Omake: A Ground View (Canon)
AN: Ah shit, here we go again.




A Ground View


The Blazing-Burning-Life-Stone-Sun was raised high in the clear, noon sky as the Kin moved through the crowd towards his destination. The crowd rippled and swarmed around him heading in both directions,talking and chattering and buzzing with life and humor, seemingly oblivious to his bulk and size, plus the sack that he carried over his scarred shoulder.

He wasn't surprised, they probably had seen dozens, if not hundreds of his kind over the decades. A Kin wasn't a strange sight anymore, even one as large as himself. Stone, a Hippogryph wasn't a strange sight anymore! Sure enough, he could see more than a dozen other Kin scattered throughout the crowd, talking and chatting or carrying boxes and crates towards the market. No, the lack of stares didn't give him pause.

What did give him pause was the looks he did get. They weren't angry or hostile, though some voices were raised in annoyance when the bumped into him, (he made sure apologize when it happened, just like his Mother-Sire has taught him). Nor were they of disgust or revulsion, which he would have understood, having seen the scars and damage done to his frame. No, these stares were odd in a different way.

Sun-Blessed-Spark-Stone had been young when his Pack had moved from their ancestral tunnels to this city on the Empires west coast. Barely 12 cycles old, he had been awed by the sheer scope and size of the place, having been so used to the small and enclosed tunnels of his home. The walls and building looked like they had been crafted by giants of Stone and Air, and the sheer amount of Tall-Winged-Bird-Lions and later Ponies that inhabited and moved in the streets had overwhelmed him. Then, when he was 15 cycles, he had seen the Emperor and his wife in person. He remembered them looking big, so alive and regal. So wonderful. Back then, he had promised that he would do what he could to be apart of it all,

Now, 40 cycles old, Sun-Spark still felt dwarfed by the scope of it all, and tried to uphold his promise. It hadn't been easy.

He had joined up in the Empires armies as soon as he had been able when war had broken with Sombra, and had fought on the front line. There, on the field of the battle with the tyrant, he had taken a spiked flail to the right shoulder that had punctured his armor, and a troll had raked down his back with its clawed fists. In another fight, he had his cheek pierced by a arrow and had to be held down by six Griffons when they later removed it. Later, in the taking of the Crystal city, he had served with Captain Kaboom, and had his nose broken four times by a enemy soldier. He still couldn't explain that one out of embarrassment.

After that, he had served for several cycles more, then was discharged. He returned home and, not sure what to do with himself, had started doing odd jobs around the city. Some days he worked at the city docks hauling cargo, other days he worked at the bakery and smithys around the city to earn his daily bread.

That's when the looks started.

Every once in a while, he'd catch little glances and looks from Griffons and Ponies. A smile here, a wink there. When he worked in the smithy some days, he'd catch mares and Griffons looking at him, giggling and whispering to each other. When he tried to smile and give a wave, they would squeak and giggle and run away. He'd had children come up to him and give him flowers, or tell him that their mothers thought he was weird. He always said thank you, or your welcome, not sure how to take it, and the children would be bustled away by their embarrassed mothers.

He wasn't sure what to make of it. When he had asked his ancient Grand-Sire-Elder what it meant and she had merely laughed, shaking her head at his apparent foolishness. She hadn't been much help after that, just laughing at his inquiries.

Now, 40 cycles old and he still wasn't sure what to make of it. Stones, he wasn't sure about many things these Moons. It seemed like the world was going mad some moons, and others like it was business as usual.

Sun broke from his reverie as he noticed the street widening before him. He hurried his pace, and soon entered into the city square. Here, the main centers of businesses and biggest taverns were located, as was most of the market stalls in the city. A smile broke onto Suns scarred face as he looked. Here, Sun thought as he moved through crowds towards, was the true promise of the Empire. Not it's law or it's armies, but this.

