I'm sorry, I know you said things after 'Sith treasure ship' but I was gone after that. That sounds like not only something Ciaran would want to pursue, but something she'd want to give her personal attention given her obsession interest about the time period.
Actually, it's the time period immediately before that one (the Mandalorian Wars to Shadow War era) that she's obsessed with.
 
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rubber-band AI is cheating to ruin any chance of any victory besides the pyrrhic kind.
Not to pile on, but isn't half the point of it being a person on the other end of the game to be able to _have_ effective rubber-banding?

I mean, I open up kotor and make mission and zaalbar Jedi guardians (mission for sneak attack and zaalbar to mitigate defense and run with the melee offense), the game doesn't adapt. Things that are supposed to be hard aren't as hard.

Also, if you've read the interstitial stuff between main canon parts, you'll realize we have been consensus- forming around Plan "Whatever name publicola is using for this turn" for the last several turns.

@Publicola has a capacity for long term planning that would make Palpatine jealous and a level of knowledge of star wars arcana to match (and has demonstrated a willingness to look stuff up if he doesn't within the last page).

There's a reason Priam's right hand droid was named "Public Cola". It wasn't because money exchanged hands. It's because he's been as instrumental for this quest as anybody not named Teron or Dr Snark.
 
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The Battle of Kalee Pt. 5 - A Look In the Mirror
Karrabac, Kalee Orbit

"Report!" Sk'ar roared out to his command crew as an explosion rocked the ship.

"Shields down to 20%, and while Trench's flagship has been forced to divert fire to the Oracle and her support ships we're still getting hit hard," a subordinate reported. "Much as we may wish to fight on to the bitter end, this ship will give out well before we do."

"Grr...what about their ship!? How much damage has it sustained!?"

"I - at this angle launching our pods at the ship would be suicide, they'd be cut down in seconds. But if we-"

"Whatever is necessary, do it! We shall cut the head from this beast! Contact whoever you can and tell them to target that ship's turrets as we maneuver!"

As the Karrabac's engines flared to life, the ship began to move through the now completely chaotic battlefield in Kalee's orbit. Ships were being ripped apart left and right whether they were Separatist or Council forces, and fighters rushed around the battlefield in massive dogfights to try and gain supremacy. However time had begun to shift to the side of the Council forces, as more and more ships started to arrive, responding to the distress call sent out from the planet.

Below the battle in the skies of Kalee, two armies charged at each other, exchanging fire before colliding with each other in a vicious melee. While the droids attempted to fire into it, it was dominated by the Huk and Kaleesh as both sides let their hatred of each other loose on their opponents. Screams of Kaleesh fury and Huk terror rang throughout it as Huk warriors attempted to rip apart their Kaleesh opponents, and the Kaleesh were all to eager to respond in kind as they brutally tore apart any Huk they killed.

In the midst of this battle a large group of Huk had surrounded the Silencer and had been trying to bring him down through sheer weight of numbers, though he would quickly respond to that with a burst from a scatter blaster or grenades, cutting down Huk in droves. Each Huk that died only seemed to enhance their terror and made them even more frenzied as they tried to bring down the demon tearing through their ranks.

HK-47 had chosen to deal with the droid forces nearby, opening fire on their lines and darting around to stay out of the firing line. While a number of shots managed to graze him and scar his armor, none managed to hit him cleanly during the melee.

Finally, in the center Grievous, Ciaran, Riphath, and the rest of the Izvoshra were tearing their way through anything that got close to them on their rampage towards the artillery batteries starting to aim for Absemi. Huk warriors and droids alike were cut down as they pressed forward - only to stop short as a familiar metallic screech echoed through the air. The group was suddenly halted as Hssiss droids leapt up from underneath the beach's sands and began relentlessly attacking them - and making matters worse was that the fight was also drawing a fair number of Huk back towards them as well, pinning them in place.

"Go!" Grievous shouted to Ciaran as he stabbed a Huk warrior that made it close to him. "You must destroy those batteries before it is too late!"

"General-!"

"I GAVE YOU AN ORDER! GO!"

While Ciaran started to protest she was cut off as she was forced to fend off a pair of Hssiss droids that had chosen her as their target, and suddenly Grievous found himself cut off from everyone else and pushed towards the water. Fighting continued around him, but the Huk warriors and Hssiss droids had stopped actively attacking, instead slowly moving forward and pushing him further and further back, daring him to attack...

