The Wonders of Parahuman Puberty: Kill Orders and You.
Right making this post so I don't have to keep explaining this stuff constantly. Hiding things behind a spoiler in case any inquisitive new readers show up because if you haven't at least read Interlude 3 (The Interludening!) you'll be encountering story spoilers.
These posts sum up why Splice has an active kill order:
A pre-signed kill order was sent out after the reveal of the bio-tinker 3 or so weeks ago. There is such a bias on bio-tinkers due to the sheer devastation they can cause in a short amount of time. Arguing against the kill order from an outside perspective is like defending a terrorist who just hijacked an airplane. Yes as a reader you realize Addy isn't capital E evil, but the PRT has sufficient evidence that a Nilbog situation is occurring in Brocktown Bay. That is like watching a hijacked plane fly into New York in our world.
From the PRT's perspective they have a murderous bio-tinker with 3 confirmed kills to their name, who almost killed glory girl, can give breaker powers to their bio-tinker minions, received evidence from a verified pre-cog that showed the cuties monsters breeding, attacked a school, almost killed a teenage boy, created a multi-powered monster, attacked the largest hospital in the city, and gave their creations a master/stranger rating. Blasto has a pre-signed kill order waiting for him to do anything more than stealing drugs.
To elaborate on the plane metaphor: Before 9/11 plane hijackings were bad, but they weren't the massive 'oh no panic now scramble the air force' thing we now consider them to be. Back then you hijack a plane you'll probably just get arrested. Nowadays you hijack a plans and everyone on board will probably be trying to beat you to death because the expectation is you're gonna be flying the plane into a building or something.
The same sort of logic applies to biotinkers in Worm. Because there's precedent with shit getting really fucked by biotinkers they're acted upon a lot more harshly.

Now to explain the in-story setup to the kill order and it being activated:
Once they found out about a biotinker Piggot went and contacted her superiors about getting a pre-signed kill order, which her superiors then did all the assorted bureaucratic wrangling to acquire. Piggot then received the kill order she wanted.
The way I'm treating pre-signed kill orders is that they're all essentially signed off and ready to be activated at any time if the situation suddenly escalates to warrant it, since that's how I think they're meant to work (as opposed to a normal kill order which would be done on someone who has suddenly escalated things out of nowhere).

Using Blasto as an example he's got a pre-signed kill order so that in the event he starts making self replicating shit they can immediately deal with the problem rather than trying to push the kill order through all the layers of bureaucracy needed while his stuff spreads out of control.

Piggot applied the same sort of reasoning to Splice's case. Piggot asked for one so she could activate if it was needed (and then received it). Then she received reliable* evidence that the situation warranted activating the kill order. She still kept it under wraps (only telling her forces it was active) to keep undesirable elements out of her unstable city. The Medhall stunt forced her hand as PR is a major part of the PRT and they needed to be seen doing something and activating a kill order on a dangerous biotinker (which the public is already predisposed to fear) makes the PRT look like they are making the hard choices for the public good.

*They think Addy is a precog who is predicting self-replicating monsters. They also have access to Dinah who has offscreen (for now) answered that some of her creations are capable of self-replication. Of course they lack the context needed for Dinah's anmswer (since due to starfish DNA Addy's Catsquids can replicate if you cut bits off them and leave the bits in nutrient vats. Also Addy's crows lay eggs when they nest in human corpses and are technically creations of Addy's and actually do count as a potential self-replicating threat if Addy forgets to turn off the attack mode).
Hopefully that helps people.
 
I find it interesting that everybody is focusing on certain parts, and nobody has mentioned one major tidbit revealed in Coil's POV. His self-destruct is active, and he cannot send the signal to keep the dead man's trigger dormant. Considering that fact, I really have to wonder about the repercussions of this. Whether something happens to narrowly save the day, or if that base is going to blow. Not going to lie, I would actually enjoy seeing the chaotic fallout of that catastrophe. But I'm not going to get my hopes up since most authors try to avoid writing that issue.
 
I figured Leviathan was trying to let Noel out of her vault so she could play with all the other capes in the city.
Huh, that makes way more sense than my theory.
AI GlaDos for SCIENCE and Cake :ogles:
Portal would be fun, if only so Addy can obtain the recipe for the most perfect cake in all existence.
Now that I think about it, if the PRT killed Splice and were unable to retrieve the body, would they ask Dinah if Splice was dead or whether they killed Splice? With the first it would likely show up as 50% chance, since Splice could be referring to one of two bodies, while the second would give a high enough percentage to end the Kill order. Then again if they ask if they stopped Splice's Biotinkering it would be a very low number, so it could go either way.
Yeah Dinah's power requires people ask the correct questions.
Let's see Biotinkering and AIs...
Marvel, Starcraft?, Megaman, Pokemon(Rotom counts as an AI, right?), Star Wars (Can she make Aliens?), Star Trek, Futurama, Mass Effect, Borderlands, Halo, Fallout, XCOM?(Can't remember an AI, but who knows), and Power Rangers (Zordon). (I likely left some out)
Leaving only the ones I know we've mentioned recently we have: Starcraft?, XCOM?, Borderlands and Power Rangers. Hopefully It's Power Rangers so Addy can help create a Ranger suit and Morpher for Mothri. Then again it's not Beetleborgs, so modifying to be thematic would take some effort.

