Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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Original Story Sample Chapter- Ash Haven: Descent
Heyo guys. While you wait for the new chapter of Threads coming out tomorrow, I will provide the first chapter of a new story I am working on these days. This one is currently updating at a rate of one chapter a month, with the fourth chapter having just gone up today. It is however patreon exclusive to the Yellow Soul tier and above, and will likely remain that way until its ready to be published as an E-book. If you'd like give it a look and maybe check out the rest! If not don't worry main update is on track to be ready tomorrow, so no worries.

Ash Haven

The wind rushed past my ears as I fell into the darkness. Luxuriating in the feeling of freefall, my heart pounded in my ears. Plunging downward into the unknown was exhilarating. There were only a few things I enjoyed more. But, living was one of them. I looked down, my heavy cloak flapping and snapping in the air above my head and saw the faint gray blur of the floor.

The pale green whorls tattooed on my palms flared with light, and the air howled as wind slammed downward, scattering dust and sand from the worn stone and slowing my fall. The glow on my palms expanded, curling lines traveling up my arms, visible through the dark blue fabric. I took hold of the wind, and kept myself from spiraling off course, controlling my fall. A moment later I landed, my heavy boots making an echoing thump as they struck stone.

I grinned as my legs absorbed the impact, and I fell into a crouch, the glow of my arms and hands fading as I felt warm stone brush my palms.

I felt something shift in my pack. "Would it have killed you to use the rope like a normal person, Kaz?" the buzzing electronic voice that hissed out was muffled.

"Why would I do something like that?" I chuckled, straightening and glancing around at the darkened chamber. With only the light of the entrance above, I could see little, the faint outlines of columns stretching up through the dark, and a few meters of bare stone floor, brushed clear of debris.

"It's wasteful," my assistant grumbled, and I felt more movement as he wriggled out of my pack and onto my shoulder, his burnished metal scales glinting dully in the faint light. "Using up Prana just to play around is dumb!"

"Ah, we're not that hard up, Vee," I said dismissively. Tugging at the collar of my cloak, readjusting it, and patted down each of the pouches at my belt, making sure they were all still in place. I winced at the feeling of tiny teeth nipping at my ear.

"Take this seriously!" Vee hissed. He was in fine form today. I gave the little construct an irritated look. He was about the size of a small cat, and the musculature of one too, but his features were reptilian, the structure of his chest and the broken sockets on his shoulders spoke of wings, but they were long gone. Little yellow lights blinked in his metallic eye recesses, glaring back unapologetically.

I looked away first. He wasn't wrong. Vee had been watching my back since I was knee high, and Gramps had fished the little construct out of the ruins and repaired him for me. Nonetheless, I couldn't let him think he'd won. "Yeah, yeah, now cut the noise before we alert something."

I let my hand rest on the worn leather hilt of the long knife sheathed at my hip, and set off into the dark of the ruin.

The world was full of places like this. Monuments far beyond the abilities of engineers and mages alike. Relics of an age even the crustiest graybeard can only remember as a garbled story of their own grandfather's grandfather. An age of abundance and plenty beyond imagination, now vanished into sand and ash. In my hands, a spark flared, lighting my lantern. Casting a searching cone across dusty stone, I paused as the light played across one of the columns, and studied the carvings.

"Too much weathering for rubbings," Vee muttered. "Figures, since the chamber wasn't sealed."

"Shame," I mused, squinting at the faint outlines still visible. What scenes had they depicted once, I wondered? What secrets had been lost to wind and time.

"Yeah, that kind of thing sells well to the city folks," Vee mused.

I rolled my eyes. Vee had no sense of wonder. I suppose wonder didn't fill your belly-or batteries- though. Still, I stared at the faded carvings a moment longer. Would we ever catch up to the builders, I wondered.

In the end though, I was just a salvager, here to loot their bones. One of many crawling over the vast ruin complex like rats. Keeping one hand on my knife, I panned the light of the lantern over the far wall. There would probably be a doorway right about… there. The lantern light gleamed off of ancient metal, two smooth and featureless slabs of truesteel. Unmarred by rust or grime even after uncounted years, that was the only thing it could be. Luckily one had fallen, leaving the passage open, so I wouldn't need the blasting charges hanging from my pack yet.

