Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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No, it wouldn't be justice because there was nothing illegal or even immoral to disowning a disobedient daughter that rejected her fiance to elope with a vagabond.

As a point of correction, she fled and then met the wandering guy afterwards. She did not reject the marriage to be with some guy she'd never even met, she fled because he gave off major creepy vibes and she had no other out.

You speak as they would have had to collect evidence in order to bring the case in front of a judge. Once again, there is no crime here, a cultivator killing a mortal (and a vagabond to boot!) that insulted him by cuckolding is just a matter of course. There is no case to be judged, and He Man would have no reason to get evidence of something as obvious as the sun in the sky.

The Forge of Destiny universe is not your average lowest-denominator Xianxia. If a cultivator kills a mortal for an insult, that cultivator has in fact committed murder. That's illegal.
 
The Forge of Destiny universe is not your average lowest-denominator Xianxia. If a cultivator kills a mortal for an insult, that cultivator has in fact committed murder. That's illegal.
Indeed.

We do have canonical confirmation that the one cultivator that harmed a prostitute had to pay a fine.

That might be less of a punishment than we want there to be, but there was one.

Mortals are not wholly without rights.
 
Turn 14:Arc 1-3
"Well, what is his wife like?" Ling Qi asked, considering.

"The Dianmu? She's…sharp, a lot more critical than the Leigong, she still kinda likes me, I think?" Yu Nuan said, trailing off into mild uncertainty. "You thinking the scavenger hunt then?"

"Maybe," Ling Qi considered. "The chase sounds fun, but I feel like it'll probably devolve into big moving brawl. The hunt sounds a little more considered."

"There's still gonna be some brawling," Yu Nuan warned, glancing down to where numerous fights had broken out among the revelers to the laughter and cheers of the other spirits

"Not afraid of that, just thinking of what would be better for cultivation," Ling Qi said seriously. "These kind of things are opportunities, you know? Technique insights come a lot easier in a place like this."

"You're not wrong," Yu Nuan grimaced.

"Did you prefer the chase?" Ling Qi asked.

"No, I just," Yu Nuan shifted from foot to foot. "Ah well, she kinda intimidates me, you know?"

"All the more reason," Ling Qi said piously. "Intimidating spirits have the best loot and arts."

Yu Nuan squinted at her. "You're joking right."

"Of course." Mostly.

"Can you still control this thing?" Ling Qi asked, not leaving herself open for interrogation. SHe gestured down to the cloud of soot under their feet.

"Oh yeah," Yu Nuan replied, resuming her strumming. It was a calmer but still energetic metre. "The big banquet table is usually up in the storm clouds."

Ling Qi nodded, glancing out to the revel. 'Any thoughts Sixiang?'

"Oh, I'm good either way, I think this is gonna be fun," Sixiang chuckled. Their tone reminded Ling Qi of the muses earlier days.

They rose, carried upward toward the rumbling belly of the clouds. Passing through the air was warm and damp, charged with a buzzing static that made strands of her hair jump and the hems of her gown dance, and there in the center was a great banquet table. It was a slab of solid rock, roughly hewn flat and all around it more spirits, people with the features of birds and bats, bulls and horses, and not a one missing a pair of wings in some shape. At the center of the table was the Leigong, seated on a cloud, laughing uproriously at something that had just been said by one of the many lesser spirits that shared his features. And at his side was a woman. Like Zeqing, she could have been mistaken for a human at distance and a glance. But she did not sit much lower than the Leigong on her cloud, towering some four meters high. Her hair snapped and frizzed and sparked, living lightning bound through a diadem of copper wire and sparkling jewels. Her face had an artificial feel, like a theatre mask placed over a bonfire, and when she turned to speak to the Leigong heat and sparks washed out. In her hands, she cradled a wide mirror of polished silver with an ornate rim, and her gown was resplendent in white and blue.

"Hoh, made your decision then?" The Leigong crowed as they rose close, voice rising over the chatter of the table.

"We have," Yu Nuan said. "And thank you for your invitation."

Ling Qi quietly scanned the rest of the rowdy table, they'd quieted with the Leigong's words, but there were still tussles and arguments and japes going on. These were their children most likely, Ling Qi thought, the little gods of clouds and rain.

"Well don't keep us in suspense then!" The Leigong boomed cheerfully.

"My companion and I'd like to join the scavenger hunt," Yu Nuan said. "If it wouldn't bother the Lady Dianmu."

