Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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Inspired by @CrimsonOddball commenting on wanting to see a low morality Xianxia protag get their comeuppance by an MoI agent, it's not exactly what they wanted but hopefully its an entertaining read. I started this a 2 AM and I wanted to just get it out there while I had the motivation so please critique and ask questions!

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In the town of Báishuǐ just within the Emerald Seas due to the shifting of one of the countless rivers of the Thousand Lake's province, a rough looking group of a dozen men and woman stumbled through a heavy rain into a tavern just on the edge of town. As the doors opened onto a quiet and dimly lit bar the group made their way into the kitchen, into the pantry, and at last through a trapdoor into a space with over a dozen feet of soil and stone between their ceiling and the tavern floor.

The room was still poorly lit, though now by a few stones carved with formations casting the light. The group settled into chairs that were haphazardly around the room often leaning against tapestries that covered the reinforced dirt walls or overturned onto the wooden planks and rugs that made the floor.

As the trapdoor was closed and they began to shed damp cloaks and layers of blood covered clothes and armor a harsh weight was visibly lifted from their shoulders. Wine and jokes about the poor state of the new soldiers that they had cut down both flowed in equal measure. It had been stressful on them to plan and execute the theft of even a single chest of valuable supplies intended for the Wall.

The job had taken days of nonstop planning to make it happen on such short notice but the Grinning Moon had smiled on them. It wasn't often that a local barony suffered a much larger incident that took most of the extra patrols out of the area after all, and now Xìngjí would have more than enough time to make it to the Western Territories before he was even missed.

As everyone finished settling in one woman asked, "So Xìngjí, what'd we end up grabbing anyway?"

Xìngjí smiled, while he was younger than most of the others he had been the one with the talent to make it to Peak Yellow by twenty-five before being assigned to this backwater village as the head guard with his squad. The fact that he then brokethrough into Green Soul afterwards with no one outside the town any wiser only made the situation that much sweeter.

"Let's have a look!" Xìngjí laughed and set the chest on the war table sending countless beads and markers across the floor.

A swift application of his Broken Chains Circumvention caused Xìngjí to smile as his qi shattered the formations that would have destroyed the contents of his crew's haul and opened the small chest. He tossed aside the silver and gold bars that served as cover and he gently lifted the handful of Green Spirit Stones to inspect them. At the bottom of the chest he found the real treasure and with reverence simply ran a finger across the Cyan Soul Stone that had been ensconced within. These stones had been destined for the Wall but now they'd serve a far more useful purpose.

Thinking on the stories he'd heard about his destination, Xìngjí grimaced. It wouldn't be pleasant but such an assured method to gather power would be worth it. Besides, he had it on good authority that the Sun had a plethora of positions for those who weren't squeamish about doing what was necessary to get ahead in life and arriving with his talent, men, and proof of ability would guarantee him a spot amongst the jungle's barons.

Xìngjí shook his head to clear it of his misgivings, he refused to die in this spirit-forsaken dirt farming community. He was an immortal with the talent to match a Noble's and he now had the resources to prove it.

"It's our ticket to a life of comfort, with a quick sell of the silver we'll have enough food and supplies for our journey out of this dirtball and then," Xìngjí laughed and looked up from the chest, "it is on to para-"

Blood seeped into the floor as an entity in an elegantly cut though plain black robe and a white mask sat in a chair on the other side of the crate. He couldn't see anything behind the mask but his senses could feel the Silence in the air around the other person as well as the weight of their disapproval.

It took a single breath for Xìngjí to deploy his spirit beast, an Ironbark Strangler, whose vines and branches snapped out towards the person in the same instant as his Whipcord Backlash hurled him backwards.

Into an open hand that immediately crushed his windpipe and cut off blood flow through his neck.

Xìngjí kicked his legs as he hung in the air, struggling and failing to even gasp for breath. Cycling qi in an attempt to stave off suffocation he saw the sap and bark from his Strangler now littered the ground mixing with the fragments of bone and meat that were once his crew.

The person did not move so much as transition from one pose to another their other hand coming up to the side of his head and in a single flick of their wrist Xìngjí lost all sensation below his chin. The white masked person set his limp body beside the crate like they were setting down a sack, all without ever making a sound.

