Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

Voted best in category in the Users' Choice awards.
Yrs has answered this on discord once, and yes ice cream has been invented, but it's unfortunately a Celestial Peaks invention :V

That's fine. We can steal the idea and invent a better version.
I think we SHOULD have sorbets, frozen fruit juices and wines are pretty low hanging fruit, and we should have basically the greatest availability of fresh fruits throughout the Empire, which should be quite common in the foothills of the Wall.
I think Jin Tae considers our solution good, but hates it because it is insufficiently assholish at the non imperials.
I think its more of seeing this kind of political interaction as fundamentally zero sum, where Ling Qi seems to have given up numerous opportunities to score points, and left herself open to free shots, and yet somehow, got everything her side wanted, and paid nothing.

"Observe closely. If you value her, then it would be shameful to ignore what she is giving you."
Suzhen: Witness.

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Her attention was pulled back to the arena, the running clash between her friend and that…. harlot of princess ripping through the undergrowth.
harlot of a princess

"What is she doing then, Lady Suzhen?" Bai Meizhen asked, holding back her wince as A spear finally drew blood.

Odd capitalization
She couldn't win like this, nor was she press Sun Liling enough to reveal another technique…
press -> pressing

Gu Xiulan said resting her good hand over her burned on in her lap.

on -> one
 
Weird Snakes and Cultivation Problems
@yrsillar Omakke for the Omakke throne ! Would love to know what you think about those arts if you have time :D

Weird Snakes: Cultivation problems

"Ho, Little Miss Hao? I've been told you were looking for me?" A faintly amused voice made Shetong jump. She was cultivating near the spring she had detoxified a pair of days earlier, using the faint Wood qi from the copse of dead trees around her to develop her understanding of the camouflage technique of her Copperwood Scales Sutra when Meng Dihuo arrived.

"Lord Meng," Shetong hastily rose up and bowed at the level she'd been taught was appropriate from a commoner to a noble. "There's one thing I wanted to report and a question I wanted to ask a Senior I could trust." Thinking about it, she did owe the man for her entrance into the Sect, even if her status was lower than she'd like, and she was confident he had arranged her schedule. If there were one person here she could trust without suffering for it, that would be him. Worst comes to worst, the man was infinitely weaker than her mother.

The heavyset man sniffed once and scrunched up his face. "You may call me Senior Sect Brother. I have no doubt you'll make it in the Inner Sect sooner than later, so call that recognition in advance." He grinned proudly at her. "Is this about the remnants of spiritual corruption I feel here?"

Shetong nodded. "Yes... Senior Sect Brother. I dispersed the poison with my mother's art, but there was something... rancid here that I've never felt before at the source of it, and it disappeared while I was dealing with its emissions."

Meng Dihuo approached her and... Did he just pat her head? "Excellent job getting rid of that. I'll report to the Elders regarding that matter. Hopefully, most of that thing's qi was invested in the poison you dispelled. You've certainly earned the right to ask a question."

Shetong drew away from him and glared at his hand, causing him to guffaw. "The method my mother used to make me advance in raw cultivation no longer functions," she explained, keeping a furious eye on the man's hands in case he tried to pat her again. "No matter how long I spend bathing in my venoms, it's no different than just absorbing qi from a spirit stone or digesting a Core"

That seemed to take Meng Dihuo's smile right off his face. He frowned and asked carefully, "Let there be no misunderstanding... Your... Honored Mother... simply instructed to take in qi from an external source? She hasn't told you of a way of breathing or meditations you should accomplish while drawing it in?"

Shetong scowled. "She told me that it should come naturally once I reached my current level. It hasn't."

"That would be because you are not a Spirit Beast, Miss Hao." Meng Dihuo informed her. "Solving this should be no great problem, however. We'll simply need to find you a basic cultivation art compatible with your Honored Mother's. I have no doubt you'll be awarded something more complex when you enter the Inner Sect... I would need to skim over them to counsel you. I shall give you my word I won't share or record them, of course. Is that acceptable?"