"Never, my games are ever the less popular," spoke the diamu raising a hand to cover her mouth as she laughed. The sound crackled with electricity. "Perhaps the pair of you might give my sons some actual challenge in this round."

Two of the nearest spirits puffed out their chests. One resembled a smaller leaner variation of the Leigong, and one who took more after the mother with a hook nosed human face but wings that were arcs of snapping lightning, his whole body seemed to be made of hollow glass, filled with churning clouds.

"This Yun Long welcomes the challenge," said the lightning winged one, surveying them with crimson eyes.

"Mm, hm. It gets dull brother," the birdlike one said with a nod, crossing his arms over his slim chest. "Yun Sho also welcomes you, if you can keep up."

"That won't be a problem," Ling Qi said, smiling. Neither spirit seemed much above them in cultivation, if at all. Yun Sho matched her, Yun Long matched Yu Nuan.

"Ha, jolly competition, as is proper," Said the Leigong. "Well then, why don't you go along with my wife then.You were about to announce the list, weren't you dear?"

"So I was," the Dianmu. "Let all participants meet upon the floor of the great hall."

The mirror held in her hands flashed, and the greater spirit vanished a bolt of lightning. The lesser spirits shot them a smirk before their wings began to beat and they dove down through the belly of the cloud.

Ling Qi allowed herself a small smile at her companions frown, and bowed to the Leigong as the strumming picked up and their little soot cloud descended.

What awaited below in the main hall was a riot on pause. The drum beating of the ogres had risen to a new crescendo, playing a pulsing rhythmic beat, but the other sounds had died down. The winged spirits flocked in a great black ring above and the ground bound ones stood still, some in mid dance step or thrown punch. And in the center was the Dianmu standing at her full height, a crackling light that cast long shadows throughout the room

"Friends. Guests! The time for the days games has come. My husband will be down shortly for the merry chase, but for those who might like a different game I offer a hunt!" the Dianmu announced to raucous approval. "The rules are simple. The game shall be played in pairs, and betrayal of your partner is verboten. I shall make a list of things hints toward items to be found and collected. The pair which brings me the items that match most closely what I had in mind, in the greatest quantity shall earn of me one favor. The time limit shall be an hour!"

Even as she spoke, her hand rose and from it sparks and lines of lightning rained shaping themselves into characters, and sentences.

  1. The breath of a dragon, fresh and encased
  2. A flower born of mountain stone, sparkling and hot
  3. The sharpest blade, wielded by no hand
  4. The light of the sun, captured and radiant
  5. A Lady's laughter, bright and pure.

"These shall be your targets, hunters. Stand now with your partner, if you wish to play, that my eyes may mark you," the Dianmu continued as the list resolved in burning form, remaining unmoving in the air.

Ling Qi hummed to herself scanning the list and concocting ideas on what they could mean. "Any immediate ideas," she asked lowly, glancing toward Yu Nuan.

She sucked a breath through her teeth, brow furrowed. "I think I know what she means by the flower and the breath."

"That's good," Ling Qi said."You know this cloud is too slow, right?"

"What do you-" Yu Nuan began, turning her frown at Ling Qi.
"I have seen you hunters. Begin!" The Dianmu said brightly.

And then they were in the air as Ling Qi grasped Yu Nuan's hand and flew. The girl let out a startled yelp as they left even a hint of the firmament behind, and flew from the great hall.

"What the hell," Yu Nuan shouted, holding tight to the neck of her lute with her free hand. "Where are we going!"

"Don't know yet," Sixiang laughed silently, though Ling Qi knew Yu nuan could hear too. "But look half a dozen teams zoomed right after thinking we do. Give my girl some quick directions and let these zoom off the wrong way."

Yu Nuan muttered a string of curses, glancing around wildly at the palatial hall Ling Qi had flown down. Filled with rough hewn column and hanging ivy.

"She says right, then left, then down and down again, through a red arch carved like a flame," Sixiang whispered.

She immediately darted down the passage to the right, the air shimmering as the image of their party shot off down the left passage, an illusion made by Sixiang's twisting of the air, imbued with a hint of reality by dream qi.

Enough to split their pursuers at the very least.

"There's gonna be a locked door at the second stair," Yu Nuan shouted. "I don't have an escort this time."

"Got it!" Ling Qi replied. "Can you picture it really clearly for a second?"

"I…guess?" Yu Nuan shouted back.

Sixiang conveyed to her the image, a marble door inlaid with intricate scrollwork and carvings of the leigong and other spirits in court.