Xìngjí desperately poured his qi into his neck, hoping to somehow bridge the gap between his mind and the rest of his body yet even now the pounding of the blood in his ears was slowing down and air wasn't passing drooling lips.

"Not like this! I am better than this!" Xìngjí failed to scream.

The entity pulled out the soul stones, seemingly counting them, and placed them in the folds of its robes. Placing the bars of gold and silver back into the chest they locked it and tucked it under one arm.

In total Silence they took Xìngjí's chin in one hand and held so that he was forced to look the mask in the eyes as their other hand began to lift their mask and exposing only pale lips.

Xìngjí was incapable of trembling as he watched the lips open and everything went black.


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The town of Báishuǐ on the border of Thousand Lakes did not know what happened, only that they had been blessed with good fortune. The Lashing Vine gang, a group of bandits that had been based out of a local tavern, had seemingly vanished without a trace.

Holding the funerals over the course of a few days for the bandits, the town's recovery was impacted by the double blow of the disappearance of the Guard Captain Xìngjí and the revelation that the mayor would be stepping down and returning to Xiangmen to be with his family. It took weeks but the town began the long process of recovering from such back-to-back events and preparing for the coming Winter. The important thing for now was to ensure the Wards and grain would last the next few months.
 
A/N: Well, this is an idea that has been percolating through my head for quite some time. As always, enjoy the read, and critiques and criticisms are welcomed.
i'm not sure i like the idea that our family's servants sleep outside our territory... security concerns mostly.
While it makes sense in a modern setting, more traditional settings would have the servants live on-site.

Also, aren't our servants given the opportunity to cultivate ? Or saving on their salary for their children to do so. i think i remember something along those lines
 
This is the very first time I have ever heard of this idea. I really don't think that this is a thing right now.
that's not happening as far as I know.
Their kids might get to.

Us allowing our Mom to cultivate is us being selfish and wanting her to live longer. Age has highly negative effect on cultivation after all.
That does not extend to the servants we allowed Mom to take in.

It might extend to their children, should some show talent.
 
"You sure this is what you want to do?" Sixiang asked, the breeze kicked up by her speech sending Ling Qi's hair fluttering. "You decided yesterday that sticking together was better."

"It is," Ling Qi agreed, looking down from the cliffside at the shrinking backs of her subordinates as they descended into the valley. "Which is why they're staying in a loose formation while they do their tasks. They'll be able to support each other."

"That's not what I mean and you know it," Sixiang replied dryly.
Well, social is tiring I guess?
Sixiang is helping Ling Qi watch for and avoid backsliding.
"I know," she sighed, looking toward the south. "And I'll link up with them in the afternoon, but I need to check out the south. I just have a bad feeling."

"Well, I guess I can't tell you to ignore that. Adventure ho then, eh?" Sixiang said.

"You guys are so weird. It's not like you're going by yourself," Hanyi huffed in annoyance.

"Hanyi is right! There's nothing to worry about!" Zhengui agreed.
Party of three on one side and party of four on the other. It is indeed fine~
Well Hanyi wasn't wrong, Ling Qi thought wryly, turning to the south as her feet left the ground. They weren't far from the area she wanted to search, so she would not have to fly far. Their hunt for the source of the poison in the earth had already taken them to the southeastern quadrant of their assigned area. The edge of the zone was easy to see, little mountains, hills and vales gave way to ramparts of sheer stone that rose up to pierce the clouds, marked only by occasional straggling patches of vegetation.
Man, the mountain spirits in THOSE must be fuckhuge
As she soared over the land, Ling Qi had to wonder at that. Here, just south of the jutting peaks where the Sect made its helm, the wall was green and vibrant, these stretches of verdant valleys and little mountains stretching across the landscape, interrupted by chains of much higher peaks, but go only a short distance further and the Wall rose in truth. The peaks that rose south were massive things, White Cloud Mountain pierced the clouds at its peak, but the mountains of the Wall blocked out almost the whole of the southern sky.
And now we know why its called the Wall. It spans all the way past the cloud line, so it looks like a solid wall.
At least those mountains were not moving, Ling Qi thought wryly. They would all be in trouble then. Even still, however there was something ominous and humbling about them, like being in the presence of a higher cultivator, it brought to mind troubling thoughts about how very small she was. Now was not the time for philosophical quandaries however, and so Ling Qi put such thoughts from her mind and instead focused on her destination, and flew ever higher. She had learned in her lessons that the Cloud Tribes preferred to make their camps near to the cloud line. Camps above the clouds were more common for raiders, who did not have to worry about the survival of younger and less hardy individuals.
Hmm, that sounds like the raiders are probably going to be deploying in clusters of all-greens, while the regular camps have to deal with lower cultivation.

