Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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Hidden just feels too on the nose. We want something characteristically Ling Qi's idea of eyes and the Hidden Moon. Something like Watchful or Inquisitive Moon's Eyes, to pay homage to her desire to protect herself and what she loves while the bonuses themselves convey the hiding aspects. Then the tech becomes about being hidden while aware of danger, inquisitive for interesting things and curious in exploration, which is basically what Ling Qi draws from the Hidden Moon.
 
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We did a few things to the Art:
1. The constructs are now more stealthy
2. They are now based on clairaudience in addition to clairvoyance
3. We removed anything even remotely relevant for combat

How about Reclusive Musician's Ears? I know the new acronym would be hard to adjust to
 
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Turn 12-Arc 2-2
Points of light winked and sparkled, circling above the garden pond, and over the low walls that surrounded their property. The dampness remaining in the air and the qi exhaled from her lungs left a thin mist crawling along the muddy ground of the storm wracked garden. The gravel paths were still visible, the decorative boulders remained in their places, giving Ling Qi a place to sit as she channeled the energies of the Roaming Moon's Eye art.

Of her arts it was one which she focused on often. It was useful, and not particularly flashy, she used it whenever she needed to search for something, channeling qi to her eyes and ears in the patterns she had learned from its lessons. The wisps gave her the ability to analyze her surroundings more quickly and effectively, and now and again, when she needed to look for something far away, the Viewing Pool was available wherever she could find a pool of water.

Now of course, she had a Talisman to do that. One of many reasons she had to further study the art now that she had time.

"There's more to that thing than just an amplifier," Sixiang mused. "Well we have plenty of time to tinker with it."

They did, and Ling Qi was looking forward to it, if only because it would make a fun project to work on with Sixiang.

"Aw quit it, you're making me blush," the muse chuckled.

Ling Qi breathed out scattering sparks of silver qi across the ruined garden as she cleared her mind and returned to her cultivation. In truth she had already mastered most of the secrets of this art. What remained were refinements, learning to achieve a higher clarity in her scrying, letting the wisps zip faster and further through air and shadow. With the insights she had gleaned from watching Meng Dan at his work, those things came to her easily enough. She thought it likely that she would complete the art very soon, and then she could start on her other project, modifying it a little.

But, that was something to think about later. Ling Qi opened her eyes, pushing the views sent to her mind by the whirling wisps to the back of her mind. Her mother sat on the iron bench below, a warmed mat between her and the cold metal. Her mother's eyes were closed in concentration.

Over the past year, her mother had persevered with her exercise, helped greatly by the movements taught by the cultivation art she had picked from the archive of lower realm arts gifted to Ling Qi by the Cai. Until then she had struggled, the rough exercises Guan Zhou had designed for young and vigorous mortals less effective than the gentler movements that art had taught.

Her Mother's condition had improved greatly since she had started practicing it in the garden. Now though, she had just one final step to achieve the gold physique, and that was to begin weaving and layering qi into bone and muscle. Ling Qi remembered finishing this exercise in a short time, swiftly locking into place the foundations which would allow her to continue improving her body beyond mortal limits.

Ling Qingge was far slower. According to her Mother, she had been at this for most of the month, and still, Ling Qi could see how slowly and haltingly her Mother wove the strands of spiritual energy which irregularly emerged from her tarnished dantian. There was a wavering uncertainty to it even after Ling Qi had tried to give her instruction.

Despite that though, she could tell that her Mother was soon to reach the threshold. One wisp and then another drew back in lazily circling the bench where her Mother sat, sharpening Ling Qi's focus on the tentative movement of her qi. This was the first time she had watched someone else achieve the Gold physique. She had thought when she first began to make regular use of her spiritual senses, that mortals resembled phantoms. Their spirits were pale shades, and they seemed almost unreal in that sense, compared to cultivators who burned so brightly.

Sher had learned better, and thus kept herself grounded. Though mortals did not shine brightly, if one bothered to look, they still had all the complexity to their spirit that a cultivator did, just more muddled. Despite that, she couldn't claim that it wasn't gratifying to see her frail, mortal Mother beginning to shine just a little bit brighter.

Completion came suddenly, like a hazy image snapping into focus, the weave of qi layered into bone and flesh thrummed with what Ling Qi recognized as the satisfaction and mild euphoria that came with awakening. The power her Mother had attained was small, but qi now cushioned and supported flesh, it would hold back the wear and tear of time and atrophy, it would enhance the memory of muscle and mind alike.

Even if mortals were still people and deserved to be thought of as such, that did not change the fact that they were so fragile and fleeting. Now her Mother was a little less so.

Ling Qi was beside her Mother then, wrapping her arm around the older woman's shoulders as Ling Qingge's eyes shot open and she sucked in a gasping breath.

"It's a good feeling isn't it?" Ling Qi said lightly, gazing up at the stars above.

"It is," her mother murmured, staring down at her own hands as if she could hardly recognize them. The lines of stress and hard days still marked her face, but Ling Qi hoped that there would be no new ones for awhile now.

"Unless you give her more in the next few minutes," Sixiang's jab was playful but also purposeful. Ling Qi ducked her head slightly in acknowledgement. She had put things off for long enough.

"So, now that you have the energy for it. I think I need to tell you about some things," Ling Qi said quietly.

"I knew that there were more serious issues on your journey," her mother said, opening and closing her hands.

"What gave me away?" Ling Qi asked, concerned.

"Nothing," Ling Qingge said, letting her eyes drift shut. "But even one such as I can recognize a pattern when it is repeated often enough."

Ling Qi stared for a moment. Had mother just…?

Sixiang let out an audible snort of laughter. Ling Qi grimaced… that was fair enough.


