Magical Girl Escalation Taylor (Worm/Nanoha)

Holy shit Galea was a tidally locked ocean world. That is like, the best planetary setup for mind bogglingly huge storms outside of a gas giant. How the hell did complex life even survive long enough to have any interdimensional wars?
I must have missed this when I was going through the thread earlier. Sorry. :oops: Short version is that until the Al Hazardans showed up, Galea was more or less stuck in the Stone Age. They were also a high-magic world that, as mentioned, had figured out primitive ritualistic genetic manipulation to help them survive on their world. Their warfare was still tribal and based around controlling native predators à la a particularly bloody game of Mortal Kombat: Pokemon Edition.

When Al Hazard finally did show up, they brought with them the technology and science to let the Galeans expand onto the dark side of the planet, which was less inhospitable than the light side. It also fed their inner emo, hence the edgy titles we've seen like "Dark Queen", "Immortal Assimilation Engine", "Calamity Witch", etc.

The long version would make for a nice social chapter, don't you think? :)
 
Yup... so why didnt you write it? Youre wanting us to have multiple socials on the subject?
Because to write the long version of everything you guys asked for would be probably 10k words or more, and that takes time I need for other things that are quite frankly more important than writing a quest I don't get paid for. Things like, I don't know, my actual job.

I do my best to give you a quick turnaround so you don't have to wait for months on end like the readers of my proper story have had to recently. Quick turnaround means short chapters that I can bang out in my limited free time. Short chapters means that asking for multiple pieces of lore at the same time like you did will get you introductions that you can choose to further pursue if you wish. If you had asked ONLY about the first Calamity Witch, or ONLY about Galea, or ONLY about the Warring Ages, you would have gone deeper into the subjects. The broader you go, the shallowest you get.

TL;DR: Yes.
 
Because to write the long version of everything you guys asked for would be probably 10k words or more, and that takes time I need for other things that are quite frankly more important than writing a quest I don't get paid for. Things like, I don't know, my actual job.
Eh, 8 hours tops. Three days for the last quest I wrote. Of course, that quest was my sole post work detox for something like 6 months, but hey.
I do my best to give you a quick turnaround so you don't have to wait for months on end like the readers of my proper story have had to recently. Quick turnaround means short chapters that I can bang out in my limited free time. Short chapters means that asking for multiple pieces of lore at the same time like you did will get you introductions that you can choose to further pursue if you wish. If you had asked ONLY about the first Calamity Witch, or ONLY about Galea, or ONLY about the Warring Ages, you would have gone deeper into the subjects. The broader you go, the shallowest you get.

TL;DR: Yes.
makes sense.
 
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That would be catastrophic. The entire ecosystem is BUILT around being tidally locked.
It wouldn't necessarily be bad. The echosystem is mostly build around the twilight zones where massive storms boil over the borders between light and dark, ion blasted desert and frozen hellscape. Start rotation, and the weather would expand the storms, frigid blizzards moving over the leeward rotation and into the desert where it would become rainfall and cool the area, and burning dust storms over the other side, melting the dark side. The twilight zone though is used to these storms coming and going, often violently, given what we know from satelite and telescope, and could stand it for a couple of days without ill effects. At that point the planet would begin to equalize.

The real question is how did anything survive in the first place? If you're within the goldilox zone tidal locking should still end up with a sand blasted world with a thin atmosphere. If you're outside it, the twilight zone shouldn't be thick enough to sustain evolution to begin with. Though I suppose what would be considered said zone would change with tidal locking. Maybe... 20% further out and the perma-sun could be enough to support life without baking the planet, but that didn't happen here.
 
Eh, 8 hours tops. Three days for the last quest I wrote. Of course, that quest was my sole post work detox for something like 6 months, but hey.
I've timed myself and found that I write at 500 words an hour. I don't have 20 spare hours in a week.
The real question is how did anything survive in the first place? If you're within the goldilox zone tidal locking should still end up with a sand blasted world with a thin atmosphere.
I've read a couple of articles that suggested that a tidally locked world could still support a nitrogen-oxygen atmosphere thick enough for heat to be distributed over the planet via convection. You just need a large ocean on the sun side and an orbital period greater than 15 days IIRC.
 
