Omake: Just One More Pony (Non-Canon)
In fact, have an omake on the insurgent ponies thing:

***

Sharp quill peaked around the corner. She had been sneaking through the city for hours and it was getting to her. She hadn't been a young filly when Sombra took over and she was positively old now. Every step hurt even before she started. But this was nothing to the decades of forced labor she survived. She has been insensate. Catatonic. Suicidal. Until the Gryphon showed her the miracle metal, made into horseshoes.

Something burned in her now, in her belly, in her chest. She would not stop. She would not stop until the very last living cell in her heart burned out.

Finding isolated ponies to ambush. Soothing the hysterics or using the sedatives she was given to calm them.

The battle raged over the wall, the explosions and screaming rising even above the storm. Seven times she went in over his head and took on a group to large. She was strong though. The Qilin knew their alchemy well.

Bruised, with broken ribs, numerous cuts and with a badly wrapped semi-frozen bloody bandages on her hind leg she had the strength to limp on. The drums of war spurring her on. One more. She could certainly do one more.

She'd get a glimpse of others like her in the far off streets. While the slaves could not, were not allowed to think enough to tell, she could see the subtle difference between her brothers and sisters in this madness. From time to time she would see helmet-less ponies running, in vaguely the direction of closest hidden exit.

There, a filly barely into adulthood limps along the road, dirty, matted yellow fur. A broken bone cutie mark and a limp. A twisted, badly healed foreleg. New helmet, marching soullessly to toward the breeding pens mineshaft. One more.

It was easy to limp toward her. A strong grab, a second or two of solid contact and the filly goes limp in shock, the enchantment failing and her knees buckle. They both fall. The helm slips off and the old mare freezes as she sees the amethyst eyes of the filly half hidden behind the short rose color bangs. For a second they are blank, empty and Sharp Quill's heart spikes with pain. Then a person appears in them, a consciousness. A horror which stops even the drums of war for a moment.

"What." The filly utters in confusion, a voice hoarse and the martial hold, turns into a hug as a sob escapes her.

"You are free." Sharp Quill speaks into the filly's ear, tapping two hooves together when she moves back somewhat. The low, dense clang of her shoes rings but she can hardly hear it over the howl of the wind.

"Do you know where the old distillery is?"

With tears in her eyes the filly nods.

"There will be dogs there, a way out."

Then the filly's eyes widen and the old mare looks back. The drums beat. Stronger. Louder. A patrol of three, rounding a corner into the alley advancing. The old mare drags her old carcass up and steps towards them.

"Go Apple Blossom, tell them Sharp Quill died free." she shouts and pushes her filly towards the other exit. She obeys.

She was already tired, from the pain, and the blood loss, but the burning white determination in her chest would not yield yet. There was one more thing to do. One more.

A fight is hard, she got some bare training but she was never a fighter. She could endure though and it's not like it would be long now.

It takes a moment or two of contact for the anti-magic stone to work. She gets stabbed as she frees one, it's just a leg. A hit to the head when she frees the second. Her skull is tough enough.

She's too tired to dodge or attack the last one. Her chest is like a living burning thing. Her vision blurry and her breath sharp. A pony is circling around the last slave. Her legs wobble, and won't really listen. But she was always good at hugs though.

"Horseshoes." She barks an order. The freed stallion helps you touch the helmet of the last slave you have hugged. The burning pain is like the sun. The drums discordant. But there. One more.

Good.

The rocky road is cool in the night. The storm isn't howling. The burning in her chest has stopped. The drums are silent, broken.

The soft hiss of snow, for a moment. She was a grandmother.

Harmony.

***

He never met the mare this old. There were wispers. In the pens, at calibration. Ponies used to grow so old their hair grew white, with just a hint of red. Alwas far away, in the fields. Never in the city.

He had no words for what she did, and dying with that peaceful smile on her face. He gently closes her empty amethyst eyes. Looks at the smaller stallion next to him. "I won't fit those shoes but you can."
And glances back down on the old mare. He didn't know her name but he will carve that cutie mark into rock forever.

His brother nods. He'd seen how effective they were.

"What do we do now?" The mare asks.

"I know where to go." A voice behind them. A familiar young mare. Practically a filly peaks out from around a corner.

"We'll follow."

"Maybe we can find a few more ponies on the way."




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@Questor Forgot to tag the qm as suggested :)
 
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In fact, have an omake on the insurgent ponies thing:

***

Sharp quill peaked around the corner. She had been sneaking through the city for hours and it was getting to her. She hadn't been a young filly when Sombra took over and she was positively old now. Every step hurt even before she started. But this was nothing to the decades of forced labor she survived. She has been insensate. Catatonic. Suicidal. Until the Gryphon showed her the miracle metal, made into horseshoes.

