Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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Oil and Bone
Future Days: Bone and Oil

Halfway up the outer sect mountain was a ravine. Spiders, from finger to human sized, crawled along the clefts and ridges in the ravine, their webs making a maze of ever increasing complexity. Past the spiders and past the silk maze lay a cleft in the rock. It was just large enough to squeeze through. That alone wasn't what made it interesting. No, what made the cleft interesting was the fact that it breathed. In and out. A mouth, or perhaps a nostril, of some slumbering beast. Dust, pebbles, and even small rodents lucky enough to avoid the spiders would disappear into the cleft when the wind breathed in. When wind left the cleft, nothing else did..

Stepping to the side, away from the eddies caused by shifting wind, Lin Huani shrugged off her pack and double checked her equipment. Pill case, check. Rope, check. Knife, check. Flammable oils, check. Food, check. Flint and steel, check. Water, check. Laying the pack to the side she peeled off her armor and double checked her formations.

It was her pride and joy. Boiled leather fashioned from black steel bear hide. It had taken six hunts hunting and haggling to gain enough hide. Once all the pieces were in her workshop came the real challenge. Making the leather into something more. Nights using heavy steel needles to punch through leather. Nights weaving string from bear sinew and dying them blue using crushed mountain poppy blurred in her memory. Yet, the work had paid off. The armor thrummed with power. Contained by her work. It was no masterpiece, like the ones on display from older disciples, but it was hers. And it was wonderful. Several fellow disciples even discussed commissions when, in a rare mood, she had shown off her work. Traditionally stationary formations being modified to work with armor was apparently worth such discussions.

It had taken long hours, and reams of paper, to turn those alarm formations into something useful. It had worked in the end, despite conditions. The armor had to be still for the formation to work, but then qi would move out in a ring around the armor. If the ring encountered anything living it would break, alerting the user. It gave a direction and since the qi only moved so fast, practice allowed the wearer to know where the ring was broken. Best used alone, she had never gotten it to ignore friends before the leather was ready, it was still the best formation she had created.

Once the leather was checked for stress, cracks, or anything else Lin Huani pulled it back on. She didn't know what was down in these caves, but she finally felt ready. Months of training had culminated in this. When the wind turned, withdrawing into the depths, Lin Huani followed. Into oily blackness.

The ball of qi floating above Lin Huani's hand attempted its best to push back the blackness of the cavern. Dim shapes crept into sight as Lin Huani walked along. Jagged tooth-like pillars rose from the floor and descended from the ceiling. They looked slick under the feeble light. Covered in oil or some black mucus. Her skin crawled when she approached them. They were wrong, how Lin Huani didn't know. Perhaps it was the way the pillars were more oil than stone, perhaps it was how they seemed to twist away from even the feeblest light. Whatever it was she resolved to try and stay away from them.

Lin Huani didn't know how long it was before she noticed. The pitch blackness around her oasis of light stole all sense of time. Had it been a minute? An hour? Longer? Yet, now when she took a step a faint sound echoed it. Skittering, soft and spider-like. She doused her light and triggered her armor's formation. Silence descended with the darkness. Her heart pounded and wind passed over her. Even the slight pressure of the breeze made her arm twitch. One second passed. Two seconds. Three seconds. Nothing. No alarm. No break in the qi. Was the noise just caused by wind moving back and forth in this cavern? Light flickered over her palm. Something skittered behind her. Close. Lin Huani looked over her shoulder. She screamed.

Perched atop one of the oily pillars was a nightmare. Covered by bone with six legs and two arms. Its spine curved unnaturally so above the waist it looked like a human, and below, where six legs twitched, bent flat, as a snake's. Its arms were short uneven stubs as if something had broken its forearms in half. Its face was carved. Elegant, graceful, womanly features ruined by black oily tears running from empty eyes. The nightmare even wore clothing, rich funeral wear, much like Lin Huani's mother had worn before being given to the spirits. Yet, the clothing was ragged. Torn and ripped. Stained black. Its face swiveled, staring straight at Lin Hauni. Its mouth opened, twice as far as a human's mouth could. Black oil dripped from the maw, staining clothes even more and adding oil to the pillar it balanced on. It screamed back. A horrible gurgling croaking sound that sprayed black oil.

Time froze. Each instant a frame that stuttered forward. Lin Hauni was grateful of training herself to the point of triggering Clockmaker's Repose with instinct. The art didn't actually freeze time, it just increased speed of thought so that the world looked frozen. Useful when working on formations, or getting ambushed. Left of her was an open area, at least hopefully. There were no pillars visible. More could be hiding in the darkness, but if this thing was using the pillars she wanted to fight it in a more open area. She would have liked more time to think, yet that was locked behind further levels of the art. This brief instant of thought would have to be enough.

Lin Hauni stumbled before turning and running. Behind her the creature abandoned all pretense of stealth and it skittered down the pillar. She should have realized the problem with her formations before. It expanded in a ring, it didn't expand in a sphere. Anything that flew or skittered above wouldn't be detected. She rolled sideways when she heard the skittering stop.

The creature slammed into the ground where she had been, its arms piercing the ground like spears. Dust erupted from the impact, buffeting Lin Hauni as she finished her roll by throwing a flask. The glass shattered, Lin Hauni twisted her arm and qi. Flames raced before her. The cavern lit up and the beast roared as flames licked oil, hungry and destructive. The visage of bone, now aflame, turned towards her, its roar overpowering the popping of flame and bone.

Lin Hauni threw her orb of light up and twisted her qi. The small battlefield now illuminated, by flame and light, and both hands free she studied the ground. No pillars were nearby for the creature to jump to. No pits that could be stumbled into. Smooth stone. As good as she would get. The monster lunged. Hands snapped into defensive posture. Bone wreathed spear batted away. Counter. Reset.

Lin Hauni shook her hand for a moment to get the pins and needles out. Even with Steel's Endurance active striking the beast stung. The creature circled warily. Cracks spread in spiderwebs from where she hit and flames began to crawl into the bones. If she could just endure the flames would eat away until she won. The monster screamed again, that same horrible gurgling sound. Cracks split further open and black oil seeped out. It spread over the creature extinguishing flames before it dripped down and pooled. Dust that plan. The hard way then.

Lin Hauni's feet twisted into a stance. The beast tilted its mockery of a head. Then it rushed high, spine popping as it lengthened. Bone spears glistened with oil above Lin Hauni in the light of her orb. Her skin darkened to dull iron. As the beast descended she shoulder checked it. Bones cracked and snapped as beasts screamed, enraged. While the beast folded over her, its bone spears pierced the ground behind her, nicking her heel. Lin Hauni bit back a scream. It burned. It burned in a way that she thought impossible. Like fire and maggots working together to eat her flesh.

Pain fueled her and she struck the beast again. Right where it had folded over her shoulder. A sickening break and more screams rewarded her. The monster twisted on her shoulder trying to gain leverage to use its spears, but Lin Huani shoved it off and jumped away. Metal flaked behind her as she cancelled her art. The landing was bad. Her heel flared with pain and twisted under her weight. A controlled roll turned into a skid. After she stopped, Lin Huani flipped onto her stomach to look at the creature.

It was pitiful now. Its clothing had burned away and its bones were cracked open. It was also only half a creature now. She had struck it three times in the same spot. Enough to break it in half. Its serpent half lay off to the side, still and lifeless. Crawling towards her, using its bone spears to pierce the ground and drag itself, was the human half. Yet, still it screamed.

"Please shut up." Lin Huani said as she stumbled to her feet. It took three steps to enter the range of the monster. It jabbed forward with one spear. She caught it in her arms. A twist and bone broke, fire having weakened it. The beast was helpless now. It tried to use its other spear to strike her, but that just caused it to fall down. A quick kick broke the other spear leaving it screaming into stone. From there Lin Huani stomped on it until the cavern descended into silence. Several more stomps just to make sure left Lin Huani's boot covered in black oil and shattered bones scattered around the clearing.

Once everything was still again, Lin Huani peeled away her other boot and looked at the wound the monster had left her. Already red and swollen, poking at it caused black oil to leak from the cut. She cursed. Had being struck by that beast caused that oil to get in her? Was that causing the terrible, painful, sensations in her heel? She grimaced before pressing the sides of the wound. Black oil mixed with blood spurted out of the cut creating a small pool next to her foot. It reeked, like rotting meat. Could the oil rot away flesh? She hoped not. She didn't have enough saved up for a visit to the medicine hall. Lin Huani kept pressing the wound, squeezing it through the pain, until only clean blood flowed out of it. Then she bandaged it and took some pills for stamina and qi. Hopefully that would be enough.

She looked over the scattered bones of the beast. What kind of creature was this? Nothing in the tales her great grandpa shared with her talked about anything like this. Some kind of wraith maybe? Would the sect even allow that? Letting the dead get restless enough to serve as a trial seemed a bit much. Lin Huani didn't consider herself over religious, but still. Dead things should stay dead. She shrugged off her pack, removed an empty flask and filled it with the oil substance the creature had secreted. Whatever this was, she had never seen it before. Perhaps it was useful. After putting the filled flask away, in a separate pouch to prevent any contamination, she studied the bones. A glint of light had caught her eye. Where was it? There!