I've timed myself and found that I write at 500 words an hour. I don't have 20 spare hours in a week.
Everyone's different. Though I'll admit I wrote a heck of a lot faster doing quests than I usually did writing stories. The hardest and most time consuming part actually was finding good pictures to go along with everything. That it became routine probably helped too. 24 hour voting cycle, always start at 7 when I got home, tally, write for 4 hours and get 1-5K words out, Post, have diner. Six months and 550K words later... heh. Writing that I sound very very very bored....
I've read a couple of articles that suggested that a tidally locked world could still support a nitrogen-oxygen atmosphere thick enough for heat to be distributed over the planet via convection. You just need a large ocean on the sun side and an orbital period greater than 15 days IIRC.
That's interesting. If you could link me That'd be much appreciated.
 
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Necessary disclaimer: I skimmed these articles but did not dig deeply, because astronomy, cosmology, and atmospheric physics? Nowhere close to my area of expertise. They were enough to say "yeah, it's possible", and that was good enough for me.
I'd hardly call myself an expert either, but trying to keep up with conversations on spacebattles, I read alot of theses articles. its become an acquired taste.

Of particular interest here though, the ones with a habitable day side are apparently all around M class stars, Red, white and brown dwarves, IE star husks and super-jupiters.
 
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Well, Baba Yaga flew around in a cooking pot,
Actually, it was a mortar, and she "pushed" herself along with the pestle. Source: I'm Russian, I remember the stories. Although it might have been Pushkin's take on it?

Sorry for accidental doublepost.
 
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Dienstag, 21 Brahmanod, Year 0080


"I take it your idea was a success?"

Teana nodded at Admiral Tucson's question. "Yes sir. Taylor was more at ease on her own world and no longer in uniform and opened up about some of the details that she otherwise would have been more circumspect about. I also had Cross Mirage take images of all the displays and text plaques, which will give us more background information on Earth Bet-12."

"Very good. And your primary objective? Have you figured out what these Endbringers are?"

"Not for sure, obviously, but as much as I can. My analysis is in the full report I sent you, but in brief I feel confident that they can be classified as Class-2 Lost Logia. There should be no issues getting approval to intervene, especially as we have a ready-made cover story in claiming that we are parahumans in our own right. If some of the super-engineers on this world, these 'Tinkers', are any indication, no one will doubt our explanation for a minute.

"I am also more certain than before that there is a connection between the Endbringers and the source of parahumans' powers."

"Explain," the admiral ordered, but his expression was not one of doubt. It was more as though he wanted to be sure her rationale matched his own conclusions.

"The first Endbringer activated ten years after the debut of para-magic," she said with a slight grin at the name, earning a groan from Erga who was undoubtedly unhappy solely because he was not the one to come up with it, "and when it did so, it had a set of abilities that were very similar to the more immediately advantageous powers. Absurd durability, an aura of radiation and heat to cook anyone trying to get close, control over various forms of energy. In the parlance of their law enforcement, 'Brute' and 'Blaster' primarily. The second was faster, more agile, with a greater focus towards area attacks. By itself this means little, but the third? The third was the one to appear when Tinkers were truly coming into their own, and it has the ability to feed off the styles and ideas of nearby Tinkers. It also brainwashes individuals and appeared in a time when other pseudo-telepathatic manipulators were becoming more and more feared."

"And I would bet my last credit that this… 'para-magic' is the result of a fourth Lost Logia, and of Al Hazardan make, too," Erga added with a nod. "From what Taylor told us, the specific abilities that manifest are related to the circumstances of the new parahuman. Wish-granting artifacts were Al Hazard's bread and butter. Might explain why the Endbringers leave after taking so little damage. It isn't enough to really hurt them, but if they really are corrupted planetary defenders, it might just be enough to jostle their memory banks and remind them that they are supposed to be protecting these people, not trying to kill them. Then the corruption comes back as they regenerate, and the cycle starts all over again."

Tucson laced his fingers together. "I was thinking along similar lines. How do we explain this golden man, then? This Scion of theirs."

The Enforcers looked at each other for a moment before Teana hazarded a guess. "If we take the name literally, then he claimed to be the inheritor of someone or something. Perhaps he was the person who activated the wish-granting Logia, and it bonded with him? That would explain the variety and strength of his abilities. His disappearance two years ago could be that the Logia finally detached itself, or more likely it exacted a demand on his body that he could no longer sustain."

