Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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The sky came apart, and the Lord of Heaven screamed.

In the sky, the Ideal burned, a second sun, a dawn, a future yet unsullied, and the hurricane of her blades stroke tore hills from the earth, and leaves from the great tree.

A twitching leg a kilometer long crashed to the earth.
Any chance this is the leg of the Hui's Owl Ancestor?

I don't see how Shenhua even boosted could match let alone maim it, but maybe it was surprised by how shitty the Hui were? Heck, maybe the Owl was sleeping off of a particularly good (Hui crafted) Dream, and this was Shenhua's method of waking it up to show how shitty the Hui has become?
 
Any chance this is the leg of the Hui's Owl Ancestor?

I don't see how Shenhua even boosted could match let alone maim it, but maybe it was surprised by how shitty the Hui were? Heck, maybe the Owl was sleeping off of a particularly good (Hui crafted) Dream, and this was Shenhua's method of waking it up to show how shitty the Hui has become?
It's the Mu, the imperial clan, that have the owl. At least I'm pretty sure.
 
Alright, another Art idea I came up with. This one was an attempt to try to condense our art suite even further, creating what is kind of a PLR/BKSD+ that also covers SNR and group support. It draws on SSC's history and stories themes to build on Dream stuff. Potentially plays well with LFWT/thief style as well by giving us an "urban" environment to play with people in.

Also with potential liminal carver/formations synergy, and possible social synergy as well.

It's a very big and flexible art :V
Echoes of Ages Past
Dream, Earth?
Community, History, Expression, Causality?
Defense, armor, support, movement, summons, formations

Though the past may be gone into mist and memory, its presence is felt all around us. In the cities built upon the ruins of their own streets. In the stories that bind the people together and drive them apart. In the fables that teach them what to fear and what to venerate. Such histories and dreams of import are imprinted upon the Liminal, hundreds of layers of the history that define the world.

Through study and understanding of those moments that echo still, the cultivator has learnt to draw upon those Great Dreams of history, and manifest them upon the world. The thousand layered corpse of a city blossoms into the world, space warping as streets shift, and buildings and walls rise up to shield her and her allies from danger. Phantom allies rise from memory and connection to assist her, while the beasts of the past stalk the lands to menace her foes. Shared history rises to bind her and her allies together, reinforcing their bonds and enabling them to stand tall.

Uses: conjure walls and hide behind doors to block attacks and evade enemies. Block big attacks with big buildings. Summon allies to support you and allies or attack foes. Warp space to move yourself and allies to where you are needed within your phantom realm, and trap enemies. Conjure phantom armor to buff allies instead of summoning minions? Reinforce allies through invocation of shared history and bonds?

Liminal Carver synergy? Build formations to enhance constructs and allow greater dream fields to be created?

That being said, potential issues here are that a) it almost feels like a Cyan Art really; b) LQ hasn't yet done enough engagement with history stuff to make it really feel like "her" yet (though that could change depending on what happens with BKSD and SSC and our dream exploration); and c) it's a very big art that I feel kind of overshadows our FSS/cold stuff in a way that makes them fit less well.

I still wanna do stuff with conjuring buildings at people though~
 
"How much has this one changed I wonder, " the Duchess' voice cut through Ling Qi's attention, pressing down on her skull, despite the fact that they were not directed at her.

She pulled her attention back, just a little, to listen to her liege's reply.

"Gan Guangli did not require much change. He only needed to step from my shadow," Renxiang said. "That is not his role."

"Hoh, you say that like it is a small thing, daughter," laughed the Duchess.
The subtext is strong with this one. Rexiang confirming the new status quo.
 
Nah, I misremembered another event and thought this was when/why that Owl Ancestor left and abandoned their people.
Owl sublime ancestor is still around, its the Mu (current imperial house) sublime ancestor (tho not by blood). The Horned Lord (Deer) was the one that just up and left for the Weilu (first ducal house of the ES), but that was ages ago. Like thousands of years ago and there been a whole nother ducal clan in between that event in ES and the Hui.

We dont really know the whole story about why the Horned Lord left tbh.
 
