Diomedea
A piece of the continent
- Location
- The interblag
- Pronouns
- She/Her
Hmm, while you may have a point, it seems like an IC "mistake" to do. Its a passionate speech, and Viserys is kind of pouring out his soul so that other people may join his vision. Its okay his feelings for Lya show a bit here, and I don't think anything horrible will come out of it.
That said, you might want to tag Azel as he seems to carry all the votes, my job here is done
Thanks again for writing it up! It's good.
@Azel thoughts on substituting something else for "beloved Lya," to be a little less on the nose about the whole...not a mistress thing?
Also, something I was thinking about while grocery shopping. We ennobled both Ser Gerold and Alinor awhile back, but they haven't really gotten their house names or anything yet. DP probably wouldn't hate potential suggestions, given the amount of other things he has going on.
For Alinor, I thought Goldenhart would be amusing, as a subtle reference to her origins (prostitute with a heart of gold), and a reference to her rise to power (handling our gold) combo-ed with a classic heraldic animal (the hart). The downside with it is the goldenheart tree, but, eh.