Crystalwatcher's Magical Girl Quest!

*smashes headfirst through the wall, face-skidding across the floor, before coming up to rest against the opposite wall with a flop*

... I'm alive...


I just found a girl with a third ability that would work for killing Time Turner:
That makes... five?

Remember when I said I was working on a team based on the Seven Deadly Sins? Here they are!
I remember these!

I'll list them in a minute.

Now for something completely different.

(Unified Light/Counter Force) Magical Girl Machine Code

Caroline McLain
Stats

Health: 350
Base Damage: N/A
Base Resilience: 50
Magic Modifier: 40

Affinity: Computing | Logic | Story Maker
Weapon


Modern Arsenal
Magical Girl Machine Code does not fight alone. She fights with an arsenal of drones and 'bots at her front.
Level 5
Base Damage: Varies
Magic Modifier: N/A
Attacks Per Turn: Varies
Affinities: Computing
Ability: Swarm Networking | Auto-Assault
Spells

Command Override
Machine Code may override any machine's actions to do exactly what she wants it to do. Even contrary to to certain laws of physics. Some Top Gun instructors who heard about this lamented that she'd be a fantastic fighter pilot if she weren't so coldly logical.
Level 5
Base Damage: N/A
Magic Modifier: N/A
Affinity: Computing
Ability: Total Control (Machines) | Target by Level
Abilities

Machine Logic:
Transistors inside a microchip have two states: off and on.
-All technology is doubled in power if operated by Machine Code. Provides a 25% boost to all technological Affinities nearby. Can no longer feel emotion, granting immunity to emotion-affecting abilities.

Tactical Predictive Modeling:
-Can predict with 100% certainty an enemies actions if their full abilities are known. For every piece of incorrect or missing information, accuracy is reduced by 5%. When Machine Code's Prediction is accurate, she can order her Arsenal to sacrifice three of their collective actions to nullify an enemy action or may override the initiative order and act first. If nothing is known about the enemy, the prediction is guaranteed to fail.

Strategic Predictive Modeling:
Forewarned is forearmed.
-Machine Code can also predict the movements and actions of Brigades up to 95% of the time. This is contingent on having accurate data on all belligerents in a battle. When a correct prediction is made, boost all friendly units stats affected by the prediction by 25%.


And here is a fine example of Machine Code's Modern Arsenal. Crystal has dibs on the rest of the drones by the way should she ever appear.
(Machine Code) Super Heavy Infantry Vehicle

SHIV-chan~

Stats

Health: 1,250
Base Damage: 350
Base Resilience: 200
Magic Modifier: N/A

Affinity: Computing
Weapon


Minigun
Level 3
Attacks Per Turn: 2
Affinities: N/A
Ability: Full-Auto
Abilities

Multiply Redundant Systems:
Many engineers who saw first saw Machine Code's work thought she overdid things. When the 'bots then came back operational despite horrific damage, they ate their words and cake in celebration.
-Super Heavy Infantry Vehicles work at full capacity at all times until destroyed. Ignore all damage modifiers.

Elemental Backup
-Runic Arrays automatically activate defenses against Elemental Attacks to render them useless.

Blessed Weaponry
-Bonus Damage against Demonic Enemies.


Character notes:
After a year of working with Machine Code, the Unified Light is well aware of the fact that she is coldly logical. They have made deals and contracted her accordingly. Frankly, she's a lot closer to a merc than your average MG. If you've seen Darker than Black, think about the Contractors and the Syndicate, but with drastically less shady intentions. They actually even tried to get her to see a therapist by making it a stipulation in her contract before realizing after two meetings with her therapist that nothing would change besides irritating Machine Code.

