Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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Turn 10: Arc 1 End
A spiderweb of fractures spread out from the central crack. A sickening unlight radiated out from them, and to Ling Qi's alarm, she felt a disquieting sensation, as if she were dispersing herself to hide, but involuntarily. Ling Qi seized control back of her own qi just as her fingertips began to dematerialize and drift away. The effort brought a sharp pain. It felt like a hundred needles had been jammed into her fingers at once.

She was back on her feet by then though, and the others were clambering up as well, many fixing wide eyes on the sky.

Ling Qi couldn't pull her eyes away from the stone.

There was another sharp crack, and then a soft like soft stone crumbling and a whole section of the stone caved inward, as if it were hollow. She saw fragments scatter and it became clear that the 'stone' was only a few centimeters thick. The unlight blazed from within.

$^%^(&&^&%^$ept back, and seven rays of light hewed the sky again. The mountain of gold blazed with all the colors of the dawn and set itself in their path, one hundred hands raised in warding.

Unlight pulsed, and the starstone exploded outward. Ling Qi drew upon darkness and lake qi and summoned the rippling starless shroud even as the Mist descended. She hissed in pain as the shroud tried to absorb the fragments only to violently reject them. Yet, the defensive technique held.

The bleeding clouds fled carried on the wind's of a typhoon, a thousand wounds wept rain upon the land, drowning it in pain. The Inferno howled in rage and ten thousand devils rent into a hundred thousand pieces dogged it's heels, broken bodies and severed limbs hurling themselves after in a frenzy. The beat of the drums broke the earth in their fury.

Ling Qi heard someone shouting something, but the sound of the world was washed out as the dust cleared, and revealed a radiant figure standing in the ruin of the stone. It was small. Bright as a star, too bright to look at directly without pain spiking in her skull, it was nonetheless small. A bead of starlight no bigger than a small child. Ling Qi felt her stomach drop as the thing's attention fell upon her. Sixiang's qi flared inside of her, and for just a moment the eye searing light seemed to dim, the burning on her skin grew less. She met curious red eyes.

It looked superficially like a young boy. With dusky skin like her own and long white hair that trailed down to where his feet should have been. But at the bottom of his ribs, flesh transformed into prismatic light, she saw the shadow of a half formed spine within, but nothing more.

The spirits head cocked to the side as it observed her. Curiosity faded, replaced by cold.

Enemy.

An arm rose and flesh tore apart. Spikes of seven colored crystal formed a blade. The air shattered, and the wind died, leaving only the void beyond the sky.

Ling Qi drew on her depleted reserves, and leapt back, even as she struggled to keep herself from scattering, knowing somehow that if she did, she wouldn't reform. Light, clean and colorless crashed down.

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A mountain crumbled. Gold burned black, painted caverns were shorn of color. The light of dawn fled, and there was only night. There was a hole in the sky. Bright blue replaced by starry black.

Cai Renxiang stood in front of her, expression strained. Hungry crimson light bled into her aira and Liming rippled, even as the gown's hem grew frayed, thread unspooling to reveal the girl's boots.

Ruan Shen was at her side, strumming a tune that eased the strain on her spirit, made her feel less like she was dissolving in her own skin. A half dozen defensive techniques, earth and fire, wind and mountain, all washed over her, a conflicting multitude of light.

And before them, the spirit paused, bladed arm mid swing, staring at Cai Renxiang in confusion.

Horns of war called from the north, and in the valley ahead, Ling Qi saw the flash of banners.

The false dawn reversed, unlight bled away behind the southern peaks. A curtain of stars descended from the hole in the sky left in its wake.

The spirit blinked, and it gazed to the south, where the ineffable pressure was receding. Its mouth opened but no sound escaped. Yet Ling Qi felt the plaintive cry that echoed through the realm of spirit. It shot into the sky, trailing a rainbow.

Ling Qi's knee hit the dirt as the suffocating presence receded. After the battle, the run and now this, her qi was depleted, and she was exhausted. From the valley in the north she saw the leading edge of a sect force emerge. Three cyan cultivators soared above, and green, yellow and reds marched below.

Their part was done.


***​



Ling Qi held in a groan as she squeezed her eyes shut.

Was this what qi exhaustion felt like? Her head was pounding, her senses felt fuzzy, and her whole body felt like a wrung out rag. Yet still, they could not rest. Ling Qi stood at attention beside Cai Renxiang among the gathered disciples from the mission. The group was not as large as it had been.

The perimeter group had been savaged. When the… event in the south had transpired, they had found themselves the primary target of the shamans commanding the storm, and worse, suffered from being caught in the eddies of the event. Three disciples had died outright, their bodies rendered to dust. The rest were suffering from some terrible toxin, and while the Sect was keeping them alive, they were not waking up. Liao Zhu was among them.

She had seen him in the infirmary and the memory still felt bizarre. Liao Zhu was not meant for stillness and silence she felt. Though he looked unharmed, Ling Qi had been able to feel the sickness in his spirit, that awful dissolving sensation that had brushed her when she had met that spirit.

Elder Yongrui was said to be in similar condition, though the facilities for his treatment were far beyond the Sect's common medicine hall.

Before the gathered disciples stood two of the Sect's Elders. One she had never seen before. Elder Zhuge Ke was a square jawed man with salt and pepper hair, his face was deeply lined with age. He was not quite as tall or muscled as Elder Zhou, but imposing all the same. Garbed in heavy bronze armor, which was currently quite battered, he scowled deeply. He was, Ling Qi had learned the Sect armies commander, and Guan Zhi's father, having been married to Elder Zhou's younger sister.

He had been divesting himself of duties, preparing for retirement, when news of the other Elder's death had come.

The other, she had only seen once before and never learned their name. Elder Nai Zhu was the one who had presided over her musical challenge months ago. Swathed in heavy robes and not showing an inch of skin, the paneled and articulate metal mask and headdress which covered her head and face displayed a frightful expression.

"You are, all of you to be commended for your performance on this mission," Zhuge Ke said stiffly. "Matters escalated to a degree which could not have been predicted, but this cannot be blamed on you, the rank and file of the Sect."

"This is no longer merely a Sect matter," Nai Zhu's artificial voice was bland and without tone, and Ling Qi could not read a single thing of the woman's feelings in her body language. Indeed, she was only aware that the Elder was a woman because of the… manifestation she had witnessed. "Messages are already in route to the capital."

"Indeed," Zhuge Ke said, with a hint of irritation. Whitewater currents and the roar of war machines rumbled in his voice. "As of now, the Sect is entering a defensive stance, we will be fortifying our outposts and villages. You will all be of great assistance in this. Sect Head Yuan was not able to safely pursue the entity which woulded Brother Yongrui, but it will not survive an assault on the Sect."

"However, certain matters must also be addressed," Elder Zhu said. "The fortifications beneath the earth were completed, but at cost. Many were slain, and Senior Brother Jiao received a significant wound. He will be recovering for some time."

Ling Qi's eyes widened, the idea that Elder Jiao, a seventh realm cultivator had been seriously wounded was more than a little alarming. The whispers that broke out around her showed that she wasn't alone in that thought.

"The Sect has suffered setbacks," Elder Ke said, his sharp voice cutting off the sound. "This is true. However, we remain strong. This is not the first time, nor the last that the mountain scum will inflict hurts upon us, but remember always that we are the Empire, and they, merely barbarians. They will be punished for this."

"They will suffer," Elder Zhu agreed, a faint whirr behind her voice, a panel in her mask shifted, and for just a second, Ling Qi felt hate wash out, old and deep. "As Zhou's killer will."

"Hmph, take comfort in that much disciples. None may recover easily from Sister Nai's fires," that seemed to cheer the older man a little. "Now, disciples, rest and prepare yourself for what is to come."

The Elders turned away, and the disciples began to disperse, slumping off to take their rest. Beside her, Cai Renxiang remained still, bandages wrapped her throat. When she spoke, her voice still had an ugly rasp, though the healers assured her it was a temporary matter. "Unfortunately, our trials are not done," Cai Renxiang said quietly. The faint hum of the girl's social screening art whispered in Ling Qi's ears.

"What do you mean?" Ling Qi asked warily. She dearly wished to leave, Zhengui and Hanyi should have been cleared by the sect physicians by now and she very much wanted to be with them.

"I have been given the tools with which to contact Mother, if necessary. I cannot say that this situation does not qualify," she said. "As my retainer and a direct witness, you will need to give your account."

Ling Qi paused. She knew that Cai Renxiang had a certain very expensive communications array for official business. One that outright projected the users presence across the province. "...I see," well she was going to have to get used to public speaking really quick, wasn't she?

Humor was a good balm for nerves.

However, that did bring up another matter. The shard of icy iron stored away in her ring. No one had mentioned it, nor asked her about it, other 'dealing' with the White Sky barbarian. Ling Qi's gaze turned to Elder Nai, who was conferring with a core disciple still in the far corner of the room.

She was a little hesitant to bring it up to the Sect.

[] Catch the Elder's attention, and speak of the strange encounter.
[] Remain silent, wait until your debrief with the Duchess to discuss the matter
 
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Turn 10: Arc 2-1 Debut
"You are distressed by something," Renxiang observed.

Ling Qi looked away from Elder Zhu. "...Yes. This probably isn't the place for it though. When do we start preparing for the meeting?"

Renxiang considered her for a moment. "The third hour, the communications array requires the light of dawn to activate, and three hours time should be sufficient to prepare. Your time until then is free."

She had a lot of people to check on, Ling Qi thought, and things to consider as well. "What will you be doing with your time, Lady Cai?

"Recovering and cultivating," the heiress replied immediately. "In addition to penning a number of missives and messages."

Ling Qi glanced at Renxiang out of the corner of her eye. "I'll be there at the first hour."

"As you wish. We may cultivate and speak simultaneously if need be," Renxiang allowed

Ling Qi smiled faintly as they turned away from each other. That was a sentiment she could get behind at least.

"Of course that's the thing you'd bond over," Sixiang sighed in exasperation.

Ling Qi felt the humor drain away as she left the debriefing room though. She dearly hoped that everyone was alright.


***​




The Medicine Hall was a hive of frantic activity. Disciples rushed back and forth with supplies and equipment. Potent medicinal energies suffused the air, filling it with conflicting scents of flowers and spices and blood.

Ling Qi stood in the entrance hall, one among many. On the wall before them was posted a roll of names. There were fifteen of them in total now, but Ling Qi knew that more had been added since the first posting. It was a list of the Inner Sect Disciples who had died.

There was a name there that she recognized.

Shen Hu had been assigned to the mission below, to defend the construction and formations disciples. Already there were rumors, a whisper from one of the production disciples he had defended. He'd taken one of the tunnel entrances and held it against all comers until the defensive arrays behind him had finished, and Elder Jiao's project had snapped into place.

It seemed he had really taken the Bloody Moon's Dream to heart, Ling Qi thought absently.

It was a relief that it hadn't been someone she knew better. That it had not been Li Suyin or Su Ling, or even Xuan Shi. The thought shamed her, but it was there all the same. She had liked Shen Hu well enough but… there had just never been time to get to know him better. Now she never would. It was a bitter feeling.

"I don't think its wrong exactly, to think that way," Sixiang whispered. "It's not wrong to be glad others aren't gone."

It was probably a little wrong that she didn't feel something more though, Ling Qi thought. He was only an acquaintance, but shouldn't she feel something more? Something more than a muted sadness?
"I don't think there is a right way to feel," Sixiang said carefully.

"Ling Qi?"

Ling Qi looked away as someone called her name. There was Li Suyin, looking haggard and exhausted wearing a physician's smock, spattered with blood and other things.

"Li Suyin? Are you alright?" Ling Qi asked, stepping out of the crowd. She scanned her friend for injury, silver gleaming in her eyes. She saw only exhaustion. There was the echo of burns, and the lingering marks of cleansed shishigui corruption. "Were you one of the ones down there?"

Li Suyin nodded tiredly and swayed. Ling Qi was at her side in an instant, catching her before she could fall. At some point, Ling Qi noted absently, her friend had reached appraisal stage in her cultivation.

"I was, but I wanted to keep helping. Went to the Medical wards after," Li Suyin muttered as Ling Qi helped her move out of people's way. "Elder sent me away, ordered rest."

Ling Qi grimaced, that sounded like Li Suyin alright. "Was Su Ling down there too?" She asked, dreading the answer.

Li Suyin leaned against her, eyes drifting shut. "No."

That was something. "Li Suyin, what happened down there?"

"They just kept coming," Suyin whispered, her voice barely audible over the noise of the hall. "They fought and they died and it just didn't stop. Dying only made them stronger."

Suyin paused and took a shuddering breath. "Elder Jiao was fighting, and it-it felt like we were the infection, and they the body fighting back."

"There was so much pain."

Ling Qi thought back to the fourth realm she had encountered down there. The nails driven into it's flesh, and the self mortification she had witnessed in their rituals. She tried to imagine what it would feel like, to be in the presence of something like that except scaled to fight an Elder, to match the thing that had come from over the Southern mountains.

Ling Qi felt a chill.

"C'mon, let me help you get home," Ling Qi said quietly, turning her friend toward the door. "You should rest."

She cast one more look at the list, eyes scanning down the names. She paused briefly as her name caught the last name on the list. She hadn't noticed it before, focusing on Shen Hu.

It seemed Yan Renshu had died down in the dark as well.

At least she didn't have to feel bad for not mourning him.


***​



"It feels a little surreal, doesn't it?" Ling Qi asked quietly.

They sat together in Renxiang's study. The furniture had been pushed aside to make room, and yet, even then Renxiang's rooms were a study in clockwork precision. Everything spaced just so. Her liege sat across from her at the center of part of the repeating geometric pattern in the carpet.

Ling Qi sat opposite, in the center of another. Briefly, she had considered seating herself just a touch to the right, but she didn't have the energy for jokes.

She kept remembering that list of names. Had she known any of the others on that list, Ling Qi wondered, spoken to them and immediately forgotten their faces?

"We were already at war," Cai Renxiang said quietly.

"It didn't really feel like it before," Ling Qi said. "The barbarians just got a sucker punch in, using a method we didn't expect. That was what it felt like, didn't it. They weren't a real threat. That's why we were still worrying about Sect ranks and the Elders were still taking volunteers instead of giving orders and…"

Cai Renxiang's fingers tightened on her knees, and Ling Qi fell silent. For anyone else it would have been nothing, but she could read the frustration and regret in the girls posture. Their talk from before the mission felt a little wrong now.

"You weren't acting differently from anyone else in the Sect," Sixiang whispered. "It's not like anyone else treated it differently until it was."

"Matters have indeed escalated beyond heightened raiding," Cai Renxiang replied blandly. "Tell me Ling Qi, are your spirits well?"

Ling Qi ducked her head and accepted the deflection from the subject. She tried to focus inward as she organized her thoughts. The cultivation of Playful Muse's Rapport was not coming easily to her right now though.

"Probably not much use where your going," Sixiang muttered, uncharacteristically bitter.
"Zhengui is well. He's very tough, even the injuries he took will be better in a couple of days, now that the impurity is out of his system," Ling Qi replied. She had visited them after their release from the physicians. Zhengui seemed satisfied by his performance for once. "Hanyi… she'll be fine too, given time."

"I believe you had an event planned for her, will her wounds allow it to go forward?" Cai Renxiang asked. Faint radiance flickered in the room, casting shadows at perfect right angles.

"She won't let it stop her, even if it takes awhile to heal, it's not like she actually needs her throat to sing, any more than I need my flute to play," Ling Qi said quietly. She was confident in Hanyi because hanyi was confident in her. Half of healing the body came from the mind. Her eyes strayed to Renxiang's own bandaged throat. "What about you? I saw those stains on your domain weapon."

Renxiang continued to breath steadily and rhythmically in her mediation. "The stains will out. It is merely a matter of time. Their resistance is vexing however."

"Do you think your mother will notice?" Ling Qi asked quietly. It wasn't the real question. Obviously the duchess will notice, but will she react.