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Huff! I have finally caught up! I started reading this story quite a while ago in Royal Road, and started reading this thread after I reached the last updated chapter during the caldera fight.

Let me tell you, reading through this thread has been both a pleasure and a torture. I just love reading the votes that happens in the background, seeing all the analysis, opinions and arguments in favor or against different options.
I also love going back to key moments of the story and discovering that there were unchosen options that I had never realized were possible! Or the instances that things only went well due to a massively lucky roll. I can't even imagining the stress that you all must have gone through.

Of course, there has been bad discussions as well. Cases in which people took thing a bit too far, writing massive walls of text in their comments, attacking each other personally, making far-fetched and over-complicated interpretations of a simple vote, exaggerated doomsaying, discussing and disecting the quality, structure and validity of each others arguments instead of the vote's theme and so on.

However, the worst part without a doubt was not being able to participate myself! I always find myself thinking of what arguments I could add to the debate. Many I find stated by other users, but others I dont. A few times I have found my option losing by a meager 1 or 2 votes! So I'm left thinking "Damn! I could have actually changed the course of the Quest! So frustrating!"

Well, no more! Now I'm here and I'm so looking forward to my first vote!
I'll see you all around
 
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Blessed by Winter
And to commemorate my arrival. @yrsillar. Here is an omake for the omake throne. Well, it happens in an undetermined future and assume a few things, so I guess that it being an Apocrypha is more accurate.
English isn't my first language, and this is the first time I have written anything. So critiques and advice are welcomed. Praises even more so.


Blessed by Winter

Dong Zhu could hardly stay still as his mother put layer over layer of thick clothing on him. The previous evening had seen the very first snowflakes of Winter drift lazily from the sky, and the morning had greeted their little village covered in a mantle of pure white. All around, as far as the eye could see, there was a sea of snow, perfectly pristine and immaculate, without as much as a single footprint to break the uniformity of the beautiful vista.

Dong Zhu could swear it was calling for him to fix that.

So he burst out of the door as soon as his mother took her hands off of him, ready to be the first to claim the top of the nearby hill all the kids always played in. Dong Zhu had always loved Winter. How could he not, when his parents always told the same story every year?

Dong Zhu had been born 13 years ago in the midst of an unusually harsh winter, the kind rarely seen anymore since the ascension of the Ling clan to Viscount rank. He had been born weak and sick, and he was crying constantly. His parents didn't know what to do, but they couldn't ask for help due to the heavy snowfall that hadn't stopped for over a week by then.

Just when his father was getting ready to brave the journey anyway something stopped him in his tracks. The crying that had never stopped suddenly turned into giggling and laughing. Dong Zhu's parents hurried to his crate and couldn't believe their eyes to what they saw there.

Floating over the crate were a dozen of winter fairies and sprites, playing with the little baby inside. Apparently they had been curious about the source of ruckus, and so they went to investigate as is their want. Now they laughed together with the newborn, sharing that pure childish joy. The winter spirits didn't leave them until the first snowmelts, protecting the house from the outside cold.

Since then everyone said that Dong Zhu was blessed by Winter, and Dong Zhu thought so as well. He loved Winter, and he was sure that Winter loved him back. That's why he always did his best in the Winter's Ceremonies. Not that it was really a chore to do so.

Most ceremonies Dong Zhu had attended were trite and boring things, where everyone just knelt and prayed and listened to unending sermons. Winter's Ceremonies were different, more like the harvest festival than anything else. The people sang and danced together around a merry hearth, and the children were brought to the temple to play with the winter spirits.

Winter spirits that have just been born only know a bleak and desolate world, which is why they are attracted to merriment and warmth. By having children play with them, the spirits feel welcomed and appreciated, and so are more inclined to ward the people from Winter's harm.

Dong Zhu lamented that he never could have seen Lady Hanyi's performances, but there was no way for someone like her to come to such a small village as his own. Even to listen to the songs of the Winter Maidens they had to go to the nearest town, almost half a day of travel by cart.