As much as I loved these old places, I couldn't let sentiment stay my hand, we needed every bit of scrap we could get. We'd need pulleys and packbeasts to haul those doors out, that much truesteel would sell well. Carefully I approached the door, scenting the air. On my shoulder, Vee arched his spine threateningly, his metallic claws digging into the leather padding of his shoulder perch, his crystal eyes peering around in the dark.

It was musty and stale, but there was no sign of the toxic gasses that sometimes filled the ruins. Warily I eyed the crumbling doorframe, studying the pockmarks and damage around where the hinges had been. I stepped through into the passage beyond, leaving footprints in the sand. The only sound was my breathing and the faint moan of wind and blowing sand against the walls, but there was a faint noise, scrabbling and scratching.

Smoothly, I ripped my knife from the sheath, and channeled. The red lines of the diamond tattoo on my forehead flared with light and the air grew warm as I channeled Fire, lighting the chip of Flame Prana embedded in the hilt of my knife and I stabbed upward. The edge shimmered, going white hot as it cut smoothly through chitin and hissed as it cooked the meat inside. With a flick of my wrist, I tore the beast down and tossed it away. The squealing wormlike thing thrashed and chittered in the light of my lantern, with a hundred spasming spiky legs and a shimmering carapace. Even now the shell rippled with color trying to conceal the creature once more.

"See, Vee? No problem," I said, as I brought the thick heel of my boot down on its snapping head, crushing it to paste with an unpleasant crunch.

My only reply was a tingling buzz in the air and the scent of ozone as light flashed out of the corner of my eye. The air crackled and there was another pained insectoid squeal as another many legged shaped smoked and thrashed in its death throes.

"Yah huh, no problem," Vee replied dryly, sparks of static still dripping from his jaws.

I chuckled. "Obviously, I have you to watch my back buddy."

All joking aside, these bugs, Mirage crawlers, were a pain. They liked to nest in great numbers underground, and they'd mess up an unenhanced scavenger pretty badly. I wasn't really equipped for extermination either. Hopefully I could just avoid their nest. I had a few flasks of liquid flame, but it was expensive, so I'd rather not use it. Gingerly pushing the twitching, arm sized corpse aside with my boot, I continued on.

Letting my lantern play across the floor and walls, I kept an ear open for any more skittering as I followed the passage, winding deeper into the earth, pausing now and then to mark down a map, since I was the first one down this passage. I kept to the main thoroughfare for now, passing by side paths.

Walking down the dark and empty hall, I let my lantern light pan back and forth across the sand strewn floor. Despite myself, my thoughts wandered.

The complex this ruin was part of was a huge, sprawling across a wide valley. It had probably been a city once, but now it was mostly buried by sand and ash blown from the Ashlands, a few tall towers of metal and unbreakable glass jutted out of the dunes like bones from a dug up grave, marking the spot. We had been with the camp city excavating the place for four years now, Gramps and I.

We'd found nothing but scrap, and I had to admit, I was starting to feel a little restless. I loved exploring, but this place was so mundane sometimes. Day after day, nothing but dust and scrap. There were none of the mysteries, none of the secrets or history that I'd hoped for here. I'd grown up on Gramps journals and travelogues. I wanted to know more about the people from before the Scouring. However, here I just picked through their trash.

Still, Gramps had his reasons for sticking around. I knew he wasn't any more content than I was. I trusted him, even if the crusty old bastard wouldn't tell me what his reasons were.

I paused and shook my head as I reached a wide four way intersection. But Vee was right, I was getting complacent. No matter how mundane a delve was, I needed to stay alert. Beasts, ancient security constructs, traps or even just mundane hazards of spelunking could all ruin an unwary delver's day. Stopping, I set down my lantern and pulled out my map, sketching down the last few hundred feet and the intersection . Then I carefully peered down all three passages. Unlike before, there was no clear distinction between the main path and the side ones.

On my left, the ceiling bowed downward though and rubble littered the floor, the passage was choked with drifting sand. I marked that one down for the diggers. The ways right and forward were less easy to choose from. Where the right hall was dark though, ahead, a single silver bar of light still flickered on the floor, buried in sand. It flickered wildly on and off, barely casting any light at all, but even that indicated that there might be some actual functional artifacts down the way.

"What do you think, Vee?" I asked idly.

"Like you have to ask," he sassed. "Working Prana batteries are worth their weight in gold."

