[X] Timeskip Activities.
-[X] Attend Instructor training sessions.
-[X] Attend general Flight training sessions.
-[X] Train skills
--[X] Remainder to Blue Wave - 360 points.

[X] Holiday Activity
-[X] Spend time with:
--[X] Koujirou: I guess it all came down to me not being able to stop those missiles in the earlier rounds, clearly I need help with long range things. Gimme a hand?
--[X] Yukari and Setsuna: Say Anna, what do you do in your time off? What do you say about dressing up a little, how about your room? Do you have enough furniture?
--[X] Sandra: Greetings Anna, while we have become closer as a Flight in the past month, but I don't feel as if we've gotten to truly know each other as people, or maybe even this country. What do you say to a short trip around Australia?
--[X] Ask Sandra for help in spending some time with Shuri. Out of everyone in the flight, she and you are most distant. And if you're going to be relying on her in battle, well, you'll need to know her better. (2 days)
--[X] See if one or more of the clubs you've found relaxing (Anna's choice) have any activities planned over the break. Try to meet people who enjoy the same leisure activities you do. (3 days)
--[X] Contact one or more of the other top ranked valkyries, ask to meet and talk shop. See if they have advice on training, on how to prepare yourself with top-level UN-supported combat, which you have not experienced before. See if any of your abilities are unique enough to contribute something no one else brings (wave excepted of course). See if they have advice on development of the wave force. (2 days)
--[X] Try one of the historical simulator scenarios solo. What difference would a lone valkyrie of your caliber have made? Ask Sandra for a recommendation, she knows the context to the history involved better than you do. (1 day)

[X] Continue down the list for next 5 elective classes
 
[X] Holiday Activity
-[X] Spend time with:
--[X] Koujirou: I guess it all came down to me not being able to stop those missiles in the earlier rounds, clearly I need help with long range things. Gimme a hand?
--[X] Yukari and Setsuna: Say Anna, what do you do in your time off? What do you say about dressing up a little, how about your room? Do you have enough furniture?
--[X] Sandra: Greetings Anna, while we have become closer as a Flight in the past month, but I don't feel as if we've gotten to truly know each other as people, or maybe even this country. What do you say to a short trip around Australia?
--[X] Ask Sandra for help in spending some time with Shuri. Out of everyone in the flight, she and you are most distant. And if you're going to be relying on her in battle, well, you'll need to know her better. (2 days)
--[X] Contact one or more of the other top ranked valkyries, ask to meet and talk shop. See if they have advice on training, on how to prepare yourself with top-level UN-supported combat, which you have not experienced before. See if any of your abilities are unique enough to contribute something no one else brings (wave excepted of course). See if they have advice on development of the wave force. (2 days)
--[X] Try one of the historical simulator scenarios solo. What difference would a lone valkyrie of your caliber have made? Ask Sandra for a recommendation, she knows the context to the history involved better than you do. (1 day)
--[X] Beach Episode: Yukari is gathering the flight together to spend a day in the beach biome in Perth. Somehow this feels inevitable to you. (1 Day)
--[X] Movie Marathon: When Sandra was looking for things for the flight to bond over, Koujirou suggested something called a 'Movie Marathon'. Now your flight is going to spend two days watching several cinematic creations together. Errm, what are you supposed to pick? (2 Days)
 
[X] Timeskip Activities.
-[X] Volunteer again for Sandra's UNHCR reconstruction activities.
-[X] Work with the crafting elective class for revised HPP prototype.
--[X] Five Days - 50 points.
-[X] Attend Instructor training sessions.
-[X] Attend general Flight training sessions.
-[X] Train skills
--[X] Target Rich Environment - 20 points
--[X] Blue Wave - 80 points