Hundreds of Kin, Griffons and Ponies moved about their business, shopping, selling, chatting and courting. All living together. Little groups of foals and pups played in the street, games of tag and dolls and play. Kin haggled with Ponies. Ponies argued with Griffons. Griffon joked with Kin and Ponies.

This is what the Empire promised.

Sun-Spark moved through the crowds towards his destination, a large inn on the other side of the plaza. It's stone and light wood frame with its peculiar shape always reminded Sun of a large tan frog. It's sign read The Crooked Wing. He looked at the picture of a crooked wing hanging from the bottom of the sign, snorted, and then headed inside.

He entered the Inn and looked around. It would be turning into evening soon, and a few patrons were already here, drinking and chatting at the tables. The Inn doubled as a tavern, so could always expect a crowd. Sun spotted a familiar brown mane and head at the bar, and grinned. He had arrived just in time before the rush. Securing the sack to his scarred shoulder, he moved towards the bar, taking care to not disturb any one.

The brown Griffon turned to face him, and a grin broke out on his face. " Well," said Lucius, setting the dirty linen down as the Kin arrived at the bar and settled the bag on the inn floor. " Took you long enough. What, did you get lost on your way here, or did some strumpets hero your attention?"

Sun snorted, and looked the Griffon in the eye, scarred face deadpan. " Please. Only your mother would like this Kins face. She's probably used to it everynight, since she had to stare at something similar when you were born."

Lucius barked out a harsh laugh, the scar on his feathered throat bulging a little in the dim light. Several patrons looked up from their conversations at outburst of noise, then looked back down.

Lucius wiped a tear from his eyes and looked at Sun, the mirth fading from his expression to business. " Well, do you have my delivery from the docks?" Sun nodded, and lifting up the bag, showed the contents to the Griffon, who whistled softly. "Well alright then, looks about right. Go head and put that in the back, then take a seat in the corner. I'll bring out what I owe you in a bit." Sun nodded, and hefting the sack once more, carried it into the back.

Several hours later, the tavern was in full swing. Patrons and customers drank and laughed, chatting and drinking away the days work. Servers moved from table to table with ale and food, Kin, Griffons and Ponies Alike.

Sun sat down in the corner of the inn, nursing a mug of ale in his massive paws as he looked over the parchment before him. Such a small, fragile thing. But so much weight in its contents. News from Maretonia, from the Republics across the sea, and much more. As he looked over the report, his hearing caught snippets of gossip and conversation throughout the room.

"-Ear about Gloria? Ran away at the ceremony, and eloped with a Diamond Dog!! Oh the scand-"

"- has decreed and started the construction of a new set of defense along the Southern Border. The Perg-"

"-line is being expanded. The Emperor is calling for more workers to bring it to all the cities of the Empi-"

"- news from Maretonia. The houses are locked in a stalemate, no one has a advantage apparently. Poor slaves, caught in the midd-"

" - nly the Light of the true god, Emperor Garrick, Blessed Be His Divine Majesty, can save our mortal souls from the Darkne-"

His Sire-Parents and Pack had named him
Sun-Blessed when he had been a pup. He never understood why, but they said that he had shined like the sun amongst his siblings-litter-Kin. When pressed, they said that he had always been, different. Quieter. Brighter. Blessed.

He disagreed, of course, saying he was no better than anybody else or wanted to be. They had laughed, and said that he would understand what he meant one day.

A movement at the Inn entrance caught his attention, and Sun looked up to see the flash of a green cloak in the light. Right on schedule.

It had been four moons since the Emperors spymaster Ravensburg had contacted him. He didn't know why or how he had been contacted, but he had asked and Sun had agreed. It was a simple task, he said, one suited for your talents. A job that, if done correctly, will benefit the whole of the Empire. They need a ground view, as he put it.

Sun was happy to oblige.

Ravensburg never sent the same agent twice. He was too smart for that. Agents can be recognized, followed. He always chose his people with care. This one was good. The Pony was cream colored, brown-maned and seemingly dull brown eyes. Even their cloak was dull, lifeless. Someone who, despite all odds, the eye would slip over, who could slip in and out of the crowds with ease.