On the bone were small characters. Smaller than any Lin Huani had seen before. She twisted it around. Yes. The characters would have been on the inside of the bone. Someone had opened up these bones, written characters on the inside and then somehow sealed them again. The characters were strange though. Nonsensical. Unless...

Lin Huani gathered several more bone pieces and brought her orb of light closer. They would have lined up like this. The cracks were unfortunate as they often removed characters. Yet, enough remained to get a clear picture. These were formations! This wasn't a creature after all. This was some kind of puppet. Here! These characters controlled the flow of energy. The rest of the characters were ruined or disjointed. But these were clearly meant to move energy around this part of the puppet.

Lin Huani dug out her notebook from her pack. Just these formations would make the trial worth it. It took almost thirty minutes to copy down the formations. She also copied down the more incomplete characters, just in case she could find a match in the archives. With these she could push the very limits of qi efficiency in her work. This saved her months of trial and error!

With lighter steps Lin Huani moved away from the battlefield and continued walking into the blackness.

Lin Huani didn't know how much time she had spent walking. Her mind was focused on the improvements she could make to her projects with the new formations. An iron door changed that. Covered in swirling formations it glowed a dull grey as Lin Huani approached. In the middle of the door was an indented hand print. She peered at the formations covering the door, but they were too small to make out. Making a couple of rubbings would have to do. Perhaps something could be gained from them later. A few rough strokes of charcoal got her a new scroll to study. Then, with a deep breath, Lin Huani put her hand on the door.

Stars. That was Lin Huani's first thought as the door split open. Above her white spots dangled. Stars though didn't pull black oil up to them, they didn't squirm as something inside tried to escape. The air reeked. Worse than a midden heap. Worse than breaking through to silver. She crouched by the opened door and dry heaved. This was a bit much, right? How could there even be so much oil and filth? A path stretched past the door, above a lake of oil. Congealed clumps of, something, floated in the lake. They bobbed with strange serenity. How many sacks were there? What was in them? Lin Huani didn't know if she wanted those answers. She pulsed her armor once. Nothing. Alright, then she just needed to keep her eyes up. Step by step she walked the path. Around her the lake popped and hissed, and something stirred the fluids below her. It was long, it took several seconds after the spikes breached the liquid for it to sink back down again. Each time it happened Lin Huani paused and held her breath. Whatever it was, it was far too much for her to handle. Best to avoid attention.

It took almost ten minutes of stuttered walking before the path changed. It split in two. One path went upwards, the other down. The path that went up glinted, coins laid abandoned. Specks of red looked like spirit stone fragments. Whatever laid on that path was going to be a treasure for sure. The thought settled heavy in Lin Huani's mind. Even a spirit stone or two would help. She really did need to start a health fund, spending stones as she got them wasn't the best plan. The downwards path though, Lin Huani shifted slightly away from it, that was where the screaming came from.


She had noticed the screaming about halfway in her walk. It started low, incomprehensible. Even now it was louder, but it had no words, it just sounded like the cries of some wild beast. No point in getting into unnecessary fights. There was treasure to be had! The first step on the upward path made Lin Huani pause. They had gotten clearer, was a message hidden in the screams? It still sounded like a wild beast, but meaning seemed to hover at the edge of the sound. A second step forward. The screams were algining into a message. The third step made it clear. The screams were distorted, beastly and wild, but it was clear someone was crying for help.

"Shit." Lin Huani said, before turning around and dashed. Thoughts of treasure, so heavy in her mind, vanished like summer fog. The lake of black oil hissed and popped furiously as she reached the fork in the path. Turning towards the screams caused her to skid towards the edge, but a twist of qi gave her traction on the stone and she hurdled downwards. In the corner of her vision a bone serpent rose from the now boiling lake. It dripped steaming black oil as it screamed at her. She ignored it. She wasn't going to let someone die. Not again.

The room she ran into was a large circle. The door was just big enough for her, so she didn't need to worry about the bone serpent outside, at least for now. The ground was a smooth black sand. But, the half finished sacks on the opposite side of the wall was what drew her attention. Three sacks laid half finished, the third sack however wasn't quite completed. Someone had been encased in silk. The man was dressed in an Argent Sect disciple's robe. His eyes widened as he saw her.

"Thank the spirits you heard me! Hurry! Before those beasts come back!"

"Any advice, if in theory, those beasts were already back?"

Two imposing figures stalked into the room. They looked like some horrific mixture of boars and man crafted from bone. Their head was set low, jutting out of their chest. Wicked serrated tusks curved away from their form. One held a shield with both hands. The other, a wooden staff capped with bronze.

The fellow Argent disciple tried to twist his head, but silk dragged his head back. "I managed to kill one by snapping their neck. Nothing else seemed to do anything to them."

Sound built around the creatures, or puppets, as they turned towards her. A staff ripped the air apart with its quick motions and the shield bashed into the face of their prisoner silencing him. As his head slumped forward, blood running down from a shattered nose, Lin Huani watched as the two arrayed themselves against her. Her mind whirred. She needed to end this fast, that was a serious blow to her fellow disciple. Each second she wasted with these things was a second his condition could get worse. She settled into her stance, skin darkening to iron, and her breathing slowed into a steady rhythm.

The staff wielder was the first target. Lin Huani burst forth, sand exploding behind her. The creatures were fast and the shield caught her fist. The bell-like gong from the strike had barely started by the time Lin Huani dropped into a leg sweep. A second gong resounded as the shield matched her speed. She twisted left, letting the bronze capped staff shower her with sand. Spinning away from the shield she tried to get her other foot past its bulk. The creature just shoved, sending her tumbling through the black sand.

Lin Huani spat out black specks of sand as she reset. "Plan B then." She dashed towards the shield bearing beast before skidding to a stop and hopping several paces back. The beast holding the staff had stepped forward to intercept. "Puppets then. Back to Plan A." Dashing towards the puppet holding the shield she twisted midway to meet the staff wielding puppet head on. Her forearm blocked the staff's first swing. She countered by grabbing one tusk with a stone covered fist. Then she slid under the puppet to avoid the charge from the other puppet. Cracks and pops echoed as she dragged the puppet's skull with her. Thankfully it seemed these puppets needed their heads. As the first puppet collapsed into the sand, Lin Huani reset again. "Alright. Not too hard." The remaining puppet paused before walking over to its fallen partner. It shifted its shield to one hand, reached down and picked up the staff. "Really? Shit."

The following fight was tough. Tougher than anything Lin Huani had done before. The puppet seemed to move twice as fast as before, and wielded its new weapon with as much skill as its first. Even when she managed to break through its guard and crack bone, sparking qi would leap about the puppet's body sealing any cracks. It was her rope that let her make progress. It fell out of the pack after a hit ripped it off her. It trailed behind her as she dashed away, and instead of pursuing, like it had done before, the puppet attacked the rope. A few more tests confirmed it. The puppet attacked the closest thing that moved. No matter how threatening, or non threatening. It only took a couple more engagements for Lin Huani to flank the puppet as it was busy smashing her poor rope. Jumping on its back and twisting the puppet's head finished the distracted beast off. Once the puppet fell still she moved toward her first goal.

The boy wasn't breathing. Lin Huani sliced the silk away and lowered the boy to the sand. Blood had stained the front of his robes, but that didn't stop her from tearing them open and listening for a beating heart. There wasn't one. No. She refused. She wouldn't let some else die. This boy wouldn't die because she wasn't good enough. He wouldn't. She tore open her pack and grabbed her pill case. It was stained black from the oils that leaked out of her broken flasks, but she didn't care about that now. Four pills gleamed under the sullen light of the cavern. One stamina pill, two qi replenishing pills, and one pill meant to repair wounds. Two months of hard work to get enough spirit stones for the pill. The merchant had promised her miracles when it was purchased. Being brought back from near death was one of those promised. Now she just hoped it was true.

Stuffing a qi, stamina, and her health pill into the boy's mouth she poured water in after and started to gently rub the throat. Lin Huani ignored the tears that fell. Ignored the creeping memories, Ignored how cold the boy felt, cold like her mother's hands. No, this time would be different. It had to be different. What was the point of being an immortal if people died around her? Even as her eyes blurred, Lin Huani kept rubbing the boy's throat, forcing pills down.

Lin Huani didn't know how long she knelt beside the boy. It didn't matter to her. Yet a hand on her shoulder drew her away from her vigil. Though tears casted the world into the depths of a river, Lin Huani recognized the person beside her. Elder Li, the elder that had welcomed new disciples months ago.

"I'm sorry Elder," Lin Huani croaked, "I wasn't good enough."

"You did fine." Elder Li responded. "I could have done this at any time, but I didn't think you would have liked the shock." She snapped her fingers. The boy's skin darkened to ivory, eyes disappeared, and the mouth closed. Now the boy resembled a large doll more than any living thing.

"Wha… What?"

"It was a puppet." Elder Li stood back up. "These puppets mimic human life and are useful for training certain medical arts."

Lin Huani remained kneeling beside the puppet. "So it was a waste then? Those pills I used?"

"Yes." Elder Li said. "Those pills had no effect and can't be reclaimed, but it is never a waste to care for fellow humans."

Lin Huani's knees shook as she stood up. "What do you mean?"

