies here, but that's been played close to the chest.

EDIT: Literally outdated before I posted it huh. 🤣
 
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SPS Negaverse reacts - The Divine Blood Saber
AN: 812 Words.

SPS Negaverse reacts - The Divine Blood Saber:

Temporalobe said:

Enkidu said:
.... .... ....

So is there anything we can do to Glorious Strike apart from assign her as Ning's permanent sparring partner?

Because it isn't enough punishment for her fuckups. If we didn't need every single nascent....
MaximumParanoia said:
I. F-ING. TOLD. YOU. SO.
Temporalobe said:
Reactions from the official obervers seat of the Righteous Path (held by the Golden Devils):
The Golden Devil ambassador appears to be caught in a state triumphant laughter, screams of I told you so, and just plain screaming.
Heffalumps_and_Woozles said:
This is the news at 11.

Divine Saber palace continue to ruin everything! More news at 12.
Thus_falls_the_Sword_of_Fate said:
Heffalumps_and_Woozles said:
Divine Saber palace continue to ruin everything! More news at 12.
Bastards cost us 2 Nascents and gave our enemies another Late Nascent. They couldn't even have the grace to die usefully.
Marinated in Brine said:
Sooooooo.... any chance we can crash build another Late Nascent?
Temporalobe said:
Marinated in Brine said:
Sooooooo.... any chance we can crash build another Late Nascent?
Depends. Do you think you can persuade Konstantinos to embrace the blood path? Because short of that? No.

Enkidu said:
Temporalobe said:
Do you think you can persuade Konstantinos to embrace the blood path? Because short of that? No.
Ok, guys I know this sounds bad but hear me out. How attached is the thread to Elder Glorious Strike?

Anarchist Lorekeeper said:
Not at all. Sadly, even if we could persuade the rest of the Righteous Path to accept it (or do it on the quiet) it wouldn't work. To quote myself:
Anarchist Lorekeeper said:
Despite, or perhaps because of their constant persecution, they cling to their ideals*** like a drowning man to a float.

Marinated in Brine said:
"The problem with being invincible and unchallenged most of the time is that it is so difficult to change your frame of mind. Especially for Nascent Souls of the Righteous Path - they've won their battles for so long that they didn't really consider if loss was an option. Consequentially they squabbled with one another, forcing losses on their rivals to jockey for position in their long-anticipated victory. They couldn't possibly lose, so why not force your rivals into weakness in a way you could not in peacetime?"
I hate this even more because of how right he is.

OMAKES_FOR_THE_THRONE said:
So, how screwed are we?

HATS_OFF said:
We're the guy occupying the body who's cultivation get's crippled and soul evaporates so the MC can insert into him and grab a cheat code. Not the MC, the evaporating soul.

The Eyes Have It said:
Elder Glorious Strike is greatly favoured by heaven, in that this has been an unparalleled opportunity for her to meditate on her Dao of Bitterness.
So I know this was a joke post originally, but is there any chance the massive bitterness people are feeling toward Glorious Strike has led to a breakthrough in her understanding of her Dao?


Temporalobe said:
Glorious Strike has made great strides in her understanding of bitterness but remains an Early Nascent.

Also before you start making new plans, you'll probably want to read this:

March of the Scorpion Cavalry

....

You may expect the Spirit Stone Trade to be somewhat disrupted if this isn't resolved quickly.

Enkidu said:
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUU

It never rains but it pours.
Why now?!

I know its because they know we'd step in and prevent this otherwise but FFS is this nothing but an endless pile of shit.

Temporalobe said:
While they may like you the best out of the RP your allies may not be entirely convinced you won't screw them over since you totally did the last two times they took a stand against the blood path. So they decided to take their chance to make it so you couldn't pop them by tossing one or two nascents over there. Who could have predicted this?

On the plus side, if it goes well for them, you could realllllly use the substantial bribe money they're probably going to pay you to ignore this.

I_WANNA_BE_THE_SEED said:
Anarchist Lorekeeper said:
See A) Before Quest start the GD stomped the Predecessor of the Devil Bees only to get most of the Entire RP complement of Nascents coming to genocide them while they were exhausted; and B) Glorious Strike's Genius Move TM to leave Old Cannibal alive to fuck over the Devils in another couple of centuries. Course the binding agreement he's in means that he's got roughly another century and a half to Great Power it up in the South before he can even think of setting foot back in the desert.

Enkidu said:
Quest is false advertising. Can't be Xianxia. We're the protagonists, and being massive dicks in Xianxia only ever comes back to bite NPCs, not protags./s
 
Sect Wars - The Golden Desert Expansion Forum Topic
1112 words.

AN: So this was inspired by the comments on Wei Feng's new ability making him a video game boss. A forum thread on "Sect Wars". A video game version of this world. I thought of it an rpg that gets more strategic elements and a sort of empire builder phase (including large follower counts, troops and warfare aspects) as players advance up to the core and nascent soul stages.

Apologies to the many, many worthy good seed who I haven't mentioned here. I was having trouble coming up with many interesting mechanics.


Sect Wars - The Golden Desert Expansion Forum Topic

To_reign_over_Heaven said:
Hey,

I'm playing Sect Wars, and I've just got to the part of the great blood war where the Golden Desert expansion opens up and wtf?

