They are leaping a little deep into trusting the precog accuracy since usually they are pretty useless and they have no knowledge on the supposed mechanism this one is using, even with confirmation bias. Basic trust but verify situation here.
 
Not to mention the sheer and utter panic that it would induce in Piggot when she finally discovers that the biominions can all turn invisible at will. (Also, I'm looking forward to the gag when Piggot gets the Kill Order fulfilled on Splice and it doesn't stick.)
That is her worst nightmare. A Nilbog event that you can't see! Please give addy a need for invisibility!
 
That is her worst nightmare. A Nilbog event that you can't see! Please give addy a need for invisibility!
THEY COULD BE IN THE CLOSET. WHAT WAS THAT NOISE!?


They are leaping a little deep into trusting the precog accuracy since usually they are pretty useless and they have no knowledge on the supposed mechanism this one is using, even with confirmation bias. Basic trust but verify situation here.

They are doing verification. Ergo the "we suspect the migraines are thinker headaches." and so on. But do bear in mind that right now they think that this precog accurately predicted Ziz attacking. That's a pretty strong indicator in favor of taking the precog seriously.
 
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What Addy really needs to do is establish an in-universe reason for her meta knowledge, something like claiming she built a single-use device that allowed her to see a single path of the future to completion. Something that is just barely believable so she can just unload the important information all at once, and claim it can't be built again (due to specialty swapping or only being able to see that one path). With a bit of thinking ahead (*cough*), she could probably get this past a lie detector and maybe mislead Tattletale. It would be close enough to the truth anyways, and SI's admitting prior knowledge of the setting from reading the book always really annoys me for some reason and is rarely handled well.
 
@Unders

Good Memory!

You are right about the Spiderwasps!

I highly recomend Season 1, Season 2 and about half of Season 3.... It kind of went downhill after that with only a few good episodes here or there.

Sliding Tech directly can do a lot, but there was lots of fun tech from all the Parallel Universes too.

Giant Flesh Eating Scarab Beetles for example!

Weather Control, Memory Manipulation, Human like Androids, Human/Animal Hybrids, Handheld Energy Weapons, Anti Gravity etc

I think Sliders might be on Youtube?
 
@Unders

Good Memory!

You are right about the Spiderwasps!

I highly recomend Season 1, Season 2 and about half of Season 3.... It kind of went downhill after that with only a few good episodes here or there.

Sliding Tech directly can do a lot, but there was lots of fun tech from all the Parallel Universes too.

Giant Flesh Eating Scarab Beetles for example!

Weather Control, Memory Manipulation, Human like Androids, Human/Animal Hybrids, Handheld Energy Weapons, Anti Gravity etc

I think Sliders might be on Youtube?
It's worth noting that the Kromagg had biomechanoid antigravity ships. And you're forgetting some of the weirder shit from the show, though some of it doesn't exactly count as technology ... exactly. The 'maggs did have psychic mental interfaces and reality-warper cybernetic interfaces.

EDIT: Most useful bit of tech from Sliders would be slidecage/jamming tech and maybe trans-d tracking/communication. That alone could fuck hardcore with Scion. Push of a button every parahuman power on the planet stops working. Including Scion's projection-body.
 
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Which then after Vista had passed her intel on had led to bringing in Triumph and informing him that his cousin was at risk of being kidnapped by Coil for her power, and possibly worse. Triumph himself had just gotten off the phone to his aunt who'd informed them that young Dinah was currently at home due to horrible migraines, or as the PRT director suspected: Thinker headaches.

The sound-based hero had then excused himself to go check in his cousin and aunt in person, along advising them to have Dinah placed in the Wards for her safety. Warning from a precog that the girl was at risk of being kidnapped by a pedophile would definitely provide incentive to get her somewhere safe.

At least they had definite confirmation that Vista's friend was a precognitive Thinker and Piggot planned to push a bit harder on selling the wards to the girl. Thinkers were a rare and hot commodity to the gangs and there was no way in hell Piggot was going to let this one go.
Does Piggot know that Dinah is a powerful precog instead of just a normal Thinker? Cause having a good and reliable precog when there is an unknown and hidden Biotinker that is maybe creating reproducing creations in the city seems to be a godsend. Or more paranoia when Dinah reveals that there are already multiple Biotonker creations in the city with different abilities.