Noting that its not as bad as it sounds, Imperial doctrine is all about having squads of several Yellows pin a single Green down for the Imperial Greens to hammer down on, and Nomad strategy is inherently individualistic.
With that in mind, Ling Qi flew through the clouds, the dense moisture failing to so much as wet the tips of her hair or the hems of her gown. Soon, she soared above the slowly churning cloudscape, and began her search of the bare masses of stone that jutted into the sky through it. Without a spirit like her mentor, no snow could fall here, and yet many were still dotted with thick sheets of ice.
Well, above the cloudline theres not going to be any snowfall, but things can be cold enough for stray water vapor to just instantly flash freeze/condense on contact with the stone.
Even so, I'm guessing the nomads have significant spirit blood or something, if they can even bring their dependents near the cloud line.
The high mountains were a unique place, very little lived or grew here, but what did was always strange, and a little alien. She searched through fields of pale lichen as thick as grasses below, and soared over strange plants with pale fronds that rustled and seemed to follow her with their upturned leaves. At the very highest peaks, where the sky began to grow dark, and the faintest twinkle of starlight peaked through, even Ling Qi did not linger long. There was no air fit for breath there, and even the world's qi grew thin, making her skin prickle uncomfortably.
And mountains ABOVE THE ATMOSPHERE!
I'm guessing these parts don't see many visitors normally, with the higher risks of stellar radiation.
No spirits visible either, though the plants sound like they're tracking her by her qi, so probably opportunistically predatory?
However, Ling Qi did not pay too much attention to the region's natural features, and instead focused on what signs she could find of barbarian activity. The distortions in the natural qi left behind by their passage, old bones and the scorch marks on the ground from old campsites, and other signs. She did not meet with much success.

There were marks of their passage of course, even now she knew the tribes did not recognize imperial borders, viewing the whole of the mountains as their domain. However, what she found were only old hunting camps, months old at best, certainly nothing that she could really follow up on, nor anything that would legitimize the niggling ill feeling in her stomach. As the day wore on, and the sun reached its zenith and began to descend without her having found anything, Ling Qi began to think she had just let her nerves from last night's discovery and her Senior Brother's little tale get the better of her.
Well thats normal. Probably. They wouldn't be sending newbies into an actual hot zone
Perception Bonus Activated

As she began her descent toward the clouds she caught sight of something out of the corner of her eye. It was far away, little more than a blurry dot, perhaps a bird or a spirit, but it drew her attention all the same, and when she turned her head and focused on it, she saw that it was neither of those things.

Letting qi flood her eyes, Ling Qi focused, and saw a stout horse with deep russet red fur and a trailing mane that glimmered wetly in the afternoon sun. It ran in the sky, hooves churning the clouds beneath it as it ran. More importantly, there was a man on its back. She recognized his dress, from both stories and the simulation from Elder Jiao's trial the year before. He wore layers of fur and leather, rendering his figure bulky and indistinct, but she recognized the peaked fur hat and bone mask which covered his face perfectly well. She had only a moment to take in the sight before he dipped back into the clouds.
...you know, how often do these guys even get sighted? Fliers are rare and the mountains are huge, it'd take freak chance to encounter this.
Ling Qi paused only a moment on the ground before the trailing hem of her mantle fluttered and she shot off in the direction that he had gone. Heeding Sixiang's murmured words of caution in her thoughts, she blurred and faded as she activated technique after technique to cloak both her body and spirit from detection. By the time she slipped into the clouds, she was little more than a dark blur flitting between thicker concentrations of cloud. Even so, she flew as fast as she could, wanting to find the barbarians trail before it faded away into the ambient water and wind qi which made up the clouds.

