AN: This was hard to write. But people asked for monsters and boogie men. And thus, we have one.

Moon-Mad

" NO!! MOMMY HEL"

Snap!

Crunch. Crunch.

Snap! Crunch. Crack.

The noise echoes throughout the tunnel, bouncing off the sleek, etched stone. Worn down by the ages, by the lake above and the movement of time, the stone, once strong and firm, took on a mossy, desolate look, incapable of hiding its misery. Green and White Crystals grew like rot on a wound, streaking and entwining down the walls of the tunnel like vines around a dead limb, twisting and glowing faintly like a smothered sun. They sprouted out in small patches here and there, looking for all the world like little crystal mushrooms in the dark.

Crunch. Crunch.

Snap! Crunch. Pop.

Weeping.

The locals called this place The Weeping Halls, and it was not hard to see why. The constant drip and run of water down sleek rock and the soft howl of wind from hidden tunnels and openings to the surface sounded like the soft, mournful cry of the dead, seeking to be heard by the living and the whole. To say goodbye. Or to warn of doom.

Crunch. Crunch. Pop!

Scrape. Whining pleas and whimpering fear. A squeak of pain! Then crunch. Crunch. Crunch.

Once, he had been told, it had been a prosperous mine in the northern part of the Empire. The Tall-Winged-Bird-Lions who had hired him had droned on about the regions proud history, of the battles and wars that had been fought for it in times past. Of its importance, nay, its vital necessity to the Empire.

A load of shite. The other towns had said the same thing, as well as the little villages of Crystal Ponies. The citizens told him more. Such places were vital towards the settlements survival and growth. The Empire has hundreds of such mines, and much more farmland and rivers beside.

A Lie. But a useful lie, for he would not be here otherwise.

Weeping. Cries of pain. A Squeal of agony, a cry for mercy. And the Stone-Damned Crunch. Crunch.

Ice crept through the dark, slivered steel and clinking plate glowing faintly in the gloom. His metal boots scraped against the stone beneath, disturbing rocks and small patches of loose crystal. His cold, bright eyes peered through the slits of his helm, looking out into the dark tunnel. Little bones and tufts of fur lay scattered throughout the tunnel before him, chewed and marred by teeth and claw.

To a Griffon or Pony, such a place would be pitch black, impossible to navigate. To him, it was a clear as day, and he could feel the tunnel stretching before him, branching off to the left and write into twisting paths. His quarry lay ahead.

He stopped. Ahead, a pool of steaming liquid lay in a small crevice to the left. It's dropped down from the ceiling of the tunnel, from a hole above it. He approached, and knelt before it, examining it closer. The liquid was clear, and seemed to bubble and burst of its own accord. His lifted his face plate, and sniffed cautiously. It smelled... of licorice?

A scrape to his left. A sound of claw on stone above him.

Ice froze. Slowly, ever so gently, his gauntleted paw drifted toward the small axe at his side. His shield was across his back, not enough time to-

A rush of claws, and a scrape as something leapt.

Ice whirled, his small axe in his right paw in a instant, and buried the blade in his attackers jaw, slicing the lower jaw in two and burying itself just below the creatures nose. It hung uselessly from the beasts mouth, blackened, chipped teeth glowing in the dim light. His enemy ignored the wound, and lunged at him, slamming him into the wall of the tunnel, claws scraping against his armor, a strangled snarl coming from the beasts mouth. White, red tinted blood poured from the beasts mangled mouth, splashing and painting Ices armor.

He growled, ignoring the scrambling claws on his face plate and the rancid breath in his nose, and pushed off the wall. He grabbed the beast by the head, and ripped his axe out of its face, blood pouring faster from the wound. Turning, he threw the creature at the second attacker, lunging at him from a small hole in the left wall. The two collided in the air, landing in a oiled heap upon the floor.

Whirling on the spot, he turned towards the right, planting his axe in the skull of a third, a female from the build and shape. Pulling the axe from its skull, its brain stretching and sticking to the axe blade like a rope of taffy before snapping, he turned yet again, and disembowled a fourth, it's strange candy colored guts spiling onto the ground.