Of course they probably can't question her too much until she gets put into the Wards and questioning would be limiyed because the Youth Guard wouldn't let them overwork a pre teen that has increadibly painful Thinker headaches. Still...
Piggot would disagree. When dealing with biotinkers one can never be paranoid enough.
And since this is Worm it won't be paranoia, it's precaution with precedence. Past occurances that has cost multiple lives. Having no catch is much more surprising to them, sadly for Piggot this isn't the case.

Since Tinkers get "inspired" by working with other Parahumans it's pretty likely that Armsmaster would be able to complete his combat precog machine and Endbringer prediction much earlier with Dinah being near him or just understanding her powers. So that's a good possibility there.

Bad news is that now Coil has reasons to go for Addy because of her display of Thinker abilities. While he can't go against her directly because of the focus of Piggot on her too he can still probe her with his disposable timelines where he could know her other capabilities to which Addy would also know that she is in a disposable timeline of Coil (Thinker battles like rhis is confusing). Worse is that with Tattletale and his own power he would eventually know that Addy is the Biotinker they are searching for and that she is worse that they could have hoped for with her power inducing creations.

It's a great showing of the continuous build of the consequences and odds catching up on Addy. Of course how Addy deals with this is another matter I would love to see eventually.
Smirk, yes, add Magical Girls to Worm. Nothing could possibly go wrong there. Especially not ones that basically run on fetish power.
Well, one of the Specialties OP gave is Lyrical Nanoha, which is Magical girl Gundam ft. Lots of Big Fat Pink Beams that wipe out cities. Where middle schoolers destroy city blocks for a martial arts competition and is considered normal.

I'd say she would get lots of milleage for that one.

Personal AI Magitech weapons with Intelligent Devises or full blown ones like a Unison Device, lots of combat and utility applicable spells, dimensional weaponry and magic, cybernetics or absolute bullshits like the Jewel Seed that could accidentally grant wishes of people to "bye bye to this dimensional sector"
Shit, OP actually know Psyren.

Now I gotta add that on the Specialties that Addy gets next cause if they want a quick, powerful and growing abilility that can be given to people that would be it. Addy just making the same gas or environment of the future world to awaken the Psi of people os a huge boon to let them develop their own powers. Then the various Biotinker stuff to further augment them.

That and Lilo & Stitch for more Biotinker creations with the Experiments and all of their shit. There is also the super advanced alien tech but the Experiments are more fun for the Biotinker fear.

How about DxD OP? Things like Sacred Gears, Holy Swords and the Magitech and abilities there is very good too.
 
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It's worth noting that the Kromagg had biomechanoid antigravity ships. And you're forgetting some of the weirder shit from the show, though some of it doesn't exactly count as technology ... exactly. The 'maggs did have psychic mental interfaces and reality-warper cybernetic interfaces.

The Kromaggs in Season 2 were pretty cool, with biotech Ships true.

I hated the versions that showed up in Season 4 onwards, I view them as a fever dream.

Stop ruining good sci fi shows Fox you assholes!
 
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The Kromaggs in Season 2 were pretty cool, with biotech Ships true.

I hated the versions that showed up in Season 4 onwards, I view them as a fever dream.
I prefer to think that the further one gets into the show, the less canonical it is.

EDIT: Oh! There was also the Gineers' tech! Even if you leave out the synthetic planets you also have all of the genetic engineering stuff they did. The reeds that could cure cancer and third degree burns for example.
 
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Hmm too many unknow's around there's the chance of coil thinking that addy was actually telling the true and just know a thinker is he see her using the crow's on a timeline, piggot is gooing to trigger at this rate and Taylor will likely end up killing a lot of Nazis... More so if she think is them or her mother


honestly being able to bring people back from dead is just going to encourage addy to kill her way out of problems... or just plain Risk no stop, Rip Taylor (no reason to avoid risk) and lisa (because addy will likely just say sorry later) since she is likely going to say the wrong thing a few times...
 
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honestly being able to bring people back from dead is just going to encourage addy to kill her way out of problems...
I mean, the reason that she even got the blueprints for the Vita Chambers was because she wanted to kill people more than once. So...
My only regret is I'd only be able to kill the bitches once.
[Solution]
Or not. I stopped filling in my drawing because apparently my power knows how to make vita chambers and holy fuck I can bring people back to life! I could bring Taylor's mom back. I could bring my own moms back.
Also @Unders bolded part should be capitilized right?
 