Something burned in her now, in her belly, in her chest. She would not stop. She would not stop until the very last living cell in her heart burned out.

Finding isolated ponies to ambush. Soothing the hysterics or using the sedatives she was given to calm them.

The battle raged over the wall, the explosions and screaming rising even above the storm. Seven times she went in over his head and took on a group to large. She was strong though. The Qilin knew their alchemy well.

Bruised, with broken ribs, numerous cuts and with a badly wrapped semi-frozen bloody bandages on her hind leg she had the strength to limp on. The drums of war spurring her on. One more. She could certainly do one more.

She'd get a glimpse of others like her in the far off streets. While the slaves could not, were not allowed to think enough to tell, she could see the subtle difference between her brothers and sisters in this madness. From time to time she would see helmet-less ponies running, in vaguely the direction of closest hidden exit.

There, a filly barely into adulthood limps along the road, dirty, matted yellow fur. A broken bone cutie mark and a limp. A twisted, badly healed foreleg. New helmet, marching soullessly to toward the breeding pens mineshaft. One more.

It was easy to limp toward her. A strong grab, a second or two of solid contact and the filly goes limp in shock, the enchantment failing and her knees buckle. They both fall. The helm slips off and the old mare freezes as she sees the amethyst eyes of the filly half hidden behind the short rose color bangs. For a second they are blank, empty and Sharp Quill's heart spikes with pain. Then a person appears in them, a consciousness. A horror which stops even the drums of war for a moment.

"What." The filly utters in confusion, a voice hoarse and the martial hold, turns into a hug as a sob escapes her.

"You are free." Sharp Quill speaks into the filly's ear, tapping two hooves together when she moves back somewhat. The low, dense clang of her shoes rings but she can hardly hear it over the howl of the wind.

"Do you know where the old distillery is?"

With tears in her eyes the filly nods.

"There will be dogs there, a way out."

Then the filly's eyes widen and the old mare looks back. The drums beat. Stronger. Louder. A patrol of three, rounding a corner into the alley advancing. The old mare drags her old carcass up and steps towards them.

"Go Apple Blossom, tell them Sharp Quill died free." she shouts and pushes her filly towards the other exit. She obeys.

She was already tired, from the pain, and the blood loss, but the burning white determination in her chest would not yield yet. There was one more thing to do. One more.

A fight is hard, she got some bare training but she was never a fighter. She could endure though and it's not like it would be long now.

It takes a moment or two of contact for the anti-magic stone to work. She gets stabbed as she frees one, it's just a leg. A hit to the head when she frees the second. Her skull is tough enough.

She's too tired to dodge or attack the last one. Her chest is like a living burning thing. Her vision blurry and her breath sharp. A pony is circling around the last slave. Her legs wobble, and won't really listen. But she was always good at hugs though.

"Horseshoes." She barks an order. The freed stallion helps you touch the helmet of the last slave you have hugged. The burning pain is like the sun. The drums discordant. But there. One more.

Good.

The rocky road is cool in the night. The storm isn't howling. The burning in her chest has stopped. The drums are silent, broken.

The soft hiss of snow, for a moment. She was a grandmother.

Harmony.

***

He never met the mare this old. There were wispers. In the pens, at calibration. Ponies used to grow so old their hair grew white, with just a hint of red. Alwas far away, in the fields. Never in the city.

He had no words for what she did, and dying with that peaceful smile on her face. He gently closes her empty amethyst eyes. Looks at the smaller stallion next to him. "I won't fit those shoes but you can."
And glances back down on the old mare. He didn't know her name but he will carve that cutie mark into rock forever.

His brother nods. He'd seen how effective they were.

"What do we do now?" The mare asks.

"I know where to go." A voice behind them. A familiar young mare. Practically a filly peaks out from around a corner.

"We'll follow."

"Maybe we can find a few more ponies on the way."




Edit:
@Questor Forgot to tag the qm as suggested :)
Could you put up a title for this so I can threadmark it? Great writing!
 
In fact, have an omake on the insurgent ponies thing:

***

Sharp quill peaked around the corner. She had been sneaking through the city for hours and it was getting to her. She hadn't been a young filly when Sombra took over and she was positively old now. Every step hurt even before she started. But this was nothing to the decades of forced labor she survived. She has been insensate. Catatonic. Suicidal. Until the Gryphon showed her the miracle metal, made into horseshoes.

Something burned in her now, in her belly, in her chest. She would not stop. She would not stop until the very last living cell in her heart burned out.

Finding isolated ponies to ambush. Soothing the hysterics or using the sedatives she was given to calm them.

The battle raged over the wall, the explosions and screaming rising even above the storm. Seven times she went in over his head and took on a group to large. She was strong though. The Qilin knew their alchemy well.

