Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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The Great Bath Controversy - Reactions from the Mediasphere:
now you mention it...we should probably give her a good long bath to kill the fleas and other parasites off, just to be sure
Hmmm.

The Great Bath Controversy - Reactions from the Mediasphere:

Longstanding Alliance Broken as Golden Devil's Forcibly Bathe Allied Leader!

You've heard of the War of the Beard, now we have the War of the Bath!

"I'm not even sure how she avoided water for that long" - New Flood Dragon recruits baffled by how leader of the Flood Dragons evaded water for centuries.

Elder of Day comes out in shock support for Golden Devils: "My disciples had to wear pegs on their noses." "About time someone forced some cleanliness down her throat. Working with her was Ghastly." The Strength Purity Sect has declined to comment.

Water Load of Nonsense: Flood Dragons and Golden Devils split over demands that Lady Yao take a bath.

Jinghshen Clan offer Lady Yao a free stay at their Oasis Spa Resort.

Brave Bandits and Dirty Peasants: the inside story of the Flood Dragon Gang

There's a snake in my eye! New Lady Yao action figures now available. Fires Expanding snake missiles , with Bonus "turns water black" action. Suitable for young Masters and Mistresses ages 4-9

Flood Dragons Reveal they have recruited 12 New Core Formation Elders! Details are sparse but these Elders have been described as having a great liking for Dogs!

A New Secret Beast Realm? - Details have today emerged that one of the Flood Dragon's new Elders is said to have lived for some time "on the back of an enormous dog". This matches no known area, and speculation has begun that these Elders may have emerged from some hidden secret realm. Many parties have expressed interest in this rumour.

From Righteous to Demonic? Concerns have erupted today after claims that a Flood Dragon Elder was overheard discussing "differing tastes of blood". The Elder of Day has called for an investigation into whether the Flood Dragons, long associates of the Demonic Golden Devils, have fallen into the Demonic Path. The Flood Dragons have not yet responded to request for comment.

AN: Because I saw a "What's in the Headlines piece" earlier today, then read this comment. Then I remembered @nothingtoseehere 's Bucephalus times meant that Newspapers were a thing in this universe and then this came to mind. Yes, the new Flood Dragon Core Formation Elders are Yao's Fleas that have learned to take human form.

I make no apologies for the advert for Yao's action figure.
 
It looks like our gambit paid off amazingly well. In the end, it was worth it. We succeeded so incredibly well that Yao wants to become a permanent vassal; adding another Nascent right away is a huge benefit, even if it comes with the potential downside of a political kerfuffle.
Yao downplayed the Qi Condensation performance a lot, but it's important to remember that to her, they're ants. The fact that she felt the need to mention them at all proves they made a major difference as well.
 
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@occipitallobe , I have to say, I really love it when you do "brick jokes" in the Fates section, where one Good Seed pulls some kind of crazy stunt that results in an enraged monster or unruly mob chasing them, and then two or three more Good Seeds farther down the update end up having to deal with an angry Core Formation Chicken or like eighty-seven people all looking for revenge on the Bronze Devil who mugged them or whatever.

You know, that's twice she's mentioned unusually resistant fleas...
We're gonna have an epidemic of cultivating fleas whose bites can threaten even the armored hides of Bronze Devils in Foundation Establishment, aren't we?

Or it might be @Humbaba 's theory that Yao's trying to raise a crop of loyal Core Formation spirit beasts the easy way.

because they could just as well be a danger to Yao as to anyone else?
though.... if we can get her to steal the treasures, im sure she will scatter some around the Jingshen territories.
I'm pretty sure Lady Yao's fleas aren't a danger to herself or anyone else in Nascent Soul.

It's the other 99.999999% of the population of the continent that needs to worry.
 
That be cool, but as i mentioned in the discord i'm worried it means that they're no longer be considered part of the Righteous Side if they do so

Right now, the Fig Leaf they provide is useful. I would be ON for the scenario Yao proposed of her ruling but with us running the place. So that in name they're independent but resourceswise, it's split with us.

I respect that position, and their would certainly be some blowback. But I think its worth remembering that fig leaves only ever have a passing value. They are political fictions that allow powerful figures to ignore or excuse uncomfortable realities. They exist only when the powerful wish them to exist. So while useful, I wouldnt turn down such a unique and potent opportunity to preserve it.

Moreover If we supplant enough Jingshen territory and replace it with Flood Dragon Land, we create such a new reality that many of the overly taxed Elders of the Plains are going to be keen to excuse. They might well invent their own brand new fig leaf for us.

Yao has her own uncomfortable history with the Jingshen, and as I understand it RP Powers fighting each other other isnt unheard of. As an unnatached Nascent, her carving out her own Demense is hardly unusual.
 
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"You know, the two poison cultivators. They both use poison, look weird, smell funny... I'm not judging, but obviously they're married. There's no other reason for the man to be a drunkard, after all, unless he's married to some absurdly powerful harridan who poisons him every time he tries to sleep around! He smells more strongly of liquor than anyone I've met in that realm!"

poor Magnus, he'd have a fit of he heard that, Minervina is his rival not wife

"Do you think that poison girl would mind if I screwed her husband? He looks like he can take a beating, and he smells so much like liquor I could get as drunk as I wanted and he wouldn't even notice!"
I think she would probably kidnap Magnus away if she found out just how much booze he makes
 
Erk. I am very glad I wasn't eating when I read the bit where Lady Yao ate the grease. Eugh.

shudders
 
Anastasia Outi 4 - On the Matter of Maleficarum (2)
On the Matter of Maleficarum (2)

A/N: This takes place last turn.

There's a small oasis in the grounds of the Delphis' Dawn Fortress estate. It's not natural, of course. For all of the wealth of the Delphi bloodline, no single clan could even dream of monopolizing one in the clan's heartlands.