[X] Holiday Activity
-[X] Spend time with:
--[X] Koujirou: I guess it all came down to me not being able to stop those missiles in the earlier rounds, clearly I need help with long range things. Gimme a hand?
--[X] Yukari and Setsuna: Say Anna, what do you do in your time off? What do you say about dressing up a little, how about your room? Do you have enough furniture?
--[X] Sandra: Greetings Anna, while we have become closer as a Flight in the past month, but I don't feel as if we've gotten to truly know each other as people, or maybe even this country. What do you say to a short trip around Australia?
--[X] Ask Sandra for help in spending some time with Shuri. Out of everyone in the flight, she and you are most distant. And if you're going to be relying on her in battle, well, you'll need to know her better. (2 days)
--[X] Movie Marathon: When Sandra was looking for things for the flight to bond over, Koujirou suggested something called a 'Movie Marathon'. Now your flight is going to spend two days watching several cinematic creations together. Errm, what are you supposed to pick? (2 Days)
--[X] Contact one or more of the other top ranked valkyries, ask to meet and talk shop. See if they have advice on training, on how to prepare yourself with top-level UN-supported combat, which you have not experienced before. See if any of your abilities are unique enough to contribute something no one else brings (wave excepted of course). See if they have advice on development of the wave force. (2 days)
--[X] Try one of the historical simulator scenarios solo. What difference would a lone valkyrie of your caliber have made? Ask Sandra for a recommendation, she knows the context to the history involved better than you do. (1 day)
--[X] Beach Episode: Yukari is gathering the flight together to spend a day in the beach biome in Perth. Somehow this feels inevitable. (1 Day)

[X] Continue down the list for next 5 elective classes

I'm a little wary of directly referencing other copyrights, cause I know some smartarse is going to have the Flight Watch Infinite Stratos and I'll die while writing the scene, but so far it seems fine.

I mean, I was going to go for either Knight Run or Yukikaze, but Infinite Stratos works too. Although, in Knight Run's case, I'd probably suggest that the Pray arc be lost to Impact, in order to avoid some of the meta references.
 
wait why anime

aren't we going to pick whatever we will pick IC
who is going to suggest shitty harem

Miyazaki Marathon is the way to go.
 
[X] Timeskip Activities.
-[X] Volunteer again for Sandra's UNHCR reconstruction activities.
-[X] Work with the crafting elective class for revised HPP prototype.
--[X] Five Days - 50 points.
-[X] Attend Instructor training sessions.
-[X] Attend general Flight training sessions.
-[X] Train skills
--[X] Target Rich Environment - 20 points
--[X] Blue Wave - 80 points

[X] Holiday Activity
-[X] Spend time with:
--[X] Koujirou: I guess it all came down to me not being able to stop those missiles in the earlier rounds, clearly I need help with long range things. Gimme a hand?
--[X] Yukari and Setsuna: Say Anna, what do you do in your time off? What do you say about dressing up a little, how about your room? Do you have enough furniture?
--[X] Sandra: Greetings Anna, while we have become closer as a Flight in the past month, but I don't feel as if we've gotten to truly know each other as people, or maybe even this country. What do you say to a short trip around Australia?
--[X] Ask Sandra for help in spending some time with Shuri. Out of everyone in the flight, she and you are most distant. And if you're going to be relying on her in battle, well, you'll need to know her better. (2 days)
--[X] Contact one or more of the other top ranked valkyries, ask to meet and talk shop. See if they have advice on training, on how to prepare yourself with top-level UN-supported combat, which you have not experienced before. See if any of your abilities are unique enough to contribute something no one else brings (wave excepted of course). See if they have advice on development of the wave force. (2 days)
--[X] Try one of the historical simulator scenarios solo. What difference would a lone valkyrie of your caliber have made? Ask Sandra for a recommendation, she knows the context to the history involved better than you do. (1 day)
--[X] Beach Episode: Yukari is gathering the flight together to spend a day in the beach biome in Perth. Somehow this feels inevitable to you. (1 Day)
--[X] Movie Marathon: When Sandra was looking for things for the flight to bond over, Koujirou suggested something called a 'Movie Marathon'. Now your flight is going to spend two days watching several cinematic creations together. Errm, what are you supposed to pick? (2 Days)