As much as I want to see someone explore having Annette resurrected, I think that succeeding in yet another endeavor would be a step too far.

Success in resurrecting her is not going to be the sunshine and flowers she expects I think.

She succeeded after all with a cthulhu cat. Though it wasn't the success some other people saw it as.

That said, yes Annette will get some powers. There's a stupidly huge list to choose from.

Taylor will probably confide in her mom, her issues. That she needs to help keep Addy in control. To not go overboard.

Which might effect the powers she chooses. Which in turn might effect the supervision over Addy.

That her mom is going to be taller, will probably effect the number of powers as well. Since more space is more power.

Addy is currently walking circles around Taylor when she is asleep. An extra person, might reduce that.
 
Say will you include Gonna be the Twin-Tail!!, Symphogear, Vividred Operation, Flip Flappers and Hyperdimension Neptunia as something Addy can go into?
Would be great seeing if she can bestow her magical girt powers on her minions/friends plus i'm really eager to see Addy using dresspheres and if they work on other people.

I'm really glad Missy developing her powers, perhaps a team up with Taylor should Addy got kidnapped by Coil, would love to see her use/testing her power without guilt on Coil's people though I would expect Coil to double down on kidnapping Dinah as soon he got the results of her testing anyway.
Two precog, the better plus it would be harder to find Coil's base for the two girls when Coil can easily incite all the gangs into urban warfare in order to distract the PRT and police from devoting resources and manpower in getting the girls back as they have to maintain public law and order.
From my brief look on google that Gonna be the Twin-Tail thing looks hilarious. If I get time to watch it I'll add it to the list, but time spent watching stuff is time spent not writing :(
Anyone else playing Worm fanfic cliche bingo?
I prefer the drinking game *slides pile of empty cider bottles out of view*
I loved that show. It was so incredibly cheesy.

It also didn't have very much in the way of tech options. The eponymous invisible main was a thief who got life in jail because he robbed a senior citizen's house, suprised the senior into a heart attack, and was trying to give CPR to him when the cops arrived and they mistook him for committing murder.

He was also the brother of the inventor of the Quicksilver Gland, which was a synthetic neural gland that produced the material "quicksilver" in response to adrenal events. The version in the main character was sabotaged to also induce psychosis and death over time and with use, but the gland itself did not have to have that flaw, and others were made without it. The gland also carried genetic information-style the memories of those it had previously been implanted into, though usually this was deeply buried in the subconscious (could be used intentionally with other tech bases to permit information/skill transfer).

Quicksilver bent light around anything it coated, inducing invisibility and also being useful to induce rapid cooling (frosty beer in seconds) and spectrum shifting to allow sight while invisible to regular light.

Otherwise there wasn't much scifi in the show's two season run. There was a character that turned himself into a human poison source, who also developed a tactile vision interface because he was blind. Chrysalis, an evil spy group, created an assassin who could vomit up large amounts of water to drown anyone she kissed. They also had nano viruses that were a lot like GitS Interceptors; they transmitted anything the implanted saw or heard to make living "bugs".

But that's really all that showed up in the series, tech wise.

It would be fun to see the setting invoked for a weeklong period; and would certainly be compatible with Addy's existing stuff to make her minions/allies rhyme with blinvisible. And maybe even work as a way to bypass the ADAM restrictions -- the biosynthetic glands could easily take the "workload" of the Metabolic Eve and seaslug mods for example, freeing up slots.