Better_to_Rule_in_Hell said:
You tried the Karma hunt mechanic didn't you? Hah.

The Lite Brigade said:
Another one bites the dust.

SectMaster_101 said:
Yeahhhhhhhhh. If you're in the great blood war and can actually go there you're probably in the FE regions right? Levels 10-18? Don't go into the Golden Desert for a while unless you're fond of minmaxing or are really into the lore.

To_reign_over_Heaven said:
What do you mean in the FE regions? Did someone find an infinite XP glitch? And why is the Golden Desert not worth it?

SectMaster_101 said:
Oh, sorry. Very mild spoilers below:

Once you beat the first campaign you unlock the ability to start at different times. Gives you the chance to make a difference in various conflicts you were too small (or too big) to deal with. There's some good branching story there.

To_reign_over_Heaven said:
And why is the Golden Desert not worth it?

Right now. It's not worth it right now. Ok the thing about the desert is that it's xp is pretty terrible compared to the blood war. Lorewise (backed by gameplay) there are a tonne of Spirit Stones there, but the area's free qi is basically gone. So while you're there you have to use your money to recharge as well as advance yourself.

Obvious answer is to get a bunch of stones and get out, but the Golden Devil territories are run pretty tightly. So, quests with good rewards are fairly sparse, especially compared to the Blood War. Especially since the Blood war will be progressing while you're futzing around this corner of the world.

The exception to this is Karma hunting. Long story short, umpteen millenia ago the Golden Devil's ancestors fought against heaven. They lost, and Heaven hates them for it. Meaning that you kill Golden devils, your chances of good loot drops and random events goes up. They're also mostly pretty weak individually, especially if you've done some grinding in the blood war.

So, sounds pretty good right? Go there, kill a bunch of enemies for really good loot and money and run back home. Easy. Yeah no. Golden Devil Rank and file are pretty crap sure, but what they do have? Superbosses.*

You start Karma hunting, and the game starts rolling dice. If it rolls a certain amount, then a more powerful than usual enemy will appear. These can range from, meh – slightly stronger, to oops that's a superboss. The more you kill, the more likely you are for the game to roll a superboss. Who you get is essentially random, though I think some people have a theory it's zone or plot-based.



*And Legions but you don't need to care about Legions unless you're leading a very big group.

To_reign_over_Heaven said:
So, come back later?

SectMaster_101 said:
Basically yeah. There is a bunch of great lore to be found there. The Golden Devil ancestors were wild, and there are some amazing ruins, but they're mostly locked up really tight or really hard to find. If you do get super lucky though you can sell the location to them for a tonne of Spirit stones. Enough to level up a bunch and get good gear once you're back to in the East. There's a bunch of foreshadowing for further plot developments you can run into too.



Oh, there are one or two events where you can actually fight alongside some of the Golden Devil superbosses at various campaign stages as well. Including a few in the great battlefield.

Child of the 5th Sea said:
I think someone did a compilation of some of the more well know bosses. Let's see if I can find it.

Edit Here it is:
Bossin Around said:
Rina Callista – This one is fun, but weird. If you aren't Core (and without exploits you probably aren't) this is basically a chase sequence. You have to kill or flee/avoid enough opposing forces to get out of the zone before the timer hits zero. If you fail she appears and wipes your party. The other spice is that she ignores terrain on the world map. So, you need to make sure your route is good.

Minervina Barda – Hope you've got some good healers or an absolute bunch of antidotes and healing items. Minervina is a poison type, with a really high evade. She also has a few incurable poisons, so you really need actual healing.

Magnus Centenius – Another poison focus. Less evasion but a more direct damage to supplement the damage over time effects.

Aretaphilia Myia – Unless you've got a huge bunch of followers you won't be dealing with her. If you are, she's a very strong minion buffer with a stun/kill combo on units that don't meet a certain stat/level threshold. Technically her personal stats aren't as terrifying as some of the others. Theoretically vulnerable to a rushdown strat but that'd be really hard to pull off. If she ever hits low health her some of her minions tend to switch to bodyguarding.

Wei Feng – Ever play tales of Bersaria? Right this guy doesn't look intimidating. If you use an identify function to look at his stats he's actually only a little stronger than most strong FE cultivators. Depending on where you are in FE he might not even count as a boss for a full party. Don't be fooled, he's a bastard. This guy's gimmick is revival. Kill him for the first time and he'll unleash a massive AoE damage attack and get back up. Then he'll keep getting back up. Best bet is if you've got some enemy removal effects you can get rid of him, though he doesn't drop any loot that way.

Ninth Prince – A summoner, though oddly enough, not also a buffer. Fights side by side with his snake summons. Also considered wacky but fun for his final phase, in which he summons his giant mecha: the Venomsteel Battlegod.
 
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Gaius Antonius & Wei Feng Collab Link- The Day of Reckoning
And as ever here's the link to the collab.

Thanks a lot @no. It was a lot of fun to write.

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Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest] Original - Fantasy

Gaius Antonius & Wei Feng - The Day of Reckoning One steady step at a time, a pair of steel-toed leather boots trudged through the sand. Under the bright sun, this man’s dark clothes stood in stark contrast to the almost pure white grains around him. “So this is where he went…” Gaius marveled...
 
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