Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Personally I feel mortals must be good for something. Even if it is just production of large amounts of mundane goods.
 
What this says to me is that we should establish a Blood Path sub-division (under close supervision) to eat up and utilise the excess population growth.
We have sanctioned blood bath cultivators. And some bandits working for the clan. Happy mortals worked in mines, in farms and etc betters. Plus a reduced number of cultivators acting in the 'traditional' seeking revenge arcs of cultivation stories aim at the clan.
Plus is possible to focus in converting more mortals to cultivators but I am bias *looking at my own good seed* I really am.

Still is possible to a mortal to reach cultivation even in the desert. They only take a lot of time to so. And they don't have 12 hours to invest on that. Which is why my good seed is trying to change that.
Even a first heavenstage cultivator working in the place of a 'mortal' is already a way to allow said mortal to cultivate to create a positive circle of grow.
Edit: by taking a lot of time. I mean without taking spiritual stones to fuel themselves.
 
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Year 182 - The Scorpion Raiders


Sheng Yu remembered when he had become a Golden Devil.

It was four hundred years ago.

His daughter Xiao had been sick, sicker than she had ever been. Born a weak child with a weak constitution, every illness left her coughing and miserable, and any illness would easily find its way into her body. His city had been plauged, and Xiao had been dying. She had inherited the weakness of her dead mother, who had died of a disease ten years prior. He had gone to doctors, spent Spirit Stones and stavraton like water until he had been as poor as a mere commoner, despite being at the peak of Qi Condensation. The last thing left in their household was the chessboard and pieces her mother and left for Xiao, and he could not bear to sell it.

A friend of his suggested that he try having her infused with the blood of the Golden Devils. The Blood of Bronze gave a mighty constitution, it was said, though it was cursed. Heaven hated it, and would strike down those who bore it.

Yu hadn't cared. So what if Heaven would kill Xiao'er one day? She was dying now, and he had no way to save her.

He went to the local Legate and begged on his knees. The woman had listened to him gently, and had offered the Blood of Bronze, but only if Xiao'er agreed. She had been a girl of fourteen, and so scared. Afraid of dying, but afraid to have the blood of demons in her veins as well.

Yu remembered ruffling her hair.

"There there, Xiao'er. Your father is scared too, but he'll be getting the same blood as well. You'll see how strong and powerful I look once my skin is yellow!"

In front of her he'd had the blood infused into him to ease her fears, and she had taken it thereafter. Yu had not intended to be a Golden Devil, but for saving his daughter he would pay the price a hundred times over.

Her health improved over the coming months, and while she was still a sickly child, she was further from death. She even began down the path of cultivation as he had. They had spent wonderful years together, and she had lived to grow up, Yu doting on her every day. In-between slaying bandits and protecting the city from Spirit Beasts, he would come home whenever he could to drink tea and play chess with his daughter. When she was sixteen, he started losing, and when she was eighteen, he never won again.

Yu had risen into Foundation Establishment the year after she turned eighteen, named a peak expert in Bo Dian City. Xiao had chased after him, her footsteps faster than his own. At twenty-five she had reached the fifth Heavenstage of Qi Condensation, at thirty the eighth, and at thirty-three she stood at the peak of the ninth. She had become a wonderful young woman, and Yu rose slowly through Foundation Establishment, a leisurely path took as he enjoyed his life with his daughter.

He met her first husband, and then her second. Mortal men who both died doing mortal things, flitting by in a decade like mayflies. Good men, but difficult to connect with. When the second husband died, Xiao had become distant, only spending time with her friends and with him. Tea at the end of every week as he teased her about her Centurion, a stern-looking woman who nonetheless had a string of passionate romances with men and women alike. Xiao'er had no interest in her, but it amused him to see her blush as he made up more and more outrageous stories about how they might fall in love - from being dropped into a well together to meeting through scorpion cavalry racing. They still played chess, but his handicap grew greater with each passing decade, and he made a game filching pieces off the board with his immense speed, stealing what he could not take through strategy.

He still lost.

Every year had been a blessing, and he meandered along his path, not seeking greatness, merely to preserve the happiness he had found.

Then came the Trials.

He had been in Bo Dian City when the bells rang.

He had personally shattered two tokens, and fled thereafter into the desert once the city fell. Hunted like a dog, he survived though not gloriously. The loss of three fingers and an ear were painful at first.

Then word came.

Xiao'er had been killed, and the pain of the fingers and ear meant nothing at all.

He felt many things on that day. Guilt, that he had given her the Blood of Bronze, had brought the curse down upon her. Anger in endless amounts. He had wept and screamed and cursed, and at the end of it he felt many emotions fade. The happiness that had shaped his life was gone, and now there was only a cold fury at the order of things, an order that had demanded Xiao'er's death. He couldn't overthrow the Heavens, but previously he had thought such words were merely slogans, now he lived them.

With this sense of utter hatred he faced down the tribulation for Core Formation, rising to be one of the Elders of the Optimatoi. He strode into Mid Core Formation, a peak expert among peak experts.

It was all this that had led him to today. A group of scorpion cavalry - invented by the madwoman who had somehow risen to the position of a great teacher - to strike at the Jingshen borders. The same dogshit Righteous Path that bowed and scraped to the Heavens, that accepted that Xiao'er's death was somehow good and right.

He would teach them otherwise.

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When the Old Man had come to him, he had expected some glorious mission.