The fourth howled and hobbled forward, ignoring its own wounds. It tripped over its own entrails, and Ice finished it off by stamping his armored boot down on its head, its skull bursting like a melon. A rush of air to his right alerted him, and he spun, axe blade singing through the air. It buried itself into the stomach of the first creature, having disentangled itself from its kin, and was stuck firm, the beasts insides and sticky muscles holding the weapon fast. Cursing, he let go of the axe, and bring his shield from his back, held it in both hands and smashed it down on to the beasts face as it lay in a heap upon the ground. Once. Twice. Three times. The beasts scrabbles and snarls grow softer, it's flesh sticking to the shield in clumps. A fourt-

Something slammed into him from above, knocking him to the floor. Claws scrambled and scraped against his back, ripping into the metal plate, and teeth bite through his helm, ripping and tearing at the steel.

Ice roared, and getting to his knees, reached around and grabbed the beast by its fur, and flung it down the tunnel. The creature land in a heap, but quickly scrambled back up, and lopped back towards him on all fours, burning, clear licorice drool dripping from its jaws. Ice readied himself, and when the beast lunged again, grabbed it from the air by it's throat and choke-slammed it in to floor. Something snapped in the creatures back on impact, and it writhed on the ground, whining and snarling in pain.

Ice stepped on its head, and readying himself, lifted his massive leg and driving down into the creatures skull. It jolted, and the impact snapped the creatures jaw, and broke its nose, white blood splurting from the wound. It did not die. He did it again. The forehead burst and eyes popped out, black and frozen. It still would not die. A third time. The struggle faltered, claws scraping harmlessly and weakly against his armored leg. A fourth. It ceased.

Ice panted, hunched over, paws on his knees, his breath coming in short bursts. Then, straightening and taking a deep gulp of candy flavored air, he turned and lumbered over to the creature with his axe in its stomach. He leaned over and, bracing his leg on the creatures ruined chest, pulled his axe out with a sicking, sucking sound.

Crunch. Crunch. Snap!

The sound had not ceased during the struggle.

Ice took stock, looking over his armor and weapons as best as he could admits the ruined bodies. His shield was dented and battered, but still usable, strange gunk covering the end where he had bashed the creatures head in. His axe was sticky, the haft covered in white blood, and the blade chipped and covered in a pinkish, gum-like material. His armor was similarly tarnished and filthy, but still useable. Reaching into a pouch at his side, be pulled out a whet Stone and small cleaning cloth, and set to work, sharpening and wiping the filth as fast as he could.

Crunch. Crunch. Pop!

He finished, and standing tall, hefting axe and shield, moved deeper into the tunnel, the faint green and white glow illuminating the white blood on his armor.

Hours Later, Ice emerged from the mine, soaked and battered in white and red blood, blinked in the afternoon sun through his helm. Beside him, 20 out of the 108 missing Griffon and Crystal Ponies little ones followed. Many were dirty and battered. A few limped, and Ice carried a limp, shivering bundle in his arms, bone shard and meat all that was left of the filly's front left leg.

Ice looked at the children, and felt his heart sink and break. Then, crying beneath his helm, he led the children back towards the town, and told the parents what had happened himself.

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The Kin called it Moon Madness.

The Elders weren't sure when exactly it fell upon the Kin, but was certain it was sometime during or after When the Sky Fell. During the Chaos of Discord, many Kin and Packs joined into a Warhost to fight the Mad God. Arrogant and proud, the leaders of the Packs ignored the Elders warnings, confident in their inevitable victory. They did not seek allies amongst the other Races, for they thought that they could prove their superiority and Dominance over all Packs and Tribes.

They failed. And then The Sky Fell.

During the Madness, the condition began to arise, with some entire litters and Packs being afflicted.

At first, it was an increase in hunger, a feeling of emptiness. Packs would eat their supplies in hours rather than days or months. Then, the Kin would change physically, slowly and surely. Their insides would soften, then toughen, hardening into candy or chocolate sludge. Their teeth would turn black or red, and their hearts and eyes would freeze, turn black and cold. Some reported ice cream and hot fudge leaking from afflicted ears and eyes. Their brains would become like taffy, stretching and weaving through out their bodies.

Then the brain would change. They would see the world as food. Kin and litter-mates would become food. Children and mates would look like treats. They would ignore all pain, all feeling, expect for the hunger. Entire villages and Packs would disappear, vanished into the endless maw of the hunger. Children were especially susceptible, and entire generations of kin would vanish. Brother hunted kin, and son and daughter ate their sires and Kin in their wombs from the inside.