"They are not permanent," Cai Renxiang said. Ling Qi didn't comment on the faint tremor that entered the girls voice. "We performed above any reasonable expectations, given the situation."

Did they perform above the Duchess' expectations though, Ling Qi wondered. She had to hope that they at least met them.

Of course that left aside the matter she had been avoiding. After the Medine Hall, she had hesitated. She had almost gone back to the Elders.

But… if there was a chance to make those lists shorter in the future, shouldn't she take it?

"I think it's the right thing to do," Sixiang whispered. "But I have to wonder if you can really succeed."

Thanks for the vote of confidence, Ling Qi thought wryly.

"Hey I'll do what I can," they chuckled.

"Lady Cai," Ling Qi said, speaking up carefully. "Before we start preparing, I think there is something I should tell you."

Maybe it was her tone, but when Renxiang opened her eyes, Ling Qi thought she saw a hint of dread there, even with the radiance shining from her pupils.
...She wasn't that bad, was she?


***​




The court of Xiangmen was overwhelming.

It was not merely the crowd of cultivators standing in, the very weakest of which matched or exceeded her cultivation. She had endured crowds before after all. Last years tournament had let her experience that. It was not the baleful radiance shining down from the throne above, the terrible pressure that crushed down on her shoulders. After the attack, she could endure the mere passive attention of the Duchess.

No, it was Xiangmen itself.

It thrummed with power, this place. Even projected here by the formations device, Xiangmen itself threatened to overwhelm her. Each of the twelve bone columns that supported the ceiling hummed with a primal beat. The stamp of hooves, the howl of wolves, the shrieks of birds. It resonated in her ears, cacophonous and distracting. The march of all the forest enraged. The disc of marble which made up the floor of the court, held in tightly curled branches, practically vibrated with uncounted ages of formationwork.

The air was thin here. There was so little wind, but solar and lunar qi were thick here. So thick that even as she watched, motes of it congealed into the fluttering forms of faeries that drifted about providing light to the court.

Then there was the tree itself. Stretching out in the sky beyond the court, immense branches supported a canopy of leaves that stretched for kilometers in every direction, penetrated by dappled beams of sunlight. There was power in the ancient bark that supported the platform, power in the sail sized leaves that drifted down on the wind, power in the immense branch which supported the Duchess throne. It was a quiet, steady, and patient power. Power fit to endure the world's ending.

It was one thing to know that Xiangmen had been here before the Sage, before the Diviner, before even the meanest of recorded history.

It was another to feel it.

Ling Qi shook out the distractions from her thoughts as she followed Cai Renxiang down the central carpet which led upward to the Duchess' throne, sheltered in the curl of a single branch, so high above. She maintained a perfectly appropriate distance. Five paces behind, no more or less.

She didn't let herself meet any of the many gazes around her, instead she focused on the speech in her head, the one she had rehearsed with Renxiang in those early hours of the morning.

But although she kept her eyes low, she could not help but fix her gaze on the throne. Cai Shenhua sat straight backed in her throne, and around burned a colorless sun. It was difficult to make out more than her silhouette. At her side was the minister Linqin, dressed in a resplendent rose pink gown, a circlet of roses adorned her wavy brown hair. Her hands were hidden in voluminous sleeves, and she looked down upon them with a cold and blank expression.

At the base of the throne branch were arrayed warriors in shining and ornate plate. Plume's of blinding white rose from their helms, and their faces were hidden behind blank steel masks, with only eye holes for features.

One among them stood out, a slender woman as tall as Shenhua herself, who stood in the direct center of the path leading up to the Duchess. In her hands, held point down to the floor was thin naked blade inscribed with etchings of herons in glittering diamond.

Renxiang had coached her on the important faces. Heron General Xia Ren was the Duchess' primary military commander and among her most loyal supporters. Ling Qi's eyes strayed briefly to the sides, she marked out the representatives of each of the count clans, the ambassador from the empress, and a few other notables.

Cai Renxiang knelt, Liming pooling around her feet, and Ling Qi followed her, lowering her head to almost touch the rich red carpet.

"My daughter, I see that you bear the scars of war. Rumor swirls and messengers fly, scattering tales of matters in the mountains," Cai Shenhua spoke, and her voice was light and sensual, almost idle in tone, despite her posture. "I would have you provide me with clear vision on events."

"Honored Mother, it pleases this dutiful daughter that I might be your eyes and ears in this matter," Cai Renxiang said. Her voice rang clearly as she raised her head. She remained kneeling, but no longer in full kowtow. Nonetheless, the faint rasp in her voice was all too audible in the silence of the court.

"On yesterday morn, we set out on a mission from the Sect. A punitive expedition against a barbarian gathering. Thought to be a trap, the Sect spun an ambush to entrap the enemies scheme, and slay those that were gathered there," Cai Renxiang said, speaking with machine-like precision. "My retainer and I chose to join the initial assault in order to bring victory to the name of the Cai. She was chosen for the role of scout and spotter, and I given to be the tip of the spear."

"It does not appear to have went well," Minister Linqin said evenly.

"Baroness Ling performed most admirably in her role, reaching and observing the meeting without detection," Cai Renxiang continued. "We discovered that it was a meeting between factions, discussing tribal alliance, attended by those allied with the underground beasts. They revealed a cache of potent material, known as starstone, as a token for alliance."

Shenhua hummed to herself, and Renxiang immediately fell silent as the faint tap of a fingernail on wood echoed through the court. "How large, precisely was this cache, Renxiang?"

"Eight meters and thirty seven centimeters in diameter," her liege answered immediately. Ling Qi wondered how she had been able to measure it so closely. "It was roughly spherical in shape."

The radiance above pulsed as whispers broke out throughout the court. The jewel encrusted representative of the Bao stroked his beard, a glint of avarice in his eyes. The Luo representative's hand tightened on the hilt of his blade and he looked ready to spit. The Wang representative, who looked like a much older, much hairier Wang Chao, drew together bushy brows that threatened to devour his eyes. The Meng representative, a thin and willowy woman in heavy stylized makeup merely pursed her lips. The Jia representative tugged nervously at his oiled beard.

"I see, this asset was denied to them?" Shenhua asked.

"The starstone itself was, thanks to the Baroness Ling," Cai Renxiang said carefully. They had talked about this, in order for her words to have even a little weight she had to be talked up a little.

"Continue your recounting of events," Cai Shenhua said flippantly, waving her hand.

And Renxiang did. In great and precise detail, she described the events of the raid. Her own battle in the Caldera, Ling Qi's stand against the bulk of the barbarian forces, the clash of Elders. She described their escape, and the coming of the thing in the south. She described the hatching of the starstone and the spirit within.

By the time she was done, the atmosphere of the court had darkened, and there was much grumbling and whispers among the courtiers. At least until Shenhua raised her hand, silencing them all at a gesture.

"It seems that you became involved in matters significantly above your head, my daughter," Shenhua said. "It is good that you sustained only minor injuries."

Ling Qi saw a tiny bit of tension bleed out of her liege.

"But, you're report is not done, is it?" The Duchess, asked, and Ling Qi had to work not to swallow nervously. "You have brought your retainer here today. I assume she has some important insight?"

"Baroness Ling was able to observe certain events with far more clarity, due to her role and position," Renxiang said. "I thought it prudent to allow her describe them herself."

"Hm, I see," Cai Shenhua did not sound particularly approving or disapproving. Minister Linqin looked as if she was about to speak up, but she fell silent as a Radiant hand clasped her own. It was a bizarrely intimate gesture, given the setting. "You have not erred in your judgment thus far. Baroness Ling, you may raise your head and speak."

Ling Qi could hardly breath as she straightened up. She scanned the crowd. Most seemed indifferent to her, merely eyeing her with idle interest. They didn't really expect anything of interest from her. They thought Shenhua was merely indulging her daughter. A few eyed her with something more like interest or disdain, but it was only a few.

Of the representatives, the Bao gave her an encouraging smile. The Wang representative seemed generally approving, though it was hard to read his face behind his beard and brows. The Luo and the Jia watched with disinterest. The Meng frowned at her but… didn't seem too hostile, actually.

The ambassador from the peaks, a man who reminded her of an older Kang Zihao, simply continued to observe in silence, his arms crossed over his chest.

Ling Qi prepared herself, together with Renxiang she had decided…

[] To appeal to military pragmatism. If their enemies were divided there was no need to unite them. (+Wang, +Jia approval, -Meng approval)
[] To appeal to culture. She spoke a variant of the hill tribe tongue, and bore other markers of civilization. Better to bring into the fold as the Weilu and the Xi once did. (+Meng, +Luo approval, -Diao approval)
[] To appeal to profit. If there is another force out there civilizing the southernmost tribes, perhaps there is gain to be had? (+Bao, +Diao approval, -Wang approval)
 
Turn 10: Arc 2-2
It was a frightening thing to have the attention of the court of Emerald Seas. It was a pressure weighing down on her. A static skittering across her mind and a prickling on her skin. It reminded her of the last time she had faced power like this. It made her wonder what in the world had possessed her to want to speak here, and why Cai Renxiang had agreed to allow her to.

But Ling Qi did not intend to let fear control her again.

"Because of my role as scout, I was able to observe the barbarian meeting in more detail than may have made it into reports," Ling Qi began smoothly. She kept her eyes fixed downward, using the point where the branch holding the throne pierced the floor to hold her gaze. Ling Qi kept her voice clear and steady. "I believe that I may be able to share some details which may have been judged beneath notice, your highness."

They had practiced this part. There was no avoiding the appearance of going over the Sect in some degree. However it could be mitigated with the right words.

"You consider your judgement superior then?" Diao Linqin asked mildly.

"My lady and I believe that viewing certain matters from multiple points of view is valuable," Ling Qi said humbly. She did not raise her eyes, or even shift her posture. She held totally and respectfully still under the scrutiny of the court.

Cai Shenhua's chuckle was deep and throaty. Ling Qi hoped that the approval she heard in it wasn't just her imagination. "That is enough justification young lady. Speak, and I will decide whether you were correct."

"The meeting was not simply between tribes," Ling Qi continued without missing a beat. "Two of the groups present specifically referred to themselves as 'confederations' and made no mention of tribal affiliation. The last group was the tribe which had brought the Underground people to the meeting."

Shishigui was a local name, she had no idea if anyone at the capital would recognize it.

"It is not unusual for the tribes to form alliances," The Luo representative grunted. "But she is correct that such terminology is not common. The last time the barbarians spoke of such a thing…"

"Ogodei," The Wang representative grunted.

"But the meeting was not harmonious," Ling Qi continued once she was certain that there were no more interjections. "The underground allied barbarians were suing for the aid. The Starstone was their bargaining piece. The Twelve Star confederation seemed intrigued by this. It is the other, who called themselves White Sky, that I wish to speak of though."

Ling Qi had to stop herself from licking her lips. This was the tricky part.

"The White Sky had the least numerous representation. There were only two. One was a Cloud tribesman, whose mask style and equipment led me to believe belonged to the furthest south tribes. The other was a woman who was clearly not of the Cloud Tribes. I do not believe her to have been a prisoner either, given the disparity in power between the two."

"What makes you certain of this," The Meng woman asked. Her voice was soft and whispery, barely audible behind the fluttering fan which shielded her face.

"She lacked the beast bond of the tribes, and her features were foreign. Neither imperial nor tribe," Ling Qi continued carefully. "Her garments as well, bore the marks of civilized hands. Nothing to match imperial finery of course, but not the rough rough furs and stolen patchworks which the barbarians use. She did not seem to speak their common tongue either."

"Of those, only a lack of beast bond is convincing," Diao Linqin said. "And even then it is known that some of the southern tribes behave strangely, compared to their kin."

"If it were only such circumstantial things, I would agree, Prime Minister," Ling Qi replied. "However, the White SKy also showed little interest in the starstone, and what is more not even slight interest in alliance. In fact, the Twelve Stars seemed to regard the woman in particular with the same distrust with which the underground envoy was viewed. Together, this gave me an inkling that she may have been an outsider as well."

"But," Ling Qi continued swiftly before she could be interrupted. "I only became firm in belief after the foreigner attempted to speak to me in the middle of the battle, using a maneuver that made it appear as if she was containing me, but which conveniently shielded both myself and my spirits from attack."

There was silence in the wake of her words, and here Ling Qi could not help but swallow nervously.

"Hoh, interesting."

Cai Shenhua's words echoed in the vast hall, and Ling Qi felt her shoulders buckle as twin beams of radiance fixed upon her back. She didn't have to look up, she could see the limitless pools of radiance in her mind's eye, the punctures in the human face worn by the Light that was Shenhua.

"It is my belief that the foreigner saw some similarity in our arts. "Ling Qi croaked. It was hard to breath, sweat broke out on her skin. It felt something was intruding in her skull, precise and clinical. "If it may please the court to know, I practice an art passed down directly from the ice spirit of White Cloud Peak, and am as a sister to that spirit's daughter, now that my teacher has passed. I think the foreigner mistook me for kin of some kind."

Someone said something, but it was hard to hear. One of the representatives murmured something about honorable lineages. The Imperial Ambassador, said something less kind. Someone else said something sniping back. Tears sprang up in the corners of her eyes as the pressure mounted. Ling Qi's arms shook as she struggled to stay upright and kneeling.

She didn't bow.

"You stated that this barbarian did not speak the tribe's common tongue. How then did you communicate?" A voice, Diao Linqin's cut through the pressure, pale pink rose petals closed around the burning radiance that threatened to crush her, loving and covetous.

Through bleary eyes, Ling Qi saw the throne. Shenhua's radiance had grown less diffuse. Ling Qi could see her now, leaning forward in her seat. She wore a sheer and scandalous gown, a pure white thing with a deep cut out that could not be called a neckline. A deep 'V' that went all the way down to her navel, with only thin strips of fabric preserving a hint of modesty. A feathery white pibo floated around her shoulders, and coiled around her bare and muscular arms.

Diao Linqin's hand rested on her back. Or at least she thought it did. Nothing aside from blazing light was visible above the Duchess' shoulders.

"Due to some good fortune and scholarship, this one had reason to learn some of the old hill tribe tongues," Ling Qi whispered. "Though the language the foreigner spoke was not the same, I understood enough to have some comprehension."

The worst part, Ling Qi thought absently was that she was almost certain that the Duchess had not been angry, or even excited. Her words had said it all.

That had only been interest.

"She offered aid I think, and asked after my…. Lineage," Ling Qi continued, despite the dryness of her throat. "I did not have time to decipher much, Lady Cai was battling the underground beast even then, but I sang my teacher's Name, and it seemed to distress her. She threw a sliver of iron from her weapon at me before disappearing to flee the battle."

"I do have to wonder why you bothered with even that much for a barbarian," the Imperial Ambassador said.

"We were already outnumbered," Ling Qi said. "It seemed foolish to bring another peak third realm into a battle in which we were already struggling."

"Reasonable enough," the Wang representative grunted. "No use holding principal above effectiveness."

"An intelligent action," agreed the Luo, casting a sour look at the ambassador.

The ambassador sniffed dismissively. He obviously disagreed.

"Produce the sliver," Cai Shenhua spoke and all other conversation stopped.

Ling Qi didn't hesitate. She was only an image, here in the court, but she doubted that would matter to Shenhua. The sliver appeared, painfully cold in her palm as she presented it. Before Ling Qi's eyes, it jerked into the air, and radiance crawled across the iron, it sunk into invisible imperfections and cracks, suffusing the item.

However, so close to what was happening, Ling Qi saw Shenhua's radiance pause, stymied if only for a fraction of a second by the cold darkness that slept in the metal. She might have imagined it really, so brief it was. The sliver dropped back into her hand.

"It is good that you brought this matter to my attention," Cai Shenhua pronounced. "It is interesting. An organically developed escape talisman, meant to draw the smaller piece the larger one. Mistaken for kin indeed."