He had to admit, what he was doing was daring, but glorious? Perhaps not. He had put on the bandit's insignia, and had led his Legion to the... scorpion cavalry.

Insanity.

Within a few months they were drilled and prepared, and dressed in the strange robes. From there, they swept into Jingshen lands.

Firstly was the Yangshen Fort. The Spirit Cannon there was down for maintenance and Yu took his men, cracked an array on the wall, and shattered the cannon with his bare hands.

From there they moved towards Haoshen Fort, fortified well with strong cultivators behind it. Yet spies had been left, and the gate was opened. The cannons were in good order, and yet were not fired at all. The deep infiltration of the fort had led the commander to indolence, and the spies they had left behind managed to disable the cannon arrays temporarily. The cultivators who expected the cannons to butcher his Legions were disabled in turn, their walls brought down and their valuable cannons destroyed.

Wangshen Fort was the third Fort, and it was even easier to break. The commander there had left on discovering the fall of the Haoshen Fort, presumably to warn the Nascent Souls of what was happening. So much the better, thought Yu. The Great Spirit Cannon could not be taken, but it could be destroyed. It was the work of nearly a day for his Legion to ruin the massive cannon beyond hope of repair, and he burnt several powerful talismans the Grand Elder had given him to do it.

Striking deep into Jingshen lands, three forts had been levelled, and a great victory had been won.

With the destruction of Wangshen Fort, the cavalry turned for home, though at a great angle. One of the two Great Drills that the Jingshen protected with the fort was vulnerable, the other having been sabotaged.

Sheng Yu smiled, and shook the reigns, the scorpion speeding up. The skittering creatures moved at immense speed, and within the space of a few days reached the Great Drill. This was, perhaps, a little outside the scope of his mission, but the Old Man had told him to use his judgement. His judgement was that if they could shatter the Drill, it would be worth the death of his entire Legion. He doubted it would come to that, but the Jingshen deserved to suffer a little. Let the hypocrisy that spewed from their mouths be silenced, and if they complained to Heaven... well, so much the better. Yu had no intention of letting the Heavens off.

Sheng Yu rubbed his hands together, jumped off, and simply ran into the mine. The map of the mine had been seized from Haoshen Fort, and Sheng Yu was a powerful man. Despite the presence of two Core Formation elders defending the mine, he slipped by them, moving towards the drill itself. Reaching the bottom of the mine in mere minutes, he raised a hand, infusing his Qi into a talisman the Old Man had given him. True Dao expressions were the province of Nascent Souls and the peculiar Foundation Pillar Kings, but he could at least invoke this. He spoke, just as he had been told.

"That which is uncut, be cut. That which is food, become poison. That which is life, become death. The wheel turns and thou wilt be broken upon it. Heaven-Cursing Reversal Talisman!"

The talisman flared with light for a moment, and then was consumed by a piece of darkness far deeper than the mere darkness inside the cave. A piece of utter darkness that no sense could penetrate burnt around it, and reformed itself. It became a slice of pure darkness that slid through the drill, light around it becoming void. It touched the drill and shattered it in two. Around it rocks crumbled, the drill turned blood-red, and the ground itself felt empty, like it was death itself. Mushrooms shrivelled up and died, and the squeaking of bats died as they simply gasped their last breath. Their blood turned to poison and dripped on the ground, all the creatures in the cave stinking like the promise of decay and misery.

Even as other Core Formation enemies moved towards him he was gone, the talisman he had invoked distracting them as he slipped away. He jumped onto his scorpion, and the entire Legion of scorpion cavalry turned and ran for home. Racing along the desert, they were gone in a flash. As they reached the border of the Golden Devil lands once more, he felt a domineering presence arise.

There, in the sky, stood an old man, furious. Old Jingshen was short and knobbly, skinny and pasty, but the look of a Nascent Soul had never truly mattered.

"Good! Good! Good!", he shouted.

"You Golden Devils think you can simply ravage my lands like the Demonic filth you are? You have another thing coming, you dogshit trash! This old man will teach you all a lesson."

He brought his will down, raw power searing towards them. Sheng Yu winced, and held his head high. Better to die like a man.

Suddenly, out of nowhere, another old man arose, blocking the blow entirely.

"Konstantinos!", Old Jingshen spat.

"Yes, it's me.", said the other old man agreeably. Bronze-skinned and robed, he had a cleaver on his waist and carried a dagger in his hands nonchalantly, having raised it to deflect the blow slightly.

"Is this war? Are you coming into my lands to fight me? Know that-"

Manuel chuckled.

"Calm down, my friend. This is merely some hotblooded Flood Dragon Gang bandits merely overacting. The loss of all their brothers recently has made them mad with grief."

Jingshen looked as though he were about to spit blood.

"Flood Dragons? Every one of them has your bronze skin, your devil eyes! Do you think I am a fool?"

Manuel smiled.

"Of course not, my esteemed friend. But look more closely. Can you see the insignia of the Flood Dragon Gang on their robes? We Golden Devils make no demands on our Clan. If some hotblooded young men wish to join the Flood Dragon Gang, who am I to prevent them?"

Yu breathed out, ever so quietly. Honestly, robes over Legion-standard armour, bandit insignia pinned onto ten thousand raiders bearing the Blood of Bronze... there was no way the other Nascent Soul would believe it.

Old Jingshen's face went red with fury at the blatant lie.

"So if they are only Flood Dragon trash, why protect them?"

