....I do hope suling had left a (non-illegible) note where she went, suyin might panic if her friend went missing so soon after the duel.
Breakthroughs was specifically set to cover Week 17-Week 20, since it is simultaneously about all of our friends breaking through (and the problems that may or may not bring), Sun Liling breaking though Cai's law, and conflicts arcs with our friends being resolved.I think you have made too many arcs in Book 2.
Arc 4: Breakthroughs (Week 13 --> Moonfill Part 1)
Arc 2: Bindings ( Moonfill => Thunder Dom Redux End)
Arc 3: Breathing (Week 20 =>> ?)
Weren't the conflicts with our friends resolved before Moonfilled?Breakthroughs was specifically set to cover Week 17-Week 20, since it is simultaneously about all of our friends breaking through (and the problems that may or may not bring), Sun Liling breaking though Cai's law, and conflicts arcs with our friends being resolved.
We definitely made progress on some of our relationships before then, yeah. I think there was some clear character development in turns 18-20, with Li Suyin finally gathering her courage (seen in chapter 18 when she rebukes us for our penmanship / tells us that she wants to go into the medicine hall after her due, and then again when she wins her due l on chapter 20), us apologizing to Bai Meizhen for having her hurt us and her acknowledging that apology (and thereby acknowledging that yes, she doesn't want to hurt us).Weren't the conflicts with our friends resolved before Moonfilled?
I was actually mostly thinking about Golden Field's group and Bai Meizhen.We definitely made progress on some of our relationships before then, yeah. I think there was some clear character development in turns 18-20, with Li Suyin finally gathering her courage (seen in chapter 18 when she rebukes us for our penmanship / tells us that she wants to go into the medicine hall after her due, and then again when she wins her due l on chapter 20), us apologizing to Bai Meizhen for having her hurt us and her acknowledging that apology (and thereby acknowledging that yes, she doesn't want to hurt us).
Though yeah, I definitely get your point; it is much more fuzzy than I would like.
should this be 'rolling in from the direction of the running water'? As in, it's coming towards us from there, rather than going to it?it seemed like there was a little bit of a fog rolling in the direction of the running water she could hear.
Little does Su Ling suspect that it's not Ling Qi's personality, but the fact that she must live her life according to the harsh dictates of the action slot system which makes her pattern her actions this way."I never said you didn't," Su Ling shot back. "Simple fact is, you're something else. I figured that out awhile ago. You've got this…. Thing," she continued, making a vague gesture in the air. "Like, you're flighty and oblivious as shit sometimes, ignoring stuff that's not right in your view, but your scary intense when you've got your focus on something. You don't take breaks or get discouraged. Ya don't fail," she sounded a bit frustrated, though Ling Qi thought it was more due to not being satisfied with how she had articulated her statements.
"I'm not oblivious," Ling Qi replied irritably. "And the rest of that isn't true either. Don't you think you're making a lot of judgements when we barely know each other personally?" She took breaks, didn't she go out with Xiulan on occasion?
Su Ling shrugged. "Probably, but that's how I see it. You got the things you focus on, and you just kinda ignore everything else. I don't have that kinda drive and focus."
Ahhhhhhh@yrsillar, too late but:
We have +3 from FVM and +1 from Starlight Ribbon, so it should have been 10 dice.
Always love to see supporting character's take on protagonists that are just oblivious to how utterly ridiculous they are. Yay differences in opinions and points of view!"I don't even have my eye on the whole inner disciple thing. I'm not like you. I don't pick things up in a couple of days an' master arts in a week. I'm not arrogant enough to think I can start from nothin and a snag a spot, when I'm not some kinda prodigy," she replied matter of factly.
Good luck math beta, may you quickly make a spreadsheet or whatever ASAP!
The easiest thing to do is just have a spreadsheet with all the attributes, skills, and bonuses from arts or equipment. Then you only need to glance at it briefly when checking the dice, instead of going through the character section and fearing missing something.