Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Lihua Kokkinos
Bonus: LST
Fate: Lihua led her squad, chasing a criminal who had stolen several Gravebronze suits of armour beneath Haoshen Fort. She descended far below any others, and without her knowing managed to reach below the All-Blinding Array. Here, she slew a single Thoughtful Owl that sought to kill her squad, a creature that she did not know was crucial in preventing any issues with the array above. In its nest she found a Fascimile Lightkey (+6 Impact), a copy made of one of the keys that could allow one to wield a Heavenly Star. While it did not truly tap into the Heavenly Daos, it allowed one to command and use Light Qi around yourself, focusing it into powerful beams and illusions for as long as there was light from the sun to use.
Impact: 12 (+6)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment 4-Pillar
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 187 (+24)
Health: Healthy --> Healthy

Magnus Centenius
Bonus: Healing from Crippling
Fate: While the All-Blinding Array triggered, Magnus was outside the city, chasing a fleeing Jingshen Core Formation Elder. Previously poisoned and badly wounded, the man was trying to flee with some sort of peculiar artifact, almost twice his own size. Not knowing what it was, Magnus chased him, repeatedly poisoning him and slowing him down before knocking the artifact loose. It seemed to be pointed directly into the sky, and it began to glow. Unsure of what he was doing, Magnus rapidly turned dials and smashed panels, until it stopped moving. Later on it would turn out he had disabled the initial targeting of the Array, saving nearly five thousand lives.
Impact: 13 (+0)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment 7 Pillar (Great Circle)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 350 (+39)
Health: Healthy --> Healthy

This honestly sounds so loony toons. Yet to Old Cannibal it must be yet another masterful plan by Old Gold.... I hope that Old Cannibal's paranoia of Manuel will now spread to the Jingshen.

Everything has been foreseen.. DUN DUN DUN
 
This is the second time that a major plot point has sort of... swept by just offscreen of occipital's threadmarks. Is there any kind of list that arranges necessary-to-understand-what's-going-on sidestory updates in sequence with the OP updates?
 
This honestly sounds so loony toons. Yet to Old Cannibal it must be yet another masterful plan by Old Gold.... I hope that Old Cannibal's paranoia of Manuel will now spread to the Jingshen.

Everything has been foreseen.. DUN DUN DUN
I'm just waiting for Old Cannibal to see the results of this, and how his actions allowed us to make this happen. And how terrified he'd be of Manuel afterwords that predicted even all of this. Especially if we end up getting something that bumps Manuel up a stage out of all the treasures the Jingshen have. Causing him to run away to another Sea to grow stronger there in hopes of overcoming Manuel's predictions because surely he can't see ahead that far away. Then we finally meet him again, and we've got the 3rd Sea conquered and multiple severing soul great seed cultivators and the like and we just come in and steal his empire out from under him with a "Thanks Old Cannibal, you've been a mighty help to us, keeping this Sea busy while we prepared."
 
I'm just waiting for Old Cannibal to see the results of this, and how his actions allowed us to make this happen. And how terrified he'd be of Manuel afterwords that predicted even all of this. Especially if we end up getting something that bumps Manuel up a stage out of all the treasures the Jingshen have. Causing him to run away to another Sea to grow stronger there in hopes of overcoming Manuel's predictions because surely he can't see ahead that far away. Then we finally meet him again, and we've got the 3rd Sea conquered and multiple severing soul great seed cultivators and the like and we just come in and steal his empire out from under him with a "Thanks Old Cannibal, you've been a mighty help to us, keeping this Sea busy while we prepared."
I think that blood path has no success on the other seas where heavens curses are stronger. Then again I suppose he could just flee the virtuous flipper region. He might have more success on other parts of our dead turtle.
 
To my understanding, the bottleneck is that Blood Path cultivators have almost zero chance of surviving their Tribulations in other Seas; the Celestial Machine will also warp causality to fuck them over, but the biggest and most pressing issue is the inability of Blood Path Sects to actually grow their ranks or replace members who die.
 
Qinglong Shu 1 - New Life, New Lessons

Qinglong Shu 1 and Others - New Life, New Lessons


That day was a day worthy of celebrations. She remembered it clearly. One of her cousins celebrated their fiftieth birthday, a milestone for their alliance. Drinks were raised and laughs were shared as the four clans had gathered for this specific event, as Li planned to go out in the world, just like many other Cultivators of his level and age. Of course, for young Shu it went over her head. She was just glad to play underneath the massive tree, her favorite due to the many colors the leaves had and the many branches she could climb on, inside the Four Beast Alliance garden, giggling as a young woman caught her and began to tickle her.

"Seriously, Xiu, if you keep this up, she's gonna be tuckered out before the night even began!"

The heir of the Baihu chuckled as she ruffled Shu's hair and tilted her head ever so slightly, causing her long white strands to shift against her robes.

"Are you jealous little Shu likes me more, Brother Fei?"

The red haired young man scoffed playfully, waving his hand dismissively.

"Please, we all know I'm her favorite!" The heir of the Zhuque announced proudly and pinched Shu's cheeks. In delight the young girl was being used for a tug of war, only for the young adults to yelp in pain when their heads were whacked with an unfolded fan. Everyone turned to the elderly woman, wrinkles in her face and greyed hair as she sighed in exasperation.

"Honestly, this happens every time we gather like this. You'd think you would grow up eventually."

"Come now, grandmother, one is only at that age once."

The head of the Xuanwu clan gave the black haired youth a flat look before pointing her fan at him too.

"It's Elder Yan to you! And the same goes to you too, Yi!"

Shu giggled at their antics. They always acted like they were fighting but she knew they all loved each other! Big Sis Xiu with her usual stoic face melting when coddling her, Big Bro Fei doing funny faces and telling cool stories from his travels and then there was Big Bro Yi who always taught her the difficult stuff in a cool way! Then there was granny, who acted rough but always sneaked candy to her! Her joy was infectious as any frustration at the elderly woman disappeared as she adjusted the young girl's clothes. Once cleaned up, Shu took up a stance and puffed out her chest with pride.

"Fight!"

The adults laughed at her, causing her to pout. She would show them, she got much better than last time! This time she would land a good blow and make them all gape in awe! She crossed her arms when Brother Fei ruffled her hair again.

"Not now, your cousin is the star of the show. Tomorrow when you eat your veggies."

She made a face, making the crowd laugh even louder. Veggies wouldn't make her stronger, she ate them all the time since its her favorite anyway! Fortunately her antics got her some free sweets so she decided to be patient. Nibbling on her treats, she saw some of the guards shift in the background, causing her to tilt her head. Did something happen outside? Following her gaze, granny narrowed her eyes before she shot up, body stiff like a rock. The people around her, namely the heirs, noticed her reaction with worry.

"Elder?"

Yan didn't respond at first. Then she turned to Xiu and the others and nodded stiffly as she kept a tight grip on her fan.

"...Something is wrong."

Almost immediately the heirs sans Shu reached for their weapons. The Tiger's Teeth Blade in Xiu's hand, the Vermillion Arrow of Fei and the Obsidian Glaive of Yi. Shu tilted her head, no idea what was going on when her ears twitched.

"What's that weird noise, big sis?"

It sounded like distant yells. But why would there be yelling? Then there was this weird squelching noise coupled with…

"Isn't that…?!"

"Metal…?"

As shock took over the juniors, the Elder immediately took command. She sent a nod at the other adults, long sobered up as they took up their weapons.

"Xiu, take Shu. Let's go."

Shu whimpered. She didn't like this. This atmosphere was weird. Everyone should be happy but they weren't!

"But I'm not tire-"

Before she could finish the sentence, she brightened up when she saw her parents arrive. But her smile faltered when she saw how tense they seemed, how fake their smiles seemed. Her mother, more beautiful than anyone with her long shiny hair, gave her a light kiss on the cheek before hugging her, her voice soft.

"Be a good girl for now, okay?"

Shu sniffed. She didn't want to go. But... but she was a good girl. So she would listen.

"Okay, momma."

Her father, with the funny mustache he always wore, pressed his forehead against his wive's, his grp tightening on his own sword.

"I'll get them out of here, my love."

"Be swift."

Then they ran, faster than Shu ever experienced. She clung to her Big sis tightly, eyes clenched shut. This was scary, too scary. She wanted to ask what was going on, but then she flinched when the screams sounded. So loud, so filled with anger, hatred. She didn't want to listen but the words forced their way into her mind.

"Die, you accursed traitors!"

"You filthy demons, how dare you?!"

"The Seven Divine Saber Palace demands retribution!"

She didn't need to see to know that the last sentence shocked everyone. Fei growled as they came to a stop before pressing a certain tile on the floor, causing the ground to open up.

"Why are they attacking us?!"

"Wonder later!" Granny barked before taking the lead as she descended. The rest followed... but not everyone. Shu was the only one to notice, as she looked over Xiu's shoulder

"D-daddy? Big bro Yi?"

Immediately the small group turned around to see the two men standing their ground instead of following them.

"Someone has to hold them off. You all know that," her father said in a somber tone. Immediately Shu struggled, trying to pry herself off Xiu, but the young woman, despite her own shock, kept a tight hold on her.

"No, I don't wanna leave you! L-Let me go!"

Gently, he walked up to her and kissed her forehead, warmth radiating from his eyes.

"You are this generation's jewels. Live well, my daughter. Know that you will always be my pride and joy."

Tears ran down her face and Shu shook her head furiously. At the same time, Yi raised his hand when the Elder was about to join their ranks.

"Grandmother, you go with them."

Naturally, it enraged the old woman, veins popping up as she snarled.

"I'm an old timer! You fool, you-"

"Stay here or else it'll be too obvious who escaped." He laughed lightly and gestured at his fellow heirs. "Besides, these youngsters need some old timer to reign them in."

"Damn it... ! Damn it all!!!" With fist tightened so hard that blood was drawn, Fei led the charge, swiftly followed by Xiu, even as Shu screamed for her father, her mother, everyone that was left behind. The Elder exhaled before snapping her fan open and pointed at them.

"You better kick their unruly butts!"

Thus, the four escaped, one of many with the various escape routes available in this estate. Yi exhaled before moving forward with his glaive, alongside the father who was content with the knowledge his daughter would escape.

"...It has been an honor, senior brother."

"Hmph. Say that after we make them regret ever attacking us."

"Hear, hear."

Thus, they joined the bloodshed, facing the wrath of the Righteous despite being Righteous themselves.


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There were several meeting points in case of such a disaster, given the many underground tunnels they had. With the Elder having caught up, she led them to the furthest point possible, something that the other heirs objected to as Shu cried her throat hoarse. Yet the old woman didn't answer, instead following her instincts as a long living weakling compared to the rest of the realm. Coming to a stop, she exhaled before pushing a boulder away. They were in reach of the mountain range, emerging from a hill. Shu felt some relief, seeing a few cultivators and servants already there, waiting for them. She sniffed, wiping her red eyes. But just as she tried to put on a smile to make her family worry less...

"Well, well, well, guess the information was correct after all."