"Yet it has stayed active even without an obvious host." Admiral Tucson rubbed his chin. "Focus on the Endbringers for now. It sounds like this… para-magic Lost Logia may actually be working as intended. If that is the case, I doubt anyone on that world would appreciate us interfering with it. They can work that out themselves.

"Good work, Lanster. Keep me informed as the situation progresses."


A quick salute, and the communication ended. "Not gonna lie, kinda envious of you getting to walk around and stretch your legs around other people for a bit," Erga said with an exaggerated sigh. "Meanwhile I have to stay holed up in an old building sifting through their data. Interesting stuff, don't get me wrong, but after a while even that gets boring."

"We could trade if you really wanted," was her dry reply. "I'll sit back and read their 'Internet', and you can try restoring our credibility with the mage we nearly killed and who still doesn't exactly like us. There were a couple of times yesterday when I said or did something that I was worried she was going to blow up over."

"Eh." That was as close as Erga would get to admitting he was wrong, and he gave her a short wave as he walked out. Now alone in the communications room, Teana tapped her fingertips against the console. Taylor was their only local contact on the planet, and Admiral Tucson had made no secret of the fact that he would like to recruit her into the Navy when this mission was complete. Not that that was a surprise; Taylor had power, adaptability, and a different way of looking at things that would serve her well as a member of the TSAB. Joining would also give Taylor the resources and support she needed to truly grow into her full powers that Earth Bet-12 just couldn't provide. They just had to figure out how to overcome that gaff of a first impression.

That combination of thoughts sparked an idea, and a smile grew on her face as she told her Intelligent Device whom to contact. A long moment passed, and then a screen manifested to show a brunette woman standing in front of a sink, another woman and a little girl with heads of blonde hair sitting at a table behind her. Blue eyes sparkled with delight. "Teana-chan!"

"Hi, Nanoha," she replied with a smile. "How are things going out there?"

Nanoha laughed awkwardly at that question. "They're fine, they're fine. Sometimes I miss the action, but it's been nice just to spend time with Vivio-chan, even if Fate-chan tells me I'm pushing her too fast. Only once or twice, though!"

"Once or twice per week, maybe."
Nanoha squeaked at the sudden voice behind her, and Fate winked one red eye at Teana. "She's been getting more and more impatient as the date for her to return to active duty gets closer." The elder Enforcer dropped her voice into a stage whisper. "Just between you and me, Teana, I don't think she's cut out for the life of a housewife."

"…Can I join you out there, Teana-chan? Fate-chan's so mean to me."


Teana could not help but laugh at the by-play between them. She could still remember staring in awe at the two Aces who had inducted her into Riot Force 6 all those years ago, but it did not take long for her to start seeing her then-superiors as friends. Especially not after Fate took her as a personal assistant and apprentice prior to joining the Enforcers in her own right. That had opened a whole new horizon of seeing how the Blitz Ace and the White Devil acted when they were in the casual setting of their own home.

The women smiled at her laughter before Fate continued, "Not that we mind you calling, but what's the occasion? Normally you only call when you need some advice, and I would have expected you to reach out to Bardiche for that."

"I need to talk to Nanoha this time, actually." That comment earned her the flight instructor's undivided attention. "I can't go into all the details right now, but the short version is that our current mission involved looking for a Lost Logia that was lost on a low-magic world. We had a local contact who we thought was a self-trained mage, but it turns out that she has the Lost Logia in her possession and has been using that to tap into her magical potential. Our first meeting… didn't go well. We thought she was an enemy and fired upon her, she had no clue who we were and why we were attacking; that sort of thing."

"Is everyone okay?" Nanoha asked immediately.

"Yes, we're all fine. We're okay, she's okay, that's not the problem. The problem is that because of this we didn't get off on the right foot, and now we're stuck trying to restore the goodwill she had towards us before we strained it with our screw-up." She sighed. "I just don't know how to fix it."

