Wow. Gotta say I love all this discussion. It makes me feel like a real author. Now for some replies. Sadly I couldn't reply to every post since I need to keep some things to my chest so as not to spoil the upcoming chapters too much.
An emotion so powerful it transcends artificiality and brings humans and AI together.
Exasperation.
Writing Dragon is fun. She's filling in a lot for Codi while Codi is off
conquering shardspace doing her thing.
"Director, I have good news and bad news…"
I love Aboleths.
Good news: No more mutant starfish
Bad news: Huge psychic tentacle-fish with illusion powers re-enacting Lovecraft's Shadow Over Innsmouth, complete with fish people.
which also another thing, she need to make a brain shield to finally stop Reality Lenses from cranking her brain to 28 and making her terminally bratty
Bear in mind that without a shard connection Addy would be in a coma due to a large part of her brain currently being brain tumour. Reality Lens is running part of Addy's mind on it's own hardware to compensate for that.
We can read Addy's thoughts. Taylor can't.
We also can't read Taylor's thoughts on the matter (except in interludes ofc).
Not "couldn't", but "wouldn't". Without her asking to vaporise them, they would still be dead, just not vaporised. Without her tech, they would stay dead. So technically she's asking to not get more work because of people she doesn't give a shit about.
Pretty much this.
Addy's general chain of logic is that if those people are gonna die anyways then she doesn't want to get bogged down reviving them afterwards.
Addy. Aboleth DNA? Aboleth? Aboleths have genetic memory! And the entire species are evil mind-controllers!
Truly, she is her own worst enemy. And everyone else's worst enemy.
Aboleths are great. Eldritch abominations from the dawn of time with racial genetic memories are loads of fun. They can also enslave humans and turn them into fish people to do their bidding in the surface world. There's also grafts that can be added to their minions too (such as the tentacle Addy mentioned).
Honestly they're some of my favourite monsters to use. You can really do a fun Lovecraftian adventure if you use them right. Not to mention their illusion powers can let them punch above their challenge rating if used correctly.
Im pretty sure this is a comedey
Unders is this a comedey?
It's a humorous tale of a cute girl doing cute things. Wrapped around a core of horror and unfortunate implications, because it is a Worm fic after all.
This fic is gleefully tapdancing on the tightrope with a deep plunge into crackfic on one side and a depressing tale of Alice in Wonderland esque madness and horror on the other.
What do you think?
Try rereading the fic without the interludes that inject sanity into this mess. It basically turns into pure crack XD
I don't think any Wonderland would want this Alice...
And now I'm kinda regretting that I made her middle name Serenity instead of Alice.
I really hope the unacknowledgement is only from her POV. Stopping an endbringer deserves more than praise, and the prt should be paying her absurd amount of money for her resurrection items.
There's stuff going on in the background. Addy is just an absolutely terrible narrator. An upcoming Annette PoV should help clear things up, though it's gonna be a while.
It is funny and i am tired of pretending that it is not
Well it was meant to be funny, as well as unsettling, but mostly meant to be funny.
But seriously this should come as no surprise, Addy has never shown any remorse to anyone outside of her close circle of people she cares about. Addy has always been a person capable of great evil, this should be obvious but protagonist does not equate to "a morally good person"
Basically this. Addy has my morals, which mostly equate to 'try not to be an asshole to people'. If I had a valid enough reason to do something 'evil' I probably would. I also don't like people. I can also say for certain that if I had the power to kill people with my mind there'd probably be a lot less people around.
Isn't the stuff like the Staff usable whenever by whoever she designates? Those people are going to get roped into doing the works she doesn't want to do. Better get a contract to have Taylor get paid. Though if they try to strong arm her into allowing the Triumvirate to use her stuff, make it so that it comes with a magical girl transformation outfit and it can only be used in that form by them. I'm sure with enough PR pressure, David wouldn't dare say no to going out in a Sailor Moon outfit.
Anyone can use her stuff at the moment. She's got some countermeasures lined up in future, since cursed items as well as gender/race/alignment/class restrictions etc are a thing in D&D. She just needs time to make it. The end goal of course is for only her family (and Lisa and the Tattlesnakes) to be able to use her super powerful stuff.
Don't forget that Cauldron at this point have gone full 'evil conspiracy' mode and are already planning to evilly manipulate Addy.
But they have to protect their precious Path so it's fully justified and therefore not evil.
To be honest I think Cauldron is also in a bit of a sunk cost fallacy at the moment. They're done so much evil just to keep their path going that they have to hope it pans out or all that evil they caused won't have been worth it.
Can Contessa even do anything when Addy literally has Best Endbringer on speed dial?
Amusingly enough due to the mindlink with Simmy, Addy now has the same anti-precog defences that Eidolon has. Meaning she could in theory remove the third eye and still be unpathable.
My point was Addy knows that, so she wouldn't spill the full Cauldron reveal unless she had given everyone involved Mind Blank.