[X] Continue down the list for next 7 elective classes
 
You entertain a faint suspicion that that Meyer sometimes segues onto topics that are incredibly distracting on purpose, but that didn't really fit the Instructor's character in your opinion.
Extra that is unnecessary.
Its shadow raced out ahead of the wall to cover the entire city and its outskirts.
It's -> Its
Adding to the confusion of the ground, powdery snow is thrown into the air the as the explosions trigger avalanches in the surrounding mountainsides.
ot -> to
Other than that it needs some work and I'm not sure the exact order intended, my best guess:
"Adding to the confusion is the ground, powdery snow thrown into the air as the explosions trigger avalanches in the surrounding mountainsides."
A particle stream smashes into the central reactor, and again, as in every nearly every round before this one, it detonates.
Underlined every is unnecessary
>>Victor: Masaya Setsuna
In the second round, Koujirou doesn't rush in keeping a moderate speed and approaching the city at an angle– and Setsuna rushes in and again blasts his face again with a half century of XHEAP missiles. Once again, despite his best efforts, the sheer volume of missiles, along with the unusually high number of missiles that Setsuna can directly control, sends Koujirou crashing out of the round.
>Victor: Masaya Setsuna
For some reason this version is different and thought I should point it out.
It wasn't… terrible, but maybe casting at big, public events isn't really your thing.
aren't -> isn't

Overall glad to see this updated again and can tell you put a ton of work into it so thanks as always.
 
[X] Timeskip Activities.
-[X] Attend Instructor training sessions.
-[X] Attend general Flight training sessions.
-[X] Volunteer again for Sandra's UNHCR reconstruction activities.
-[X] Train skills
--[X] Remainder to Blue Wave - 150 points.


[X] Holiday Activity
-[X] Spend time with:
--[X] Koujirou: I guess it all came down to me not being able to stop those missiles in the earlier rounds, clearly I need help with long range things. Gimme a hand?
--[X] Yukari and Setsuna: Say Anna, what do you do in your time off? What do you say about dressing up a little, how about your room? Do you have enough furniture?
--[X] Sandra: Greetings Anna, while we have become closer as a Flight in the past month, but I don't feel as if we've gotten to truly know each other as people, or maybe even this country. What do you say to a short trip around Australia?
--[X] Ask Sandra for help in spending some time with Shuri. Out of everyone in the flight, she and you are most distant. And if you're going to be relying on her in battle, well, you'll need to know her better. (2 days)
--[X] Contact one or more of the other top ranked valkyries, ask to meet and talk shop. See if they have advice on training, on how to prepare yourself with top-level UN-supported combat, which you have not experienced before. See if any of your abilities are unique enough to contribute something no one else brings (wave excepted of course). See if they have advice on development of the wave force. (2 days)
--[X] Try one of the historical simulator scenarios solo. What difference would a lone valkyrie of your caliber have made? Ask Sandra for a recommendation, she knows the context to the history involved better than you do. (1 day)
--[X] Beach Episode: Yukari is gathering the flight together to spend a day in the beach biome in Perth. Somehow this feels inevitable to you. (1 Day)
--[X] Movie Marathon: When Sandra was looking for things for the flight to bond over, Koujirou suggested something called a 'Movie Marathon'. Now your flight is going to spend two days watching several cinematic creations together. Errm, what are you supposed to pick? (2 Days)

[X] Continue down the list for next 5 elective classes
 
[X] Timeskip Activities.
-[X] Volunteer again for Sandra's UNHCR reconstruction activities.
-[X] Work with the crafting elective class for revised HPP prototype.
--[X] Five Days - 50 points.
-[X] Attend Instructor training sessions.
-[X] Attend general Flight training sessions.
-[X] Train skills
--[X] Target Rich Environment - 20 points
--[X] Blue Wave - 80 points