Bruised, with broken ribs, numerous cuts and with a badly wrapped semi-frozen bloody bandages on her hind leg she had the strength to limp on. The drums of war spurring her on. One more. She could certainly do one more.

She'd get a glimpse of others like her in the far off streets. While the slaves could not, were not allowed to think enough to tell, she could see the subtle difference between her brothers and sisters in this madness. From time to time she would see helmet-less ponies running, in vaguely the direction of closest hidden exit.

There, a filly barely into adulthood limps along the road, dirty, matted yellow fur. A broken bone cutie mark and a limp. A twisted, badly healed foreleg. New helmet, marching soullessly to toward the breeding pens mineshaft. One more.

It was easy to limp toward her. A strong grab, a second or two of solid contact and the filly goes limp in shock, the enchantment failing and her knees buckle. They both fall. The helm slips off and the old mare freezes as she sees the amethyst eyes of the filly half hidden behind the short rose color bangs. For a second they are blank, empty and Sharp Quill's heart spikes with pain. Then a person appears in them, a consciousness. A horror which stops even the drums of war for a moment.

"What." The filly utters in confusion, a voice hoarse and the martial hold, turns into a hug as a sob escapes her.

"You are free." Sharp Quill speaks into the filly's ear, tapping two hooves together when she moves back somewhat. The low, dense clang of her shoes rings but she can hardly hear it over the howl of the wind.

"Do you know where the old distillery is?"

With tears in her eyes the filly nods.

"There will be dogs there, a way out."

Then the filly's eyes widen and the old mare looks back. The drums beat. Stronger. Louder. A patrol of three, rounding a corner into the alley advancing. The old mare drags her old carcass up and steps towards them.

"Go Apple Blossom, tell them Sharp Quill died free." she shouts and pushes her filly towards the other exit. She obeys.

She was already tired, from the pain, and the blood loss, but the burning white determination in her chest would not yield yet. There was one more thing to do. One more.

A fight is hard, she got some bare training but she was never a fighter. She could endure though and it's not like it would be long now.

It takes a moment or two of contact for the anti-magic stone to work. She gets stabbed as she frees one, it's just a leg. A hit to the head when she frees the second. Her skull is tough enough.

She's too tired to dodge or attack the last one. Her chest is like a living burning thing. Her vision blurry and her breath sharp. A pony is circling around the last slave. Her legs wobble, and won't really listen. But she was always good at hugs though.

"Horseshoes." She barks an order. The freed stallion helps you touch the helmet of the last slave you have hugged. The burning pain is like the sun. The drums discordant. But there. One more.

Good.

The rocky road is cool in the night. The storm isn't howling. The burning in her chest has stopped. The drums are silent, broken.

The soft hiss of snow, for a moment. She was a grandmother.

Harmony.

***

He never met the mare this old. There were wispers. In the pens, at calibration. Ponies used to grow so old their hair grew white, with just a hint of red. Alwas far away, in the fields. Never in the city.

He had no words for what she did, and dying with that peaceful smile on her face. He gently closes her empty amethyst eyes. Looks at the smaller stallion next to him. "I won't fit those shoes but you can."
And glances back down on the old mare. He didn't know her name but he will carve that cutie mark into rock forever.

His brother nods. He'd seen how effective they were.

"What do we do now?" The mare asks.

"I know where to go." A voice behind them. A familiar young mare. Practically a filly peaks out from around a corner.

"We'll follow."

"Maybe we can find a few more ponies on the way."




Edit:
@Questor Forgot to tag the qm as suggested :)
+10 to a roll!
 
Ah, I see. I stopped watching the show after season 5 and didn't look at any other materials related to it, so my memory is incredibly rusty. Wonder if there's gonna be any reason given for why the job fell to us in this quest, as opposed to happening how it went down in canon. Not that such a thing is needed, of course, but it would be interesting.
If I had to take a guess, it'd be because we went and poked him first, and then punched him in the face hard enough he hasn't gone looking for more trouble. Equestria doesn't know of him yet... And even if they do, he is not their problem so why should their two Hero units go pick a fight that they don't need to get involved with and risk getting injured/killed?
 
Well so this interlude should be an interesting one i seriously hope and doubt it is an assassination and probably another attack, or maybe more magic bull to screw with our economy.
 
Ah, I see. I stopped watching the show after season 5 and didn't look at any other materials related to it, so my memory is incredibly rusty. Wonder if there's gonna be any reason given for why the job fell to us in this quest, as opposed to happening how it went down in canon. Not that such a thing is needed, of course, but it would be interesting.

Or I could have missed a reason being given already, I will admit that in catching up to the thread I ignored most of the discussion.

