-[] 8. Dragging You Down
Description: A depiction of various smallfolk interrupted from seemingly idyllic work and ordinary life, dragged screaming into the sea by tentacles and enormous webbed hands, begging for help to packs of Golden Shields who butcher them with a smile, while distinctive figures in their heraldry gather around a witch's pyre to burn a small girl, with tears in her eyes, a golden-haired witch holding back their mother while some dead relatives are piled nearby.
Caption:
"Get back into line."
Locations: Coastal Communities, North, East, South and West


@Goldfish?
Um, did you mod mine?
 
Yeah, he gave it the propaganda treatment for more emotional oomph.
Kind of took away from the original point and just added more random slaughter though.


It was supposed to be about how the golden shields ignore the real threats in favor of imagined ones, not that they randomly slaughter people along with random members of other houses.

I mean "get back in line"? Sorry, it just seems like you went in a completely different direction.
 
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@tarrangar fir your SI challenge, something like "you get 20th level WBL, but no custom items".

And "no, you are not a Gamer, slaughtering chickens for 1 XP a piece won't get you to level twenty, Talon". I always figured "no infinite loops/silly RAW, as it's an actual living, breathing world, not a tabletop abstraction" didn't need to be said, but there's always someone.
 
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Kind of took away from the original point and just added more random slaughter though.


It was supposed to be about how the golden shields ignore the real threats in favor of imagined ones, not that they randomly slaughter people along with random members of other houses.

I mean "get back in line"? Sorry, it just seems like you went in a completely different direction.

It's sort of different, but it reflects what actually happened while also acknowledging that the Lannisters are completely ignoring the cause of the problem--the hungry ocean--while killing peasants in what is basically a witch hunt (ironic as that sounds).
 
It's sort of different, but it reflects what actually happened while also acknowledging that the Lannisters are completely ignoring the cause of the problem--the hungry ocean--while killing peasants in what is basically a witch hunt (ironic as that sounds).
Yes but it takes away from a clear cut message and just adds a bunch of chaotic nonsense that doesnt have anything to do with it that muddles the message.

Adding "Emotional oomph" just seemed a but ridiculous when just showing golden shields jeering and burning a young crying girl while a ton of people are being attacked from the sea makes it clear and the existing problem and events will give it all the emotional power it needs.


Heck, the caption doesnt even help clear it up only adding to the confusion.
 
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Yes but it takes away from a clear cut message and just adds a bunch of chaotic nonsense that doesnt have anything to do with it that muddles the message.
Magic! *jazz hands*

I'm pretty sure this is straight forward anyway. The sea is scooping up people and their everyday life is shattered forever. The Lannisters' response? Kill the peasants.

What could possibly be miscommunicated by that?

I'll take out the random slaughter (even if it's an accurate summation of the situation) and leave the witch burning as-is, though, since that's the important part.

And the "get back into line" is integral to the whole message. The Lannisters response to the smallfolk not obeying them (making deals with monsters from the ocean) is to just start a witch hunt.
 
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-[] 8. Dragging You Down
Description: A depiction of various smallfolk interrupted from seemingly idyllic work and ordinary life, dragged screaming into the sea by tentacles and enormous webbed hands, while distinctive figures in their heraldry gather around a witch's pyre to burn a small girl, with tears in her eyes, a golden-haired witch holding back their mother nearby.
Caption:
"Get back into line."
Locations: Coastal Communities, North, East, South and West

There, a lot less going on, but basically accomplishing the goal of the original propaganda. I mean the original goal of the propaganda, appealing to emotions and inciting outrage.
 
Magic! *jazz hands*

I'm pretty sure this is straight forward anyway. The sea is scooping up people and their everyday life is shattered forever. The Lannisters' response? Kill the peasants.

What could possibly be miscommunicated by that?
First off

That was not the message.

The message was the golden shields ignore real threats in favor of imaginary ones.