Horrible Idea: A GlaDOS attachment for Addy that sings Still Alive every time she dies.
It'll come up soon since next chapter we're back to Addy's POV, but it's definitely one of those. These two big interludes were originally meant to be one singular massive interlude before I chopped it in half.
 
Ok really really confused about the kill order they don't know if her crafted pets can reproduce in fact they have still had very little interaction with her at all
Two precogs have confirmed it. Well one and a half.
After warning them about Dinah Alcott Vista then forwarded a picture she had taken of a notebook Adeline had begun to draw in. Seeing it made the PRT director's blood run cold. It showed multiple of those things and that they could breed. The tree in the background suggested those monsters would be spreading into out into neighbourhoods from wherever they were holed up in the docks.

basically zero body count?
Killed gang members.
The tentacle cat had killed people, but it's possible that was an accident and they did stop that woman from being raped.

There may be some biotinker options. :whistle:
I think it's safe to say that all the trees will have some biotinkering in them. Maybe a combination between bio and mechanical.

"The triplet thing would probably be the easiest way but then Uncle Danny might get weird looks hooking up with somebody people would think is dead wife's identical sister."
I mean he'd probably get some weird looks, but it isn't like anyone is in the position to judge.
 
I find it interesting that everybody is focusing on certain parts, and nobody has mentioned one major tidbit revealed in Coil's POV. His self-destruct is active, and he cannot send the signal to keep the dead man's trigger dormant. Considering that fact, I really have to wonder about the repercussions of this. Whether something happens to narrowly save the day, or if that base is going to blow. Not going to lie, I would actually enjoy seeing the chaotic fallout of that catastrophe. But I'm not going to get my hopes up since most authors try to avoid writing that issue.
Seeing as no one besides Coil knows his absence will cause the explosion, there's a high chance a large amount of damage will be done. Unfortunately I don't think anyone will waste a question afterward to ask "Was Thomas Calvert being contained the cause of the explosion" so chances are high every group will point fingers at each other for it. As for the chaos and destruction... well, Addy likely won't consider it as bad as it is, so who knows how it will be represented if it happens.
 
I wonder if the PRT would use Missy's connection to Addy, to ask her if her 'thinker friend' knows anything about Thomas Calvert being mastered, or Splice's evil plans?

Addy: Thomas who? Oh! You mean Coil? And what evil plans? She just attacked the Nazi's HQ.
 
I have a feeling that when/if the 9 arrive at the bay addie will distract bonesaw so noone will have to worry about her plagues! Although I do wonder what they would be able to build together? I'm guessing that if addie clones some random people but leaves them without personality or pain receptors then she can distract bonesaw for long enough to adopt her(RL would convince Rileys shard that addie is best host and that it's better to follow her than broadcast)
 
Oh, you jerk that was an amazing cliffhanger.

The Annette coming home and noticing the disrepair of the home and realizing that Danny didn't take losing her well was a nice touch.

And as usual thanks for your hard work and keep up the great story
 
Let's see Biotinkering and AIs...
Marvel, Starcraft?, Megaman, Pokemon(Rotom counts as an AI, right?), Star Wars (Can she make Aliens?), Star Trek, Futurama, Mass Effect, Borderlands, Halo, Fallout, XCOM?(Can't remember an AI, but who knows), and Power Rangers (Zordon). (I likely left some out)
Leaving only the ones I know we've mentioned recently we have: Starcraft?, XCOM?, Borderlands and Power Rangers. Hopefully It's Power Rangers so Addy can help create a Ranger suit and Morpher for Mothri. Then again it's not Beetleborgs, so modifying to be thematic would take some effort.
Digimon would make a good option. Especially since they can come out of pretty much any electronic device . Imagine transpiring her creations via ppl's mart phones .
Mega man might also be an interesting option.
bonus is pretty much any one of them has a chance oftriggering like Dragon.
 
More alarming was when his pet Thinker informed him that they were only capable of making nests in human corpses and that said nests would produce new crows almost instantly. Which would be just as vicious and capable of flight moments after hatching, which explained what happened to the police officers that came to investigate.

You've already explained why she got a kill order, this little snippet explains why she deserves to get a kill order.
 
I find it interesting that everybody is focusing on certain parts, and nobody has mentioned one major tidbit revealed in Coil's POV. His self-destruct is active, and he cannot send the signal to keep the dead man's trigger dormant. Considering that fact, I really have to wonder about the repercussions of this. Whether something happens to narrowly save the day, or if that base is going to blow. Not going to lie, I would actually enjoy seeing the chaotic fallout of that catastrophe. But I'm not going to get my hopes up since most authors try to avoid writing that issue.
Which base is gonna blow though? As I recall he had several.

this little snippet explains why she deserves to get a kill order
For some collateral damage? That's hardly a kill order worthy action. The Gangs in the city do way more in deaths.

The spec I got was especially amusing considering the discussion over the last couple of pages.
I find it funny that every tech Addy has gotten so far has resulted in even more biotinker applications.
 