"You showed an impressive amount of concern for your fellow human. It is often difficult to find cultivators with virtues, so I am happy to have found you."

"I… I am honored to have the attention of an Elder."

"There is another test beyond this one, but I have seen enough and I think you have had your fill of trials today. Here." A silver disk flipped through the air before impacting Lin Huani's chest.

Lin Huani staggered backwards under the impact. Steadying herself she looked down at the disk. It shifted, as if currents of silver were winding their way through the disk.

"Show that to the medical hall tomorrow." Elder Li commanded. "Then you will have one month of training under me. And here." From the ceiling a puppet crept down a silk line. From its mandibles it spat out oil. Sand writhed where the oil landed, and a gleaming box of wood took shape from the twisting sands. "Consider this a gift. You gave up pills with no expectation of return, so here are some pills to make up for the loss. I will see you tomorrow." With that the elder twisted, vanishing into the air, leaving only a remnant of her presence, the silver disk, a pill case, and a lingering scent of blood.

Lin Huani staggered backwards before falling down onto the sand. Her hands shook as she held herself tight. Why had the Elder let her believe that an actual person, not some mimic doll, was in danger? Were all Elders so calloused like that? To just make her suffer? She took a shuddering breath. It didn't matter. She had impressed the elder. Somehow. She could just take what the elder offered. Improve her designs, improve her cultivation, and should she reach such heights one day, she would never be so callous. Yes. Learn from what was useful, get rid of the rest. That had taken her this far.

With her heart calming down, Lin Huani set about getting everything set. Her pack had been almost ruined. It had blocked several blows, but those blows had shattered her flasks and vials. Everything was covered in oils. It would take time to clean everything up. For now, she arranged the surviving pieces of her gear as best she could. Then she opened the pill case. What had the elder given her? The lingering smell of blood was crushed by the scent of lightning and steel. Nine pills were held by the case. Two qi restoration pills, two stamina pills, two health pills, and then three pills colored bronze ringed with bands of bright grey. Iron Peak pills, was what the note attached to the top of the case said, useful for those that pursued lightning and metal arts. They eased the flow of such qi as well as invigorated the body making physical cultivation easier. Yes, Lin Huani thought, she could work with these.

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A.N
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Future Days: Bone and Oil

Halfway up the outer sect mountain was a ravine. Spiders, from finger to human sized, crawled along the clefts and ridges in the ravine, their webs making a maze of ever increasing complexity. Past the spiders and past the silk maze lay a cleft in the rock. It was just large enough to squeeze through. That alone wasn't what made it interesting. No, what made the cleft interesting was the fact that it breathed. In and out. A mouth, or perhaps a nostril, of some slumbering beast. Dust, pebbles, and even small rodents lucky enough to avoid the spiders would disappear into the cleft when the wind breathed in. When wind left the cleft, nothing else did..

Stepping to the side, away from the eddies caused by shifting wind, Lin Huani shrugged off her pack and double checked her equipment. Pill case, check. Rope, check. Knife, check. Flammable oils, check. Food, check. Flint and steel, check. Water, check. Laying the pack to the side she peeled off her armor and double checked her formations.

It was her pride and joy. Boiled leather fashioned from black steel bear hide. It had taken six hunts hunting and haggling to gain enough hide. Once all the pieces were in her workshop came the real challenge. Making the leather into something more. Nights using heavy steel needles to punch through leather. Nights weaving string from bear sinew and dying them blue using crushed mountain poppy blurred in her memory. Yet, the work had paid off. The armor thrummed with power. Contained by her work. It was no masterpiece, like the ones on display from older disciples, but it was hers. And it was wonderful. Several fellow disciples even discussed commissions when, in a rare mood, she had shown off her work. Traditionally stationary formations being modified to work with armor was apparently worth such discussions.

It had taken long hours, and reams of paper, to turn those alarm formations into something useful. It had worked in the end, despite conditions. The armor had to be still for the formation to work, but then qi would move out in a ring around the armor. If the ring encountered anything living it would break, alerting the user. It gave a direction and since the qi only moved so fast, practice allowed the wearer to know where the ring was broken. Best used alone, she had never gotten it to ignore friends before the leather was ready, it was still the best formation she had created.

Once the leather was checked for stress, cracks, or anything else Lin Huani pulled it back on. She didn't know what was down in these caves, but she finally felt ready. Months of training had culminated in this. When the wind turned, withdrawing into the depths, Lin Huani followed. Into oily blackness.

The ball of qi floating above Lin Huani's hand attempted its best to push back the blackness of the cavern. Dim shapes crept into sight as Lin Huani walked along. Jagged tooth-like pillars rose from the floor and descended from the ceiling. They looked slick under the feeble light. Covered in oil or some black mucus. Her skin crawled when she approached them. They were wrong, how Lin Huani didn't know. Perhaps it was the way the pillars were more oil than stone, perhaps it was how they seemed to twist away from even the feeblest light. Whatever it was she resolved to try and stay away from them.

Lin Huani didn't know how long it was before she noticed. The pitch blackness around her oasis of light stole all sense of time. Had it been a minute? An hour? Longer? Yet, now when she took a step a faint sound echoed it. Skittering, soft and spider-like. She doused her light and triggered her armor's formation. Silence descended with the darkness. Her heart pounded and wind passed over her. Even the slight pressure of the breeze made her arm twitch. One second passed. Two seconds. Three seconds. Nothing. No alarm. No break in the qi. Was the noise just caused by wind moving back and forth in this cavern? Light flickered over her palm. Something skittered behind her. Close. Lin Huani looked over her shoulder. She screamed.

Perched atop one of the oily pillars was a nightmare. Covered by bone with six legs and two arms. Its spine curved unnaturally so above the waist it looked like a human, and below, where six legs twitched, bent flat, as a snake's. Its arms were short uneven stubs as if something had broken its forearms in half. Its face was carved. Elegant, graceful, womanly features ruined by black oily tears running from empty eyes. The nightmare even wore clothing, rich funeral wear, much like Lin Huani's mother had worn before being given to the spirits. Yet, the clothing was ragged. Torn and ripped. Stained black. Its face swiveled, staring straight at Lin Hauni. Its mouth opened, twice as far as a human's mouth could. Black oil dripped from the maw, staining clothes even more and adding oil to the pillar it balanced on. It screamed back. A horrible gurgling croaking sound that sprayed black oil.

Time froze. Each instant a frame that stuttered forward. Lin Hauni was grateful of training herself to the point of triggering Clockmaker's Repose with instinct. The art didn't actually freeze time, it just increased speed of thought so that the world looked frozen. Useful when working on formations, or getting ambushed. Left of her was an open area, at least hopefully. There were no pillars visible. More could be hiding in the darkness, but if this thing was using the pillars she wanted to fight it in a more open area. She would have liked more time to think, yet that was locked behind further levels of the art. This brief instant of thought would have to be enough.

Lin Hauni stumbled before turning and running. Behind her the creature abandoned all pretense of stealth and it skittered down the pillar. She should have realized the problem with her formations before. It expanded in a ring, it didn't expand in a sphere. Anything that flew or skittered above wouldn't be detected. She rolled sideways when she heard the skittering stop.

The creature slammed into the ground where she had been, its arms piercing the ground like spears. Dust erupted from the impact, buffeting Lin Hauni as she finished her roll by throwing a flask. The glass shattered, Lin Hauni twisted her arm and qi. Flames raced before her. The cavern lit up and the beast roared as flames licked oil, hungry and destructive. The visage of bone, now aflame, turned towards her, its roar overpowering the popping of flame and bone.

Lin Hauni threw her orb of light up and twisted her qi. The small battlefield now illuminated, by flame and light, and both hands free she studied the ground. No pillars were nearby for the creature to jump to. No pits that could be stumbled into. Smooth stone. As good as she would get. The monster lunged. Hands snapped into defensive posture. Bone wreathed spear batted away. Counter. Reset.

Lin Hauni shook her hand for a moment to get the pins and needles out. Even with Steel's Endurance active striking the beast stung. The creature circled warily. Cracks spread in spiderwebs from where she hit and flames began to crawl into the bones. If she could just endure the flames would eat away until she won. The monster screamed again, that same horrible gurgling sound. Cracks split further open and black oil seeped out. It spread over the creature extinguishing flames before it dripped down and pooled. Dust that plan. The hard way then.

Lin Hauni's feet twisted into a stance. The beast tilted its mockery of a head. Then it rushed high, spine popping as it lengthened. Bone spears glistened with oil above Lin Hauni in the light of her orb. Her skin darkened to dull iron. As the beast descended she shoulder checked it. Bones cracked and snapped as beasts screamed, enraged. While the beast folded over her, its bone spears pierced the ground behind her, nicking her heel. Lin Hauni bit back a scream. It burned. It burned in a way that she thought impossible. Like fire and maggots working together to eat her flesh.

Pain fueled her and she struck the beast again. Right where it had folded over her shoulder. A sickening break and more screams rewarded her. The monster twisted on her shoulder trying to gain leverage to use its spears, but Lin Huani shoved it off and jumped away. Metal flaked behind her as she cancelled her art. The landing was bad. Her heel flared with pain and twisted under her weight. A controlled roll turned into a skid. After she stopped, Lin Huani flipped onto her stomach to look at the creature.