Everyone's heads snapped up, to the top of the hill. As young as Shu was, even she realized who those people were.

Demonic Sect. Leering down at them, radiating bloodlust that made the young girl curl up in on herself. With their weapons drawn, looking for easy prey, Fei immediately drew his bow and shot an arrow. The leader scoffed only to be surprised by the arrow exploding into smoke. Coughing sounded in the area as the survivors immediately ran as fast as they could, cultivators picking up the mortal servants.

"How did they-?!"

Before Xiu could finish her question, it was silenced by a sudden water blast shooting out of the Elder's fan, causing the Demons to curse their names as they got held off by the fluids.

"Questions later, keep running!" She met Shu's gaze and nodded with a wry smile. "Don't watch and cover your ears, it'll be over before you know it!"

Shu nodded, shaking violently. But she couldn't help it. One last look, past the hill. One last look before she clenched her eyes shut. She wished she didn't do so at the time. But it was a mistake that would never be forgotten.

The last thing she saw was the beloved grounds of the Four Beast Alliance burning beneath the starless night sky, as Righteous and Righteous fought against each other, while Demons approached them from the shadows.

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Twenty. A mere twenty managed to escape, a number that included the mortal retainers they had in the estate to serve them drinks. They could barely qualify as a caravan guard with their level and numbers of cultivators, the strongest of them being an old woman that was reaching the limits of her age and talent. It was a wonder so many survived, as they utilized every single trick up their sleeves and beyond to keep on running. One would say they were skilled enough at escape but most of them knew the only reason they survived was because the riches and secrets in the estate caught the enemy's fancy more than some lousy remnants.

Catching their breath near one of the many pathways that connected to the mountains that separated the Verdant South and the desert of demons, they were still in shock, despite the days that have passed. Fei snarled, his bow long broken, as he punched the wall next to him, cracking it with ease.

"Why did all of this happen…?!"

The Elder put her pipe to her mouth only to frown as it had nothing to burn. Pocketing it, she had a calculating look as she took a deep breath.

"Some sort of Demon Altar subordinate tricked us and the Divine Seven Saber. I don't know how, but they did. Throw us as bait and then swoop in when everyone got distracted in the area."

Xiu gently patted Shu's head on her lap, her eyes just as red as the young girl's. Looking up, she frowned deeply at the idea.

"How are you so sure?"

"I lived very long. You recognize things." The Elder grit her teeth in frustration. "Question is, how were we framed? In what way?"

Who betrayed us, was the question unasked.

No answers came. Shu hiccuped and hugged herself. She didn't understand this. Who would be so cruel to force friends to kill each other? Who would be so evil to take advantage of such a thing?

"...What now?" One of the servants muttered. Everyone turned to the Elder, who bit her lip. The fate of the last remnants of an alliance rested on her shoulder. Salvation needed to be found.

"I'd like to say go to our benefactors and explain ourselves... but they won't believe us. We have no evidence. Whatever provoked them must have been damning enough."

She licked her lips as she spoke out her thoughts, trying to come up with an idea.

"The Righteous believe our clan to be with the Demonic sects. Most Demonic sects would devour us." She lowered her head. "By all means... we are out of options. The Heavens have abandoned us."

"No way... "

Shu tried to hold back her tears but they flowed anyway. Xiu tried to hush her, trying to keep her calm, but it failed due to her own glistening eyes. Then the Elder raised her head, looking at the mountain range before exhaling slowly.

"....The Golden Devil Clan."

Eyes went wide. And naturally, objections were sounded.

"What?! Are you serious?! You just said-"

"Most. I said most." The Elder rubbed her temples. "Believe me, for all their bad reputation, they are the only ones we could trust right now." She clicked her tongue in irritation before standing up from the rock she was sitting on. "If the enemy of an enemy is our ally... they are the most suited."

Shu didn't like the sound of that. She heard the stories. Of demons so alien they put other demons in shame. The thought... scared her. And yet, even a young mind as hers recognized they needed to find some place of safety. Someone to trust.

"But would they accept us?" Someone muttered. The Elder laughed dryly, shaking her head.

"We will try or die trying." She turned to the young girl before smiling gently at her. "It's going to be alright, Shu. You'll be alright."

"Y-You mean we, right?"

Nobody corrected her. They all had that same weird smile after a moment of confusion. Shu decided to let it rest, as their tortuous journey only began. Not due to any more losses but due to the sheer anxiety of gaining any losses. They moved so slow. So carefully. Jumped at every shadow, took every precaution they could feasibly take. Even weak beasts would only be taken on with every single warrior. Then there was the desert.

The heat. The sand. Shu was both glad and shamed that she had to be carried. It was agonizing, as their throats went dry, their skin blisters. But eventually... they reached it. The grand gates of their salvation. The guards quickly confronted them and Shu shivered. They looked...unnatural. Something in her screamed that those people were wrong in some way. But she tried to bite her instincts down. It was rude, she didn't even know them.

Then it happened. All the money they had. The weapons that weren't broken. And then... all of them, except Shu, went down on their knees and offered their own lives.

"This is all we have." The Elder, never meant to show weakness, pleaded with all her heart. "Please. I beg of you... !"

"Accept this child into your ranks! Raise her and train her as if she was one of your own!"

A shock went down Shu's spine. She ignored the looks she received from the Golden Devil guards. All she felt was betrayal. Was she being handed over like this? No, not handed over. She remembered the words of her father.

A jewel. Or rather one last hope. It was then, her heart realized it.

The Elder. Big bro and sis. The servants. They all gave up in order for her to thrive. Their hopes and dreams and even freedom. Never before had the young girl felt so offended in her life. The guards already began to inform their superiors, discussing it amongst themselves. Meanwhile, the Elder, or rather former Elder, seemed to recognize the expression Shu held.

"The Four Beast Alliance is gone." She started gently, putting a hand on her shoulder. "There is no need for you to fall into the shadows of history with us. You are so much worth than t-"

Something in Shu snapped. She slapped the arm away, an action only possible due to the suddenness of it.

"No."

"Shu-"

"No! I won't leave you behind!" Shu screamed. Tears welled up as she stomped the ground. "I'm not that important! You take everything back! Just ask for a home!

"Shu, you are still young. You have your whole life ahead of you," Xiu tried to explain, but Shu wouldn't have it.

"And you don't?!"

Suddenly, Fei grabbed her shoulders, frustration escaping him in form of a growl.

"Listen! I know this is difficult to understand! But our failure to protect our legacy shouldn't mean you get to lose everything too! You are our genius! You deserve a chance to use it, instead of it being smothered!"

"Please... Let something from the Four Beast Alliance flourish."

The Elder sounded so weak. So old. Shu looked around. Both mortals and cultivators nodded, in complete agreement. Shu didn't get it. How was she worthy of such sacrifice? Why did they believe her to be such an unparalleled genius? She didn't understand... but she did get that they really wanted this. And she didn't want them to be sad.

"Fine…I'll join if they let me…" Her head snapped up before they could be fully relieved however. "But I won't just forget you! No matter what! I'll drag you up myself if I have to!"

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Blinking with a loud yawn, the young woman cracked her neck before smaking her lips a few times, scratching her messy hair.

"Sheesh, been a while since I had that dream... " Clapping her cheeks, she groaned a bit before putting on a small smile. "Up and about, Shu."

She washed her face and cleaned herself up before putting on her ropes. Staring at the mirror, she smiled slightly.

Six years. Six years of an entirely new life. Now she was stronger, older, wiser. Well, at least a little bit. She did her stretches, slowly going through the forms of the Golden Devil Clan, which at this point were instinct, thanks to the drills in her first years. She frowned a bit, getting lost in memories. To say it took some time to get used to was....an understatement. This wasn't merely the difference between seperate clans, or Righteous and Demonic. It felt like being in an entirely different world.

First there was the general clan system. Of assigned group training, of contribution points. All those regulations and rules and traditions she didn't have to deal with in her early life. Back then it was simply family sharing with family whenever they could. However, at least in that regard, she wasn't too ignorant. She quickly adapted to the concept of all that.

What threw her off the loop were the specific... quirks of said systems due to the Golden Devil Clan itself as a foreign existence.

The mandatory training with spear and shield, two things she never really could jive with. The Blood of Bronze, a weird Qi Element everyone was meant to possess in order to maximize the usage of those formations of theirs. Then there were the little things. Some people having those weird names like Manuel or Grecos. The skin color and some terms that just didn't feel right. Then there was the fact they were Demonic by nature and used techniques she still felt squeamish about. She shuddered at the thought of the many poisons around her, of the Demonic Tunes that could play with her mind. It certainly didn't help she didn't feel like she belonged. She noticed the stares back. The feeling of alienation was….mutual. At least in her head. She walked outside, in the sun, and noticed some people whisper. Maybe it wasn't even about her. But she thought it did. She certainly would have done it in their position. Some outsider who wasn't born in their ways, acting like she belonged all high and mighty.

She slapped her cheeks. Damn it, what she thought was borderline traitorous! So what if they had some weird quirks that went against everything she learned in her childhood? She spent enough years here, she needed to get her big girl pants on! With a grin, she stretched her arms. So what if she was the outsider, she just had to grit her teeth and push through! She didn't do all this work for contribution points to not use them properly!

Time to bug some fellow demonic cultivators for their knowledge! The Golden Devil training was helpful and all but she needed some refinement for her roots after all! Not to mention it had been a while since she last got to throw some proper hands instead of doing the Clan's training!
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Fire Lesson - Amaranth Castellanos


Some might wonder why she went for the element that literally burned hers in a sense. Well, one needed to face tribulations if they wanted to advance, so why not? Of course when she heard who actually volunteered, her enthusiasm took a small blow. Just a little bit. Not that she had any doubts about qualifications, no way.

Someone reaching the fabled thirteenth stage and then going even beyond it, something that was almost unheard of, would be a great source of knowledge. Not many tried to go for the Single Pillar approach, from what little she understood. One could only imagine what powers he had. Sure, she heard of them, but to feel his presence like this was... eye opening. It was worthy of her complete respect. That wasn't even counting that he was one of the Indomitable Thirteen! How lucky was that, to get pointers from him?! Really, she should consider herself lucky someone like the great Amaranth decided to offer her points for the element of fire. However... then there were the other things...

How he was more or less a Blood Cannibal practitioner. Or at least close enough without being struck down by the rest of the clan. The idea of consuming blood was heretical to her to say the least. And yet... he had strength. Experience. Knowledge. Also some really rad fire limbs, that just screamed 'I have mastered Fire Qi, kneel before me' sooooo in the end... she decided to eat up her doubts, her worries and instead decided to use this for all its worth and embrace the chance and the excitement! Which led her to the now. She gulped, trying to remain calm as she knelt in front of him, feeling his power without him even needing to exert his authority and presence. With a deep breath, she pressed her head against the floor.

"This Junior Sister is honored to receive pointers!"

Her senior nodded at her with a small smile before crossing his arms.

"So, you wanted to learn about Fire Qi?"

