A Day In The Life Of An APDMH Student
Ivan sat and stared.
Two long essay prompts stared back:
Assess the following assertion: Despite the long standing Gulmaryn assertion that the Ymaryn were the source of Gulmaryn's success, the Gylruvians could make an equally valid claim to being the source.
Evaluate the extent to which the short term ramifications of the First Faronic War marked a turning point in the evolution of the Dual Monarchy.
The first option was undoubtedly a trap. The Gylruv had the Qeshyks and Kyberia and not much else, while the Ymaryn held the capital of New Blacksmouth and the Guilds and Trelli and basically everything that made the Dual Monarchy relevant.
Though the Qeshyks did prove to be useful in ... was it the first or second Faronic War ... eh. Still, Ivan couldn't remember anything about Gylruv, so answering the first prompt was right out.
That left the second. What happened in the First Faronic War again? Something like Faron rose up in Tortun, made a Tortun Republic, beat Kielmyr and beat the Dual Monarch - oh that was where the Qeshyks came in! Right, but that was all he could think of for the Gylruv so it didn't matter.
Anyway, right at the end of it King Poetyr called a big constitutional convention where everyone drank all the alcohol in the Gulmaryn (still wasn't sure how they did that) and there was something about universal citizenship and conscription - no, that was backwards, it was universal conscription which gave you citizenship - no, that was the second, after the second Faronic War!
Rrgh. If this was how it was gonna go, Ivan might just have to lie his way through the first prompt. On the other hand, Ivan was sure he knew the stuff about the convention - oh that's right, the end of the war came with two things, a constitutional convention and military reforms, which led to the whole "said to be the greatest army in the world". The constitution had, hm, something about a parliment, right. And the whole drinking thing meant that Guild protections were weakened, which led to the reformation of the Guilds!
Right, Ivan could write this essay now.
Well.
Maybe.
If he could come up with a good intro.
Maybe, "Faron's coming brought a wave of change throughout Syffryn, and the ripples were especially big in the Dual Monarchy."
No, that didn't sound right.
Maybe, "Faron's arrival brought a wave of change throughout Syffryn, and the ripples were felt especially keenly in the Dual Monarchy."
It'd have to do.
Thesis, hm, "The fallout of the First Faronic War caused the first constitution, and the military reforms which would propel the Dual Monarchy's military to number one in the world."
That'd work.
Now for the rest, just a little here about how the first constitution led to the second for a first body paragraph, a little there about the military reformers (notably Cornythyn as the Royalist Third Hand), and that should be a pretty good essay!
86/100 Did not consider alternative viewpoints, but an otherwise strong essay.