Manuel shrugged.

"Lady Yao has been distraught since the loss of her juniors. She asked me to safeguard them, as she has so few juniors left."

Old Jingshen growled.

"So you are preventing me killing bandits in my own land? Very good! Why don't I just-"

Manuel interrupted.

"Invite out your daughter? Please do, I have missed little Jiao since our last encounter. I am... most eager to continue her education. After all, she's simply hiding to the northwest, waiting for your signal, isn't she?"

Yu hugged his scorpion a little closer, urging it onwards. Two Nascent Souls? One had been hiding the entire time? Oh, death was coming for him in just a moment. He thought of Xiao'er. His daughter would be proud, he thought. What finer way to die than spitting in the eye of the dogs who served the same Heaven who had killed her?

The scorpions of his Legion continued to move, coming closer and closer to the lands of the Clan.

Jingshen smiled.

"So you know? What does it matter. If I bring both of us out-"

Manuel swept in even closer, raising his cleaver.

"Do you think I'm afraid of you? Bring out your daughter and fight me together if you want. If you want a war, then I'll bring you one. If you think you can beat me, two against one, then come. I remember when Sun Diaxing beat you into a pulp, Junjie. Do you remember what happened to Sun Diaxing?"

Manuel tossed his dagger from hand to hand, waiting.

"I will want reparations for this."

Manuel grinned.

"Of course! I guarantee all your losses will be made whole. As much as I wish to protect these young Flood Dragons, I could not in good faith let them damage you and have you suffer."

Old Jingshen's lips pursed, and he relaxed a little.

"So, less tariffs along the Scorpion Road? Spirit stones? What do you propose?"

Manuel's grin grew wider.

"Of course not! For the Clan to pay compensation would be most inappropriate. No, as you mentioned we are merely Demonic filth, and such an agreement would merely be insulting you. I spoke to Lady Yao, and she has promised to make good any losses from the compensation the Seven Divine Saber Sect pay to her. Given your Righteous Path owes her such a sum, there is no way they would ever default."

"You expect me to wait decades or centuries to be repaid?!"

Manuel shook his head.

"You have to understand, this is the most I could do. Yao'er truly wanted to wreck all your mines and even kill both of you to gain vengeance. She was most intent on destroying your Righteous Path's source of Spirit Stones to make the Saber Palace pay for their... indiscretions. I was with much begging able to talk her down to this. She said, and I apologise for the phrasing, you could either 'That old man can fuck off or fight. If he wants to make my juniors suffer than as many clansmen as he has, I'll kill.'"

Manuel's grin grew ever-wider.

Old Jingshen shook with rage.

"Do you truly expect me to-"

Manuel's grin faded, and he spoke over Old Jingshen.

"Let me explain something. My Golden Devil Clan is not easily bullied, and neither are our allies. If your Righteous Path thinks they can simply slaughter the noble Flood Dragons and leave unmolested, they are truly fools. You think your Righteous Path can slap us, but we can't slap you? Do you think we will simply sit down and take every kick like an obedient dog? I came here to tell you that there will be a substantial increase in the tariffs until the Seven Divine Saber Sect has repaid their debt, as interest on your Righteous Path misbehaviour. I of course know they will happily repay you, so do not consider this as us bullying you. We are merely transferring a debt owed, that you might collect on it at your leisure. If you dislike it, please, complain to the Saber Palace."

"What has that got to do with us? We were not the ones to betr- to fail to protect the Flood Dragons! You think just referring this to the Saber Palace means you are not slapping my face, Konstantinos? Perhaps I should bring my daughter out!"

Manuel shrugged.

"If you don't like it, you can always leave the Righteous Path. Of course, then such a debt could not be transferred, and we could simply fight about it. I won't stop you. We can see who would win, Clan facing Clan, just like Alexios wanted."

Old Jingshen trembled and looked down at the scenery. Ruined forts, a cracked cannon, and a shattered drill in a worthless mine.

"You will pay for this, Konstantinos."

Manuel smiled, and tossed his dagger lightly into his other hand.

"If you feel your neck has gotten tired, Junjie, come see me at any time. I'll lighten it by a head."

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As the last of the scorpion raiders filtered into Clan territory, Manuel slowly retreated, overseeing them. He wouldn't put it past Old Jingshen to try something, but the man was inherently a coward. Old Cannibal had taken his arm three centuries ago, and he feared battle that wasn't overwhelmingly in his favour. Normally such a gambit wouldn't have worked, but he had good reasons to inflict what he had, and it was within allowable limits. Oh, it'd hurt the Righteous Path, but only an idiot would support the Righteous Path unconditionally even as they slaughtered his allies. Without methods for punishing betrayal, no alliance could truly hold.

So it would be accepted as an allowable retaliation. After all, this was no time for brinkmanship. If the Righteous Path chose to push further, they might see the flow of Spirit Stones cut off entirely, and that could well be fatal to the War.

A few hours later, the raiders had split up, removing their Flood Dragon insignia as soon as they were over the border. Normally he wouldn't inflict such a slap in the face, but the slap in the face was the point here.

Manuel let out a sigh.

He really didn't know what he would've done if Old Jingshen had chosen to fight.

Fled, probably.

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10 Wealth gained.

1,500 Qi Condensation cultivators and 12 Foundation Establishment raiders dead.
 
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Sheng Yu remembered when he had become a Golden Devil.