Not to mention the sheer and utter panic that it would induce in Piggot when she finally discovers that the biominions can all turn invisible at will. (Also, I'm looking forward to the gag when Piggot gets the Kill Order fulfilled on Splice and it doesn't stick.)
I also loved that show but sadly the tech options for it are really limited. Besides there's a plenty of other tech trees with invisibility.
That is her worst nightmare. A Nilbog event that you can't see! Please give addy a need for invisibility!
Peeping Tom plasmid grants invisibility when stationary in addition to letting you see through walls *cackles*
They are leaping a little deep into trusting the precog accuracy since usually they are pretty useless and they have no knowledge on the supposed mechanism this one is using, even with confirmation bias. Basic trust but verify situation here.
They are doing verification. Ergo the "we suspect the migraines are thinker headaches." and so on. But do bear in mind that right now they think that this precog accurately predicted Ziz attacking. That's a pretty strong indicator in favor of taking the precog seriously.
Yup they're busy confirming it, but so far all evidence is pointing to yes.
What Addy really needs to do is establish an in-universe reason for her meta knowledge, something like claiming she built a single-use device that allowed her to see a single path of the future to completion. Something that is just barely believable so she can just unload the important information all at once, and claim it can't be built again (due to specialty swapping or only being able to see that one path). With a bit of thinking ahead (*cough*), she could probably get this past a lie detector and maybe mislead Tattletale. It would be close enough to the truth anyways, and SI's admitting prior knowledge of the setting from reading the book always really annoys me for some reason and is rarely handled well.
Addy's face when she realises she needs to suddenly fake a precog power is going to be priceless.
@Unders
I think Sliders might be on Youtube?
I'll need to check then, but like I said above time spent watching new stuff is time spent not writing :(
Most useful bit of tech from Sliders would be slidecage/jamming tech and maybe trans-d tracking/communication. That alone could fuck hardcore with Scion. Push of a button every parahuman power on the planet stops working. Including Scion's projection-body.
Does Piggot know that Dinah is a powerful precog instead of just a normal Thinker? Cause having a good and reliable precog when there is an unknown and hidden Biotinker that is maybe creating reproducing creations in the city seems to be a godsend. Or more paranoia when Dinah reveals that there are already multiple Biotonker creations in the city with different abilities.

Of course they probably can't question her too much until she gets put into the Wards and questioning would be limiyed because the Youth Guard wouldn't let them overwork a pre teen that has increadibly painful Thinker headaches. Still...
They don't know what sort of Thinker Dinah is yet until Triumph calls them back, but will have a good idea by the end of the day (even if understanding the full OP strength of Dinah's precog may take a little while).
The fun also happens when they try to use Dinah to predict Splice, especially since Addy has a slight anti-thinker effect with regards to long term precognition.
Bad news is that now Coil has reasons to go for Addy because of her display of Thinker abilities. While he can't go against her directly because of the focus of Piggot on her too he can still probe her with his disposable timelines where he could know her other capabilities to which Addy would also know that she is in a disposable timeline of Coil (Thinker battles like rhis is confusing). Worse is that with Tattletale and his own power he would eventually know that Addy is the Biotinker they are searching for and that she is worse that they could have hoped for with her power inducing creations.
Hmm too many unknow's around there's a chance coil thinking that addy was actually telling the true and just know a thinker is he see addy using other power's on a timeline, piggot gonna triggering at this rate and Taylor is going to end up killing a lot of Nazis... More so if she think is them or her mother
Yup Addy is on Coils radar for sure now and it won't be long until the kidnapping attempts start. That said it'll be even longer till the audience sees them due to how Coil's power works and everything being in Addy's POV except for the interludes. And yes, it's pretty easy for Addy to tell if she's in a disposable timeline since the presence of Coil's goons are a pretty good indicator. Coil is going to learn pretty quickly that she has master powers.

Well, one of the Specialties OP gave is Lyrical Nanoha, which is Magical girl Gundam ft. Lots of Big Fat Pink Beams that wipe out cities. Where middle schoolers destroy city blocks for a martial arts competition and is considered normal.

I'd say she would get lots of milleage for that one.

Personal AI Magitech weapons with Intelligent Devises or full blown ones like a Unison Device, lots of combat and utility applicable spells, dimensional weaponry and magic, cybernetics or absolute bullshits like the Jewel Seed that could accidentally grant wishes of people to "bye bye to this dimensional sector"

Shit, OP actually know Psyren.

Now I gotta add that on the Specialties that Addy gets next cause if they want a quick, powerful and growing abilility that can be given to people that would be it. Addy just making the same gas or environment of the future world to awaken the Psi of people os a huge boon to let them develop their own powers. Then the various Biotinker stuff to further augment them.

That and Lilo & Stitch for more Biotinker creations with the Experiments and all of their shit. There is also the super advanced alien tech but the Experiments are more fun for the Biotinker fear.