Her amusement was echoed, if less enthusiastically by the court. Ling Qi felt Cai renxiang's eyes on her back. This was going to be the hard part.

"Is it possible that she was not wholly mistaken?" Ling Qi said quietly. She steeled herself against the returning pressure of the courts attention. "Speaking the tongue she did, her civilized accoutrements… The tribes of the hills are ancestors to many of us, are they not? Enemies of the Cloud tribes, even before they were brought into the fold by the Weilu and the Hui."

Ling Qi felt the whisper of steel on her skin first, the caress of a blade, whisper soft yet lethal all the same. She caught movement from the figure in gleaming steel in front of her. The General Xia Ren was looking at her now, rather than staring straight ahead.

"You are suggesting something absurd, young lady." Diao Linqin said cooly.

"Not so much," Whispered the Meng woman, the fan in her hands fluttering. "It is simply a truth too many are eager to forget."

The Luo representative gave the Meng a sidelong look, and gave a grunt of agreement.
"Young Miss," spoke the man with the Jia, who seemed uncomfortable. "It is true that the lotus grows from mud, but it is not the mud, to suggest otherwise is insulting."

"Pfa, fancy nonsense," the Wang representative. "Truth is truth. You're thinking we need not fight these "White Sky' yet girl?"

"I think they may be amenable to peace in a way that the cloud barbarians are not," Ling Qi said carefully. "It is true that we are not primitive tribesman, like our ancestors, but may the same not be true? If, as it seems, they grew from the same mud which we did… I only believe the evidence of my eyes. They are not friends of the Twelve Stars and their monster. Perhaps we might find common ground in shared ancestry and enemies?"

"It is known that the Xuan, our allies, have dealings with foreigners of sufficient culture," Cai Renxiang said quietly. Her support had been clear, but putting it into words helped. "Even if it proves impossible, it may give us time to finish our first foes."

"It is a tenuous link at best," Diao Linqin said. Her lips pursed irritably, and she looked down toward Shenhua. "However…"

"It is difficult to say that it is wholly wrong, given our recent conquest. Is it not, my rose?" Shenhua chuckled.

Diao Linqin looked like a woman who had recently lost an argument, and was still less than pleased about it.

Ling Qi just felt confused. She was happy to see that others in the court all looked confused too.

"It was my intention to save this announcement for years end, timed with the arrival of the first year's tribute" Cai Shenhua said idly, leaning back to lounge on her throne once more. "But given recent events, it seems necessary to alter the timetable."

"Your highness, might I ask you to clarify?" The Bao representative, who had previously been silent and smiling asked. He looked a touch worried. It was the sort of look Cai Renxiang had worn when Ling Qi mentioned this whole matter.

"I have secured the surrender and tribute of the foes beneath Xiangmen," Cai Shenhua said as if she were discussing the weather. "The people of Ha'yth'kai, as they call themselves. The barbarians of the underground lands organize themselves into city states. These have surrendered and agreed to become tributaries of the Emerald Seas. Others will follow. The words spoken during my strolls have been most effective."

"Obviously, negotiating surrender and integration is possible," Diao Linqin said, sounding aggrieved. "However, treating barbarians as kin is a step too far."

"Perhaps," Cai Shenhua said lightly. "Baroness Ling, do you truly have confidence in your words?"

Ling Qi swallowed, but she could hardly say no. She tried to keep her thoughts clear of the questions bubbling up. "Yes your highness."

"Then, you will have a prominent place in the delegation. That sliver is bound to a location in the central wall. A meeting point no doubt. You will begin making preparations for a journey," the Duchess said easily. "General Xia?"

"Yes your highness?" Xia Ren answered, and it was as deep and echoing that it seemed as if she spoke from the bottom of a well.

"Prepare One hundred of your warriors and begin heading south. "Regardless of this matter, it is clear that the south of the province requires my direct attention," The Duchess lax tone hardened into steel by the time she finished. "And, select one of your adjutants to accompany my daughter and her retainer."

"As for you Renxiang," Cai Shenhua said. "You continue to perform well. This pleases me. I shall see to providing further resources for your growth and cultivation of subordinates. Should this diplomatic effort bear fruit, I shall consider granting you a boon."

Left unsaid was how badly failure would reflect on them.

Ling Qi finally lowered her head as attention left her. Behind her Cai Renxiang gave her thanks.

She really hoped that she hadn't made a mistake.

Emerald Seas Nobility: -1

-Luo Clan & Vassals: 1
--Imperial Conservatives (20%): -2
--Imperial Moderates (20%): 0
--Weilu Moderates (55%): 1
--Old Tribes (5%): 2

-Wang Clan and Vassals: 1
--Imperial Moderates(40%): 0
--Imperial Conservatives (10%): -2
--Weilu Moderates (50%): 1

-Meng Clan: -1

-Diao Clan -1

-Jia Clan: 0

-Bao clan: 1

AN: So hope everyones ready for a roadtrip next turn. In any case, this is a good place to put a vote for what precisely you want for your new accessory talisman your purchasing. Vote for a derived statistic and a form for the talisman to take.

[] Derived Statistic
-[] Form

An example would be

[] Physical Armor
-[] Bracelet

You won't be voting for exactly what it ends up looking like but pictures and discussion may influence that outcome.
 
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Turn 10: Arc 3-1 Preparations
"Spiritual Cultivation | 1212 Dice
10 7 3 7 1 9 9 6 8 10 8 5 9 2 5 6 4 3 2 6 9 10 2 2 4 7 1 3 9 4 4 10 9 7 7 1 6 9 6 5 2 6 7 7 1 1 1 2 10 4 3 10 1 4 5 9 4 6 7 5 3 2 3 8 4 5 9 6 3 4 4 4 9 2 8 7 3 5 6 2 8 10 9 8 1 8 1 5 4 7 8 6 6 1 7 1 10 8 3 2 5 10 2 6 5 8 1 2 9 2 4 2 8 6 2 8 6 8 1 7 8 9 8 7 5 6 4 6 2 10 2 10 7 9 4 8 8 3 4 5 8 3 8 5 5 2 8 6 3 6 4 6 10 8 7 1 5 3 9 4 1 4 9 1 7 6 7 8 7 7 5 5 10 8 3 4 4 5 3 4 4 10 7 2 8 4 6 5 6 9 5 2 6 3 1 4 3 9 1 3 8 4 9 5 2 3 4 3 6 3 10 7 9 6 5 7 4 9 10 7 9 6 3 9 1 9 8 7 4 3 10 1 9 7 7 10 6 5 10 7 7 8 9 1 3 1 10 4 4 1 7 7 2 6 9 1 10 3 5 2 6 2 7 10 7 4 4 5 1 10 2 1 7 4 3 2 3 9 3 1 9 8 2 5 7 10 9 2 6 8 7 8 1 8 3 7 7 9 8 6 10 4 2 5 3 7 2 2 3 8 10 9 8 8 9 10 8 8 2 3 7 3 9 10 9 2 1 5 5 6 4 9 5 8 10 9 7 6 10 2 2 8 6 10 2 5 2 4 6 10 8 4 10 5 10 7 1 10 9 7 7 8 4 6 1 9 10 1 9 5 6 2 5 5 2 8 5 1 6 4 2 5 4 6 5 3 1 1 8 9 7 1 2 8 1 2 3 4 9 7 10 8 8 3 2 3 10 10 1 3 9 9 7 10 6 2 6 3 9 2 10 4 9 6 9 10 6 9 7 6 10 4 8 3 4 8 6 3 8 9 5 2 4 4 9 4 4 8 6 5 6 8 9 10 8 3 6 6 1 4 2 6 1 9 5 3 3 1 3 8 5 10 10 5 5 8 7 7 7 10 5 1 5 1 9 4 2 2 7 9 9 7 5 4 2 2 1 2 1 9 6 4 9 7 7 7 6 5 4 6 3 4 1 8 8 5 10 6 2 10 9 4 5 5 6 2 3 2 10 5 1 6 2 7 4 8 4 2 9 10 4 7 2 5 1 6 7 8 8 1 4 2 6 5 8 6 4 5 3 3 6 3 9 5 5 2 2 7 3 3 9 6 6 4 10 1 4 7 7 3 2 5 9 1 1 5 7 8 1 10 4 10 2 1 1 10 10 10 10 6 8 3 4 3 2 7 6 10 8 7 2 1 5 1 4 4 8 7 6 3 10 6 8 8 8 1 10 10 10 2 2 7 4 10 7 1 6 1 2 5 3 2 2 5 9 8 6 6 4 1 9 1 8 4 4 7 2 3 10 8 10 8 5 1 8 3 4 8 5 8 7 2 6 1 3 8 5 3 1 9 3 2 10 10 9 4 7 3 1 2 3 9 7 3 10 5 1 8 3 1 4 10 5 10 8 10 8 2 4 2 1 5 10 1 4 2 6 4 1 1 8 10 7 6 5 3 7 4 3 7 7 8 3 9 5 8 8 9 10 5 6 5 8 10 8 10 8 4 9 6 1 3 9 4 4 9 4 5 1 6 4 5 10 5 10 3 1 2 7 9 4 5 8 6 3 8 9 4 1 2 6 1 4 3 7 7 8 3 6 4 2 1 9 9 9 5 2 5 2 3 7 10 4 4 6 10 5 5 10 6 6 9 3 3 7 8 4 3 3 10 2 10 1 2 8 3 1 4 1 9 10 8 10 6 9 10 5 8 8 5 9 2 10 8 8 6 5 1 2 9 3 1 1 4 3 2 4 8 8 5 3 9 4 6 10 5 7 9 1 6 10 3 4 5 5 7 10 8 8 2 9 1 6 5 2 3 1 4 6 2 5 7 5 1 9 2 7 9 7 1 3 7 2 3 8 3 5 4 5 10 6 1 6 3 9 4 10 7 8 3 9 7 5 4 6 2 1 4 5 1 6 3 2 2 9 5 8 3 2 2 6 9 5 10 10 10 7 2 7 7 4 4 6 8 6 3 3 9 8 5 1 6 3 9 3 2 10 6 4 9 4 7 6 3 3 10 9 6 2 10 4 8 1 4 10 3 9 6 5 6 10 7 6 5 1 9 6 7 6 8 4 5 4 6 9 7 3 1 5 7 5 10 3 3 1 4 2 8 8 9 10 5 5 1 1 1 8 9 9 10 6 7 10 3 2 5 9 3 10 10 6 10 4 7 2 1 5 4 10 2 7 9 8 8 8 10 7 6 1 4 7 7 6 6 10 3 2 8 2 2 10 9 4 6 7 5 5 5 6 2 10 1 5 4 3 5 8 4 9 4 9 2 10 6 9 9 6 2 4 8 7 7 2 6 8 6 1 4 2 3 3 9 6 1 6 5 4 3 3 1 1 5 5 7 1 4 8 5 7 6 3 5 2 4 5 2 4 7 9 10 3 3 6 5 9 3 9 8 1 6 8 10 5 7 10 3 10 7 7 10 3 9 9 3 7 10 10 10 1 7 3 5 6 10 3 8 1 7 10 9 4 3 1 3 1 3 7 4 3 10 3 10 9 9 1 1 5 3 4 9 7 10 2 9 1 2 6 10 1 7 2 5 | 606 Successes

Rerolling 117
10 3 4 1 10 4 7 8 5 4 2 10 7 9 4 6 8 4 6 3 6 2 9 7 6 3 6 3 10 10 1 1 8 10 10 2 4 6 6 2 8 8 4 2 4 7 7 4 4 6 10 7 6 9 10 6 8 5 9 2 2 2 4 6 9 10 7 4 6 8 9 5 8 7 3 8 8 2 7 6 8 8 6 5 9 5 10 1 10 1 8 1 3 8 6 5 9 3 4 10 5 10 10 5 10 10 5 2 10 8 7 3 10 6 7 5 8 | 47x2=94 Successes

700x1.1=770 Successes

913/6000


Physical Cultivation | 1616 Dice
7 5 8 8 10 4 9 4 6 1 6 6 2 7 10 7 2 9 8 9 8 4 5 9 3 4 4 9 5 8 2 3 3 2 6 7 4 10 10 8 10 9 4 3 2 6 4 5 1 2 8 2 5 1 4 1 7 8 8 9 7 7 5 6 2 9 9 8 2 1 10 2 7 1 3 5 8 5 5 6 7 10 2 8 7 1 1 4 5 2 6 10 5 2 8 10 8 4 8 10 4 1 2 5 9 10 1 7 8 5 3 9 5 7 10 1 5 9 5 4 10 8 9 4 10 2 3 5 3 5 9 6 3 4 10 3 10 2 10 9 1 2 8 5 3 6 4 4 2 8 10 2 8 9 4 5 10 4 7 3 4 9 1 5 9 4 10 7 8 10 2 1 8 9 10 9 1 9 10 10 4 5 4 2 10 1 7 7 4 3 4 3 5 6 3 8 10 2 6 2 10 6 9 1 10 8 4 9 3 6 6 7 8 8 1 4 2 4 3 5 2 8 7 3 5 9 9 8 5 1 9 8 3 4 8 6 9 1 3 5 8 3 1 2 1 2 10 6 6 3 10 2 7 5 4 10 4 4 1 9 5 7 5 2 7 4 7 10 4 6 1 6 9 10 3 9 10 8 2 1 6 7 8 1 5 1 1 7 8 8 5 9 10 4 5 9 5 9 10 1 6 10 5 9 7 6 5 2 2 9 8 9 3 10 5 7 9 2 10 3 8 8 3 7 5 2 9 1 7 7 6 2 3 2 4 3 8 1 3 9 2 8 1 1 7 8 10 4 10 2 5 10 9 6 8 5 3 10 5 6 2 2 9 9 6 6 8 9 1 6 2 1 2 4 9 1 10 7 10 5 10 1 8 4 4 5 5 6 3 1 5 7 1 6 7 10 7 3 5 8 9 3 1 4 10 2 4 8 10 5 2 6 8 10 6 4 9 10 3 7 10 8 2 7 8 2 4 4 10 8 8 3 1 2 3 9 6 7 2 9 7 1 2 1 9 10 3 5 9 7 1 8 10 5 5 1 10 2 9 7 4 5 5 6 4 1 2 9 1 9 10 1 1 8 3 2 10 8 3 1 6 6 7 1 4 2 10 8 1 1 7 9 6 1 9 7 6 10 1 2 10 2 5 7 8 1 8 4 7 8 6 5 2 6 4 4 10 8 1 8 9 10 9 9 3 3 9 4 3 1 3 8 4 5 5 10 4 1 4 4 8 3 6 9 7 4 6 8 8 3 10 4 1 6 9 3 7 1 1 9 3 5 1 5 4 6 5 1 5 6 10 4 7 2 10 2 3 8 1 4 6 6 5 3 1 8 2 6 9 5 2 9 6 4 8 3 4 9 10 10 7 7 1 2 4 3 4 10 9 7 4 2 3 8 9 4 3 6 10 8 1 10 7 4 6 7 7 7 7 7 4 8 7 4 4 5 2 8 7 4 9 5 4 6 8 2 4 1 3 1 2 1 8 5 8 6 7 8 8 8 8 3 8 6 3 9 5 2 9 3 2 9 3 2 3 2 9 4 6 1 10 8 4 7 4 9 4 10 8 5 2 4 6 2 3 4 2 1 10 9 7 2 1 3 5 6 9 10 3 2 2 9 7 6 1 8 8 7 3 3 2 6 5 2 10 3 7 4 7 10 1 2 7 4 8 10 8 10 3 2 3 1 5 9 2 6 1 4 3 1 4 7 10 10 4 4 4 1 3 6 1 6 5 9 7 1 1 1 8 3 6 9 4 5 8 6 5 9 7 3 10 6 5 1 8 4 8 6 10 9 4 5 1 9 8 4 8 1 9 8 3 5 7 4 1 2 8 5 2 8 3 2 5 6 7 7 6 3 8 10 3 10 1 5 8 5 8 4 3 10 1 8 7 10 4 5 6 10 1 1 5 10 4 1 2 2 1 6 7 2 1 7 1 3 9 10 4 6 10 1 3 4 7 8 6 5 10 6 10 3 8 5 8 8 2 1 9 4 5 9 7 5 8 5 6 6 6 1 9 7 6 5 1 1 6 5 8 7 4 4 9 6 6 8 7 4 10 5 7 8 10 1 6 8 3 2 10 1 8 3 4 7 5 2 10 1 6 4 1 9 9 4 5 5 3 7 2 9 6 5 10 9 4 3 1 7 1 7 8 6 4 8 6 9 9 9 2 2 10 6 1 6 3 3 2 2 7 8 1 8 10 6 9 8 8 6 3 3 8 10 7 6 2 6 3 2 4 3 3 3 4 3 3 10 7 1 7 3 10 5 10 7 6 1 8 3 6 8 9 8 7 10 9 10 6 9 1 1 9 6 3 7 7 6 9 9 3 10 2 3 3 8 4 2 9 10 9 7 10 7 5 2 2 8 7 10 7 6 1 2 2 1 9 4 2 4 4 9 6 2 4 2 2 8 8 3 7 1 3 6 10 5 7 3 5 8 4 10 9 5 4 9 10 5 9 9 6 2 4 7 2 2 6 10 6 10 8 1 3 10 4 3 9 6 2 8 10 9 2 8 6 8 9 4 8 4 2 6 3 5 2 3 3 3 7 6 10 2 4 1 8 7 2 4 8 1 2 10 9 9 4 3 4 10 3 3 10 4 10 6 10 5 7 7 3 3 7 6 7 7 4 1 2 8 4 4 4 9 2 1 10 7 2 9 7 10 9 9 3 5 3 6 10 1 4 7 5 8 10 3 5 7 1 10 1 5 5 10 8 8 3 9 3 7 5 7 1 8 8 4 10 4 6 8 4 4 10 6 8 9 3 10 4 5 2 9 7 2 4 5 5 1 2 10 9 3 10 5 3 7 3 9 6 9 6 5 7 7 1 5 8 9 1 8 6 1 5 7 2 1 7 7 7 7 9 3 4 5 5 8 5 9 2 2 3 10 6 3 2 7 7 1 1 7 9 10 2 8 9 2 1 7 7 10 3 10 8 7 8 7 9 10 2 3 1 7 4 2 1 2 7 7 5 2 7 8 7 5 7 1 4 7 9 7 1 6 10 4 2 3 5 6 8 2 8 1 10 6 10 3 2 1 2 4 3 5 5 10 9 6 6 5 9 4 8 7 3 6 4 1 6 6 6 9 2 4 9 2 6 10 3 5 8 9 7 9 5 1 4 9 3 3 1 7 7 4 4 2 4 8 6 5 8 1 9 8 5 8 9 6 6 6 9 6 3 4 2 4 10 7 2 2 8 10 4 3 4 1 8 9 10 8 5 10 4 6 8 7 7 6 9 5 5 6 2 4 8 8 10 4 1 7 4 6 7 8 2 4 1 1 9 1 7 2 4 9 8 10 10 3 4 8 1 5 3 8 5 4 8 7 8 4 6 3 8 6 6 9 3 9 5 4 9 6 4 9 2 7 8 9 1 9 7 10 6 1 6 10 1 1 10 6 5 9 10 4 7 8 5 7 4 6 10 3 7 5 2 1 6 2 9 7 2 8 9 6 8 5 6 5 2 2 7 3 7 2 7 9 3 1 9 7 6 2 6 2 4 6 5 2 10 4 3 1 1 7 9 8 1 1 6 10 7 1 10 2 2 7 6 8 10 9 8 2 7 6 5 5 9 6 7 1 9 5 1 4 3 2 5 7 3 8 1 10 4 2 5 9 6 6 7 8 8 3 6 6 3 9 4 2 3 5 1 4 8 5 | 791 Successes