Instead, atop the same nodes that powered her private workshop, lay a centuries-old gift from a Soul Seed apothecarist elder: a small false-oasis array. Even in the Dawn Fortress itself, the array wasn't enough to sustain much more than a small stream of water and a small patch of adjacent decorative garden. Still, for those with oversensitive spiritual senses, the soothing Qi within was a prized luxury for those days.

Rare is the sound of water in the desert, for the people of the desert measured every drop. Only the sheer power of the Dawn Fortress and the shining golden infrastructure makes the unsurvivable livable. And so, the blades of the soft jade-grass stand tall in defiance, with ten thousand swords pointed at the heavens. And from the small central stream, each ephemeral water drop sprayed into the air laughs at the face of the Heavens. This then, is the meaning of desert life.



It is one month after the fast-talking Lipita sent a letter to Centurion Outi. Amidst the grove of planted Brass-Date Palm trees, a solitary path winds through to the sanctuary within.

It is the entrance to this narrow path that the messenger of the day carefully approaches. These quiet steps – careful steps on the sand-free chi-wide sandstone path – stay well below the millet-scale bubbling of the spring. And yet, the meditating resident noticed, and stands at the threshold.

The messenger – one Legionnaire Mei Valentina, Essence Gathering, Third Heavenstage – presents their credentials. "Delivery for OFFICIAL NAME."

Delivery acknowledged and seal received, the courier leaves, tripping the silent visitor-detector on their way out.

Engraved on the scrollcase is a small notice: "Clan Property. If you put your hands where they don't belong, your hands may be responsible for your life rather than what you desire."



To the curious Lipita,

I must confess, my colleague Matthias is the expert on curses. Compared to him, I am but a novice. But this request I shall answer personally, as best as I can – I doubt you wish to for a return letter to arrive at your address after you move.

The Outi collectively inherit the Karma of the casualties of time and war. The other side of the "survived by", to be concise. It is for this reason that tracking "why" is difficult! Research is fragmented, scattered, and more philosophical than rigorous. Matthias is a miracle-find, in that sense. As best as we can tell, the classical "luck of the Outi" draws mostly from the clans's karma itself. The same phenomenon, but on an individual scale.

That, or just having the misfortune to hold positions in high-casualty legions. This alternative theory cannot be rejected prima facie, as the theory does unfortunately make sense. Descendants of Legionnaires do tend to join the legions of their ancestors. Unfortunately, as with most karmic effects, both theories are nigh-impossible to prove or disprove.

And so, that covers the so-called "bloodline curse". What about positive Karma? What about blessings?

Consider, for instance, the ever-so-mysterious "good luck charm". Most such trinkets sold in markets of ill repute are worthless counterfeits, and rely much on personal belief and bias for their supposed effects. And yet, actual karmic affectors do exist, if rare. Indeed, it could be said that finding one is the result of good karma.

Karmic blessings are the same, but intangible. They're also much rarer, for the winds of fate blow in mysterious ways. Regardless, the current rising cohorts – Imperator Manuel's beloved Good Seeds – do seem to benefit from a blessing of some type, though one unevenly distributed.

Of course, everybody knows of the deeds of Rina, scion of the Callista. I would not be surprised if she found a heavenly treasure while cooking breakfast. But even for others, low grade life-saving treasures pop up every other decade! And this isn't just a small pool affected. From this pool will come the Elders of tomorrow – assuming that they keep finding treasures, which seems more likely than not. The sheer absurdity of this aggregated fortune can only imply favor of some sort – but if not the heavens, then who?

In any case, I've run out of information to give. With any luck, this will have answered your questions and shall lead you in the directions you desire.

May Pandora give you hope,

Anastasia Outi, Centurion



After reading the scroll, Liptia shakes the cylindrical case on some unknown whim. With a slight rattle, a small wooden die with a paper label affixed falls out, hitting the sand. In the neat script of the Outi Centurion is a short message: "Good luck!"

At that, Liptia smiles.
 
Lipita Delphi 17: Anastasia Outi & Lipita Delphi - On the Matter of Maleficarum, Pt. 2
TURN 12, OMAKE 2 [Lipita]
Lipita Delphi 17: Anastasia Outi & Lipita Delphi - On the Matter of Maleficarum, Pt. 2

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Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest] Original - Fantasy

On the Matter of Maleficarum (2) A/N: This takes place last turn. There's a small oasis in the grounds of the Delphis' Dawn Fortress estate. It's not natural, of course. For all of the wealth of the Delphi bloodline, no single clan could even dream of monopolizing one in the clan's heartlands...

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David Pupillus 8 - Delivered
The Misadventures of David!
Part 8, turn 12 omake
Delivered (692 words)​

It took weeks and its almost night, but I finally arrived at Seven Heaven Trade City! The guards are already closed most of the side gates, only leaving the main and 2 of the side gates open as nobody wants to spend the night on the Scorpion Road, even with its Beast Repelling arrays, and either left or arrived during the day.

After the check at the gate and the toll paying I went in and entered the eternal carnival that the city becomes every night, vendors selling food and other things from all over the region, provided by the many merchants traveling to the desert to exchange their merchandise for spirit stones to haul back to the sects and clans in the plains and mountains.
From the south in their vibrant and colorful capes, to the great battlefield's coldly refined and armored coats, to the mountain powers' warm colors and weatherproof cloaks with the desert being divided by the devils well made but practical and the Jingshen's luxurious and jeweled outfits.

As I wandered the streets, try out some of the street stalls' foods, and asking the occasional guard patrol for directions (they even have mortals in their ranks!), and soon found myself in one of the more quieter residential districts. Mostly the type with either multiple families, generations of the same family or a family and their business taking up them, rarely, the bigger shops just like the one I arrived to.