It was with such thoughts that Dong Zhu spent the day playing with his friends in the snow, with the occasional minor spirit joining as well. All too soon the sun started to set and it was time to return home. In his way back, Dong Zhu noticed a few winter spirits entering the forest beyond the village's limits. Dong Zhu had been warned over and over to never go past the wards surrounding the village proper, since danger dwelled in the outside. But he was blessed by Winter, what danger could there be for him?

So it was without fear nor doubt that Dong Zhu stepped into the woods, following the retreating spirits further and further in. It didn't take long for him to lose sigth of the spirits, and not much more to realize he wasn't quite sure of which way went back to the village.

It was then than Dong Zhu saw a flicker of movement out the corner of his eye. He eagerly turned, thinking it would be a spirit that could guide him back home, only to freeze mid-movement before what he encountered there. It was undoubtedly a spirit, but not like any kind of spirit he had ever seen before.

It had a vaguely lupine silhouette, but it's outline and features were shrouded by a haze of foggy shadow. It was nearly as tall at the shoulder as he was, and it's sharps fangs and claws could be seen through the darkness hunging over it like a mantle. However, what really caught Dong Zhu's attention was it's eyes.

They were hollow. Pitiless, bottomless holes full of hate and greed, brimming with malice and hunger. Dong Zhu understood instantly that this spirit was not a new friend waiting to be made. It was a being of deep cold and twisted want, coveting that which could never be theirs, and so despised everything that held warmth.

The spirit took a single step forward, causing the slightest of crunches in the snow. It resounded like a massive crack in a frozen lake in Dong Zhu's ears. The spell was broken, and Dong Zhu ran.

Dong Zhu didn't know where he was going, only that he had to escape. So he ran, jumping over roots and brushes and treading through the snow. Never looking back, but knowing with absolute certainty that that thing was chasing him nonetheless.

But that was when Dong Zhu noticed that something was wrong. The snow that had started falling at some point was obscuring the path ahead more than it seemed possible; it clung unnaturally to his limbs, weighting more than snow had any right to do. Jumping over the next root, Dong Zhu stepped into a slick frozen puddle hidden by the snow and slipped, crushing into the ground. He turned slowly, his entire body aching, and saw the creature looming over him.

The spirit pounced, and Dong Zhu barely had the time to raise his arm to protect himself. Jaws bit down, teeth sinking deep into flesh. Dong Zhu screamed in pain as the wolf-thing dragged him around, but more than that he felt something entering through the wound, traveling up his arm, searching his core.

A blast of cold wind impacted, hitting the wolf in it's face, making it release him, and the beast snarled. A score of winter spirits, fairies and sprites he somehow recognized as the ones he had spent the day playing with, rushed at them. They hurled gusts of winf and spikes of ice at the dark spirit, forcing it to retreat. With a last hateful glare towards Dong Zhu and another snarl, the beast fled, disappearing between the trees and the falling snow.

The winter spirits cirlced Dong Zhu, unsure of what to do. Dong Zhu was curled in the ground, overcome with the temblors a chill that came from within. Through a blurred memory, Dong Zhu remembered his father arriving at his side, and carrying him back home.

Dong Zhou was cold. No matter the amount of blankets he wrapped himself in, no matter how much fuel was added to the hearth, no matter how much hot stew he forced himslef to eat, Dong Zhou was cold. And each day he was a little colder

The village's medic was called, an old lady said to be a cultivator who knew everything about herbs and their uses. When she didn't know how to save him, the priest of the closest shrine was called. "Contamination of the unawakened dantian", he had said. Dong Zhu didn't understand what that meant. He only understood that he was going to die.

It was in the middle of such despair that someone else arrived. Even through the feverish state he was in, Dong Zhu gasped when he saw the Winter Maiden walk into his room. The Winter Maidens were a special branch of priestesses founded long ago by the Ling clan. They were Lady Hany's apprentices and took on the duty of conducting the Winter's Ceremonies over all the minor settlements of the Ling clan's territories and beyond.

The Winter Maiden was clad in a simple yet elegant gown of several layers. It's color was that of the purest white, with clear blue winter motifs around the hems. Her light hazel hair was tied up in a braid inlaid with white flowers, flowing over her shoulder and across her chest. The Winter Maiden bore a small, warm smile as she looked at him.

