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@King crimson so my thoughts on the Gemworld interlude, and then some questions. Had most of it saved last night as a draft and finished it up today.
First off its a really good piece, you've honestly got me interested in this world and what we can do with it. I like the backstory for the world, a world f-ed up by a malicious entity for the lols, 13 warriors and artifacts destined to bring about peace, and their descendants screw it all up (well one does).
On Obscuras/Dark Opal:
When he was Obscuras, I could understand why he had some reason to be angry, but I'm wondering what came first, his anger or his "mistreatments". His parents passed him up for his younger brother Laban but I have to wonder if they saw something "bad" in him, that made their second born bookworm a better pick as heir. Even Graciel thought he was charming, but always angry. So maybe Obscuras parents were worried that anger would bleed onto how he managed the people, and felt Laban at least wouldn't execute you if you messed up. So yeah Obscuras had tunnel vision and obsessed over how things weren't going his way, while the nobles were laughing about him not being heir, and the girl he had a crush on picked his bully over him, I totally get all that. And then he ran away for those 20 years and plotted.
Now Dark Opal is interesting, I liked that he gave a warriors end to the guards that fought him rather than just blasting them like the cowards that ran. His fight with Bariel must have been cathartic, finally killing the guy that was a bully to you all your life and took the girl you had a crush on. But then he went from collected to total crazy with his words and thoughts towards Graciel. Like the second he saw her, his diplomacy, and sanity went to 1 (or zero). His obsession blew up on him, literally. This is all still good, shows that he clearly crossed the line into evil and is in his own head trying to rationalize his actions and still wants to get things to go his way. I wonder if this is a negative trait he has.
On Bariel:
He was a jerk when he was younger, became a decent man when he was older, but never reconciled with the person he tormented, and that came to bite him in the ass. I've known people who were dicks when they were little and became decent once they matured enough to control their impulses, I think we've all seen that. What doomed him was that he picked on a spiteful person that would do everything in his power to get the final laugh. Even making a pact with the dark forces it seems.
On Graciel:
She made the rational choice, both Obscuras and Bariel had flaws, but she saw proof that Bariel was willing to improve himself. Maybe in could be argued that Obscuras never had that chance, but he also didn't do himself any favors choosing to run away and brood rather than being mature about it and moving on. Her final actions were saving her child and blasting Dark Opal, she didn't give up, gotta respect that.
On Laban/White Opal:
Got to wonder if he's still alive first off. He didn't do anything wrong here, he saved Bariel and had enough power to defeat the monster he couldn't. He seems to be humble about being so magically strong. He became an advisor to Bariel later on and was concened about what his brother was up to. Seems like growing up they would have had a very strained relationship. He must have been an introverted bookworm, I can relate.
Thoughts on what to do about all this (aka how can we profit)
Lots of picks here: magic, artifacts, land, all could help Lex out. We have no hard numbers on how our weapons and tech would fare against Gemworld's magic and monsters however. Still worth observing what happens since we have the foster father to Princess Amethyst employed as Jinx's tutor (if that is how it played out in the quest), and boy how is that gonna go down if Amethyst and Jinx interact. Conversely it could make Amethyst's location the potential ground zero for an invasion by Dark Opal's forces, if he figures out a way to cross worlds. I think many characters in the DC world would laugh off Gemworld's existence but Lex at this point would say "Tell me more". Pretty sure US law stops at earth, so Gemworld gives us some unique opportunities, and King crimson did not state an Emerald being given out, so maybe free title up for creation/grabs
If only we had a lot of green rocks to prove its our theme 
@King crimson so these are some questions I have in regards to how it affects the quest:
1. Are you doing rolls for Dark Opal actually conquering Gemworld or getting pushback/facing uprisings.
2. When did the ending of the interlude occur in the timeline of our quest? Like how old is Princess Amethyst now?
3. Is Dark Opal going to just wait for Amethyst to show up or would he try to find her? Does he see her as his nemesis or just a target to kill (he referred to her as mongrel, he definitely despises her as she is living proof of Bariel and Graciel's union)
I did not know about DC Gemworld until this quest and now I find myself interested in what you're going to do with this setting, and what we can do toruthlessly exploit benefit enrich explore and learn about this world and maybe grow Lexcorp as a result. Perhaps restore a rightful ruler to her throne? Remove a tyrant? Uplift a civilization with modern technology? Become the new ruler and Bring order to these chaotic lands? 