It was pitiful now. Its clothing had burned away and its bones were cracked open. It was also only half a creature now. She had struck it three times in the same spot. Enough to break it in half. Its serpent half lay off to the side, still and lifeless. Crawling towards her, using its bone spears to pierce the ground and drag itself, was the human half. Yet, still it screamed.

"Please shut up." Lin Huani said as she stumbled to her feet. It took three steps to enter the range of the monster. It jabbed forward with one spear. She caught it in her arms. A twist and bone broke, fire having weakened it. The beast was helpless now. It tried to use its other spear to strike her, but that just caused it to fall down. A quick kick broke the other spear leaving it screaming into stone. From there Lin Huani stomped on it until the cavern descended into silence. Several more stomps just to make sure left Lin Huani's boot covered in black oil and shattered bones scattered around the clearing.

Once everything was still again, Lin Huani peeled away her other boot and looked at the wound the monster had left her. Already red and swollen, poking at it caused black oil to leak from the cut. She cursed. Had being struck by that beast caused that oil to get in her? Was that causing the terrible, painful, sensations in her heel? She grimaced before pressing the sides of the wound. Black oil mixed with blood spurted out of the cut creating a small pool next to her foot. It reeked, like rotting meat. Could the oil rot away flesh? She hoped not. She didn't have enough saved up for a visit to the medicine hall. Lin Huani kept pressing the wound, squeezing it through the pain, until only clean blood flowed out of it. Then she bandaged it and took some pills for stamina and qi. Hopefully that would be enough.

She looked over the scattered bones of the beast. What kind of creature was this? Nothing in the tales her great grandpa shared with her talked about anything like this. Some kind of wraith maybe? Would the sect even allow that? Letting the dead get restless enough to serve as a trial seemed a bit much. Lin Huani didn't consider herself over religious, but still. Dead things should stay dead. She shrugged off her pack, removed an empty flask and filled it with the oil substance the creature had secreted. Whatever this was, she had never seen it before. Perhaps it was useful. After putting the filled flask away, in a separate pouch to prevent any contamination, she studied the bones. A glint of light had caught her eye. Where was it? There!

On the bone were small characters. Smaller than any Lin Huani had seen before. She twisted it around. Yes. The characters would have been on the inside of the bone. Someone had opened up these bones, written characters on the inside and then somehow sealed them again. The characters were strange though. Nonsensical. Unless...

Lin Huani gathered several more bone pieces and brought her orb of light closer. They would have lined up like this. The cracks were unfortunate as they often removed characters. Yet, enough remained to get a clear picture. These were formations! This wasn't a creature after all. This was some kind of puppet. Here! These characters controlled the flow of energy. The rest of the characters were ruined or disjointed. But these were clearly meant to move energy around this part of the puppet.

Lin Huani dug out her notebook from her pack. Just these formations would make the trial worth it. It took almost thirty minutes to copy down the formations. She also copied down the more incomplete characters, just in case she could find a match in the archives. With these she could push the very limits of qi efficiency in her work. This saved her months of trial and error!

With lighter steps Lin Huani moved away from the battlefield and continued walking into the blackness.

Lin Huani didn't know how much time she had spent walking. Her mind was focused on the improvements she could make to her projects with the new formations. An iron door changed that. Covered in swirling formations it glowed a dull grey as Lin Huani approached. In the middle of the door was an indented hand print. She peered at the formations covering the door, but they were too small to make out. Making a couple of rubbings would have to do. Perhaps something could be gained from them later. A few rough strokes of charcoal got her a new scroll to study. Then, with a deep breath, Lin Huani put her hand on the door.

Stars. That was Lin Huani's first thought as the door split open. Above her white spots dangled. Stars though didn't pull black oil up to them, they didn't squirm as something inside tried to escape. The air reeked. Worse than a midden heap. Worse than breaking through to silver. She crouched by the opened door and dry heaved. This was a bit much, right? How could there even be so much oil and filth? A path stretched past the door, above a lake of oil. Congealed clumps of, something, floated in the lake. They bobbed with strange serenity. How many sacks were there? What was in them? Lin Huani didn't know if she wanted those answers. She pulsed her armor once. Nothing. Alright, then she just needed to keep her eyes up. Step by step she walked the path. Around her the lake popped and hissed, and something stirred the fluids below her. It was long, it took several seconds after the spikes breached the liquid for it to sink back down again. Each time it happened Lin Huani paused and held her breath. Whatever it was, it was far too much for her to handle. Best to avoid attention.

It took almost ten minutes of stuttered walking before the path changed. It split in two. One path went upwards, the other down. The path that went up glinted, coins laid abandoned. Specks of red looked like spirit stone fragments. Whatever laid on that path was going to be a treasure for sure. The thought settled heavy in Lin Huani's mind. Even a spirit stone or two would help. She really did need to start a health fund, spending stones as she got them wasn't the best plan. The downwards path though, Lin Huani shifted slightly away from it, that was where the screaming came from.


She had noticed the screaming about halfway in her walk. It started low, incomprehensible. Even now it was louder, but it had no words, it just sounded like the cries of some wild beast. No point in getting into unnecessary fights. There was treasure to be had! The first step on the upward path made Lin Huani pause. They had gotten clearer, was a message hidden in the screams? It still sounded like a wild beast, but meaning seemed to hover at the edge of the sound. A second step forward. The screams were algining into a message. The third step made it clear. The screams were distorted, beastly and wild, but it was clear someone was crying for help.

"Shit." Lin Huani said, before turning around and dashed. Thoughts of treasure, so heavy in her mind, vanished like summer fog. The lake of black oil hissed and popped furiously as she reached the fork in the path. Turning towards the screams caused her to skid towards the edge, but a twist of qi gave her traction on the stone and she hurdled downwards. In the corner of her vision a bone serpent rose from the now boiling lake. It dripped steaming black oil as it screamed at her. She ignored it. She wasn't going to let someone die. Not again.

The room she ran into was a large circle. The door was just big enough for her, so she didn't need to worry about the bone serpent outside, at least for now. The ground was a smooth black sand. But, the half finished sacks on the opposite side of the wall was what drew her attention. Three sacks laid half finished, the third sack however wasn't quite completed. Someone had been encased in silk. The man was dressed in an Argent Sect disciple's robe. His eyes widened as he saw her.

"Thank the spirits you heard me! Hurry! Before those beasts come back!"

"Any advice, if in theory, those beasts were already back?"

Two imposing figures stalked into the room. They looked like some horrific mixture of boars and man crafted from bone. Their head was set low, jutting out of their chest. Wicked serrated tusks curved away from their form. One held a shield with both hands. The other, a wooden staff capped with bronze.

The fellow Argent disciple tried to twist his head, but silk dragged his head back. "I managed to kill one by snapping their neck. Nothing else seemed to do anything to them."

Sound built around the creatures, or puppets, as they turned towards her. A staff ripped the air apart with its quick motions and the shield bashed into the face of their prisoner silencing him. As his head slumped forward, blood running down from a shattered nose, Lin Huani watched as the two arrayed themselves against her. Her mind whirred. She needed to end this fast, that was a serious blow to her fellow disciple. Each second she wasted with these things was a second his condition could get worse. She settled into her stance, skin darkening to iron, and her breathing slowed into a steady rhythm.

The staff wielder was the first target. Lin Huani burst forth, sand exploding behind her. The creatures were fast and the shield caught her fist. The bell-like gong from the strike had barely started by the time Lin Huani dropped into a leg sweep. A second gong resounded as the shield matched her speed. She twisted left, letting the bronze capped staff shower her with sand. Spinning away from the shield she tried to get her other foot past its bulk. The creature just shoved, sending her tumbling through the black sand.

Lin Huani spat out black specks of sand as she reset. "Plan B then." She dashed towards the shield bearing beast before skidding to a stop and hopping several paces back. The beast holding the staff had stepped forward to intercept. "Puppets then. Back to Plan A." Dashing towards the puppet holding the shield she twisted midway to meet the staff wielding puppet head on. Her forearm blocked the staff's first swing. She countered by grabbing one tusk with a stone covered fist. Then she slid under the puppet to avoid the charge from the other puppet. Cracks and pops echoed as she dragged the puppet's skull with her. Thankfully it seemed these puppets needed their heads. As the first puppet collapsed into the sand, Lin Huani reset again. "Alright. Not too hard." The remaining puppet paused before walking over to its fallen partner. It shifted its shield to one hand, reached down and picked up the staff. "Really? Shit."

The following fight was tough. Tougher than anything Lin Huani had done before. The puppet seemed to move twice as fast as before, and wielded its new weapon with as much skill as its first. Even when she managed to break through its guard and crack bone, sparking qi would leap about the puppet's body sealing any cracks. It was her rope that let her make progress. It fell out of the pack after a hit ripped it off her. It trailed behind her as she dashed away, and instead of pursuing, like it had done before, the puppet attacked the rope. A few more tests confirmed it. The puppet attacked the closest thing that moved. No matter how threatening, or non threatening. It only took a couple more engagements for Lin Huani to flank the puppet as it was busy smashing her poor rope. Jumping on its back and twisting the puppet's head finished the distracted beast off. Once the puppet fell still she moved toward her first goal.

