Orc Quest; or, A Critical Examination of Agency Through in Interactive Fiction (Warcraft)

I guess the Scarlet Crusaders or Danrothan told him later.
Yea from Lordaeron 4,

Dathrohan looks at you. "There may be much you do not know regarding these matters, and no doubt the departure of your people before the war against the Scourge means you're lacking in particular information if you don't know the place of Ner'zhul in all this."

"Ner'zhul!" you exclaim, taken aback, how did he fit into all this? As far as you know he'd been destroyed by his own magics and cast into the Twisting Nether twenty years ago or more.


I do find it quite amusing that we as players and people engaged in the lore know a fair amount about actually quite obscure events. I wrote Grok for example as not acutally knowing the Scourge aren't part of the Legion anymore, because why would they?

1. How many people are there?
And if we can ask questions of Drum Fel and co
2. What do they want?
3. What do they need?
1. Depends on whether you mean right there or in general. Let's say there's a few thousand orcs in the hammerfell/frostwolves/warsong area, roughly equally divided between the three parties. In the immediate area, there's your warband of 200ish who are sitting around eating and chilling, there's various people who've come to socialise, serve food, or guard the warband (without looking like they're doing that, so lets call that another hundred or so. Then there's everyone else standing about the central square in the town, people hanging out of windows or watching etc, so that's another couple of hundred people, and finally there's the hundred or so people with Drum Fel, Shatterskull, Gol'dir and so on.

Re questions, what sort of thing do you mean? Sure you can ask stuff, that's fine, similarly I can remark on whether questions might be appropirate.

These aren't my final thoughts, just initial ideas.
Yea they're fine really. This would be where you discuss 2 and 3. I've opined on Orcish culture a bit so you have some general ideas. As I've noted the Orcs don't do peace well unless they're back with the traditional clan structures, which have been disrupted, that they've never had an agriculturalist tradition, they're either hunter-gatherers, or pastoralists at the most 'advanced', as such they don't really do peace because their clan structures incentivise intercine warfare. They may simply have never thought to even try trading seriously with the humans, though there's some trading going on on the side perhaps.

All of these orcs 'want' to be secure, mighty, to maintain territory and have various services, they want to improve their own capabilities, the Warsong for example might want a more reliable source of food for their wargs. They don't necessarily want peace because they don't necessarily think it's important, an appeal to peace is pretty foreign to them in culture, you might say 'hey guys lets not fight', but that would be as weird to them as if I asked you if you to stop your job and go out raiding for your food etc instead.

As for what they 'need', they need all the standard stuff like supplies, food, security, whatever, but I assume you're really meaning what do they actually need in terms of situation. Well, Dathrohan is implying that unless they stop raiding then he'll eventually come get them, for example when he's done with the Scourge, so they 'need' the security that peace would provide etc.

However...
My real rub is what the long term benefit to them is. Former Scourge land is not much of a prize and leads to human neighbors again.
There is indeed an issue of whether this would be persuasive to them. 'hey guys you should all move because the alliance is getting stronger and at some point you might be overcome by them, maybe in a couple of years I dont know'. Indeed, where might they live? There are indeed unsettled lands because of the Scourge's corruption of them, but it's not as if Hammerfell is a lovely place, it wasn't settled for a specific reason.

Certainly, Grok is pretty convincing in some respects, he's clearly proven that the Alliance aren't genocidal etc because he's being supplied by them and is in command of alliance people (the stromic knights, the scarlet people, Kalaran Windblade etc), but more than that requires persuasion, consideration and so on.

Also keep in mind that moving so many people would be a reasonably difficult task. Not impossible of course, but it would take a lot of arranging, which you wouldn't be doing, you'd be arranging it for example, but Drum Fel et al know this, they'll know you don't have a whole fleet in your back pocket for example, so Drum Fel would know that any deal you arrange would have to actually be reasonable and workable.

That dead goblin sounds like he might have been much more important then we realized…I smell shenanigans from Grok's father, intercepting their messengers to cut these people off.
I've given some hints as to this but yea that might be it, you'd have to see, if you'd gone to check out the mysterious lights you'd know more, but you didn't and any evidence is probably gone by now.
 
Is the Stromguard captain available as a representative of Stromguard interests?