Another image of them shot off ahead, and they stepped ever so briefly into dream. It was a technicolor kaleidoscope of energy, blindingly bright and screaming with tearing wind. And it only last a handful of seconds before they emerged on the other side of the door.

"Neat trick eh?" Ling Qi chuckled.

"Something like that," Yu Nuan grumbled nouseously

"So, what's our target?" Ling Qi said, flying down the shadowed stairs, as Yu nuan collected herself, a bolt of lightning struck a stair ahead and she reappeared there with a crack, soon following Ling Qi under her own power.

"There's a crystal farm below, pretty sure that fits the flower thing," Yu Nuan shouted back

Well, that would be one down, Ling Qi thought. This was going to be fun.

AN: Going to need two parts for this look forward to the rest of the hunt on friday
 
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Yu Nuan is quite literally experiencing Ling Qi's wild ride! I'm hyped for the rest of this!

@yrsillar, does the use of the word "verboten" suggest this spirit has travelled far and met not!germans, or is this just another "don't think too hard about etymology in my fantasy universe" moment?
 
The breath of a dragon, fresh and encased
Seems straightforward about finding a dragon which makes me suspicious. Unless there is a dragons breath flower.

A flower born of mountain stone, sparkling and hot
something about lava/obsidian

The sharpest blade, wielded by no hand
Wind is said to cut through you and it's not held in a hand

The light of the sun, captured and radiant
Trapped sunlight? Seems to simple

A Lady's laughter, bright and pure.
This seems the dark horse winner, we need to make Lady Dianmu laugh more then she has in years.
 
"What the hell Yu Nuan shouted, holding tight to the neck of her lute with her free hand, where are we going!"
I think some letter-stff got tangled in the writing process.
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I really like that Yu(/Ling?) Nuan and Ling Qi work so well together. While Nuan doesn't sound enthusiastic about this search & chase. Both are similarly focused on their task at ahnd and just eem to click. Once they can work that into their day to day conversation they'll make a great clan!
 
The breath of a dragon, fresh and encased
Seems straightforward about finding a dragon which makes me suspicious. Unless there is a dragons breath flower.

A flower born of mountain stone, sparkling and hot
something about lava/obsidian

The sharpest blade, wielded by no hand
Wind is said to cut through you and it's not held in a hand

The light of the sun, captured and radiant
Trapped sunlight? Seems to simple

A Lady's laughter, bright and pure.
This seems the dark horse winner, we need to make Lady Dianmu laugh more then she has in years.
For the dragon: im thinking of a drink that lits a fire in your belly, maybe makes you breath fire.

Crystal farm should fit the flower.

Agreed on the wind, but i raise you with sharp words, for they can cut the soul as well.

for the sun... idk, dawn caught in a dew drop maybe? or just something gold and shiny? could also be a lamp.

for the laughter... yep, thats the best, but it will need showmanship, or something really impressive....
 
For the dragon: im thinking of a drink that lits a fire in your belly, maybe makes you breath fire.

Got to remember that we aren't dealing with European ideas of dragons. Most of the dragons we have seen have been river or weather related. It could potentially be freshly caught rain water or even lightning in a bottle. Yu Nuan did say she thinks she knows what this one refers to though.

I am curious about what the others could be though. We do know we should be able to find them in the court/home of these spirits so there are any number of answers for some of these hints.
 
"No, I just," Yu Nuan shifted from foot to foot. "Ah well, she kinda intimidates me, you know?"

"All the more reason," Ling Qi said piously. "Intimidating spirits have the best loot and arts."

Yu Nuan squinted at her. "You're joking right."

Ling QI looked up and paled as she caught sight of the figure standing in the middle of the returning snow, atop a half buried boulder. She had heard the term fatal beauty, bandied about in stories and poems, but this was the first time she had seen it. The spirit, for that is what it surely was, stood more than two meters tall, and yet retained the sort of graceful feminine look that Ling Qi often envied. Long, unbound silver hair fluttered in the wind like a cloak of silk, partially obscuring deathly pale and sharp features. Unlike Hanyi, the older spirits eyes seemed lit from within by a frigid light, but her full lips were the color of fresh blood.

Unlike her child, she wore a full gown of stark black, concealing her fully below her neck, Ling Qi wasn't even certain there was a full body under the gown, given the unnatural way the lower part rippled as the spirit moved. Most importantly, Ling Qi could perceive the weight and power of her qi.

"Of course." Mostly.
if your patron doesn't frighten you then are they even your patron?
 