[X] Holiday Activity
-[X] Spend time with:
--[X] Koujirou: I guess it all came down to me not being able to stop those missiles in the earlier rounds, clearly I need help with long range things. Gimme a hand?
--[X] Yukari and Setsuna: Say Anna, what do you do in your time off? What do you say about dressing up a little, how about your room? Do you have enough furniture?
--[X] Sandra: Greetings Anna, while we have become closer as a Flight in the past month, but I don't feel as if we've gotten to truly know each other as people, or maybe even this country. What do you say to a short trip around Australia?
--[X] Ask Sandra for help in spending some time with Shuri. Out of everyone in the flight, she and you are most distant. And if you're going to be relying on her in battle, well, you'll need to know her better. (2 days)
--[X] Movie Marathon: When Sandra was looking for things for the flight to bond over, Koujirou suggested something called a 'Movie Marathon'. Now your flight is going to spend two days watching several cinematiccreations together. Errm, what are you supposed to pick? (2 Days)
--[X] Contact one or more of the other top ranked valkyries, ask to meet and talk shop. See if they have advice on training, on how to prepareyourself with top-level UN-supported combat, which you have not experienced before. See if any of your abilities are unique enough to contributesomething no one else brings (wave excepted of course). See if they have advice on development of the waveforce. (2 days)
--[X] Try one of the historical simulator scenarios solo. What difference would a lone valkyrie of your caliber have made? Ask Sandra for a recommendation, she knows the context to the historyinvolved better than you do. (1 day)
--[X] Beach Episode: Yukari is gathering the flight together to spend a day in the beachbiome in Perth. Somehow this feels inevitable. (1 Day)

[X] Continue down the list for next 5 elective classes
 
On an unrelated note, should fluffy velociraptors have personalities like corgis that can use doorknobs? Because we now know what some of the dinosaurs are, and I feel an omake coming on.
That's a silly question. What you should be asking is would the Arcology Valk prefer velociraptors like corgies or like actuall velociraptors.
And so the Yuri train gains another.
It's not really notable, pretty sure Anna/Yukari is the threads second ship after Anna/Sandra.
Although Renus valiant efforts might be exaggerating what I think I observe.
Sandra was from that lab, although she might have been an earlier iteration than the Design Child would have been. I think she was rescued from it by her parents, and that classified incident her and Shuri were involved in was when the Lab tried to take her back* and was quietly** dealt with. Admittedly, I only believe that it was the Lab because of Anime tropes and parallels with the flipped options.

*Or something
**Or at least covered up well enough to mimic quiet
I agree with the Design Child speculation but not about the incident.
At that point Sandra was the adopted daughter of the secretary. The lab was either out in the open and approved of in which case they had little to gain from an older model and a lot to lose or the lab was secret after the UN tried to shut it down and in that case they still had little to gain and a lot to lose. Only expect this was the case if Avalanche went maximum anime.

Well, the other problem is that Blue Wave is 1050 points. Like, if we put in 70 points every 50 days we get it in oh, about two years. And that's two years of constant work, not two years of two 100-day semesters, that would be five years. Not committing at least 150-200 points means we never get Blue Wave within the timeframe of this quest. And realistically if we want Blue Wave by the time Kojirou is an Elite, we should commit about 200 to 300.
I hate it when other people are right.
Alright yes we need to invest some in Wave force however I think you're forgetting: We still need to keep powerups for our own series. There'll be nowhere to go if we launch into it with Wave Force nearly capped. Also we don't want to upgrade it until we've used it once or twice because otherwise Fauxchan won't know we've upgraded it.
Care to justify why you think we need it by the time Koujiro is an Elite.
[] Timeskip Activities.
-[] Volunteer again for Sandra's UNHCR reconstruction activities.
-[] Work with the crafting elective class for revised HPP prototype.
--[] Five Days - 50 points.
-[] Attend Instructor training sessions.
-[] Attend general Flight training sessions.
-[] Train skills
--[] Target Rich Environment - 20 points
--[] Blue Wave - 80 points
I like this plan the most I think because of its inclusion of other people. Anna doesn't need strength, she need relationships and sanity. The crafting cult is perhaps not the most useful as sanity goes but they're also really funny.

One where the tsundere was denied her outlet of energy of physical abuse of the MC, leading to her sublimating it into getting gud.
Good god! We've created a monster.
 