Soon, she could feel the trail he had left in the air, it was like the scent of a storm, approaching on the breeze. She grew more cautious now that she had his trail, and even caught a glimpse of the barbarian now and then, far ahead. He was in the third realm, though she couldn't identify clearly what level he was… if barbarians even cultivated their realms in the same way. His qi did not feel more or less potent than hers though. Luckily, the weather had been slowly worsening all morning, clouds bunching up to grow thick and dark. Here and there thunder rumbled and lightning flashed in their bellies. While it did make hiding her own qi easier however, it also made her target harder to follow
Heaven and Wind user at a Green 2 proximate, not especially unusual for the environment.

And remember the Cloud Nomads attack with the storms of the Wall?
And that the training is unlikely to have been sent into an incoming storm, not on their first run to learn the ropes.

I'm thinking the weather is deliberately being whipped into a storm by the nomads here...think you could probably pull it off if you herded all the wind and water spirits into a big cluster and let the agitated spirits cook a storm up?
...And he was moving south still. They were swiftly heading toward the edge of the region she had been assigned too. However, after spending all morning searching for signs of barbarians, she was loathe to give up pursuit… What if he was a scout himself, heading back to camp to give the all clear?

Liao Zhu had surely seen as well, so perhaps she could assume that he would message the Sect if he truly thought there was peril… but if there was danger and she ignored it, that could reflect poorly on her. On the other hand…

"It's just one guy," Sixiang voiced her thoughts. "Could just be a hunter."

...And she could just be leaving imperial lands and putting herself in danger for nothing. She focused her attention on the qi trail she was following, his spirit didn't taste of urgency or bloodlust, but there was a certain eagerness, like an electric tingle on the wind. Through the churning cloud, she caught a glimpse of his flapping cloak in the wind. Ling Qi bit her lip, considering whether to follow him further.
Pictured, a dude without Fade ranks, exposed to the world.
Anticipation leaking from his qi.
As the man she had been following galloped up out of the clouds toward the mountain that loomed like a godly rampart ahead, the air changed. Arriving all too suddenly, like a freak summer shower that unleashed a torrential downpour from a formerly clear sky, two other presences leaping down from the mountain to meet him. Two more figures in bulky furs, riding red furred horses galloped down from the cliffs and across the sky to meet the man in mid air, and the power of their spirits was not less than his, though she still could not clearly sense their level of cultivation, she estimated that these two were significantly stronger, somewhere between threshold and formation, perhaps?
These guys on the other hand, had been concealing their presence. Camped here for a while?
Even as she thought that, she one of them stiffen in his saddle, straightening up as he turned his gaze to the clouds below, where Ling Qi hid. Her eyes widening in alarm, Ling Qi immediately sank deeper into the clouds, darting between arcing threads of lightning to hide in the dark belly of the storm. Despite that, she saw the man raise a hand to the others and ride past them, galloping down on his horse toward her hiding place.

Gritting her teeth, Ling Qi focused on tightening her hold on her qi and dispersing her presence through the shadows that suffused the stormcloud, she focused on the lessons she had learned in mastering the Sable Crescent Step, and the techniques that she had applied to better dodge attacks...

Stealth Bonus activated
Stealth Skill Advanced
Stealth C->Vanishing B


...And when the man rode through the storm, sparks of electricity dancing around the eye holes of his mask, he found only shadows lightning and a rumbling storm. Ling Qi watched him search, her thoughts feeling as unfocused and detached as the qi that had been her body as the man rode through where she had been. It was not a comfortable feeling, it was like holding her breath as a mortal, and every second that passed sent a feeling like the burning of air starved lungs through her spirit, and her focus threatened to crumble as her thoughts tried to float away, like leaves on the wind.

Yet the moment passed, and the man rode back to his companions, departing for the mountain from whence they came. Ling Qi collapsed back into a single shape, her shoulders hunched as she wheezed in a breath of moist storm charged air. Despite that, her eyes followed the barbarians toward the mountain. They were definitely out of her bounds, but…
...isn't that Jiao's Dissolve trick?
So I know I've seen some complaints that your scene bonuses to certain skills are useless/don't show up well, so I'm experimenting with just outright stating when they activate. Does it work? Or would you prefer that I not do that?[/b]

Its quite nice to see!

[X] One close call was enough, she would just report the activity.