Time slowed to a crawl for Grievous as he heard the sound of a wave crashing behind him.

...Was this what it was like, Ronderu? When you fought your final battle...not knowing whether victory would be assured after your death?

In that sense...I suppose there is one difference between then and now. I know Kalee will stand tall.

But...


He looked at the force arrayed against him, seeing how badly outnumbered he was and how he had been cut off from the rest of his forces.

I may not live to see that. Though in the end, I do not regret dying. Knowing that Kalee will thrive without me...I am ready.

A wave crashed against the shore, and he felt the end of it reach his feet...and something bump against one of his legs. He looked down-

And suddenly the rest of the battle didn't matter for that one moment. For at his feet was something he'd never thought he'd see again...the mask of Ronderu.

He slowly and reverentially picked it up and looked it over, wondering what whim of the gods had brought it to him in this final hour - before he realized that tears had begun to fall from his eyes.

So it was only now that the gods decided to answer my prayers? When I am ready to die?

His other hand tightened around his rifle.

No.

Not yet.

"Not yet," Grievous said quietly as he shouldered his rifle, strapped Ronderu's mask to him, and drew his Lig swords.

"I am Qymaen jai Sheelal. And I intend to survive this day."

He let out a roar of pain and fury as he charged forwards into his foes.

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"MASSIVE CONTACT INCOMING FROM HYPERSPACE!"

Steela's blood ran cold as a gigantic ship appeared from behind the Tarkin's Folly, one that was easily larger than any Lucrehulk.

"Patch us through to Thrawn, now!" Steela shouted out, and within seconds his holoimage appeared. "Admiral-"

"Hold your position."

"Are you insane!? That ship will tear us apart!"

"Do not be alarmed, it is about to be occupied."

"Multiple contacts coming in from right behind it!"

As the Malevolence moved forward dozens of ships came out of hyperspace from behind it, led by a Lucrehulk with weapons that appeared to have been welded on to it at the last minute. Surrounding it was a significant group of corvettes and support ships, and as they exited hyperspace they began to open fire on the massive ship.

Steela was certainly happy to see them, but the Malevolence was already turning to fire at them. "The reinforcements are appreciated, but-"

"They will not destroy that ship, but they can stall it. Maintain the gravity well."

She gritted her teeth as the Malevolence completed its turn, charged up a circle of ion energy, and launched it at the reinforcement fleet - while most of the ships were able to dodge it in time others were caught by the attack and were immediately depowered, listing in space before they were ripped apart by turbolaser fire.

"Dammit, that's not going to be enough to-"

"Captain! One more incoming contact! It's...fighter-sized?"

In the distance a pinprick of light appeared at the edge of the battle-

On the ground, Obi-Wan suddenly stopped in place as he felt something arrive. Ciaran's hair began to stand on end as she felt her Force Bond suddenly begin to resonate.

In the skies, Ahsoka reflexively turned her fighter towards the distance. "Is that-"

Before she could answer her own question, her comm unit crackled to life.

"Sorry for coming back at a bad time, Snips."

"Master!"

The space around the Malevolence suddenly began to erupt with explosions as Anakin began tearing his way through the Vulture droid squadrons it was launching, and the fighters around him found themselves almost reflexively fighting in sync with him as he began targeting the Malevolence's turbolaser batteries, destroying turret after turret on his charge. By the time he broke away the reinforcement fleet found themselves facing significantly less fire from the ship's left flank, and began maneuvering to take advantage of the opportunity while staying out of the firing arc of the ship's ion projectors. Seemingly content with his work, Anakin's fighter streaked across the battlefield towards Kalee.

Meanwhile at the Watcher base, the droid armies had finally overrun the Watcher's outer positions and were beginning to march into the base itself-!

"It's time!" Koliya shouted over the comms. "Everyone, hit the ground if you want to live!"

He dove to the ground and heard the men around him do the same, hearing Piebald's wild laughter-

Then the world in front of him turned to fire as massive explosions erupted across the battlefield, with charge after charge that had been buried underground going off in a relentless cascade of explosions. Within seconds the droid army went from overwhelming to nearly wiped out, and as the smoke started to clear the Watcher forces and 501st began to open fire on what was left.