I laughed under my breath. It looked like excitement and profit were on the same side for once. Lucky me.

***​

The hall went on for quite a ways, and we began to steadily encounter more light on the floor and ceiling. They flickered and sputtered just like the first one, and we ran across our first real obstacle in the form of a broken panel in the ceiling, where broken cables and wiring hung out, disgorging intermittent sprays of sparking Lightning Prana.

"Definitely an intact battery, maybe even a generator," I said, peering up at the wires.

"If we can shut it off, I bet the guys at camp can get some good scrap metals of the wiring too," Vee mused. This really was turning into a lucky find. Usually channeling materials like those wires and cables were too burnt out or damaged to be much use. Even partially intact ones were good salvage. Lots of rare metals and Prana conducting minerals.

Maybe I could even have gramps upgrade one of my circuit tattoos if the haul was good enough. I shook my head, clearing my thoughts. Haul it might be, but right now it was an obstacle. "In the pack Vee."

"Yeah, yeah," he grumbled, scrambling back into my backpack as I threw the hood of my cloak over my head.

I hunched my shoulders and lowered my head as I crouched, preparing to jump through. My cloak was mildly flame and shock resistant, but it was better to keep contact brief. The showering sparks raining down sputtered and lessened for a moment, and I jumped.

I felt pinpricks of heat and smelled the faint scent of burning hair as stray sparks snapped at my hands, but a moment later I was through and rolling to my feet. It was only then that I heard the high pitched whine coming from further up the hallway. I dived to the left as a lance of light cut through the space where I had been standing, tracing a glowing red line across the floor. There in the corner at the end of the hall, a panel had extended from the ceiling, revealing a dully glowing white crystal as long as my hand. It was already reorienting on my position, a tiny pearl of light blooming on it's pointed tip.

I pointed my palms behind me and green light bloomed from the arrays on my palms, the whirling vortex that emerged launched me forward as a more powerful pulse of light lanced out to incinerate me. My feet left the ground, and for a moment, I flew. I snatched my knife from its sheath, and with my free hand, gestured. The wind currents shifted, launching me up toward the slowly reorienting crystal.

My knife slashed through the white prana crystal right as light was beginning to bloom again. I landed with a thump and a clatter as the severed piece landed on the floor beside me. For a second, there was silence.

"...Active defenses. We really did find something big," Vee muttered, poking his head back out of my pack.

"Yeah," I replied, caught between caution and glee. This was just what I had needed. But I had best be prepared so that I didn't choke on the good fortune. I reached down, and scooped up the severed crystal, it could be ground up for fuel still, even if it was damaged. Here at the end of the hall, I could see a pair of doors, and there was faint light coming from beneath.

I peered at the tightly sealed doors and pursed my lips. I didn't want to use the blasting charges when there could be expensive and delicate valuables on the other side. I might not have a choice. Peering closer, I saw that there was actually a gap there, if a tiny one. "Vee, watch my back while I pry this open."

"Can do," my assistant replied, slithering out to perch on my shoulder, his glowing eyes casting cones of light in the dark.

I sheathed my knife and cracked my knuckles. How hard could it be?

***​
Pretty hard, as it turned out. I winced as I flexed my sore fingers, feeling the strain I had put on my arms, and sweat beaded on my forehead. Before me the ancient doors had been dragged open just enough for me to squeeze through. Beyond, I could see a bright light and sharp, clean lines of metallic furnishings.

"Everything alright there? You sounded like you were dying at the end," Vee said smugly.

"Ah shuddup, I got it open didn't I?" I wasn't exactly unfit, but I just wasn't very big, and I didn't have the installed circuits to overcome that. Gramps was better at that sort of thing.

Course, he wouldn't have been able to dodge the sentry turret, so I figured it evened out.

I peered into the room as I spoke. Although the brightly lit interior was much cleaner than the rest of the ruins, it didn't have the eerily pure look of a completely sealed chamber. Sand still lay across the floor, and dust marked the furnishings. Nonetheless, the inside was a treasure trove. The room was circular, and lining the walls was a half circle of elegant machinery. Buttons and levers and prana emitters marked the inclined surface of the machine bank, and the skeletal remains of chairs, their padding long rotted away, marked where the ancient mages and technicians would have sat.