"Hm! I got my own ideas, but widening my horizons is always good, right?"

He chuckled at her excited tone and crossed his arm, a thoughtful look on his face.

"Guess I'll get started with how I use it." He raised his finger, demonstrating his burning limb. Shu stared at it in awe, feeling wonder at how it shifted from just the slightest gust. "Fire consumes. Now that's a simple thing, but sometimes people miss the simple things." "It eats and eats, destroys and destroys, until nothing is left when it isn't stopped."

Shu nodded. That made sense and fit what she thought of it, in terms of martial arts at its core. Aggressive, always moving, always dealing damage. Fire didn't retreat, it moved forward and burned away the enemy. However, then her senior shook his head for a moment.

"That's what most people think with fire. But, they would be wrong. Not nothing is left. Something is always left. And all that destruction? Not inherently bad."

She tilted her head at that. That didn't sound right. But when she thought about it... She flinched at the memory of the burning of her home. How one day she returned to it, finding burned remnants. It hurt to think about it but he was right... there was no nothing.

"To put it into perspective, my fighting style consists of using my opponent's Qi as fuel for my own attacks. My own fire. That fire grows, able to consume even more and hit even harder. An escalating cycle."

Her eyes widened. Fuel. Right, fire couldn't come from nothing. In another word, momentum, if she were to apply it to herself. Just attacking non stop and stacking up damage like fire stacked up burns wasn't enough. One hit led to another. Fire was connected with the rest of the fire. So if she were to punch, the counterforce she would experience from hitting the body could be used to send over to the next punch, over and over, in theory. However, the way he described it made her frown.

"That sounds like... "

"Like Blood Consumption?" She lowered her head in shame but he waved her off, as if he heard that comparison more than enough. He shrugged nonchalantly. "Sure is. But there's a difference. For one, I don't store nearly as much, most of it basically just goes through my body and then gets shot out again. As for the rest, that gets refined by my Constitution, so it doesn't hit me with the Curse." His other hand briefly flashed grey in demonstration. He laughed a bit at himself. "Extremely inefficient though, if you think about it."

Then why did he use it like that, she was about to ask but stayed her tongue. Not her Cultivation to criticize. Besides, if it worked in combat, who was she to judge?

"Anyway, not that extreme out in nature, but the ashes left behind feed the soil. It frees up space for new things to grow."

Fire that led to restoration. She remembered that concept in her old lessons. She pressed her lips together. The grass grew over the burned remains, seemingly stronger than ever. She looked down at her hands. So if she were to use Wood Qi, switch to Fire Qi and use that as fuel and then go back to Wood Qi... in theory...

She was snapped out of her thoughts when her senior snapped his fingers at her.

"Enthusiasm is great and all, but better not get too into it. Experimentation can lead to terrible mistakes."

She blushed and nodded, giggling awkwardly. Right, first test it out safely before going at a Spirit Beast and then die because she burned herself inside out by not cycling her Qi fast and properly enough.

"I guess what I'm saying is that Fire is the enemy of stagnation. Destruction, sure, but it runs deeper than that. Guess it doesn't make much sense compared to traditional interpretations."

At that, Shu had to frown. Did he actually think that or was it some subtle way to guide her? Because his perspective on fire... it was interesting. Usually what she internalized was what her big bro had explained to her. Fire was inconsistent. Tricky to predict, due to outside influences, as it flickers and distorts one's vision. However, it was dangerous nonetheless, building up burns and going out of control when not careful. So there were some similarities here. Sure, at first glance, Amaranth seemed to be using fire way more like a blunt club to the bag of tricks Big Bro had, but in the end, it was still fire, wasn't it? Maybe Amaranth didn't realize how neatly it fit in the Wuxing system she learned? She shook her head. Nah, no way, if a junior like her thought of it, surely he did ages ago.

Anyway, this was certainly enlightening. And by all means, she should be satisfied with this. He did what he was paid for, in terms of points. However... she shifted in her seating position, piled up energy pushing her to move and do something shameless.

"Hm, hm." She cleared her throat with a cough. "Err, if it isn't too much... can this Junior Sister ask for a spar?"

When she received a nod in return she had to hold herself back from jumping up and down with glee. She was going to get her teeth kicked out, but they still had hours on the clock! With that in mind, as terrifying as this was, she leaned forward, rolled her shoulders and spread her arms out with a grin, right arm in front, hands formed into fists.

Alright. Fire consumed. Grew stronger and consumed more. Rinse repeat. Time to test that with her strikes! With that in mind, she shot forward, aiming low with a right straight.

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Wood Lesson - Auspicious Nine

After the rather enlightening experience that was the 'Fire Lesson' as she coined it, she decided to go to her 'designated' Wood teacher next, after getting the dents and bruises out of her body. In terms of Wuxing, it was a bit nonsensical, as wood fed fire, which meant it would be going in reverse of the traditional cycle, but to be honest? This felt more appropriate for some reason. Maybe her body yearned for her natural element more. Maybe she was trying to pull off something new or find some new insight by not following the regular paths of the Five Elements. Either way, this was the direction she decided on and she moved on with gusto. Gusto that quickly disappeared when she actually met her next teacher.

There were many things she had to get used to in the Golden Devil Sect. Formations. Bronze Blood. Arrays. The names. Techniques normally forbidden in Righteous Sects. But all that, she got used to and or could accept. Not always smoothly, some social whoopsies happened here and there, but she liked to say that at the age of sixteen she managed to get acclimated with her fellow cultivators.

Of course that did not prepare her for her senior that volunteered to help her with Wood Qi. Not at all. She heard stories. Of one of the Indomitable Thirteen, that became a monster but was a hero to the end before dying. She didn't disbelieve the stories but... well...

Let's say hearing and seeing were two completely different things, Shu thought as she bit her lip, trying to hide her nervousness and internal freak out at the person in front of her. Supposedly some sort of offspring of the hero Jin Muyi, he (was it he, what pronouns did trees use?!) he was understandably freaky in her eyes. Where skin was supposed to be, bronze or not, there was hard wood, shifting and pulsating in a way that wood should never do. Tree branches grew out of him, vines for a beard. Not to mention the horns. Why. Why the horns. Weren't the branches enough for the 'monster' look. Was it offending to think that? Still, a senior was a senior and just from looking, even as a junior of juniors, Shu could sense the mastery of Wood Qi cycling through his meridians. Which meant she had to put on her A-Game in terms of social skills! Easier said than done as her body only twitched as she bit her lips, while having a single mantra repeatedly said in her head.

Don'tsayanythingstupiddon'tsayanythingstu-

"This Sapling Sister greets the Tree Brother!"

Her smile twitched as her eyes were empty while bowing with her fist pressed against her palm. Ah. ...She was the worst.

"Yes, yes, I greet you too." The tree man said almost dismissively, waving his hand before handing out a piece of paper. "Sign this waiver."

Shu blinked and looked down at it. Tilting her head, she began to read it out loud.

"I, Qinglong Shu, do not hold Auspicious Nine accountable for any injuries, deaths or any other sort of mutilation and mutation that may happen during this... ses...sion... " She trailed off, feeling herself pale. "Err, this Senior isn't trying to hurt me, right?"

She received a scoff in return.

"Of course not, it's all for the sake of progress."

Shu nodded slowly. By all means she should've felt more suspicious. But then she shook her head. The Golden Devil Clan was very insistent on cooperation, so there was no way she was going to get betrayed, right? So in the end, she took a deep breath and signed it.

"...Okay."

"Splendid."

Taking the paper away from her, he cleared his wood throat.

"Definitions are important in any sort of science, so let us begin there." He pointed at her. "Wood Qi. You are aware of its healing and growth properties, correct?"

"Ye-"

"Good, that makes this easier," he said, speaking over her. "Most people do not properly understand what it means however. They just think of a flower or a tree growing. But, there is more to it."

She blinked in confusion. What more could there be? A tree grew and could heal people in terms of herbs. Simple enough, wasn't it?

"Many would say that wood is weak in terms of defense. But did you ever see what a tree can withstand? Pah!" As if offended personally, he twirled his hand in demonstration. "Wood can bend. Wood can be broken. However, there is always something left that could be used. So yes, maybe it is not as sturdy as metal. However, even when it is damaged, it is still functional, unlike a broken blade. A handle for a sword. The tip of a spear. Or just saw dust that serves to allow new shoots to appear."

Huh, that was... actually kinda like the Fire Lesson. There was always something left that could be used for something else later. Only in this case it was, well, different. She couldn't really explain it, but there was this connection she just felt was right. Hah, it really made her all fuzzy inside. Actually, she was in fact sweating. Whew, was it just her or did it get hot in her?"

"Soooo, Wood is surprisingly flexible?"

"Indeed! For it can grow from even the most broken state!"

The world began to spin, her interest and enthusiasm fading to dizziness. She touched her forehead, feeling it heat up as she blinked frantically.

"S-Senior Brother, I... I feel weird... " She muttered, gritting her teeth as she tried to check her meridians to see what was wrong. To her shock, she felt foreign Qi in it. Before she could warn her senior that an infiltrator was on the premises, he waved her off once more.

"It is the poison I put into you, don't worry about it. Now where was-"

"POISON?!"

The tree man blinked at her scream, looking at her as if she was the weird one with the outraged expression and heavy breath.

"Yes, how else am I supposed to stimulate your Wood Qi to heal and regrow your channels? Try to keep up. Anyway, one of the appli-"

"You poisoned me!" She shouted again, feeling utterly betrayed. Wrath caused her red eyes to change for but an instance. With an azure glow her pupils became slits, only to return to normal, still angry but human at least. Ignorant to that, Shu seethe with a singular question.Who would intentionally hurt someone like that for no good reason?! Stimulation wasn't good enough! But her rage was but a drop of rain to Auspicious Nine, who only raised his eyebrow, utterly unimpressed.

"If you are so keen on interrupting me, I can just stop. The waiver clearly stated what I was going to do."

"No it didn't!" She shouted, only to get the paper thrown at her face.

"Read further."

She looked down with a deep frown, intent on proving him wrong, speedreading past the lines she read.

"...this session due to poison techniques." She paused, before feeling a blush creep up on her. Damn it, granny even told her to always read everything before committing! She cleared her throat and looked away as she handed the waiver back. "Oh."

"Yes. Oh."

She bristled up. That didn't change the fact he was willing to poison a junior! A junior like her! It was... it was... She blinked as she flexed her fingers. It wasn't actually so bad now that her Qi was stimulated to get to work. She pressed her lips together. This still felt wrong. Something that shouldn't be done. But in the end... she wanted new experiences. New perspectives. And she was still an ignorant junior. So in the end she lowered her head with closed eyes.

"Please continue."

With a scoff, Auspicious Nine continued on.

"As you may know, Wood Qi at its mastery can also affect the soul, bypassing things like those Tokens during the Trials." He pointed at her, a glint in his eyes. "Do you know why that is?"

"Noooo?" She said, while her mind heated up at the mere thought. Why was that? She knew it was a thing but she could never wrap her head around it. Advanced stuff like that always went above her. In response to her response, the tree man clicked his tongue in annoyance.