Rerolling 164
1 6 3 1 5 3 10 4 10 1 10 10 6 10 4 9 3 8 8 3 1 3 7 5 9 10 2 9 1 7 4 6 2 2 7 7 3 7 6 5 5 1 1 10 1 3 10 4 4 9 8 9 2 1 1 9 1 6 6 9 6 7 2 7 10 5 8 3 7 10 7 6 1 4 2 4 5 6 9 8 1 5 9 10 5 9 8 3 9 8 2 5 7 8 7 7 8 8 4 2 4 3 2 9 8 8 8 8 3 10 8 1 3 9 3 4 5 1 6 5 6 6 4 4 8 3 3 6 4 3 1 9 5 1 2 10 8 3 9 4 10 5 6 9 3 10 1 9 2 8 6 3 8 4 9 3 6 7 8 7 6 10 3 10 | 78x2=156 Successes

947x1.1=1041

3403/4800

Ling Qi Closed her eyes as she caught her breath. The dirt of the training field was warm under her feet, and the crackle of the small fires and patches of ice throughout the field loud in her ears. She was no Gan Guangli, but there was a certain peace in physical exertion. There was a comforting simplicity to it.

"Ho there, that last attack wasn't too much, right Miss Ling?" Wang Chao's voice boomed in her ears.

Ling Qi stood and smiled, idly brushing dust from her gown. She stood at the bottom of a crater, with the fading ripples of black lake water fading around her in the air. Zhengui stood beside her, ash streaming from both of his mouths. "Not at all Sir Wang!" she called to the top.

"The growth of your resilience is nothing short of absurd!" Wang Chao called back down, tapping the butt of his spear against the dirt. "I don't think any here will doubt tales of your exploits!"

"Hmph, who would dare call the sister of I, Zhen a liar," her little brother scoffed.

Ling Qi chuckled as the smoke and ash rising from the dirt under their feet began to form back into the wispy figures of dancers. The world blurred into a smear of conflicting color, and she stood on level ground once more, Zhengui beside her.

There were more people at the training field than there had been last month. Ling Qi recognized some of the new faces, people who had been in the caldera with them. Others had been brought along by those disciples. Ling Qi smiled politely to those looking their way.

"Hah, few enough," Wang Chao laughed, resting the haft of his spear on his shoulder.

"Lets not worry about rats in the corners during fun occasions, Sir Wang," Ling Qi said dismissively. "I hope you received some insights during our spar."

Wang Chao nodded agreeably. He was honestly not a complicated guy. Ling Qi wouldn't call him a friend, but she didn't dislike him either. "Your growth is a bit daunting Miss Ling. To think that you have already reach the Green Threshold," he shook his head, looking frustrated. "Perhaps I need to seek permission from the family to take on more dangerous Sect duties as well!"

"I am sure the Sect would appreciate it," Ling Qi said, resting her hand on Gui's blunt snout. She couldn't bring herself to recommend it though. The image of the list in the Medicine hall flashed through her thoughts. "I think you are making good progress toward Bronze Formation."

"Sparring you does offer some insights," Wang Chao said thoughtfully. "How does one break through the surface of a lake, when the waters only close behind your strike?"

There were plenty of pithy replies, but Ling Qi could recognize the tinge of internal philosophical dilemma.

"Gui thinks Mister Avalanche is doing good at trying," Gui said helpfully.

"Ha, perhaps," Wang Chao said. "In any case, do you wish another round Miss Ling?"

Ling Qi glanced up at the sun, noting its position, and put on an apologetic smile. "Not today I'm afraid. I have an appointment with Core Disciple Lin about a talisman commission."

When she had returned from the court to find that man's seal stamped on her request, she hadn't quite been surprised.

Wang Chao's eyebrows rose. "Well, don't let me keep you then!"


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On the path leading up to Lin Hai's home and workshop, Ling Qi stopped and blinked in surprise.

"Looks like Mr. Tailor double booked your appointment," Sixiang said in amusement.

There are on the porch which surrounded the main building, stood Li Suyin and Su Ling, the latter of whom stood with her arms crossed, looking suspiciously at everything around her.

"Ling Qi?" asked Li Suyin looking down at her from the porch. "What are you doing here?"

Ling Qi let out a huff, glancing at the closed door of the workshop. "I have an appointment. What about you? I'm surprised that you would be commissioning a talisman Li Suyin."

Her friend liked making her own things.

"She's getting a reward," Su Ling grunted, tapping her foot as Ling Qi mounted the stairs to join them on the porch.

"Really, it's too much, taking time from such an esteemed craftsman when I am not even spending my Contribution points," Li Suyin mumbled, plucking nervously at her gown.

"Oh come off it Suyin," Su Ling replied, rolling her eyes. "You're the one that kept the initiation ceremony going after the Elder and the core disciples got dragged into a fight."

Ling Qi's eyebrows rose as she turned to look at Suyin, whose fidgeting only got worse. "Suyin?"

"I was just the one who happened to be there," Li Suyin said, looking away. "I was only following Elder Jiao's instructions. Anyone could have done the same."

She yelped as Ling Qi rapped her knuckles against the top of the girl's head. "Quit that," Ling Qi said, rolling her eyes. "I thought you'd moved past that kind of false modesty Suyin."

"That's what I told her," Su Ling grumbled, eyeing the doorway.

"...It's just too much," Li Suyin murmured. "I-There were so many other stronger, more experienced disciples about. And… so many didn't make it, when someone like me did."

Ling Qi's expression softened a little. She knew that Suyin hadn't really seen a fight like that before, or its consequences. "Even so, saying you don't deserve a reward at all is too much Suyin."
"It's not just the talisman," Li Suyin said glumly.

"She's getting promoted into the upper five hundred," Su Ling said flippantly. "Can't think of anyone who deserves it more though."

Li Suyin huffed at her, it seemed that they had repeated this conversation several times already.

Before Ling Qi could reply further however, the door of the workshop slid open.

"Master Lin will see you now," Ling Qi's eyes fixed on the figure in the doorway as they spoke. She had glimpsed them before last time she had been here. The spirit wore the shape of a curvaceous woman with golden hair. She wore a gown of pale pink with a darker red underlayer.She had an air of deliberate dishevelment, her hair mussed and one side of her gown hanging carelessly off of her shoulders. Her feet were bare.

Five thick and fluffy golden tails waved lazily in the air behind her.

Su Ling was glaring again. The spirit didn't even glance at her.

Ling Qi bowed her head politely to the fox spirit. "Thank you Miss, is Sir Lin going to deal with both of us at once, or should I wait?"

"Master Lin will see you both," the fox spoke over her shoulder, she was already turning to lead them back inside.

Ling Qi shot Su Ling a quelling look and the girl huffed and turned her eyes away. Li Suyin gave her a concerned look but hurried to follow as Ling Qi followed the spirit inside.

"I do not think I received your name at my last visit," Ling Qi said politely. Glancing around at the darkened halls, it seemed as if the layout of the building had changed.

"You may call this one Luli," said the fox, not looking back. "It is as good a name as any for this one to wear."

"Tch, can't even give a straight answer to that," Su Ling grumbled under her breath.

The woman's gold furred ears flicked irritably. "Do not concern yourself little nightkin, you are certainly no kindred to the children of Dawn. It would please this one if we could exist in mutual silence."

Su Ling almost missed a step, but simply grunted and looked away when Li Suyin rested a hand on her shoulder.

The rest of the trip through the halls passed without words.

Soon they reached a room that Ling Qi found familiar, the wide chamber with the sliding doors at the rear. Luli vanished in a whirl of sunlight motes as they entered, leaving her friends looking around the room, searching for their host. Ling Qi remained quiet. She wasn't going to ruin Lin Hai's fun.

She had her grin behind her hand as the doors at the rear of the room jumped open with a bang, and her friends startled. Four beams of prismatic light shot forth from the dark interior, rays of light dancing across the room, and thick and colorful fog poured across the floor. The beams swept back, and they lit upon the figure in the center, casting him in stark relief.

Lin Hai stood there, one hand thrown out, the other splayed open in front of his face. He wore an open chested tunic of crimson silk, split down to his navel to show off his slim chest, a feathery black pibo wrapped around his shoulders, floating on unseen winds. He was also, fortunately, wearing much less tight pants, instead going for flowing silk that flared widely about his ankles and pointed slippers.

"Greetings to you, O seekers of beauty!" said the flamboyant man, lowering his hand to show his grinning face. He had a bit of color to his lips this time. "Lin Hai, weaver of the Dawn, welcomes you to his sanctum!"

"I wonder if I could pull off something like that," Sixiang mused.

Ling Qi brought her hands together, applauding politely politely as her friends stared blankly ahead. "It is good to see you again, Senior Brother Lin."

Li Suyin managed to bow as her brain caught up. "S-Senior Brother Lin, it is an honor to be allowed to make use of your time."

Su Ling's face was blank. It was the same sort of face she wore when Ling Qi invited her to do things.

Lin Hai chuckled, brushing the blue frosted tips of his hair out of his eyes as the light and fog faded away and more normal lighting filled the room. "No, no, it is always the honor of the craftsmen to perform his work," he reprimanded lightly. "Raise your head young lady, I'll have no bowing and scraping here."

"Ah, as you say senior brother," Li Suyin said, raising her head. She was trying so hard to retain her composure, but Ling Qi could tell that she was having a hard time categorizing Lin Hai. "Um, how precisely are we going to handle…"

Lin Hai blurred, his silhouette stretching, before snapping apart into two separate but identical figures. He raised a carefully manicured eyebrow.

"Try to relax a little huh?" Ling Qi nudged her friend's shoulder, before starting after the simulacrum on the left.

Su Ling shot her an unamused look as she followed after the still fidgety Li Suyin.

"What a good girl that one is," Lin Hai mused as she fell in beside him and they moved into his work shop, between skeins of cloth, tables and tools.

"Too good sometimes," Ling Qi sighed.

"Hm, hmm, no such thing I think," Lin Hai said. "It seems I must congratulate you young Miss, you held up quite well under your first experience at court."

"Did I?" Ling Qi asked. She remembered barely being able to keep her composure under the Duchess' scrutiny.

"You did, or so I had heard," Lin Hai mused. "It is not easy to deal with Master's interest, and you certainly gave her an opportunity."

Ling Qi frowned a little. She still wasn't sure how she felt about that. The Duchess having a dealing with the shishigui. Negotiating with barbarians was one thing, but monsters like that…

"Our clothes and finery are most important, young Miss, they show the world what we wish to be. It is not good to forget that more lies beneath," Lin Hai said.

Ling Qi blinked at the non sequitur.

"He's reminding you not to get too caught up in appearances," Sixiang whispered, and Ling Qi found a memory of a disturbing mundane town, deep beneath the earth, intruded into her thoughts.

"Still, while your words pleased many, it has not pleased the Sect," Lin Hai said softly. "I understand your reasoning. First Impressions are so terribly important, and if these foreigners of yours had been reported by the Sect's messengers first, things may not have gone so smoothly."

"Do you think I'm being foolish or naive?" Ling Qi asked quietly. She had been trying not to think about it much yet, but the Duchess had put a great deal on her shoulders with this assignment. If she was wrong…

"I think it costs us little to try, save for pride," Lin Hai mused. "And the Empire certainly has a surplus of that."

Ling Qi laughed a little.

"Now young miss, what sort of piece are you looking to commission today?" Lin Hai said as they arrived at a part of the workshop filled with jewelers tools.

"It looks like you already have an idea," Ling Qi said wryly. "But… I was thinking, some ear rings maybe?"

Lin Hai eyed her critically. "Hm, hm, I see some designs perhaps. Silver naturally, or mayhap platinum. Sapphire for highlights…"

The designer trailed off and shook his head, but she could still see his mind working behind his eyes. "And the desired effect?"

"Sense enhancement," Ling Qi replied immediately. She still remembered those dancers, still so easily able to slip out of her sight. She disliked being on the receiving end of that.

"Ah well, simple enough then," Lin Hai said, clapping his hands, tools, jewels and flasks filled with liquified metals began to float off the shelves and tables to whirl around the craftsman.

