- Location
- The House of Moon and Star
- Pronouns
- She/Her
Makes?
I was under the impression that the reading experience was already amusingly absurd.
I want a refund! (Tinker of Fiction Semi-SI)
I was under the impression that the reading experience was already amusingly absurd.
Aminadab_Brulle
Decimus Computator
Well, story as a whole runs on its internal logic. These specific snippets on their own escape even that.
Unders
Suffers from delusions of competence
The main problem is they're all very consistent with their own internal logic. I'd probably have to give it to Addy since she's the most likely to go 'hold my
Yeah she can track bugs that are on them. Taylor OP.
Like that would help :3
Reality Lens wouldn't differentiate and see each Addy as unique, so the specialty of each currently active Addy would change to the new specialty. I'm basing it on Fenja/Menja, since they both have identical powers due to being identical twins and their shard being unable to tell between them.
Interestingly enough if two or more Addys were in physical contact with each other and one/all of them were to second trigger we could get a Case 70 situation, though that's more of a 'huh that's interesting' kind of thing rather than something that may happen in-story.
Yeah, the body is a container for you. Why not improve the container?
Here are a few typos:
Though, of course, since most of these are Addy's POV, it could be you want to leave them for "realism" or whatever...
probablyu
-or-
myself BECAUSE nobody
(Addy's form is anything but natural at this point, and by some definitions wouldn't have been ever since she woke up in WORM)
But, given this is Addy's POV, this is probably the quibble I have least standing on... but either way, the "own" is redundant.
Too many "her"s
I think it actually works better with out the "Sure," but that may just be me...
Enmdbringer
probablyu
try TO kill
myself ABOUT how
-or-
myself BECAUSE nobody
munchniny
thought is simple
I'll always
some OF the
munchinry
it?
my NORMAL form
(Addy's form is anything but natural at this point, and by some definitions wouldn't have been ever since she woke up in WORM)
But, given this is Addy's POV, this is probably the quibble I have least standing on... but either way, the "own" is redundant.
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- Location
- UK
- Pronouns
- He/Him/They
Can't wait to see what chaos Addy comes up with.
Sorry to preform necromancy.
Just found this, and my hateboner for PRT just forced me to comment on the chapter where the MC got strong-armed by the PRT into the wards. And, honestly, given how... unstable the MC is, I am mildly disturbed to find that I would have been more spiteful in her shoes.
Since, with the Vitae chamber, there would be a golden opportunity to shit all over the PRT's PR, with the wards announcement press conference. Just state that 'they are strong arming a kid into servitude for the crime of self defense against kidnapping, torture and murder. And this is my opinion on such arrangements!'
*Null lance own head off in front of the cameras*
*Pop out of Vitae Vat laughing like the maniac you are, and traumatize Lisa again.*
Just found this, and my hateboner for PRT just forced me to comment on the chapter where the MC got strong-armed by the PRT into the wards. And, honestly, given how... unstable the MC is, I am mildly disturbed to find that I would have been more spiteful in her shoes.
Since, with the Vitae chamber, there would be a golden opportunity to shit all over the PRT's PR, with the wards announcement press conference. Just state that 'they are strong arming a kid into servitude for the crime of self defense against kidnapping, torture and murder. And this is my opinion on such arrangements!'
*Null lance own head off in front of the cameras*
*Pop out of Vitae Vat laughing like the maniac you are, and traumatize Lisa again.*
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Shadow Archon
Protoss Preserver
- Location
- Louisiana
I'm hoping Unders is okay out there. They literally haven't been on SV for over two years...
I hope that they havent been isekaid into brockton bay and commiting
OR I hope they forgot their password and just "meh" the fiction. That would be better than the prior scenario
Nitramy
Love! Snow! Really Magic
- Location
- Home of Our Lady of Peace and Good Voyage
Biotinker powers and potentially a ToF jump to Yu-Gi-Oh?
I have a tiny question to ask: is it possible to engineer carnivorous plants (and a couple trap-using insects) to create cute little girl avatars, and give them the propensity to trap baddies in holes?
I have a tiny question to ask: is it possible to engineer carnivorous plants (and a couple trap-using insects) to create cute little girl avatars, and give them the propensity to trap baddies in holes?
Imagine the Traptrix girls all over Brockton Bay. Hilarity would definitely ensue.
You can necro in SV?
Yes, we're currently doing it. And I'm starting to regret making that comment up there.
Shame on all of us!