"HAHAHAHAHA! YES! YEEEES! THAT WAS EVERYTHING I EVER WANTED OUT OF LIFE!" Piebald shouted out over the comms with glee.

Meanwhile on the Jenuwaa beaches, Ciaran tried to make her way towards the artillery batteries on the ground she reached out to Anakin. How-

"I followed the Bond."


She gritted her teeth as she shattered a Hssiss droid trying to close in. Well, how far-

Ciaran trailed off as she reached out and felt Anakin's presence approach - and she couldn't help but be surprised at how he felt more...tranquil, for lack of a better word?

What happened? she asked him.

"I looked in a mirror. Turns out it did me a lot of good."

As she processed that blue bolts slammed into the artillery batteries, causing them to go up in massive explosions as the silhouette of Anakin's fighter briefly peeked through the clouds before vanishing. The Huk around her turned towards the destroyed artillery before letting out a shriek of rage and terror and started to go berserk, attacking both her and the Hssiss droids in a mad rage.

With that, she found an opening and began pushing back towards Grievous, and quickly met up with everyone else as the Huk began to go berserk and attacking anything in sight, making it easy for the Kaleesh forces to mop up.

As they approached, they saw a Hssiss droid try to leap forward, only for a sword to stab through it before retracting, the now deactivated droid slumping to the ground as the Kaleesh behind it collapsed to the ground, covered in wounds.

"GENERAL!" almost everyone in attendance cried out as they rushed towards him - without a word Riphath had already made it to his side and began patching him up as best he could. "If he doesn't make it to a bacta tank in the next few minutes, he will die," Rip reported.

A pained wheeze came from him as Ciaran moved to his side. "Grievous-"

"Qymaen," he said quietly. "My name is Qymean jai Sheelal. I am done grieving," and with that he slipped into unconsciousness...

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Sk'ar roared in fury as his boarding pod pierced through the outer hull of Trench's ship, and he ripped himself out of it and tore apart the handful of B1s around him before beginning to sprint towards the bridge. The rest of the boarding party quickly gathered around him as they advanced, quickly dispatching anything in sight. When a pair of droideka rolled into sight and deployed, the Kaleesh tossed EMP grenades at them, and while it wasn't enough to shut them down it was enough to deactivate their shields. That was all Sk'ar needed as he charged forward and simply ripped apart the droidekas before stomping onward.

As he arrived on the bridge he found that Trench was already standing there, clearly waiting for him as he arrived and visibly unafraid. Curiously enough, there weren't any guards in sight, and while the rest of the boarding party gunned down everyone else on the bridge Sk'ar marched forward and grabbed the Harch by the neck, easily lifting him off of the ground.

"Any last words before I end your pathetic life?" Sk'ar said to him.

"Ha...ha...I may die today...but in death I become eter-"

His words were cut off as Sk'ar crushed his windpipe. "No. You were a pawn, and will be forgotten." With that he dropped Trench's body to the ground, and with the help of the boarding party opened up a channel. "This is Bentialis san Sk'ar. Trench is dead. Any forces attacking Kalee have already lost." Sure enough the remaining Separatist forces began to break away, and the Malevolence began to pull away, pushing through the surrounding fleet before eventually jumping to hyperspace.

With that, the Battle of Kalee had ended as dozens upon dozens of ship wrecks hovered in its orbit.

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At the base of the Shrupak Temple, Ciaran, Obi-Wan, and Ahsoka waited as they saw Anakin's modified Aetherspite fighter touch down, and Ahsoka couldn't help but smile as R2 beeped at her enthusiastically. He ejected out of the fighter as the cockpit opened, and the trio watched as Anakin slowly climbed out and faced the three of them.

He was now wearing white robes over a black bodysuit, and had a hood covering his face before he lowered it somewhat nervously. While he looked the same as he did before on the surface, it seemed as though he was much more...content, as each of them would describe him.

"Master!" Ahsoka said with a mixture of happiness and nervousness. "It's so good to see you!"

"Likewise. Though you don't need to call me 'Master' anymore," Anakin said with a light but warm smile.