If they could sense us with all our buffs up its not going to get any better
For the matter, if it came to a fight we can't even use Zhengui in a sky duel.
 
No spirits visible either, though the plants sound like they're tracking her by her qi, so probably opportunistically predatory?

Really makes me think on how some plants work and photosynthesize in this setting. This one for example would probably be the type that requires little to no oxygen (whatever it would be called in this setting), kinda like a venus fly trap where it maybe gets nutrients from living things (would not be surprised to see something like that in Western Territories). It's probably the type to absorb qi. Don't know how common those types are.
 
i'm not sure i like the idea that our family's servants sleep outside our territory... security concerns mostly.
While it makes sense in a modern setting, more traditional settings would have the servants live on-site.

Also, aren't our servants given the opportunity to cultivate ? Or saving on their salary for their children to do so. i think i remember something along those lines
I mean, while I would like all of our servants to be housed in the manor that we have, there's a passage in a chapter which indicates that isn't the case right now. Here's the relevant section.
She could feel many unfamiliar presences inside, moving about. Usually she visited in the evening, after the household had mostly been dismissed or gone to sleep.
Emphasis mine.

So while it is likely that some of our servants sleep at the manor, other servants are dismissed, presumably to live in various areas in the town. There could be multiple reasons for why this is, but the most likely is that this temporary housing just doesn't have the room to house all the servants' resting quarters. I find it more feasible when we move out in a year or two that the estate we are given by Cai will have property sufficient to properly house the entire household of servants.

As for the servants learning how to cultivate? We're simply not paying them enough for them to get the spirit stones needed to cultivate. Furthermore, I haven't seen any indication that we are helping them cultivate like we are helping our mother, which means that they would mostly be cultivating blind if they choose to pursue such a goal. So, given the lack of funds and knowledge to pursue cultivation, I'm almost positive that our servants are not cultivating.
 
This is Ling Qi's first scouting mission. Let's play it safe and just do our job - which is to scout designated area. Plus, if our squad needs Green's help Ling Qi won't be able to respond quickly enough if she follows barbarians now.

[X] One close call was enough, she would just report the activity.
 
This is Ling Qi's first scouting mission. Let's play it safe and just do our job - which is to scout designated area. Plus, if our squad needs Green's help Ling Qi won't be able to respond quickly enough if she follows barbarians now.

[X] One close call was enough, she would just report the activity.
I didn't even think of that but you're right we need to be there to support the squad if something goes wrong.
 
Inspired by @CrimsonOddball commenting on wanting to see a low morality Xianxia protag get their comeuppance by an MoI agent, it's not exactly what they wanted but hopefully its an entertaining read. I started this a 2 AM and I wanted to just get it out there while I had the motivation so please critique and ask questions!
It is more on the side of taking out typical threats, rather than the stereotypical Xianxia protag I was thinking of
Still this is great, thanks for writing it
You forgot to tag yrs though

@yrsillar, pathos made an omake
 
Remember that most people have no cultivation talent so most of our servants could never cultivate no matter what.

Then there are cultivation fundamentals one has to have. This was never fully mechanically represented but the sect considered it important enough to have elders spend time on it.
You have be in good physical shape to even be able to do physical cultivation and being unbalanced or having wrong technique can lead to serious injury.
This has never been a problem for Ling Qi since she had a active life and learned good fundamentals.

Now I wonder how Ling Qingge is doing her physical cultivation. Doing spiritual which involves sitting and meditating can easily be done in the manor.
But physical cultivation involves hard workout, is she running laps and doing gymnastics in the manor garden?
Historically such would be undignified but in this setting it might simply been seen as part of virtuous cultivation.
 
Now I wonder how Ling Qingge is doing her physical cultivation. Doing spiritual which involves sitting and meditating can easily be done in the manor.
But physical cultivation involves hard workout, is she running laps and doing gymnastics in the manor garden?
Historically such would be undignified but in this setting it might simply been seen as part of virtuous cultivation.
Presumably there are spaces in the manor in which physical cultivation may be carried out privately if one desires
 
[X] One close call was enough, she would just report the activity.


Moon Sempai said he infiltrated nomads before, and theres a whole bunch there asking for a specialistto have a go?
 
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