Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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The Declining Storm
He flexes his fingers, and a unit of men splits in two before a scintillating missile from beyond the horizon carves the land in twain where they had just stood. His grip on his cane tightens, and three kilometers in the other direction, three men manning a net launcher adjust their aim just so and catch a particularly skillful raider in their trap. He breaths, and the storm winds howl, ripping free from the grasp of desperate shamans beating their drums.

He is Yuan He, and he is the Storm.

His body, grown so frail and withered sits in the silent center, surrounded by spiralling golden coils that stretch far above the clouds. It does not escape him even now, how much he had come to resemble his old foe. Where once he stood in defiance under the stormwracked sky, the thunderous stomp of a divine beasts hooves ringing in his ears, with only a ragged collection of survivors and volunteers at his side, now he is the bringer of ruin.

His rains flood the valleys, his lightning sets the fields of aflame, and his winds scour the mountain peaks and skies. The Argent Sect will never allow the Emerald Seas to be ravaged by the Cloud men again. His awareness is the storm and within it, he knows every soldier as they were his own fingers and hands. A squadron led by a young Inner Sect disciple falters under fire from swarming nomads, and he draws the power and layered techniques from five squadrons not engaged. The beleaguered soldiers blades and arrows blaze, and the young disciples eyes burn with power far beyond his limits as he leaps into the sky and cleaves the heads from horse and horseman alike. A group circles silently under the rain seeking the flank of their supply lines, and with hardly a thought, a task group abruptly changes routes to intercept. Every moment a dozen, a hundred obstacles are revealed and men reorganized.

He is the Argent Sect, and yet he is alone.

Through their own senses he felt the champions of the Sect, the Elders who's back's supported it all. He saw Zhuge Ke, standing astride the head of his own dragon companion, fighting a whirling duel in the sky with a barbarian khan, a duel whose outcome was already decided as the fool brute he fought was maneuvered into the dense labyrinth of formation traps that Zhuge Ke's very thoughts wrote in the air.

There stood a haggard boy before the door of a ruined homestead. His eyes were as dull as his belly was sunken, and his pallid fingers were marked by dozens of scabbing cuts and pricks where blood had been drawn to paint the defenses that had shrouded the building.

He saw Nai Zhu's cackling flames consuming the the sky sledges and gers, of a tribe forced to abandon all to flee, taking her time consuming the poor few who had been left behind to slow her down, for she knew that those fleeing wouldn't escape the grasp of the White Plume's interception.

He heaved off the crumbled shingles which muffled the wailing cries of a child. There lay a girl child in the ashen ruins of a baronial manner, barely more than an infant and already scarred terribly from burns. He scooped the child into his arms, knowing she lived only because of the silken talisman gown she had been wrapped in.

The children of Ogodei's ruin, even they were growing fewer now, only those handful which had achieved the Sixth realm remained. Of his companions, only Shi Ying remained now.

The prodigal genius of the fallen Shi stood silhouetted in the sky, her smiling face twisted in hate. Her flesh burned with the energies and powers of all sixty three of their surviving companions, her three dantians and scores of meridians blazing with such light that her mere flesh was rendered a phantom. Her hair whipped about her face in the burning, cloud rending wake of the great stone she had torn down from beyond the heavens to strike Ogodei in the dearly bought moment of weakness purchased with the life of Guan Zhong.

And one other, he supposed.

"Pfah, It ill suits you to be maudlin, Yuan He," the voice rumbled from beyond him, echoing a hundred times over among the golden coils, coming down far above.

"I know you ill understand it Xuelong, but I am old," Yuan He did not speak through the withered husk sitting in the storm's eye, but on the wind and the crackle of the lightning."I have earned the right to be whatever I like."

There was a rumbling scoff from the sky, and then a came the building of radiance, a group of nomads was ralling about a leader, far from the location of any of the Elder's. Through the eyes of a disciples spirit beast, a mere third realm thing hidden away in a scraggly tree's boughs, he guided his long time companion's shot.

A river of lightning tore the sky asunder, liquified three hills and reduced a score of men to ash ash in an instant. The little bird whose eyes he had used fluttered away, protected by his will despite the distance.