"Sleeping Dragon Apothecary, huh?" I read its table, before checking the directive given to me. "Looks like I'm at the right place."

As I approach the double doors, I notice that my qi sense can't penetrate even the outer layers of the shop. There are detailed, if shallow engravings on the doors. They must be a sight to behold in the light of day, but in the dark, I only see the siluets of the four heavenly guards with the slightest details, with the middle of the doors housing the sun, with a knocker in each half of it. With a shrug, I grab both and use them for their intended purpose. There is no answer after the first, something falling after the second and after the third, I heard something like a curse, muffled as it was by the door.

"-goat." I heard as the voice came closer to the door, followed by a large pause. "Coming! I'm coming! Just don't use the knockers!" After hearing that, I let go of them and take a step back for good measure.

With a crack, the door on the left opened outwards, revealing a short but sturdy man, with patina green hair and blue eyes, his face is all sharp edges and scars, with even his sideburns being angled with ninety degree turns.. My qi sense telling me he was in late foundation establishment, maybe the fifth or sixth pillar? But even that only because he let me.

"Who are you and more importantly, what do you want so late, the shop is already closed if you couldn't see it?" The man was visibly annoyed.

Hm... I could go straight to the point, but I really want to see their reaction...

"Good evening sir, I'm David and I'm here for delivery for one Aris Makrellis, master of the Sleeping Dragon Apothecary. It was marked urgent. Is it, by chance you?"

The man blinked once.

"Delivery, you say?" With a flick of his wrist he produced a list out from thin air. "Yes, I am Aris Makrellis. So, what did you bring to me?"

"The 100 Mist Churning Thistles, sir. And a letter by a friend." I narrow my eyes, seeing how he straightened at that.

"Come in then, let me offer some tea while I retrieve the payment…. And who sent that letter by the way?" He asked, moving back into the shop without waiting, leaving the doors open.

With no way to refuse, I followed as instructed. I would be dead if he wanted me killed already, anyways. "It was sent by one Tong Fu Tong, sir. Though, he wished you sent someone better at games next time."

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i wanted this out by last turn, alas, moods.

The merchants are gonna be mostly noodle incidented away, maaaybe have a training segment aside from the shroom cave omake i have something written already.

For Omake bonus i would like another LST, thank you!

@Alectai , @TehChron , @Humbaba , @ReaderOfFate , @Kaboomatic , @no.
 
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While I've since discovered I my habits and interest level are simply too sporadic to really nurture my own Good Seed (alas poor Festus), I haven't been able to stop thinking about an idea for Cool Thing for a seed. So I'm offering it up for anyone who wants it in the hope that the idea will stop bothering me.

Cool Thing: A kind of spiritual leprosy or wound, down to the fundamental depths of their soul the cultivator lacks the ability to suffer. They can still feel pain and react reflexively to it, but are outright incapable of suffering from pain, experiencing it only as any other sensory qualia. The part of their soul that could experience suffering is either outright gone or has been converted into the breeding ground of their cultivated spiritual disease. As a result, cultivation of any level is not a relentless self-torture and can even be a soothing meditative experience.
Upsides: cultivate faster, torture is ineffective
Downsides: the spiteful jealousy of other cultivators, reduced mental hardening
 
Zeno Angelus & The Builder - The Builder and Zeno talk about life and the great Dao
The Builder and Zeno talk about life and the great Dao
Collab between Juugo and @adamashield

The builder knew how strong the new Good Seeds were becoming and was afraid about the new trials, so in order to become stronger he sought wisdom even beyond the usual sources. Their search led to Abel's Senior Brother. They were sure that Senior had some insights to share. So they had many offerings, good food, and a pre-made contract of construction and went to the huge Manor of the Ancient Angelus Family.

A runner (with the best clothes in the brotherhood) went ahead with a fancy scroll, they were not sure how long they should prostrate in the front of the Manor. Their booksources and talks with other experts say that three days of waiting while prostrating themselves are good sights of favor by a senior.

So they move, the (healthy) mortals, under Angelus Aegis, show clear sign that they were well protected because they show no sight of fear for the 'weird green men', after one kid tried escalate one of them the others ask for the same, some men show sights of approvals and watch the muscles of some of the brothers and sister in the brotherhood.

A mortal asks something to their runner and both return to the main group. Good they will all move to the big Manor as one group then, it will give the Senior an even better face.

"As one" the second builder yelled for his brothers when they got close enough, each brother moved an offering and started prostrating in the main street in the 'prostrating formation', the stronger ones even hit the ground with the forehead and start repeating that action while coordinating with each other to hit the ground at the same time. Like the stories said one should. Then they wait. The sky shows the signs of clouds filled with rain. A great sight based on the stories.

For some breaths the builder bows before the gate of the Angelus family, because he sees the reaction of the mortals, and since this could very well be a hidden trial he just bow a little lower. And wait for a response from the manor. This cloud filled day, luck is on the side of the brotherhood and the patriarch of House Angelus steps through the gates not long after, a small army of servants can be seen working behind him as the gate opens. Clothed in his orange silk robes and a saber at his waist, he looks to be dressed for leisure at first glance. Standing before his visitors with wide shoulders Zeno awaits their answer.

"The brotherhood salutes the mighty senior brother Zeno Angelus, we come with offerings and would request some of your time for instructions" their messenger raises the scroll even higher. Then they waited.

Zeno answers with a smile. "Good to see such industrious juniors seeking wise counsel from their elders. Come on in, distant family to me and mine. This senior has enough time to help all of you!" With a grand gesture the gates behind him open up fully, showing tables with prepared lunch.

The builder nods, waits a little bit to be sure and makes a hand gesture, the rest of the brotherhood raise and make a line to give the senior the offerings; each present given Zeno takes a look at personally before handing them to a servant.