Not "The lannisters kill people for asking for help"

Second off, I am kind of peeved about how you took a simple picture that was clear cut, had a clear message, and took advantagw of existing resentment to give emotional depth and allow it to be applied far beyond the coastal settlements and then warp it into something confusing and chaotic and change the message completely.


Third, You seem to think this needs more emotion, more drama when it is pretty clear almost every settlement along the coast has some people who have lost someone to the deep ones and, despite asking for help, never got it and instead hear about the golden shields lack of response while they focus on other things despite how bad it is getting along the coast.

The comic doesnt need to be complex to give a strong meaning

There, a lot less going on, but basically accomplishing the goal of the original propaganda. I mean the original goal of the propaganda, appealing to emotions and inciting outrage.


Thanks.
 
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Just out of curiosity, do you guys think the smallfolk will just sit down and start reading those things? I mean, they do have stuff to do, not a whole lot of free time to read and all that.
 
Just out of curiosity, do you guys think the smallfolk will just sit down and start reading those things? I mean, they do have stuff to do, not a whole lot of free time to read and all that.

The general acknowledgement and conceit is that, yes, most of these will go to waste, but if even a quarter, if even one fifth gets read and passed along mostly faithful to the telling, maybe even changing hands, it will have a very wide-reaching effect on rumblings, and may shift the opinions of Lords/minor nobility who without a doubt will try to collect some of them, either to dispose of (they'll have a hard time with that...) or to simply sate curiosity.
 
Just out of curiosity, do you guys think the smallfolk will just sit down and start reading those things? I mean, they do have stuff to do, not a whole lot of free time to read and all that.
Absolutely. This is in Truespeech, and it has beautiful and engaging illustrations. They're honestly works of art.
 
It's a quantity versus quality issue, and just so you know, the blessing of Abundance is based on this quests attitudes, so corpses are considered loot, and depending on what you do with a captured enemy, they might also be considered loot, if you decide to be a slaver, then if you manage to capture and enslave someone, they suddenly turn into 3 people identical right down to the soul(note you must be an actual slaver, capturing someone enslaving them for 5 minutes, and then setting them free wont work) if you manage to recruit someone they are also duplicated, if you decide to sacrifice them, the value of the sacrifice is 3 times normal, if you turn them over for a bounty the bounty will duplicate, if you just set them free the ability don't activate.

This is of course only the case for people you capture or kill in battle yourself, the ability don't activate, if what it's activating on can't be considered loot taken from an enemy.

I choose abundance.

I make challenges of honorable combat for forfeiture, starting with currency and property working my way up to challenging sovereign lords for Right of Rule.


So if I conquer the Stepstones or Basilisk Isles where do the other island chains show up? Same question for continents.

If I become the rightful ruler of a million peasants, do I now have 3 million peasants?
 
How long do we want to keep these messages going? I say that we should send out a new set of propaganda two months from new either reinforcing the narrative. Or introducing a new topic
 
How long do we want to keep these messages going? I say that we should send out a new set of propaganda two months from new either reinforcing the narrative. Or introducing a new topic
The Propaganda is intended to be endless. There will never be a time where it becomes useless. Just that with each year more and more designs get pushed through.
 
OOC: You guys can assume the distribution has already begun, this is just the opportunity to semi-retroactively decide the details.

Minimum 50% of distributions should be facts of reality to educate the smallfolk and nobility alike and/or a true and accurate representation of life under our rule as opposed to going full rail into attack ads against our various enemies.

Merely showing the shelter and sanitation available to the average person in SD will do amazing things for us.

Showing a diagrammatic representation of how we create hyper-fertile terrace farms or outright new landmass etc. is at least as powerful as showing how big of a stinky-face Tywin is.
 