Yet, despite everything, their actions were not without loss. The nomads were canny and knew the land. They fought with the desperation of beasts cornered in their dens. Soldiers and disciples fell in ones and twos, and each was another pinprick on his flesh, a reminder of failure, that no matter how mighty, one man could not protect the world.

Yet there remained things amiss. Tribes were missing gone from the routes they had followed since Ogodei's defeat had settled, and there was little sign of the creatures below. He knew better than to accept it as good fortune or his foes weakness. He had the reports. There was a great mustering under their feet, a clarion call that stretched far beyond the vault they had discovered, and a great gathering was reported in the far east, in the hot lands south of the Sun's grave.

Many had wondered if some power had protected those mountains from the Sun's wrath long ago, now he had to entertain the notion that such a power might be a foe. Yet, right now none of that mattered.

In his ancient chest, heat burned and on his forehead heavenly light blazed, the power of a storm lashing out against the confines of his upper dantian. Though a nomad's hands had done the deed, those beasts were what had truly taken his successor from him, the man he had raised in his blood brother, Guan Zhong's place.

They had taken his boy. The last proof of the true family he once had.

Even across the battlefield, he heard Guan Zhong's last laugh, his arts giving his body such weight that no light or qi could escape his grasp. Ogodei's spear punched through his chest, even as his hands grasped the barbarian's throat, and for one glorious instant, held him still.

The ancient body at the eye of the storm rose to its feet, and its open eyes revealed an infinite plane of crackling electricity, ill held by human flesh. Where it's gaze fell, the lightning came.

He saw his wife, withered beyond her years, spirit scarred and ripped full of holes by the terrible forbidden ritual arts which had enabled it all, had made them able to grasp and shunt their foe to their chosen battle, and confine the Sky for a battle that would only end when he or every one of the companions was dead.

The scattered tribes fled the advance of his Argent Sect.

Through them, he hunted them down like dogs. He saw himself through their eyes, the awful figure at the center of an unstoppable storm.

He saw the bubbling magma and melting stone at the center of the kilometers wide crater move. He saw a bright horn like solid lightning rip from the stone, and lightning fell at the sound of the spine chilling whinney. He saw the face of a man, cold and hard, his eyes burning with the fury of the righteous. A burned husk fell from his spear into the magma. His armor was cracked, his beasts scales were scorched, and blood ran from a hundred wounds, yet still he stood, and the storm came at his call. He felt despair, knowing that even now, all of their sacrifices had not been enough.

Yes. Yuan He could see that same despair in the eyes of Khan's great and petty.

Such was war.

A stab of pain echoed through his being, and though he did not falter in his command, he did turn his gaze inward, to the hair thin rupture in his lower dantian.

At least this would be his last one.

His time was ending. Perhaps, if an old man could deign to dream, the youngsters would do better than he.



AN: We will now have a vote on negotiations. Ling Qi is confident that she can fulfill the minimum requirements so please vote on which of the following points Ling Qi should focus on.

[] Sharing of historical texts and information. Strengthening the purported cultural ties will go a long way toward mollifying grumbling from more conservative factions in both parties.
[] Push for an exchange of people. You can't stay, but in speaking with your companions Meng Dan has volunteered and assured you his aunt would approve. Bringing back someone nobles of the Emerald Seas can see and speak too would surely help.
[] Don't press your luck more than necessary, you've established good relations, let things grow from there
 
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[X] Sharing of historical texts and information. Strengthening the purported cultural ties will go a long way toward mollifying grumbling from more conservative factions in both parties.

This please
 
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[] Sharing of historical texts and information. Strengthening the purported cultural ties will go a long way toward mollifying grumbling from more conservative factions in both parties.

Cultural exchanges are always good. Also, Yuan He is a very, very tired old man. Wonder how he killed Ogodei if that final blow hadn't done it. Maybe something Yuan did in the fight?
 
[] Sharing of historical texts and information. Strengthening the purported cultural ties will go a long way toward mollifying grumbling from more conservative factions in both parties.

We brought nerds, now is the time to use it
 
[] Push for an exchange of people. You can't stay, but in speaking with your companions Meng Dan has volunteered and assured you his aunt would approve. Bringing back someone nobles of the Emerald Seas can see and speak too would surely help.

Nothing as good as a person to humanize.
 
