Deep as the Abyss pt. 1 (weeblypanda)
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Deep as the Abyss pt. 1
'This can't be happening!' Valo thought, 'By Njord, this must be a dream!' as he sunk deeper into the domain of his ancestor.
Before today the ocean was the path to glory, it was the great mirror to his beloved sky, and now it was how he would die. That was before the Jomsvikings
'It matters not,' Valo thinks as the cloying depths took him. 'I die, with no honor, no weapon in hand, having been blown overboard having not even gone raiding.'
Just as his eyes close a hand grasps his collar. They shoot open again.
'Vidar!' Valo realizes. Looking over his shoulders he sees him, Vidar Icebreaker, his elder brother had saved him.
Vidar was a young Gute hero, made in the spitting image of their Godly ancestor Njord. An accomplished raider, with a powerfully built yet sleek build, hair blonde and salty white, beard as full as the greatest among them. Vidar often led his own expeditions out toward Tarkhan but he had once been chosen to go raiding with Blackhand himself. Vidar was known as a strong swimmer having even cut through an iceberg in a race to win in spectacular fashion.
"Come now brother, you've yet even to see true battle! You're not ready to join the Aesir among the stars you so love! We have to get back to the ships" Vidar says as you break the surface.
Valo coughs up mouthfuls of seawater as Vidar drags him swimming as hard as he can toward his ship. As he catches his breath, he sees Gotland's burning, sinking form in the distance.
"Brother you've got to help out or we'll not catch up!"
Vidar's words cut through stupor/pain/anguish/shock/horror…focusing Valo on the act of survival. If they did not catch up to the ships they would drown and join the Draugr, or be eaten by Joton or some passing Sea monster. He was running low on Ordstirr, and so stoked his Frami. Using his Kin-finding trick from his Guiding Light Kunna he and Vidar made great progress toward their contingent of fleeing ships.
"Almost there, brother! Almost there! Just a little while longer!" Vidar said.
With effort, they got to the final stretch to reach the ship. Their father Halvar Sunshaft throws out a length of rope for them to catch. Yet as Valo successfully grabs it he hears a roar of pain.
Turing he sees a gleaming harpoon head sticking through his brother's chest green ordstirr still coating it. The Jomsviking Snekkja had caught up!/
"Sorry little brother. Looks like I won't be able to take you on your first raid after aAARRGH!" Vidar says as Valo once more feels his body threatening to be torn, desperately holding onto the rope for dear life.
"I was hoping to use this trick to slay a serpent or chase down some sinking treasure but I guess I'll improvise." Vidar says with a wry, blood-stained smile, "Promise you'll watch my last deed brother."
Valo can only shake his head no as he goes to reach a hand for his brother.
"You've got to promise me, Valo! Please."
Another pull, another tearing sensation, another scream rings out, and a pair of hands let go.
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