"All the more reason," Ling Qi said piously. "Intimidating spirits have the best loot and arts."
Lol

Hmmm for the clues does lightning which has its own radiance be compared to sun? And stormy clouds be dragon's breath? I guess then kidnap Yun Long cause his body seems like enclosed storm and had wings of lightning. 1 & 4 done and no. 5 too Dianmu gonna have a big lol moment
 
Got to remember that we aren't dealing with European ideas of dragons. Most of the dragons we have seen have been river or weather related. It could potentially be freshly caught rain water or even lightning in a bottle. Yu Nuan did say she thinks she knows what this one refers to though.

I am curious about what the others could be though. We do know we should be able to find them in the court/home of these spirits so there are any number of answers for some of these hints.
well, could still be a drink, with lightning qi in it.... but you are right, it most likely isnt.
 
Just me or does Ling Qi feel much more... peppy?
When was the last time Ling Qi got to relax and just have fun with a game? Have fun with a game with your possible sister that can actually keep up with you?
Yeah a game with no political strings/meaning attached, nothing like that at stake. They might get a bit hurt but this is the sort of risk that Ling Qi likes to take. This is kinda her idea of fun. Besides stealing things lol.
 
Man, I love love love how our super high Initiative comes through, as does Yu Nuan's earlier complaint about "I need to be able to be able to move when I need to" like. We just GO!

and Yu Nuan's like "WHATTHE HELL! WHERE ARE WE GOING"

and we just laugh, because we enjoy flying regardless of where we're going hahaha! Find the direction once we're zooming, alright?! LESS GOOO

Especially because how many Thunder-aligned teams reacted to our lightning-quick thinking by following us, thinking we know what's happening LMFAO we just slipped through the Liminal! Good luck following up on that!

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This 8000% lightning Auntie time for Yu Nuan. Hell, she's not some Yuki-onna so she probably won't blow up if one of her children wants to travel with Yu Nuan at some point.

This is also, like, surprisingly relevant to exploration/foraging/hunting in unfamiliar lands. Especially if there are some ambushes from other players.

Note that the requirements for the challenge include the amounts gathered, and well. We're increasingly good at looting anything that isn't bolted down at high speed. Yu Nuan wasn't sure the thievery was something that'd still be relevant, silly Yu Nuan! Don't you know??

Everything's a heist! Hahaha!

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Last thing I'll note is that, while there may not be anything that's explicitly a reward for Ling Qi, this seems to be an excellent chance to blow off steam and focus on the positive parts of the future rather than the painful struggle it'll be to achieve more. We're here in a place we've never been to before, playing a friendly Hunting game of speed, wit and greed (grab-everything-you-can) with a potential sister and one-of-the-first new Ling. How fun is that?! I love this! And it sounds like Sixiang is loving the revelry too!

Sixiang has been practically begging us to take more time for self-care, specifically finding joy for ourselves, for about as long as we've known them. And here we are embracing that! In this Dream-focused turn, I'm really glad that it's able to start with something like this. Something that gets to embrace the changes Sixiang has pushed for Ling Qi for so long, and I don't even think Ling Qi planned for this to be an outing that allowed for this. She just immediately embraced the joy of the game, even if the risks are there too c:

I think that's why it makes so much sense that Sixiang is leaning into a Wind sub-specialty as well. Music and Dream are very important to us, but it's our Wind that really embodies our Joy whenever we use it. Sixiang is awesome, I'm glad they're enjoying this c:
 
Last thing I'll note is that, while there may not be anything that's explicitly a reward for Ling Qi, this seems to be an excellent chance to blow off steam and focus on the positive parts of the future rather than the painful struggle it'll be to achieve more. We're here in a place we've never been to before, playing a friendly Hunting game of speed, wit and greed (grab-everything-you-can) with a potential sister and one-of-the-first new Ling. How fun is that?! I love this! And it sounds like Sixiang is loving the revelry too!
The last time we helped a friend like this, and let them take priority, the friend got a one-on-one with a teacher. We got a Life-Time companion.
 
My only regret is that Hanyi wasn't able to join in on this adventure. Though I guess it could be good to have an exclusively Yu Nuan story with LQ which she could use to bond with Hanyi over.
 
The pair which brings me the items that match most closely what I had in mind, in the greatest quantity shall earn of me one favor.

I think we are going to get a vote like the one we got from the Wang sister and Bai Suzhen's husband.
There will be different options like getting art/lessons from the Dianmu, rare thunder/lighting resources, bonuses for the fief's rolls and so on.

The discussion is going to be fierce.
 
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