His prince owes us big favors twice.
Galen Trollbane offers to support your warband during it's time in Arathi with various resources and personnel, subject to your own support in his military endeavours. Praising your victory at Anderhol, the seneschal offers first an attached company of Stromic warriors from the Prince's own knights to ensure your free passage within the Kingdom, 'if only' you will lead your warband against Stromgarde itself, reinforcing the section of the city still held by Trollbane's forces, and clearing those districts still held by the Syndicate, the Boulderfist Ogres and the Witherbark Trolls. After this, the seneschal promises unspecified further support in your general aims of dealing with the Orcs of Hammerfall. While the seneschal is apologetic and far more polite than Trollbane himself, he functionary states that the Prince can promise no particular aid if you do not accede to his request, citing unspecified commitments.
 
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Is the Stromguard captain available as a representative of Stromguard interests?

His prince owes us big favors twice.
sure, but he wouldn't have the authority to negotiate anything big for example, but he can represent his kingdom and he's likely got a pretty good idea of Galen's policies etc? Otherwise he wouldn't have been sent
 
sure, but he wouldn't have the authority to negotiate anything big for example, but he can represent his kingdom and he's likely got a pretty good idea of Galen's policies etc? Otherwise he wouldn't have been sent
Considering how things as they are mean Stromgarde is battered but relived by the warband reclaiming lost territory then such favors can be spent on neutrality until someone can help with the negotiation.

What I see is this from the bullet points:
You know:
  • Hammerfell, the Warsong and Frostwolves exist in a symbiotic relationship, and weakening or removing one will lead to the weakening or destruction of the others
They can't be removed at the moment or replaced because Grok will care as well as his warband.
  • They are pressured by the Alliance from the west, the Vilebranch-Amani Trolls from the north, and the Syndicate-Ogre-Witherbark alliance from the south.
  • The orcs collectively are hostile to all parties, and receive periodic sponsorship and support from Thrall and the wider Horde, but otherwise have to raid to get stuff.
  • The Orcs are aware of the Alliance's advances, and the Forsaken's (almost) destruction. The Orcs also don't expect any support from Thrall.
  • You've been sent to sort this situation out generally.
What I see is a truce can be temporarily made between Hammerfell and Stromgarde because of Grok helping the prince.

While Danrothan desires the land it can be brought up he has plenty of other places the Scarlet Crusaders would be busy in until they turn their attention to the Arathi highlands.

The final decision on the future of Hammerfell can be negotiated between Hammerfell and the prince.
 
Yea they're fine really. This would be where you discuss 2 and 3. I've opined on Orcish culture a bit so you have some general ideas. As I've noted the Orcs don't do peace well unless they're back with the traditional clan structures, which have been disrupted, that they've never had an agriculturalist tradition, they're either hunter-gatherers, or pastoralists at the most 'advanced', as such they don't really do peace because their clan structures incentivise intercine warfare. They may simply have never thought to even try trading seriously with the humans, though there's some trading going on on the side perhaps.

All of these orcs 'want' to be secure, mighty, to maintain territory and have various services, they want to improve their own capabilities, the Warsong for example might want a more reliable source of food for their wargs. They don't necessarily want peace because they don't necessarily think it's important, an appeal to peace is pretty foreign to them in culture, you might say 'hey guys lets not fight', but that would be as weird to them as if I asked you if you to stop your job and go out raiding for your food etc instead.

As for what they 'need', they need all the standard stuff like supplies, food, security, whatever, but I assume you're really meaning what do they actually need in terms of situation. Well, Dathrohan is implying that unless they stop raiding then he'll eventually come get them, for example when he's done with the Scourge, so they 'need' the security that peace would provide etc.

However...
I mean I hadn't even brought up trading or anything, or even peace, just neutrality. Sure the Clan system encourages warfare, but clans also didn't seem to get wiped out on a regular basis in spite of that, so the concept of stopping fighting is seemingly not that out there.

I'm trying to reframe the issue from what I hope is an Orcish perspective, currently, there are three enemies hemming them in, one of which is part of a much larger Clan whose gradually losing their patience with their shenanigans (like the difference between skirmishing with a part of the horde, vs pissing off the entire thing.) However, that larger clan doesn't actually care about them they just want them to stop attacking their dudes.

This larger clan is also an enemy of the other clans they're fighting. They don't care about fighting you, but they'd accept help in fighting the others so long as you leave them alone and would be bound by responsibility to reward those who fought along side them.

