Who Needs Harmony?: An MLP Empire Quest
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Just making sure your aware as of right now without your bonus it is already guaranteed success with the other bonus and our stat mean you will essentially waste your +10
It could still help push us into a crit.
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- Somewhere
@Questor, you made the omake canon. How does Brochard know Ponies beat Discord? I'm pretty sure that's what is meant by 'rely on the likes of ponies'.
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- Maryland
Oops, didn't see that bit. Changed to Semi-Canon.
Calling on Old Friends, need 40.
15 (omake) + 18 (stats) = 33.
We need to roll at least 7.
Aquileian Espionage, needs 45
20 (omakes) + 13 (stats) = 33 (again
)We need to roll at least 12.
Who let the Dogs Out?, needs 30
15 (Omakes) + 18 (stats) = 33 (again again)
Any roll will make this a success
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- San Jose
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- USA
Any chance you want to put it into something else integration is already an auto success with our stats and current omake bonus. Espionage could use a boost.
I guess everyone wants to fail an action this turn.
EDIT: I apologize, that was overly harsh and uncalled for.
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I think they are aiming at forcing an artificial critical onto the action.
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- San Jose
Alright then,
@Questor change my bonus to espionage.
Also the Omake has been edited too exclude the ponies bit.
How do you guys think of the omake? Did I do Brochard Justice?
Feel free to point out errors and contitnuity issues that I missed so that I may correct them.
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Well for me would be that his diplo advisor would be a little anoyed due to Brochard diplo actions and his spy advisor wouldn't really need to mention Dragon egg due to it not being a threat in near future, maybe changing that part about Mercenaries from dozens to hundreds ( this war will be fought by the thousands after all).
In all else you described Brochard as i imagined him.
A military Griffon turned king who fought for Aquileia when it was left alone by the empire, it kinda explains why he is bad at diplomacy and the way he behaved towards other nobles.
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Thanks for pointing that out. I need to run some errand, I'll edit them when I come back.
You're right the diplomacy advisor demeanor doesn't fit the failure. Also I mentioned the dragon egg because of the greed growth, I'll try to make it clearer.
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No problem, it was all in all nicely done.
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- Maryland
I was just running the numbers and realized how many omakes you guys have written. Once again, I am astounded with the sheer amount of reader engagement this quest is receiving, and I thank you all for making this a Quest worth running. When I first made this quest I was genuinely concerned not many people would be interested, and I'm very happy that you all proved me wrong!
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- USA
And we thank you for bringing this glorious work to us and i hope you keep it going strong.
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- Borderworld, Xen
Your welcome~ And honestly this is the most engaged I've ever been in a quest, I wish there were more MLP quests.
Same as Somnia, (and I may or may not have squeed when I saw that this was a thing.)
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- San Jose