"Teana-chan, look at me." She raised her eyes to meet Nanoha's. "You're a good person. Impatient, stubborn, entirely too self-critical, but good nonetheless. I saw it immediately, and so did everyone else. You made a mistake, and that makes things harder, but it doesn't change who you are. It sounds like this girl is still upset about your actions, and not without reason, but tempers eventually settle and leave clear heads behind. Once she calms down, she'll start to see that you just want to help."

"As someone who has been the bad guy in a similar situation,"
Fate added with a small, wry smile, "I'll tell you now that there isn't much you can do to make things better. Not immediately, anyway. You fix what you can, obviously, and you apologize for your mistake, but after that you have to wait for her to forgive you. You can't make things better until she lets you."

Nanoha nodded. "Don't lose hope, though. Just because you start off badly doesn't mean it will stay that way. Arisa-chan, Fate-chan, Hayate-chan and the Wolkenritter, the Numbers. We were all enemies at one time, but now look at us."

"That was the reason I wanted to talk to you about it," she said with a tiny smile. She was not the most social and gregarious person, Subaru could attest to that, but if anyone had the advice on how to turn an enemy into a friend, it would be Nanoha.

A wicked thought crossed her mind as she thought of her best friend and old partner and some of the jokes she knew Subaru would have made in this situation, and she added with just a hint of nonchalance, "Well, that and I figured you two would be the best people to ask for advice on how to interact with your lovechild."

"…Whah?"

She sent a few images through the link so they could see what she meant. Most of them were images from Cross Mirage's recording during their fight, but a few she had picked up from Earth Bet-12's data network. "You should have told me you had a kid together when you were younger. It was obvious as soon as I saw her that she had to be yours. She has the same dark design to her Barrier Jacket and the same mana scythe as Fate, and Nanoha, her Shooter skills and Buster are pure you. Even her magic color matches; that bright a shade of orange can only come from mixing pink and yellow."

Nanoha stammered something unintelligible, and Fate looked like she was one comment from passing out. Vivio wandered over and looked at the various images floating next to the live feed. "Nanoha-mama, is she my sister?" she asked with all the innocence of an eight-year-old. "She looks like you, like I look like Fate-mama. Can we bring her home?"

That snapped Fate out of her shellshocked stupor, and she shook her head. "No, Vivio, that isn't your sister. It's just someone Teana met on one of her missions and decided to play a very mean joke on us with," she added with a glare at Teana. "I never thought I'd say this, but you've clearly been spending too much time with Subaru."

"Sorry, I couldn't help it. Besides, I know she isn't your and Nanoha's kid." She laughed lightly and doubled down. "Like I said, she tamed the Lost Logia we were looking for, so the only way she could be yours is if you had a 'party' with Captain Hayate once upon a time."

She expected the women to roll their eyes or make some dismissive comment. She did not expect both of them to blush bright red and immediately look away from the screen and each other. Her thoughts screeched to a halt as she realized how badly this had blown up in her face because now she had those thoughts stuck in her head too. Ugh, she did not need to be imagining three of her former commanding officers in bed together.

"Aunt Hayate had a party? You didn't invite me. Can I bring my friends to the next one?"

…Clearly help was not coming from that corner.

"Look, Teana-chan, it wasn't like that," Nanoha finally said, and Teana let out a tiny sigh. Her relief was short-lived. "Hayate-chan had just come back from her first big command mission, and we went out to celebrate, and we got really really drunk, and—"

"Thanks! I… I'm good. Don't need to hear any details I have another call I have to make thanks for the advice bye!"


Now how's THAT for some on-the-nose bad guessing? :p And good god, the Takamachi-Harlaown household has the potential to be comedy gold. Pity Seven Arcs squandered the opportunity ViVid gave them.
 
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but if they really are corrupted planetary defenders, it might just be enough to jostle their memory banks and remind them that they are supposed to be protecting these people,
...Cold as polar ice, Erga. They are/were designed as terror weapons from the get-go.

"Yes, we're all fine. We're okay, she's okay, that's not the problem. The problem is that because of this we didn't get off on the right foot, and now we're stuck trying to restore the goodwill she had towards us before we strained it with our screw-up." She sighed. "I just don't know how to fix it."