Hello there, I recently binged pmuch all of the threadmarks in the Quest and I've really been enjoying it, but I would like to make one, possibly presumptuous, request.

Would you please more consistently post the Winning votes within the new chapters?

There is so much information that I've basically had to just guess on or dig through the thread to figure out because you happen to be skilled enough to Show and not tell, even if it takes a tens of thousands of words for you to get around to showing. (A perfect example being Konstantinos' Dao, I literally had no clue and nearly no way of knowing what it was supposed to be until like 70k words in he happens to say it. After that it's brought up with greater frequency, but you can understand my dilemma, yes?)

I practically leap for joy on the infrequent occasions that you do include them as I am thus able to get a glimpse into the choices of my fellow readers without needing to buckle down for an extra million+ words worth of omake and 300+ pages of the thread.

Thank you for hearing me out and considering my words, regardless of your decision moving forward
 
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Hello there, I recently binged pmuch all of the threadmarks in the Quest and I've really been enjoying it, but I would like to make one, possibly presumptuous, request.

Would you please more consistently post the Winning votes within the new chapters?

There is so much information that I've basically had to just guess on or dig through the thread to figure out because you happen to be skilled enough to Show and not tell, even if it takes a tens of thousands of words for you to get around to showing. (A perfect example being Konstantinos' Dao, I literally had no clue and nearly no way of knowing what it was supposed to be until like 70k words in he happens to say it. After that it's brought up with greater frequency, but you can understand my dilemma, yes?)

I practically leap for joy on the infrequent occasions that you do include them as I am thus able to get a glimpse into the choices of my fellow readers without needing to buckle down for an extra million+ words worth of omake and 300+ pages of the thread.

Thank you for hearing me out and considering my words, regardless of your decision moving forward

That's fair. I usually leave them out because they're a bit unsightly, but I'll edit the last one in and put them in going forward.
 
Who says Heaven has no eyes? Or maybe it was too distracted to notice us, either way I think this Raid was an success. Just left to see if we got some actual Wealth in addition to the satisfaction of kicking Jingshen in the nuts.
 
Occi said on discord he'll put the exact wealth gain in once he's got to his clan info stuff, but we've gained a substantial chunk of wealth for low losses.

Also, great update. Reading righteous indignation and Manuel once again bluffing with a shit hand is fun.
 
Occi said on discord he'll put the exact wealth gain in once he's got to his clan info stuff, but we've gained a substantial chunk of wealth for low losses.

Also, great update. Reading righteous indignation and Manuel once again bluffing with a shit hand is fun.
The key to bluffing is every so often you have an awesome hand.
1,500 Qi Condensation cultivators and 12 Foundation Establishment raiders dead.

Even success feels somewhat bitter. I assume we can't actually spend the wealth this turn.
 
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Helel Ben Shar 1- The Cabbage Merchant
Helel Ben Shahar 1- The Cabbage Merchant

Helel Ben Shahar enjoyed the feeling of the sunshine upon his skin as he walked though the city. He had been spending his so much of his time inside focused upon creating arrays for the clan that the feeling of the radiant sun was rare for him indeed. Focusing upon his task he looked upon the stalls the mortal followers of his most glorious clan ran. With his keen eye his observed the produce that was on display searching for that which would be worthy for him to take back to fulfill his needs. Sudden he sensed the use of Qi, gazing upon what he sensed he saw a young cultivator bald with blue tattoos run pass a cart the wind pushing it aside as he sped past. "My cabbages!" the merchant cried out in despair as the cart began to fall dooming the cabbages to be spoiled. With righteous anger Helel drew upon his might, the arrays he had carved into his Meridians fulling his body with the power of his spirit. The wind bushed past his cheek as his leaped forward grabbing hold of the falling cart and righting it so that the cabbages would be saved. "You honor me greatly most gracious lord." Praised the mortal cabbage merchant tears in their eyes as they thanking him for his salvation of their efforts. Glancing over the cabbages Helel found that they were most high quality indeed. While paying for the lot he noticed a feather which was bright orange the color of flame. "From where did you receive that beautiful feather?" he questioned the mortal. "Oh I found it in my cabbage patch one day with three missing cabbages. I would be honored if the most gracious lord would accept it as a gift for such blessed patronage.". Nodding his head Helel accepted the gift granting the cabbage merchant much face. It was only later when he held the feather in his hands that he felt the Qi within it. This was a phoenix father truly his deeds had been well rewarded. Swiftly he used it to for a talisman to take advantage of the restoration properties of the heavenly treasure. Soon he held in his hands the Life Restoring Phoenix Flame Treasure.

@occipitallobe, @Alectai, @TehChron

A Lifesaving Treasure please
 
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Phew. I admit I thought we might be scuppered there but it all turned out nicely enough.

That said, we've got to expect Jingshen to try something to hit us back next turn when we're recovering. Be wary.
 
Konstantinos Papadopoulos 5 - The Bucephalus Times
The Bucephalus Times



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Konstantinos finished up the latest issue of the Bucephalus Times with a flourish, and sat back, bringing a cigar to his lips. It had been a good month. Sales figures were up, he'd expanded circulation further into the Fecundity Storks, and to top it all off he'd reached Ninth Heavenstage last week after a mere two years. Life was Good.

Which is, undoubtedly, why he heard a knock on his door and a high-pitched squeal from one of the Aspirant interns "Message for you, Editor Papadopoulos. It's from Legate Staurakia!"