The pony moved through the room, seemingly weaving through the tables,and went to the bar, and spoke to Lucius. The Griffon nodded, and reaching under the bar, poured the pony a drink. The pony nodded in thanks, and holding the cup in his mouth, trotted over to the corner near Sun.

As the pony moved closer, it happened. He seemingly tripped on nothing, hooves flailing and dull eyes wide with shock. Moving fast, Sun reached out a paw and caught the pony, catching him before he fell to the ground.

The other patrons didn't even notice, too busy watching a waitress pony sock a Griffon in the beak with a buck, knocking the drunk off his stool to his friends delight.

"Careful there friend." Said Sun as he set down the Pony, and smoothing out his cloak, put the folded parchment in a small pocket on the cloak. " Don't want you to spill your drink."

The pony righted himself, and looking at Sun, nodded in thanks. Turning away, he glanced at Sun, and said in a flat voice, " The Emperor Protects," and moved towards a different table. Sun watched him go, and felt himself smiling softly.

" The Emperor Protects."


AN: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh.

@Questor, I give this trash to you. Merry Christmas you beautiful soul.
 
Ya'llllllllll, I'm fucking duuuuuummbbb! I missed one of the percentages for an action (Subterranean Supplylines) entirely in my previous Omake Application scorecards! Whoops. OTOH, there's still time to apply thy Omakes! Also Merry Whatever-Winter-Holidays ya'll might be celebrating this year! <33333

% Success Chances for this upcoming Plan (for questers to Apply Omake Bonuses to):
MARTIAL:

Military Advisors 70% + 14% (Garrick) + 10 ('Crystal Clear Glass' by FictionPack) = Base 94%
(1/2 Max Omake Bonuses Applied)

LEARNING:
Crystal Rune Replication: 70% + 18% (Garrick) + 10 ('Imposter Syndrome' by Sentient Tree) = Base 98%
(1/2 Max Omake Bonuses Applied)

Arcane Agricultural Practices: 65% + 18% (Garrick) = Base 83%
(0/2 Max Omake Bonuses Applied)

INTRIGUE:
Spying on the Stars: 60% + 13% (Garrick) + 10 ('Crushing It (in Imperial Accounting)' by Markala) = Base 83%
(1/2 Max Omake Bonuses Applied)

Subterranean Supplylines: 70% + 13% (Garrick) = Base 83%
(0/2 Max Omake Bonuses Applied)
 
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A great injustice has been done. These omakes don't have a threadmark! Unless they are too short to count or something.

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So..didn't the GM say that there's a population boom and a whole new generation of post-discord born citizens who need food and jobs? Did we actually do any action about that? Or like is it not modeled in-game?
 
So..didn't the GM say that there's a population boom and a whole new generation of post-discord born citizens who need food and jobs? Did we actually do any action about that? Or like is it not modeled in-game?
there were two specific actions about dealing with the population boom.

1) sewer systems, and sanitation in general. We already took it, and it will be completed this turn.

2) more farmland. We can't take it cause we don't have the action to spare.
We took the "farming magic" action instead to buy some more time and raise efficiency. We'll likely take that one next turn.

Food won't become a problem immediately, it's a gradual raise in demand, and as we had a decent surplus we felt safe enough in waiting a bit.

And about the jobs... well, pretty much every stewardship action we take creates more jobs in one field or another.

Building and maintaining rails and trains, rebuilding the crystal protectorate, the shipyards, traders, merchants, scientists, soldiers...
 
So..didn't the GM say that there's a population boom and a whole new generation of post-discord born citizens who need food and jobs? Did we actually do any action about that? Or like is it not modeled in-game?

I was just assuming that GM was rolling for famine & etcetera inconveniences to us behind the scenes, and that thus far we've dodged it. Plus we're doing the whole Arcane Agricultural thing this coming turn results, and plan to do the Agressive Agricultural Expansion next turn? So it's flavor text but indicative of behind the scenes rolling?