The boy wasn't breathing. Lin Huani sliced the silk away and lowered the boy to the sand. Blood had stained the front of his robes, but that didn't stop her from tearing them open and listening for a beating heart. There wasn't one. No. She refused. She wouldn't let some else die. This boy wouldn't die because she wasn't good enough. He wouldn't. She tore open her pack and grabbed her pill case. It was stained black from the oils that leaked out of her broken flasks, but she didn't care about that now. Four pills gleamed under the sullen light of the cavern. One stamina pill, two qi replenishing pills, and one pill meant to repair wounds. Two months of hard work to get enough spirit stones for the pill. The merchant had promised her miracles when it was purchased. Being brought back from near death was one of those promised. Now she just hoped it was true.

Stuffing a qi, stamina, and her health pill into the boy's mouth she poured water in after and started to gently rub the throat. Lin Huani ignored the tears that fell. Ignored the creeping memories, Ignored how cold the boy felt, cold like her mother's hands. No, this time would be different. It had to be different. What was the point of being an immortal if people died around her? Even as her eyes blurred, Lin Huani kept rubbing the boy's throat, forcing pills down.

Lin Huani didn't know how long she knelt beside the boy. It didn't matter to her. Yet a hand on her shoulder drew her away from her vigil. Though tears casted the world into the depths of a river, Lin Huani recognized the person beside her. Elder Li, the elder that had welcomed new disciples months ago.

"I'm sorry Elder," Lin Huani croaked, "I wasn't good enough."

"You did fine." Elder Li responded. "I could have done this at any time, but I didn't think you would have liked the shock." She snapped her fingers. The boy's skin darkened to ivory, eyes disappeared, and the mouth closed. Now the boy resembled a large doll more than any living thing.

"Wha… What?"

"It was a puppet." Elder Li stood back up. "These puppets mimic human life and are useful for training certain medical arts."

Lin Huani remained kneeling beside the puppet. "So it was a waste then? Those pills I used?"

"Yes." Elder Li said. "Those pills had no effect and can't be reclaimed, but it is never a waste to care for fellow humans."

Lin Huani's knees shook as she stood up. "What do you mean?"

"You showed an impressive amount of concern for your fellow human. It is often difficult to find cultivators with virtues, so I am happy to have found you."

"I… I am honored to have the attention of an Elder."

"There is another test beyond this one, but I have seen enough and I think you have had your fill of trials today. Here." A silver disk flipped through the air before impacting Lin Huani's chest.

Lin Huani staggered backwards under the impact. Steadying herself she looked down at the disk. It shifted, as if currents of silver were winding their way through the disk.

"Show that to the medical hall tomorrow." Elder Li commanded. "Then you will have one month of training under me. And here." From the ceiling a puppet crept down a silk line. From its mandibles it spat out oil. Sand writhed where the oil landed, and a gleaming box of wood took shape from the twisting sands. "Consider this a gift. You gave up pills with no expectation of return, so here are some pills to make up for the loss. I will see you tomorrow." With that the elder twisted, vanishing into the air, leaving only a remnant of her presence, the silver disk, a pill case, and a lingering scent of blood.

Lin Huani staggered backwards before falling down onto the sand. Her hands shook as she held herself tight. Why had the Elder let her believe that an actual person, not some mimic doll, was in danger? Were all Elders so calloused like that? To just make her suffer? She took a shuddering breath. It didn't matter. She had impressed the elder. Somehow. She could just take what the elder offered. Improve her designs, improve her cultivation, and should she reach such heights one day, she would never be so callous. Yes. Learn from what was useful, get rid of the rest. That had taken her this far.

With her heart calming down, Lin Huani set about getting everything set. Her pack had been almost ruined. It had blocked several blows, but those blows had shattered her flasks and vials. Everything was covered in oils. It would take time to clean everything up. For now, she arranged the surviving pieces of her gear as best she could. Then she opened the pill case. What had the elder given her? The lingering smell of blood was crushed by the scent of lightning and steel. Nine pills were held by the case. Two qi restoration pills, two stamina pills, two health pills, and then three pills colored bronze ringed with bands of bright grey. Iron Peak pills, was what the note attached to the top of the case said, useful for those that pursued lightning and metal arts. They eased the flow of such qi as well as invigorated the body making physical cultivation easier. Yes, Lin Huani thought, she could work with these.

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A.N
@yrsillar Omake for the Omake throne.
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This one was really good! Whatever you did with this omake that was different from the others you've posted totally worked.
 
I do not like the idea of changing fss into something spring-y : \

there isn't anything wrong with winter. it is a beautiful season and giving up on it to go cavort in spring is something that's been done a million times before. you can do themes of rebirth, healing, rest, etc. etc. within the bounds of winter perfectly well.

there is a reason that t.s. eliot's first line: "April is the cruelest month, breeding..." is so powerful and immediate in artistic history. the wasteland is one of the most influential poems of all time. it grips the imagination and this line cutting against the conventional and tired depictions of spring and winter gives it a presence and strength in memory that so many other poems do not have.

going with sv-typical 'let me take a thing that is unique and unusual and make it like every other idea I have ever seen before' would be disappointing.
 
I do not like the idea of changing fss into something spring-y : \

there isn't anything wrong with winter. it is a beautiful season and giving up on it to go cavort in spring is something that's been done a million times before. you can do themes of rebirth, healing, rest, etc. etc. within the bounds of winter perfectly well.

there is a reason that t.s. eliot's first line: "April is the cruelest month, breeding..." is so powerful and immediate in artistic history. the wasteland is one of the most influential poems of all time. it grips the imagination and this line cutting against the conventional and tired depictions of spring and winter gives it a presence and strength in memory that so many other poems do not have.

going with sv-typical 'let me take a thing that is unique and unusual and make it like every other idea I have ever seen before' would be disappointing.

I'd totally be up with that if Ling Qi associated Winter with positive things. Her associations instead suggest that she associates it with the harshness of the world, and the fact that her mentor in Cold was a Spirit of The End means that this is incredibly unlikely to change... Doubly so when FSS is a pretty violent expression of Winter concepts.

Plus, she has both the Moon as a patron and forward progression as a Domain Insight, which makes seasonal progression doubly relevant to her--the overarching theme becomes forward motion, as a person and in time. "healing" and "rest" aren't really relevant to that, and "rebirth" is much more strongly associated with Spring.
 
I would point out, the liminal period between winter and spring?

Storms, avalanches, and mayhem

That's not what I'd call gentle. The consequences of an ancient place of cold experiencing spring tends to be mass destruction until things settle.
 
Oh, giving up the Winter-y aspect is the last thing I want, but I don't think that's really the plan.

Rather it's more going for Ling Qi's insight about endings = new beginnings. I'm fine with Ling Qi becoming Herald of Spring so long as it isn't Spring itself.
 
Turn 10: Arc 4-3
Potency: Green 3
Keywords:
- Communication, Connections, Wind, Music, Yang.
- Empathy, Perceptiveness, Manipulation, Music.
Meridians: Head x5, Heart x1; 2 music 4 wind
Max level: 5

Passive Effects:
+20 to Combat Perception
+10 to Social Perception
+10 Physical Avoid

Spring Breeze Canto: C
Upkeep 5
The song of the breeze whispers softly in the users wake, echoing off of those in range, and carrying their voices to the users ears. While using any Music Art the user and any allies may communicate silently with short messages and images. This effect extends out to Very Far Range. While in communication the user and allies receive a small bonus to Combat Perception and Physical avoid, thanks to their coordination.

Hidden Wind's Breath: C
Duration: Long
The wind connects all beneath the sky, mastery of wind and music allows the singer to weave a connection between two souls into the tapestry that may go unnoticed by all save their target. Upon use, the user establishes a connection with an ally within Very Far range across which senses and thoughts may be shared, familiarity with the target increases the clarity of communication. Once the connection is established, it may be maintained over greater distances dependent on how close the two are - up to 500m + 500m*SL. While a connection is active, either side may use the other's combat perception <at a half-rank penalty> if it is higher than their own.

The connection requires perception rank equal to the user's stealth to identify it's presence, and a rank above to identify the user and target's locations. Duration may be refreshed instantly at D cost upon the effect's end.

South Wind Blows Unerring: C
Duration: Long
Just as crisp southern winds bring clarity and clear skies, this technique allows the user and any number of willing participants to communicate clearly through concepts, impressions and intent, bypassing the need for words and language. Any participants attempting to lie or deceive whilst communicating in this manner suffer a full rank penalty to their Speech, as the winds of intent and concept blow crossways.

The alteration of the Harmony of the Dancing Wind art took place over several days, spread out in six hour sessions during which Ling Qi had Bian Ya's assistance. Altering an art was a meticulous task. It was not something one usually thought of while cultivating, but an art was an extremely delicate and complex framework of qi, and each every twist and slight variation in the flows could have cascading effects on the rest.

Which was a problem when it was inside of you, and something going wrong could mean blowing out one your meridians. However, Ling Qi had her advantages.

"You will need to lower the frequency of the emanation in the fourth ear channel here I think," Bian Ya said clinically, touching a finger to the pale green vein of pulsing light. "By two pulses per cycle, just a small adjustment."