Her drones and bots are specially constructed by Machine Code, with the Pillar providing all the materials necessary to build them. After seeing the performance of the first test batch of 5 (costing 500,000$) in live combat, the Pillar was interested in procuring more, but ran into the fact that Machine Code's programming was pretty much incomprehensible. As one programmer inspecting the code later said, "It's Magic, we can't explain shit." So direct copies of her work are impossible. On the plus side, some of her pieces of work have since been shipped out to serve as inspiration for improvements in the Pillar's autonomous drones, and is being pursued with a modest budget, most of which is for paying programmers to create new software for a planned mass-produced version of Machine Codes 'bots. They expect it to take three to four years to create something with 75% of the effectiveness of the average Pillar rifleman in certain roles. Particularly where discretion is not needed nor advised.

On Predictive Modeling, this ability is what turns an otherwise mediocre Magical Girl into a strategic asset. Her ability to predict how a battle will turn out 95% of the time has helped inform Commanding Officers what the correct decision in a battle is. Unfortunately, that success rate only exists in a perfect situation where Machine Code starts with all the information on both sides. The reality is that currently, with Earth under siege and the situation turning fluid, her predictions have turned sour due to a lack on reliable information on what exactly the Dark is up to.

Team Binary, Machine Code's team, is nominally there to protect her from any and all threats. And for the first month, they did! They deployed with her to several battles before losing two members and all the drones along for the ride, annihilating several brigades from the 18th Legion. At which point, Team Binary's CO realized that Machine Code could've done the same thing, back at base. Now the three remaining members still 'protect' her. Although generally they're really protecting the ignorants who try to interact with the hikkikomori otaku that is Machine Code when they're not babysittingassisting her with whatever she needs.
And there's the GLaDoS

:rofl: I'm amused.

In all seriousness though, the Doylist reason I had her programming work be incomprehensible was that if the Counter Force had a viable way to supplement or replace the average soldier with semi-autonomous drones for an affordable price, they'd be all over it, and since she's been around for about a year now, they'd be in full mass production already if they had programming that could be reverse engineered. Instead, they're just in limited production minus any microprocessors for Machine Code to finish and then use at her discretion.
Is it sad that I can still see these two being friends? As in best friends?

She has many ways of achieving this. After all, she's based on a character with almost 14 quadrillion powers, 700 of which are documented.
Kind of the reason she's not cannon.

I didn't even notice that mistake until now, but this is true (in the edited to canon section). I am still credited in the non-canon section though.
@crystalwatcher
Fixed,
 
*smashes headfirst through the wall, face-skidding across the floor, before coming up to rest against the opposite wall with a flop*

... I'm alive...



That makes... five?


I remember these!

I'll list them in a minute.


And there's the GLaDoS


Is it sad that I can still see these two being friends? As in best friends?


Kind of the reason she's not cannon.


Fixed,
Hey crystalwatcher I noticed your posts on the new XP system this morning, so I wanted to ask if Plan Spend Spend Spend is still going to go through or not? Most people didn't vote to spend XP, but they also didn't vote Not to spend XP, so I'm kinda confused on if the plan is a go or not.
 
Hey crystalwatcher I noticed your posts on the new XP system this morning, so I wanted to ask if Plan Spend Spend Spend is still going to go through or not? Most people didn't vote to spend XP, but they also didn't vote Not to spend XP, so I'm kinda confused on if the plan is a go or not.
At the moment I'll be only counting votes towards either saving EXP or a plan.

Those that don't vote for either will be Sir Not Appearing In This Voting Period, a.k.a. Don't fucking matter. You can abstain if you wish.

I'll re-write the EXP Spending thing one my brain is done frizzing and I go get some food in me.
 
Considering how it gives an explanation on Solid Core's Fractal Synchronization, why is the Synchronizing Spells post not added to the front page?
 
Kind of the reason she's not cannon.

Oh, completely understandable. I never expected her to be accepted as is. It's kind of her nature to completely derail plots. As I said, I ust amused myself by wanting to see how accurate to her canon version I could get. Also, as I said I'd have no problem with her being butchered like crazy (as she'd have to be) in order to turn her into something usable.
 
Looking back..you *did* say something about it being an accordion in an earlier post but I had forgot by the time I was reading several pages later on so...