Its not outright declaring "hey have you tried peace guys" its "have you thought about target prioritisation guys." At least some of these guys are veterans of the first and second wars they know that a big army of angry humans isn't something they can overcome, just as the same experience would let them know why the Alliance doesn't want to have to deal with them unless they force the issue, cause a few thousand orcs is a nasty proposition.

Its not like there's a shortage of other people who they can fight and the Alliance is fighting other people more worthy of being fought (the scourge) and again probably would be fine giving "tribute" for the service, since it means that they get orcs to fight the undead and...well their own people don't have to fight the undead, since individual humans are very squishy.

To try and turn this into more of a bullet pointy thing.

1. Currently you've got too many enemies, and one of those enemies has a lot of backing behind them. I am here from said backer to try and sort this out.
2. That backer wants you to stop harassing their operations and can deploy a force you cannot beat but doesn't want to, since it has another really big threat it has to fight.
3. If you stop fighting the alliance that frees up one flank and gives you the ability to dump the things you don't need on the humans, furthermore from personal experience humans are very grateful if you fight for them and they have the resources to show it. The fact the humans decided to send an orc to negotiate at all is kinda indicative of that.
4. Furthermore the humans you have been fighting have a lot of enemies that are also your enemies. As I can also attest (having done so) their chief is willing to listen to the idea of rewarding those who fight with him.
5. In sum, Hammerfell and Stormgrade beat up their mutual enemies, you don't have to worry about fighting three enemies at once and have a new way of gaining the supplies and services you want, and the Alliance as a whole no longer needs to fear Orcs harassing their supply lines. The main people who end up losing are the Trolls, Ogres and criminal humans who nobody likes.
 
Still, how much do they WANT to sustain this chain of relations, if the Warchief does not actually command them to do so? Other than the farming community (which, as the boys noted when coming near the walls of Hammerfell, is quite lacking) and the spirit-friends the Frostwolves made in Alterac, there isn't much for them here? With the Kolkar destroyed, the balance in the Barrens is going to shift. More orcs in the Barrens will be good for the Horde, in their interests would be to settle a whole "corridor" stretching to Feralas. At least try to give them an idea to cut their losses and get to the main base. With our contacts in the Alliance, we may even get the ships.

...Just make sure they don't agree to swim across any Tirasian ships. I know we've got to know them better lately, but a Tirasian is a Tirasian, and, well, let's just say it was mighty suspicious how of all people Genn Greymane made a stink over interning orcs instead of executing them, but not Daelin Proudmoore. I wonder what happened to the orcs Kul Tiras was to "intern".
 
As far as I can see, we know their situation in the mountain is unmaintainable and either they will leave the place soonish or die. That in mind, I really want these clans to come and join with us.

They already have outsider status in the Horde, so they won't be losing much by joining up with an Exile and we will always desperately need more manpower, with Dathrohans agreement to support us I feel that we can afford to look after the influx of toops minus the Ogers, but we intend for most of them to die in the vanguard iirc and so logistics won't be a problem there.

The only real hitch I can see (aside from getting them to agree) would be keeping them together under us, we aren't exactly overflowing with charisma.
 
The argument I'd focus on would be turning their weakness into strength. They've already done that to a great extent in how they've set their disposition to most effectively use the resources they have available. However, their position itself is weak due to being surrounded on all sides. Leaving wholesale would be one solution, but making their ground strong is another. Turn one of their enemies into an ally that can supply and assist them to mutual benefit, and the both of them will prosper. That this would further our own goal in curtailing and defeating the Burning Legion (Scourge) is a goal we're passionate about, and should be an arguing point. We've got high ideals, one heck of a story, and a small army behind us.

Most importantly, don't hard sell it, let them draw their own conclusions from the facts of the matter. If they wanna die here, so be it.
 
I don't believe they want to leave. Even if they did the Frostwolf in Alterac and Warsong in the hills would be affected too.
 
As always, I'd like to reiterate that this is one of absolute favorite stories on the internet and each update gives me great joy.

As per the local orc settlement, I think that the thing is that the orcs don't want to be at peace but that's different from being not at war. Strength and might are too much of a cultural value for the orcs + the orcs' political structure being hugely decentralized and non-federalized means that armed conflict is never going away for them.

I think the clinch is that they want to fight, they want their fighting to be glorious and recognized as such, and they want their fighting to have purpose. At this settlement their fighting has immediate but no long-term purpose--their enemies are held at bay, but they know that they will be swept away eventually. Additionally, the duties they fulfilled and the sacrifices they made for the Horde have not been recognized by Thrall, and they seem resigned that their people will ignore their passing.