[X] Timeskip Activities.
-[X] Volunteer again for Sandra's UNHCR reconstruction activities.
-[X] Work with the crafting elective class for revised HPP prototype.
--[X] Five Days - 50 points.
-[X] Attend Instructor training sessions.
-[X] Attend general Flight training sessions.
-[X] Train skills
--[X] Target Rich Environment - 20 points
--[X] Blue Wave - 80 points

[X] Holiday Activity
-[X] Spend time with:
--[X] Yukari and Setsuna: Say Anna, what do you do in your time off? What do you say about dressing up a little, how about your room? Do you have enough furniture?
--[X] Sandra: Greetings Anna, while we have become closer as a Flight in the past month, but I don't feel as if we've gotten to truly know each other as people, or maybe even this country. What do you say to a short trip around Australia?
--[X] Ask Sandra for help in spending some time with Shuri. Out of everyone in the flight, she and you are most distant. And if you're going to be relying on her in battle, well, you'll need to know her better. (2 days)
--[X] See if one or more of the clubs you've found relaxing (Anna's choice) have any activities planned over the break. Try to meet people who enjoy the same leisure activities you do. (3 days)
--[X] Contact one or more of the other top ranked valkyries, ask to meet and talk shop. See if they have advice on training, on how to prepare yourself with top-level UN-supported combat, which you have not experienced before. See if any of your abilities are unique enough to contribute something no one else brings (wave excepted of course). See if they have advice on development of the wave force. (2 days)
--[X] Beach Episode: Yukari is gathering the flight together to spend a day in the beach biome in Perth. Somehow this feels inevitable to you. (1 Day)
--[X] Movie Marathon: When Sandra was looking for things for the flight to bond over, Koujirou suggested something called a 'Movie Marathon'. Now your flight is going to spend two days watching several cinematic creations together. Errm, what are you supposed to pick? (2 Days)

[X] Continue down the list for next 7 elective classes
 
So, anyone have a clue about this part?
The fortification of E26 was formidable, consisting of well disguised and unusually sophisticated batteries of laser and particle weaponry (See [Plasma aperture design proposal XTKB-1] and [Electron acceleration chamber design proposal XRS-1]. Despite the technological sophistication of the system, partial study found that the defence system appeared to be insufficiently powered, with some power connections traced to dead ends with no source of incoming energy.
Why didn't Anna fully power these sections? Just general lack of energy production to power the defenses? Or was she somehow powering some of the lasers herself?
 
[X] Timeskip Activities.
-[X] Volunteer again for Sandra's UNHCR reconstruction activities.
-[X] Work with the crafting elective class for revised HPP prototype.
--[X] Five Days - 50 points.
-[X] Attend Instructor training sessions.
-[X] Attend general Flight training sessions.
-[X] Train skills
--[X] Target Rich Environment - 20 points
--[X] Blue Wave - 80 points

[X] Holiday Activity
-[X] Spend time with:
--[X] Yukari and Setsuna: Say Anna, what do you do in your time off? What do you say about dressing up a little, how about your room? Do you have enough furniture?
--[X] Sandra: Greetings Anna, while we have become closer as a Flight in the past month, but I don't feel as if we've gotten to truly know each other as people, or maybe even this country. What do you say to a short trip around Australia?
--[X] Ask Sandra for help in spending some time with Shuri. Out of everyone in the flight, she and you are most distant. And if you're going to be relying on her in battle, well, you'll need to know her better. (2 days)
--[X] See if one or more of theclubs you've found relaxing (Anna's choice) have any activities planned over the break. Try to meet people who enjoy the same leisure activities you do. (3 days)
--[X] Contact one or more of the other top ranked valkyries, ask to meet and talk shop. See if they have advice on training, on how to prepare yourself with top-level UN-supported combat, which you have not experienced before. See if any of your abilities are unique enough to contribute something no one else brings (wave excepted of course). See if they have advice on development of the wave force. (2 days)
--[X] Beach Episode: Yukari isgathering the flight together to spend a day in the beach biome in Perth. Somehow this feels inevitable to you. (1 Day)
--[X] Movie Marathon: When Sandra was looking for things for the flight to bond over, Koujirou suggested something called a 'Movie Marathon'. Now your flight is going to spend two days watching several cinematic creations together. Errm, what are you supposed to pick? (2 Days)

[X] Continue down the list for next 7 elective classes
 
[X] Timeskip Activities.
-[X] Volunteer again for Sandra's UNHCR reconstruction activities.
-[X] Work with the crafting elective class for revised HPP prototype.
--[X] Five Days - 50 points.
-[X] Attend Instructor training sessions.
-[X] Attend general Flight training sessions.
-[X] Train skills
--[X] Target Rich Environment - 20 points
--[X] Blue Wave - 80 points
 