"You've certainly taken a long enough vacation," Obi-Wan quipped. "Though it turns out that even with you gone I still haven't had any peace and quiet."

"I had nothing to do with that...mostly," Ciaran said, causing Anakin to chuckle at the both of their comments. "So...how are you?"

"...I'm pretty sure I've never been better in my entire life," he said before his face fell. "Though I say that, but the war's still happening." He looked between the three people in front of him. "...And I know now who's responsible for it all."

"What!?" "Are you sure!?" Obi-Wan and Ahsoka exclaimed, though Ciaran simply responded by folding her arms.

"...We are talking about Palpatine, right?" she said quietly.

"Yes," Anakin replied.

"H-how did you figure it out!?" Ahsoka said, eyes wide. "There's no way you could have...how!?"

"It's..." Anakin sighed. "It's a long, long story. I'd like to explain it, but..." He faced Ciaran. "Right now we should worry about what you're going to say to the inevitable Republic 'reinforcements.' After that we can talk about where I've been, what I've learned, and...what I'm going to be doing now."

She nodded in agreement before turning to face Obi-Wan and Ahsoka. "I'm glad the Resolute is already gone, but-"

"We'll take a shuttle back to it, don't worry," Obi-Wan said. "As far as anyone knows, we were never here."

"You seriously think you can cover up our help?" Ahsoka said to Ciaran, who merely chuckled in response.

"My dear, covering up the involvement of one ship's worth of clones is child's play for someone like me," she boasted. "The Kaleesh will claim that they won this battle themselves, my people already won't say anything, and everyone else understands that the events of today are classified. We can't cover up that a battle happened, but we can make a ship disappear."

"So...what are you going to say, then?" Anakin asked.

"The Pride of the Core is coming," Obi-Wan pointed out. "You'll have to do something spectacular to appease her captain."

"Knowing that there's only so much I can do in this state? This:"

[] "'While we are horrified at the events that have occurred, we will not be taking action until we understand the full details behind this attack. We do not yet know why Trench decided to attack Kalee, or even if he was being supported by the Separatists.' It's not much, but it's by far the least dangerous story I can spin here."
[] "'It may be true that we had to fend off an attack on Kalee, but the Council will find it hard to swallow that the Republic 'reinforcements' arrived well after the battle ended - how are we supposed to trust in protection and security like that? Let alone a military that loses track of one of its most dangerous enemies.' I'll try and turn the tables and have people focus on the Republic's 'incompetence,' which shouln't be too hard a sell with RI in chaos."
[] "'It's clear that with this attack that things can no longer continue the way they are, but the Council must come to a decision on what to do at this juncture.' We'll have to use bureaucracy to stall at this point. It means that there's going to be an answer expected sooner or later, but it'll also give me the most cover to work with."
[] "...Okay, hear me out..." (Write-in)

AN: And I'm back! Sorry for the radio silence - I ended up taking something of an impromptu and brief hiatus as I realized I was getting more and more writer's block when I was writing this. But after some R&R as well as some other good stuff that let me do something other than IH for a bit, I'm back, ready to go, and more than eager to kick things back into gear!

I realize this is a bit of a short update to end the main battle of Kalee, but hopefully it's a satisfying conclusion to the fighting itself - though there's going to be quite a bit to cover for the denouement. Also wanted to toss in a vote to help get things back into motion (and because it's a legitimately important decision to make).

Enjoy~
 
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The boy is back in town, nice.

As for the vote, I'll leave that to more capable brains then my own. War, madness, pain, that I can navigate with ease, but politics?

Not even someone as tainted by the dark side as myself can deal with such evil.
 
[] "'While we are horrified at the events that have occurred, we will not be taking action until we understand the full details behind this attack. We do not yet know why Trench decided to attack Kalee, or even if he was being supported by the Separatists.' It's not much, but it's by far the least dangerous story I can spin here."
[] "'It may be true that we had to fend off an attack on Kalee, but the Council will find it hard to swallow that the Republic 'reinforcements' arrived well after the battle ended - how are we supposed to trust in protection and security like that? Let alone a military that loses track of one of its most dangerous enemies.' I'll try and turn the tables and have people focus on the Republic's 'incompetence,' which shouln't be too hard a sell with RI in chaos."
[] "'It's clear that with this attack that things can no longer continue the way they are, but the Council must come to a decision on what to do at this juncture.' We'll have to use bureaucracy to stall at this point. It means that there's going to be an answer expected sooner or later, but it'll also give me the most cover to work with."
[] "...Okay, hear me out..." (Write-in)
Hmm...