Non-Canon: Still Alive
~Flutters adventures for canon omake status~​

Triumph gasped heavily, breathing through his mouth to avoid the scent of frying pork. It hadn't been the first time he'd smelled the tell tale scent of human meat cooking like luscious bacon sizzling in the pan, but today was the first time he had been directly responsible for it.

The slowly cooling body laying on the pavement had been a hard fight, throwing waves of disposable bio tinker creations at their feet like chaff before a storm. Seemingly endless hordes of squid faced monstrosities, spraying venom and throwing lightning around like it was going out of style.

Splice. The biotinker. A threat to their very lives, an unmistakable wretch that had wished for all of their deaths with his careless actions. A terror in life, whoseown had been cut short oh so easily.

You wouldn't think that with all of his protections, all the creations at his beck and call, his own hide would have proven more resistant to acute electrocution. Nay, like all of his creations before him his own flesh burned just as easily.

A shrunken figure swam in the villains costume, a dwarf or midget entombed therein.

Triumph leaned down as his companions stood guard, prying lpose the villains head covering. A loose wrap of clotcuriously scattered with frilly ribbons, shielding its heinous masters identity from the world.

No more. No more would they cower in terror. Now they would know the face of the monster they had bested.

Triumph stared. Turning to Armsmaster, he voiced his confusion.

"It's a girl."

Indeed, the young girl laying dead on the road between them was not the face they had envisioned when thinking of their terrifying biotinker. Not someone this young... This... Innocent.

"That's the precog," Armmaster stated woodenly, staring sullenly down at the sizzling corpse. "But-"

With a sudden crackle of sound, Triumph and Armsmaster both leaped backwards in surprise. The body hadn't moved, but a shrill radio crackle was slowly coalescing into audible sounds.

"...This was a triumph,"

"What the hell," Triumph spouted, bringing his arclance to bear on the still motionless body.

"-I'm making a note here, huge success."

"I recognize the tune," Armsmaster admitted in a moment of uncharacteristic confusion. "Although I cannot say from where."

"...Its a video game my friend was interested a few years ago," Triumph noted, thinking back to the endless memes his idiot friend had peppered him with. The cake is a lie, indeed.

"It's hard to overstate my satisfaction.~"

Armsmaster shared a look with Triumph. "Nothing more than a childish attempt to psych us out-"

"Armsys a dick that should shut up.~" came the lilting song voice in tune with the music. "-quit interrupting my song, and listen along. But there's no use crying over your big mistake. Just sit back, laugh, and then have some more cake. "

Triumph peered at Armsmaster as their faces developed quickly growing horror. The track wasn't pre-recorded, and had actively responded to their comments.

"Now you think that you've won,
And you think I'm dead and gone,
But bitches guess what I am still ~aliiiiive~."
 
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Also Addy's crows lay eggs when they nest in human corpses and are technically creations of Addy's and actually do count as a potential self-replicating threat if Addy forgets to turn off the attack mode).
Ya they kill Addy after she activates attack mode and they just keep multiplying till she revives. And since they can fly and catch on fire. Well they can spread super fast.
 
For some collateral damage? That's hardly a kill order worthy action. The Gangs in the city do way more in deaths.
It's not 'some'. Coil didn't continue the timeline, but they were self propagating at a ridiculous exponential rate. If the capes didn't get on that shit FAST then you'd be looking at a 'daisy cutter Brockton Bay to save the coast' scenario.
 
... Bwahahahahahahahahaha!! Bravo! Well done!

Would someone please be kind enough to write the full song just so we could all sing along and imagine the Protectorate's faces with each line sung?

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Spotted some typos @Flutters Is Shy
It hadn't been the first time he'd smelled the telltale scent of human meat cooking like luscious bacon sizzling in the pan, but today was the first time he had been directly responsible for it.
A terror in life, whose own had been cut short oh so easily.
Triumph leaned down as his companions stood guard, prying loose the villain's head covering. A loose wrap of cloth, curiously scattered with frilly ribbons, shielding its heinous master's identity from the world.
"...It's from a video game my friend was interested a few years ago," Triumph noted, thinking back to the endless memes his idiot friend had peppered him with.
"Armsy's a dick that should shut up.~"
 
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...and then Jack Slash shows up to recruit Splice because Bonesaw wants a friend.
... and then he takes one look at the true (awesomeness) (horrifyingness) Of Addy and says: I am out of here. And you too, Bonesaw...

Never forget how horrible some of the things she has in reserve actually are.

Besides, how well does Jack Slash's Cape protection work against her? Because RL really does not want to loose best host, and his protection depends on the shards helping him. Not the other way around, and we have a precedent for RL interacting directly with Addy...
 
I decided Annette was gonna get rezzed and Addy wanted an AI to fix the problem. The spec I got was especially amusing considering the discussion over the last couple of pages.
Yeah I'm stumped on what the tinker specialty is.

I suspect its Starcraft. Except that she will be starting with protoss uploaded ai instead of zerg.

All the zerg discussions would be funny if she used protoss instead. Which are almost culturally against the zerg.
 
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