First was the second builder and the rest of the construction crew, their offering was a 10 years construction contract that they offered to work for free. They did 5 years for Senior Abel, so his senior brother should get at least 10.

As Zeno arches an eyebrow at the contract, both parties quickly agree to table the discussion for later.

The third 'brother' moved on the line and, with the rest of the cooks, offered a lot of homemade food, alcohol and tea.

A round of excited murmuring escapes the normally disciplined servants at the sight of these luxurious goods. Their help comes faster for these items than before.

The fourth 'brother' bow and wait for the best crafter to offer a great set of clothes and also find a lot of fabric.

The fifth 'brother' offered, together with the last of the brotherhood, some esoteric things, the best part was a mastercraft (mortal) incense, while the rest were odd things that could be useful for cultivators.

Each item was given careful consideration, before becoming part of the increasing pile of stuff in the outskirts of the manor plaza.

With the first formalities done with, each guest is shown their place at the table, setting in for the first few minutes to taste the prepared meal.

And the first to show off normalcy in the musculary elders. All of them eating in silence and showing (normal) behaviors. Unusually good behavior perhaps.

With both parties having enjoyed the host's meal, the table is cleaned and tea is served through sturdy carafes into earthen looking cups.

"Senior Brother, we seek insights. We were told you could help us with the brotherhood generations long ritual of Daos, since we have doubts that we can truly pass our insights to the next generation of the brotherhood." Said the second builder.

After placing down his own cup, Zeno answers. "I am always willing to help my juniors, but sadly I am only passingly familiar with your ritual. Would you please elaborate?"

"Certainly, each of us decides to give our all for a single Dao." said the builder.

"And we give ourselves for a Dao that could be built on each other. It would be simple enough to pass to the next generation if we ever succeed in using the good stone to pass from one generation like the first builder did to me." taking a second to breath, the old (looking) man continued.

"That stone is a vessel for QI that allows very compatible beings to share their QI, so to ease that process and to fuel our Daos, we make many promises, many sacrifices like stopping using our names. And through doing this we hope that the ritual becomes stronger." green man said. He thought for a moment and finished with.

"And we tried to seek the strongest QI condensators and even foundation established clan members that we can to offer the next generation a better future thanks to a stronger bloodline."

Taking a moment to contemplate the matter, Zeno sips on his tea and thinks. Meanwhile cups are refilled.

"You all work together, using the blood of bronze and your Qi towards one Dao as a group. A new Family through sheer numbers. Did I understand that correctly?"

"Yes, senior." They all nod to Zeno Angelus.

"A noble goal, but equally difficult. Do you know why so many Families have so few known members?" Zeno asks his students.

"We don't Senior" they answered and waited for the wisdom that they are sure to receive.

"Don't simply wait for wisdom to come to you. You need to work towards it together. Right now, for example, you already have all the pieces, but refuse to see them. Think and then tell me why we consider spirit stones so highly!"

The fifth brother said "they select the strongest of each generation and ignore the other brothers." he coughs many times and then continues.

"Our way of helping the less talented is a luxury that many would not do, even when many of our brothers do not use a single stone. They would still not be useful for the clan at large, and people like me would need to be completely ignored." finishes the fifth brother.

"Correct, you lack power! Most families, like ours, did have numerous members in the past, true. But in the end, if your family wants to stand the test of time in inter clan politics it needs a pillar which grounds the Family so to speak. Without that powerful senior, your family won't get resources for the other members as easily and simply lack a face to show vassals which you would want to trade with." taking another sip from his cup Zeno waits.

This time the brotherhood thought before commenting, but their eyes were drawn to the builder, their leader was looking at his gloved hands while a sound that seemed like metal being damaged was being made from said hands. Until the brothers and sisters close by broke protocol to put their hands on him. Making the sound stop.

"We sincerely thank you for this insight Senior Brother Zeno" the second builder said, A burst of Qi came from his neck. "Even our dead would like to thank you for showing us a path to prosperity." continued the second builder after the original one shared his opinion.

Zeno nodded with a wide grin framing his face." And I am honoured that you sought my counsel for such a momentous decision."

Being pleased to have given their host and teacher face. The brotherhood looks into each other's eyes to see if someone needs to ask some more questions. Once they can not find any more doubts, they process to act like normal visitors would.

Third 'brother looked up and asked "This is a lovely wood table, even though the smell of the wood is pleasant" she commented.

"Why thank you! It did take my wife some time to grow these trees. if you want we can visit the wood school later?"

The eyes of the brother grew large from this new insight. The fourth brother was the fastest to recover "We would be honored to do so. Oh, we have some seeds that had grown after the tree had consumed yin and moon QI, I am hopeful that the trees that grow from these seeds will come in a nice silver color"

"Oh, Alexandria is going to love you guys…"

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AN: It was awesome to work together with @adamashield for this teacher-junior Omake.

Words: 1674 @no. , @Humbaba Please Threadmark

Reward: tribulation treasure. For turn 12
 
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Victor Wulf 4
Ascension Blood - What A Busy Day


A loud but calm voice commanded, "Forward," Victor's squad advanced as one, hounding their foes as they pushed into enemy lines.

It had been a month since Victor arrived in the Dawn Fortress.

"Hold." Their formation halted, but their attacks continued, defending their position with fury.

A long and grueling month of endless training. Of constantly being pushed to their limits.

"Yield." Without hesitation, they began to retreat. Yet even as they did so, they fought.

Victor loved it.

"Forward." Their momentum shifted. The enemy was caught unaware by the sudden change. A fatal mistake, which his squad capitalized on. The enemy tried to hastily defend, but it was too late. Spear met bronze and in moments the battle was over.

Then the "enemy" started to complain.