Not liking the middle one, exactly. I do kinda think that Grievous might be useful here as a speaker.
 
Mmm, why not? Given all that's happened, it could potentially work.
It reminds me of Pre-Separatist reasoning, which I'm concerned would be basically handing Palpatine a tool. Something else to consider is that different planets will take that differently depending on their location in the various regions of Known Space.
 
[] "'It's clear that with this attack that things can no longer continue the way they are, but the Council must come to a decision on what to do at this juncture.' We'll have to use bureaucracy to stall at this point. It means that there's going to be an answer expected sooner or later, but it'll also give me the most cover to work with."
"The only thing that saves us from the bureaucracy is inefficiency."
-Eugene McCarthy.

If there is one thing that Warhammer 40,000 has taught me it's that there is nothing more powerful than the collective laziness of beaurocrats.
 
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"The only thing that saves us from the bureaucracy is inefficiency."
-Eugene McCarthy.

If there is one thing that Warhammer 40,000 has taught me it's that there is nothing more powerful than the collective laziness of beaurocrats.
Also as you mentioned before, even Palpatine would have trouble with the Great Enemy of bureaucracy.
 
It reminds me of Pre-Separatist reasoning, which I'm concerned would be basically handing Palpatine a tool. Something else to consider is that different planets will take that differently depending on their location in the various regions of Known Space.
To sort of expand on this, the thing I realize is that you could in theory use the middle option to leverage planets in Separatist space towards the CNS.

True. It took him 19 years before he felt it right and secure to remove it from his domain entirely OTL.
Yeah. I don't know if it's the best option, in part because it's hard to guess how Palps would react to it. Same with the others to be honest.
 
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[] "'While we are horrified at the events that have occurred, we will not be taking action until we understand the full details behind this attack. We do not yet know why Trench decided to attack Kalee, or even if he was being supported by the Separatists.' It's not much, but it's by far the least dangerous story I can spin here."
Basically, deflect until we're able to give a better answer. This is certainly the safe bet, though I'm not sure it'd be compelling to either the Republic or to our allies within the CNS. There will be calls to retaliate, especially since the CNS is still officially part of the Republic.


[] "'It may be true that we had to fend off an attack on Kalee, but the Council will find it hard to swallow that the Republic 'reinforcements' arrived well after the battle ended - how are we supposed to trust in protection and security like that? Let alone a military that loses track of one of its most dangerous enemies.' I'll try and turn the tables and have people focus on the Republic's 'incompetence,' which shouln't be too hard a sell with RI in chaos."
The concept is good, but the execution... not so much. This response strikes me as a real 'poison pill', especially since it'd be really easy for Palpatine to spin things so blame falls on us and the CNS. ("These so-called neutral systems do not permit Republic military protection or patrols, so it's no surprise that we lost track of a rebel fleet invading their space, or our fleets arrived long after they would have been useful. This merely demonstrates how neutrality in this war is a fools' errand, as the Separatists are a militaristic power, a threat to all peace-loving people in the galaxy..." blah blah blah). If we're going to blame the Republic for incompetence, we'll need a comprehensive PR push to make sure it works, and to make sure neutral systems don't notice we're blaming the Republic for a Separatist attack.... Yeah, on second thought, I really don't see this working out.


[] "'It's clear that with this attack that things can no longer continue the way they are, but the Council must come to a decision on what to do at this juncture.' We'll have to use bureaucracy to stall at this point. It means that there's going to be an answer expected sooner or later, but it'll also give me the most cover to work with."
This seems like the safest bet -- be honest about deflecting, until the official political leadership has a response. However, this is probably the most costly option, since we'd effectively guarantee that we'd need a Diplomacy action to take care of this next turn.


[] "...Okay, hear me out..." (Write-in)
Okay, hear me out, I just had a crazy idea for a write-in.

Palpatine is a grade-A certified master manipulator, right? Sith Lord, his every word is a lie, all that rot. Have we ever considered, just... telling the truth?