"Take a seat here, if you would," Lin Hai said, pointing to a softly padded stool.

Ling Qi took her seat and held still as tools began to take measurements of her ears, and around her head. "Senior Brother Lin, do you think there is anything I can do to prepare?" She honestly had no idea how she was going to handle this.

"You must sew your own success here," Lin Hai chuckled. "For it is your project, but… perhaps seek out those who have knowledge of dealings with foreigners? They do exist, here and there."

Ling Qi recalled her conversation with Cai Renxiang, hashing out her speech. Hadn't she mentioned that the Xuan dealt with foreigners? Xuan Shi certainly seemed like the sort to be interested in that sort of thing.

Well, that was an idea.

[] Speak with Xuan Shi when he comes to finish the work on your Mothers house. It will be the most comfortable for you both.
[] Xuan Shi could use more friends and contacts, he had met Suyin before too. Perhaps you could him a favor and introduce them again before asking a favor in turn?
 
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Turn 10 Arc 3-2 Preparations
Dusk Wind Studs:
+15 to Combat Perception
Activation: Once per combat when the user would otherwise be caught Unready by an enemy attack, they are considered Unsure instead. If the attackers Stealth is one full letter rank higher than the users perception, they are Unaware instead. If the attacker's stealth is two ranks or more higher, this effect is bypassed.


Ling Qi held her new earring in her hands, watching how they glimmered in the workshop's light. They were silver ear studs, relatively plain in make, but each was set with a dark blue gem, which darkened to near purple at the center, if you looked closely, you could see the shimmer of the sky at dusk in their depths.

"They're as beautiful as I'd expect," Ling Qi said, looking back to Lin Hai.

"They are not too complex on their own, but such accessories are more a component than a statement unto themselves," Lin Hai said, pressing a fingertip to his lips thoughtfully. "I was somewhat disappointed that you did not allow me to give you something a touch more eye catching."

Ling Qi chuckled awkwardly, glancing at Lin Hai's extravagant garb. "It really isn't my style to do so."

"Naturally, and that is why I did not push," Lin Hai said, nodding affably. "If there is one lesson I know all too well, it is the difference between pushing one to seek their boundaries and forcing one beyond them."

Ling Qi nodded absently, rubbing her thumb over one of the gemstone studs. It was cool and smooth, the line of the cuts almost undetectable. She recalled the words at their last meeting. They had confused her at the time, and they still did honestly. It was difficult to imagine Lin Hai as anything but what he was. "I did actually have another thing I wanted to ask you about."

"For dear Lady Ren's retainer, I can spare a few moments more," Lin Hai said. He gestured airily, and the numerous tools floating in the air began to spin and bob, flying their way back to the tables and shelves.

"Is it normal for one of your gowns to… Uh, eat other clothing if left alone for awhile?" Ling Qi asked. She stumbled over the question a little despite herself. She was still a little baffled.

Lin Hai blinked.

"...Not particularly," he said slowly, sounding nonplussed. "Deprived of your energy she should have simply gone dormant, unless she received some damage?"

"No, I left, it… her," Ling Qi corrected. "In my room. When I came back from my training, I found my gown in the closed with a bunch of frayed bedding."

Lin Hai's darkly painted eyebrows drew together, and he reached out, tracing his finger through the air a hair's breadth away from her shoulder, faint glimmering threads rose to meet him, and Ling Qi felt her gown grow a fraction tighter, for just a moment.

"Ah, Master," Lin Hai breathed. "How your works still confound…"

Ling Qi shifted uncomfortably. Having been on the receiving end of Cai Shenhua recently, those words were not a comfort.

"It seems your choice to wear her at all times has had some effects on her development," Lin Hai said. "Which are preceding faster than I thought possible. It seems that she is only waiting for your cultivation to reach a sufficient level before achieving her own evolution."

Ling Qi glanced down in surprise. Her dress seemed no different than normal. "What level is that?"

"Hm, Formation Green and Bronze, I would estimate," Lin Hai mused, withdrawing his hand. "Until then, if you need to remove your gown for a lengthy period, it may be best to put her in your Vent chamber, the qi rich air should prevent any mishaps."

Ling Qi brushed her fingers against the silk of her gown, and felt the thrum of qi running through it, transforming silk into something far stronger than steel. If she focused, could she feel something foreign, an energy that was not just her own percolating through the talisman? Maybe it was just her imagination.

"In any case, Miss Ling. You will need to hold your seat for a moment longer," Lin Hai said. His fingers twitched, and between them appeared a needle. It was a large one, made of steel. Inscribed with countless formations so small that they appeared as no more than spidery lines, it crackled with heavenly power, fit to pierce stone, metal or immortal flesh. "You'll need to try your talisman on afterall."

Ling Qi grimaced. She hadn't been looking forward to this part.


***​



Over the course of the next few days, Ling Qi worked on putting her idea into practice, while continuing to cultivate. She began the process of opening a new meridian, slowly and painstakingly working open the densely clogged channel. With each one she opened, it was getting harder.

It wasn't too hard to talk Li Suyin into setting up a meeting, and Xuan Shi wasn't much harder to convince. However, as she arrived at Suyin's workshop and opened the door, it occurred to her that she might have forgotten something. In the dim light of the workshop, more than two dozen eyes stared back at her from the opposite wall.

Suyin did not have any visitors.

They floated in jars, hung suspended between crackling metal prongs, and lay neatly stacked upon trays. Some were human, some were animal, some were even insect, or glittering things of gemstone and precious metal.

Below them was a line of eerily lifelike wax heads, each missing their left eye. One of the heads was melting slowly against the table, half of it carved away by some blast, scraps of wax and ocular tissue being cleaned up by the assistants. Of course, there were assistants, not timply the tiny mouse skeletons that scurried too and fro across the floor, but humanoid and human sized figures with the skulls of beasts, wrapped in spidersilk and garbed in the robes of servants.

Behind her, through a silver wisp, Ling Qi saw Xuan Shi very slowly blink.

"Ah, my apologies Ling Qi, is it really so late already?" Li Suyin looked up from the half exploded wax head, looking startled and contrite. There was a bit of wax brain matter and too realistic blood clinging to her cheek. A nearby skeleton with the skull of a doe very helpfully dabbed it away with a silk kerchief. "I got caught up in the testing…. This is so embarrassing."

Li Suyin had changed a lot since the last time she had met Xuan Shi, huh?

"I think it's nice, really gives her a unique feel," Sixiang asserted. "She's so good at color balance too! I really like the asymmetric feel the spider webbing gives the space."

Ling Qi didn't miss more than half, no a quarter of a beat as she stepped inside and smiled. "Don't worry too much Suyin, this isn't anything too formal after all. I'm sure Xuan Shi has lost himself in a project too now and then."

Xuan Shi startled, just a little when she said his name, pulling his eyes away from the skeletal constructs moving through the room. They were already disassembling and carrying away the workbench, tools, and materials. "The fugue of the craftsmen is not unknown. Rather, this one would apologize for the short notice.

Li Suyin stood and brought her hands together to bow. She was wearing the dress Lin Hai had made for her. Pale grey, with a striking dark violet underlayer that stood out at the ends of her sleeves and collar, it was surprisingly utilitarian for one of his works. It had a high collar, from which protruded a touch of dark purple lace, and otherwise was only accentuated by spiderweb patterns, embroidered into the gown around her feet and ankles.

Of course, if you looked at it too long, the pale grey fabric seemed to swim and shimmer, presenting phantasmal faces.

It was downright staid really.

"Regardless, I apologize. It is an honor to have such a skilled craftsman in my home. I hope my simple works don't bore you too much," Li suyin said demurely, clasping her hands together.

She wore two gloves now, but only one was that clawed contraption she had put together.

"Sect Sister Li's words are too humble. The works performed by your hands are known throughout the Sect," Xuan Shi said. He seemed to pause, listening to something. "You give this one too much esteem."

Did I look like that at first with you? Ling Qi thought absently to Sixiang. She stepped back, and pulled the door shut.

"You could get pretty bad about spacing out," Sixiang replied, amused.

The fame of the Xuan clan is well earned," Li Suyin said politely, straightening up. Skeletons emerged from other rooms, carrying new furniture, tables and chairs and even a tea set. "And your project last year truly earned its place in first. I could not have managed such a complex enhancement."

"This one wonders at that," Xuan Shi said, tugging at the brim of his hat. "To break the earth in a new field is more impressive than to merely tread anew old ground."

"No really," Li Suyin insisted. "The complexity of your reaction matrices still baffle me, how in the world did you encode so many behavioral variations into each individual tile with so little material real estate? I was not able to discern any core command processing talisman, nor thought based transmission, so each piece is obviously autonomous."

Ling Qi smiled faintly as she took her seat, and Xuan Shi replied with a string of words that she knew all the individual meanings of, but which together represented only highly technical gibberish. It seemed like, despite a little stutter at the start, things were going well.

Ling Qi kept her own contributions minor for a time, only slipping in to smooth over awkward silences or cover for Xuan Shi when he spaced out for a moment. His new spirit seemed to have a somewhat poor sense of timing compared to Sixiang. But if they were new to the material world, that made sense.

Still, after the tea had been served, and the last subject, a discussion about vehicular formations, reached its natural conclusion, Ling Qi found the chance to ask her own question.
"So, with everything you've said about the operating ranges of Xuan ships, does that mean that its true that Savage Seas has contact with foreigners?" Ling Qi asked. Li Suyin's constructs had provided them each with a little slice of tea cake as well. Ling Qi found it a little too sweet if she was honest.

Xuan Shi glanced her way, and thankfully didn't seem offended by the question. "The ports of the isle have hosted men of foreign shores, it is true. Not all barbarians are eager for battle."

He did sound reflexively defensive though.

"How curious," Li Suyin mused. "However did the Xuan manage to come to arrange such a situation?"

"Our voyagers typically do not seek battle and plunder as some explorers do," Xuan Shi replied. "Thus on occasion, those who would rather trade come to find the Isle."

"Have you ever seen them, foreigners that is?" Ling Qi asked casually, taking a sip of her tea. The blend was a little bitter.

"This one has witnessed the foreign quarter in use a time or two," Xuan Shi said, he sounded wistful. "The folk of Khem are the most numerous, and their mein hard to miss, but at times, a dark faced man of Banu comes bearing a hold full of blue adamant. Once even, I saw one who claimed to be of far off Nidalvar, who are said to dwell at the upper peak of the world."

"How startling that must be," Li Suyin said. "And they truly keep imperial peace well enough for the Xuan to allow them into port?"

Xuan Shi frowned. "Strange as they may be, it would be madness to assault the Living Isle."

"What are they like though?" Ling Qi asked. "I mean, it has to be hard for everyone to not offend each other, right? How do the Xuan manage?"

"It is the voyagers who learn such things," Xuan Shi admitted, looking down. He toyed with his plate. "This ones Father did not teach the craft, afore he left on his last journey eight years ago."

Ling Qi frowned as Li Suyin offered an apology. She remembered something else Xuan Shi had said. His parents were supposed to be alive, weren't they? Was that just wishful thinking, or did he actually know?

Well, this wasn't exactly the time to challenge him on it.

"I'm sorry," Ling Qi offered. She considered her situation. Her mission wasn't exactly secret, even if it hadn't necessarily spread to everyone yet. "It's just, recently, I've been commanded by the Duchess to take part in an expedition to speak with some foreigners. We've discovered a group not of the Cloud Tribes, hailing from south of the Wall."

Li Suyin looked shocked, Xuan Shi tipped his hat back, looking at her in surprise.

"I was hoping that you might be able to give me some advice on acquitting myself well," Ling Qi said wryly.

"Such a duty for one so young," Li Suyin murmured. "No, given the heiress, it makes sense…"

"This one has only limited experience," Xuan Shi said slowly. "A few youthful explorations, driven by curiosity."

"Anything would be helpful," Ling Qi said, bowing her head.

Xuan Shi was silent, seemingly listening to his spirit. "Once, this one spoke with a woman of Khem while a cousin haggled with her husband. Tall she was, a mountain in flesh, her face brightly painted, and hair black as ink. This one was in shock at the sight of her, garbed only in a transparent skirt and glittering jewelry that bore all to the sun."

Ling Qi stared in disbelief. Someone just… walking around in a town, basically naked? And they were supposed to be civilized?

"...The Khemite found the child before her's sputtering amusing, and gave this one a candy from their goods," Xuan Shi's expression screwed up. "The taste was of raw meat and blood, with a foreign spice. Another trip, this one encountered a boy of Banu. His Father had business with mine. Even at such a young age, twelve bars of steel, gold, and other metals pierced his features, and bangles of the same hung heavy on his limbs. We spoke not the same tongue, and yet words were unneeded to play a child's game with the strangely bouncing ball in his possession."

"So mundane," Li Suyin mused. "You make it sound as if they are merely oddly dressed people."

"It is more complex. It is possible to give offense without intent, for innocuous gestures to breed unexpected response, but…" Xuan Shi shrugged helplessly.

Ling Qi understood, it struck at the uncomfortable feeling that had been growing in the back of her mind. Rather than imagining a confrontation with a strange spirit, she really should be thinking of them as people.

...Dealing with those was so much harder.

No vote this time, moving into the Zhengui arc next.
 
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Turn 10: Arc 4-1 Tentative Steps
Songseekers Ceremony | 1596 Dice
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Rerolling 139
7 9 7 5 5 8 4 7 4 2 3 6 8 6 9 4 1 6 5 6 1 2 3 3 10 7 9 8 7 1 2 1 4 5 10 6 8 2 9 10 5 5 3 10 4 5 7 10 7 3 7 7 8 3 2 9 2 9 6 8 7 4 8 8 4 4 3 8 4 1 4 3 6 9 10 5 9 9 10 6 10 9 10 1 10 3 10 1 1 5 7 9 2 10 10 10 7 2 2 3 1 4 7 2 10 7 3 7 6 2 6 1 8 8 8 1 1 4 5 7 6 2 10 9 7 1 2 3 9 10 9 10 10 9 9 4 5 2 6 | 63x2=126 Successes

890x2=1780 Successes

1786/700 Third Song Achieved

1086/900 Fourth Song Achieved

186/1100 Fifth Song


Physical Cultivation | 354 Dice
4 4 3 8 5 8 5 8 7 7 5 8 10 6 6 8 2 8 4 5 5 10 2 10 10 4 5 2 3 8 6 10 8 8 6 10 3 10 8 8 7 7 10 5 7 9 4 8 1 9 2 5 3 6 8 7 10 1 2 4 9 8 3 8 8 2 8 2 1 7 2 6 9 4 8 8 9 9 5 9 1 1 2 4 6 6 9 1 2 10 3 6 7 3 2 8 6 6 5 1 7 8 10 10 4 1 8 1 1 5 6 5 8 5 10 10 9 8 2 3 10 9 4 3 3 3 4 1 5 3 2 1 3 2 5 8 3 1 1 4 9 6 6 10 6 7 10 8 3 10 3 6 5 3 1 8 1 5 2 9 10 1 4 2 8 1 10 1 2 3 9 2 4 1 2 7 9 6 8 4 1 9 7 8 9 3 5 6 1 9 7 9 9 3 5 6 7 7 5 5 9 5 4 5 4 2 1 3 10 4 5 10 10 10 7 2 1 10 5 6 7 1 7 8 2 2 1 10 10 1 3 3 10 7 1 5 7 5 9 4 10 5 8 2 10 4 4 9 10 10 8 4 3 10 6 10 5 9 9 6 1 4 4 6 10 7 6 8 10 2 3 2 4 5 10 3 3 1 8 5 3 5 5 8 7 4 1 4 2 6 3 7 5 2 6 9 8 8 6 2 7 9 4 1 2 5 8 8 2 7 4 3 5 8 4 3 8 3 2 3 2 8 7 4 2 10 2 8 8 10 1 1 10 6 8 3 8 10 1 6 5 3 2 6 9 7 4 4 5 5 6 6 7 3 | 179 Successes

Rerolling 35
3 7 7 5 8 5 4 8 9 4 6 1 9 5 4 6 4 10 5 7 4 2 2 8 3 10 1 1 9 2 10 9 5 4 7 | 19x2=38 Successes

217x2.3=499 Successes

551/400 Second fantasy

151/700 Third fantasy

There were more pieces of advice, both from Xuan Shi and from loaned books. Avoid assuming their intentions and clarify your own, cut idioms out of your speech where you could, be observant and try to decipher body language as well as speech. In the end, it mostly boiled down to being mindful and observant. The same sort of skills she had been working to polish for interacting with other nobles.