The Winter Maiden didn't say anything as she entered, leaving his parents in the doorframe. She simply sat in a chair at his bedside, clasping his hand in hers. And sang.

Dong Zhu felt the cold that had been worming inside of him for days react. It didn't disappear or diminish, instead it started to change. All this time Dong Zhu had felt something gnawing inside of him. A cold stripping him of all warmth. Coaxing him to sleep and not wake up. To give up. To End.

Now, with each passing note, it felt more like the cold he had always enjoyed. It felt like receiving a hit in the face during a snowball fight, like sinking into a mound of snow at the end of a long slide.

"You have the talent to become a cultivator", declared the Winter Maiden after she finished singing.

Dong Zhu could only stare and gawk as he slowly sitted upright in his bed, slowly opening and closing his previously numb hands. The cold was stil there, Dong Zhu could feel it. But it was no longer threatening him, instead it felt like a paradoxically warmth embrace.

The next few days were as much a blur as the time Dong Zhu had spent laying in his bed, though for completely different reasons. The Winter Maiden had declared that he needed to learn to undertstand and control the power that now slept within him. And so he would be taken to the peak of the living mountain, where the heartquarters of the Winter Maidens resided.

He would be taken away from everything that he had ever known, and brought to a place he had never expected to see beyond leyends. It would be path full of difficulties and danger, with many such encounters as the one that had nearly costed him his life.

Despite all that, Dong Zhu couldn't help the surge of trepidation that traveled up his spine, together with a cold chill.
 
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And to commemorate my arrival. @yrsillar. Here is an omake for the omake throne. Well, it happens in an undetermined future and assume a few things, so I guess that it being an Apocrypha is more accurate.
English isn't my first language, and this is the first time I have written anything. So critiques and advice are welcomed. Praises even more so.
Nice Job! Very fun omake!
 
That was really good! A few verb tense things- leave instead of left near the top- but the character you painted was a wonderful one, and I liked the references to Hanyi and the Living Mountain tying back to the main story.

Plus you kept the power level low and the stakes high, and I am a fan of stories like that. :)
 
Another Art idea inspired by suggestions from @JohnnieBoy123 the other day about drawing out people's fears and conjuring them. Tried to play around more with LQ's story here for something more FSS/Isolation-ish, as well as potentially trying to weave in social to our arts at the same time rather than having them sit around separately (because honestly, with how much we're moving towards social it should be woven more into our cultivation imo).

Possibly a bit overcomplicated though, trying to fit too much stuff in with trying to account for our FSS insight as well. I do like the spirit ideas though - particularly the damage reflect one. In use it'd probably function like a kind of shell-game-esque counter technique, where you swap around your position with the spirit with slight of hand and are like "look! you stabbed this innocent person/your friend! How could you?!" and their sins hurt them :V
Trials of Lonely Winter
Cold, Music
Isolation, Empathy, Endings, Truth
Offense, Dispel, Summons, Counter

This is the story of a girl. Lost and alone in the endless streets. The cold winter winds sapping your strength. Every day a struggle to survive. No life. When all is stripped away, what do we see?

Weak. Vulnerable.

Desperate. Guilty.

Friendless. Yearning.

No-one. Nothing.

A story ended and forgotten, in ignominious silence.

Or does it?

Singing of the trials of this lonely winter, the cultivator's song freezes the spirit, stripping down her opponents. Cutting away the support of their allies, leaving them alone. And then, limb by limb, art by art, taking them down to just their heart.

Three spirits are brought forth by her song to assail her foe. The predator, to take advantage of their vulnerability. The sin, to reveal the cost of their desperation and how their crimes hurt themselves. And lastly the friend, to grant them the love and respite they yearn for.

As her song strips away their defences, and reveals their heart, she comes to understand them. To read their hearts' desire, and manifest their dreams and fears. The small endings of their arts and actions opening up new possibilities to restore and build.