The girl grimaced. Her Mother would grumble about it, but almost all of her arts relied on her scales, her talisman sword or her venoms anyways, so showing them was no big loss... Maybe it would even drive him to help her out more to give Mother face, even. She nodded, and took six chunks of colored jade out of her spatial ring.

The Breaths of the Five-Color Serpent
Base potency: Y2
Balance, Poison, Water, Wood, Fire, Earth, Metal
Keywords: cycle, power, renewal
Antithesis: stagnation, endings
Type: Offensive

Sun-Glare Crimson Breath (mastered)
Potency: Y2
Type: Heat, Finisher, Poison, Zone
Duration: Stunt
The last breath to exhale, the first to learn. Breathe out a vicious poison that burns and sticks to skin, organs, and qi.
If the target is affected by your Green Breath, its effects are burned out and the potency of Red Breath increases by 2.

Thousand Roots Viridian Breath (mastered)
Potency: Y1
Type: Bind, Drain, Poison, Zone, Wood
Duration: Upkeep 1
A poison to drink and steal and seal life and limbs breathed out and spreading out.
Limits the target's mobility and drains his qi until the technique no longer needs additional exposure and becomes self-sustaining and self-replicating. If the target is affected by your Blue Breath, its effects are imbibed and the potency of Green Breath increases by 2


Azure Dream Breath
Potency: Y2
Type: Debuff, Poison, Zone, Water
Duration: Upkeep 2
A hallucinogenic breath that oozes its way into the opponent's senses, making every movement in the poison cloud seem like one more enemy, inducing a sense of paranoia and slowing his thoughts.
Disable any IFF on the target's techniques, dramatically reduces his perception traits and prevents him from recognizing his allies as such.If the target was affected by your Golden Breath during the scene, its effects are condensed from it and the enemy's resistance roll is reduced by 2


Golden Ever-Tear Breath
Potency: Y2
Type: Attack, Poison, Zone, metal
Duration: Stunt

A vicious poison breath that tears and cuts into the target's soft tissues.
If the target is affected by your Black Breath, its effect is crystallized from it and the potency of Golden Breath is increased by 2

Onyx Seal Breath
Potency Y2
Type: Bind, Poison, Zone, Earth
Duration: Upkeep 2

Most complex of the Five-Color Copper Serpent Queen's Five-Color Poison, it forcibly introduces the conceptual immobility of the Earth within the very bones of the target.
If the target has been affected by your Red Breath during the scene, the Black Breath solidifies from it and the enemy's resistance roll is reduced by 2.
Lunging Serpent's Coiling Strike
Base Potency Y3

Balanced, Fire, Water
Keywords: Sword, Conquest, Motion
Antithesis: Stagnation, Silence
Art Type: Offensive

Flickers of the Coiling Flames
Potency Y3
Type: Movement, Fire
Duration: Long

A complex system of footwork inspired by a coiled serpent's intimating feints, it imitates the will-o-wisps of the Thousand Lake's northern mangroves, flickering and blinking from place to place.
When this technique is active, your speed, dodge, and parry scores increase dramatically.

Rushing Waterfall Lunge
Potency G1
Type: Movement, Attack, Water
Duration: Stunt

As simple as its predecessor is complex. This art consists of a single lunging overhead sword strike made utterly unstoppable by its fluidity and the titanic weight of the blow, inspired by the waterfalls on the Celestial Peak's borders that feed the Thousand Lake's endless thirst.


Constricting Fury Sword Style
Potency G2
Type: Attack, Movement, Fire, Water
Duration: Long

A sword art that exploits the other two techniques, letting you fight at extremely close quarters by dematerializing to dodge your opponent and multiplying the strength of your hits with seemingly sourceless impetus.
When this technique is active, bonuses from Flickers of the Coiling Flames are doubled, the qi cost of Biting Waterfall Lunge is halved and you no longer need space for run-up to use it.
Three Journeys of Mountains and Rivers
Base potency Y3
Balance, Earth, Water, Dream
Keywords: Travel, Dream, Humanity, Motion
Antithesis: Stillness, Stagnation

Travels on Mountain Paths
Potency Y3
Type: Earth, Movement, Dream
Duration: Stunt

For a true traveler, as long as there is a road, travel never ceases, be it in Dream, in truth, or both. By skimming the manifestations of roads in the Liminal, one's travel time can be significantly shortened.
Allows you to travel twice as fast through established paths and roads. On day-long travel or longer, roll for liminal encounters.