"Hand that jade slip over then, will you? And fetch me a Spirit Stone and the latest reports on that spider-tribe cultivator while you're at it!"

"Uhhhh… there's no jade slip, sir. Just a message from her that she'd like to see you to discuss a report by someone called… Antonius?"

Konstantinos grimanced as he dragged on the cigar for a long pull. "I'll head out to deal with this - Make sure those reports are on my desk when I get back!" Taking the dismissal for what it was, the intern quickly fled the office, and Konstantinos contemplated the meaning of the summons, and why the rising bloodhound of internal clan affairs had been namedropped as he finished the cigar.

Was it the Liu Zhang rumours he was putting to print, did they step over the line on reporting on the Storks? The ink had barely dried on that story, but Legates had their ways - Core Formation was a scary thing after all. No, he'd been careful to give enough juice for that to sell but not so much you could actively identify the target - there was a limit to how far a vassal Elder could be pushed before he started making complaints, and he didn't want to have to deal with that. Could it be the six-shot smuggling exposé he'd done last month? Nah, it was only a rehash of Jin Muyi's work and Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora would have already been aware of it long before, from the golden disciple's reputation.

His dalliances with some of the yet-to-be exploited resources a decade back? Maybe, but he should be good there. No crime in harvesting genuine resources you stumble across with the help of Fate after all, even if you did give fate a little nudge in the ribs in the first place. Besides, it wasn't like the takings were much, just enough seed capital to get the Times off the ground. It would all work out, right?

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It wasn't a long walk to the central redoubt of the Apokía where Ionnina Staurakia commanded from - the Bucephalus Times had managed to afford an office in the central square, with space for the larger Spirit Press they now needed. The guards quickly let him through when he gave his name and Konstantinos walked into an office brimming with paperwork, and Legate Staurakia processing it at speeds faster than his eyes could follow.

"Sit" she commanded, barely looking up from her paperwork as she commanded him forward. Konstantinos perched uncomfortably on one of the unusually low-legged chairs and looked up at the Legate.

"So" she began, eyes never leaving her paperwork "a little Qi Condensation junior has been a good bureaucrat and been reviewing the output of our new holdings, checking for corruption and the like. And he found an interesting trend of low-priority developments nearby the Apokía being more depleted than the reports suggested when the work groups arrived. Some more digging found that significant hauls of such resources had been recorded as salvaged with their finders fee paid year before, by you."

"Now, that itself would not be a crime against the Clan - stumbling into miraculous treasures is a sign of Fate, after all, and we are in a Heroic Age. Except Antonius really did go the extra mile, and checked the history of the records on these sites with the Dawn Fortress… and discovered that a Centurion Komnene had checked them out, under the purpose of "to aid Delatores Konstantinos Papadopoulos in his recruitment campaign"

Konstantinos opened his mouth to formulate a defense against the entirely true accusation, but was unable to get a word out as she bulldozed straight over him.

"Since you've actually put them to good use rather that frittering them away, I'd normally just charge you the appropriate fine. But you've raised yourself to the 8th Heavenstage over just 15 years, so I had an idea…"

"Ninth, actually. I broke through last week" Konstantinos managed to interject. Important he tried to regain *some* control on this conversation before she ordered him around.

"Huh" was the reply, and the Legate took a pause from her paperwork for a moment to focus her Qi senses on Konstantinos, and he felt the pressure of her Dao pressing on him from all directions.

It was only for the briefest of moments, but that was enough to knock him off guard and shaking as the Legate resumed the flow of the conversation.

"Just makes you more suitable for your task. You see, Archeget-Grand Elder Konstantinos has been asking for us to see if any of our Heroic Talents were free for a little expedition in Longevity Stork lands. What the Grand Elder wants with our talented juniors is beyond me, but with most of them out in the Song Empire, you're going to be my volunteer and earn me some kudos with him, you understand?"

Konstantinos blinked. That was *not* where he expected the Legate to take this conversation. And if the Grand Elder himself wanted talents… it would either be a disaster or a triumph. But he knew from Legate Staurakia's reputation that disappointing her was certain to be a disaster. So no matter what unknown terrors he was being thrown into, they would be better than the certain terrors of her displeasure.

"Of course, Legate. I will endeavor to not let you, the Grand Elder, or the Clan down. How soon do you want me to be ready for deployment?"

"A few years yet junior, I do recommend you focus further on your combat skills than the required monthly formation drills, junior. It would be displeasing to me if your performance in whatever task the Grand Elder wants you for is unsatisfactory. Dismissed"

As the Legate went back to processing her forms at blinding speed, Konstantinos rushed out of her office, mind whirling with ideas. He'd have to hand the Times over to some subordinates, but that was less on an issue than actually finding a fitting combat Art. And then surviving whatever utter terror the Grand Elder had cooked up to test his talents. This was going to be tricky.

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Konstantinos Papadopoulos will enter the Cloud Demon Caves, willing to spend 2 life saving treasures. I'd like a third from this omake as well, to help against the trials.
 
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Nice. That raid now became so much worth.

If I am remembering right, this means we now have all the Righteous Powers bordering us be weakened even just slightly before we undergo the Trials. If we blunt the damage of this Trial again, we just might skew the risk/reward ratio of the Trials so it is no longer as appealing to the invaders as it is supposed to be.

We still have that Ninth Prince plot line hanging over our heads though.
 