"Tch, what misfortune." An evil laugh escaped him, one that only belonged to a maniac, as he raised his finger at the heavens. "Very well, allow me to share my thesis with you!"

Aaaand then the Tree Man stopped making sense. Oh, he was still using words from her language, but all combined they made no sense. That wasn't even counting for the made up words he was using. Something about nature and souls being intertwined, about branches and metaphors. All she could do was smile and nod occasionally while trying to get the damn poison out of her system. Fortunately enough she managed to do that just as the senior was done with his... ramblings.

"And that is why I believe Wood Qi affects the soul that much!"

"Very... enlightening." Her fingers twitched on her lap, intent to get some movement after what her body went through. She'd regret it, but damn it, she wanted to get one good punch in his face! "Can I ask for a sparring match?"

"No time for that, I have some experiments to check on!"

And then he was gone. She frowned deeply before sighing. Fine, shadow sparring it was. Standing up, she began to stretch before starting to modify her Wood Style, while at the same time thinking about the lesson.

Okay. So Tree Man. Weird. But she could get used to it, if one looked past the... quirks. Only had to keep in mind to ask more questions before signing off anything. She shuddered, feeling the phantom pain in her body. Ugh, at least now she got a taste of poison and could say for sure that she did not like it. At all. She took a deep breath. Alright, at least done with that she was going to be ready for anything in her next lessons!

It was only way later on that a chill went down her spine as a simple question cropped up.

When was she poisoned during that lesson?


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Metal Lesson - Ninth Prince

A Metal Man. Because of course, after a tree man, a person made of metal was the next thing on the agenda. She shouldn't have been surprised, in this loon house of a clan but here she was, surprised. She grew up, yet she still couldn't see the peak of the heavens with all their strange strangeness in this strange realm. At least this time she had a way better grip on her composure, her smile still in place. Well, maybe it was more because she was legitimately getting pointers from one of the Indomitable Thirteen! Not an offspring, but an actual real deal! Not only that, she heard how nice and fun the Cultivator was, so this had to be one of the better deals in terms of social situations she managed to get herself into! Weird body or not, after the last two, this was going to be a breeze! Well, not training wise, she was certain she's gonna wish for death by the end of this, but hey, wasn't that the cultivator's life in a nutshell?

"This Junior Sister is honored to be in the presence of a hero! Please treat me well!"

The Ninth Prince looked down at the kid who was pressing her head against the ground and was kneeling, and shrugged. At the very least this wasn't a marriage proposal, so she was doing better than most of the young women who knelt in front of him.

"So, you want to learn about metal, huh?" Well, alright, the Ninth Prince would oblige. "Alright, I'll oblige. Here, girly, walk with me."

The Ninth Prince started walking. Shu blinked before clearing her throat and quickly following him. He glanced back at her, to make sure she was actually still there so that he wouldn't talk at the air.

"So, the first thing you need to know about metal is that it isn't like the other elements. Think of it as…" the Ninth Prince paused for a moment, trying to find a proper metaphor. "...People. Yeah, let's go with that. Each element has its own quirks, its own personality really."

Shu nodded a few times, humming with interest. Indeed, elements were often used as a way to describe people. Archetypes were a thing after all and they had their foundation there.

"But while fire is hot tempered and excitable, a real party animal, and wood is more reserved but will still fuck you up if you fuck with it, metal is…" The Ninth Prince sighed.

"Well, there's no other way to put it, metal is a bitch."

She felt her smile strain at the words. She tilted her head, blinking slowly. Uh, what? Did she hear that wrong? Because the closest thing to a metal Qi aligned person she could think of was Big Sis. And Big Sis was so far removed from being a bitch, she might as well be in another world. Then again, she was very stubborn when it came to her research... She looked down at the ground. Huh. The more you know?

"Hey kiddo," The Ninth Prince whirled around, facing towards Qinglong Shu. "You ever meet someone who's absolutely impossible to please but still hangs around with you? A complete bastard who also has a secret soft spot?"

Shu grimaced at the mere thought. Ugh, thankfully no. Just imagining if she were close or heaven forbid friends with an asshole like that made her sick. Before she could open her mouth however, the Ninth Prince moved on with his words.

"Yeah, I've heard them called something weird, Tsundare or some shit like that." The Ninth Prince coughed. "Anyways, that isn't important. What's important is that's how metal acts, cold and standoffish unless you manage to work your way into its heart."

Okay. She somewhat followed that. Not too sure about the metaphor or how it applied to actual techniques, but stubbornness had its own place. Or rather, if she understood him right, simple at first, more complex hidden beneath? Huh, she could think of some ideas that could work like that...

"And in our case, we have an inroad. Specifically, the blood of bronze and all its variations. Metal loves the Devils, and the Blood lets us manipulate it with ease. If you ever get your infusion, if you choose to join the bloodline, then you're set. It'll obey your commands as long as you show it the slightest bit of care."

Scratching her arm, she pressed her lips together. Well, she did get the bit of blood when she joined the clan. Was basically necessary in some regard to fit in best with the techniques. Not that she had an official clan or something to fall back on. Either way, it was good to know that the knowledge she would gain with the regular 'lessons' could be applied to metal itself. Though the fact that Bronze was so cooperative was a bit weird. Elements, Qi, was supposed to be difficult to control, relatively speaking, at least to her. It should never be too easy in her mind. Shaking her head, she sharpened her ears once more.

"But I know what you're thinking. 'Oh, Mr Ninth Prince sir, that's very cool and your explanation was the best thing I ever heard, but what exactly can I do with metal once I have the bronze?'. Well, don't worry kid, because the Ninth Prince has the answer to all of your questions."

With that, the Ninth Prince pulled out an enormous polished board, propping it up on a wooden stand and grabbing a metal pen from somewhere. Shu tried to suppress her awe and tried to focus instead. "Now, listen closely, because I'm only going to say this once. Metal can do everything. It's the most versatile of the five elements, in no small part because there's so many different types of metal. Bronze and Steel are about as tough as Earth, amazing for defense and endurance, though they do make you a bit slow. Iron is the attacker's metal, it hits about as hard as Fire and if you mix in a little bit of lead poisoning, it bites like Fire too. You can use basically any metal you want to mimic Wood, controlling the battlefield is damn easy if you have a solid ore deposit beneath your feet, and poison is the easiest thing in the world to mimic with any mildly toxic metal. And, if you want to copy Water, Quicksilver or Mercury or whatever you call it flows damn well, and it's toxic as fuck too."

At this point, Shu regretted not having taken any notes. Still, she was confident in her memory, so instead she mentally imprinted his words and planned to read up on the various metals in the future. It would require to shape the metal before a fight, as 'mid forging' as she would call it now sounded unwise. But this lesson certainly explained why metal was both considered versatile yet Qi for specialists! Most would never bother to reforge their metal, instead focusing on one of the thousand metals out there! Hah, this was great!

The Ninth Prince stopped there for a moment, studying Qinglong Shu intently, like a predator mentally dissecting its prey. A shiver went down her spine, her excitement turning frail. Then, he smiled. It wasn't a nice smile. "Oh… So that's your game. Well, if you want to go the Five Element route, then things change. See, in that case, you don't use Metal to copy the other elements, you use it to support those elements. Add iron's bite to your Fire, supplement your Earth's defense with veins of ore, put in any sort of metal you want to your Wood techniques, mix quicksilver with Water. The other elements are going to have their own specialties, and Metal's a generalist, it does anything you want as long as you speak to it right. Don't use it to beat the others at their own game, that'll never work. Use metal as your core, as the foundation on which you build everything else, have it work in the background and add its own little twists and supplements to your more flashy techniques."

She almost jumped back. How in the... no, a Senior Brother was wise beyond her years. Maybe she made it too obvious what she desired, to become the last living legacy of the Four Beast Alliance. It was insightful, his words, but it still scared her how easy he dissected her. And the way he looked at her...

"Elements are like the Dao, and there's certainly hundreds of Elemental Daos, it's all very personal. No two people are going to use Metal the exact same way. If you want my opinion on what you should use it for, Metal is the silent partner, the enhancer, the fuser. It won't do much on its own, you'll always have better options, but when you pair it up with another Element, that's where it shines."

"Well, hopefully that helps. It's all I have for you anyways." With that, the Ninth Prince simply dematerialized. He was still a ghost after all.

Shu actually jumped this time, not aware of that fact at all. What? How?! Why?! She looked around frantically. Did she have a fever dream?! Did this actually happen?! She exhaled slowly, trying to calm her heart down. Okay. Nevermind that. High level of cultivation nonsense. Just... accept it like that and... move on. Just take his words to heart. Simple as that.

As she walked a bit faster than normally, trying to escape the potential of getting haunted by more ghosts, she licked her lips in excitement. She always thought of metal as an end product, but to consider it as the general foundation of things... well, it went against her idea of the Earth as a center, but that was why she was doing this. To compare notes and enhance her own Foundation.
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Water Lesson - Minervina Barda

When she found out who her next teacher would be, she genuinely wondered if she was going to die.

The Ninth Prince. Amaranth Castellanos. Technically not Auspicious Nine but he was an offspring so technically counted. And now...Minervina freaking Barda. So many related or flat out part of the Indomitable Thirteen giving her the time of the day. Quite frankly it felt like a prophecy of her impending doom. That the heavens were not so subtly telling her "you'll need it". Of course she got past that panic eventually and wondered about another thing entirely.

"Are you going to poison me?"

Okay, maybe she was still stuck at wondering if she was going to die. Maybe it was rude to ask that of another of the Indomitable Thirteen, but after that experience with Mr. "Lemme Just Casually Poison You" Tree Man, she wasn't taking any chances. She tried to remain respectful, bowing and what not, but she couldn't help but sweat nervously as she glanced around. This place certainly lived up to the name of 'laboratory', especially to someone that made a poison in Foundation Establishment that killed a freaking Core Formation Elder. She had no idea what half of the stuff was that was around her and quite frankly, she was too afraid to ask. The hero merely raised an eyebrow at her before shaking her head.

"Not unless an accident happens." She gestured to one side. "I do need a second pair of hands. Just be careful and you'll be fine."

Shu looked at where she twirled her hand and bit her lip. Okay. Raw ingredients. She could do that. Was just like cooking. If cutting it wrong or breathing accidentally could melt you inside out. With a deep breath she took the knife and glanced at her latest teacher.

"A-Alright, but fair warning, first time I am doing this, hahaha."

"Don't worry, Emilia will watch over you."

Shu blinked at that. Wait, she didn't see another person in here. She tilted her head with the knife in her hand.

"Who?"

Then she felt it. The shifting noise in the background. The looming shadow. And of course the trademark sound of hissing. Slowly, ever so slowly she turned around and pressed her lips together, trying to choke back the scream that was formed. Giant death snake made out of venom! Was the great senior in cahoots with the evil tree scientist?! Nervously laughing she sweated as she backed away slowly while the massive snake just stared at her, flicking the tongue while tilting its head.