How about DxD OP? Things like Sacred Gears, Holy Swords and the Magitech and abilities there is very good too.
So many options to pick from for Addy, which is why I roll to keep things interesting. Sadly DxD is out because I know absolutely nothing about it :(
Her next spec would have been Full Metal Alchemist (Addy would've wanted something to fabricate stuff easier and FMA got rolled), but was before I ended up being reminded that vita chambers are a thing and Addy's goal for her next tech tree changed. Bit of a pity she won't get FMA but the new one I rolled is going to be interesting.
honestly being able to bring people back from dead is just going to encourage addy to kill her way out of problems...
She would, but then her UI would be filled with: Taylor Disapproves -10
So far the vita chamber is going to be limited to herself, Annette, Taylor, Danny and then people she just wants to kill over and over again (the trio, etc)
Also @Unders bolded part should be capitilized right?
I figure I'm gonna start leaving the stuff uncapitalised for now. It's getting a little annoying writing all her tech stuff with capitals. I'll probably go back and change things in the earlier chapters at some point.
She succeeded after all with a cthulhu cat. Though it wasn't the success some other people saw it as.
Addy: Fluffles the First was a perfect success and everyone else is an idiot for now seeing her true greatness.
Taylor will probably confide in her mom, her issues. That she needs to help keep Addy in control. To not go overboard.
Addy needs an adult and while Taylor is trying she's definitely not an adult. Annette will eventually fill that role, once she deals with the fact she's technically a biotinker creation now from the PRT's POV, has been dead for two years and has no legal identity anymore.
If its based on genetics would it even work considering Anette has an identical twin in this story?
It probably should but I really don't want to have to write in stuff for Addy's mom so I'm probably going to do some tinkerbabble where the quantum thing can only lock onto one of them for resurrection and Addy ends up making the sacrifice of bringing back Annette for Taylor. It'll be more thought out and justified in character but that's the general gist. It's a bit of a cop out I guess but I'm not sure i'm a decent enough writer to be able to handle throwing her mom into the mix so I'll just handwave it away.
 
From my brief look on google that Gonna be the Twin-Tail thing looks hilarious. If I get time to watch it I'll add it to the list, but time spent watching stuff is time spent not writing :(
I wholeheartedly agree with that...but a twelve year old probably shouldnt be messing with technology that literally relies on fetish power to work. Then again, giving Clockblocker a set of that armour could be extremely entertaining considering how it works.
 
If Addy knows she's in a throw away timeline, shouldn't she save the human master power of possession until she sees Calvert in his snake suit?

I seem to recall that due to power interaction shenanigans mastering Coil in one of his timelines results in mastering him in both. Probably because if you can actually see Calvert you aren't in the "disposable" timeline.
 
I wonder if the identical twin will cause problems with the ressurection,like both mums ressurect into one body
 
It probably should but I really don't want to have to write in stuff for Addy's mom so I'm probably going to do some tinkerbabble where the quantum thing can only lock onto one of them for resurrection and Addy ends up making the sacrifice of bringing back Annette for Taylor. It'll be more thought out and justified in character but that's the general gist. It's a bit of a cop out I guess but I'm not sure i'm a decent enough writer to be able to handle throwing her mom into the mix so I'll just handwave it away.
That sounds kinda depressing tbh, you can probably justify it with epigenetics - how people's bodies read their DNA can change according to environmental factors (which would be different even with identical twins), or maybe more tinkerbabble to justify why you can't just print DNA out of a DNA database and resurrect people that way. Still has the problem of being unable to resurrect her moms (probs cause they were cremated?) but without the attendant guilt and self-loathing that comes with, well, that whole situation. For both of them, if Addy tells Taylor she sacrificed her chance to resurrect her own mom to resurrect Annette. (either directly, or Taylor/Annette getting it out of her later)
 
It probably should but I really don't want to have to write in stuff for Addy's mom so I'm probably going to do some tinkerbabble where the quantum thing can only lock onto one of them for resurrection and Addy ends up making the sacrifice of bringing back Annette for Taylor. It'll be more thought out and justified in character but that's the general gist. It's a bit of a cop out I guess but I'm not sure i'm a decent enough writer to be able to handle throwing her mom into the mix so I'll just handwave it away.

Identical twins aren't exactly the same genetically. Also, you can write that Addy's parents were cremated and ashes spread over a field, leaving no usable DNA for her machine. Taylor's mom has been dead for two years, but Addy could dig up enough DNA from a whole corpse.
 
Doubt they will have any problem with their mother being twin's tbh from the look of It at worts they just have to use It twice

Honestly that resurrection should wait until the end Game from plain old outing to custody dispute to the chance of Annette just calling out she doesn't have a twin sister and all that without the law or just plain greed
 
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