Journeys of Thousand Rivers
Potency G1
Type: Water, Movement, Dream
Duration: Long

When the road ends, the domain of untamed waters starts. Dive in and laugh with the dreaming waters, and you will find your way again.
Allows you to travel along a waterway at a speed determined by a spirit Ken roll.

Guide of Mountain and Rivers
Potency G2
Type: Water, Earth, Movement, Dream, Support
Duration: Long
Which traveler does not wish to take companions along? If you slow down a little, you could bring friends along
Allows you to use both previous techniques simultaneously and take up to two companions along (not counting non-materialized bound spirits).
The Trackless Mantra
Base potency: Y1
Balance, Earth, Wood,
Keywords: Silence, Movement, Chaos
Antithesis: Stagnation, Order

The Silent Tracks (mastered)
Potency: Y1
Balance, Earth, Stealth, Support

Footfalls and tracks and smells and disturbed air... The Earth shall take them all and hide them in its embrace.
Increases the difficulty of the test for tracking the user by 10 dice. If the user is also using it to cover his allies' tracks, the difficulty malus is lowered by a dice for each ally.

The Hidden Tree Mantra
Potency Y3
Balance, Wood, Stealth, Support
Ambushes or desperate escapes are about stillness. Take in the scenery, and be a tree.
Camouflages the user and his companions, giving them the appearance of trees, bushes, or even heaps of dead leaves.

The Thiefs of Footfalls
Potency: G1
Type; Wood, Earth, Construct, Support
Duration: Upkeep 1

Every seed and leaf and pebble under your feet and where they could have led rises as a construct, diffusing your qi to confuse and confound and fighting in your stead.
Creates 10 constructs of Wood and Earth equivalent to Mid yellow spirit beast. So long as they are active, the qi they emit adds 1 dice/ construct to the difficulty of tracking tests against the user.
Copperwod Scales Sutra
Base potency Y1
Balance, Wood, Metal
Keywords: Silence, Stillness, Power
Antithesis: Stagnation, Endings

White Scales Unbending (mastered)
Potency Y1
Type: Armor, Metal
Duration: Upkeep 1

Circulate metal qi to promote the growth of temporary scales all over your body. Like a vein of metal in the earth, your scales empowered by metal qi will be left unmoved by anything but truly cataclysmic attacks.
Improves your defensive rolls and slightly reduces your mobility and stealth.


Woodwalker's Mimic Sutra
Potency Y2
Type: Stealth, Wood
Duration: Upkeep 1

A complex qi circulation pattern that allows you to synchronize your qi's fluctuations with the land's and your scale's colors with the environment.
Vastly improves spiritual stealth and improves visual camouflage.


Copperwood Meditation
Potency G1
Type: Stealth, Armor, Recovery, Wood, Metal
Duration: Upkeep 2

Scales growing like bark, qi flowing in the body as in the land, restoring and harboring a daughter of the Nameless Mother.
This technique creates an egg of organic metal around the user and restores their wounds while hiding their spiritual presence.
Molten Sword Shedding
Base potency Y3
Balance, Fire, Metal
Keywords: Sacrifice, Sword, Power
Antithesis: Contentment, Stagnation, Humanity

Blood Ignition
Potency Y3
Type: Support, Fire
Duration: Long

Let white-hot qi flood your veins. Let burning blood through your shining scales. Anoint your copper blade. Let any whose death is worth your blood taste fury.
Any attack made with your sword will cause additional Fire damage.


