Warhammer Fantasy: Divided Loyalties - an Advisor's Quest

[LordPanther14]

[X] Warder of Mathilde
[X] Champion of Champs
[X] Knightbringer
[X] The Dusk Rider

 

[Bucarcar]

[x] Dämmerlichtreiter

 

[WinterLantern]

[X] The Knight Rider

Couldn't help it

[X] Knightbringer

 

[liquidsnake4673]

How about

[X] Shadows at Knight

Edit: or
[X] Watching shadows at knight

 

[Omegahugger]

[><] Wight Knight

 

[Grimm Atlas]

[X] Dämmerlichtreiter
[X] Knightmear

 

[Mopman43]

I should clarify, I'm not exactly clamoring for the thread to name the Rider something snappier in quest, I'm asking for a snappier name for the Rider for discussion purposes, because I do not want to write Dammerlichtreiter every time I talk about our goon.

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That Dam Rider?

 

[buli-buli]

[X] Knightmear

 

[NexusEye]

[X] Dämmerlichtreiter

 

[Nerdasaurus Rex]

It is, in fact, so simple that after you sketch out your first draft for how to make that happen, you spend some time going over it for some hidden flaw, because it isn't supposed to be this easy

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"Surely there must be some reason this is a terrible idea."

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Mathilde, when faced with something simple and straightforwards: "There's nothing about this I understand".

 

[Gap]

[X] Knightmear
[X] Knightbringer
[X] Nightbringer

The rider forms is the legend of herself isnt it? Why are we using only "knight" as an option? Why not Dame?

[X] Dame of Dusk
[X] Deadly Dame

 

[Orbmorb]

[X] Knightbringer

 

[Zaealix]

[X] Dämmerlichtreiter
This totally won't allow Mathilde to transfer her mind and legend into an undying apparition that continues to serve the empire king after she is gone- did I say that out loud?

 

[Ambit]

[X] Knightbringer
[X] Nightbringer

 

[picklepikkl]

What a delight to wake up to.

its blank face communication nothing

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Communication -> communicating

If I had more for you, you'd be getting it.

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Thank you for giving us what you can even if the bulk of the update is uncooperative. I am very sympathetic to this and it's greatly appreciated.

[X] Nightbringer
Strictly better than Knightbringer because it forces the reader to do the work to make it into a pun, and forcing the other person to be complicit in their own pun suffering makes it a million times funnier. I hope this can overtake the other version.

 

[Rotekian]

[X] Rote Warden
I practically have to vote for this one.

[X] Knightmear
[X] Dämmerlichtreiter
[X] Knightbringer

 

[Derpmind]

[X] Nightbringer

 

[Abhorsen]

I think we are all forgetting the best name: FIREBALL

Fog Immersed Riders from Essence Bound Apparitions Located Liminally

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Though to update it to reflect what we now know:
[X] FIREBALL
-[X] Fight Instigated Riders: Essence Bound Apparition Located Locally

Approval vote:
[X] Knightbringer

 

[Agent X20]

[X] Waking Knightmare

edit
[X] Nightmare
[X] Knightmare
[X] Nightbringer

 

[NexusEye]

[X] Dämmerlichtreiter
[X] Nightbringer
[X] Yarkhazhunki

 

[ichypa]

[X] Mathy2

We have finally obtained the "spookiness on its own."

 

[AzuraNyx]

[X] Nightbringer
[X] Knightbringer

 

[DeadmanwalkingXI]

[X] Nightbringer

 

[Dheer]

[X] Nightbringer

 

[glyph]

It comes at dusk. It is (partially) a horse. It brings terror to our enemies. It is a

[X] Nightmare
[X] Knightmare