We can do them a great service (and catch their interest) by offering them not only battles filled glory, but battles that will change the world. Everyone will know that the Warsong and Frostwolf clans' arms are strong and their will indomitable. Similarly we might also be able to find some more blademaster aspirants among the unaffiliated. As this will strip the settlement of defenders, we might want to consider absorbing everyone else as basic line infantry + camp support until we can send them over the ocean to Kalimdor
 
So .... I think I may have realized why the prince cares about this land.

It's a trade route, or it could be once the various belligerents are dealt with.
 
Right, but that means that there's not really a peaceful long term solution here unless either the orcs ship out, or we secure something of equal or greater long term value in exchange for not getting on their case.
 
Right, but that means that there's not really a peaceful long term solution here unless either the orcs ship out, or we secure something of equal or greater long term value in exchange for not getting on their case.
The peaceful long term solution is stop attacking the humans you've plenty of other bastards to fight, but yeah. Orcs are orcs so telling them to not being idiots is a difficult task.

Still I hope we might be able too at least communicate the idea that they should at least do target prioritisation.
 
Wow this thread has been astoundingly active I just caught up to where thrall exiled Grok'mash and I think that's just the beginning of things getting wild in this story isn't it?
 
The peaceful long term solution is stop attacking the humans you've plenty of other bastards to fight, but yeah. Orcs are orcs so telling them to not being idiots is a difficult task.

No it's not, the prince wants this land specifically because of it's geography. That's not going to change if the orcs stop raiding the humans.
 
Right, but that means that there's not really a peaceful long term solution here unless either the orcs ship out, or we secure something of equal or greater long term value in exchange for not getting on their case.
Have you considered it's something long term?

Already Grok has done the prince a solid. Negotiations can be had with Hammerfell's leader for at least neutrality while those higher in the totem pole can reach a diplomatic solution.
 
No, because we can't trust the prince to hold a treaty that long, much less their heirs. This is land, land that would be quite profitable under the Prince's rule, or even that of another alliance member, but unless we can settle a force capable of holding it with minimal aid in the area the land is too valuable as a trade route for the prince to give up on it.
 
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No, because we can't trust the prince to hold a treaty that long, much less their heirs. This is land, land that would be quite profitable under the Prince's rule, or even that of another alliance member, but unless we can settle a force capable of holding it with minimal aid in the area the land is too valuable as a trade route for the prince to give up on it.
You have to consider something. To what lengths will Grok remove the inhabitants of Hammerfell if they don't want to leave? Even if he's exiled he and much of his warband belongs to the horde and would suffer morale loss if Grok takes extreme measures to remove them.

Grok is also no diplomat however he has helped the prince in dealing with lost territory that he would have trouble reclaiming which is Stromgarde keep the capital that the prince lost. That man owes him a debt.

So I believe negotiation for a diplomatic solution is possible but not with Grok but by finding someone who can do it including Danrothan and Tirion as advocates.
 
No, because we can't trust the prince to hold a treaty that long, much less their heirs. This is land, land that would be quite profitable under the Prince's rule, or even that of another alliance member, but unless we can settle a force capable of holding it with minimal aid in the area the land is too valuable as a trade route for the prince to give up on it.
So I believe negotiation for a diplomatic solution is possible but not with Grok but by finding someone who can do it including Danrothan and Tirion as advocates.
You also have to remember the Alliance has a lot of enemies right now and not enough troops. + this land isn't currently valuable for what is on or in it.

If it was desired for being the best farmland in the region and the orcs were sitting on it that'd be one thing, but as it stands the humans are not losing out on stuff as long as things can pass through the area unmolested. Currently they cannot which is the problem.
 
You also have to remember the Alliance has a lot of enemies right now and not enough troops. + this land isn't currently valuable for what is on or in it.

If it was desired for being the best farmland in the region and the orcs were sitting on it that'd be one thing, but as it stands the humans are not losing out on stuff as long as things can pass through the area unmolested. Currently they cannot which is the problem.
That's why I believe negotiation is possible precisely because the Alliance has a lot of enemies and not enough troops.
 