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I came here to tell you that there will be a substantial increase in the tariffs until the Seven Divine Saber Sect has repaid their debt, as interest on your Righteous Path misbehaviour.
Just wanted to point this out, apparently Manuel is increasing the tariffs on Jingshen, so we might also gain a boost to turn income.
It depends on whether the 10 Wealth was gained from raiding loot or if that's the result of the tariffs.

"Archegetes. I have, at great cost and to the loss of quite a bit of wealth discovered what Jingshen Clan were bringing across the mountains. It is a Grand Mountain Drill, a drill that can be expanded to the size of a small mountain and used to excavate mines en masse where veins of Spirit Stones are discovered. It will not increase their immediate wealth hugely, but will serve as perhaps an increase of an estimated 10-15% of income for their Clan.
One of the two Great Drills that the Jingshen protected with the fort was vulnerable, the other having been sabotaged.
Old Jingshen trembled and looked down at the scenery. Ruined forts, a cracked cannon, and a shattered drill in a worthless mine.
So just wanted to highlight an important fact - the drill that was destroyed in the raid might be the same type as the 'Great Mountain Drill' which the Jingshen secretly smuggled back in Year 40. Back then, they negotiated a deal for tax exemption to avoid announcing the Drill when applying tariffs.

This is a huge deal if so, because one of those drills was estimated to boost Jingshen's overall income by 10-20%.
 
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Maria 25 -Dodging Echoes (Part Three)
Dodging Echoes (Part Three)
Maria Turn 10 Fourth Omake
The letter's first draft, Maria had to admit, had been… aggressive. Too much so. She'd had every right- every right – to be angry, but Letha had tactfully reminded her that this was about trying to get results, not just make her feel better. This one was much better.


To the honourable Shanshu, Student of Fire and True Daughter of Xin,

I write to you in hopes of addressing the grave misunderstanding that lies between us. I must confess, I do not know what I have done to offend you so. I have had few chances to enjoy your company, but our time in the camp outside the line seemed cordial enough.

It is thus with great surprise I received your most recent letter. As one who seeks your teachings, however, I know it is my place to seek enlightenment in all things, and righteousness in my actions. I beg your forgiveness for my wrongdoing, and ask only that you tell me what I have done and how I might redress it.

I remain,

Your hopeful student,


Captain Maria of the 263rd​.


It was good. It was very good. She'd had Letha go over it a few times to really finesse the language, and quite frankly, it had worked. There was no way in hell Shanshu could resist that.

---

The centurion – Myron – glared at her.

"Explain this to me again," he said calmly. Maria winced.

"It- the letter. It exploded."

"Why?"

"The… writer was upset with me."

"And thus tried to set you on fire."

"Yeah."

"Which is why your bedroll's scorched to hell."

"Yeah."

"Clean it up, Captain."

"Yes Centurion."

---

It took Maria a few days to really get a handle on what had gone wrong. Well. No. It had taken her a day. The previous two were spent strangling her fury by strangling Alliance cultivators. But that didn't matter. She'd gotten it in the end.

Shanshu knew Maria a little – at least well enough to know how she spoke. A letter like the last one, all clan-fancy and overwritten – would scream insincerity. If she wanted to convince the Sorcerer she was being honest about all this, then she'd have to actually sound like herself.

Shanshu,

Got your last letter. Funny. Think I got the message, too, though. You're right. I can't dress myself up to be something I'm not. So being honest as I can, I'll try again.

I want to study fire techniques. Partly that's tactical; I'm a CQC specialist right now, but that's not enough if I want to really push myself. Lot of it's personal, though. Fire feels right. It's powerful, it's energetic, it's alive – not slow like earth or soft like water.

I want to study with you. Lot of reasons why. Seeing you kick ass in that first fight at the camp was great. Saw you on the Line too, before we all got shuffled around; you can hit like a tank from a mile away, and you're not afraid to get up close and personal either. I respect that. I respect you.

That's what I want. Now let me explain what I don't want.

Your sect's arts are your business, not mine. Don't know a cultivator in the whole damn world who's happy to give up their personal secrets, and I'm not asking you to give me yours. You said once that there's sorcerers in your order spent their whole
lives trying to understand the Dao of Fire. Be the worst kind of disrespect to that if I tried to steal what they'd learned. I was hoping you could help me with the basics – the simple stuff. That's all.

I don't want coddling, either. Have to imagine you've had noble-born assholes try and tell you how lucky you are that they even
want your teaching. Have to imagine you lost your shit at them for it, or spent half the lessons beating the stupid out of them, if they even lasted that long. You won't need to do that with me. You're the smart one. I have to listen, and I have to do what I'm told. Might be hard to believe, but I can do that too.

So with all that said, let me ask again, honest and humble as I can. You are Shanshu, Student of Fire and True Daughter of Xin. How have I wronged you? What must I do to fix it? And may I learn from you?

Maria.



Yes. Yes, that was better. That was honest.

---

"Another exploding letter."

"Yes Centurion."

"Bigger, this time, I note."

"Ah- Yes, Centurion."

"Seems to have caught three or four other bedrolls."

"It does, Centurion."

"And yours seems to be charcoal."

"That- I mean, they still work. You can still sleep on them."

"Oh, can you? Well. How wonderful. How about you demonstrate? Replace everyone else's. Leave yours."

"Yes Centurion."

