Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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If those noble ladies have trouble not thinking of Ling Qi as lower status than them, their reactions are going to be hilarious when two Comital clans and a Ducal clan announce they want their scions to marry into the Ling.
 
[X] To let you both discuss some finer points liminal movement with a peer.

LQ is very much an artful thief, extremely careful when moving through the Liminal (when she isn't being a guide to the Heron General), but an outlook on a different perspective might help her when it comes time to not be stealthy.
 
I'm glad were meeting meng dans social circle , it's good lq isn't gonna be pulling all the weight in finding friendos and interesting characters .

Meng Dan also prob has some funny embarrassing moments I'd love to hear about during his "frat" days .

…Also as a count scion he prob should have had an inner circle of hanger ons and vassal clans chilling with him but I can understand yrs not wanting to generate so many characters … lol but I expect wedding gifts and a large invite list in the future when meng Dan inevitably wins . ;)
 
[X] To let you both discuss some finer points liminal movement with a peer.

I'm just happy we're finally having a chance to getting a foothold onto Luo stuff.
 
The most shocking piece of information to me in this update was that Ling Qi has spirit wrangling advice that she can communicate via letter. And not get the recipient killed.

Maybe that's why the Minister of Spiritual Affairs wants to talk to us; we're doing a good job and making his Ministry's life easier! He just wants to give us a pat on the head and some delicious sweets for our good work.

[ ] To let you both discuss some finer points liminal movement with a peer.
[ ] To allow you to pick one another's minds on spirit communion.

Both seem interesting to me. A shame this doesn't really seem like a setting suitable for sinking our teeth into some proper practical Wind Thief esoterica. The other guests might object if we started lifting their belongings.

[X] To allow you to pick one another's minds on spirit communion.

I'm voting for this one because I'm curious to see how a 'lighter' mistress of winds approaches spirit communion. We're all burdened with ties and whatnot. The Luo also have their novel contracting pact methodology, but that's of secondary interest to me. The difference in philosophy should be interesting.

Not that there's no difference in philosophy in the other option. Our liminal movement is all blended up with Dreaming, and before that Darkness; raw wind/Grinning is also in our wheelhouse, but it's not quite the sole foundation of how we dance between the layers of reality. Would be neat to see how she conceptualizes it.
 
Phantom Line: Bloodfall 4 New
Bai Meizhen's lips tasted sweet, with just the faint tickling prickle of killing venom to give them warmth. Ling Qi clung to her tightly, in the unlit shadows of the home they had shared ever since that bitch had destroyed their first one.

Ling Qi smiled in satisfaction as their lips parted, leaning her cheek into her beloved's stroking hand. They would be together. Bai Meizhen's clan, the only thing that could have torn them apart, had acquiesced. And she had been accepted as worthy enough.

"You're still so much colder," Bai Meizhen mused, nails trailing over her skin.

She sounded sad. She tried so hard to hide it, but Ling Qi knew her Meizhen too well for that. Her smile faded. "..I'm sorry. It… the Sect doctors said that using Master Zeqing's blood like that…"

"Had permanent effects," Bai Meizhen said, looking into her eyes. Pained. Yellow eyes gleamed in the dark, looking at her with distress and concern. "I told you it would."

Ling Qi felt as if the warmth in her own chest could melt her away.

"I don't regret it at all. If it means we can stay like this, but I am sorry I'm more uncomfortable to hold," Ling Qi murmured.

She supposed they must look silly like this, to an outside observer. She was so much taller than Meizhen, but the other girl indulged her, letting her sit across her lap like this in the soft comfort of her bed, their legs and gowns tangled together. It helped that she weighed little more than the air these days.

Not that anyone would ever see them here, ensconced in Bai Meizhen's bedroom, beneath the canopy of her bed, behind drawn curtains and the most vicious wardings a ducal scions allowance could buy.

"...That is the problem," Meizhen's voice was small, so quiet even she could barely hear it, more a flicker of qi in her throat than a physical sound.

Ling Qi's expression fell. She didn't understand. How could she regret doing what needed to be done, for them to be together? "...I'm sorry."

She didn't know what she was apologizing for, she reached up to cradle Meizhen's cheek but stopped, fingers a hair's breadth from her cheek. Was… was the cold really that awful? Meizhen had always told her it was fine, but had she just been humoring her…?

Or had it really become that much worse? The thought dropped the bottom from her stomach. If touching her was painful now, then… then…

Bai Meizhen caught her hand, and pressed Ling Qi's fingers to her cheek firmly, with uncompromising strength. "No."

"No…?"

Bai Meizhen pinned her under her stare. Ling Qi felt her heart skip a beat, frost spreading across her cheeks in a blush. "...No one will pull you away. You think a little chill will deter me?"