I wondered what it could have been used for. Was this the control of some powerful circuit? Was it a weather controller, or a mass transit array, or some other ancient and lost wonder known only in stories?

"Don't get too excited, you know that the codices are almost always wiped," Vee warned. "I don't want to listen to you getting sulky again."

"I know that," I replied, restraining a grimace. Whatever had happened in the end, it had mostly destroyed the information the ancients had encoded in their databases, and wiped out controlling circuits. Still, it was from the bare scraps that had been left that people had developed Prana encoding anew. The tattoos on my arms and forehead were woefully primitive compared to the miracles of the ancient world, but even so, they offered me all kinds of utility.

Carefully, removing my pack I shimmied through the gap, only after reaching through to pull the bag in too, setting it on the floor by the door. Examining the room from the inside, I didn't see much else. On the left, there was another narrow doorway, this one firmly shut. I'd examine that later. I noted the seams in the bank of machinery that would allow access to the internals for looting.

However, I had to at least try to see if there was anything to access. Crossing the room with Vee on my shoulder, I began a slow circuit, examining the arcane interface. I knew a little of the builder's tongue, more than most, but it was still mostly gibberish to me. Still, eventually I found a button labeled with glyphs that I was pretty sure indicated a request to display information.

Carefully, I pressed the smoothly textured button in, and watched as the pale blue prana crystal above it shimmered, projected, a square of light onto the blank wall behind. Glyphs appeared, spelling out text. At the bottom though, were the three familiar symbols that I had been expecting and dreading.

No one was sure why that particular set of numbers indicated what it did, but their meaning was clear. The information storage was empty, and there was nothing for the machine to access.

"It makes me mad that you're so disappointed when we're looking at enough salvage to fund the camp for a month, if there's half as many batteries as I'd think in this" Vee said dully. "Other people would weep for this kind of luck, you know?"

I rolled my eyes at Vee, obviously I was happy, but I had hoped for… something. Maybe some surviving documentation on the facility, or even some personal files. "Let me have a look around, there'll be maintenance access somewhere."

I caught something out of the corner of my eye then, something shimmering lying in the moldering pile of dust and bones that occupied the centermost chair. Turning, I took a closer look. It was a small rectangle of prana crystal, pure white and glittering, Text ran across it, and in one corner was a portrait of a man. Middle aged, with receding hair and dusky skin a little darker than my own. With a chin marked by poorly shaven stubble and bags under his eyes, the man managed to look a little slovenly, even in the strange garb of an ancient magus, visible from the shoulders up.

Carefully, I reached down and picked it up, examining the way the text changed as I turned it too and fro. I couldn't read most of it, but… ah, that was a mark of rank wasn't it? The ancients had had a complex and impenetrable hierarchy, but that was definitely a mark of rank. 'Facility Director' followed by a word I couldn't recognize. Something relating to health or medicine?

I stared down at the image of a man hundreds of years dead, and wondered what he had been doing here, at the end.

"Kaz, watch out behind you!"

Vee's voice jerked me out of my thoughts. I spun around in time to see the closed door I had ignored sliding silently open and a gleaming figure stepping out. Vaguely humanoid, with a wide, boxy torso and no head, the construct stepped out of the tiny space beyond on legs that whirred and clicked with the components within. A single red light shone from its chest like an eye, falling on me like a searchlight. A low, buzzing mechanical voice emerged from somewhere in the torso, speaking a string of incomprehensible words.

I understood 'trespasser', though. By the time I had fully turned around, it had leveled it's left arm at me, and I stared down the black barrel of a projectile launcher. But even as I dove to the side, Vee jumping in the opposite direction, the construct's aim followed me unerringly. The sound of compact air erupted, and I found myself on the ground, entangled in a silvery net, attached to long metallic rope.

"Shit," I cursed under my breath as I tried to escape, but the material of the net tightened around me, and even the heated edge of my knife did nothing to cut the silver material. The rope attached to the net jerked, and I was yanked across the floor toward the construct, where it was raising it's right arm at the end of which was a two pronged device that crackled with electricity.

"Let them go!" Vee growled, perched atop the remains of the chair he had landed on. His open mouth buzzed with electricity, and the bolt that shot out left a bar of light across my vision as it struck the construct in the chest.