"How the hell did we lose!"

"That was cheap!"

"Yeah! That was against the rules!"

"We demand a rematch!"

Victor frowned. This was a sight that had been getting more and more common as the weeks had gone by. His squad gets challenged, they win with some "trick", and the losers whine. It only gets worse, too, as the difference between their squads grows.

No one likes losing to those weaker than you after all.

And Victor's squad was weaker. There was no denying that. The complete lack of any 2nd Heavenstage members confirmed it. But they had broken their backs to keep up with their more "receptive" peers. They've trained until they couldn't move, studied until they passed out, and cultivated every second possible. Victor even made it to 1st Heavenstage, despite his bloodline.

But they were still falling behind.

He hated it. He hated that their best was barely good enough. And he hated that people looked at their success and called them cheaters. As if the only way they could win was to cheat. He could stand being mocked, he didn't have time to be offended anyway. But to be called a cheater? That was too far. It was an insult to all the work they had done.

Victor opened his mouth, and-

-was cut off as the calm voice from before spoke: "You asked for a Standard Spar. That's exactly what we gave you."

Flavia Glyca, Victor's squad leader, was an impressive tactician and utterly unflinching in combat… and outside it.

One of the losers yelled back, "You suddenly switched attack patterns! Standard Spars specifically say you have to stick to one!"

"No, they don't." A calm but irritated voice cut in: "The rules say you have to stick to one set of attack patterns."

Macedonius Bardas, rearguard: he had practically memorized the Legionnaire rulebook.

The loser was about to argue again, but an annoyed voice shouted over him: "Let's just go already! We're wasting time!"

Augustina Sphrantze, vanguard like Victor, incredibly skilled but a bit of a hothead.

The fifth member of the squad, Lucas Planudes, only nodded. He was a rearguard, like Mace, but he did not talk as much. Or in general really. The other two members, Valens Philoponus and Calixta Gregora didn't say anything. They were both middle guard. Cali was from a minor noble family and Val was from a merchant one.

Victor sighed, "You're right Tina. Let's get out of here." It was true too. Each one of them had signed up for every training session possible.

And so the squad walked away from the still-sputtering losers.

As they walked, Flavia began to go over the fight. "Alright guys, that was a good session. We really 'moved as one' as Instructor Constantinus would say. Cali, you need to be a bit more aggressive with your attacks, but otherwise, you did fine."

Cali flinched at the call-out. "Sorry, I'm just a little tired."

"Hey, it's alright. Just make sure to get some rest." A concerned Valen said.

She smiled, "Please don't worry about me, I'm fine."

Flavia shook her head: "No, Val's right, Cali. Make sure you get a good night's sleep. We need you in top form. That goes for all of you. Especially you, Vic, I know you've been staying up to cultivate."

Victor rubbed the back of his head: "Sorry… I'll be more careful in the future."

She raised an eyebrow.

He sighed, "Fine. I'll go to sleep early tonight."

Flavia nodded, "Good," and continued, "That was our last scheduled spar of the day, so I'll see you all tomorrow. And…" She smiled, "Great work, everyone, keep it up."

Saying their goodbyes, the group split off to their respective classes. Flavia to her leadership lecture, Mace, Val, and Cali to their course on logistics, and Lu heading to his blacksmith instructor.

As for Victor? He had a lecture on Formations to get to.

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Formations. The pillar of Golden Devil combat. The thing that has allowed the Clan to not only survive against all the barbarians crashing against their walls… but to thrive. From the most basic Dust March to the Clan's signature Hoplite Formation. Each formation granted the Legions a vital advantage.

And Victor sucked at them.

Oh, he could go through the motions. Block this way to spread the force or step that way to move as one. But it doesn't matter. The moves are utterly pointless if you can't link your qi. If you can't do that one thing, you can't form a formation.

Not that Victor couldn't link his qi, mind you. His friend Lipita helped him get past that issue after he became a cultivator. No, his problem was staying connected once the Formation started moving. Especially in combat where things were constantly changing. It had been an ongoing problem since day one. And one that Lipita couldn't solve. That really frustrated her. He can't imagine why else she would agree to spend so much time helping him with his bloodline.

But back to the matter at hand: Victor ended up reaching out to Instructor Constantinus for a solution to his problem. After explaining his issue, the man actually had the gall to laugh! Apparently, he had already noticed the issue and was wondering when Victor would ask for help. It annoyed Victor at the time, but considering the advice he got, the annoyance was worth it.

"Get good at formations." He raised his palm as he saw Victor getting ready to complain: "No, listen. I mean that you have to get really good. So good that you can predict what the formation will do next before it even happens. I'd recommend taking every formation class available. No matter how irrelevant they may seem."

It may not seem like much, but it gave Victor a goal. It also gave him a reason to take a bunch of formation classes he absolutely would've passed up otherwise. As such, he was currently taking Formation History I, the Science of Formations, Extra Formation Practice, Formation In Combat, and the class he was going to now, Formations and Feng Shui.

He'd be lying if he said he enjoyed it.

But it was helping him understand formations better and that was all that mattered. With that, he stepped into the lecture hall.

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Lipita breathed and opened herself up to the world. Through her breath, she connected to the energy of the heavens and the earth, the potent vital qi of the Third Sea. Of course, being a Delphi, said energy looked askance at her invitation and slid into her body like a belligerent hooligan diving in deep with a painful aggravation. So really just like any other day since she'd begun cultivation.

Around the members of her training cohort sat in similar meditation, drawing from spirit stones practicing their cultivation. They had spent several hours drilling themselves in maneuvers and formations trying to get that unity of purpose that so characterized the renowned combat ability of the Golden Devil Clan. They were painstakingly slowly getting there with many fumbles and mishaps.