Plus yeah, everything Pittauro said.
 
So it seems like next turn we'll need to do the cold case and aggressive farming at the very least.

Welp, time to put the cart before the pony, as usual.

I've already created a rough Turn 26 Wishlist:
[ ] Doubling the Guard: Cost: 3000 Time: Two Years. Reward: Imperial Army Doubles in Size.
[ ] Cog Conversion: Cost: 700 Time: Two Years. Reward: 20 Cogs Converted into 14 Carracks.
*Mind, unless Questor gives us more interesting Martial Options for next turn, 'cause Cog Conversion ain't exactly super urgent (but I could be wrong). But urgh I wish we could at least give Kestrella a frickin' knightly order before we hand the reins over to Gawain. I wonder if our steam age Learning could give us steam boats any faster...? Or magic steam, who knows.

[ ] Canterbury Caravans: Cost: 200. Time: One Year. Reward: Trade with Canterbury Established, Increased Trade Income.
** And whatever-the-heck-gets-unlocked-with-the-Minotaur-Republics
*More income's always nice, and the other 500g/1-turn money bleed we were penalized from turn 24 should be gone, so that leaves us with net gains, even with the new Orichalcum Trade cost??

[ ] Rail Network: Cost: 1500. Time: Four Years. Reward: National Freight Railway Network Constructed. Increased Tax Income. New Options Unlocked. FINISHES THANK FUCK
[ ] Aggressive Agricultural Expansion: Cost: 1000. Time: Two Years. Reward: Expanded Agriculture, Secured Food Supply, Increased Income.
*Non-negotiable, I'd slap an Imp-Order on it if we had the extra personal slots but we don't afaik now so looooool.

[ ] Sound the War Horns!: Cost: 300. Time: One Year. Reward: Gain War Horns. Upgrade Army Communications Bonus.
[ ] Gas, Gas, Gas: Cost: 300. Time: One Year. Reward: Lifting Gases Identified.
*We waited long enough on the Communication upgrade, to bad we can't just jump straight to magic or technical radio yet. And we already started the airships project, do ya'll think the Gas project would assist in future crossbow ideas? Airgun crossbows? Or am I being a silly and Lifting gases aren't good for that?

[ ] Cold Case: Cost: 500. Time: One Year. Reward: Information on Queen Mareia's Assassination.
** Whatever-gets-unlocked-by-Spying-on-the-Stars

[ ] Ancient Empire Excavations: Cost: 100. Time: One Year. Reward: Ancient Religious Artifacts recovered.

[ ] Meeting Merlin: Cost: 0. Time: One Year. Reward: Information on Merlin Ambrosius, chance to unlock new Actions.
[ ] Pet (Rock) Project: Cost: 0. Time: One Year. Reward: ???

That means about 7600G of the total budget spoken for, not including any hypothetical new actions available next turn that Questor comes up with for us.
 
Please keep in mind that if we don't pick Heist next turn it's chance of success will begin to decrease.

Oh yeah, good point, I forgot about Hoofbeard's Heist! But... Wasn't that bit about the Cold Case? Not sure how it'll pan out considering we want to keep the cold war between the factions going and I guess whether or not we do it hinges on the intel we gather from them this turn; but I still kinda want to do the heist along w/ the cold case... Food for thought, thanks! <333
 
I'm hoping that Spying on the Stars could improve the Heist's chances significantly I mean? To the point that it might affect other houses if we play our cards right. Or mitigate the consequences of waiting at least 1-2 turns without significant % success decrease.

Also I wonder if we'll get any options to gather intel on the Royal Guard faction, I feel like they might... I dunno, be possibly important, but that might just be my detective/what-a-twist senses tingling.
 
Welp, time to put the cart before the pony, as usual.