---

It had taken her notably – notably – longer to calm down, this time. The Red Place had eventually withdrawn completely, claiming exhaustion, and Draconis had gotten a haunted look on his face after the thirteenth engagement when she'd torn out a Time Shatter's spine and throttled them with it. Still. She'd managed it. She was balanced again. And the latest letter was definitely going to be the one.

The problem was, she'd come on too pushy. Shanshu was clearly pissed off with her. There wasn't a way around that. She had to fix it first before anything else.


Shanshu,

I'm sorry. My last few letters have been stupid. In fact, very stupid. I keep talking about me. What I want. That doesn't matter, though, because this should be about you. You're the master, here, and I've pissed you off. Can't get anywhere until I fix that.

So I'm sorry. I've clearly done something bad. Really bad. Owe you something for it. I want to give it to you – to show you that I wish I hadn't done it. But to do that, I need you to tell me what I've done. I'm sorry I have to ask that, but I do.

How can I fix this?


Maria.

---

The bags under Myron's eyes were starting to turn into caravans. His brow kept twitching. His fingers, flexing over and over into fists and violent hand-gestures, were quite frankly alarming.

"Another. Exploding. Letter."

"Centurion-"

"An even bigger. Exploding. Letter."

"It's complicated. I was trying-"

"And this time, the ashes are moving."

"…Yes."

"Spelling out obscenities."

"Yeah. Yeah, they-"

"Clean. It. Up."

"Yes Centurion."

---

A month later, Maria stalked back into the fort, almost completely soaked with gore. The Patrols she'd taken with the squad hadn't been enough. She'd started grabbing solo runs too. Even with all that, she could feel her anger crushed down in her chest like an angry little vibrating ball.

Alright. Bitch wanted to be like this? Maria could be like this too.


Fuckwit,


I don't know what precisely happened to make you like this. Have to imagine you were dropped on your head a few times, then fed lead and mercury every day till the dumbass had settled in nicely. Either way, it must have been something big, because you are without a doubt the stupidest fucker I have ever met.

Every letter I have sent you so far, I've been courteous, respectful, polite. Despite that, and the fact that I have done
nothing to you, you keep responding with explosions. My centurion's so close to a psychotic break the healers are talking about forcing him to go on leave. My bedroll is a scorchmark on the floor and that's it. Worst of all, you are so close to ruining explosions for me. I LOVE explosions. That's what you have done.

Now clearly you don't have it in you to just talk like a grownup – again, probably all that brain damage – so I'm going to talk to you like the backwards fuckwit you are.

TELL. ME. WHY. YOU. ARE. MAD. If only so I can finally fucking appreciate it for the morally upright pinnacle of my life it clearly is. Pissing you off must be a moral duty.

Fuck yourself, answer the question, or both.


Maria.

---

Myron stood outside the dormitory, still on a bone deep level. Maria wasn't sure if he'd finally calmed down, or moved so deep into a sleep-deprived hate-space that he'd ended up going all the way around to relaxed again. Both were legitimate possibilities.

Either way, she was about to find out. His eyes locked on her.

"Captain."

"…Centurion." He stared at her. "Look," she said, fighting down panic, "if there's been another letter, it's not my-"

"You have a visitor," he said, tone frozen. "She's waiting inside."

"…A visitor."

"Oh yes. I decided to give you the room. Why don't you go say hello?"

He stepped aside, face still utterly unreadable. The panic was starting to rise harder, now. This… this felt bad. This felt bone deep bad. Clearly, though, the only way out was through. She stepped forward, and pushed open the door.

The heat hit her like a ten-foot sledgehammer, almost knocking her over. Even that wasn't as bad as the glaring light that came pouring out, scorching her retina with awful green-purple light as she squeezed closed her eyelid that moment too late.

"Ah. Maria," said Shanshu. "Come in."


The anger flared inside her again. She felt the Red Place shift uneasily in her mind.

No. No, I am not going to give this overblown spark witch the satisfaction.

She forced her eye open again, and glared directly into the flames. She could feel her iris close pin-tight to try and keep the light from blinding her. Her cultivation was already hard at work repairing the damage even as it happened, knitting together shredded optic nerves and soothing scorched vitreous jelly.

It hurt. But Maria knew pain.

"Got my letter then, " she said evenly, and stepped inside. The heat was appalling, but Shanshu was keeping it just this side of damaging. The sorcerer herself was settled neatly on a chair in the center of the room, as calm and unbothered by the heat as if she was sitting in a cool teahouse. Her lined face was set in a half-smile, lips quirked with just a hint of mockery.

"I did," she said. "All of them, in fact."

"Yeah?"

"Yes."

"Good."


Maria closed the door behind her, and walked deeper into the dormitory. It would probably be best to stand, she decided. The rest of the furniture was wreathed in flames, for one thing. More importantly, though, she wasn't going to look weak.

"So what's got you to come say hi, then? Since you seemed so happy with our correspondence."

Shanshu tilted her head at that.

"Happy."

"Kept replying."

On closer inspection, Maria noticed that nothing in the room seemed to actually be burning. The flames were dancing just a hair above everything, and the heat seemed to be countered somehow. Directed, maybe. Clever little stunt, she had to admit. This would read like an angry cultivator defending her honour, not destruction of resources. Shanshu probably wouldn't get more than a slap on the wrist.

"It seemed rude," said the sorceress, "to just ignore you. You took so long composing them. Especially the last one."