Lipita was refraining from as yet drawing on her weekly allotment of spirit stones as an Aspirant. The enclosed barrier of the Indomitable Peaks trapped qi within the Talk Wheat Fields creating an area of heightened spiritual energy not common to the Organ Meat Desert. It wasn't much, just enough to allow the average Aspirant to cultivate to the 1st Heavenstage in a mere 30 to 40 years but it presented a welcome opportunity to sharpen her sensitivity and strengthen the resilience of her will.

So she breathed letting raw environmental energy storm through her body tempering her will against the pain of cultivation enhanced by her family curse of the Harrowing. After acclimating to the unpleasantness, she began to practice familiar aura and sense expansion exercises drilled in her during her tutelage under the main family. Cycling qi through her eyes, nose, ears, skin, and tongue she carefully monitored how even the minuscule amount of qi she had access to at her low advancement improved acuity in those senses. Learning to handle the stimuli of boosted senses would take much more practice but she was getting there. Satisfied with her progress in physical enhancement, Lipita changed her focus to her spirit. Straining and pushing her intent outside herself, she felt for her peers around her awkwardly projecting her spirit sense around like a blind man groping in the dark. This form of active perception was a bit more difficult with the increased qi in the air dulling impressions. Her passive sensitivity was lit up with the potent blazes of mighty arrays and elders in her near environs radiating their spiritual presence but critical examination of veiled and distant targets would require more effort. Slowly she made out the presence of subtler signatures in the ground and in the air. Nearby to her rear, she could detect Callum cycling fairly deeply in meditation if the focused scrutiny she was putting him under didn't draw his notice.

Lipita spent several more minutes in practice, examining her peers and passerbys. A passing senior slapping at her projected sense giving her a mild headache from the backlash of the disruption taught her to be more cautious about choosing the subjects of her scrutiny. In time, she tired of her exercise and halted to switch to something more interesting. The Century Oasis Formation was a recent introduction to the curriculum for Aspirants in a manner of speaking. One hundred years of use in a clan with a long legacy such as the Optimatoi was not much really. She'd purchased a more detailed manual on the formation after the basic introduction in lectures had caught her attention. As an open formation that didn't just draw on the strength of the component members of the technique but also the dragonlines of sky and land, it might help her figure out a way to help her friend Victor Wulf bring up his abysmal competence with the techniques. Trying to assist him to get the requisite formations under his belt was pushing her to master them faster and better herself. Why she'd even put in a request to study a variant of the Kataphraktoi Formation, the Philoctetes, to see if the elemental transformation of qi to poison would be of use to Victor. Settling down to read, she drew deep on her dantian and sent delicate tendrils of wine up into her brain to engage her Palace of Memory. Borrowing texts was so much more profitable when you could easily memorize the content.

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Stretching his back as class ended, Victor began making his way back home. Today's lecture was fairly insightful today. The teacher gave a deep dive into how the feng shui that was a part of the formations worked… and how to disrupt your opponent's. It was a good class. A lot more practical than he thought it would be too.

All he had left to do for the day was visit Lipita so she could continue her experiments on him. They were part of her attempt to help him with his bloodline. She's trying to find a way for him to cultivate faster. Although, Victor did wonder how much Lipita was really learning. All she does is poke and prod him as he cultivates.

Victor's musing was cut short when suddenly, a familiar figure descended from the sky before him.

"Elder Ypsilanti!?"

She grinned: "Yep, yep, that's me! It's good to see you again, Victor! And I see you reached 1st Heavenstage, just as I knew you would!"

Victor smiled back, "Yeah, I managed it in less than two weeks. Unimpressive as that sounds."

She waved away his modest response: "Nonsense, Victor! You should be proud!"

"I guess…"

Seeing his expression, the Elder placed a hand on his shoulder: "I'm serious, Victor, this is an accomplishment. Getting to 1st Heavenstage with your situation? So quickly? That's impressive. Don't diminish that." The sudden comment took Victor off guard.

He had forgotten how insightful the strange Elder could be.

Trying to change the subject, Victor asked, "Anyways, since you're here, does that mean it's time for the-" he paused and looked around— "secret experiment?"

Ignoring his attempt at subtly, she loudly answered, "Yep, yep. It's time for the 'modified mutant bronze blood enhancement ritual experiment'! Or the MMBBERE, as I like to call it!"

"Why are you shouting! Isn't it supposed to be a secret?!"

She laughed: "Don't worry, don't worry. I made sure there was no one nearby! And even if someone did come around—" She pulled out a metal plate from her robes "-I have a privacy array."

"That's… fair. I guess." He sighed: "So what now? Are we going?"

The Elder nodded "Yes, yes, we are. Are you ready?"

He didn't want to leave Lipita waiting, but… "I am." This was more important.

He was sure she'd understand.

"If that's the case, then," She stretched out her arms: "Come, let me carry you."

What?

"What?"

"I said, let me carry you." She repeated it as if it made perfect sense.

"Why?!"

"We'll get to Senior Elder Destasia's lab faster."

"Is it really that far away?"

She nodded.

Sighing in defeat, Victor conceded and prepared to be picked up when… Elder Ypsilanti started laughing.

"You, you should've seen the look on your face!"

Dumbfounded by the sudden shift in attitude, Victor sputtered, "I- what- you-!"

That just made her laugh harder.

Watching on in utter bafflement at the hollering Elder, Victor couldn't help but start to laugh, too. Maybe it was the stress of the past few weeks or the ridiculousness of the Elder's joke, either way, he laughed. And for a few minutes, that's all they did. Laugh at a dumb joke.

And when the laughter finally died down, Victor cleared the tears from her eyes and said, "Thank you, I needed that.'

She smiled, "I could tell. And I'm glad you're feeling better. But we do have an experiment to get to. So we should hurry along."