"Uhh... hello, Miss Nood- I mean Serpent!"

The giant noodle wiggled in response. Was that a sign of approval or a sign of hunger? She didn't know. Then she felt a shiver down her spine when the snake glanced at her hand. She looked down and realized she was holding an ingredient. It probably wasn't that dangerous given that Shu didn't die yet. Anyway she slowly moved her hand to the side. The snake slowly followed it, not blinking a single time. Shu moved her hand back. So did the snake. A chuckle broke the stalemate causing Shu to drop it by accident. With speed beyond her sight, Emilia snapped forward, unhinged her jaw and swallowed the damn thing whole.

Shu let out a whimper.

"Don't feed her too much, she'll get fat."

In response the snake almost seemed to pout as she lowered her head. It was almost cute, if it weren't a giant serpent made of death.

"N-Noted."

"Well then, I guess I can start the lesson while we work. Try to keep up."

With that her senior moved and it took all of Shu's skills to keep up through this death trap maze. Who needed this much crap in a single room anyway?! She could barely breathe in it, much less walk! Many times she had to push her flexibility to the limits in not knocking things over or cause things to explode. Doing splits, rolling due to stumbling, heck once she had to do a leap to dodge a tilting shelf. Of course she didn't always succeed, with Emilia preemptively eating what was knocked off or about to get touched by Shu. As if that weren't enough, Minervina moved way too fast and smooth while talking at the same time! Seriously she thought this was gonna be purely theoretical for once but apparently every cultivator had a way to push the body! She bit her lip, trying to increase her focus. C'mon, this Senior volunteered to teach her so she had to absorb everything like her life depended on it! Slowly but surely she was getting used to the cramped space.

"Many struggle to understand the potency of Water as an element. It lacks the vicious dominance of Fire, the sturdy reliability of Earth or the tenacity of Wood. I have seen men who are proclaimed as 'wise' scoff and point to the endless desert dunes that surround us. 'Where is your Water? In this land, it has no power over us!'"

"Those who make such statements are incapable of seeing what's in front of their own eyes." With a swift, careful motion, the older woman cut into the meat of her forearm. Shu winced but before she could question the action, she saw something curious. Blood flowed, though it's darker and more sluggish than you would normally expect. "Water is the foundational element. The one from which all life springs. Without it, we wither and die. Too much and we drown. Balance, precise careful balance, is the key to understanding a Water Dao." She moved away without a word, clearly expecting her disciple to follow as she continues her lecture. Shu held back a growl of annoyance and picked up the pace, at least now only hitting stuff every four movements she did. Minervina approached a large stone vat, lifting up its heavy lid to unleash a column of shimmering purple vapours. She sniffed. "Needs another few weeks. And more White Tailed Salamander shavings. Make yourself useful child!" Shu yelped at the shout and was quickly put to work grinding up the palm sized scales of some giant lizard, as the heretic continued her lecture, completely ignoring the junior's noises of disgust as she cut and massaged the scales.

"If Water is the foundational element of life, then it follows that by controlling it, the Cultivator can control that life. This is the heart of many techniques and styles which are considered Demonic outside Golden Devil territory. Arts that control or weaponise blood, either those of the user or an opponent, techniques that befuddle or hypnotise by altering body chemistry, martial styles that reverse the flow of an opponent's blood and cause his heart to burst after even the smallest strike. All these are rooted in a mastery of Water Qi."
Shu grimaced as she was pushed to the next ingredients, with the snake acting as a guide even if she seemed to salivate. Blood techniques…already her mind came up with applications of it on herself, the mind of a martial artist shining through. Increasing blood flow, use it to harden the skin and muscles inbetween. But instinctively she threw those ideas aside. They were too close to...to those people that destroyed her home. She understood the uses of such techniques and how it would be helpful especially as someone weaker but… as if reading her mind, Minervina shifted the direction of her lecture.

"Of course, those of your heritage might still have reservations about such techniques. Well, it's worth noting that Water has any number of more conventional uses. It's an element of transformation and transmutation, constantly changing its form." She demonstrates with a gesture and a flicker of will, causing the putrid contents of the vat to freeze. "This makes it incredibly useful for alchemy, but also martial techniques designed to redirect force or obscure the senses." A haze of mist gathers around her palm and flows in the direction of a huge black iron cauldron across the room. "More than any other element such techniques rely strongly on motive forces. Water is strongest when it's flowing." To illustrate her point, she conjures a shimmering sword of spirit steel from a small pouch by her side. With a simple gesture she directs the flying sword at the cauldron with the force and power of a thunderbolt. It happens too fast for a Qi Condensation disciple to really comprehend, but the results are clear enough. A crash loud enough to wake the dead, a broken spirit sword half buried into array enforced wall behind the cauldron, which was entirely intact.

Shu had to pick up her jaw from the floor. Huh, that was... very in depth. And freaking amazing. Shu couldn't help but smile giddily. Now that was some great teaching! She couldn't see a thing but the result was already very enlightening! And...kinda connected to previous elements.

Flow. Momentum. Use previous or the next energy and compile it. For all that the elements were different…there were so many similarities. That sure was handy, she thought gleefully, leaning back as she wanted to rest her arms on a table.

Which consequently caused a wet squelch noise. Shu's smile froze. Emilia froze, in the middle of swallowing more ingredients. They both slowly turned their heads while Minervina ignored them. Raising her hand, Shu stared at the green liquid covering her limb.

... She wasn't supposed to touch that, was she? As if reading her mind, the giant serpent slowly nodded. Shu nodded back slowly. Welp. On cue, she felt her body no longer responding to her mind as it fell down, face first, onto the ground and began to twitch violently. As her very blood hurt, Minervina glanced down at her, adjusting her clothes as if she was starting to leave. Blinking at the junior on the ground she let out a sigh before reaching into her pockets. Then, kneeling down, she pressed something into Shu's mouth before patting her hair.

"Here you go, you'll feel better in a couple minutes. I have to leave for now."

She didn't know if she was blushing due to embarrassment or the poison but at least she felt her mouth moving according to her will.

"T-This Junior thanks the Senior Sister... "

"No need to thank me." The hero stood up and casually waved back at Shu. "Got to look out for hard working juniors. Emilia, close the door when she is ready to leave."

Shu, despite the burning in her meridians, had a goofy smile. She really was blessed to be in such a nice clan! Mad Tree Man Scientist excluded! She'd be even happier once she could do more than twitch on the ground, as her mind was burning up with ideas to use for her Water Style. She looked at the massive venom entity. The two stared at each other for a while, silently.

"...Soooo, interested in my thoughts on Water based martial arts?"

All she got back was the flicking of the snake tongue, but Shu decided to take that as a yes.
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Earth Lesson - Gaius Antonius


Okay, downside, she sorta felt like dying, both mentally and physically despite the breaks. Upside? Earth lessons, weeeee! By all means, finding a teacher for that one was the hardest for her. Not for a lack of choice however. In the desert, Earth and Fire were the most common affinities, Earth slightly moreso, as one would expect of a place filled with sand. Shu considered several renowned masters of Earth techniques, but when it came to those whose attention she currently had a shot of catching, her attention wandered to one Gaius Antonius. She's heard stories about how Gaius invented his own defensive technique, then used it to revolutionize subterranean travel at a level even an Elder would find impressive. Clearly, this guy must be the foremost expert of that element in his generation. And only the best could live up to Shu's expectations due to her upbringing's bias. Earth Qi was after all the Qi of the center, the Qi of the leader, the Supreme, the apex of the Four Guardian Beasts! Thus she didn't miss a beat trying to find the genius of geniuses!

Following Amaranth's directions, Shu found herself at the old Theodoroi Estate, where Gaius was staying for the time-being, furthering his education on military tactics. Carefully entering the premises, she spotted him rather quickly after someone pointed him out. She gulped when she saw him in the middle of mediation. Sharp features, lean, hair in a ponytail and most importantly a hell of an aura. That had to be him! Just as she was about to get his attention, he opened his eyes and looked at her, seemingly surprised. Shu cleared her throat before bowing with respect.

"This Junior is called Xinglong Shu!" She laughed awkwardly as she scratched the back of her head. "I would've asked for an appointment but it was difficult to get ahold of you."

"How can I help you?" He asked after processing her words, tilting his head with a raised eyebrow. Well then here went nothing.

"As shameless as it is, this Junior requests pointers regarding Earth Qi!"

He leaned back as if in shock. Mentally Shu panicked. Oh no was she too shameless?! Was he going to beat her up as punish-

"There must be a misunderstanding. I am no expert of the Earth."





What.

"What?"

Forgetting all manners, Shu openly gaped a bit as she stared at her senior with disbelief. Said senior cleared his throat as if embarrassed.

"I developed my Earth-Gliding in a freak accident, after I fell into the Five Elements Fountain and it synchronized with my Aegis, which I'd been using at the time. So yes, while I am flattered, I am in no way the genius or expert people claim me to be."

Shu held her hand up. Holdupholdupholdup. Was this man serious?! Did he actually believe the words coming out of his mouth or were they part of some elaborate joke?! Looking closer at his face she realized that no, he indeed thought he wasn't actually hot shit. Well screw manners then, she had some convincing to do!

"B-but Senior Brother Antonius, clearly anyone who can utilize Earth to such a degree must at least have a very high affinity for it!"

"You're right. My Earth affinity is quite high." He nodded at her words. "Partially because that fountain skewed ME further toward Earth. Nowadays, I'm above average at all elements and great at Earth. But I lack enthusiasm for elemental techniques." He let out a deep sigh and gave her a pointed look. "It's best to seek uncompromising supremacy than to specialize too far into any one area. The worst thing one can have is blind spots; a Golden Devil ought to be unconquerable and impregnable, stubbornly defying all who would see them destroyed. When a Devil takes victory, it must be an inevitable occurrence, as their superior mastery defangs any and all tricks and gimmicks that are brought before them."

Shu blinked as the man more or less ranted at her before biting her lip and grimacing a bit. Okay was he actually trying to convince her that he wasn't suited or was the lesson already starting? Ignoring the fact that she was in fact not trying to specialize, unless one counted her preference for unarmed combat, his words were...very Earth-y. Like a lot. The radiated stubbornness and what was more stubborn than the center of everything? Still she had the feeling this was only going to get worse if she pointed that out so he could keep his delusions about his own talent for now. Instead she could go for another angle instead.

"Very well, I can see you feel quite strongly about this. Then this Junior Sister will no longer ask about Earth Qi guidance." She smiled ever so slightly. "So instead would this Senior be willing to teach the Earth Gliding technique?"

Humming in thought, uncertainty marred his expression.

"Such a thing would be difficult; I've never taught Earth-Gliding to anyone because it isn't a technique I developed properly. Instead it's more like a latent ability which was unexpectedly gifted to me." Smacking his lips he frowned. "Thus, I'm not confident in my ability to properly codify its principles."

Shu lowered her head. But before her hope for some training vanished she heard him sigh and then the shifting of cloth. Looking back up he was fully clothed again, crossing his arms.