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"You do not commit yourself to half measures, do you Ling Qi," her mother said, breaking the silence that had fallen after she finished explaining the choices she had made and what the Duchess now expected of them.

"I can't, if I want to keep climbing," Ling Qi said, leaning against the back of the bench.

"And you must keep climbing," Ling Qingge said. Ling Qi wasn't sure if it was meant to be a question or not.

She chose to treat it as one. "I'm still ignorant about a lot of things, but I do know you need power before you can have anything else. You know where a person stands when they're powerless Mother."

Her mother didn't answer for a time, gazing up at the unclouded stars beside her instead. When she did reply it was only a single word. "Yes."

"None of us, not myself, or you or Biyu, or anyone else who comes after should have to deal with that again," Ling Qi said thoughtfully, entwining her fingers in her lap. Above their heads, the upward facing crescent of the Moon shone pale on the village. "I-I'm still not sure what I'm supposed to do with that power though, you know? But Lady Renxiang, even if she stumbles sometimes, she does know. So I want to support her. And… I think less war can only be good. So until I figure out the more complicated stuff, this is what I can do."

In the end, she had given her support to the decision for personal selfish reasons. She did not want war in the south of the province for any longer than necessary, she wanted to secure a place of strength for her family. And, although they had only spoken for a short time, she didn't really want to fight Jaromila. Her people were just an extension of that.

The more cynical part of her said that such feelings were probably the point of their little meeting. However, even if that might be the motive, much of it was the simple fact that it was harder to think of someone who had shared warm drinks with you in a comfortable sitting room as a faceless thing to be fought.

"I only worry that you run ahead so quickly that you will inevitably trip," Ling Qingge said. "But I must trust you. What does this mean for us?"

"In the short term little," Ling Qi said. In the coming year we will have to survey the lands were assigned and find a place to settle. I'll be away more often, but I'll be back often too," Ling Qi said. "Once we have a site ready to move people too… that's when things will change for you."

"You will bankrupt your Lady on security measures I am sure," her mother said, smiling wanly.

"...Maybe not bankrupt," Ling Qi huffed

Things kept changing, from one day to the next, Ling Qi thought.

"We should head inside. You're not quite immune to catching the chills yet Mother," Ling Qi said. "I think we could both use some warm tea."

"I suppose so, yet I do not feel as if I will be able to sleep either," Ling Qingge said.

"I will teach you how to control that later," Ling Qi said, standing up and offering her Mother a hand. "Perhaps we could compose a little, until everyone wakes up?"

She was glad to be home for now. She had so many people to catch up with still though.

AN: and one last vote for the modified art.

Low pressure for this one, we'll just be voting on the new name for the art. The name of the art should still follow the pattern [adjective][possessive noun][Eye/Ear] set up. Puns are encouraged :p

[] Write In art name
 
[X] Silent Songseeker's Sight
[X] Reclusive Musician's Ear
[X] Silent Songseeker's Regard


I guess I will just add the ones that catch my eye
 
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mummy getting dem gains. by the time ling qi or biyu has kids she gon be swole grandma. Stuff you full of cookies and give many hugs. this is good.
 
[X] Lithe Quintet's Iris

The acronym would be LQI which tickles me, it speaks to how many wisps there are, how much better they are at penetrating defenses, and how much harder they are to detect. Plus it uses an interesting word instead of just basic eye or ear.
 
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What happened to the black gunk that comes out of someone when they achieve gold?
It doesn't happen until mid gold. Here is Ling Qi's gold awakening that A Tomato on discord found:
It happened as she was in the midst of a set of push ups, a cool down from the more intense exercises. It was as if she had been straining against a great weight tied to her back, only for it to suddenly vanish. Vitality flooded her tired limbs, banishing her fatigue and lingering tiredness like morning mist before the sun. Her body felt lighter than it ever had before, and aches she had forgotten she even had faded away.

"Good. Get up and join the third group," Ling Qi's gaze snapped up as she found herself staring at the veritable mountain of muscle that was Instructor Zhou. How did Elders do that?
No goop.
 
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[] Reclusive Musician's Ear

This is my favorite serious option. It has the right flavor for the setting and it doesn't sound specific to us, which is good because we only modified this art instead of making it from whole cloth.
 
To me this Art represents Ling Qi's desire for survival. Like she said this chapter, one needs power, and the Hidden Moon teaches that knowledge is power. It is the awareness of threats, like the shadowy beasts and phantoms of Ling Qi's mist is a representation of her fear of hidden enemies, which is why her Domain has bonuses to Initiative and Avoid that she may avoid more brutish ambushers while the Social Perception is against civil foes. And this Art is what lets her be aware of the things around her. It is also the pursuit of power, finding opportunities to succeed or grow in strength which is where songseeking comes in. There is a wealth of power out there for those with the desire to find it and the skill to claim it.

So I'd like the wording of the Art to reflect that. Wariness and curiosity, perception out of fear and want, that balance of contrast which can be found in much of Ling Qi's cultivation. But we already have an Eye theme so we don't really need to repeat the idea of perception. First for want we could go with Curious but I also liked Wistful, it has an element of unfulfilled want that can never be satisfied which I think is a sad but beautiful way to look at Qi's ambition. But Curious is probably easier and more clearly relatable concept.

Now a roamer's perception is one of wariness. The roads of the world are dangerous and one can never be sure what's ahead on the path (which is one of the reasons why I liked Roaming Moon's Eye). Home is safety but that's a safety Ling Qi has not really felt since she was a child and with her trauma and RME's own Insight she might never entirely feel again. And Ling Qi is a wanderer, free like the wind she doesn't really settle and has committed to become a travelling warrior, diplomat, spy and explorer. So, and as a little homage to the creator of the Forgotten Vale Melody, even at home Ling Qi has a Traveler's wariness.

[] Curious Traveler's Eye
 
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