The stakes were just higher, in this case. It really helped to shake off her lingering dislike for the subject.

To that end, she continued to cultivate the Playful Muse's Rapport art, it's lessons on presentation would be helpful, and refining her speech couldn't hurt. Similarly, she had always intended to continue cultivating the Songseekers Ceremony art now that her cultivation had advanced, but now, she had even more reason.

Sitting on a high cliff, meditating upon her cultivation art, Ling Qi could not help but feel a tiny bit of dissatisfaction. She had not ventured out on her own in awhile. She wasn't… well, seeking songs. Her schedule was too rigid, the needs of Sect and duty, friends and family used what free time she had.

Of course, she had quite a trip planned, didn't she? Surely, she could find a song in that?

It wasn't as if she didn't have plans either, Zhengui and Hanyi, she had plans with both coming up… and she had something of an idea, a song that needed writing, for the lost and the hurt and not-quite friends.

One way or another, Ling Qi had a feeling that things were going to be changing. It felt like standing on the precipice of a high tower under the moon, without the wind to catch her.


***​



"So you see, those are the relations between the common visible colors, and what they represent. There's more complicated stuff, once you jump off the normal visible spectrum and get into spiritual colors, but you should probably master the easy part first. Any questions?" Sixiang asked, clapping his hands to punctuate the sentence.

Sixiang 'sat' on a fallen log, silhouette shimmering under the dappled sunlight. He was wearing a masculine shape, taking a few cues from Lin Hai, if she had her guess. Sixiang was getting better at projecting images and maintaining them. Proper manifestations were too tiring still though.

Ling Qi leaned back, resting her hands on the warm stone beneath her. She did kind of like this look for the muse. Slighter wider shoulders and a less effeminate face, a little more muscle on their chest, visible through the open robe of shimmering colors 'he' wore. Sixiang was clearly having fun anyway, going by the number of times the cut and shape of their clothing had changed since the start of the lesson.

Unfortunately, she wasn't sure if that fun was being shared. Zhengui lay belly down on the grass beside her, shrunk to only a couple meters long. He was listening intently enough. Zhen had been bobbing his head in time with Sixiang's speech and Gui's gaze had only occasionally wandered to the pile of fresh fruit she had ordered delivered for their lunch. However, she got the distinct sense that his heart wasn't entirely in it.

His words confirmed it. "Is it really okay for Gui to distract Big Sis like this? Gui is not a baby who will get mad if Sister needs to do other things."

Ling Qi shared a look with Sixiang before looking back to Zhengui. "Zhengui, we planned this out ages ago, I don't have anything else I need to be doing right now." Well, observing Sixiang's speaking was technically part of cultivating Playful Muse's Rapport, but that was just being efficient.

"I Zhen, think that simple Gui is not speaking well," Zhen hissed. "Should Sister and I not be training? War is at the Sect."

Ling Qi was silent. Zhengui had done well, more than that really. He had done everything that she could have expected of him. She thought he was satisfied.

"Hm, do you really think being stronger would have helped much back there?" Sixiang said, resting his chin on his hands. "Realistically stronger I mean."

Zhen flicked his tongue irritably but didn't respond.

"I think focusing wholly on fighting is a mistake," Ling Qi said thoughtfully, having taken the chance to assemble her thoughts. "I was helping Mother with her cultivation earlier today. She's not going to be able to fight though. Does that make that a mistake Zhengui?"

Ling Qingge was never going to have the temperament for combat, Ling Qi thought. Not outside the utmost extreme of desperation. She didn't resent spending time with her in the garden, working through the simple physical exercises of her cultivation art though, even if Ling Qi had mastered the thing in a few days. Mother was advancing slowly, but she was advancing. Ling Qi thought she might reach gold physique by the end of the year.

"Gui doesn't think so," her little brother said after a moment. "Is playing around really okay?"

"Don't think of it as playing around, think of it as taking care of yourself," Sixiang said. "If all you do is fight, then what are you going to do when the enemies are gone? There has to be more to you than violence."
"I agree," Ling Qi said quietly, twisting a strand of her hair between her fingers. She didn't think she would much care to live that way. Her memory wandered back to the court, and the woman she had seen at the foot of Shenhua's throne, with eyes as sharp as a blades. That she thought was what someone who had nothing but violence looked like. She didn't think she wanted to ever see that in the mirror.

"So c'mon Zhengui, any questions about what Sixiang actually said?" she asked, leaning over to pat him on the shell.

"Um, Gui does not see all of the colors, but Zhen does, so it should be fine," he responded leaning into her touch.

"Hmph, I Zhen have understood the lesson," he said haughtily. Ling Qi saw the slight hopeful tilt of his head though.

Ling Qi flicked him a beast core. He snapped it out of the air with a happy hiss.

"Well, in that case, we should probably move on," Sixiang chuckled as Gui gave Ling Qi a pleading look. She flicked him a core too. "So next thing we need to talk about is theme."

"Theme?" Zhen asked. "Like Sister's songs?"

Sixiang nodded. "Right, song or painting or poem, you gotta think about what your trying to say with your project. It's fine to be spontaneous in execution, great even, but you have to have a vision, a goal in mind, or your just gonna end up with a mess."

"Ah, Gui was just trying to make something pretty before, but that isn't right," Gui muttered.

"You have to be a little more specific than that," Ling Qi said wryly.

"So, the question to ask is, what do you want your art to say," Sixiang asked, leaning forward.

AN: Choose a theme, theme will effect the final reward for the arc as well as Zhengui and Ling Qi's development from it.

[] Life Endures the Winter (Wood and Ice)
[] Valley in the Shadow (Wood and Darkness)
[] First Sun of Spring (Fire and Ice)



+60 dice to Spiritual Cultivation until Green 5
+60 dice to Physical Cultivation until Green 5
+55 dice to the cultivation of Yin Arts
+50 dice to the cultivation of Moon Arts
1/8 of XP gained through permanent cultivation bonuses added to Domain XP
Grants the user 2 virtual Green Stone per week(8 per turn)
Allows the User to Bind Spirits up to Grade Three
Reduces Upkeep of Spirits by 4 per spirit
10 Qi cultivation dice per turn up to S Rank
-Increases growth rate of bound spirits(effects increasing with Bond Level)

+70 dice to Spiritual Cultivation until Green 5
+70 dice to Physical Cultivation until Green 5
+60 dice to the cultivation of Yin Arts
+55 dice to the cultivation of Moon Arts
1/8 of XP gained through permanent cultivation bonuses added to Domain XP
Grants the user 3 virtual Green Stone per week(12 per turn)
Allows the User to Bind Spirits up to Grade Three
Reduces Upkeep of Spirits by 4 per spirit
10 Qi cultivation dice per turn up to S Rank
-Amplifies growth rate of bound spirits(effects increasing with Bond Level)
Grants up to 50xPotency bonus successes to spiritual cultivation when creating or modifying arts with the music keyword.

Passive Effects:
+10 to Initiative
+15 to Social Perception
+10 to Speech
+15 to Empathy


Carefree Mantle: C
Duration: Long
It is not enough to merely follow the basic exercises of this art, to learn tricks of speaking and the use of humor as a smoothing and contrasting element in their rhetoric. To truly emulate the muse, one must defy certain ingrained social behaviors and learn to wear their emotion, their intent, their very self as a cloak. Though such openness can seem frightening to the neophyte, few methods are superior in conveying the sincerity of your intent. While active, the user receives a large bonus to speech tests when speaking honestly or attempting to convince others of their sincerity, and a similar bonus to poise and empathy tests

Deceiver's Foil: C
Duration: Short
The muse is a creature of pure expression, and many tales speak of the humorous humiliations which they sometimes heap on the dishonest and insincere. Though this art does not teach such excessive methods, through this technique, one may indeed suss out those who lie to the users face and find the inspiration to trip up and foil those with dishonest intent. The user receives a bonus to large Social Perception when attempting to detect lies and a bonus to speech when attempting to counter lies and misinformation. When used in conjunction with Carefree Mantle, this technique functions as if it were B rank for one test.

Passive Effects:
+10 to Initiative
+20 to Social Perception
+15 to Speech
+15 to Empathy


Carefree Mantle: B
Duration: Long or Upkeep 5
It is not enough to merely follow the basic exercises of this art, to learn tricks of speaking and the use of humor as a smoothing and contrasting element in their rhetoric. To truly emulate the muse, one must defy certain ingrained social behaviors and learn to wear their emotion, their intent, their very self as a cloak. Though such openness can seem frightening to the neophyte, few methods are superior in conveying the sincerity of your intent. While active, the user receives a large bonus to speech tests when speaking honestly or attempting to convince others of their sincerity, and a similar bonus to poise and empathy tests

Deceiver's Foil: C
Duration: Short
The muse is a creature of pure expression, and many tales speak of the humorous humiliations which they sometimes heap on the dishonest and insincere. Though this art does not teach such excessive methods, through this technique, one may indeed suss out those who lie to the users face and find the inspiration to trip up and foil those with dishonest intent. The user receives a bonus to large Social Perception when attempting to detect lies and a bonus to speech when attempting to counter lies and misinformation. When used in conjunction with Carefree Mantle, this technique functions as if it were B rank for one test.

Cheerful Muse Accompaniment: B
Duration: Long
Some people can be quite rude, seeking to listen in on things that are not for their ears. Activating this technique, the user shrouds themselves and up to five other willing targets in a shroud of cheerful but inane speech, that at first seems important until eavesdroppers notice subjects and sentences alike circling back to their beginning in an endless loop of noise. Offers defense against social techniques, offering a significant bonus to the users poise when attempting to defend against outside listeners.

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Turn 10: Arc 4-2
"Hm, Zhengui what do you think?" Ling Qi asked. "What do you want people who see our garden to feel?"

Surprisingly, it was Zhen who answered her question.

"It should be a bright place, where bad things burn away. No one appreciates pretty things when they are afraid," Zhen said.

"I think we both know some people who would disagree," Sixiang said, amused, leaning back on her rock.

"Gui thinks Zhen isn't wrong though. Zhen and Gui are not them," Gui replied. "Even if a garden isn't safe, it should be bright."

Ling Qi let out a thoughtful hum. She wasn't typically one for brightness, but… moonlight reflecting off ice, the first rays of dawn on a late winter morning, these things were not wholly outside of her repertoire.

"Hmph, the work of I, Zhen should inspire awe, not fear" his other half hissed.

"Zhen just likes flashy things," Gui grumbled. "Even if people are a little afraid, they still respect Gui."

Ling Qi frowned, cocking her head to the side as they bickered. What were they talking about? She recalled then a little statuette in the garden shrine, and offerings made at a village in the mountains. "Zhengui, have you still been receiving offerings?"

"Only a little," said Gui.

"I, Zhen, feel their words sometimes," Zhen agreed. "It tickles."

Ling Qi just nodded, keeping an even expression. She glanced at Sixiang, who shrugged. It looked like there was another subject she needed to research.

"Well, leaving that aside. How do you feel about something themed on spring?" Ling Qi asked. "You know, that early time when things are still a little wild, the rains are on, and the sun is out, but there's still frost on the ground and chill in the air."

Ling Qi's fingers twitched, itching for her flute. She had an idea for a song there.

Zhen flicked his tongue thoughtfully, leaving streamers of steam in the moist fall air.

"Not fall, and fading?" Gui asked. "The leaves could be pretty…"

"I don't think fading fits you little brother," Ling Qi said. The more she thought on it, the more she liked the idea. She didn't want to be the winter that smothered warmth and growth in this project. She wanted to encourage him, and so it made much more sense for her to play winter's other role.

"I, Zhen approve," Zhen murmured. "The garden should be like the sun's rays burning on the frosty ground."

"That is probably enough to work on," Sixiang said, clapping his hands. "So, we have a theme, but now we need to think on how to translate that theme into the medium you're working with! That can be a really tricky part for any artist, and it'll probably take you awhile. So, let's start hashing out some ideas!"

Ling Qi leaned back on her seat as first Gui, and then Zhen began speaking over one another spitting out ideas one after another. She thought this was going rather well.

Over the course of the next week, they began to put some ideas into practice. Ling Qi took on the task of purchasing and organizing supplies, while Zhengui worked on clearing a space for their project on his hill, devouring brush and uprooting scraggly trees to give them a clear canvas. Thankfully even ordering a few more more expensive packets of seeds, gardening supplies were not too expensive.

-45 Red Stones

With everything in place, Ling Qi took to composing her song, a melody of early spring, of rainstorms and warmth and blooming life. Together with Sixiang, she spun her mist into a canvas, reflecting the dream of what they hoped to achieve. A garden of blooming flowers and trees, touched by frost. Mist would hang in the air, and gentle rain would fall, refracting light into a prism of colors.

There was something simply nice about working alongside Zhengui on this. Digging into the earth with a trowel, working together with Zhengui to stimulate the growth of the plants, working together on the other aspects of the project. They all combined to put stress and grief and worry out of her head, if only for a few hours each day. And in those few hours, she spoke to Zhengui more than she ever had before.

It wasn't about anything serious, there were no great revelations, they just talked and worked, and it felt good. She couldn't help but feel a touch of the excitement Zhengui felt, when they finally broke ground and started to put their plans into practice.


***​



Days later Ling Qi plucked crumbling grains of baked mud from her hair, and looked upon what they had wrought.

The whole hill was not on fire at least. The mudslide had extinguished most of it.

"I told dumb Zhen that he was making too much rain!" Gui groaned, stomping his feet.

Between her and Zhen, making localized weather phenomena wasn't really hard. Not a combat useful trick, but Ling Qi filed it away anyway.
"And I, Zhen, told foolish Gui that the Dawn Azalea's and Rimegrass did not have deep enough roots!" Zhen blustered.

"They would not have needed deeper roots if Zhen's floaty fires had not made Sister's clouds spit lightning!" Gui shouted, craning his neck to glare up at his other half.

"It was my mistake for drawing in too much of the surrounding moisture," Ling Qi commented idly. There was a puff of air as her gown rippled, expelling mud, dry and otherwise.

"Eh?! No, Gui should have figured out that the dirt was too thin and crumbly," Gui backpedaled

"I, Zhen should have adjusted to match Big Sister," Zhen concurred.

Ling Qi huffed. "Quit that, we all made mistakes, there's no need to try and absolve me of blame too."

"For what it's worth, I've seen worse first drafts," Sixiang said, their face appearing in the flickering flames. "I think you guys were on to something interesting there!"

"But it still ended in a mess again," Gui said glumly.

"I had fun though," Ling Qi said absently. She actually had, to her surprise. Composing Songs for Cai Renxiang's parties had always felt kind of perfunctory. Composing her own songs was more enjoyable but ultimately just idle fancy. This was more like cultivating. They had a concrete goal to work for, things they could improve. Visible progress to be made.

Yes, Ling Qi thought, she really had enjoyed this.

"...but it was a waste of time," Zhen said, deflated of his usual haughtiness.

"You don't give up on a technique just because you fumbled the first try," Ling Qi said, turning toward him. She smiled, reaching up to pat his drooping head. "C'mon, we learned plenty from this attempt, and that means we can do the next one better."

"It was kind of fun," Gui mumbled, scraping his foot against the ground. "I liked planting flowers for Sister to sing too."