"If you can learn the barebones of the True Aegis, I suppose you can bootstrap that into the barebones of Earth Gliding."

Yes! Shu was about to raise her fists in celebration when he raised his hand, stopping her before she got too excited.

"Only problem is, that would take years for a First Heavenstage, given how little qi you can store at a time, and I don't have the time for it right now either way. Instead we have to do something simpler."

She flinched. Crap. But...well, she should be happy to get some help from this. Anything was better than nothing. The path of cultivation was long after all. With a nod she decided to do whatever he demanded.

Of course that determination wavered but did not crumble when he began to put her through the wringer. To put it in his words...the higher her physical baseline the better it was for physical techniques in the future.

So here they were, doing the most blunt, simple, painful, straightforward, practical and earth-y thing they could do.

Shu getting pounded by a senior way older than herself, also known as the brute force method. Her bones creaked and maybe even broke, her muscles bled, but she grit her teeth through it.

When she healed up, her body would be as sturdy as the Earth that held up of existence itself!

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"Aaaand that's all the pointers!" Giggling, Shu pointed at the bandages that covered her face and sheepishly scratched the back of her head. "Amazing, isn't it?"

The houses the remnants lived in were rather humble, a far cry from the center that was the living quarters of the cultivators. Her fellow heirs, or rather former, as much as the thought stung, shared the biggest house with granny, but it was still a far cry from their former glory. Her big sis shared a look with the big bro. It was one that forced a smile, yet there were a lot of doubts. Shu couldn't exactly blame them. Hunted down or not, at their core they were still Righteous, so hearing about all the things Demonic Clans were apparently allowed to do was weird to say the least.

"Amazing is one way to phrase it."

"Freaky more like it."

"Brother!"

"What, we all think that! She got poisoned twice! Twice! And not a single one of them had a normal name to boot!"

Shu giggled. She was glad she could pronounce them right at the time. But couldn't help but look at their hair with worry. She'd liked to say that she was just seeing things, but if there was anything Qinglong members had, it was their sight. And right now, she could see the gray strands here and there. Their cultivation stalled, especially with the lack of resources. They were given a token of gifts for their servitude, doing scouting and research missions. But compared to the actual cultivators, they just didn't have enough worth to the Golden Devil Clan. And then there was granny, chuckling lightly as she leaned back in the bed. A bed she hasn't left for months at this point.

"Well, one must keep an open mind if the heavens are your enemy." She looked so terribly exhausted before crossing her arms, authority still radiating from her despite the alliance being officially disbanded. "Now what are you doing here?"

Shu mirrored her frown before pointing at herself as she tilted her head.

"Uh, vacation day? We got those?"

"No. I meant, why do you keep coming here?" She gestured at the table with a glare. "With these treasures?"

Turning her head, Shu looked at all the items she brought with her. Then she scratched the back of her hair, humming in confusion.

"They aren't exactly treasures. Kinda cheap actually, compared to what other stuff costs in terms of contri-"

"You could use the time and resources to grow instead!"

She felt a migraine grow in her head. Covering her eyes with a deep breath, she ran her hand down her face before pressing her lips together with a frown. Every damn time. At first she was patient. Well, at first she was hurt, but after that she was patient. But now? Now she was just done with the old woman trying to out stubborn her, Qinglong Shu!

"Granny, we're not doing this again."

"Pah, I do this as often as need to-Agh!"

Coughing violently, the three former heirs immediately rushed to her side. Preparing medicine and massaging her back, Shu bit her lip with worry.

"Granny, you aren't the youngest anymore, remain calm," Fei muttered. Yet she wouldn't have it, shaking her head as she looked at Shu with glistening eyes.

"Why won't you understand... We can't keep up. You are just wasting your time."

Shu giggled before leaning back, crossing her arms. Raising an eyebrow, she hit her chest a few times with a determined nod.

"Family is never a waste of time. You know that."

The three flinched. Then they shared the smile and the mood lifted in the room. Granny scoffed, shaking her head as she looked away.

"Tch. Pulling the family card is dirty... "

"I'm Demonic now, remember? We are dirty like that, hahaha!" She put her hands on her hips, puffing out her chest. "Now eat those pills and cultivate! If I come back and find out you threw them away or they are gathering dust, I'll give you guys some pointers instead!"

Many hours were spent, just catching up. How Fei still managed to find some time to do some adventuring in a sense, scouting out certain spots. How Xiu found some time to do some research and cataloging their alliance's knowledge, with the help of granny. Many hours spent doing something most would call a waste of time. After all, every minute and second counted when one wanted to reach the Heavens and overthrow it. But... Shu giggled as she walked out, the sky already dark.

There was a reason the Four Beast Alliance focused on the Earth instead. Ascending was meaningless if one was alone. What was the point ifone forgot their roots? She glanced to the side, looking at the surviving mortals that followed them. Growing old faster than most, she felt an ache in her heart. Soon enough, those people would be gone in a blink of an eye, while she, ideally, would be unchanged. A part of her wanted to ignore them, to diminish the pain... but that would be admitting defeat. And again, the Earth was more important than the Heavens. So she bowed at them as well, ignoring their shock and outrage.

"Ren, make sure they do their cultivation stuff. And... thanks for everything you're doing. I mean it."

The impromptu leader of the mortals stammered as she frantically shook his head, his grey beard moving with it.

"I-I am merely a recordkeeper! I-"

"And you're keeping our records. That's important. You're making sure nobody forgets you and me." Shu nodded at him and closed his hand over the bag of money with a gentle smile. "Get yourself and your kids something nice."

"I couldn't possibly-"

"Cultivator, remember? Money isn't that important."

She waved him off, walking away, ignoring his thanks as he bowed deeply. Good that he didn't know that she did in fact need money, but hey, the amount she gave away wouldn't have gotten her anything anyway. Better to do some good with it instead of some miniscule progress on her cultivation. Still, she had to make up for today by working harder the next days until the next visit. After all... it wasn't over. Many would like to say that, even her own people. That the Four Beast Alliance was done and gone. But she knew better. Knew that whoever attacked them didn't erase them. No, instead, it was worse. A burning fire lit up in her heart and she took deep breaths, in order to calm the rage that the Qinglong Clan was famous for. But it was a difficult endeavor. After all...

They stole from them. Stole what their ancestors created, what their ancestor's descendents spent so much time to improve, evolve, to imbue them with knowledge. Nobody knew what those treasures were completely capable of. It was knowledge lost to time. But even as the memories were gone, the meaning remained. To entrust all the world had to offer to the next generation, until a true center could be reached, an Earth that surpassed the Heavens.

And now they are gone. Sullied more likely. Used for nefarious means and spitting on the intentions of the past. She clenched her fists.

She'll get the treasures back. The Vermillion Bird, the White Tiger, the Black Turtle and the Azure Dragon. The weapons and armors holding all of the knowledge their alliance has gathered over the course of centuries, sealed and only unlockable by the most talented and worthy of their blood. She has to find them, find where they went, as they were gone from the vault of their clan, together with everything else. No forced entry either. Which mean only one thing, one mission she had to fulfill as the last hope of the alliance.

She bit her lip, drawing blood as she looked up at the heavens. In order to put the dead to rest. In order to put the living to rest. In order to find out who betrayed them.

In order to finally accept she was worthy of the sacrifices made for her.

She will find the traitor of their clan and put him or her down before returning what was theirs. She licked her lips.

Maybe she was rushing it too much. Maybe it was the height of foolishness. But the thought entered her mind and damn it she wasn't talented enough to cost by the good will of her seniors.

The Qiguai Clan Doorway sounded terrifying beyond belief and if she had a choice she wouldn't go there...but she didn't have a choice did she?

Her unknown enemy had a headstart of who knows how long. She needed to be faster or else she'd never stand a chance when she finally found the damn traitor and everyone else involved in this mess. Not to mention…

Her lips quivered at the thought. She still didn't want to accept it. But...If she was going to be the last big Cultivator of the Four Beast Alliance then she could be nothing more than the very best.

Nothing more than a king, no matter how unlikely or how hard it was going to be to gather the Four Guardians within her. She blinked and tilted her head. Wait, what was the Golden Devil name for them instead? Ol...olu...Olimi Stones…? She clicked her tongue in annoyance and shook her head. Screw it, she was going for an Unorthodox Single pillar and that was it! No matter how long it takes her to figure out her Dao!

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So that was a big boi.

Many thanks to the people helping me in this by throwing in their beef in terms of philosophy.

Not sure if this is how it works but I'm going for life saving treasure for omake reward. Gonna need it for secret realm
 
Ninth Prince & Qinglong Shu Collab Credit
Well, you know the drill. Sidestory thing so I get credit for the omake collab. It was really fun to write this, sorry it took so long ON.

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Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest] Original - Fantasy

Qinglong Shu 1 and Others - New Life, New Lessons That day was a day worthy of celebrations. She remembered it clearly. One of her cousins celebrated their fiftieth birthday, a milestone for their alliance. Drinks were raised and laughs were shared as the four clans had gathered for this...
 
Sect Wars - The Golden Desert Expansion Forum Topic
1112 words.

AN: So this was inspired by the comments on Wei Feng's new ability making him a video game boss. A forum thread on "Sect Wars". A video game version of this world. I thought of it an rpg that gets more strategic elements and a sort of empire builder phase (including large follower counts, troops and warfare aspects) as players advance up to the core and nascent soul stages.

Apologies to the many, many worthy good seed who I haven't mentioned here. I was having trouble coming up with many interesting mechanics.


Sect Wars - The Golden Desert Expansion Forum Topic

To_reign_over_Heaven said:
Hey,

I'm playing Sect Wars, and I've just got to the part of the great blood war where the Golden Desert expansion opens up and wtf?

Better_to_Rule_in_Hell said:
You tried the Karma hunt mechanic didn't you? Hah.

The Lite Brigade said:
Another one bites the dust.

SectMaster_101 said:
Yeahhhhhhhhh. If you're in the great blood war and can actually go there you're probably in the FE regions right? Levels 10-18? Don't go into the Golden Desert for a while unless you're fond of minmaxing or are really into the lore.

To_reign_over_Heaven said:
What do you mean in the FE regions? Did someone find an infinite XP glitch? And why is the Golden Desert not worth it?

SectMaster_101 said:
Oh, sorry. Very mild spoilers below:

Once you beat the first campaign you unlock the ability to start at different times. Gives you the chance to make a difference in various conflicts you were too small (or too big) to deal with. There's some good branching story there.

To_reign_over_Heaven said:
And why is the Golden Desert not worth it?

Right now. It's not worth it right now. Ok the thing about the desert is that it's xp is pretty terrible compared to the blood war. Lorewise (backed by gameplay) there are a tonne of Spirit Stones there, but the area's free qi is basically gone. So while you're there you have to use your money to recharge as well as advance yourself.

Obvious answer is to get a bunch of stones and get out, but the Golden Devil territories are run pretty tightly. So, quests with good rewards are fairly sparse, especially compared to the Blood War. Especially since the Blood war will be progressing while you're futzing around this corner of the world.