[] Push for an exchange of people. You can't stay, but in speaking with your companions Meng Dan has volunteered and assured you his aunt would approve. Bringing back someone nobles of the Emerald Seas can see and speak too would surely help.

A foreign exchange student would be fun.
 
Goodbye Yuan He. We really only interacted with the Sect Head when we accidentally stumbled into his lost friend's love nest, but it was fun nonetheless.
 
Her hair whipped about her face in the burning, cloud rending wake of the great stone she had torn down from beyond the heavens
I'd like to note here Elder Shi Ying cast Meteor. I wonder what it was? Part of the Moon, orbital debris left over from the end of the Age of Dragons?

He saw his wife, withered beyond her years, spirit scarred and ripped full of holes by the terrible forbidden ritual arts which had enabled it all, had made them able to grasp and shunt their foe to their chosen battle, and confine the Sky for a battle that would only end when he or every one of the companions was dead.
So that's what happened to who Yuan He had fond memories of during that adventure Likg Qi had with Xuan Shi, suicidebombed herself to force Ogodei into a prepared killing field. I suppose the forbidden rituals weren't talked about to Prince An since Inexorable Justice doesn't strike me as capable of not punishing a crime.

Also! Presumably Yuan He is well versed in the terminology of the Cloud Tribes—is that "Sky" he used in relation to Odogei supposed to mean Odogei had reached the Eighth Realm? Or just a reference to Ogodei's (presumed) Way?

A stab of pain echoed through his being, and though he did not falter in his command, he did turn his gaze inward, to the hair thin rupture in his lower dantian.
Which means, if Sun Shao's judgement on the prognosis of his sister's degradation can be held similar, Yuan He isn't going to last the decade.

Unless there's another genius Elder lurking around unnoticed, this basically means the Argent Sect is done for as the super special preeminent Sect of the Empire, right? Just a bunch of Sixth Realms that'll eventually reduce to single digits, without the Seventh Realm that made it a peer to any Count clan.

[] Sharing of historical texts and information. Strengthening the purported cultural ties will go a long way toward mollifying grumbling from more conservative factions in both parties.
Focused entirely on the Emerald Seas, since as far as I can tell, the White Sky is entirely willing to hold to the non-aggression treaty without PR messaging; they don't care about the Emerald Seas, really, and the Twelve Stars aren't going to ask for assistance from demons without value for attacking the Emerald Seas.

That being said, brings the more conservative members of the Seas in line with the non-aggression policy, a salve to their pride while the Cai dismantle more of their stagnant traditions.

(I do wonder what's the Polar Gates' perception of the Weilu alliance? They exchanged a prince, and retreated south scant centuries later, leaving only a remnant. We know the Weilu turned isolationist shortly after the alliance was made — do their histories regret it, the Weilu abandoning any duties demanded by the treaty in the Frozen Skies' times of need?)

[] Push for an exchange of people. You can't stay, but in speaking with your companions Meng Dan has volunteered and assured you his aunt would approve. Bringing back someone nobles of the Emerald Seas can see and speak too would surely help.
Exchanges people to advance each polities' interests within the other's, functioning as somewhat of an ambassador. Helps the case we're tying to make in both polities, and possibly the easiest path to make a more lasting alliance.

(Though, who'll be sent? Jaromila? She's the only person who has any basis for pushing for alliance within the White Sky, probably of more use staying here. Sveta? She's literally less than a baby Green right now. A new character?)

[] Don't press your luck more than necessary, you've established good relations, let things grow from there
...Seems too much of a nothingburger of a vote. Voter habits mean this would only be voted for if the other two options get fearmongered.
 
He had the reports. There was a great mustering under their feet, a clarion call that stretched far beyond the vault they had discovered, and a great gathering was reported in the far east, in the hot lands south of the Sun's grave.

Many had wondered if some power had protected those mountains from the Sun's wrath long ago, now he had to entertain the notion that such a power might be a foe.

 
[] Push for an exchange of people. You can't stay, but in speaking with your companions Meng Dan has volunteered and assured you his aunt would approve. Bringing back someone nobles of the Emerald Seas can see and speak too would surely help.

Potential foreign exchange student? 😲
 
Unless there's another genius Elder lurking around unnoticed, this basically means the Argent Sect is done for as the super special preeminent Sect of the Empire, right? Just a bunch of Sixth Realms that'll eventually reduce to single digits, without the Seventh Realm that made it a peer to any Count clan.