The thing let out a buzzing noise like an alarm, jerking in place as the glass of it's 'eye' shattered, and it stopped reeling me in for just a moment. That was all I needed, finally maneuvering my hands in front of me, I channeled. My head burned as I forced prana beyond the simple circuits capacity through my system, and lines on my arms lit up like veins of magma. I smelled cooking meat as a single point of boiling heat formed in the cup of my palms.

It shot out in a solid bar of bright orange, melting through the net, and carving off through the rope, even tracing a glowing line of heat across the wall behind it. The construct's buzzing words turned into a wailing siren of alarm and damage alerts as I scrambled out of the net.

There was only one problem. The construct was still standing, and I couldn't do that again. It was hard to focus through the spike of pain as the feedback from overloading my heat projection circuit hit me with force. "Any bright ideas Vee?" I asked as I scrambled backward, putting distance between myself and the construct that was now stomping toward us.

"The blasting charges! I can keep distracting it, but you're gonna have to arm and place it!" Vee cried, hopping to the top of another chair. He spat another bolt of electricity, and the construct let out another aggrieved alarm and turned toward him.

I grimaced, scanning the creature, my pack was back by the door, and the construct was between us, the room was too small to easily go around it. I could knock it over with a blast of wind, but I'd risk doing some permanent damage, channeling again in this state.

So there was only one thing to do. As Vee spat another crackling bolt, I ran right toward it. The construct wheeled on me, swinging it's net arm like a club, and I ducked and rolled forward, feeling the breeze of the limbs passage ruffle my hair. Shooting to my feet, I crossed the rest of the distance to my pack, and snatched the satchel containing one of the blasting charges off the side.

The machine flailed and warbled as another bolt from Vee struck it giving me time to strip the leather satchel off. A blasting charge was a very simple circuit, this one inscribed on a pentagonal ceramic badge. It simply contained and released energy in a limited area, and adhered to a surface on command.

I swiftly stepped aside to dodge the jabbing thrust of the construct's pronged arm, and stepped into its reach to slap the adhering surface against its chassis. I grunted as the other arm struck me in the chest hard enough to make my ribs groan, but with the blasting charge already set, I just rolled with the blow.

For a second time, I ducked my head and rolled away from the machine, just as the blast detonated.

Thankfully, gramps did good work, so the majority of the force was contained, but I still had to bite back a scream as the trailing edge of the blast wave carrying slivers of shrapnel impacted. My cloak and padded shirt caught the worst, but I still felt slivers of metal and ceramic embedding themselves in my back.

In the silence that followed, I picked myself up wincing, and looked back to see two twitching legs lying in opposite directions, a scorch mark, and a whole lot of scrap. Beyond, in the closet it had emerged from, the healthy glow of a Prana battery lit the construct's recharging station "...Let's just grab the battery as proof," I said weakly. "Let the salvage crew know it's safe to haul out the rest."

"Probably not a bad idea," Vee said, sounding a little shaken.

Limping back toward my pack, my eye caught the sparkle of white crystal again. There was that card, somehow undamaged by everything. I scooped it up, maybe Gramps would be able to find some use for it.
 
Interesting. At no pink did you say it was a post apocalyptic Earth but that is still my assumption. Which I'm sure is intentional, regardless of if it's actually true.

If it is true I think true steel is stainless steel, and those flickering lights are advanced crystal fluorescent lights.

I do wonder why those batteries are glowing. Glowing is normally bad strictly from and energy cost. That light is spending energy that could be kept inside the battery making it last even longer which is always an important design goal for batteries. L
 
Judging by the lasers and 'circuits' engraved onto people that seem to give them some form of magic I wouldn't wager that even if this setting is Earth that the per-apocalypse was our modern Earth.
 
So, the last time I did a serious crit I think I killed what was a pretty neat kung fu quest by a QM that isn't a giver-upper type QM. Having read a little bit @yrsillar I now ask, in utmost seriousness:

Do you want the crit or not? Don't feel obliged to say yes: it's an open offer, you can cash it in at any time of your choosing, even never.
 
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Sounds like a Horizon Zero Dawn style post apocalypse. Luckily this is yrsillar, so the mc and world is most likely gonna be more interesting than wet cardboard.
 
Hey man HZD is pretty interesting as a concept and the history of the nations are pretty fascinating, but yeah their apocalypse is pretty...boring.

Also I liked the teaser yrsillar.
 