Her smile returned, tentative. "O-oh. I had just…"

"You know how I worry," Bai Meizhen said gently, soothingly. "...You are perfect Ling Qi. You have done so much, and strived so hard for me, for us. I will always repay that."

"I've never doubted that. I just never want to hurt you," Ling Qi denied.

"And you haven't," Bai Meizhen replied, and any further words were lost as their lips came together again.

How could Ling Qi have any regrets, when moments like these would now go on forever?

***​
Was it better or worse, she wondered, that she could still lie to Ling Qi, when she truly tried, Bai Meizhen wondered.

Her beloved's lips tasted like frozen dew, still so soft despite the cold, despite the way her skin sometimes felt more like smooth porcelain than flesh, especially where the cracks in her cheeks had so recently healed.

In truth, if she were not who she was, a white serpent, a cultivator of the third realm… the cold would have been painful. A frozen chill that would tear a mortal's skin away if they were so foolish as to touch the source. That she was unbothered by this was not the lie.

Looking into her love's dark eyes, and seeing no comprehension as to why there might be any other reason to regret the harm she had taken…

It felt like the edge of a knife, slid exquisitely under her skin. She had done this, her love had done this. The worst thing… was that she couldn't fully regret it, not with these lips parted over hers, not with Qi's hair tickling her cheeks, not with her love's body pressed into her own, no matter how cold.

She had done this. She would accept the responsibility for it. That weight was hers to bear.

…And she still loved Qi so much. For all the pain, there was a part of her as exultant as Qi was. It was…. Everything she had ever wanted, wasn't it? Someone who looked at her, only her, with such loving eyes… Her first friend, her only friend, the hand that had first reached out to her in kindness. If Ling Qi wished to make herself Meizhen's Yao…

She would become the white serpent she deserved. She would crush her rivals, break her cousin's schemes under her heel. She would become so terrible that none would dare plot against her love.

She did not have time. The likelihood of Sun retaliation was too high. She was being recalled to the Lakes, and Qi with her. Her cousins, those scheming brats, would be circling to tear her down, to destroy her. Ling Qi would be her obvious weakness. She was only thankful that her Aunt had informed her she would be under her tutelage for the next few years. She did not have the luxury of slowing down.

No one. Nothing would take Qi away from her.

This she swore to herself, on her pride and her heritage as a daughter of Grandmother Serpent. She would be as merciless as the killing waters, as Grandmother herself.

She let out a warm breath, feeling the frost on Qi's cheeks warm and melt, tickling at her cupping palm as their lips parted.

Ling Qi's eyes were pools of glittering, icy blue. She felt as if she could get lost there, get lost here. If only the world could be in this room alone. But the creeping light of dawn, crawling up the wall in a thin line from beneath her curtain, put the lie to that, piercing the darkness of their little sanctum.

The world would never leave them in peace, and so they would both have to stand strong against it. Together.

"I love you Qi. Thank you so much for loving me."

"I love you Meizhen. Let us be together, until the very end."
 
On Black Vipers reaching White:
Yrsillar said:
I think this would occur mostly in Vipers who have a very close relation with their masters, to the point of dual cultivation
and whom thus rising completely in tune with an ascending white serpent master
Grandmother Serpent and Yao Mk.2 here we go. They're going to terrorize the White Serpents, and it will be glorious.
 
Huh, I didn't notice it before, but yeah, with this Ling Qi seeming to be going all in on Endings and Cold, the Yao comparison is pretty apt.

I wonder when the rest of the Bai will stop being able to deny the parallels.
 
How lewd!

They are in a bit of a feedback loop, cultivating strength for the others sake.

It's an interesting parallel to that other white snake and viper story. Though both are open with their feelings.

I do wonder if the Bai would view this as just a phase for Meizhen. Like her aunt seemed to see this as weaponsmithing. Like there is some expectation that Ling Qi would just be a tool for her to use like an unusually lanky dagger. Not view them as legitimate lovers.

But older cultivators must not be blind to how Meizhen and Ling Qi are making moon eyes at each other in their souls.
 
I dunno, I saw the 'weaponsmithing' comment as more "Hey Meimei, here's your cover story for why you're bringing the girl you're in lesbians with back home. Hint hint." Because you cannot tell me that a Sovereign cultivator would not know exactly what the fuck is going on between them.
 
I think it's pretty normal for the Bai honestly. Yao was raised as a weapon, the vipers are raised similarly, Meizhen's father was similarly a tool...

I don't think that the Bai see that as mutually exclusive really.
 
Cui's dad was a dagger.
Someone being a weapon is in no way a disqualifying feature when it comes to romance among the Bai.
In fact, it is a highly desireable feature in a lover.
 
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