Ah. So that's why she was here. Maria felt a savage pang of satisfaction. Seemed even witches had feelings. She gave a sharp-edged little smile.

"You enjoy that, did you? I liked writing it."

"I could tell," said Shanshu, voice cold.

"Very cathartic."

"I could call you out for that," said the sorceress. "That kind of provocation? Doesn't matter that my sect is your clan's vassal. There isn't a righteous in the land who wouldn't understand. My own masters might even praise me for it. Standing up for the honour of the Five Towers."

"Do it then. Give me an excuse to beat you around a courtyard for a few hours."

"Oh yes. That's certainly in the best interests of everyone involved. Wasting our time on another stupid duel. It's not like there's a war on, after all."


Maria shifted. Bitch had a point.

"So what, you want to talk this out?"

"I want you to stop sending me letters. That, I think, should be obvious."

"No."

Shanshu's face cracked for a moment. Anger flared in the clenching of her jaw.

"I can take this to your centurion," she growled.

"Third threat you just made that you can't back up," Maria snapped back. "Starting to bore me."

"You think he won't be interested his captain's harassing a vassal?"

"Just sending letters. Got copies of all of them. Not crossing any lines by asking you to teach me."

"' Have to imagine you were dropped on your head a few times,'" quoted Shanshu, quietly furious, "'then fed lead and mercury every day till the dumbass had settled in nicely.'"

Maria shrugged.

"One bad letter, then. I'll get latrine duty for a few months, and a handful of bad patrols on the Scorpion Road. I can live with that."


It wasn't true. The Optimatoi would come down on her hard if she kept this up. A bad game of Ludus, however, could only be played through. She kept her edged smile on and watched Shanshu's face. The Sorceress was starting to lose it, she could tell.

"You cannot imagine this will endear you to me."

"No."

"Not exactly a good way to secure my tutelage, then."

Maria shrugged again.

"So why-"

"Asked you the same damn question," she said. An edge had creeped into Maria's voice that she hadn't meant to put there. "Several times. You brought us here, not me. I just responded."


There was a pause. Then Shanshu gave a mirthless laugh.

"Rude little pup, aren't you?"

"I'm 60 years old."

"Barely out of your swaddling clothes." She leaned back, eying Maria, her face a cold mix of dull, tired anger and calculation. "Well. Alright. Let's be as clear as we can be, then. You will never be my student."

"Kind of got that, yeah."

"Good."

"Why not?"

"You mean, ignoring your persistent rudeness? Your inability to take no for an answer? Your manipulative streak?"

"Manipulative?"

But Shanshu kept going, voice brutally calm. "Ignore all that, Captain, and we get back to a simple fact. You're an ingrate."


Maria felt the tethers on her anger start to shift and give. Ingrate. Again.

"Am I."

"Oh yes."

"Well. Got to say, that's a surprise." She stalked closer, till she was towering over the sorcerer. "Want to explain your logic?"


Shanshu's eyes were cold. She rose slowly from the chair. They were barely inches apart, now, caught up in the intimacy of their contempt.

"Do you know," she asked, voice whisper-quiet, "how often people receive… visions? As you did? Never. I've checked. Not a single record I've run across suggests, even for a moment, that anyone has ever been given what you were. And you ran away."

The fire surged up. Shanshu's teeth bared as she forced it back down.

"Not only that," she went on, "but you'd had one before. Two visions of your Dao – your Way, and your piece of The Way, the path of the universe itself. Reaching out to you. Revealing itself to you. A thing thousands search for, both for power and for its own sake. Enlightenment. And you RAN. AWAY."

The flames crackled now, the heat starting to leave scorchmarks on the wall. Maria felt her own anger start to gutter in the face of Shanshu's. In its place was shame. A growing seed of it, spreading roots through her by inches.

"So many of us do this because we want to rule. Or be strong. Even so as to be able to survive. But once – once! – Cultivation was done to allow us to pursue the truth. Ascension was worthwhile for its own sake, because with it came greater and greater understanding of the universe, the soul, the nature of all things. That was all. A handful still pursue that. They spend centuries, MILLENIA, looking for what you have."

"Alright," muttered Maria.

"And you ran away."


They stood there in silence, after she was done. It was only the crackling smash of the chair collapsing that brought them out of it. Shanshu turned to stair at it as it burned. It seemed to dawn on her how tenuous her control had become.

"Damnation," she muttered, and closed her eyes. The heat receded slowly as the flames calmed again, then dwindled down to a thin stream of fire that coiled up through the air and wove itself into a scarlet lariat around her neck. The flames stilled further, and were gone. In their place was a thick rope of red prayer beads.

The room was dusted all over with scorchmarks. Shanshu's face twisted in embarrassment. "Damnation."

And then there was another long, painful moment. Then the sorceress brushed past Maria, stopping at the doorway to look back at her.

"Don't write to me again," she said, quietly. "Ever."

And then she was gone.

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Oh Gods I'm really not sure about this arc. Oh well. Started now, better finish. @ReaderOfFate @TehChron @Kaboomatic , may I have a threadmark please?
 
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@occipitallobe If Old Gold dies before we're ready to raise up another Nascent, does that mean "Lady" Yao would be taking over? I expect it would be a game over, but it still strikes me as an interesting chain of events to consider.
 
Oh no she would never take over only Golden Devils are in charge of golden devils, it'd be game over for sure if that happens.
Only our upcoming nascent has a chance to take command but only if she become nascent not before.
 
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