Ling Qi grunted an agreement, keeping a tight hold on her internal energies. She sat upon a meditation mat, and Bian Ya stood before her, observing the glowing tangle of lights that represented the structure of Ling Qi's channels. Sixiang had been very helpful in generating the model. Letting out a breath through her nose, Ling Qi made the adjustment to the qi structure in her newest meridian. She immediately felt the mounting pressure in her right temple release as the flows smoothed and ceased struggling to go wild.

+1 Head Meridian

"I think that's the last one," Sixiang chirped cheerfully. On her shoulder, the image of the muse in miniature kicked their bare feet cheerfully. "I'm not feeling any more irregularities."

Bian Ya hummed thoughtfully, circling the floating meridian model. "No outstanding issues, but you require further efficiency. The flows are rough, and you are wasting qi."

Ling Qi nodded, rolling her shoulders. "That is just normal art cultivation though."

"Exactly so," Bian Ya said with a smile. "You have done good work junior sister."

Ling Qi was just glad to have completed the project. While it hadn't exactly taken long, it had been supremely uncomfortable. Her head still ached from what she had put it through.

"It'll get easier I think. You're head hurts cause there's still so much mortal-y stuff in there interfering with things," Sixiang said brightly. "Course, later you'll have to be careful not to alter yourself too much in the process, when the mortal bits aren't holding things in place."

"Not precisely how I would describe matters, but not wrong," Bian Ya mused as the model faded away. "But, Junior Sister, I am curious about one thing."
"What is that Senior Sister?" Ling Qi asked. She stood, rubbing her temple. They were in her living room, and the hearth had burned down. She should probably start it back up. It would be polite to offer Bian Ya some tea or something for her help.

"The, South Wind Blows Unerring technique, why did you choose it?" Bian Ya asked curiously. "I am aware of the task you have been assigned, but surely you can expect to be provided talismans which will deal with the issue of translation."

Ling Qi paused. It had occurred to her. She had worn Liao Zhu's translation ring after all. "I don't think I would be satisfied, relying on a tool," she said quietly. "The Duchess gave me the task. If a talisman is doing the work, then anyone could do it."

"I suppose I can see your logic," Bian Ya said dubiously. She graciously followed Ling Qi out to the dining room as they spoke. "But I cannot help but find it suspect."

"Mm, yeah that doesn't feel quite right," the miniature Sixiang murmured, resting their chin on a fist.

"It's hard to articulate," Ling Qi said wryly. "I guess… this task is going to be all about understanding strange people. I don't think I'll succeed if I'm relying entirely on a talisman."

It felt lazy, like she wasn't really taking things seriously. That felt disrespectful given… everything.

"I think I may understand," Bian Ya said. The girl gave her a thoughtful look. "Let me wish you luck on your journey."

"Thank you very much Senior Sister," Ling Qi said, offering a short bow. "Would you care for some refreshments before you go?"

There was just one more thing to see too, before she could focus on Hanyi's recital.

'Did you finish composing your part, Sixiang?' Ling Qi thought.

"...Yeah. yeah I did," the muse sent back silently, their voice subdued.


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The melody's theme was regrets.

Ringing softly over the mist shrouded hills, the nameless melody Ling Qi had composed echoed between the stone plinths half hidden in the morning fog. The air quavered with the sound, and the Mist twisted into the whispers of human shapes. The phantoms of fog fought, danced, gestured and smoke wordless whispers.

And each one faded, in time.

Here, in the field of gravestones representing the Sect's dead, Ling Qi played her song as a stick of rich incense burned down on the small altar before her.

There were no bodies here, but the dead had to be respected all the same. Until their families could claim them at least. Well, for those who had such things. Ling Qi had spent much time earlier, wandering the older stones which filled the hills, and the mist never lifted, even when she was long gone.

Ling Qi wore white today, the color bled from her gown, it's more fanciful elements gone. A gown of pure white, simply cut and layered. An unobservant watcher might think her a ghost.

It was important, Ling Qi thought, as she reached the refrain, fingers dancing across the length of her flute. It was important to be here, even if she wasn't really grieving.

"You're being way too unreasonable with yourself," Sixiang sighed, even as the wind stirred around her, the faint sound of a bow being drawn across strings serving as an accompaniment.

Ling Qi disagreed. Grief was a much stronger emotion. Claiming what she felt as grief was disrespectful. She was sad, certainly, but that wasn't the same. Regret was the right word.

"You can be obnoxiously stubborn," Sixiang grumbled.

Ling Qi played, and the incense burned down. The faint flickering light gleamed in the grooves that carved out a familiar name.

She had contemplated death before. When she had first dealt it, she had found her peace. It wasn't the first time someone she had known had died. Zeqing had been her teacher, after all, much closer than a mere acquaintance. However, Zeqing's death had been by her own hand, her own choice. It was different.

Then again, perhaps that was unfair to Shen Hu. By all accounts, he had known what choice he was making, being the last to retreat.

The last melancholic notes of the melody echoed out, and Ling Qi let her eyes drift open. Around her the phantoms in the mist shaped by her song faded away, sinking back to earth. Yes, even if she didn't grieve herself, she understood that others did. Each of these stones marked a memory, a discordant absence in a well played meter.

She had no responsibilities or obligations to any of them, not even Shen Hu, and yet, Ling Qi could not help but wonder if the dissatisfied feeling that churned in her stomach was something like what drove Cai Renxiang's ideals.

Only one of these deaths had affected her, and even then, not heavily. However, when she looked upon these new planted stones…

She was sad, but mostly she was dissatisfied. In the future, more people were going to die. This field was going to grow. But, Ling Qi thought it would be good if it grew less. If fewer people had to grieve here. If less connections were snapped by loss.

...So she was going to have to work hard, and do her utmost to make sure that her mission succeeded.

"You've got this. You're the girl who got three Moon Aspects to share, what's convincing some humans to play nice?" Sixiang said.

"Maybe," Ling Qi whispered. She cast one last look at the gravestone, the incense was burned down, only an offering, a little cup of pale cider that she knew he had enjoyed remained. Ling Qi crouched, and poured the libation out.

She wouldn't be back. By the time she returned, Shen Hu's remains, and his shrine, would be with his family. All that would remain was a name carved on the memorial stone.

"Heeeey! Big Sis! C'mon, it's time! You said you would listen to me practice!" Hanyi's voice rang out of the mist.

Ling Qi smiled wryly. She supposed she should get going, before Hanyi did something disrespectful.
 
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'ey early updoot's always welcome

The alteration of the Harmony of the Dancing Wind art took place over several days, spread out in six hour sessions during which Ling Qi had Bian Ya's assistance. Altering an art was a meticulous task. It was not something one usually thought of while cultivating, but an art was an extremely delicate and complex framework of qi, and each every twist and slight variation in the flows could have cascading effects on the rest.

Which was a problem when it was inside of you, and something going wrong could mean blowing out one your meridians. However, Ling Qi had her advantages.
Ruan Shen be ditching us halfway through the process :V

"The, South Wind Blows Unerring technique, why did you choose it?" Bian Ya asked curiously. "I am aware of the task you have been assigned, but surely you can expect to be provided talismans which will deal with the issue of translation."

Ling Qi paused. It had occurred to her. She had worn Liao Zhu's translation ring after all. "I don't think I would be satisfied, relying on a tool," she said quietly. "The Duchess gave me the task. If a talisman is doing the work, then anyone could do it."

"I suppose I can see your logic," Bian Ya said dubiously. She graciously followed Ling Qi out to the dining room as they spoke. "But I cannot help but find it suspect."

"Mm, yeah that doesn't feel quite right," the miniature Sixiang murmured, resting their chin on a fist.

"It's hard to articulate," Ling Qi said wryly. "I guess… this task is going to be all about understanding strange people. I don't think I'll succeed if I'm relying entirely on a talisman."

It felt lazy, like she wasn't really taking things seriously. That felt disrespectful given… everything.

"I think I may understand," Bian Ya said. The girl gave her a thoughtful look. "Let me wish you luck on your journey."
Translation tech callout

Ling Qi wore white today, the color bled from her gown, it's more fanciful elements gone. A gown of pure white, simply cut and layered. An unobservant watcher might think her a ghost.
Now her dress changed itself to white

She wouldn't be back. By the time she returned, Shen Hu's remains, and his shrine, would be with his family. All that would remain was a name carved on the memorial stone.
I really hope this is true and that his remains isn't at the bottom of an impurity river being fertilizer

"Heeeey! Big Sis! C'mon, it's time! You said you would listen to me practice!" Hanyi's voice rang out of the mist.

Ling Qi smiled wryly. She supposed she should get going, before Hanyi did something disrespectful.
Welp, here comes the Hanyi arc
 
Now this feels a proper send-off. Before, Shen Hu's death was just kind of another fact, something that faded into the background, it didn't draw much attention and didn't matter to the story. This ties it back into the story, and Ling Qi's wider character arc of 'what is person?'
 
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"The, South Wind Blows Unerring technique, why did you choose it?" Bian Ya asked curiously. "I am aware of the task you have been assigned, but surely you can expect to be provided talismans which will deal with the issue of translation."

Ling Qi paused. It had occurred to her. She had worn Liao Zhu's translation ring after all. "I don't think I would be satisfied, relying on a tool," she said quietly. "The Duchess gave me the task. If a talisman is doing the work, then anyone could do it."