Elder Jiao is Prism as well, no?
 
Anyway, now I'm done screaming, an excellent update Yrs. Pretty awesome to see someone at near the top of the power scale fighting from his own point of view, and getting some great insight on him and his history.
 
[] Sharing of historical texts and information. Strengthening the purported cultural ties will go a long way toward mollifying grumbling from more conservative factions in both parties.
This doesn't seem like a huge ask. I guess the risk would be that they look at our history and think we're shitty and we're not around to guide their interpretation. Or peeps on our side run away with things beyond our meagre influence. Eh, whatever.

[] Push for an exchange of people. You can't stay, but in speaking with your companions Meng Dan has volunteered and assured you his aunt would approve. Bringing back someone nobles of the Emerald Seas can see and speak too would surely help.
I'm not really feeling this. First, it's a pretty huge ask. People are pretty precious, and this is asking for a lot of trust.

Second, it gives a hell of a lot of influence and prestige to the Meng. As amusingly incongruous as having the famously isolationist Meng anchor the preliminary cultural exchange, I'm not sure we want to be making that kind of commitment at this juncture.

Third, I'm iffy on whether we have time and space to meaningfully host visitors. It's super cool and funny, but to actually make use of it involves very real narrative investment. We have a somewhat full plate in the immediate future with Zhengui arc, looking at FSS+, Hanyi + Bao Qian things, Bao Qingling/Luo, Xuan Shi sword adventure, and the tournament with all the politics involved in Sun Liling's return to the sect. And I'm pretty sure I forgot like two major things. Threading the accommodation of cultural ambassadors through these things looks difficult to me, especially when you consider the investment we'd have to make in getting to know them and their outlook before we could effectively promote them to ES nobles.

Fourth, we'd almost certainly not get Jaromila, Ilsur, or the Sun Priest dude. They have important leadership roles. I'm not sure who we'd bring. Sveta's pretty much the only other named character, and I'm not sure how capable she is of surviving away from home without her heart. We could even end up with multiple people, which compounds the complication of managing them on a social level.

Basically, it would hugely complicate everything, and I'm not certain we have the leeway or even skill to leverage it into gains worth the costs. This is a ball we would absolutely have to not drop, and that's something of a tall order with our history of juggling.
 
I like the idea of bringing someone like Sveta or Jaromila and introducing them to our home and culture. That sounds like a lot of fun scenes and the chance for a good relationship. Not to mention a Winter study buddy that could inspire our cultivation, an ally that's tied to us more than other factions, and a lot more lore than a bunch of historical documents.

I kind of want to be the expert on Polar Nation culture though, and if we leave Meng Dan with them for even a month he'll be the one to take up that role. How can we be the premier emissary to the Polar Nation and found our own trade route after a Meng got to lay roots for however long, y'know. Bit that feels like giving up a great opportunity just because someone else might share in the rewards.
 
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[] Push for an exchange of people. You can't stay, but in speaking with your companions Meng Dan has volunteered and assured you his aunt would approve. Bringing back someone nobles of the Emerald Seas can see and speak too would surely help.

Mmm, this one I'm torn on.

On one hand, it feels like Meng Dan is shoe-horning in on our thing :p

Otoh, bringing back someone with us could give us an ice lady to bond with which I want.

Otohoh, our Sect social life is already a mess, and adding another person won't help :V

Otohohoh it feels like a very strong option for our goals of actually trying to make stronger connections happen? But also I want to be doing the ice lady diplo and not have it get captured by others :(

hmmm

I wanna stay down south :V
 
I feel like hosting an exchange student is a huge ask considering our social time is heavily committed already and we are already in some risk of neglecting social connections on occasion. Plus, we really do want to get some more conservative support for this thing going. I am leaning heavily towards option 1.
 
Through their own senses he felt the champions of the Sect, the Elders who's back's supported it all. He saw Zhuge Ke, standing astride the head of his own dragon companion, fighting a whirling duel in the sky with a barbarian khan, a duel whose outcome was already decided as the fool brute he fought was maneuvered into the dense labyrinth of formation traps that Zhuge Ke's very thoughts wrote in the air.