Uses: Cold offensive art focused on isolating foes and disabling them, stripping away their arts and defences. Social art about understanding people and who they are. Three summons that can grow in strength and solidity as you get a better understanding of your target and how to manifest their dreams: one who attacks, one who reflects damage done, and a siren who attempts to protect them by freezing them in an eternal embrace, reducing damage but also incapacitating. "Ending" things grants charges of potential that can be used for healing or enhancing constructs.
 
Turn 13: Arc 9-2
Another thunderous crash filled the arena as Gan Guangli's palm strike demolished a small copse of trees in a rapidly expanding cloud of splintered wood and flying leaves. He pulled his hand back and it emerged from the cloud wrapped in clinging vines and creeping moss that wriggled between the joints of his armor.

He took a step forward and there was a wet sucking sound as the ground under his huge boot became a sucking sinkhole, filled with crawling roots. Gan Guangli let out a bellow as he tore his now mud encrusted boot free.

"You never do tire of looking like a clumsy fool do you?" Lu Feng's voice whispered through the wood, generated from the rustling of leaves and the creak of branches.

"You never do tire of looking like an underhanded coward do you?" Gan Guangli announced, still in good cheer as he straightened, his voice sending echoes out through the trees that now rose below him. He was head and shoulders above the normally sized trees now.

They were both playing a different game, so far as Ling Qi could tell. Lu Feng seemed content to let Gan Guangli barge through innumerable traps and altered terrain. Gan Guangli however, was subtly searching as he strode along, narrowing the search area by devastating the terrain Lu Feng could use to hide in.

This had been going on for several minutes now, and only recently had Lu Feng begun to respond to Gan Guangli's calls and taunts. She wanted to think that Gan Guangli had the advantage here, since he seemed to be using less qi that Lu Feng, but something niggled at her, and beside her Cai Renxiang's brow was faintly creased with concern.

"Tomb Masking Vines," Ling Qi blinked at the sound of a gruff voice drew her back to the box. Diao Luwen's eyes had cleared and he was peering down below.

"What do you refer to Father?" Cai Renxiang asked.

"What that boy's cultivation is based on. Nasty pest you need to account for in building west. They grow up around trees and structures, people too if allowed, kill and devour them, leave a hollow shell that looks like the victim behind. Damned mimics. What an irritating child," Diao Luwen spoke in a swift and clipped tone. "I had hoped this business would be short."

"...I see," Cai Renxiang said.

"Well your man is being infected further by each trap he springs. His plans not bad, but he seems oblivious," the older man grunted. "Hmph, attrition fighters."

She saw the moment when Diao Luwen's attention drifted again. Neither the Duchess nor the Prime Minister spoke. Ling Qi refocused her attention on the battle below with renewed concern.

Gan Guangli stood hand outstretched, having just tossed a boulder ahead, the earth split where it had landed, revealing a meters deep trench full of toxic sludge. He stepped over it instead and had to windmill his arms for a moment as his ankle caught on an invisible thread that Ling QI had trouble spotting even as it curled around his ankle and yanked.

"You spend so much time playacting a valiant hero, but it just makes you oblivious and clownish, you great fool," Lu Feng whispered. Ling Qi felt a ripple of qi, and the sludge in the bottom of the ravine bubbled and swelled, exploding into a massive cloud of pinkish red mist that stung her eyes to even look at. "Underhanded, cowardly, that you think these are insults at all show how ignorant you are."

There was a mighty boom, and the toxic mist scattered, a flash of gold and crash, multiple golden hands tearing up forest and trees in a chain of booms and snapping threads. Ling Qi glimpsed red silk and long back hair for just a moment, darting from the wake of the devastation.

"You are confident Lu Feng! I wonder, do you even believe yourself?" Gan Guangli boomed. "I feel no shame for any of my choices this past year. Not braving the great storm to aid new disciples. Not going out to fight for my people while you plundered storehouses like a bandit."

Gan Guangli rose from the cloud towering some seven meters in the air. His armor gleamed still, despite swatches of toxin dripping from it. " Let all the villains in the world dog my heels and sharpen their knives for my back. This Gan Guangli will endure them all! And my people will know they are protected."