The exception to this is Karma hunting. Long story short, umpteen millenia ago the Golden Devil's ancestors fought against heaven. They lost, and Heaven hates them for it. Meaning that you kill Golden devils, your chances of good loot drops and random events goes up. They're also mostly pretty weak individually, especially if you've done some grinding in the blood war.

So, sounds pretty good right? Go there, kill a bunch of enemies for really good loot and money and run back home. Easy. Yeah no. Golden Devil Rank and file are pretty crap sure, but what they do have? Superbosses.*

You start Karma hunting, and the game starts rolling dice. If it rolls a certain amount, then a more powerful than usual enemy will appear. These can range from, meh – slightly stronger, to oops that's a superboss. The more you kill, the more likely you are for the game to roll a superboss. Who you get is essentially random, though I think some people have a theory it's zone or plot-based.



*And Legions but you don't need to care about Legions unless you're leading a very big group.

To_reign_over_Heaven said:
So, come back later?

SectMaster_101 said:
Basically yeah. There is a bunch of great lore to be found there. The Golden Devil ancestors were wild, and there are some amazing ruins, but they're mostly locked up really tight or really hard to find. If you do get super lucky though you can sell the location to them for a tonne of Spirit stones. Enough to level up a bunch and get good gear once you're back to in the East. There's a bunch of foreshadowing for further plot developments you can run into too.



Oh, there are one or two events where you can actually fight alongside some of the Golden Devil superbosses at various campaign stages as well. Including a few in the great battlefield.

Child of the 5th Sea said:
I think someone did a compilation of some of the more well know bosses. Let's see if I can find it.

Edit Here it is:
Bossin Around said:
Rina Callista – This one is fun, but weird. If you aren't Core (and without exploits you probably aren't) this is basically a chase sequence. You have to kill or flee/avoid enough opposing forces to get out of the zone before the timer hits zero. If you fail she appears and wipes your party. The other spice is that she ignores terrain on the world map. So, you need to make sure your route is good.

Minervina Barda – Hope you've got some good healers or an absolute bunch of antidotes and healing items. Minervina is a poison type, with a really high evade. She also has a few incurable poisons, so you really need actual healing.

Magnus Centenius – Another poison focus. Less evasion but a more direct damage to supplement the damage over time effects.

Aretaphilia Myia – Unless you've got a huge bunch of followers you won't be dealing with her. If you are, she's a very strong minion buffer with a stun/kill combo on units that don't meet a certain stat/level threshold. Technically her personal stats aren't as terrifying as some of the others. Theoretically vulnerable to a rushdown strat but that'd be really hard to pull off. If she ever hits low health her some of her minions tend to switch to bodyguarding.

Wei Feng – Ever play tales of Bersaria? Right this guy doesn't look intimidating. If you use an identify function to look at his stats he's actually only a little stronger than most strong FE cultivators. Depending on where you are in FE he might not even count as a boss for a full party. Don't be fooled, he's a bastard. This guy's gimmick is revival. Kill him for the first time and he'll unleash a massive AoE damage attack and get back up. Then he'll keep getting back up. Best bet is if you've got some enemy removal effects you can get rid of him, though he doesn't drop any loot that way.

Ninth Prince – A summoner, though oddly enough, not also a buffer. Fights side by side with his snake summons. Also considered wacky but fun for his final phase, in which he summons his giant mecha: the Venomsteel Battlegod.
 
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Qinglong Shu 2 - Lovey Dovey

Qinglong Shu 2 - Lovey Dovey


Picture this. One massive entity surrounded by what could only be described as small prey. The tiny specks of dust compared to the mountain they were facing only had their wits and courage to speak for them, as they sweated and breathed heavily. Despite the odds however, they didn't give up. As one, they moved, earning a respectful nod from the monster that was so far beyond them it wasn't even funny. It admired their teamwork, how they moved in sync from all sides, taking care not to let their feet leave the ground. But for as commendable as it was, it was not enough. From the sides, from the front or from behind. Each kick, each punch was redirected, parried or flat out dodged, causing the attackers to eat the ground

However.

"Take this! Furious Tiger Pounce!"

Her ears twitched. From above. A good move, if not for the yelling. Still, she gave him some points for creativity, so she let herself it by the downwards kick, yelling dramatically.

"Gaaaah! What impudence!"

Naturally it did no damage at all, so she grabbed the falling boy, his smug expression frozen and slammed him on the ground. Softly of course, since he was just a kid like everyone else. The children groaned in pain as Shu dusted her hands off and put them on her hips with a happy hum.

"So, what did we learn, kids?"

"Don't get too cocky…"

"More like you should shut up!"

"Yup yup, both correct." Shu said with approving nods, stopping the kids from mauling each other in anger. Raising her finger, her expression softened up a bit."You never know when you accidentally come across a Young Master who decides that you offended them somehow." Clapping her hands together she gave them a smirk. "Cool is cool but sometimes you gotta play dirty and efficiently!" She gave her last attacker a pointed look. "That means not giving away your advantage."

She giggled with the others when the boy blushed furiously. Then she led the charge in getting the place cleaned up, as holding back or not, it was a bit messed up. After a while the kids were all tuckered out and were lazily lying on the ground while Shu let out a sigh, patting her shoulder with a broom. That was nice. Just a day away from Cultivation, just taking it what she was doing this for. Sure it wasn't awe inspiring or anything but it was the down to earth little community she could decompress in.

"Some might say a Cultivator shouldn't bother with mortals."

Shu glanced to the side before letting out a short and waving her hand dismissively.

"Well most Cultivators are assholes." Her smile wavered a bit. "How you doin', granny?"

"I'm outside so it's a good day."

The old lady patted her blanket on her lap in demonstration, smiling with more energy than lately, almost looking smug. It certainly energized Shu as she raised her thumb in approval.

"Good to hear, hehe!"

The wind brushed against her hair as she hugged her knees, sitting next to the old woman and enjoying the silence. It was like time stood still in this little paradise of theirs. She could just close her eyes and take it in forever. Unfortunately nothing lasted forever and her granny spoke up with some concern in her voice.

"Shu, don't get me wrong, I am happy you are here." She raised an eyebrow at the Qinglong."However, don't you have any friends?"

It was like getting stabbed by the Shattering Glass Spear Array. Memories of long old but also recent ones attacked her very heart and soul repeatedly, disappearing from her mind as quickly as they came. Yet the damage was done, as Shu coughed, feeling like blood was coming out. She tried to force out a laugh but it sounded pathetic even to her ears, her attempted smile a disgusting grimace.

"O-of cou-"

"You don't." Granny cut through her bullshit like a sword cultivator cut bread. A long suffering sigh escaped her and she shook her head. "Honestly, girl. You aren't a child anymore. Stop putting everyone at distance with the good girl act."

Shu slightly recovered from the mantle damage and frowned deeply.

"It's not an act," she muttered. Well she wouldn't call herself a good girl like that but what was wrong with being nice? If anything, the world needed more nice people. Especially her, given her childhood-nope, not going there. Anyway granny waved her off, not caring about her objection.

"Then persona. Whatever you want to call it." The old lady crossed her arms. "Tell me, is there anyone you can be the little gremlin that you are to me or the others?"

"...it's disrespectful."

She could feel the staring even when she turned her head away, a small blush on her face. As if she could just act like herself with others!

"And being disrespectful is fine with family?"

Shu stared at the raised eyebrow and tilted her head, utterly confused.

"Uh, duh?"

A click of a tongue followed by a small smirk and the mood lifted once more.

"See, that's why I call you a gremlin."

In demonstration Shu stretched her tongue out only to receive a finger flick to the forehead. The two of them shared a laugh and enjoyed the scenario once more. Shu mentally sighed however. She understood that her family was worried. But six years didn't change she was still a total outsider. Add her own issues and well, was it any wonder she was a complete loner in a sense who just faked it til she make it?

She shook her head, returning to the presence. Then she narrowed her eyes. She didn't notice when she played with the kids, but now? Some people avoided her gaze. There was a sort of tension around here. Not only that, some were missing. And then there was granny, innocently sitting there.

The old woman didn't do innocent.

"Granny, did I miss something?" Shu asked, suspicion tainting her voice.

"What do you mean?"

To her credit, the poker face was impeccable. But Shu wouldn't be fooled as she twirled her hand.

"The air is... weird."

"I suppose as a growing Cultivator you-"

Shu raised her hand, not willing to entertain the bullshit whatsoever.

"Nonono, it's no some of that fate or heavens stuff." She licked her lips."It feels... like I missed something reaaaaal interesting."

They stared at each other for what felt like minutes. Shu didn't move a muscle. She could be more stubborn than the old hag. And she proved that when the lady looked away with a long suffering sigh.

"It is not my place to tell."

"So either big bro or big sis, got it." Shu shot up and cracked her neck with a victorious smirk. "Imma find them."

She didn't notice the amused glint granny's eyes as she walked off. Humming playfully she walked around the area when she heard them inside a horse staple. Aha! Weird wet noises, the shifting of clothes and quiet whispers, not to mention the familiar feel of Qi! Found them! She jumped around the corner and slammed her feet on the ground with a wide smile.

"Heyho, family!"

"Ah!"
"Fuuaaa!"

Shu raised an eyebrow at sister Xiu and brother Fei, who seemed disheveled after jumping away from each other, staring at her with wide eyes. She tilted her head. Was she that quiet? Nah, couldn't be. Guess they were too focused on...something...she narrowed her eyes.

"...What were you doing?"

""Nothing!""

Weirdly fast and in sync answer. She took a closer look. A bit sweaty and faces were blushed but the desert was hot. Clothes were in disarray. Xiu was rubbing her thighs for some reason and there were weird red marks on their ne-

Shu's eyes widened when the brick dropped. She pointed at them with a dramatic inhale.

"...By the heavens, you're fucking!"

"Shu!"
"Sorry, I meant bonking!"

"Shu!!!"

"Doing the do?"

"SHU!!!"

"Stop yelling my name and explain!" Shu screamed back, picking her right ear as it started to ring. Her two family members blushed furiously before Fei hissed as he scratched the back of his head.

"...okay fine, we've been...together since three months."

"Three whole months?!" Shu touched her chest in utter betrayal. What a travesty! "And you never told me?!"

"Look, we never figured out how to break it to you! It's a big deal!" Xiu shouted. Shu scoffed in response.

"Heck yeah it is! I lost the bet!" She ignored their indignant expressions when she paused andrealized something. She pointed at her big sis with narrowed eyes."Wait, are you pregnant?"

They both seemed to choke on something before the woman looked away, playing with her hair.

"Y-Yes, I realized a few weeks ago... "

All was forgiven. Shooting her arms up, she jumped up and down in celebration.

"I'm gonna be a cool Cultivator auntie! Heck yeah! And I still get some of the pot!"

"What pot?" Xiu asked in a cold tone, but Shu ignored it completely as she pointed at herself with her thumb.

"I missed the time frame by two years but I did bet that within a year of getting together you'd never keep it in your panties! Whoop whoop!"

