Fair point. I might have let the plan get away from me since we were dealing with the representative of another True Dragon. Plan updated.Uhhh why exactly are we rattling off the particulars of our Dragon Heritage embracement at the idle question of a messenger?
This is far too much Goldfish, what are we even trying to achieve with this?
[X] Viserys Targaryen of Valryia in the Garden
-[X] I have many titles but most know me simply as King.
-[X] "As for my friends," Viserys looks to the kindly Spectator for a moment, then smiles, "they are among my greatest treasures."
Fair point. I might have let the plan get away from me since we were dealing with the representative of another True Dragon. Plan updated.
[X] "I am a King upon the Plane of Balance, Lady Telis, one with many millions of subjects depending on me to protect them from enemies beyond counting."
-[X] "As for my friends," Viserys looks to the kindly Spectator for a moment, then smiles, "they are among my greatest treasures."
From what we know of Darleth and his fondness for fortifications, I think erring on the side of specificity is warranted here when mentioning our desire to protect our citizens.Point on restating why we are looking for assistance but I'm not feeling your specificity. Minor change to reflect.
[X] Viserys Targaryen of Valryia in the Garden
-[X] I have many titles but most know me simply as King with all the responsibility that entails.
-[X] "As for my friends," Viserys looks to the kindly Spectator for a moment, then smiles, "they are among my greatest treasures."
From what we know of Darleth and his fondness for fortifications, I think erring on the side of specificity is warranted here when mentioning our desire to protect our citizens.
Introducing us as of Valyrian descent is not a bad idea, introducing us as of Valyria its terrible, anyone with a long memory or an archive knows how bad they got, specially a dragon
[X] Goldfish
Hmm, would something like this be more appropriate then?The question is lineage not current circumstances.
Millions is essentially filler text and we have already established why we are looking for him with our own servants didn't we?
The question asked was of lineage and that is the answer we are providing, not current circumstance.
If she gets the wrong impression that's a social point to us when we correct her.
Neither of the current options mentions Valyria at all, though.@Deliste, @Goldfish, I'm against mentioning Valyria by name or hinting that we're descended from it. Valyria probably has a poor reputation among the Planes, and I'm sure a Dragon would at least have dreamed about it.
I strongly suggest that we say something like "I'm done with relying on the Bitch Queen and want to fortify my Empire, without resorting to Valyria's arts"
Something like that.
Neither of the current options mentions Valyria at all, though.
I will specify in mine that we don't mention it unless Viserys determines it counterproductive to try to hide it.
@Deliste, @Goldfish, I'm against mentioning Valyria by name or hinting that we're descended from it. Valyria probably has a poor reputation among the Planes, and I'm sure a Dragon would at least have dreamed about it.
I strongly suggest that we say something like "I'm done with relying on the Bitch Queen and want to fortify my Empire, without resorting to Valyria's arts"
Something like that.
Oh yeah...
Minor thing, Iron Wind is a level 4 Maneuver.Maneuvers Known (Initiator level 6):
Level 2: Intercepting Shade (Counter), Iron Wind (Strike), Solar Lance (Strike)
Level 3: Blinding Ray Shot (Strike), Disarming Blast (Strike), Cascading Draft (Boost),
@Goldfish, this is what I meant. You're basically saying "I'm Valyria's heir"The thing is that if we mention Plane of Balance/Garden, anyone with a notion of Valyria knows that it was a Dragon related Empire that dominated said Garden.
Well that's just unavoidable. Darleth, or one of his representatives, would only need to ask pretty much any Shaitan official to be able to get that much information about us. We haven't exactly made a point of hiding that facet of our ancestry.@Goldfish, this is what I meant. You're basically saying "I'm Valyria's heir"
@Goldfish, this is what I meant. You're basically saying "I'm Valyria's heir"
"I'm done with relying on the Bitch Queen and want to fortify my Empire, without resorting to Valyria's arts"
@DragonParadox
By the way, now that Zherys is mostly ours, can we know his level and build?