"Right, lead the way."

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Despite Elder Ypsilanti's offer to carry him being a joke, she was being serious when she said it was far away. It took them an hour of running, or floating, in the Elder's case, to get there... despite already being in the research sector. The place was massive. Both the sector and the veritable palace they had arrived at.

It felt like a bit much for a research lab.

When Victor said exactly that, Elder Ypsilanti laughed: "You'd think so. But no. Experiments done by Core Formation experts can be quite dangerous, so it's best to keep them spread out and under multiple defensive arrays… especially when it comes to the Senior Elder." She grimaced at the end.

Victor suddenly felt a lot more worried about the coming experiment.

Walking right past the guards, they stepped into the entrance hall. It was abuzz with activity, as what he could only assume were assistants ran in every direction. Flagging one down, the Elder said: "Excuse me, we're here for an experiment involving mutant bloodlines. Where should we go?"

The man answered, "onefloordowntakealefttothethirdhallitsthefourthroomontheright" before immediately running off.

...Victor had no idea what the man had just said. But apparently, that was enough for Elder Ypsilanti, who began leading him through the halls and down a set of stairs. Stopping in front of a random room, the Elder turned to Victor.

"Okay, kid, this is it. Past this door, we'll be in Senior Elder Desrasia's clutches. If you want to turn back now, I completely understand."

Victor shook his head: "I came this far, haven't I?"

"Right. Just get ready, you might see some things you find disturbing-" she swung open the door, "-or not."

Instead of revealing the laboratory of a mad scientist what they saw was… a waiting room full of people. Just like that, all the wind was pulled out of Victor's sails. He had been expecting something truly horrifying. Or at least a place with vials, cauldrons, and array supplies all around.

"Oh well. Guess we have to wait." Completely unbothered, Elder Ypsilanti stood against a wall and said: "Go take a seat."

Doing so, Victor took a look around. The first thing he noticed was that there were a lot more people than he would've expected for a "secret experiment". Maybe it was more unadvertised than it was secret? Whatever the case may be, there were a lot of people. The room was almost full, with only a few chairs left unoccupied.

He also noticed how varied in appearance the other test subjects were. Unlike Victor and a few others, most had some physical indicator of their bloodline. Be it a minor discoloration or a complete lack of bronze skin.

As he looked around, more subjects came in. Just like with him, the aspirant would sit down while the Elder would stand against the wall. And after a few minutes, the last seat was filled. Right as the last person sat down, an unknown Elder came out of a side room.

"Everyone's here? Great! I'm Elder Destacsia, yadda yadda let's get started already! Eine Minnie Minny- you!" She pointed at a random trainee. "Come on, let's see what this will do to you. I'm just dying to see the results!"

Without even making sure they were following her the Elder walked right back into the room. Utterly confused, the trainee just stood there looking towards the Elder that I assume brought them.

The woman stuck her head out of the doorway: "Well, what are you waiting for? Let go!"

Reluctantly, the trainee followed her in. For a few moments, there was silence. Then there were screams. Screams that went on for a few minutes before abruptly cutting out. A few moments later, the trainee finally walked out. They were clearly shaken.

Elder Desacsia, however, was beaming: "That went great! Alright, let's see who's next… hmm, you!"

And that's how the next half hour passed by. Elder Destacsia would call someone in, they'd reluctantly go in, screams would happen, and after a few minutes they'd come out shaken but unharmed.

Eventually, Victor's turn came. Walking into the testing room he found himself in an operation room. One filled with strange devices, vials of glowing liquid, and jars containing… things. This was the kind of mad scientist lab Victor had been expecting. The kind he was finding a lot less interesting now that he was going to be experimented on in.

With unrestrained excitement, the Elder said: "Lay down on the operating table."

Doing as he was instructed, Victor immediately felt a number of restraints take hold. He couldn't even move his head. Steeling his nerves Victor took deep breaths as Elder Desacsia flit around the room humming to herself.

"There we go! Everything's ready. Now, from what your records state, you have the 'dull bronze bloodline' which means you're fairly qi resistant. Right?"

Victor didn't like where this was going.

"More specifically, you're resistant to qi overload."

He really didn't like where this was going.

"Which means I don't have to be as gentle with you!"

This was going to be bad.

"Now just hold still."

Not like I-

Victor's mind went white with pain.

While he was thinking of a sarcastic comment the Elder had plunged a massive needle filled with a molten red liquid into Victor's side. To say the next couple minutes were painful, would be a horrendous understatement. It was as if actual lava had been poured into his veins. As if heaven itself had decided to rend his flesh from his bones.

It felt like an eternity before the pain finally receded.

And when Victor's conscious mind finally reasserted itself, he found himself face to face with a disappointed Elder Desacsia. She was staring him up and down and tracing his body with her suffocating qi. He tried to speak up but she just hushed him.

Eventually, she stopped and declared: "A completely boring success."

He felt a wave of relief when he heard that. He had actually been worrying that this experiment would do more harm than good. But boring? He was totally happy with boring.

Releasing his binds she continued: "Your bloodline was refined as much as it could be… but that's it. There isn't a single mutation. Utterly disappointing. Oh well, I guess you can't win them all."

Being ushered out of the room Victor followed Elder Ypsilanti as she led him out of the building. And in silence, they began walking in the direction they came from. It took a few minutes before either of them spoke up.

Of course, it was Elder Ypsilanti: "I might as well get it out of the way. How are you feeling?"

Victor thought for a while before answering: "I have just gone through the most painful experience of my life. The kind of pain that I will never forget. All to be called a disappointment at the very end. Meaning it probably didn't help with my bloodline at all."

"But?"