"Making rainy clouds with Sister is challenging. A task worthy of I, Zhen," the serpent huffed.

Ling Qi hummed in agreement. She spent so much time on combat cultivation, it had been fun to play with effects like this. It had even been fun, in its way, to get her hands a little dirty with a trowel, and try to get things just right. She understood why even an Elder like Ying could enjoy a hobby like this.
"I'm glad we did this," Ling Qi said with a nod. She had, for a long time kind of just accepted that she and Zhengui were just not going to match. However, rather than stressing over those things, maybe she should have been seeking ways that they could interact all along. "I think I'll be looking forward to next time."

"When will that be though?" Gui asked quietly.

Ling Qi grimaced, they were going on a journey soon enough, and it was hard to imagine they would have time.

"I might have a partial solution. Help you two keep the momentum going anyway," Sixiang whispered in her head. "Give me a bit to work the kinks out."

"We'll have to see what we can do. We'll definitely make a try when we can get back to the Sect though, Alright?" Ling Qi said.

"Okay!" they echoed each other.

Ling Qi nodded in satisfaction, and then clapped her hands. "Now! Lets get this mess cleaned up."

He was a little less enthusiastic about that.


***​

Starless Nights Reflection | 364 Dice
9 8 8 7 7 2 2 8 8 3 8 6 10 10 9 7 7 3 4 9 8 10 10 5 4 3 7 8 9 9 3 3 9 6 10 5 9 10 1 10 1 10 9 10 8 9 7 3 7 1 3 5 2 10 4 6 2 7 5 8 1 10 4 9 5 9 8 9 1 4 2 6 4 10 2 9 5 2 10 10 5 2 4 1 7 4 6 4 9 10 2 4 10 6 10 7 8 10 2 10 4 1 6 2 2 5 8 4 6 5 8 4 1 6 7 3 10 10 7 5 10 7 8 4 10 3 4 2 2 5 5 7 9 7 4 9 3 7 4 5 3 1 6 10 5 10 4 1 4 7 7 2 7 2 3 10 6 4 10 9 2 7 8 9 10 5 5 10 4 1 6 5 3 9 10 7 4 10 5 9 2 5 9 4 10 6 5 10 9 8 4 9 6 2 2 6 6 10 1 4 9 7 2 9 9 9 7 8 5 10 5 2 5 7 5 7 6 7 10 2 6 7 2 2 2 9 8 2 4 3 4 9 7 6 8 9 1 5 6 10 9 9 1 3 1 10 3 1 2 7 1 3 7 8 7 7 8 5 8 4 4 9 7 5 3 5 6 10 1 7 6 2 8 3 3 10 6 5 5 9 3 4 3 10 5 7 9 9 1 7 6 7 6 3 5 7 4 5 7 4 9 8 9 5 8 1 8 5 9 4 10 7 1 8 2 5 4 2 2 5 6 3 4 9 7 3 8 5 7 2 8 10 7 6 9 3 10 8 6 2 4 4 3 4 9 7 10 4 1 2 8 6 10 6 1 1 3 4 6 7 5 6 2 8 | 167 Successes

Rerolling 24
2 7 1 3 6 6 8 4 8 2 10 6 10 4 7 4 4 2 9 6 5 1 10 7 | 11x2=22 Successes

189x1.95=368 Successes

899/700 Fourth Ripple Achieved

199/900 Fifth Ripple

Beast Kings Savage Dirge | 319 Dice
9 1 8 1 9 9 1 4 6 4 10 3 5 8 6 6 6 3 1 2 9 6 7 6 5 5 6 5 1 8 1 1 10 8 5 6 10 3 2 3 1 3 1 5 9 2 7 6 10 4 7 10 10 5 1 2 6 1 5 8 3 1 4 4 8 7 1 7 10 3 2 7 4 5 3 3 5 1 7 4 1 9 3 2 6 1 1 2 7 6 8 9 2 2 1 8 9 6 8 5 2 9 9 6 6 8 9 1 3 10 6 10 5 2 3 9 3 3 2 1 5 6 9 9 5 4 6 6 1 3 10 4 7 8 10 5 4 4 7 4 9 2 7 2 4 3 6 1 4 6 6 3 9 3 4 3 5 10 2 8 3 8 3 2 8 10 2 6 5 7 8 4 10 7 5 9 5 5 3 4 8 4 6 7 7 1 7 9 2 4 8 3 9 1 7 3 2 9 8 8 1 10 3 8 2 10 5 1 6 9 2 4 10 3 10 5 6 2 4 5 10 6 1 8 6 5 1 1 3 4 9 7 3 8 2 8 4 4 8 5 2 6 10 6 7 7 5 1 8 9 10 2 5 10 9 9 10 6 5 7 4 3 8 4 7 7 3 4 9 9 9 2 5 9 9 6 1 2 5 3 3 5 9 9 9 1 9 4 6 3 5 1 2 10 1 3 3 8 2 7 6 10 4 2 2 3 3 4 10 9 5 7 10 6 10 1 6 6 10 | 166 Successes

Rerolling 35
3 8 6 3 3 5 2 10 9 3 2 8 6 6 10 8 10 1 10 2 7 9 5 1 4 3 6 5 2 7 10 5 5 5 8 | 18x2=36 Successes

202x2.6=525 Successes

695/400 Second Conquest

295 Third Conquest

In the Thousand Lakes, the infinite depth of the night sky is reflected from one thousand mirrors, displaying infinite emptiness extending beyond the heavens and into the depths of the earth. In meditating upon this conceptual void, the user seeks to become such a mirror, combining the formlessness and absorption of darkness with the rippling serenity and infinite depth of the lakes. Enemies striking the user and their allies find their weapons and techniques sinking into the shadows, to vanish, doing no more harm than they would if they slashed the waters of mighty Lake Hei, or aimed their malice at the starless sky.

Potency: Green 2
Potency Growth: Green 4(6)
Keywords:
- Darkness, Lake, Reflections, Stillness, Silence, Void, Yin.
- Composure, Fortitude, Resilience, Resolve, Stamina.
Meridians: Spine x3, Heart x2; 3 dark 2 lake
- Growth: Spine(1,1,1,5), Heart(1,3)
Experience Needed: 900, 1100
Max level: 6


Passive Effects:
+20 to Physical Armor
+20 to Spiritual Armor
+15 to Physical and Spiritual Armor of allies in Near Range
+15 to Physical and Spiritual armor vs. repeating effects(poisons, marks, etc.)
D Rank damage reduction vs Darkness


Unruffled Stygian Reflection: C
Duration: Short
Becoming as the surface of the water, the user absorbs the effects of a damaging technique or attack that is C rank or lower(this includes techniques that hit multiple times). If the technique is an area of effect, the user absorbs the technique's effects within Close range, protecting allies nearby.

Rippling Starless Shroud: C

Duration: Long or Upkeep 10
Cloaking themselves in rippling energy that is neither water nor darkness, the user greatly enhances their defenses, and may even extend this shroud to allies nearby. Increases the users Physical and Spiritual Armor significantly, and grants E rank damage reduction against area of effect techniques. The user may extend this effect to up to five allies for free, and up to twenty allies increasing the cost by 5 each time(past the initial 5). Allies must be within Far range or less to benefit. When kept on upkeep, allies past the first five may be given the effects at C rank cost as a single action.

Black Mirror: A
Duration: Immediate
The lake's surface is imperturbable, and naught may change that Darkness, perfect and unbroken ripples out from the user, consuming all nearby for a single instant. In response to an enemy technique that would include them as a target, the user may activate this technique. On activation, the triggering technique is nullified(If A rank or less) or reduced by one rank in effect(if S or higher), in addition, any other hostile effects of lower rank which would target the user or allies within Close range on the same turn are reduced by one rank in effect.


Potency: Green 3
Potency Growth: Green 4(3), Green 5(6)
Keywords:
- Beasts, Conquest, Illusion, Wood, Yang.
- Dark, Music, Presence, War.
Meridians: Lung x2, Heart x2; 1 dark 1 wood 2 music
- Growth: Lung(1,1,3,7), Heart(1,1,5)
Experience Needed: 500, 700, 900, 1100, 1300, 1500
Max level: 8


Passive Effects:

+15 to Spiritual hit
+10 to Spiritual Penetration
+15 to Resist
+10 to War


Primal War Calling: C
Duration: Long

A heavy suspense and pressure building melody, this piece calls to mind the muster of beasts from across the province of emerald seas, called together for the final march. In an area out to Close range from the user, the shades of long dead beasts coalesce from the shadows, red of eye and fang. The beasts howl and roar, filling the air with a savage cacophony, causing enemies embroiled in the chaos to suffer penalties to speed and Physical dodge as the press of bodies bears down on them. While this technique is active enemies within range are attacked viciously by the shades, who use the musicians hit and penetration in combat. The shades attacks deal a base D rank in damage, and the technique as a whole counts as two combatants for the purpose of multi attacker bonuses and penalties. In addition enemies which attempt to dispel this technique or another of the users music techniques while within it suffer an additional two attacks from the beasts.

-General's Attendant: While active the user may use the phantoms of Primal War Calling to defend themselves and their allies. As a free reaction when an ally or the singer would be struck, the phantoms can take the blow instead. This nullifies techniques of C rank or lower and reduces the damage of higher techniques by one rank, applied before armor. Each instance of nullified or reduced damage uses one Charge of primal War Calling. The technique begins with three charges.


Eagle God's Defiance: C
Duration: Immediate

The fastest of the beast kings, the Eagle God, lord of those who flew and preyed on the world below was an impetuous beast, and dove into battle before all the others. If this technique is activated without Primal War Calling, that technique activates freely the next time the user takes an action. On activation, the user plays an ear splitting high note and the Eagle God flies again, if only for a moment. The initial cry is a spiritual attack against all enemies within Close Range, dealing C rank damage and reducing enemy physical avoid significantly on hit for a short time. The newly formed phantom then dives at a single target, dealing C ranked damage and carries them in a straight line in any direction, depositing them within a Far distance from their previous position.

Ling Qi had not been idle on other tasks while working on the garden. Each morning she would either attend to sparring with Wang Chao and his group, or perform some private cultivation, further refining her new combat arts. Starless Night's reflection continued to come easy to her, and she soon ironed out inefficiencies in the techniques, and prepared to begin working toward the arts capstone technique. She still had some ways to go, but she was confident that she would soon have the art mastered. Beast King's Savage Dirge on the other hand, was a more daunting art. There was much more too it, many techniques, many little twists to master. She refined it's first two techniques further, and began to work on it's next technique, the Wolf God's Cunning, there was no spectacular growth, but a simple polishing and deepening understanding of fundamentals.

In the evenings, she had gone off to check in with Hanyi. It was hard to talk to her, because Hanyi didn't want to talk. She was being willful again, and refusing to engage with Ling Qi when she tried to broach the subject of her battle performance. Ling Qi thought she was angry about being taken out of the fight so easily, but the girl refused to talk. Instead focusing an almost manic energy on preparing for her performance. Sixiang thought she needed space to work out frustrations, and so Ling Qi had backed off for a time. The last thing Hanyi needed was smothering. So she had elected to finish some other tasks.

Which brought her to where she was now, shifting uncomfortably in her seat at the archive.

Across from her sat Bian Ya and Ruan Shen, who were being incredibly inappropriate.

Ling Qi averted her eyes as the older girl sighed in content, letting her head rest on Ruan Shen's shoulder, mussing her carefully braided hair. Their hands were intertwined atop the arm of the archive chair. Ling Qi coughed awkwardly into her hand. "...Congratulations on your betrothal."

Ruan Shen smiled wryly at her, a teasing twinkle in his eye. "It just seemed like the time to stop dragging my feet."

"Honestly, it took you long enough," Bian Ya sniffed. "I had cleared this courtship with my parents ages ago."

"Sorry, sorry," Ruan Shen chuckled. "I'll be more diligent from now on."

"I will hold you too that," Bian Ya said, not bothering to lift her head or open her eyes. Was she really fine being like this in public?

"You're such an old lady Ling Qi,"
Sixiang huffed.

Ling Qi's eyebrows twitched. How was it that the gutter-girl had a stronger sense of propriety than the nobles?

"So, what was it you wished to ask Junior Sister?" Bian Ya asked.

Ling Qi huffed irritably. "I want to work on modifying an art, and it's my first one. Have you heard of Harmony of the Dancing Wind?"

"Mm, that is a funny little art isn't it," bian Ya mused, cracking an eye open. "A bit awkward, in execution. I t's a good choice for you're first modification."

"I thought so too," Ling Qi said, fixing her gaze a few centimeters above their heads. "Would you be willing to provide some advice?"

"Well, you did help keep this wonderful pillow intact," Bian Ya said lightly, giving her an amused smile. "What is it you wish to change?"

Please Select one of the following Keywords to change

[] Connections
[]Wind
[] Music
[] Empathy,
[] Presence
[] Perceptiveness
[] Manipulation

and Select what you would like the keyword to change too
[][new] Example

This vote will be by plan to avoid weirdness eg

Passive Effects:
+20 to Physical Armor
+20 to Spiritual Armor
+20 to Physical and Spiritual Armor of allies in Near Range
+20 to Physical and Spiritual armor vs. repeating effects(poisons, marks, etc.)
D Rank damage reduction vs Darkness


Unruffled Stygian Reflection: C
Duration: Short
Becoming as the surface of the water, the user absorbs the effects of a damaging technique or attack that is C rank or lower(this includes techniques that hit multiple times). If the technique is an area of effect, the user absorbs the technique's effects within Close range, protecting allies nearby. This effect can activate up to two times.

Rippling Starless Shroud: C

Duration: Long or Upkeep 10
Cloaking themselves in rippling energy that is neither water nor darkness, the user greatly enhances their defenses, and may even extend this shroud to allies nearby. Increases the users Physical and Spiritual Armor significantly, and grants D rank damage reduction against area of effect techniques. The user may extend this effect to up to five allies for free, and up to twenty allies increasing the cost by 5 each time(past the initial 5). Allies must be within Far range or less to benefit. When kept on upkeep, allies past the first five may be given the effects at C rank cost as a single action.

Black Mirror: A
Duration: Immediate
The lake's surface is imperturbable, and naught may change that Darkness, perfect and unbroken ripples out from the user, consuming all nearby for a single instant. In response to an enemy technique that would include them as a target, the user may activate this technique. On activation, the triggering technique is nullified(If A rank or less) or reduced by one rank in effect(if S or higher), in addition, any other hostile effects of lower rank which would target the user or allies within Close range on the same turn are reduced by one rank in effect.

Passive Effects:

+15 to Spiritual hit
+15 to Spiritual Penetration
+15 to Resist
+15 to War


Primal War Calling: C
Duration: Long

A heavy suspense and pressure building melody, this piece calls to mind the muster of beasts from across the province of emerald seas, called together for the final march. In an area out to Close range from the user, the shades of long dead beasts coalesce from the shadows, red of eye and fang. The beasts howl and roar, filling the air with a savage cacophony, causing enemies embroiled in the chaos to suffer penalties to speed and Physical dodge as the press of bodies bears down on them. While this technique is active enemies within range are attacked viciously by the shades, who use the musicians hit and penetration in combat. The shades attacks deal a base D rank in damage, and the technique as a whole counts as two combatants for the purpose of multi attacker bonuses and penalties. In addition enemies which attempt to dispel this technique or another of the users music techniques while within it suffer an additional two attacks from the beasts.

-General's Attendant: While active the user may use the phantoms of Primal War Calling to defend themselves and their allies. As a free reaction when an ally or the singer would be struck, the phantoms can take the blow instead. This nullifies techniques of C rank or lower and reduces the damage of higher techniques by one rank, applied before armor. Each instance of nullified or reduced damage uses one Charge of primal War Calling. The technique begins with three charges.