The forest erupted, entire trees writhed and twisted, disintegrating into grasping vines, flying thorns erupted in their thousands, plumes of toxin erupting around Gan Guangli's feet. His hands blurred, new ones blooming behind his back to blow them all away.

"I am a winner, and that is the only thing that matters for a leader," his opponent's voice replied flippantly. "Victory quells all complaints, and needs no explanation."

Something black and twisted throbbed within Gan Guangli's meridians, and Ling Qi saw as grey and black vines erupted from inside his armor. She felt his qi flooding out, being drained to fuel the growth of these parasites. They coiled around him, his legs slammed together and he fell to his knees with a bellow, his arms snapped to his sides, entrapped, even the golden glow beneath his cape, the ornamental blade that hung their projecting phantom limbs, disappeared in a cluster of vines.

Gan Guangli struggled mightily as he glared into the ruined forest, even as vines were crawling across his face, puncturing and wriggling under his skin. "I have always despised those words. Cowardly and childish things that they are," he growled.

The growth across his body, fueled by his own qi bloomed and tightened, stilling his movements and burying his face in the dirt.
Ling Qi glimpsed Lu Feng, standing on the bough of one of the tallest trees, one hand on the trunk. "For you to call anyone else childish is truly absurd."

"That. is. What. Villains always say," Gan Guangli's strained voice rang out from within the cocoon of vines. Blooms of golden light appeared beneath them, hands trying to escape and failing. His qi was dimming to her senses, and she saw Renxiang's grip on the armrests tightening, straining the wood.

Behind them, the Duchess let out a throaty chuckle.

Slowly, the tremendous cocoon began to still and shrink, even if by centimeters. The flashes of gold came less frequently, and Lu Feng leapt down from his perch, looking very pleased with himself. "Ridiculous, right to the end Guangli. I suppose you have my respect for that. Imagine how strong you could have been if you had not wasted such time with your weaklings."

"Ridiculous," Gan chuckled weakly. "Charity, compassion, virtue, these things are ridiculous indeed."

There was a pulse of energy, of heat. Lu Feng stopped, in his tracks, his smirk freezing on his face. A tongue of golden fire licked out between the vines. Lu Feng's legs tensed, and he made to dart back, leaping from the crushed wasteland back into the standing trees. He went nowhere, as two golden arms locked around his shoulders.

There was a man there behind him, partially phantasmal, body dissolving into tongues of flame and light below the chest. A huge and muscular, wearing only a vest of pale blue fire, the figures chiseled features displayed a pleased smile as he rose from the ground with Lu Feng in tow, long golden hair billowing in the wind.

The cocoon bent, Gan Guangli forcing himself onto his knees, snapping vines like thin twine as more and more tongues of flame began to burn, golden light shining through the tangle. His qi flared, and vines writhed and charred. They stretched, straining against the limbs within.

Lu Feng thrashed in the grip of shining giant that held him in a lock. His skin sizzled with flesh eating acid, his flicking fingers guided threads that wrapped around half physical limbs to cut and poison and puncture. The spirit, grim and inviolate merely titled their head back, and then snapped it forward with such force that the shockwave blew the leaves and branches from every standing tree in a hundred meters, the crack of the spirits forehead meeting the back of Lu Feng's skull was sickening even up in the stands.

As Lu Feng hung stunned for a moment, Gan Guangli, still wrapped from head to toe in parasitic vines rose to his feet, and with a roar, took a step forward, snapping the bindings around his legs. "Let me be a fool then Lu Feng! I am a shield, not for my Lady, who needs no such thing, but for all below. A leader must be an example and inspiration, who shows that virtue is its own REWARD!"

Fires burned, bright sunfire blazing from between every joint and gap in gleaming white armor as the rest of the vines tore apart, and a dozen fists fists and palms of tremendous size snapped out to shatter the air and strike the dazed Lu Feng still held in the sun spirits arms, blazing with light and heat like the rays of the sun.

The arena went white with the light.

Again the Duchess laughed. "Fine, you may keep that one, Renxiang."
 
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