"I suppose I can see your logic," Bian Ya said dubiously. She graciously followed Ling Qi out to the dining room as they spoke. "But I cannot help but find it suspect."

"Mm, yeah that doesn't feel quite right," the miniature Sixiang murmured, resting their chin on a fist.

"It's hard to articulate," Ling Qi said wryly. "I guess… this task is going to be all about understanding strange people. I don't think I'll succeed if I'm relying entirely on a talisman."

It felt lazy, like she wasn't really taking things seriously. That felt disrespectful given… everything.

"I think I may understand," Bian Ya said. The girl gave her a thoughtful look. "Let me wish you luck on your journey."
I have the strange feeling this is going to be an understated pivotal moment for LQs character. She choose of her own volition to make an Art to talk to strangers in honest dialog, while she herself is from a society which tends to see foreigners as lesser at first sight and see their own culture as superior. Some part of this art is going to appear in her domain or her "narrative" once LQ archieves a high enough realm in cultivation, I think.
 
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And so it was time for the Hanyi arc... this is going to be Interesting(tm).

Tho, iirc we where also meeting Bao boi and discussing the Luo-Bai thing this event or has that been moved up to after the Ice Ladies expedition?
 
Ling Qi was just glad to have completed the project. While it hadn't exactly taken long, it had been supremely uncomfortable. Her head still ached from what she had put it through.
Mood. I love it when Ling Qi and Yrs tells us we're a headache.

Do we choose which Social Art to exclude in next turns Plan? Ordinarily we have "Sideboard: Combat/Adventure: HDW + MoSS <-> Social: PMR + MSS" but if we want HDW and either PMR or MSS we have to unequip the other. Something like:
Sideboard: Combat/Adventure: HDW + MoSS <-> Social: PMR + MSS <-> Meeting: HDW + PMR

Edit: We might even have to unequip RME if we want PMR.
 
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"I think that's the last one," Sixiang chirped cheerfully. On her shoulder, the image of the muse in miniature kicked their bare feet cheerfully. "I'm not feeling any more irregularities."

We have Chibi Sixiang. I repeat, we have Chibi Sixiang!

By the time she returned, Shen Hu's remains, and his shrine, would be with his family. All that would remain was a name carved on the memorial stone.

Oh thank fucking god.

It would have been so much worse if the underground people threw his corpse to the impurity river.
 
I really dont understand, do we have a plan for next turns? Is it in discussion? Is there only a direction or an accurate planning? Could someone tell me, and possibly post the plan?
 
I really dont understand, do we have a plan for next turns? Is it in discussion? Is there only a direction or an accurate planning? Could someone tell me, and possibly post the plan?
Plans are generally worked on by the math cabal in the discord server, they have adjustable plans set up for the next few turns and a more vague overarching plan for the direction Qi's cultivation would take up to about turn 18 I think?
 
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but an art was an extremely delicate and complex framework of qi, and each every twist and slight variation in the flows could have cascading effects on the rest.
each and every twist
You're head hurts cause there's still so much mortal-y stuff in there interfering with things
Your
"...Yeah. yeah I did,"
»Yeah; yeah«, »Yeah, yeah« or »Yeah. Yeah I did«
The phantoms of fog fought, danced, gestured and smoke wordless whispers.
spoke
She cast one last look at the gravestone, the incense was burned down, only an offering, a little cup of pale cider that she knew he had enjoyed remained.
had […] had enjoyed, remained.

Potency: Green 3
Keywords:
- Communication, Connections, Wind, Music, Yang.
- Empathy, Perceptiveness, Manipulation, Music.
Meridians: Head x5, Heart x1; 2 music 4 wind
Max level: 5

Passive Effects:
+10 to Social Perception
+20 to Combat Perception
+10 Physical Avoid

Spring Breeze Canto: C
Upkeep 5
The song of the breeze whispers softly in the users wake, echoing off of those in range, and carrying their voices to the users ears. While using any Music Art the user and any allies may communicate silently with short messages and images. This effect extends out to Very Far Range. While in communication the user and allies receive a small bonus to Combat Perception and Physical avoid, thanks to their coordination.

Hidden Wind's Breath: C
Duration: Long
The wind connects all beneath the sky, mastery of wind and music allows the singer to weave a connection between two souls into the tapestry that may go unnoticed by all save their target.

Upon use, the user establishes a connection with an ally within Very Far range across which senses and thoughts may be shared, familiarity with the target increases the clarity of communication. Once the connection is established, it may be maintained over greater distances dependent on how close the two are - up to 500m + 500m*SL. While a connection is active, either side may use the other's combat perception at a half-rank penalty if it is higher than their own.

The connection requires perception rank equal to the user's stealth to identify it's presence, and a rank above to identify the user and target's locations. Duration may be refreshed instantly at D cost upon the effect's end.

South Wind Blows Unerringly: C
Duration: Long
Just as crisp southern winds bring clarity and clear skies, this technique allows the user and any number of willing participants to communicate clearly through concepts, impressions and intent, bypassing the need for words and language. Any participants attempting to lie or deceive whilst communicating in this manner suffer a full rank penalty to their Speech, as the winds of intent and concept blow crossways.

The alteration of the Harmony of the Dancing Wind art took place over several days, spread out in six hour sessions during which Ling Qi had Bian Ya's assistance. Altering an art was a meticulous task. It was not something one usually thought of while cultivating, but an art was an extremely delicate and complex framework of qi, each and every twist and slight variation in the flows could have cascading effects on the rest.

Which was a problem when it was inside of you, and something going wrong could mean blowing out one your meridians. However, Ling Qi had her advantages.

"You will need to lower the frequency of the emanation in the fourth ear channel here I think," Bian Ya said clinically, touching a finger to the pale green vein of pulsing light. "By two pulses per cycle, just a small adjustment."

Ling Qi grunted an agreement, keeping a tight hold on her internal energies. She sat upon a meditation mat, and Bian Ya stood before her, observing the glowing tangle of lights that represented the structure of Ling Qi's channels. Sixiang had been very helpful in generating the model. Letting out a breath through her nose, Ling Qi made the adjustment to the qi structure in her newest meridian. She immediately felt the mounting pressure in her right temple release as the flows smoothed and ceased struggling to go wild.

+1 Head Meridian

"I think that's the last one," Sixiang chirped cheerfully. On her shoulder, the image of the muse in miniature kicked their bare feet cheerfully. "I'm not feeling any more irregularities."

Bian Ya hummed thoughtfully, circling the floating meridian model. "No outstanding issues, but you require further efficiency. The flows are rough, and you are wasting qi."

Ling Qi nodded, rolling her shoulders. "That is just normal art cultivation though."

"Exactly so," Bian Ya said with a smile. "You have done good work junior sister."

Ling Qi was just glad to have completed the project. While it hadn't exactly taken long, it had been supremely uncomfortable. Her head still ached from what she had put it through.

"It'll get easier I think. Your head hurts cause there's still so much mortal-y stuff in there interfering with things," Sixiang said brightly. "Course, later you'll have to be careful not to alter yourself too much in the process, when the mortal bits aren't holding things in place."

"Not precisely how I would describe matters, but not wrong," Bian Ya mused as the model faded away. "But, Junior Sister, I am curious about one thing."
"What is that Senior Sister?" Ling Qi asked. She stood, rubbing her temple. They were in her living room, and the hearth had burned down. She should probably start it back up. It would be polite to offer Bian Ya some tea or something for her help.

"The, South Wind Blows Unerring technique, why did you choose it?" Bian Ya asked curiously. "I am aware of the task you have been assigned, but surely you can expect to be provided talismans which will deal with the issue of translation."

Ling Qi paused. It had occurred to her. She had worn Liao Zhu's translation ring after all. "I don't think I would be satisfied, relying on a tool," she said quietly. "The Duchess gave me the task. If a talisman is doing the work, then anyone could do it."

"I suppose I can see your logic," Bian Ya said dubiously. She graciously followed Ling Qi out to the dining room as they spoke. "But I cannot help but find it suspect."

"Mm, yeah that doesn't feel quite right," the miniature Sixiang murmured, resting their chin on a fist.

"It's hard to articulate," Ling Qi said wryly. "I guess… this task is going to be all about understanding strange people. I don't think I'll succeed if I'm relying entirely on a talisman."

It felt lazy, like she wasn't really taking things seriously. That felt disrespectful given… everything.

"I think I may understand," Bian Ya said. The girl gave her a thoughtful look. "Let me wish you luck on your journey."

"Thank you very much Senior Sister," Ling Qi said, offering a short bow. "Would you care for some refreshments before you go?"

There was just one more thing to see too, before she could focus on Hanyi's recital.

'Did you finish composing your part, Sixiang?' Ling Qi thought.

"...Yeah; yeah I did," the muse sent back silently, their voice subdued.


***​

The melody's theme was regrets.

Ringing softly over the mist shrouded hills, the nameless melody Ling Qi had composed echoed between the stone plinths half hidden in the morning fog. The air quavered with the sound, and the Mist twisted into the whispers of human shapes. The phantoms of fog fought, danced, gestured and spoke wordless whispers.

And each one faded, in time.

Here, in the field of gravestones representing the Sect's dead, Ling Qi played her song as a stick of rich incense burned down on the small altar before her.