"Teana-chan, look at me." She raised her eyes to meet Nanoha's. "You're a good person. Impatient, stubborn, entirely too self-critical, but good nonetheless. I saw it immediately, and so did everyone else. You made a mistake, and that makes things harder, but it doesn't change who you are. It sounds like this girl is still upset about your actions, and not without reason, but tempers eventually settle and leave clear heads behind. Once she calms down, she'll start to see that you just want to help."
Heh, she's softballing that "screw up" quite well. A little curious how Nanoha would've responded had Teana told the full story: "We, uh, kinda went off half-cocked and skewered our contact right through her chest. Oops?"

"Aunt Hayate had a party? You didn't invite me. Can I bring my friends to the next one?"

…Clearly help was not coming from that corner.

"Look, Teana-chan, it wasn't like that," Nanoha finally said, and Teana let out a tiny sigh. Her relief was short-lived. "Hayate-chan had just come back from her first big command mission, and we went out to celebrate, and we got really really drunk, and—"

"Thanks! I… I'm good. Don't need to hear any details I have another call I have to make thanks for the advice bye!"
"..."
"..."
"...We will never speak of this to anyone."
 
So, is Nanoha from an Earth outside the cluster of Earths that the entities have infected (for lack of a better term), or is she from a different planet in this continuity?
 
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So, is Nanoha from an Earth outside the cluster of Earths that the entities have infected (for lack of a better term), or is she from a different planet in this continuity?
IIRC planets in the dimensional sea are all superimposed... in a way they are all 'earth', just different ways and hows and whens. Alot of them have different names, but having the same name is far from unheard of. Its why they are calling these ones Earth Bet-cluster and not Earth-cluster
 
Did they never bother with conventional space travel powered by magic? Or is that just one of the premise that one has to accept?
 
Did they never bother with conventional space travel powered by magic? Or is that just one of the premise that one has to accept?
Which would you rather do? Travel across the vast distances in space to maybe reach one of the few worlds that can maybe support life, or take the relatively quick jaunt to an empty version of the one you know supports life?
 
"And I would bet my last credit that this… 'para-magic' is the result of a fourth Lost Logia, and of Al Hazardan make, too," Erga added
All your money now belong to us. :cool:

"Focus on the Endbringers for now. It sounds like this… para-magic Lost Logia may actually be working as intended. If that is the case, I doubt anyone on that world would appreciate us interfering with it. They can work that out themselves.
> A Lost Logia activates on a low-magic world, giving weird poorly understood powers to damaged people. Most of them promptly use them to commit crimes, slowly tearing civilisation apart.
The TSAB: "That's definitely not our business. They will sort it out themselves."

> A Lost Logia activates on a low-magic world, giving powerful magic with textbooks on it to one (damaged) girl.
The TSAB: "That's definitely our business. We should recruit her ASAP, she'll be much more useful for us than for these barbarians."

"I'll sit back and read their 'Internet', and you can try restoring our credibility with the mage we nearly killed and who still doesn't exactly like us.
The TSAB informed Taylor they accidentally dropped a WMD on her planet.
Taylor: :) "It's okay! I'm in no way concerned about it and sure you'll make it right!"

The TSAB almost killed Taylor, but then apologised and explained why.
Taylor: :) "It's okay! I understand you had valid reasons to do it!"

The TSAB informed Taylor they'll help with Endbringers, but only with Endbringers.
Taylor: :) "That's wonderful news! I'm so happy we have your help!"

Teana: "...This girl definitely still resents us. Need to make it up for her harder!"
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Our first meeting… didn't go well. We thought she was an enemy and fired upon her
and then fired again. And again, with Starlight Breaker. And drove a sword through her chest. And planned to finish her off, but there was a short quarrel amongst Eldritch Beings from the outside of our universe, which prevented us from-
"Teana." Nanoha cutted her rambling, frowning severely. "Apparently, you were a bad girl. You deserve some spanking."
"Eep!" Teana blanched.

Vivio wandered over and looked at the various images floating next to the live feed. "Nanoha-mama, is she my sister?" she asked with all the innocence of an eight-year-old.
IAE: "...On the one hand a thought about sibling relationship between the Galean representative and Belkan royalty makes me shudder with disgust. On the other hand, a dynastic union is a proper way to end the hostility. Additionally, considering age difference between them it could be a good way to influence future Sankt Kaiser in beneficial for us direction." :evil:
 
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