So I have been chewing on this and think we should argue the following points:

1. Remaining here would doom the orcs to a marginal existence waiting for the Humans to expel them.

2. There is no practical future nor meaningful Honor in doing so.

3. We offer them immediate purpose and honor by fighting the Scourge (Maybe the Syndicate first since we are here?).

4. In the long term (after the defeat of the Scourge) we offer to lead them to Kalemdor either back into the embrace of the Horde if something can be worked out with Thrall or onto an unclaimed portion of the coastline.

Overall we don't approach it as us having the perfect answer, but we lean into our growing renown to excite them for the "Great Journey".
 
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Hello, all. Just now read the update and have caught up to the responses. There's a lot of interesting and insightful thoughts on how to approach the problem so far. I have some thoughts to share regarding our and thus Grok's approach to the problem, though.

From what I've read so far, most everyone is delving into long term solutions that seek a solution to all of the local orc population's problems. I'm going to go ahead and throw out a suggestion that's a bit out there, but I think has some merit. I'm of the opinion that we don't really have to solve the orc's problems for them but rather give them avenues to solve it themselves. For one thing, I doubt Grok has the wherewithal enact, or convince others to go along with, any long term solution to all the problems that face the local Horde elements. Furthermore, Grok doesn't have any responsibility to devise and follow through with a solution to all of their problems besides maybe his goodwill to his fellow Orcs.

As such, I personally would suggest offering to decrease the fronts which the Frostwolf/Warsong/Hammerfall alliance has to defend. If possible, I think an appealing course of action is for Grok to lobby the idea of raising whatever levies/forces the local Horde elements can spare to go on an extended campaign with Grok's warband with either Grok in command or a joint command with whoever they put in command of their forces. The newly enlarged warband can move to eliminate the Witherbark village, then move onward to aid the Alliance (along with maybe a diplomatic party of Orc representatives to do what diplomats do) in fighting the Scourge (which I assume is a common enemy to all). It sounds like a simple enough course of action for Grok to come up with and eliminates one front while giving them an avenue for further diplomatic talks/relations with the Alliance via a common enemy, potentially eliminating another front through means of diplomacy (which I imagine Grok would enthusaistically encourage throughout the campaing). Hopefully, this allows them to eke out some form of sustainable existence for the local Horde elements without some looming threat hanging over them that will, eventually and inevitably, wipe them out.

By the end of the campaign, I think Grok would be able to leave the situation feeling like he'd made enough of an effort to not feel too guilty if things fail completely and the local Orc population is eradicated by the alliance at a later date. And finally, after all the effort Grok is willing to put in, who would complain if Grok entices a few of the Orcs, enthralled by Grok's undoubtedly masterful leadership, leave and join his warband permanantly?

I'd love to hear opinions on this approach concerning feasability, appeal, things I've misunderstood or missed, whether this is a horrid idea and should be immediately scrapped, or whatever else there is to pick apart. Cheers.

P.S. I came up with this while assuming a Mass Exodus of all of the Orcs/Horde elements (which I see as the ideal solution) is most likely unattainable. This is similarly an all or nothing approach but is more attainable, in my opinion, and contextualizes the solution as a simple, orc-y 'We'll wage war with a big warband until the problem resolves itself' that Grok might come up with and/or find favorable.
 
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Offering them to aid the Alliance in exchange for recognition of their land rights and no more hostilities on that front is interesting. It reminds me of the Roman Empire and its Foederati. Thing is, the orcs owe allegiance to the Warchief, and may not care so much whether a King of Stromgarde recognizes their rights to be on this land or not.
 
So, I'm catching up a bit more(page 58) and I am starting to wonder what warcraft demons are.

Are they made of smoke? Emotions? Evilness? They seem to be able to interact with physical objects and don't seem to always perform evil tasks.
Are they akin to elementals but with a different power source?

Do they have a set size, do they start as themselves or as corruptions of other beings?

My apologies if these are stupid questions. Actually there is a wiki so I'll go there and see if my mind comes away unscathed.
Huh, well I'm still very confused as to what they are made of after doing that reading.

Also a bunch of them want to destroy whole worlds? Wouldn't that leave them with fewer sources of magic though and fewer sources of people to torture? I read that some big wig among them thinks the universe is cursed and therefore wants it gone thinking he can reset a real from some sort of zero point?

Most of them don't seem like they would benefit from this though?

Is my brain just too small for the truth? :-(

EDIT: If they are Made Of Evil, why are any of them able to say serve an orc breakfast in bed?
 
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