Copperscale Armor
Potency Y3
Type: Armor, Metal
Duration: long

The boundary between a piece of white copper and another is thin indeed. This technique erases it, encasing your whole body with your sword's copper and fusing it in your grasp.
Total immunity to disarmament. If your sword is damaged while this technique is active, you take the damages instead and the sword repairs itself. Your off-hand is considered a weapon talisman while this technique is active. Improves your armor rating by one.

Molten Swordscales Shedding
Potency G2
Type: Finisher, Metal, Fire, Zone
Duration: stunt

Let your scales melt. Let burning blood and molten copper flow. Let your sword fly. For each scale shed, take a life.
Bombards an area or a single target with molten copper imbued by the heat of necessary sacrifice. Usable once per scene.

Once he was done examining the arts, Meng Dihuo turned back to Shetong with a wry smile on his face. "I have a feeling I may have underestimated your Honored Mother, Miss Hao."
 
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reads through @Oliver_Twister 's posts

mmmm, seems compelling of an argument enough. I'll go along with the vote that targets the Sun Family code.

[X] The wound in the heart, the gash torn in Community (+1 Community XP)
[X] The wound in the mind, the aching scars of Isolation. (+1 Isolation XP)

I however am self-obligated to vote for anything Isolation-related so I'm approval voting this as well :V
 
[X] The wound in the heart, the gash torn in Community (+1 Community XP)
[X] The wound in the mind, the aching scars of Isolation. (+1 Isolation XP)
 
[X] The wound in the heart, the gash torn in Community (+1 Community XP)

I have faith that we will have other sources of Isolation EXP be available soon.
 
He taught Liling that lesson after his perceived betrayal by the Bai because family doesn't betray family. But Sun Shao betrayed Liling with his decisions. That, I believe, is the biggest wound to her.

I agree, but I'm reading the consequences as isolation. She was isolated all through her sect journey, knowing that her family were the ones she was in community with, as she always had been.

But when her family betrayed her, she had nowhere to turn to, and is suddenly actually and completely alone. I think isolation in that sense is novel for her- but knowing that a community can turn it's back on you is like the founding myth of the sun clan, so I don't think those thoughts are new.
 
Adhoc vote count started by Juli Freixi on May 11, 2023 at 11:06 AM, finished with 154 posts and 101 votes.
 
[X] The wound in the soul, the eyes blinded by Power. (+1 Power XP)
[X] The wound in the mind, the aching scars of Isolation. (+1 Isolation XP)
 
I agree, but I'm reading the consequences as isolation. She was isolated all through her sect journey, knowing that her family were the ones she was in community with, as she always had been.

But when her family betrayed her, she had nowhere to turn to, and is suddenly actually and completely alone. I think isolation in that sense is novel for her- but knowing that a community can turn it's back on you is like the founding myth of the sun clan, so I don't think those thoughts are new.

But the founding myth of the Sun clan contains that rather than being that. The founding myth of the Sun clan is "see how people will betray you when they are not truly your kin," hence the family motto. It's a Community wound because the potential takeaways from being betrayed by family become, in that light, either "this means I am not truly kin" or "this means what I was taught was a lie" and those are still tangled up in Community rather than Isolation. The Isolation wound is lesser because she's doing her best to ignore and deny the new sense of distance, while the Community wound is going to be more prominent in her mind. A wound can't heal if you can't stop scratching at the scab.
 
Adhoc vote count started by Juli Freixi on May 11, 2023 at 11:06 AM, finished with 154 posts and 101 votes.
 
Unless the liminal suddenly unlocked the secret to time travel...
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Cai Renxiang:*pinches nose* what did you do this time Ling Qi?
 
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Turn 18: Arc 5-2
If what she was doing was noticed, then this whole effort would be for naught, ignoring for a moment all of the other consequences. Part of her was a little fascinated by the interlocking web of pains which she could barely perceive between the most prominent wounds. A puzzle she would like to pick apart, to give Ji Rong the best answer, but it was beyond her ability. Beyond what she was even willing to attempt.