Eagle God's Defiance: C
Duration: Immediate

The fastest of the beast kings, the Eagle God, lord of those who flew and preyed on the world below was an impetuous beast, and dove into battle before all the others. If this technique is activated without Primal War Calling, that technique activates freely the next time the user takes an action. On activation, the user plays an ear splitting high note and the Eagle God flies again, if only for a moment. The initial cry is a spiritual attack against all enemies within Close Range, dealing C rank damage and reducing enemy physical avoid significantly on hit for a short time. The newly formed phantom then dives at a single target, dealing C ranked damage and carries them in a straight line in any direction, depositing them within a Far distance from their previous position.

Wolf God's Cunning: B
Duration: Short
The cunning Wolf God, lord of those beasts which hunt in number, he of the numberless wild hunt, was the second of the beast gods to engage the Diviner, and a less wise commander would have broken before the maneuvers of his pack. May only be used while Primal War Calling is active. On use summons a construct in the shape of an immense grey wolf within Close range. The wolf attacks with the users Spiritual and Physical Hit, reduced by one rank. It deals B rank damage on hit, and when damaging a target reduces their speed by one full rank.

The construct has C Rank health, and A rank Dodge of both types, as well as C rank armor of both types. It cannot be dispelled or suppressed. While active the phantoms summoned by primal war calling act with much greater intelligence, encircling, harrying and trapping foes. This causes the multiattacker attack bonuses of the user and any allies to be increased by 2 per combatant within range of the War Calling.
 
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Turn 10 Arc 4 Modding Vote 1
"I think I want to remove the active element," Ling Qi said, after considering for a moment. "The effects I find the most useful are the extension of my perceptions. I want to make that two way though. Really, the rest of the art is something I'm willing to discard, I have better arts for those purposes."

It had been a useful stopgap when she had lacked social arts entirely, but now between Playful Muse's Rapport and Moonless Saboteur's Smile, she had better options.

Bian Ya raised her head from Ruan Shen's shoulder, frowning thoughtfully. "I understand why you wished to speak with me on this matter."

"Senior Sister is the best expert I know," Ling Qi said humbly.

"Perhaps in a year or two when you've expanded your circle of acquaintances that might even be flattering," Bian Ya said in amusement.

"Give her a break, Junior Sister Ling has been trying pretty hard of late," Ruan Shen teased.

Ling Qi just crossed her arms and huffed at them. At least they had stopped… cuddling.

"It's not too difficult a task," Bian Ya admitted. "I would normally suggest removing the musical element to achieve what you are looking for, but your focus makes that a poor choice."

"You still practicing that art you were looking at before?" Ruan Shen asked, leaning back in his chair.

Ling Qi nodded. "Yes, it's proved pretty useful."

"You can probably use that as a model then, convert the Harmony of the Dancing Wind into a secondary background effect," Ruan Shen said

Bian Ya shot him an unamused look. "I believe I was the one being asked for advice?"

"Sorry," Ruan Shen replied, with a playful smirk.

"Hmph. In any case I would suggest leaning into your command of the wind," Bian Ya said. "It is an element of transmission, the medium through which light and sound alike must travel. For this art, I would suggest focusing on sound, attempting to add visual elements would simply snarl the qi flows."

Ling Qi nodded slowly. "I see, I would probably need to shift the arts heart meridians to head meridians."

"Not necessarily," Bian Ya replied. Ling Qi felt the wind in the room shift, and then a feeling of fluttering lightness and energy. When she heard Bian Ya's voice again, it whispered directly in her ear without the girls lips moving. "It can be of use to provide some bolstering effect to those you are in communication with."

"Of course, that'll cost you in other areas," Ruan Shen said.

"The Harmony of the Dancing Wind is unsuited to long range communication," Bian Ya said, giving him a quelling look. "I do not believe it can be adjusted past the battlefield coordination level. Of course communications are not your specialty, so for your purposes, that should be enough."

That was a fair enough point. If she went all in the communications aspect she probably could squeeze more range out of the technique, but she wasn't sure how useful that was, given her usual battlefield role. "Alright, thank you for your advice Senior Sister," Ling Qi said. "Do you think you could assist when I go to make the adjustments?"

"I can certainly observe," Bian Ya agreed. "And warn you if it seems that you are in danger of breaking things."

"That is all I ask," Ling Qi replied. She knew the process was too personalized for anything more.


Alright, it is now time for the art design vote

There are several parts to the art design.

First you will need to decide on the passives. HDW has forty points worth of passive bonus to distribute. No one bonus may be higher than half the value(20) in this case.
Bonuses may be applied to the following categories.

[] Combat perception
[] Social Perception
[] Spiritual Avoid
[] Physical Avoid

Example
[] Combat perception 20, Spiritual Avoid 10, Social Perception 10

Secondly, you will need to decide the new meridian count for the art. HDW has three head and two heart meridians at base. You may keep this the same or increase the number of head meridians, either by converting heart meridians or just adding additional head meridians. Increasing Head Meridians will increase the maximum range and perception effects of the art, while reducing maximum buffing efficacy. Meridians cannot increase beyond a maximum of 10.

Example

[][meridian] 4 head, 1 heart

Finally, you must choose how many techniques the new art will have. Actual technique effects will be designed in the next step. Right now the number and rank of techniques is being determined. You will have a certain number of TP(tech points) to spend on potency.

E or below= 0.5 points
D-rank=1 point
C-rank=2 points
B-Rank=4 points
A rank=8 points

HDW has a total of 6TP so for example it is impossible to have an A rank technique, it could however have a B and a C rank or three C ranks.

This vote is by plan, so a whole vote would look like this.

[] Plan example
-[] Combat perception 20, Spiritual Avoid 10, Social Perception 10
-[] 4 head, 1 heart
-[] C(2), B(4)

This Vote will be closing tomorrow and the next update will be Thursday, with the final portion of this mini arc on Saturday due to more mechanical nature of updates. Normal schedule will resume afterward.
 
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Art Modding 2
-[X][bonuses] Combat Perception 20, Social Perception 10, Physical Avoid 10
-[X][meridian] 5 head, 1 heart
-[X][techniques] 3C (6TP)

Okay, so far, your modified art is looking like this.

Potency: Green 3
Keywords:
- Communication, Connections, Wind, Music, Yang.
- Empathy, Perceptiveness, Manipulation, Music.
Meridians: Head x5, Heart x1; 2 music 4 wind
Max level: 5

Passive Effects:
+10 to Social Perception
+20 to Combat Perception
+10 Physical Avoid

Step 2 of art modification is determining your arts new effects. Due to stripping out the Presence Keyword, only the Spring Breeze Canto will remain in recognizable form. The other two techniques will have to be designed from the ground up. Now, I was originally looking into building a point buy system for techniques, but as I worked, I realized that I was essentially trying to design the Mutants and Masterminds power system from scratch, and realized that I am not in fact completely crazy. So instead, what I am going to do is open up tech design to you, the voters. Each person may submit 1 technique for consideration. Techniques will have to be approved by me, but at the end of a design period I will take the techniques I like the most and put them to vote.

Hard limitations are as follows: Techniques are C rank. Techniques must be focused on perception effects, or the obscuring thereof. Techniques may not have a range greater than 'Very Far' due to meridian numbers. Techniques may not give more than 'small bonus' to allies due to limits of Heart meridians. Techniques must follow the themes of music, wind, and communication.

The altered Spring Breeze Canto below is an example.


Spring Breeze Canto: C
Upkeep 5
The song of the breeze whispers softly in the users wake, echoing off of those in range, and carrying their voices to the users ears. While using any Music Art the user and any allies may communicate silently with short messages and images. This effect extends out to Very Far Range. While in communication the user and allies receive a small bonus to Combat Perception and Physical avoid, thanks to their coordination.

In addition, this effect offers the user an additional bonus to combat perception against enemies who can perceive their music.

So! Right now, we aren't voting, just submitting tech designs, have at it!
 
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Technique Vote
You may vote for as many techniques as you like and the top two that are from two different categories will be the techniques selected.

Perception

[] Four Winds Convergence: C
Short
The Winds travel between all lands, picking up sounds and secrets from across the world, one who has learned to listen to their song can gain valuable insights on their rivals. Requires Spring Breeze Canto to be active, and temporarily provides a large bonus to Combat Perception and Physical Avoid. If this bonus should result in an incoming attack moving up a grade of Awareness, provides a large bonus to the next attack or effect applied to the one so discovered

[] Summer's Cheerful Laughter: C
Duration: Long
If a musician listens closely, they can hear the summer winds' cheerful laughter as they play with that which interests them. And there are many, many things which can entertain the young fickle spirits of the summer wind.

Can only be active when Spring Breeze Canto is active. For the duration of the technique, the musician can cast their sense of hearing up to Very Far distance to better perceive that which is around them. Doing so grants one a bonus to Combat Perception and Social Perception.


[] Winter's Last Breath (revised): C
Short
Requires Spring Breeze Canto to be active.
The end of Winter blends into the beginning of spring, the frost on the winds merge with the warmer Spring breeze. Add the power of the last Winter wind to your Spring Breeze Canto to spread the wind outward. With its last breath, the Winter wind spreads your perception outward, up to Very Far range while sharing it with your allies. In that moment, you and your allies may sense your entire surroundings with Winter's cold, discerning sight.
Bonus to combat perception while the technique is active. Any enemy using stealth within range will be revealed unless they have Stealth potency that is one rank higher than Ling Qi's Stealth rank. May be reactivated for D rank qi.


[] Four Winds Messengers: C
Duration: Short
The wind knows itself even when blowing at cross-purposes, and so the herald of one of the great winds might recognize the task of an opposing peer. The user observes a target within Close range and attempts to determine roughly the direction and distance of others the target is acting as a scout or messenger for. Attempt is contested by Poise and Stealth. Information gained is limited to the target's understanding. The target must be observed without interruption for the full duration of the technique.

Additionally, the user may detect the presence of active communication effects affecting the target, unless obscured by an effect of greater potency.


Comms
[]Hidden Wind's Breath: C
Duration: Long
The wind connects all beneath the sky, mastery of wind and music allows the singer to weave a connection between two souls into the tapestry that may go unnoticed by all save their target.
Upon use, the user establishes a connection with an ally within Very Far range across which senses and thoughts may be shared, familiarity with the target increases the clarity of communication. While a connection is active, either side may use the other's combat perception <at a half-rank penalty> if it is higher than their own.

The connection requires perception rank equal to the user's stealth to identify it's presence, and a rank above to identify the user and target's locations. Duration may be refreshed instantly at D cost upon the effect's end. Up to 3 channels may be active at the same time.


[] (Alternative) Hidden Wind's Breath: C
Duration: Long
The wind connects all beneath the sky, mastery of wind and music allows the singer to weave a connection between two souls into the tapestry that may go unnoticed by all save their target.

Upon use, the user establishes a connection with an ally within Very Far range across which senses and thoughts may be shared, familiarity with the target increases the clarity of communication. Once the connection is established, it may be maintained over greater distances dependent on how close the two are - up to 500m + 500m*SL. While a connection is active, either side may use the other's combat perception <at a half-rank penalty> if it is higher than their own.

The connection requires perception rank equal to the user's stealth to identify it's presence, and a rank above to identify the user and target's locations. Duration may be refreshed instantly at D cost upon the effect's end.

[]Day of Celebration: C
Short
Heads of golden grain sway with music carried by fall breezes. A call has gone out. The time for festivals has arrived once more. Can only be active when Spring Breeze Canto is active. For the duration that Day of Celebration is active allies touched by Spring Breeze Canto may also silently share short messages and images with each other instead of just the user of the art. With festival music swelling allies under its affects find increased energy in their steps giving them an additional small boost to physical avoid.

[]Kindred Winds' Communion: C
Duration: Long to Persistent
The winds carry meaning across vast distances, so that understanding can be had in peace and even the most distant of friends may share each other's company. The user forms a connection with a willing target within Far range or an ally within Very Far range. The user and target can communicate meaning, concepts and thoughts with accuracy proportional to the understanding of the other party with each other. This effect expresses itself as an increase in Social Perception and Manipulation derived Skills. If the target is an ally, this effect becomes hidden from outside observers, increases in duration and range in proportion to the strength of the Bond between the user and ally. The duration increasing to Scene length at Bond 3 and Persistent at Bond 5, while the range increases in increments of 100m up to a total of 1km at Bond 6.


Translation
[]Spring Breeze's Whisper: C
Duration: Long
Requires Spring Breeze Canto to be active.
Mastery of the melody helps carry both words and meaning through the wind. The musician and willing listeners can understand each others words within Spring Breeze's Canto's Range regardless of language. This translation effect is not perfect. In addition the musician gets a small bonus to Speech.


[]Common-Breath Zephyr
Duration: Scene
Words can be easily carried upon the breeze, but the skilled practitioner may carry understanding as well, trusting in the wind which knows no boundaries of land or tongue. Within a peaceful social context, the user may activate this technique to accurately interpret statements made in another language, either a few simple sentences at a time or one more complex one, or to likewise communicate understanding of their own words to another person or group.


[]South Wind Blows Unerringly: C
Duration: Long
Just as crisp southern winds bring clarity and clear skies, this technique allows the user and any number of willing participants to communicate clearly through concepts, impressions and intent, bypassing the need for words and language.* Any participants attempting to lie or deceive whilst communicating in this manner suffer a full rank penalty to their Speech, as the winds of intent and concept blow crossways.


*Creator's note: This technique does not eliminate confusion due to usage of cultural metaphors and associated concepts, or loss of nuance or subtlety. The creator of the technique bears no responsibility for mishaps incurred through usage of the technique. Use at your own discretion.


[]Stolen Breath Comprehension: C
Long
There is much more to speech than just the spoken syllables. Intonation, context, body language, and much more contributes to what a person means when they speak. This technique bypasses the need for words entirely with a single willing person, smothering meaningless sounds with a soft melody instead conveying the raw intent hidden behind them. Communication through this technique requires no shared language, but is unmistakably more limited than normal dialogue.


[]Distant Wind's Convergence: C
Duration: Long
All winds eventually converge, just as surely as they will part. No matter how distantly they have traveled, or how long they have been apart, the winds readily unite like old friends. The user learns to channel their intentions into a message writ upon the wind, inviting another to do the same in the hope that understanding may be achieved. The user selects one target within range of Spring's Breeze Canto, and sends forth a wind laden with notes bearing a message of invitation and understanding. Upon receiving the message, the target may choose to reciprocate, generating a two-way channel of wind that both the user and the target may freely communicate across so long as the target remains in range. This effect bypasses the limits of language, and instead sends forth pure intention and expression. This does not allow for the full range of communication that language offers, but does convey both the intent and the tone of the sender to the recipient. However, attempting to lie or deceive over this channel results in a penalty to Speech or the relevant skill, as the sender's message becomes muddled in the wind due to conflicting intents.


[]Midsummer's Duet: C
Duration: Long

This piece, embodying sincere intent to communicate, speaks to the musician's ability engage with hopes, fears and aspirations of listener without words. Even the tenuous understanding thrums with new vitality, bridging cap left by lack of shared language. User and affected target find themselves able to express their intents and meanings through spiritual bond in a way reminiscent of singing names of spirits. This communication is not perfect nor detailed, but rather expresses attitudes from which details could be inferred given time and insight.
This technique allows one to communicate without shared language and gives large bonus to Social Perception and Speech (and derived skills) for both user and willing target towards each other.



Buff/Debuff
[]Warning Wind: C
Duration: Immediate
What use is knowing something that could help an ally if you cannot communicate it to them? The user may activate this art when an ally fails a combat perception test. A small breeze brings their ally's attention to the relevant area, allowing them to retry the test with a +30 bonus.


[](Revised) Winds of Winter Yearning: C
Duration: Long
This piece is not played aloud for mortal ears, carried on the flows of the users qi, this solemn melody is the music of the winter blizzard, entered but never left, and a song of exclusion to those outside. While active, no sound made within the Range of the User's Music techniques may exit that Range and a technique of B rank or higher is required to communicate outside. Enemies outside have significantly reduced Combat Perception against anything within.
 
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