This is a blatant lie! Blue eyes white dragon is the superior dragon!
I want a refund! (Tinker of Fiction Semi-SI)
This is a blatant lie! Blue eyes white dragon is the superior dragon!
Technically, both the canon and fanon Ziz are accurate right now? I think? Ziz is getting emotion emulation from Addy, and while it'll probably be a while for that connection to meaningfully influence her the errors will probably start piling up at some point.
Norr
Misophist
- Location
- Any chair
I always have a bad feeling in my gut whenever Ziz comes up in this fic, as well as Addy's cavalier attitude towards her. Cracky fics usually have her be redeemable some way while others have her being a complete monster. This chapter cemented Ziz as the latter, and I dread the moment this comes back to bite Addy in the ass. The one hope I have for this not to be a future Cerebus Syndrome moment is that Addy is infecting 'Simmy' with emotions.
Addy's phone rang. Noting the caller ID as 'The Countess', Addy picked up.
"'Sup Pot, Kettle here." A pause. "Twenty total. Uh Huh. Yeah, bye."
She looked up at the bemused people around her "What?"
Sky Cancer, obviously.
Meanwhile, in Bakudas tertiary workshop.
"Just a few more days now, and my continent-range EMP bomb will be ready. Everyone will remember Bakuda as the greatest tinker. Everyone! Muahahaha!"
"Oh my god they killed Connie!"
"You bastards!"
PHO interludes sustain me so bad and Addy's shenanigans makes it so chaotic lol. If she had gotten to detail of the EBs and their purpose it would be hilarious... even if everyone freaks out and crap.
Now I wonder how would Ziz look like or if she acts like a millenial given she was deployed in the 21thcentury, though I really wish the ice cream company the ice cream party they would have won't get screwed up by ZIz based on her expectation, it would genuinely suck especially would be an ass thing to do given it would be good ice cream, probably. Also man I wonder what would be Manton and Jacob's reaction on this, makes me wonder tbh I just wish their catatonic and the S9 being suspicious of what crap they are and all that, though Cherish would realize her folly on trying to Master her way into S9's leadership with this.
Anyways, found TYPOs @Unders I think? Dunno, exhausted and all that, though mix some suggestions too also.
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Now I wonder how would Ziz look like or if she acts like a millenial given she was deployed in the 21thcentury, though I really wish the ice cream company the ice cream party they would have won't get screwed up by ZIz based on her expectation, it would genuinely suck especially would be an ass thing to do given it would be good ice cream, probably. Also man I wonder what would be Manton and Jacob's reaction on this, makes me wonder tbh I just wish their catatonic and the S9 being suspicious of what crap they are and all that, though Cherish would realize her folly on trying to Master her way into S9's leadership with this.
Anyways, found TYPOs @Unders I think? Dunno, exhausted and all that, though mix some suggestions too also.
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You used these sentence repeatedly? Just... pointing it out >w>)
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'make it cooler'.
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And yeah
The funniest thing is that the Simurgh was one of the main contributors to Scion's death.
Now imagine that this emotional contamination will turn her into Magpie 2.0: completely chaotic brat with the attention span of a flea.
Then she'd decide keeping the Cycle and humanity running is not as swell as doing random destructive shit just for pure amusement.
Hell on Earth scenario.
Then Scion'd either 'Know what? I'm gonna get outta here' or just purge the whole multiverse with extreme prejudice before contacting Abaddon and nervously telling him how 'he had seen shit'.
Edit: Speaking of ice-cream visit. Why not just let her live with Magpie in BB? It's not like there is any actual reason for her to aimlessly float in the sky when she can personally participate in future Brockton Chaos and keep Addy safe from Cauldron pedophiles. IIRC there is no protocol restrictions placed on her about where she needs to hang out between raids, the most obvious reason would be her appearance, and Addy can fix it. So why not?
Now imagine that this emotional contamination will turn her into Magpie 2.0: completely chaotic brat with the attention span of a flea.
Then she'd decide keeping the Cycle and humanity running is not as swell as doing random destructive shit just for pure amusement.
Hell on Earth scenario.
Then Scion'd either 'Know what? I'm gonna get outta here' or just purge the whole multiverse with extreme prejudice before contacting Abaddon and nervously telling him how 'he had seen shit'.
Edit: Speaking of ice-cream visit. Why not just let her live with Magpie in BB? It's not like there is any actual reason for her to aimlessly float in the sky when she can personally participate in future Brockton Chaos and keep Addy safe from Cauldron pedophiles. IIRC there is no protocol restrictions placed on her about where she needs to hang out between raids, the most obvious reason would be her appearance, and Addy can fix it. So why not?