There stood a haggard boy before the door of a ruined homestead. His eyes were as dull as his belly was sunken, and his pallid fingers were marked by dozens of scabbing cuts and pricks where blood had been drawn to paint the defenses that had shrouded the building.

He saw Nai Zhu's cackling flames consuming the the sky sledges and gers, of a tribe forced to abandon all to flee, taking her time consuming the poor few who had been left behind to slow her down, for she knew that those fleeing wouldn't escape the grasp of the White Plume's interception.

He heaved off the crumbled shingles which muffled the wailing cries of a child. There lay a girl child in the ashen ruins of a baronial manner, barely more than an infant and already scarred terribly from burns. He scooped the child into his arms, knowing she lived only because of the silken talisman gown she had been wrapped in.
Yuan He is a daddy who adopts orphans left behind during Ogodei's reign :V
The children of Ogodei's ruin, even they were growing fewer now, only those handful which had achieved the Sixth realm remained. Of his companions, only Shi Ying remained now.

The prodigal genius of the fallen Shi stood silhouetted in the sky, her smiling face twisted in hate. Her flesh burned with the energies and powers of all sixty three of their surviving companions, her three dantians and scores of meridians blazing with such light that her mere flesh was rendered a phantom. Her hair whipped about her face in the burning, cloud rending wake of the great stone she had torn down from beyond the heavens to strike Ogodei in the dearly bought moment of weakness purchased with the life of Guan Zhong.
I am not surprised that Elder Ling is that old

"Pfah, It ill suits you to be maudlin, Yuan He," the voice rumbled from beyond him, echoing a hundred times over among the golden coils, coming down far above.

"I know you ill understand it Xuelong, but I am old," Yuan He did not speak through the withered husk sitting in the storm's eye, but on the wind and the crackle of the lightning."I have earned the right to be whatever I like."
We got the name of the Dragon!

Even across the battlefield, he heard Guan Zhong's last laugh, his arts giving his body such weight that no light or qi could escape his grasp. Ogodei's spear punched through his chest, even as his hands grasped the barbarian's throat, and for one glorious instant, held him still.
Poor Yuan He, one of his sons (that was left behind by his dead comrade) got ganked

He saw the bubbling magma and melting stone at the center of the kilometers wide crater move. He saw a bright horn like solid lightning rip from the stone, and lightning fell at the sound of the spine chilling whinney. He saw the face of a man, cold and hard, his eyes burning with the fury of the righteous. A burned husk fell from his spear into the magma. His armor was cracked, his beasts scales were scorched, and blood ran from a hundred wounds, yet still he stood, and the storm came at his call. He felt despair, knowing that even now, all of their sacrifices had not been enough.

Yes. Yuan He could see that same despair in the eyes of Khan's great and petty.

Such was war.
Seems like Yuan He recognizes what was driving Ogodei to do the whole invasion thing.
 
Anyways, as exciting as it would be to have an Ice lady be witness to all the shenanigans we do in the Sect, I'm most probably gonna lean towards option 1 as well. I agree with the reasons @AbeoLogos and @Erebeal gave on this one
 
I have a crazy idea. People have been forgetting a genius Argent sect elder who is even a prism! I am probably wrong, but I could see Shenhua sending Diao Linqin to be a temporary sect head after Yuan He dies. She already was an elder and is a powerful prism. Of course you don't need a prism cultivator to be sect head, however we are in a war right now and I could see Shenhua sending her lover/prime minister over to keep the sect strong at least until the war ends.

Also I also wanna be the main person the White Sky Confederation turns too, and I think we cede too much of that in option two to Meng Dan. I agree with Abeo here.

[X] Sharing of historical texts and information. Strengthening the purported cultural ties will go a long way toward mollifying grumbling from more conservative factions in both parties.
 
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[X] Sharing of historical texts and information. Strengthening the purported cultural ties will go a long way toward mollifying grumbling from more conservative factions in both parties.
 
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Interesting but sad interlude. Sect's in for a hard time with its foundation withering away and successors having fallen short. Hopefully they'll last long enough for a few more rising stars to appear to help bear the burden.

On the vote, an exchange student sounds fun but feels like pushing too much too quickly. Made a nice introduction and formed a decent connection so I'd be happy just having information and text to bring back to convince others of the value of stronger ties.
 
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