Fact #1: Admiral Trench was in charge of Separatist military assets
Fact #2: Admiral Trench went rogue, and was no longer responding to orders from Dooku or the Separatist Council
Fact #3: We were warned of this invasion by Dooku certain unnamed sympathetic voices within the Separatist government
Fact #4: This attack showed all the signs of a false-flag set-up, trying to draw the CNS into armed conflict

Easy peasy. Now Palpatine is on the look-out for parties unknown within the CIS who defied his and/or Dooku's orders. Specifically, he'd probably order Dooku to investigate -- Republic Intelligence has been defanged, so he may not have assets of his own to do the job. At that point, we could pin the blame on whatever group is most convenient to us. Perhaps we might credit the Commerce Guild, seeing as we ousted Shu Mai and replaced her with one of our associates (SoroSuub will probably be joining Neutral Space in the near future, after all). Or we might plant evidence that the leak came from the Corporate Alliance, one of the few megacorps in the CIS that we don't have in our pocket.

Or, better yet, we could blame the Hyper-Communications Cartel. Frankly, looking at the wiki, the HCC look perfect for our purposes.
  • They're another CIS megacorp we don't have in our pocket
  • They're responsible for broadcasting Separatist propaganda via the CIS Shadowfeed (the Corporate Alliance owns the hardware for the Shadowfeed, but the HCC determines the content).
  • Their headquarters are located on the planet of Ando, next door to Admiral Trench's homeworld of Secundus Ando.
  • The HCC is staffed by Aqualish, who are distantly related to the Harch (Trench's species). Notably, the Aqualish and the Harch don't get along.
  • The Ando sector was absolutely ravaged 30 years before by the Andoan Civil War, when Admiral Trench won his stripes by defeating the Andoan Free Worlds in battle. Plenty of time for local resentments to build up, and for Aqualish sympathizers to infiltrate the HCC.
  • Ando was one of the first sectors to join the Separatist movement, specifically because the Republic intervened in their Civil War and forced the entire sector to demilitarize. Why did the Republic intervene? Because Admiral Trench was so reckless, ruthless, and brutal in the final Battle of Raquish (going out of his way to target Andoan civilians and non-combatants), that the Republic felt obligated to step in and impose peace on the Andoan government.
Basically: Admiral Trench is a military hero to the general public of Ando, but his excesses were directly responsible for the unsatisfactory end to the war, in the eyes of the Andoan government and upper class. His tactical success was in fact a strategic blunder, and the governing elite know it.

If Po Nudo or other high-level members of the HCC had discovered Admiral Trench bent on making the same farking error that he made in the last war, it's certainly plausible that they'd reach out to try to mitigate the fallout. Plant evidence that this actually occurred, and the HCC will either moderate its propaganda (making it easier to recruit them for the CNS down the road) or devour itself in a bloody purge of any moderate voices (making it easier for our new media network to establish itself while its main competitor is distracted).
 
"HAHAHAHAHA! YES! YEEEES! THAT WAS EVERYTHING I EVER WANTED OUT OF LIFE!" Piebald shouted out over the comms with glee.
Good to see my child enjoying himself. Also, you now see why he is not allowed to know where the anti-matter is kept, don't you?
"Qymaen," he said quietly. "My name is Qymean jai Sheelal. I am done grieving,"
I want a huk kill count for his grieving. Just for future benchmarking purposes.
"No. You were a pawn, and will be forgotten." With that he dropped Trench's body to the ground
That is so true... Who was he again?:V:V:V
Anakin sighed. "It's a long, long story. I'd like to explain it, but..."
So pretty much the same as every other thing that happened to him after talking to Ciaran
[X] "...Okay, hear me out..." (Write-in)
-[X] How were they able to peel this many ships from the battle lines to attack a none contributing planet without anyone being able to notice their movement of forces or us noticing their shift in attention. To me, it looks like there are agents and moles in both our intelligence agencies.
-[X] "'It's clear that with this attack that things can no longer continue the way they are, but the Council must come to a decision on what to do at this juncture.' We'll have to use bureaucracy to stall at this point. It means that there's going to be an answer expected sooner or later, but it'll also give me the most cover to work with."

Hear me out before you tear me to threads.