He smiled: "But, I feel stronger than ever. It's like I jumped a small realm but, y'know, without actually jumping a realm." The Elder gave an amused nod as Victor went on: "And while it didn't help my bloodline problem, I don't it made things worse. So ultimately, I think things worked out."

"True, true. Although I do recommend you get a check-up, just to be sure. Maybe a certain someone who is probably waiting for you right now?"

Victor paused.

"You forgot, didn't you? Don't worry, don't worry, I'll get us there in a split second… if you let me carry you."

Victor violently shook his head: "No." Lipita would never let him live that down. "I'll just have to sprint. But first…" Victor gave a deep bow and said: "Thank you for all of your guidance Elder Ypsilanti. You've helped me more than you can ever know. And if there is ever a way I can repay you, please, just ask.

The Elder stared at him for a full five seconds before bursting out in laughter.

"Wha- hey! I'm being serious right now!"

She laughed: "I'm sorry, I'm sorry! It's just-" she took a deep breath, "-you'd need to get much stronger before even thinking of paying me back."

"Then I will."

The declaration surprised the Elder. It was said with such solid conviction she couldn't help but believe it was true. She smiled: "I look forward to it then."

"Uh, yeah. See you around."

And just like, he was back to normal.

"I hope we meet again."

Nodding, Victor took off towards Lipita's lab.

He just hoped he wouldn't have to drink that awful concoction again. He'd honestly prefer to get naked again, as embarrassing as that was.

---+++---

Lipita slowly circled Victor with a furrowed brow. Her fellow Aspirant was topless, torso bared in the cool air of the room.

"You know, I never asked how you got a personal workshop so soon as an Aspirant. That's not normal, is it?" Victor asked, trying to keep still as he'd been requested.

"This isn't actually mine." Lipita idly replied not breaking her concentration. "The family maintains an estate within the Dawn Fortress even though our MN major holdings are outside it. As such, there are a number of workshops available for allocation and I got a good word from my old master sent to the staff in charge of distribution."

Victor wondered what it would have been like to be part of an established cultivator family with multiple properties and enough wealth to allow juniors free access to equipped workshops. His background was much more modest. Then again from what his friend shared about her family's difficulties in cultivation maybe he was well enough as he was even with poor talent.

Stepping back as she concluded her examination, Lipita offered her opinion. "I don't know exactly what was in the infusion that Elder Destacia had you take but I can surmise its effects. It appears to be a booster to the Blood of Bronze advancing the progression of its concentration. When my master Chemos had me assessing Legionnaires offering up vitae I had the opportunity to test the average potency of the Clan's bloodline in the first two great realms. As far as I can tell you are manifesting the Bronze as though you were in Foundation Establishment."

Victor watched amused as Lipita trailed off into muttered introspection.

"Astonishing really. The archives indicate that the power of the Blood of Bronze infused into legionnaires has declined with the fortunes of the clan. How did they manage this resurgence? The Callista scion, Rina, is said to have Celestial Gold but that's a singular occurrence. Perhaps…"

Knowing from past experience that letting Lipita get lost in her head would leave him abandoned, Victor waved a hand in front of her, snapping her back to focus.

"What does this mean for me? I'm already having enough difficulty as is cultivating and participating in formations. Is this going to help me or hurt me?" He asked.

Lipita shrugged in response, "It certainly shouldn't hurt you. You weren't any less responsive to my spirit senses so it hasn't negatively affected your receptiveness. We'll continue testing and observing. I'm sure the Elder and her staff will call you back in for a follow-up. We'll know more then, when the effects manifest fully as the infusion settles in your system."

Sighing as another hope for increasing his qi receptiveness didn't pan out, Victor dressed himself. Lipita was already at the door and calling for him.

"Hurry up, slowpoke. I have an interesting formation I just learned that I want to try out and I got some of your training squad to help out. We'll be late if you don't move your thick skull faster."

Victor Wulf wondered how he'd ever become friends with this pain in his posterior. She was a headache and a half all by herself.

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Omake Bonus:
LST

Note: This took me way too long to finish. I started writing this a month ago. But once I reached the part of the actual experiment (even though I knew what I wanted to write) I got hit by a massive writers' block. And if it wasn't for @Insane-Not-Crazy help, I wouldn't have been able to get it done today either. So thanks for that.

But onto the omake itself. This is mostly a set-up chapter. We meet Victor's squad, get a glimpse of his situation in the clan, and see how hard his whole squad is working. I like it, but ultimately, not much happens.

As for my decision to go for an impact boost again... well, it fits the omake? I did consider going for a LST but... nah. Maybe next time. I have been convinced to go with an LST. It doesn't really fit story-wise but I think it's fine. I'll just go into the Qiguai realm in hopes from some bonus Impact to make up for it.
 
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Omake Bonus: Impact Boost
Honestly, if you want Impact, I'd recommend going for Qiguai with a LST.

Even a +2 is something that'd get you two turns worth of Impact boosts, and naturally you can get a lot more than that. Just look at Choiros (+10), Liu Mang (+11), Xiao Yingzi (+14), Muyi (+14), Maria (+16) and a whole lot of other Seeds that I cannot feasibly list without an excessively long post.

(I'm beginning to regret not telling you this back when you asked for the Impact boost the first time, considering the next time Yuan is opening after Turn 11 is Turn 17. Oh well, mistakes happen, I suppose.)
 
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Honestly, if you want Impact, I'd recommend going for Qiguai with a LST.

Even a +2 is something that'd get you two turns worth of Impact boosts, and naturally you can get a lot more than that. Just look at Choiros (+10), Liu Mang (+11), Xiao Yingzi (+14), , Muyi (+14), Maria (+16) and a whole lot of other Seeds that I cannot feasibly list without an excessively long post.

That is true... I didn't fully think that through. Can I change my decision after posting? I assume so since I just posted it but I want to be sure.
 
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