The Moon Mad, Named for the black, dead eyes and the madness of the Sky, were and are a secret shame of the Kin. They do not like speaking of such thing to outsiders or in public, and those that are trusted are only told the vaguest details. But late at night, as the Tribe sleeps, tales are shared in hushed whispers. Uncles and Nephews, brothers and Sisters, one day fine and whole, the next gone, along with litters and Kin.

The Elders do their best to forget and ignore the Mad, endeavoring to hide the past from the outside. But word does occasionally slip out. Isolated villages or mining operations going dark, children vanish from cities. Strange monster sightings in abandoned and haunted places. Grieving mothers and fathers, sons and daughters.

The Madness would never die.


AN: That felt very dirty. Ugh. Need a bath.

@Questor. ' Throws Omake at window.' More trash.

What species is the kin?
 
eh, it's possible that after enough time has passed only the pathogen part remains
Doubt it. Such a thing isnt a magical disease but a curse that can spread (For example Lycanthropy is a good mythical example. It is a curse that can spread, not a cursed disease).

Oh god..... While that made me giggle like a loon I am vaguely afraid of what the new version will be like and praying they dont tarnish the legacy.
 
Oh god..... While that made me giggle like a loon I am vaguely afraid of what the new version will be like and praying they dont tarnish the legacy.
the leaked concept art and info didn't seem THAT bad at least. Time will tell.

Without making spoilers, the last episode has to be seen even just for the fanservice. It's a "x years in the future" epilogue! If you've not seen it, just imagine what they might show. There's a LOT of many little things hidden in the background, like in the stained glass of Canterlot castle.

a little random/not too important spoiler follows
Lyra and Bon Bon/sweetie drops got married!
 
Okay if it is in the future..... Who else is hoping Pinkie Pie and Cheese Sandwich became a couple?

I mean, have you SEEN the PB&J twins fanart?

 
and yet you have "rock farmers" too.
A simple difference actually. As stated, the kin are connected to the Below, the Hidden, and the Beneath. Iron, Gold, Copper, Diamond, Coal, Basic Gems. Nothing real fancy or out there. Wood as well, because the roots of some trees go truely deep. They can live with other races easily because of this and the second species trait, Pack. It's simple, inherent, want and need, rather than a job or a Destiny like a cutie mark. And this connection extends to other forms, rather than just The Beneath and the Tunnel. Gemsmithing, Forging, Tracking, Enchantment (of a sort), a need to work, to be to do with the Stone, the Rock. The Rock farmer is more of a Destiny given and received, and is more tied to the Dirt, the Surface and the Soil.

In basic terms, the Diamond Dogs feel like they must mine, or work with metal or stone, while a pony is individually tied to one thing because it's their destiny.

Edit: of course, all this is dependent on the Glorious QM, so take with grain of salt.
 
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So anyone got some omake ideas floating around their head while we wait.
A hypothetical 'Who Needs Harmony' future being a prequel to Fallout Equestria. Would be cool to see if our nation in a thousand years can butterfly away the Great War.

Or a negaverse where a alternate pre-canon MLP series showing how everything developed and grew after Discords fall with the Rise of Equestria and Gryphus being the main aspects of the show.
 
Omake: Crystal Clear Glass (Semi-Canon)
Hmmm, a look into the culture of the crystal ponies before the rein of the shadow idiot and after?

CRYSTAL CLEAR GLASS

The world was always crystal clear to Glass Eyes.
From the moment she was born she knew the fundamental truth of her home. 'Love thy neighbor and thy neighbor shall love you, and may that love shield you'. Well maybe not in so many words, or any words really. She was just a filly afterall, but she felt it, truer than anything. Saw it with her new born eyes.

It was never truer than the day she earned her Mark, the day she saw the Heart up close for the first time. She knew then she'd be the Heart's caretaker one day. She saw it, clear as day, clear as crystal, clear as glass. And she was right, for a time all was well, ponies were kind and the Heart was bright, and the cold couldn't touch their warmth. Couldn't touch their hearts.

Then He came. He called himself Sombra. He lied to them, to her. It was so clear in hindsight, but in the moment it was murky, stained with streaks of love. How ironic. He used her to get close to her heart, both figurative and literal. He cast his spell and the world dimmed as he laughed, and laughed, and laughed. He never stopped laughing, it used to sound so nice, another lie, another spell broken. A spell, was that why it was so murky? Why she couldn't see him as clearly as she should have?