I've already created a rough Turn 26 Wishlist:
[ ] Doubling the Guard: Cost: 3000 Time: Two Years. Reward: Imperial Army Doubles in Size.
[ ] Cog Conversion: Cost: 700 Time: Two Years. Reward: 20 Cogs Converted into 14 Carracks.
*Mind, unless Questor gives us more interesting Martial Options for next turn, 'cause Cog Conversion ain't exactly super urgent (but I could be wrong). But urgh I wish we could at least give Kestrella a frickin' knightly order before we hand the reins over to Gawain. I wonder if our steam age Learning could give us steam boats any faster...? Or magic steam, who knows.
I more or less agree with everything, but I'm a bit worried that taking the "expand army and navy" options might be taken as a signal to "prepare for war" by the maretonia factions. After all why would we double our army if we didn't expect to use it?

It's a lot easier to have quality upgrades go unnoticed (crossbows, horns for communication, mortars as a different type of cannon..) compared to a DOUBLING of the army numbers I think. Especially because they probably don't really understand how much of a difference those upgrades actually make.

We might wish to explore to the south of maretonia instead. There are only two lands/people undiscovered on our continent, and we might want to learn who's the last of their neighbours, just in case we can make a deal with them (or to stop them from allying with our enemies).
 
I more or less agree with everything, but I'm a bit worried that taking the "expand army and navy" options might be taken as a signal to "prepare for war" by the maretonia factions. After all why would we double our army if we didn't expect to use it?

It's a lot easier to have quality upgrades go unnoticed (crossbows, horns for communication, mortars as a different type of cannon..) compared to a DOUBLING of the army numbers I think. Especially because they probably don't really understand how much of a difference those upgrades actually make.

Fair point, tbh I'd be willing to put it on the backburner for well, the exact turn before outright war or whatever. It's just there aren't a ton of Martial options that were super pressing at the moment in the last lineup. Worse comes to worse, we cam imp order on doubling our army right before everything really starts, basically cramming it in at the last second, lol, procrastination at its best. :p

We might wish to explore to the south of maretonia instead. There are only two lands/people undiscovered on our continent, and we might want to learn who's the last of their neighbours, just in case we can make a deal with them (or to stop them from allying with our enemies).

Also a fair point, could work out pretty well. Maybe instead we could do, the South Exploration (AND FINALLY USE THAT BONUS TO EXPLORATION ROLL THAT'S BEEN GATHERING DUST FOR YEARS; lmao) and the Knights of the Frontier? Or the Cogs, while doubling the army is pretty telling, the ship upgrades might pass under the radar for a bit if not coupled with the army doubling.

(Wow, I'm feeling chatty today :) ) Also I wonder if it's possible for our Diplomacy teams can coordinate with Neighpon's on the whole Emerald Isles/Caribou Kingdoms thing, if we later make diplomatic contact with the Caribous Kingdoms, and Neighpon fielding the Emerald Isles side.
 
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Should we send any explorers to see if there are any other nations close by or perhaps some open territory for us or our allies to settle.
 
With our luck in exploration we'll find a moving, vanishing island covered in fog that screams.
Discordance.

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Dark Island

Mercy! Mercy! Even if you are only one more dream, have mercy. Take me on board. Take me, even if you strike me dead. But in the name of all mercies do not fade away and leave me in this horrible land.Lord Rhoop The Dark Island (also known as "The Island Where Dreams Come True") was a highly...

Dark Island from the Voyage of the Dawn Treader much? The one that brings Dreams, good and bad, to life, but mostly nightmarish and terrifying? Oof, we're gonna need these then:
Naval Navigation Tools: +5 on certain Naval and Exploration Rolls
Pre-Discord Map: +10 to next Exploration Roll
 
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I do hope we find the Zebras at one point we already found Neighpon so i want to find the last of the trio we could pick from. hopefully they arent in chaos and are willing to be friendly.
 
It's going to be extremely funny if we find Equestria (or Proto-Equestria?) absolutely bum last, I'm dying to see the butterflies lol.
 
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