The general acknowledgement and conceit is that, yes, most of these will go to waste, but if even a quarter, if even one fifth gets read and passed along mostly faithful to the telling, maybe even changing hands, it will have a very wide-reaching effect on rumblings, and may shift the opinions of Lords/minor nobility who without a doubt will try to collect some of them, either to dispose of (they'll have a hard time with that...) or to simply sate curiosity.
Hell, even if just 1/20th of those who see the broadsheets bother to read them, that's more than enough to spread stories of what they saw. Gossip travels only slightly slower than the speed of light, after all.

The novelty factor also can't be ignored. High quality color images are going to be completely new to just about everyone short of the nobility. If we take care to make the broadsheets pretty, people will look at them and save them for that alone. IIRC, there was a program a century or two ago to put tiny duplicates of famous art and structures on US currency so that people who wouldn't otherwise get a chance to see the stuff could at least have some exposure.
 
Re: Will it be read?

This is informative entertainment and smallfolk have downtime, this will be THE topic of conversation at every tavern, sewing circle, group harvest etc.

People talk throughout the day and this is what they will talk about.

Yeah, well, that's just like, your opinion, man.

Ignoring you again, because I don't like arguing with people and barely have the mental or emotional energy for honest debate.

While you've never hidden your disdain for ongoing minor tweaks to a consolidated vote you did call for exactly that

Here's what we'll do @TalonofAnathrax @Goldfish @Duesal.

Everyone write their stuff. We'll include ALL of it. We'll do a poster with each broadsheet set, we'll have little editorials which are the equivalent of a Rumor Post, but this time we're generating the rumors as we wish them to be heard/read. We'll include a monster's manual. We'll include political cartoons. And we'll have a serialized story about Viserys and the Companions, probably literally called "the Life and Times of Viserys Targaryen". Because why not be on the nose about it?

Finally we'll have a foreword, explaining what our positions actually are, why they are to your (the smallfolk's) benefit and why anyone opposed to our works is either a petty tyrant, a moron or a devil-thrall/cultist/madman.

Everyone write what you want and we'll consolidate. The final result will be:

The Imperial Times

and then you changed their suggestion to the point they now disagreed with it. It may be an opinion but it was one asked for and I don't think it at all unreasonable to defend it's original incarnation.

I'll try to write up some things for this but I think Talon is going in the same basic direction.

Perhaps I should focus on Pretty/Shiny is not good, maybe using Lannisters and a gruff but respected house for the mortal parallels.
 
and then you changed their suggestion to the point they now disagreed with it. It may be an opinion but it was one asked for and I don't think it at all unreasonable to defend it's original incarnation.

Thank you for that.

Perhaps I should focus on Pretty/Shiny is not good, maybe using Lannisters and a gruff but respected house for the mortal parallels


I can think of a few ideas for "Shiny =/= Good" for illustrations but not any that direcy refference houses outside of the Lannisters
 
Re: Will it be read?

This is informative entertainment and smallfolk have downtime, this will be THE topic of conversation at every tavern, sewing circle, group harvest etc.

People talk throughout the day and this is what they will talk about.



While you've never hidden your disdain for ongoing minor tweaks to a consolidated vote you did call for exactly that


and then you changed their suggestion to the point they now disagreed with it. It may be an opinion but it was one asked for and I don't think it at all unreasonable to defend it's original incarnation.

I'll try to write up some things for this but I think Talon is going in the same basic direction.

Perhaps I should focus on Pretty/Shiny is not good, maybe using Lannisters and a gruff but respected house for the mortal parallels.
1) You pointed out my irritation toward quibbling succinctly already.
2) He was on my ignore list before, and generally people don't wind up there for dramatically offending me, but instead consistently, repeatedly and successfully causing me some minor irritation in most of their posts.

I think I'll stick to my guns, considering I unfiltered their posts long enough to accomodate them when Goldfish, who doesn't annoy me, suggested it.
 
Are tattoos a thing in ASOIAF? Beyond Lya's Advanced Tattoo Guardian Construct, I mean.

Just sitting here watching Ink Master on TV and I'm wondering if our Legion soldiers are sporting dragon tattoos. I can see that becoming a common practice.
 
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