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- Pronouns
- She/Her
I feel like this is going to further prove Cauldron's theory that Addy mimics EB powers, afterall what is more Simurgh than turning the Simurgh herself into an Addy Bomb
(Alternatively, "Simurgh used Simurgh Bomb, Addy used reflect, Simurgh is now confused)
I will need two bolters and a phophex launcher for this fresh heretical shit.
I am torn between hilarity and horror. I guess that's the right place to be.
...that simmy bit wasn't funny at all.
This also doubles as a reminder that while Magpie lives in a cartoon, everyone else is living in a deathworld, lol.
Great chapter, thank you!
...that simmy bit wasn't funny at all.
This also doubles as a reminder that while Magpie lives in a cartoon, everyone else is living in a deathworld, lol.
Great chapter, thank you!
Rather than Deathworld, perhaps the better term would be "Hellworld", since Magpie can now officially ressurect people so that they can continue to suffer for eternity.
I hear this in my head being said slowly and with a bored eye roll.
You repeated yourself. I think?
I don't think it matters though because Taylor repeating herself just shows how flustered she really is. So it'd be fine to leave it.
Aminadab_Brulle
Decimus Computator
Magic Coat, you bloody casual.
dracklor
Beyond the Frontier
- Location
- Texas
Nah Addy has Final Fantasy tech, she hasn't gotten Pokémon tech yet.
Tisaku
Head Chief Thinkomancer
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I think that Simmy has missed something important with her plan to meet Addy for ice cream. If her plan works the ice cream company will be destroyed, but she will no longer be able to get more of their ice cream. I am almost hoping her plan works, just so she can feel the pain of never being able to have that ice cream again.
- Location
- Paradise, Hawaii
I await Leet getting more reviews.
Magpie admitted they tapped into Leet's Power..
Magpie did her AMA and blurted out so many 'secrets', Like when she Tinker's in her underwear, she wears Armsmaster Brand.
I am surprised she did not insult him by calling him 'Arsemuncher' as such.
How many will try to kill Alexandria with the reveal by Magpie's AMA?
Magpie admitted they tapped into Leet's Power..
Magpie did her AMA and blurted out so many 'secrets', Like when she Tinker's in her underwear, she wears Armsmaster Brand.
I am surprised she did not insult him by calling him 'Arsemuncher' as such.
How many will try to kill Alexandria with the reveal by Magpie's AMA?
jwolfe_beta
Semi Genre-Savvy Overlord
- Location
- Canada
It's pulling the malcious compliance gig since you're slipping the leash (don't want to bother calcing this thing so Thinker Headache!).
Looks like Magpie is going to be getting a few more counts of self defense.
Wonder if they'll leave any sensors with the bottle or Addy will just yeet it back without them ever knowing.
Oh you poor ignorant fools. Her shard would be giving her the good stuff if you did that. Becuase Addy would be upset if she was taken away from her family by a much of morons. And when Addy is upset, Reality Lens is upset.
And for some reason you don't think this is going to come back to bite you.
If Addy creates world peace it'll be by accident or as a side effect of something else.
Carrnage
Human
- Location
- New Zealand
Norr
Misophist
- Location
- Any chair
This is what I was trying to get at in my previous post. Addy lives in a world where Ziz is a lovable troll. Everyone else lives in a world where Ziz is the worst nightmare.
This will either end with Addy crushed by sudden but inevitable betrayal or Addy accidentally and unknowingly enforcing her reality onto the space pigeon.
I am so very much hoping for the latter.
Also, Addy has that crafting-focused Dragonmark. You know, the one that will eventually give her access to infinite resources from thin air?
Lord_Anthrax
Daemon Prince of Nurgle
I've got a Heresy era Auto cannon and 77 Blight Grenade
Peace of the grave?
- Location
- Paradise, Hawaii
Is it too bad I can picture Addy taking a Selfie pic with Simmy and them giving each other 'bunny ears with fake thought bubbles on t-shirts?
Such as "I'm Psychic!" and Simmy with "U give me a headache"
How long until t-shirts come out with bottled Levi prints?
Caremelladansen shirts?
Such as "I'm Psychic!" and Simmy with "U give me a headache"
How long until t-shirts come out with bottled Levi prints?
Caremelladansen shirts?
They really don't learn. Causing problems for Magpie leads to Magpie letting loose problems on you. She dropped an Endbringer on Piggot's desk to avoid being punished with console duty or something equally banal. What do you think Magpie will do in retaliation to this? She already self-defended herself lethally against her last kidnappers.