I didn't read the Author's Notes and thought there was a post-apoc sci-fi civ somewhere on the planet.

For a moment, I was excited at the prospect of Magic Kung-Fu vs Cybernetic Brawlers. :p
 
So, the last time I did a serious crit I think I killed what was a pretty neat kung fu quest by a QM that isn't a giver-upper type QM. Having read a little bit @yrsillar I now ask, in utmost seriousness:

Do you want the crit or not? Don't feel obliged to say yes: it's an open offer, you can cash it in at any time of your choosing, even never.
Not gonna lie, this makes me wince a bit if you think its bad enough you're worried crit will kill my motivation. I guess I'll hold off lol.

Edit: You probably didn't mean it that way, tired tho, let me think about it.
 
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I'm pretty sure I've read the first few chapters of at least ... two different stories with that exact same setup.

I don't remember if said stories were abandoned or if I just decided I didn't like them (or their whole subgenre), but I'm not excited by this hook.

Edit: btw people, I might be offline for a while - if this thread advances all the way to the fief stuff, someone remember the links in my sig.
 
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Cultivators vs Technology? I'd be interested in reading something about the Dao of Technology.

I could see a Way in this quest someone could do. Similar to a Sword Dao or a branch of Metal, Geomancy, and Forging.
That does give me a funny idea. Sci-fi ship arrives in the solar system Threads happens in, are confused by the geocentricism, and tries to travel out only to find that their FTL drive has suddenly stopped working because no one has ascended to break the light speed barrier yet. :p
 
That does give me a funny idea. Sci-fi ship arrives in the solar system Threads happens in, are confused by the geocentricism, and tries to travel out only to find that their FTL drive has suddenly stopped working because no one has ascended to break the light speed barrier yet. :p

It is a funny idea, but I think in the Threadsverse it would make more sense if someone would have to ascend to make speed of light a Law. Probably some frustrated theoretical physicist natural philosopher, wanting to make a system where causality, time and space make sense.

Basically imagine Einstein as a White cultivator, who ascended to become the venerable Energy Equals Mass Times Lightspeed Squared.
 
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I enjoyed HZD and HFW. (still need to play burning shores)
I don't think I'd sell the series as "apocalypse" since there's too much tied up in that as a genre (closer to The Last Of Us) that doesn't apply to Horizon.
 
Turn 19: Arc 8-6
She had shied away from the fires instinctively, reactively. The truth here and now though, was that the shadows and the mist were her enemy here. The sky searing flames of perdition were not. Not right now, for all that she knew on a fundamental level, that they would be.

Cai Renxiang was right, the general was not a sword. She was something far more terrible. But even if she was not a sword, she was still a thing. Still a weapon in another's hand. Her Way was hollow, hollow as the crucible she claimed to be, but it was not brittle for it. There was no goal, no vision, only the endless present full of resistance to crush. The unity she claimed did not come from within herself, was not thought or conceived there.

Because the vision, the ambition, the drive was elsewhere, embodied in another. Xia Ren was incomplete, but that was because she had subsumed herself totally to another's ideal.

Right now, that ideal aligned with her own vision, with the dream Cai Renxiang, Gan Guangli, and herself were pursuing. A day would come when that was no longer so.

But today was not that day.

Ling Qi soared upward, trailing smoke. The hems of her gown burned, sparks alighting in the fabric, making cloth writhe. She smelled her own burning hair, her own charring skin, and flew among the countless sparks that filled the sky regardless.

"Oh here we go. Guess you had to pick one open maw to jump into," Sixiang fretted.

She was sorry. She could smell burning dream qi too, like a theater going up in conflagration. She could see the crystalline grains of dried out crumbling liminal that were her friend flying away in the smoke billowing from her dress.

The gauntlets dangling from the loops on her sash flared to life. Plucked from the loops they rose to cross before her, The ghostly limbs of a muse flickering and filling them and the articulated digits clenched, charring ceramic creaking as hexagonal plates began to fly from the slots in their sides, two and four and eight and more doubling with each moment, interlocking around her in a solid dome of mountainous qi.

It was a testament to Xuan Shi's skill that they lasted even the handful of seconds they did under the fierce storm raging around her.

And it was fierce.

Ling Qi flew head over heels, tossed by the apocalyptic force of the wind that roared in the wake of the Heron Generals darting blade and the skull rattling vibrations of the enemies defiant roaring song.