Community, that was the concept she saw with the most clarity. Sun Liling's was harsh. A ringed fortress. There was no room for uncertainty or diffusion in it. A fastness where one was either inside a wall or outside it, with no uncertainty. But here, the outer wall was dust and rubble, the middle walls were breached, and blood oozed from the stones of the citadel.

"Feh, you're not wrong either way. There's folks who study that junk, but frankly we don't have the time or resources to dig them out of their workshops right now," Sun Liling said in the waking world. "Rong can talk to you about the pass, about our claims n' plans. We don't have any obligation to dig into the rest."

"I see," Ling Qi said, pursing her lips. "Would you object if I asked for whatever cursory knowledge your people here might have?"

"You wanna pick up barracks rumors and tall tales from the lads 'n ladies? Pft, go for it. I won't tell you you can't," Sun Liling drawled. "Is there anything else I gotta hear out?"

"There is one other matter…"

Her searching gaze passed over the 'outer wall' Here lay trust in the Empire, the air was rank with the bitter scent of betrayal. Silence from the throne, silence from far distant kin. Here she heard the scurrying feet of rats and vermin, hungry and opportunistic.

Ling Qi could understand this, to Sun Liling, those who had backed away from the Bai the moment they had begun to find their feet were no better than that. But for all her brashness that first year. She had not believed it so, until her loss and had stolen all pretense of their dedication to her family's cause.

Rats would scurry, rats would bite, what rats would never do was stand and fight. But you ignored them at your peril, you fed them fat, lest they gnaw your foundation to ruin at another behest.

It was an ugly way to see the world, but Ling Qi could not fully disagree. There were so many who would bite the open hand at the first opportunity. Out of reflex, out of malice, even if it helped them only for a moment in exchange for years of pain.

Seeing past the haze of immediate hunger was the first step to being more than a beast.

The Middle walls were different. Breached and crumbled, blood poured through the gaps. Here lay the men and women of the West, though looking down upon them, she could feel them blur before her eyes defenders and assaulters blurring in a mist of blood and stinking fear. Uncertainty lay here. She loved them still, were they fools, was she?

The Blood was a lie. It never mattered from whence it flowed.

There is the great gatehouse of the citadel. It was a battered thing. It had fallen once, been rebuilt with painstaking care. She could see the ash on the walls where the gates had burned before. See the shapes in the scorches.

A tall, broad chested man with crimson hair and a kind, easy smile. A silent wooden casket, laden with flowers, too light to contain such a man whole. A woman, far away and blurred to start and getting further, back turned and never looking back.

On the ramparts of the new gate burned the lightning star, small and spitting furious, burning bloody mist to belching black ash, but refusing to disappear.

But beyond the gates lay the bleeding citadel, and here there was the molten wound at its freshest.

The citadel was one man. A grandfather, heavy lined faced shrouded in a lion's mane of white hair. Strong and immovable. The steady mountain that held up the sky and pinned down the earth.

With eyes that were open pits of blood. A comforting hand becomes a pitiless grasp. Roots writhing under her skin. Soldiers marching, marching, to the tune of a drum, never hearing its beat.

Everything for Family. Family is Everything.

+1 Community XP


A bitter lilt to words that should have been the foundation of everything. Community could crush, community could kill. There was no thing in the world that could not be a weapon.



"...And that is?" Sun Liling asked.

Ling Qi blinked, and tried to drown out the beating drums. "My apologies, I was lost in thought for a moment."

Even with all of her preparation, she'd almost lost herself there, teasing out even those garbled visions. Sun Liling was looking at her with narrowed eyes. "I wished to know if the Sun family plans to coordinate with the Emerald Seas in their military operations."

"Your boss really gets cut out of the loop by her mum doesn't she. Sad that," Sun Liling said.

"Her grace prefers for Lady Cai to prove herself at every step."

"Sure, sure," Sun Liling said. "I know gramps talked to her. We ain't exactly planning joint operations, but we ain't planning to move any further south till your Duchess makes her move. Ain't I generous?"