First, the movement of that many ships away from the battlefront (even if from several fronts) should have set off a number of alarms even if the alarms were just that they were preparing for something.

Secondly, notice the usage of the words us and our in the option. They are placed to invoke a subliminal sense of fellowship without committing to the Republic's side.

Then we give them a plausible but time consuming to verify explanation for their own 'failure' and only then hit them with the paperwork and bureaucracy.

By doing it this way they can not be pushy without looking like asshat villains to everyone including their own supporters until they both complete an audit/investigation of their intelligence agencies (good luck getting that done within the decade believably) and hearing back from our faction.
 


I happened to be listening to this while reading the update, and it really enhanced the experience. Also, I like Publicola's idea. I'd vote for it if it was in a vote-able format. It's so perfect for us.
 
this quest better not end in a tragedy, y'all. just binged all the way up to Fortune's End - Four Men in a Dimly Lit Room, not gonna read any further till turn 29 ends, but so far it sounds like shit's getting worse and worse. yeah, Palpatine is crazy powerful, but as it stands the situation looks just plain unwinnable. even critical successes all the way up to the Insane variety don't seem to be improving matters - in recent chapters, it feels like the difficulty scaling was set to ultra-hard and the rubber-band AI is cheating to ruin any chance of any victory besides the pyrrhic kind.

in particular, arranging for a Force Wound to appear in the temple with pre-prepared "everything was already terrible forever" justification and a "no you CAN'T get them out of the temple by any means because they're already compromised, go hope Yoda isn't already corrupted" feels like a big 'fuck you' from the QM and the story. am i REALLY expected to believe there was any way at all the questers could have had the level of foreknowledge and meta-knowledge needed to keep the coruscant jedi order from falling apart in a train wreck?

add to that that the foundry is apparently impossible to make significant use of in any way that won't utterly obliterate the galaxy (because APPARENTLY we can't build LIMITS or ETHICS or REASONABLE RESTRAINT into its droids), something even more awful is going to be coming which we just have to HOPE the Chiss hold off, all new Clone Troopers are apparently coming out with fully-functional inhibitor chips despite Skirata allegedly sabotaging the chip programming itself in a canon piece iirc (forget which one though), and Palpatine keeps pulling new ploys and new aces out of his ass at every juncture... is this going to turn into a "watch the galaxy burn" story? it was fun to read up to this point (excepting the temple bombing arc, which was just painful) but if this is gonna turn into a "watch the galaxy burn" story i don't think it'll stay very fun.

Hmm, I only finished recently too, but to me it seems like matters have significantly improved. We are up to a 14% chance of success as of the latest "Palpatine Counter-Action Report". Moreover, I'm pretty sure we have successfully cleared out all the obstacles that were keeping Count Dooku from turning on Palpatine. We have won over Obi-Wan to our conspiracy, we have won over Quinlan Vos to our conspiracy, Anakin will likely join soon, Taozin research was completed and needing integration, the force techniques from the Disciples of Twilight have already been fully integrated into the Abyss Walkers training program (and we're going to be getting new Abyss Walkers at an increased rate), completing "[] HK-47 - Write the Book" resulted in a "significant boost to combat against Force-users for regular troops".

We've spent a long long time trying to keep Palpatine from realizing exactly how powerful we are, exactly how much of a threat we are. Flying under the radar, trying to gain power without drawing too much attention. All the pieces are falling into place, and we're improving our chances of beating Palpatine at a growing rate. Anakin alone probably represents a double-digit increase in our chances. With another 2-3 turns to consolidate power and convince Dooku and Anakin to fully buy into our conspiracy we will have a solid chance of beating Palpatine short of a major curveball.
 
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So we get an insane 100+ roll on this and are forced to contend with a vote. On politics. How exactly is this a good result remind me?

I kid, I kid.
 
What blue bolts? Was that Anakins fighter?

100 on the loot table.

I'm confused, if we're telling the truth, what is the lie?
I don't know if Ciaran can manage that.

No no no, the truth is just the setup for the proper lie here - that this was the result of meddling on the part of moderate members of the HCC as opposed to an actual attack from the CIS. We just can't say the lie up front. We have to plant all the evidence first. It's like a normal lie, just with more steps, which is totally in Ciaran's wheelhouse.
 
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