Yup.
 
Hey, could you guys do me a favor and look through the various sheets for those who have abilities related to analysis? Specifically the analysis of others' abilities?
Magical Girl Summit
Nothing to say here.
May I point out that Summit has Discovery as her first affinity. It's why she's never been able to absorb an armor-piercing ability, the conceptual discovery nature of her weapon wants to see how the target defends. When she faced Gabriel I had her deducing abilities as soon as Summit saw them in action.

Edit: Summit doesn't get armor-piercing through her weapon, her spells are a different matter.
 
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At the moment I'll be only counting votes towards either saving EXP or a plan.

Those that don't vote for either will be Sir Not Appearing In This Voting Period, a.k.a. Don't fucking matter. You can abstain if you wish.

I'll re-write the EXP Spending thing one my brain is done frizzing and I go get some food in me.

That works. When voting started, I didn't know what to spend on and didn't want to block a later XPwagon if it provee right while I slept
 
Current EXP Voting paradigm is as follows:


At the end of each update, EXP Voting will be opened automatically along with the actual vote. If you desire to vote to spend EXP, then you have to give a plan, or vote for one of the currently existing plans. Lone votes for EXP spending will no longer count. If you don't want to spend EXP for that period you will have to vote [X] Save EXP. If you don't care either way, feel free to abstain.

If you abstain, a.k.a. don't vote for Saving/Spending EXP at all, then it won't count for either one. Your main story vote will still count though.

For the winning plan: I'll go with my original idea. I'll take the winning plan, then work my way down it buying items until Nepgear can no longer afford anything. This is so Nepgear's growth can keep up with the power creep that the later parts of the quest will experience. I'm not planning on making it easy for you guys.

Does this work for everyone?

EDIT: Spending will stop at the end of the Winning Plan.
 
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When we raise flight, we prob want to raise it to 11 instead of 10. While 10 would give us HSC 2, 11 gives us a speed of 100mph, preventing anyone without HSC 2 from being able to track us due to our boosted flight.
 
I'm down for the "Plan <X> only" ruling.

Also:

For the winning plan: I'll go with my original idea. I'll take the winning plan, then work my way down it buying items until Nepgear can no longer afford anything. This is so Nepgear's growth can keep up with the power creep that the later parts of the quest will experience. I'm not planning on making it easy for you guys.

Ever since I read the "GEAR CHANGE / DRIVE IGNITION" update, this actually explains so much about the Quest's difficulty: The Concept of [BALANCE] was completely eradicated during the time of the CALAMITY !!!
 
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Since it's been a while since the last vote here is the current Tally:

Vote Tally : Original - Crystalwatcher's Magical Girl Quest! | Page 346 | Sufficient Velocity
##### NetTally 1.7.3.2

[x] Hunt down Truth. You haven't seen her or Carnage in a while.
No. of Votes: 29

[X] Visit Rei, San, and Sega. Your sister might need you to help clear some paperwork.
No. of Votes: 29

[X] Plan "Spend Spend Spend"
-[X] Buy Purifier Beam 14 (360 xp)
-[X] Buy Indestructible Core 6 (60 xp)
No. of Votes: 17

[x] Follow Team GEAR. Lucky and Aquila need to get plugged in.
No. of Votes: 11

[X] The base's population is booming. Lets see who all's here.
No. of Votes: 3

[X] No Xp Spending
No. of Votes: 2

[X] Purchase Severance: Echo.
No. of Votes: 1

Total No. of Voters: 38





Current winners are:
[x] Hunt down Truth. You haven't seen her or Carnage in a while.
[X] Visit Rei, San, and Sega. Your sister might need you to help clear some paperwork.
[X] Plan "Spend Spend Spend"
-[X] Buy Purifier Beam 14 (360 xp)
-[X] Buy Indestructible Core 6 (60 xp)

and given their vote leads it seem rather unlikely they'll be unseated barring a massive vote swing for some reason.
 
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