"You are, thank you very much," Ling Qi said. "I believe Baron Ji should be able to answer the rest of my questions."

"He better," Sun Liling drawled, rising from her seat. "After making me come out here. You agree, Rong?"

"Yeah, I know what I got to work with now. Thanks Princess," Ji Rong said, standing by the door with his arms loosely crossed.

"Don't you of all people call me that," Sun Liling snorted. She brushed past Ling Qi a bit more roughly than was proper, and jabbed him in the side with her elbow. "Take care o' this and meet me out back. I want to blow off some steam."

There were several interpretations to that, some of which were wildly inappropriate. It showed a great deal of carelessness, disregard for Ling Qi… or simple confidence.

Sun Liling's voice drifted in her mind, one last scrap of dream from the closing connection. "You really gonna do this gramps? Deny me this?"

Ji Rong gave a grunt of acknowledgement. She didn't turn around until Liling had left. When the doors clicked shut, they were both silent for a beat.

"Shall we get down to details, Baron Ji?" Ling Qi asked.

"Yeah, no use wasting time."

A few words they'd prearranged. There were no far listening or recording formations in the room then. Ling Qi relaxed a hair.

"You see anything useful? Your lucky you already have a rep for spacing out," Ji Rong grunted, passing by her to collapse in one of the richly upholstered chairs. He looked like he'd bitten into a lemon.

Ling Qi considered, gliding to another. Taking her seat with more poise. "...Of things you likely don't know already… She's aware of the drums. She's conflicted about them. Something about it makes her feel like her people are being tricked."

Ji Rong's brows furrowed so deeply that his eyes were almost shut, and he let out a frustrated growl.

"...and she feels like King Sun betrayed her trust, and deeply," Ling Qi said. "....I do not think you should take any chance of her finding out what you asked me to do."

She didn't know how the princess would react but… she couldn't imagine any good outcome there, no matter that his intention was to help her. By the spirits, if she were a worse person, she could already see a path there, a path to breaking something fundamental in Sun Liling.

There was no concept that was not also a weapon.

"Ffffuck," Ji Rong said.

Ling Qi considered saying something pithy, and instead just lowered her head. "Yes."

Though he couldn't be aware of her own position, she couldn't help but be a little sympathetic, as one challenger of Sovereigns to another.

"So its not just in my head, and she knows it's some kind of bad news," Ji Rong growled. "Dammit."

"For what its worth, I think you're doing some kind of good, just being where you are," Ling Qi said quietly.

"The hells that mean?"

"She trusts you."

Little star, heaven star, spitting defiance and burning blood. Ling Qi let a little qi seep into her voice, to convey the depth of that feeling that simple words could not.

He looked like he'd been stabbed in the gut. His expression twisted.

"The hell am I supposed to do with that?" Ji Rong whispered.

"I can't tell you that."

"Fuck," Ji Rong repeated.

"I'm surprised you aren't declaring yourself the hero who'll solve everything with your fists. Isn't that how things go in the Ebon Rivers?"

"Heroes are the dipshits who show up to hit things after people are already dead, and then swan off without fixing a damn thing," Ji Rong spat, and she was surprised at his venom. "You wanna fight?"

Ling Qi grimaced. "Sorry, I was trying to lighten the mood."

"And we're relying on you to talk down the barbs. Empire's fucked."

She scowled at him, but the tension was broken. "I've held up my end of the bargain. How about we get to yours."

He grunted, straightening up his posture. He was clearly still troubled. But was putting it aside. "Alright, so why don't we get down to the way the army is getting positioned first. Liling and I swung by to show the flag on our way here, so I can tell you what I saw."

"That would be most helpful, Ling Qi said, resting her chin on her hands. "Just what are the Sun's intentions for the mountains?"

AN: Cutting for length here, next update will have a vote.
 
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She didn't tell him that drums were hearthbeat of some sort? It might be a data point that he should probably know, it will probably revelant to him.
 
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