Doesn't matter now, likely never will again. He stole their hearts, and now they were as shadows. Puppets to follow the movements of another. The will of another. Their light became dark, and their warmth bacame cold as the Wendigos came for the darkness in their unprotected hearts.

They worked now, endless work, sleepless work. They hungered and pleaded, and begged, and cried in silence behind masks of cold, bitter iron. Always a biting reminder. Not her though, she didn't allow it, couldn't for the role she played in this madness. 'King' Sombra, was she his 'Queen', he called her that, once upon a time. He commanded them to dig, to fight, to mine, to die. Work, work, work, work, and then die, and pray you stay dead, and not become fodder for his experiments. To pray your body would be forgotten in a ditch and not become a monster of flesh and shadow. Can they still feel, can they still see? She knew they could scream. It was more than they could do.

She could still feel the Heart of their kingdom, barely, due to her position, her former position. She was likely the only one. It was locked away, shrouded it hated darkness, hidden behind sorrow and despair. Doomed to never shine it's kind light ever again.

It was all gone now. The land was now one of death, and of cold, and of abominations, and fear. It couldn't last though. Not even Sombra could break their hearts, the Crystal Kingdom's Heart, only hide it away and drown it in his darkness, and one day it would know love again. One day it would shine again and banish the darkness. She knew, as she always knew, as she always saw. Just as she knew she would never see that day. See the day her false love died, and her true love returned. It would have been nice, though, to see her Heart one last time. To see the look on His face. She told him that it would happen, he laughed ofcourse, but she could still see it, the fear in his eyes behind the madness.

Yes the world was crystal clear to her, as it always was.
Clear as broken glass.

My first omake, after discovering this story about a week ago!
 
Nicely written though I would like to point out that there was never a guard needed for the heart (No pony could even consider harming it) so sombra didn't really have to do much to reach it (Thus he would not need the caretaker), the only one sombra ever DIDN'T try and force to work was the only 2 ponies who showed him affection (Was banished if I remember correctly and in canon this allowed her to find the timeless prison which held the Shadow Ponies of which sombra was a member of and find a cure to their curse and return them to being ponies once more, though that will never happen as she will likely have died of old age a while ago without the timeless prison which allowed her to work without time affecting her) and the former Queen (who he turns to crystal and hid somewhere in the castle and who is still alive despite being only a crystal statue right now and could feasibly be aware and it is probably possible for her to be restored).

But other than that very well done
 
But other than that very well done
I didnt really know all that background info.😅
I figured since it was so important and partally sentient, as well as powered by love and care, that there would be a pony dedicated to spending time in its presence. Talking to it, maybe cleaning it, that kinda thing. A literal caretaker , in no way a guard.
And it seems weird that anyone could walk through the castle alone and reach a sacred heart that is also completely alone. I just thought he'd use her to walk through the castle to get to it without many questions. And without the Heart itself stopping him.
Thankyou for the evaluation!:)
 
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And it seems weird that anyone could walk through the castle alone and reach a sacred heart that is also completely alone
It is THE foundation of the crystal pony's culture and religion. It would be weirder if they COULDN'T just go and bask in it's power.

Also it was rarely alone due to crystal ponies coming and going from it's chamber (again cornerstone of culture and religion) but he canonically just used magic to shove everyone out all at once before the spell which DID cause some panic but not much after all.... What crystal pony could ever bring themselves to harm the Crystal Heart?

The problem with that line of thought was... Sombra wasn't a crystal pony at all.... But a shadow pony who was but a newborn at the time of the other's capture and containment and was thus taken pity upon by the queen and spared in hopes of rehabilitation.
 
I am personally still interested in the hippogryphs, as that was a pleasant and complete suprise.

I don't think anyone in or out of story predicted that, and the reactions will be interesting.
 
I am personally still interested in the hippogryphs, as that was a pleasant and complete suprise.

I don't think anyone in or out of story predicted that, and the reactions will be interesting.
I did. It was kind of obvious.

It mentioned a while back that ponies and griffons were getting together and well.... Pony + Griffon = Pony Griffon Hybrid (AKA Hippogrif)
 
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