Yup. Also she's waiting till after the whole Echidna thing, since she promised Simmy she wouldn't derail that whole Simurgh Plot. She also wants to deal with Contessa asap, which fortunately doesn't interfere with the whole Echidna plot and thus means she can start making plans to take her out (so far I have a couple scene ideas, still trying to settle on which one will cause maximum amusement to the audience).
Imagine how the Simurgh is feeling with some strange H U M A N constantly feeding her mind-boggling amount of pure {boredom} through their link.
Truly, being Simmy is Suffering.
Especially after Echidna shows up.
Poor Simmy.
Irony: My current D&D character is a Swarmkeeper named Skitter who is most definitely modeled off Taylor, and I keep hoping to manage to find somewhere I can get a Tentacle Whip, which while it doesn't replace your arm, does live inside it.
(Not because its on-theme, obviously, but I have Skitter using a whip because using a BEES!-reflavored Booming Blade variant that deals poison damage, alongside Spell Sniper, lets her attack at reach with the spell & her Swarm. And the Tentacle Whip is one of the only non-basic magic whips available.)
Symbionts are great fun. It's just such a pity the majority of them aren't really worth it to make from Addy's PoV. Aside from the armour and the tentacle whip everyone else is just outperformed by plasmids.
I don't think that was Dragon being manipulative. Being manipulative would be her purposefully pointing out that resurrecting an entire Endbringer battle's worth of people would definitely make people think she's the greatest tinker ever.
Or it could even have been Simmy being manipulative by making Addy think Dragon was being manipulative, in some sort of 5D chess manoeuvre.
Well, we do know for certain from canon that Danny is awful at parenting, and Taylor is awful at dealing with people.
But some commenters here seem to be under the impression that they're doing their best in this particular fic.
Why?
A lot of the problem is miscommunication, as well as all sorts of issues also cropping up that also demands their attention. It probably also didn't help that I cut the chapter there, though unfortunately that was the best way of splitting the massive chunk of writing I'd churned out.
Also yeah, "I'm telling Mom" is like as far from Taylor as you can possibly get while remaining the same species. You could, mmm, Taylor could easily threaten to do it for some intangible sisterly concessions I have no idea about, that's more believable.
The I'm telling mom bit is more that this is Taylor's way of dealing with Addy when Addy is being too Addy. Passing the buck to an adult who should be able to deal with whatever it is Addy has done.
This. I just re-read the latest PHO section, it's almost as enjoyable as the first time. Really nice writing from Unders, it evokes that wonderful feeling of hilarious insanity and disbelief, it's great.
Thankies :)
I find it funny that there is a distinct chance that Contessa is actually either directly or indirectly responsible for drowning one or more puppies.
Obviously Contessa had interacted with Bitch's foster mother earlier during the day that Bitch triggered.
I mean, of course the Simurgh can reinterpret this request in the most vicious way possible, that's why she's 'that fucking feathered bitch'
This is exactly the kind of result I expected when Addy joined the wards AND IT IS GLORIOUS!
Just wait. It gets even better. Or worse, depending on your point of view. Piggot is definitely in the second camp.
On the idea that Addy isn't be appreciated for stopping an Endbringer. We are seeing things from Addy's perspective, and she's mostly focused on the annoying paper work and grounding. Remember back to the Annette interlude on how Annette recognized how messed up Addy is but is trying to support her. The Heberts already helped hide a ton of her crimes and start Splyce's gang.
Heberts are probably worrying over all the attention Addy has on her now for bottling Leviathan.
A whole lot of this. Of course since we've just had a huge interlude we won't be seeing other PoVs for a while.
I guess being a biotinker does count as a crime on Earth Bet, and this directly leads us to the whole Splyce's gang thing, since she can't be Protectorate affiliate.
I honestly don't remember any other crimes. She and Annette killed those two Nazis who attacked their house (Stormtiger? Victor?), but that clearly falls under 'castle doctrine' and is not a crime.
Can you remind what else was there? (genuinely asking)
Had her tentacle cat killed anyone?
Addy's list of crimes is surprisingly high, though mostly it'd be various flavours of assault with a parahuman power, manslaughter and/or murder. Every time I think about her actual body count I giggle, because it's way higher than she thinks it is.
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(I would mention Staves, but using Staffs is so very Addy...
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Yeah, I opted for Staffs since it's Addy. So many times I have to dumb down the grammar because that's how Addy talks/thinks. Somewhere, each time I have to change 'Taylor and I' into 'me and Taylor', an English teacher cries.
Well hopefully Codi is in the process of fixing this, assuming that she is BS OP enough to win a fight with Dragon's Shard.
There's a Codi segment in the upcoming interlude. Suffice to say, there's a reason AIs are supposed to be restricted.
Also in case people are wondering why Addy doesn't seem to care that Codi has vanished: It's because it's only been a couple of days and Codi has gone longer stretches without being in contact, so Addy just assumes everything is fine and Codi is doing Codi things.