Utility. Utility. Utility. All else is distraction, the indulgence of the victorious. All which failed to grant material advantage were chains.

Difference wrought war, wrought domination and submission. Clinging graveyard ghoul gnawing ancient bones, chaining generation after generation to the dead. Submit, break, burn away. Be subsumed into the victorious march, more boots upon the field of dawn.

Purity! Purity of action, hewing to wisdom, ten thousand years of small iteration, of wisdom compounded upon wisdom. Difference breaks men from beasts; marks the chosen, defines the People and the lessers. Lo! Break thy blade upon the fortress, the walls raised by ten thousand years of holding true through conquest, storm, and nightmare.

Empty blade, soulless blade, roar of devastation, disappear into the mist, into the shadow, as all beasts do!


If she had anything at all left in her stomach, she would have wretched again as she drifted like one of the million smoking burning leaves caught up in the General's wake. It was sickening and fascinating the images and colors and sounds that crashed upon her.

In a lake of boiling steam a temple complex fought with a giant of fire and steel, wielding a blade which carved canyons of glittering ossified ash in the fabric of the dreaming realm. A blade which clashed with kaleidoscopic waves of color and lakes worth of water, in depth without end.

She couldn;t even perceive their movements, for all that the roared arguments embodied by their clashes flashes to her ears with clarity, she could not see the darting mountain carving blade in its motion. But she could feel it in its wake. It was sickening. Sickening because she could feel its resonation.

Barriers. Borders. These were things of division. They impeded communication. People divided themselves in order to quarrel and fight to define who was kin and who was not. That was the ugly root at the core of Community. Exclusion, enemies, these were how its boundaries were defined.

She saw the rusty blades sprouting under the Emerald Mourners rot slick hooves. Saw the passage under the mountains lined with dying slaves.

This was the Unity of Blades, iron law written into the fabric of the Emerald Seas.

She tucked her arms to her sides and darted with all her might into the cloud of burning air around the general as a barrier woven of hatred and stubborn pride shattered, unleashing an ocean of boiling marshwater into the sky to be instantly boiled into rancid boiling steam.

The Generals flames threatened to sear her without ever once intending her harm. Because the General believed in bringing people together too.
No matter what they wanted. She would sunder, burn and trample every barrier that divided them, no matter how dear those things were, no matter how they screamed as their chains were broken.

What would she do, if the White Sky recoiled from this day in horror and retreated to their borders. What would she do, if things between the Empire and the Polar Nation came to blows?

She would fight.

She would talk, talk until her lips bled and her lungs burned, try to solve things between them without steel and fire.

But if it all failed, she would fight.

Because the Empire was hers, it was where her family lived, where her friends resided. It was the foundation of her Community, and she would fight and she would kill to protect it.

As she had at the Caldera, as soldiers did all across the Wall, fueled by countless centuries of conflict with the nomads in the sky.

That was the searing truth the Generals fires would not let her ignore.

This was Power.

In the end, peace was only possible because Empire and Polar Nation alike were wary of one another's Power.

If one grew weak, or was perceived as weak, that would change.

Her method was fundamentally an ephemeral act of trickery and…

Ling Qi curled herself in, as small as she could manage, painfully hot ceramic hands embraced her as the shell of cracking burning hexagons closed in a marble of cold in a sea of fire as steam buffeted and and tossed them about. She was starting to stop feeling pain, her skin simply losing sensation.

"Hang on Qi," Sixiang begged.

She circulated her qi, desperately, int the crumbling cracked shell Sixiang had raised, she circulated her qi. Flakes of ash that had once been skin and flesh flaked away and disintegrated, revealing new flesh. Her body was as much construct as matter here.

The searing pain renewed. That was fine.

She would not be as the General, she would not lose the ability to feel.

Because she was wrong. Power was not so simple as that. The world was not simply a game of domination. Power was required for action, it was not required for respect.

She was a gnat to the Still Waters Deeping, she was still one of the primary artists of this moment. She clung onto that like a child holding onto the last piece of driftwood in a flood.

Maybe nations were truly divorced from men, communities could not act or think as individuals did. Maybe she was wrong. But she did not think she was. If people spoke, if they were bound by the right chains, respect would remain, even if power wavered back and forth, as it must, as it always must.

No one and nothing lasted forever, and no Power was excluded from that.