If I had to take a guess, it'd be because we went and poked him first, and then punched him in the face hard enough he hasn't gone looking for more trouble. Equestria doesn't know of him yet... And even if they do, he is not their problem so why should their two Hero units go pick a fight that they don't need to get involved with and risk getting injured/killed?


part of (if not most of) it is because all the kingdoms are in different positions compared to canon. It's possible Equestria is on a completely different continent, maybe even on the other side of the planet.

Also in the comics (which seem to be mostly canon in this quest, at least in regard to Sombra) The sisters were warned of Sombra murdering petrifying and shattering Princess Amore by Sombra's childhood friend Radiant Hope. Here it seems Sombra captured her before she could go ask for help.
 
Hey @Questor what would it take to get an action where we could go around sombras nation and try to find those that border him?
He mentioned we'd be free of exploring once we dealt with Sombra. Seen as we're probably about to finish this..

To be fair it's not really wise to go exploring right now. Just think if we met...say.. Tirek. Or any of the various creatures freed from Tartarus.

Sombra is dangerous, but at this point we CAN deal with him, especially with help from neighpon (if only the Yaks did more...)

Once we've dealt with him, we should wait at least a couple of turns before going exploring again, to recover from the world and start to heal the crystal survivors.

A full nation of traumatized people...on the one hand it will be hard, on the other they're pretty much CERTAIN to become part of our empire.
 
Good thing we have a whole new region that needs people to settle it. Most of them are going to be in our core territory receiving treatment and care that means housing and room is going to be at a premium in the core. That should push for more of our people to move to the frontier for the chance to own land and to spread farther.
 
A full nation of traumatized people...on the one hand it will be hard, on the other they're pretty much CERTAIN to become part of our empire.

Not necessarily.

They might begin a diaspora. That way any future dictator can't just take their capital city. This would lead to a Feathersian League set-up.

Maybe, they become nomads like the Yaks. Expressing the freedom to travel as opposed to the years of structured routes from Sombre's mind control.
 
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while this is all well and good we still need to KILL sombra which so far i dont think anyone knows how to do.


EDIT: and hes about to get an interlude called sombras revenge which is not going to be good at all.
 
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while this is all well and good we still need to KILL sombra which so far i dont think anyone knows how to do.


EDIT: and hes about to get an interlude called sombras revenge which is not going to be good at all.

Well, maybe not kill him weaken him to the point that he leaves so far away he becomes someone else's problem. Granted that leave the possibility of another future war but him being a major antagonist for us makes good storytelling. Especially because despite him losing it isn't easy for us to win and he is always a threat never a cartoon villain that isn't really dangerous.
 
Well, maybe not kill him weaken him to the point that he leaves so far away he becomes someone else's problem. Granted that leave the possibility of another future war but him being a major antagonist for us makes good storytelling. Especially because despite him losing it isn't easy for us to win and he is always a threat never a cartoon villain that isn't really dangerous.
For us to do that would mean making rebuilding less enticing then trying to go find a new race/country and attempt to take them over in a weakened state which I doubt we can do.
 
while this is all well and good we still need to KILL sombra which so far i dont think anyone knows how to do.


EDIT: and hes about to get an interlude called sombras revenge which is not going to be good at all.

Well, I can think of three, maybe four ways.

1)get the crystal heart, find a way to use it against him. (Unlikely to be easy)

2)destroy the (apparent) phylactery (a strong enough boom could work miracles)

3)fire, possibly magical fire (on Sombra Or the phylactery

4)oricalchum swords, (on Sombra Or the phylactery
 
Well, I can think of three, maybe four ways.

1)get the crystal heart, find a way to use it against him. (Unlikely to be easy)

2)destroy the (apparent) phylactery (a strong enough boom could work miracles)

3)fire, possibly magical fire (on Sombra Or the phylactery

4)oricalchum swords, (on Sombra Or the phylactery
What is a phylactery?
 
What is a phylactery?
Container for the soul of a lich, an undead mage. If you kill a lich, his soul escapes to the phylactery, and after a while he gets/forms a new body.

Harry potter's horcruxes are based on them. I THINK the idea is also based on the one ring of Sauron, and the classic version is present in d&d.

Usually, like with Sauron, once you destroy the phylactery the lich immediately dies
 
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So who else is losing their mind over what this revenge will end up being.
Well, I'd like to believe it's simply an attack but i find it unlikely.

We WANT him to attack us, so it sounds like too little for a 3.

He might have decided to go through the Yak's land, he might have conquered some minor nation to get more (and maybe stronger) slaves.

He might be sending a mind-controlled dragon directly to our palace.

He might have been able to mind control some sea monster, and used it to attack one of our coastal cities.

He might believe himself invulnerable to our weapons and so decided to attack personally (though i doubt it).

Maybe he simply regained a body.

Or made a deal with some creature from Tartarus.

Or he simply made the blizzard worse
 
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