First off its a really good piece, you've honestly got me interested in this world and what we can do with it. I like the backstory for the world, a world f-ed up by a malicious entity for the lols, 13 warriors and artifacts destined to bring about peace, and their descendants screw it all up (well one does).
On Obscuras/Dark Opal:
When he was Obscuras, I could understand why he had some reason to be angry, but I'm wondering what came first, his anger or his "mistreatments". His parents passed him up for his younger brother Laban but I have to wonder if they saw something "bad" in him, that made their second born bookworm a better pick as heir. Even Graciel thought he was charming, but always angry. So maybe Obscuras parents were worried that anger would bleed onto how he managed the people, and felt Laban at least wouldn't execute you if you messed up. So yeah Obscuras had tunnel vision and obsessed over how things weren't going his way, while the nobles were laughing about him not being heir, and the girl he had a crush on picked his bully over him, I totally get all that. And then he ran away for those 20 years and plotted.
Now Dark Opal is interesting, I liked that he gave a warriors end to the guards that fought him rather than just blasting them like the cowards that ran. His fight with Bariel must have been cathartic, finally killing the guy that was a bully to you all your life and took the girl you had a crush on. But then he went from collected to total crazy with his words and thoughts towards Graciel. Like the second he saw her, his diplomacy, and sanity went to 1 (or zero). His obsession blew up on him, literally. This is all still good, shows that he clearly crossed the line into evil and is in his own head trying to rationalize his actions and still wants to get things to go his way. I wonder if this is a negative trait he has.
On Bariel:
He was a jerk when he was younger, became a decent man when he was older, but never reconciled with the person he tormented, and that came to bite him in the ass. I've known people who were dicks when they were little and became decent once they matured enough to control their impulses, I think we've all seen that. What doomed him was that he picked on a spiteful person that would do everything in his power to get the final laugh. Even making a pact with the dark forces it seems.
On Graciel:
She made the rational choice, both Obscuras and Bariel had flaws, but she saw proof that Bariel was willing to improve himself. Maybe in could be argued that Obscuras never had that chance, but he also didn't do himself any favors choosing to run away and brood rather than being mature about it and moving on. Her final actions were saving her child and blasting Dark Opal, she didn't give up, gotta respect that.
On Laban/White Opal:
Got to wonder if he's still alive first off. He didn't do anything wrong here, he saved Bariel and had enough power to defeat the monster he couldn't. He seems to be humble about being so magically strong. He became an advisor to Bariel later on and was concened about what his brother was up to. Seems like growing up they would have had a very strained relationship. He must have been an introverted bookworm, I can relate.
Thoughts on what to do about all this (aka how can we profit)
Lots of picks here: magic, artifacts, land, all could help Lex out. We have no hard numbers on how our weapons and tech would fare against Gemworld's magic and monsters however. Still worth observing what happens since we have the foster father to Princess Amethyst employed as Jinx's tutor (if that is how it played out in the quest), and boy how is that gonna go down if Amethyst and Jinx interact. Conversely it could make Amethyst's location the potential ground zero for an invasion by Dark Opal's forces, if he figures out a way to cross worlds. I think many characters in the DC world would laugh off Gemworld's existence but Lex at this point would say "Tell me more". Pretty sure US law stops at earth, so Gemworld gives us some unique opportunities, and King crimson did not state an Emerald being given out, so maybe free title up for creation/grabs
@King crimson so these are some questions I have in regards to how it affects the quest:
1. Are you doing rolls for Dark Opal actually conquering Gemworld or getting pushback/facing uprisings.
2. When did the ending of the interlude occur in the timeline of our quest? Like how old is Princess Amethyst now?
3. Is Dark Opal going to just wait for Amethyst to show up or would he try to find her? Does he see her as his nemesis or just a target to kill (he referred to her as mongrel, he definitely despises her as she is living proof of Bariel and Graciel's union)
I did not know about DC Gemworld until this quest and now I find myself interested in what you're going to do with this setting, and what we can do to