[X] Timeskip Activities.
-[X] Attend Instructor training sessions.
-[X] Attend general Flight training sessions.
-[X] Volunteer again for Sandra's UNHCR reconstruction activities.
-[X] Work with the crafting elective class for revised HPP prototype.
--[X] Whatever's left (150 points)

[X] Holiday Activity
-[X] Spend time with:
--[X] Yukari and Setsuna: Say Anna, what do you do in your time off? What do you say about dressing up a little, how about your room? Do you have enough furniture?
--[X] Sandra: Greetings Anna, while we have become closer as a Flight in the past month, but I don't feel as if we've gotten to truly know each other as people, or maybe even this country. What do you say to a short trip around Australia?
--[X] Beach Episode: Yukari is gathering the flight together to spend a day in the beach biome in Perth. Somehow this feels inevitable to you. (1 Day)
--[X] Movie Marathon: When Sandra was looking for things for the flight to bond over, Koujirou suggested something called a 'Movie Marathon'. Now your flight is going to spend two days watching several cinematic creations together. Errm, what are you supposed to pick? (2 Days)
-[X] Flight world tour: Visit land of Rising Sun. Take note of the fortitude of the Japanese people. Become the Funny Gaijin you were always meant to be. (7 Days)

Honestly, Kojiro's line makes me not want to spend time with him, and I think Shuri can continue to sit on the backburner. Absence will make the heart grow fonder, or something.
 
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So uh, somehow I brainfarted into what people on discord are now calling 'metric weeks' :V
You just went full French Revolution. Never go full French Revolution.
That's a silly question. What you should be asking is would the Arcology Valk prefer velociraptors like corgies or like actuall velociraptors.
Social, intelligent, cursorial pack hunters. A trait shared by three things: Canines, humans, and orcas.

Why would the valk want murder chickens? You get that with regular chickens anyway.
 
[X] Timeskip Activities.
-[X] Attend Instructor training sessions.
-[X] Attend general Flight training sessions.
-[X] Train skills
--[X] Remainder to Blue Wave - 360 points.
 
[X] Timeskip Activities.
-[X] Volunteer again for Sandra's UNHCR reconstruction activities.
-[X] Work with the crafting elective class for revised HPP prototype.
--[X] Five Days - 50 points.
-[X] Attend Instructor training sessions.
-[X] Attend general Flight training sessions.
-[X] Train skills
--[X] Target Rich Environment - 20 points
--[X] Blue Wave - 80 points

[X] Holiday Activity
-[X] Spend time with:
--[X] Yukari and Setsuna: Say Anna, what do you do in your time off? What do you say about dressing up a little, how about your room? Do you have enough furniture?
--[X] Sandra: Greetings Anna, while we have become closer as a Flight in the past month, but I don't feel as if we've gotten to truly know each other as people, or maybe even this country. What do you say to a short trip around Australia?
--[X] Ask Sandra for help in spending some time with Shuri. Out of everyone in the flight, she and you are most distant. And if you're going to be relying on her in battle, well, you'll need to know her better. (2 days)
--[X] See if one or more of the clubs you've found relaxing (Anna's choice) have any activities planned over the break. Try to meet people who enjoy the same leisure activities you do. (3 days)
--[X] Contact one or more of the other top ranked valkyries, ask to meet and talk shop. See if they have advice on training, on how to prepare yourself with top-level UN-supported combat, which you have not experienced before. See if any of your abilities are unique enough to contribute something no one else brings (wave excepted of course). See if they have advice on development of the wave force. (2 days)
--[X] Beach Episode: Yukari is gathering the flight together to spend a day in the beach biome in Perth. Somehow this feels inevitable to you. (1 Day)
--[X] Movie Marathon: When Sandra was looking for things for the flight to bond over, Koujirou suggested something called a 'Movie Marathon'. Now your flight is going to spend two days watching several cinematic creations together. Errm, what are you supposed to pick? (2 Days)

[X] Continue down the list for next 7 elective classes
 
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