Below countless tons of stone groaned and rumbled, something deep in the temple's foundations cracked as another glittering world of illusion was sundered by a blade of realities.

Ling Qi felt like her teeth could crack, grinding them as she was, and yet she refused to stop burning, to let the searing flame bake away the sensation.

She had made this, and so she had no right to refuse to witness it.

Because Still Waters Deeping was wrong, but she could see the roots from which this awful growth had flowered… and it was in her too.

Community, family. Holding kin above all else, before all else. She still though Cai Renxiang had been wrong, to call family the root of corruption. There was a mote of truth in it though.

That night, the banquet in the garden, her mother and sisters and brother and Sixiang, all of those faces lit with cheer, tension disappearing in laughter and good feeling…

How much would she wreck to maintain that? What would she do, if that clashed with her duties?

But like the General, there was something hollow too Still Waters Deeping. Like her he had subsumed himself to something else. She did not think he remembered such small things, not really.

Not when he would see the people of his clan slain as traitors merely to derail change.

Was that the truth of Sovereignty then? The Polar Nations thought so certainly, and so guided those who wished for it to give up their desires and become conduits for the land and community.

The earth split, more canyons stretching to the horizon, weeping ichorous blood. A legion of crawling things, hideous things, buzzed and skittered and flew climbing the Generals armored body even as they wailed and died and burned, nightmares ripped from the bowels of the dream and sacrificed in their millions to slow a far greater monster by a hair. Space warped, mist
surged, waters rose to drown the world, and burned all the same.

It was too much, her eyes were aching, inside and out, physically and spiritually. Her head pounded with the pain.

She could feel through Sixiang, through her own senses flickering echoes of the real world, so far away from them now. Of a withering, pounding heat and a quaking earth. Of people rushing about in a panic, distant cries, steam boiling from the Meng compound flooded now, waters poured down the side of the cloven mountain.

…It was so, so easy to forget what lay at your feet.

Just as easy as ceasing to feel pain. The easy way is not the only one.

The whisper crawled across her thoughts like a cold ripple of water, a cold, dead but good humored whisper.

Look then, you are not the only small one making their will known in a battle of little gods.

One of the winding towers of the temple crumbled inward and fell with a scream of sundered stone, untouched by the General's blade.

A flash of red, a grinning ape, bounding through the thrushes, many layers from here, and still sweating from the heat. A formation labyrinth set in the higher liminal shrouded and hidden at its center, a woman in meng colors meditating within a formation veins bulging under her skin with the colors of still waters qi. Struck down and defeated.

An inspector marched at the head of a delegation of ghosts, and a stumbling roaring mass of plant matter, a cancerously growing swamp beast of reed and mud, his ghosts fanned out, coordinated through a dozen mirror portals, and paper talismans and binding stakes pierced the beast, until an ebon cane could pierce its head, and a gnarled hand could haul another old man from its innards.

A young man terrified for his kin, marched into the flooded ruin that should have been home, a silent shadow with a wide brimmed hat at his side. Behind flashing lenses thoughts stirred unending rallying dizzied sickened kinsmen to his side, hunting those who had needed no parasites, who guarded the keystones of temple towers.


The next blow of that awful sword sheared three temple towers from their bases.

The world is never still. Power is change. In every soul sleeps that spark. There is power in stoking that, enflaming that. Power that may move mountains and gods alike.


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Advanced Insight Acquired
 
Cai Renxiang was right, the general was not a sword. She was something far more terrible. But even if she was not a sword, she was still a thing. Still a weapon in another's hand. Her Way was hollow, hollow as the crucible she claimed to be, but it was not brittle for it. There was no goal, no vision, only the endless present full of resistance to crush. The unity she claimed did not come from within herself, was not thought or conceived there.

Because the vision, the ambition, the drive was elsewhere, embodied in another. Xia Ren was incomplete, but that was because she had subsumed herself totally to another's ideal.
Ah fuck, she pulled a Jiao.
 
If theres any fragments of Xuan Shi's gauntlets left, he's going to have some wild damages to see on them.

Also hell yeah, Advanced Insight Acquired.
 
We have a third Advanced Insight now, so we're well situated to burn right through Fortification Stage in record time once we complete our successor Art for Formation Stage. No roadblocks at all beyond the xp in all likelihood.
 
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