The two let out choked noises. Shu giggled at them. Obviously anyone could've sensed the tension between them, it was just a matter of time! The only thing she regretted was not being around when they first started. She paused. Wait, did everyone know before her?! Damn them! She shook her head. No, forget past mistakes, the future was more important! For example...

Was she going to be a cool auntie or a hip auntie? Dang it, she needed to prepare a proper image and game plan before the kid or kids were born! Couple months was way too little time! She had to kill some beasts for cash and materials to make the best birth present ever! Nobody was gonna to up her as best family!

"Gift prep here I coooooooome!"

___

Their little genius dashed away without hesitation, leaving the couple behind. They silently looked at her retreating back. Once she was far away enough, they both let out a sigh of relief. But then Xiu started to punch Fei's shoulder with a furious pout.

"That was not how I wanted to reveal our relationship!"

Fei tried to protect himself with his arms raised and retreating but his girlfriend just hunted him down instead.

"Hey, you agreed!" he shouted defensively. That didn't help him at all as Xiu, cute as she was, stomped the ground like an angry rabbit.

"In the heat of the moment!"

It took a few hits until they both slumped down against the wall, Xiu resting her head on his shoulder with the heat gone, leaving behind only a vulnerable couple relying on each other. Fei sighed, running his hand through his head.

"She didn't notice anything. Didn't even bother looking." He let out a weak laugh as he glanced at the hay stack behind the, a hay stack that wasn't there in Shu's last visit and served no purpose for food.. "Too busy gushing over our future kid."

"This... this is wrong." Xiu whispered, tightening her grip on Fei's hand. "Are you absolutely sure we shouldn't tell her?"

They didn't utter a single lie. They were indeed lovers. They were indeed expecting. However, they weren't making out until they realized that Shu was getting closer. They didn't start their misdirection until then. Fei reached into the hay and pulled out the entire stack of information they started to gather since Shu joined the Golden Devil Clan. Whenever they left to trade or to scout or to research. They always kept an ear open and gathered rumors, information and so on. They both stared at it, looking at the blood stained chimera.

The symbol of the Demonic sect that took everything from them. The maw of a dragon chomping down on the world itself. Fei growled before taking a deep breath, shaking his head.

"Yes." Xiu opened her mouth to object his blunt words but he raised his hand with a frown."You know as well as I do, the second she finds out we have leads, she will run after them with nothing more than a bottle of water to keep her fresh and at best two more Heavenly stages. She isn't ready yet. And we don't have enough to give her for now."

They had leads. How it was indeed a sub group of the Blood Altar. And how it was definitely led by a traitor of theirs, committing atrocities under the name of the Four Beast Alliance to frame them. But they didn't know where they were. How strong they were, besides any techniques the alliance possessed. Until then they would have to keep looking.

"And once she is ready and once we do have enough intel?"

"I hope we can do it ourselves but... " Fei bit his lip."Yeah, then we can tell her."

They leaned into each other, silently agreeing. Yes.

Then they could tell her about the Bloody Center Beast Sect, led by the self proclaimed Huanglong.
 
It as good as expected. Even before we got the stone spear and extra nascent power it was well established and expected that the Golden Devils would win against the Jingshen in large scale warfare. The war was always going to be us quickly taking everything but the Underworld Spirit Palace which we then siege. Unfortunately the Jingshen have done an amazing job at concentrating all their wealth in the Underworld Spirit Palace. And time is on their side the longer the war continues the more likely outside rightous path intervention becomes.
I don't think that's true, though?

All the Jingshen ever really gave them was piles of spirit stones.

The Righteous Path has made it clear that they are entirely willing to sit on their asses and do nothing while we eat the Jingshen alive if we provide those spirit stones instead.

If we have control of all of the minor family mines... well, it's not the same as owning the Underworld Spirit Palace, but it does still give us quite a lot of stone with which to bribe the Righteous Path... and being trapped inside the Underworld Spirit Palace means that between losing the branch families and losing the advantages of trade, Jingshen's available real income is much reduced.
 
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The foundational flaw of the Jingshen is how inherently corrupt they are.

Even if the output of the Underworld Spirit Palace represents half to three-quarters of all Spirit Stones mined by them, the Jingshen absolutely did not send the majority of that wealth out West to the Plains.

And with the Clan's utilitarian perspective in place, that in turn means that the Legions wont really be wasting even remotely as much of that wealth on graft and internal jockeying while the invasion is in full swing. Which in turn means that of that reduced minority of wealth the Righteous Path would ordinarily see...They'll still be seeing a majority of the regular output, if not the standard levels of export to them from the desert.

Getting the Bei in line, and soon to be the Xi as well, is a colossal blow to the Jingshens only real prospects of ending this war in their favor. Once the Pleasure Palace falls in the West as well, two more of the Jingshens major mines will fall under threat as well. Meaning we'd be approaching the point of funneling a full half of their lands collective output to the Plains.

All the while also we have our own Legions fighting in the Verdant South alongside the rest of the Righteous Coalition.
 
Yeah, we're basically establishing that we're a far better neighbour than Jingshen is, in a sense. Which makes a Golden Desert outcome more palatable to the masses in the short term--which we can then turn into a fait accompli before the end of the big war.
 
She can't.

Because she doesn't have the precision to do it. When a Nascent Soul exerts their power upon those below that level with enough force to affect them, their gossamer souls shatter like glass. It takes very special training to avoid this from happening--and that only if they're caught on the edge of a Nascent Emanation rather than the direct target of it.

Manuel though, as a very weak Nascent Soul, has spent much of his career sharpening his control where his power could never measure up. To the point where he can precisely gauge the exact level of force needed to shake a soul but not shatter it. Even then, it's extremely difficult for him to do so in combat conditions. The spear changed that, by letting him skip the "Target Acquisition" step by simply using it to probe for where target souls were before casting his curse.
I mean, she couldn't do literally the same thing.

But I would think she could, broadly speaking, duplicate the effect- that is, all the (Core Formation and below) defenders neutralized and incapable of offering meaningful resistance, with only some of them killed or shattered by the experience as opposed to just obliterating everything.
 
I mean, she couldn't do literally the same thing.

But I would think she could, broadly speaking, duplicate the effect- that is, all the (Core Formation and below) defenders neutralized and incapable of offering meaningful resistance, with only some of them killed or shattered by the experience as opposed to just obliterating everything.

Even if she could, it'd still likely have a very high bodycount. She's not a very old or experienced Nascent Soul despite how much we meme her up, and the fact she's as proficient in using her powers as she is is already weird.
 
That's not really what he did, though. Sure, she could hit their personal pause button if she wanted, and they might take a short while coming out of it after she left, and she might be able to stretch the effect to cover the lot of them... but he injured them all. Precisely. The thing that happened to them wasn't "you are within the range of my domination", it was an attack, and one that will linger. Throwing out an attack like that, that hits each of its targets precisely as hard as is necessary to really hurt them without hitting them hard enough to kill them is really not trivial. The fact that he did it more or less instantly is pretty normal, but the fact that he was able to target them so precisely down in the middle of the mine is really, really not.
To be fair, this is quite true.

Even if she could, it'd still likely have a very high bodycount. She's not a very old or experienced Nascent Soul despite how much we meme her up, and the fact she's as proficient in using her powers as she is is already weird.
Yes, I agree that I'm pretty sure that if someone with a mind-affecting Dao had tried to do the same thing, there would have been a much stronger correlation between who was killed or shattered by the effect, and who was strongest/weakest. You're right, and I'm walking back my position on the matter a bit.
 
The real difference is that she could conceivably doing it by using her Dao. Like, she has a Dao that's all about doing things like convincing people to give up without a fight. Everyone knows that nascent dao get freaky - that every one of them gets crazy conceptual attacks that they can do where you have to know what their dao actually is and hope you can figure out ways around it while they do the same to you. It's how Kleisthenes was able to make a higher-tier nascent flee. It's how Old Jingshen was able to set up an attack that would have wounded Manuel in spite of him never having been in the area of effect.

That's not what Manuel did this time. His dao has nothing to do with this stuff. He managed to pull it off because he's just that good.

...and yeah. Pulling off what is effectively a dao-tier effect out of raw skill really is a flex in this world.

edit: this would have looked so much better if I had gotten the post in a minute earlier.
 
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Link for my part in ObsidianNoirs excellent introductory Omake. Was a ton of fun to write Minervina in a mentor role!
 
The foundational flaw of the Jingshen is how inherently corrupt they are.

Even if the output of the Underworld Spirit Palace represents half to three-quarters of all Spirit Stones mined by them, the Jingshen absolutely did not send the majority of that wealth out West to the Plains.

And with the Clan's utilitarian perspective in place, that in turn means that the Legions wont really be wasting even remotely as much of that wealth on graft and internal jockeying while the invasion is in full swing. Which in turn means that of that reduced minority of wealth the Righteous Path would ordinarily see...They'll still be seeing a majority of the regular output, if not the standard levels of export to them from the desert.

Getting the Bei in line, and soon to be the Xi as well, is a colossal blow to the Jingshens only real prospects of ending this war in their favor. Once the Pleasure Palace falls in the West as well, two more of the Jingshens major mines will fall under threat as well. Meaning we'd be approaching the point of funneling a full half of their lands collective output to the Plains.

All the while also we have our own Legions fighting in the Verdant South alongside the rest of the Righteous Coalition.
If anything I'd say their flaw is… being bad at everything. Cultivation is a game where the ability to simply out-spend the competition is overwhelmingly useful, so the only way for Jingshen to not steamroll the rest of the desert is to balance that out by having very little abilities of note besides crafting. It's what happens when you're economically unassailable for so long, I suppose: you become a nation of passive consumers.
 
In a sense, we kind of ruined them by being a border that wasn't constantly testing their resolve and the other one being smart enough not to skin the sheep. Which let their corruption hit a terminal level when we finally had enough strength and a good enough position to shove our boot through their teeth.
 
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Qinglong Shu 1 and Others - New Life, New Lessons That day was a day worthy of celebrations. She remembered it clearly. One of her cousins celebrated their fiftieth birthday, a milestone for their alliance. Drinks were raised and laughs were shared as the four clans had gathered for this...

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In a sense, we kind of ruined them by being a border that wasn't constantly testing their resolve and the other one being smart enough not to skin the sheep. Which let their corruption hit a terminal level when we finally had enough strength and a good enough position to shove our boot through their teeth.
When this is over, the clan will look like absolute old monsters of Grand Strategy. The Glorious Generation isn't something that could've been predicted, but that isn't something that external history books will necessarily know.
 
When this is over, the clan will look like absolute old monsters of Grand Strategy. The Glorious Generation isn't something that could've been predicted, but that isn't something that external history books will necessarily know.

"I'm fighting this way because as long as he thinks I can still turn it around, he'll withhold his best assets, and the longer we buy time, the better off we are."
"So, you're pretending to lose?"
"Oh no, I Am losing... But I'm also waiting. For the right moment to take the pot."
 
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