There were no bodies here, but the dead had to be respected all the same. Until their families could claim them at least. Well, for those who had such things. Ling Qi had spent much time earlier, wandering the older stones which filled the hills, and the mist never lifted, even when she was long gone.

Ling Qi wore white today, the color bled from her gown, it's more fanciful elements gone. A gown of pure white, simply cut and layered. An unobservant watcher might think her a ghost.

It was important, Ling Qi thought, as she reached the refrain, fingers dancing across the length of her flute. It was important to be here, even if she wasn't really grieving.

"You're being way too unreasonable with yourself," Sixiang sighed, even as the wind stirred around her, the faint sound of a bow being drawn across strings serving as an accompaniment.

Ling Qi disagreed. Grief was a much stronger emotion. Claiming what she felt as grief was disrespectful. She was sad, certainly, but that wasn't the same. Regret was the right word.

"You can be obnoxiously stubborn," Sixiang grumbled.

Ling Qi played, and the incense burned down. The faint flickering light gleamed in the grooves that carved out a familiar name.

She had contemplated death before. When she had first dealt it, she had found her peace. It wasn't the first time someone she had known had died. Zeqing had been her teacher, after all, much closer than a mere acquaintance. However, Zeqing's death had been by her own hand, her own choice. It was different.

Then again, perhaps that was unfair to Shen Hu. By all accounts, he had known what choice he was making, being the last to retreat.

The last melancholic notes of the melody echoed out, and Ling Qi let her eyes drift open. Around her the phantoms in the mist shaped by her song faded away, sinking back to earth. Yes, even if she didn't grieve herself, she understood that others did. Each of these stones marked a memory, a discordant absence in a well played meter.

She had no responsibilities or obligations to any of them, not even Shen Hu, and yet, Ling Qi could not help but wonder if the dissatisfied feeling that churned in her stomach was something like what drove Cai Renxiang's ideals.

Only one of these deaths had affected her, and even then, not heavily. However, when she looked upon these new planted stones…

She was sad, but mostly she was dissatisfied. In the future, more people were going to die. This field was going to grow. But, Ling Qi thought it would be good if it grew less. If fewer people had to grieve here. If less connections were snapped by loss.

…So she was going to have to work hard, and do her utmost to make sure that her mission succeeded.

"You've got this. You're the girl who got three Moon Aspects to share, what's convincing some humans to play nice?" Sixiang said.

"Maybe," Ling Qi whispered. She cast one last look at the gravestone, the incense had burned down, only an offering, a little cup of pale cider that she knew he had enjoyed, remained. Ling Qi crouched, and poured the libation out.

She wouldn't be back. By the time she returned, Shen Hu's remains, and his shrine, would be with his family. All that would remain was a name carved on the memorial stone.

"Heeeey! Big Sis! C'mon, it's time! You said you would listen to me practice!" Hanyi's voice rang out of the mist.

Ling Qi smiled wryly. She supposed she should get going, before Hanyi did something disrespectful.
*feels*
Lotta feels :Ü™
 
Press "F" to pay respects to Shen Hu.

Back to the great wheel of reincarnation you go. You will be missed, Beefcake.
 
Well, my discord isnt working, so I will be glad if someone would share those plans here
This is just a template plan someone pinned on discord, nothing's set in stone. Also it was done by one math cabalist, others may come up with their own plans some time before the next AP turn vote:

Template AP plan turn 11: [X] Plan: Social Meridians
-[] Medium Pills (free)
-[] Resources: 16 GSS, 8 YSS (4 free GSS, 12 from cash, 8 free YSS), Drip on Spiritual Cultivation
-[] buy Gusing Spring Pill (60 SP)
-[] Physical Cultivation (4 AP)
-[] Spiritual Cultivation (4 AP)
-[] Songseeker's Ceremony (2 AP)
-[] Frozen Soul Serenade Efficiency Upgrade (2 AP, Lung, Lung)
-[] Meridian opening (2 AP, Spine, Head)
-[] Beast King's Savage Dirge (1 AP)
-[] Starless Night's Reflection (1 AP)
-[] Playful Muse's Rapport (1 AP)
-[] Moonless Saboteur's Smile (2 AP)
-[] Family (1 AP)
-[] Equipment: Unequip: Anchor of Eight Imperial Duties, Equip: Dusk Wind Studs
-[] Sideboard: Combat/Adventure: HDW + MoSS <-> Social: PMR + MSS
-[] Upkeep: HDW (3) <-> MSS (5), RME (2), LFWT (15), WHR (5)
-[] non-Upkeep: UGM
Notes: - AP penalties for T11 are confirmed, but not how much AP those take - cutting base AP seems like a good idea to make it work - Option: Bring the Spine Meridian from T12 to T11. This would cut 1 more base AP, but offers at least a little bit of flexibility and a cutable AP for the water turn

Turn 11 Skill Plan Template [X] Turn 11 Plan: Art and Diplomacy
-[] Presence 2**, Qi(free rolls) 8** (4/40)
-[] Unbroken Will 3*, Vanishing 1**, Woodwind 2***, Government 3**, Survival 3*, Sincere Negotiator 4***, Beast Handling 4***, Art 3*** (37/40)
-[] Gardening: Art 1***, Woodwind 1*** (40/40)
Notes: - as before the Gardening is seperated for visibility. they are still 3 Woodwind and 4 Art AP - 3 Woodwind and 4 Art is the result of the Gardening switch with turn 10
 
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This is just a template plan someone pinned on discord, nothing's set in stone. Also it was done by one math cabalist, others may come up with their own plans some time before the next AP turn vote:

Template AP plan turn 11: [X] Plan: Social Meridians
-[X] Medium Pills (free)
-[X] Resources: 16 GSS, 8 YSS (4 free GSS, 12 from cash, 8 free YSS), Drip on Spiritual Cultivation
-[X] buy Gusing Spring Pill (60 SP)
-[X] Physical Cultivation (4 AP)
-[X] Spiritual Cultivation (4 AP)
-[X] Songseeker's Ceremony (2 AP)
-[X] Frozen Soul Serenade Efficiency Upgrade (2 AP, Lung, Lung)
-[X] Meridian opening (2 AP, Spine, Head)
-[X] Beast King's Savage Dirge (1 AP)
-[X] Starless Night's Reflection (1 AP)
-[X] Playful Muse's Rapport (1 AP)
-[X] Moonless Saboteur's Smile (2 AP)
-[X] Family (1 AP)
-[X] Equipment: Unequip: Anchor of Eight Imperial Duties, Equip: Dusk Wind Studs
-[X] Sideboard: Combat/Adventure: HDW + MoSS <-> Social: PMR + MSS
-[X] Upkeep: HDW (3) <-> MSS (5), RME (2), LFWT (15), WHR (5)
-[X] non-Upkeep: UGM
Notes: - AP penalties for T11 are confirmed, but not how much AP those take - cutting base AP seems like a good idea to make it work - Option: Bring the Spine Meridian from T12 to T11. This would cut 1 more base AP, but offers at least a little bit of flexibility and a cutable AP for the water turn

Turn 11 Skill Plan Template [X] Turn 11 Plan: Art and Diplomacy
-[X] Presence 2**, Qi(free rolls) 8** (4/40)
-[X] Unbroken Will 3*, Vanishing 1**, Woodwind 2***, Government 3**, Survival 3*, Sincere Negotiator 4***, Beast Handling 4***, Art 3*** (37/40)
-[X] Gardening: Art 1***, Woodwind 1*** (40/40)
Notes: - as before the Gardening is seperated for visibility. they are still 3 Woodwind and 4 Art AP - 3 Woodwind and 4 Art is the result of the Gardening switch with turn 10
Thanks

But dont we have the meridian cleansing wand? We should be able to open two meridians with 1 AP. And Dusk Wind Studs is alreqdy equipped
 
It was important, Ling Qi thought, as she reached the refrain, fingers dancing across the length of her flute. It was important to be here, even if she wasn't really grieving.

"You're being way too unreasonable with yourself," Sixiang sighed, even as the wind stirred around her, the faint sound of a bow being drawn across strings serving as an accompaniment.

Ling Qi disagreed. Grief was a much stronger emotion. Claiming what she felt as grief was disrespectful. She was sad, certainly, but that wasn't the same. Regret was the right word.

"You can be obnoxiously stubborn," Sixiang grumbled.
"I am not crying and therefore cannot be experiencing grief."

Ling Qi continues to have issues with understanding her own emotions and where a moderate feeling becomes a strong feeling that does not include a psychosomatic component built from earlier trauma. Until her body is literally yelling the emotional response at her Ling Qi will assume it's not a big feeling.

I would be interested to know how well someone attempting to explain that people process grief in so many ways including the quiet dedication that Ling Qi makes here to simply "Do Better, Always." as opposed to melancholy, rage, or lethargic depression.

It's an interesting little reminder that Ling Qi always assumes that she simply feels "less" than others in a manner similar to how CRX attempts to be "above" those emotions both of whom are doing so out of some belief that distance from ones own feelings is some measure of impartiality or strength. In Ling Qi's case allowing her to avoid the pain she felt growing up and the psychological issues her Mother accidentally but never the less gave her with regards to emotional and physical intimacy with others. And for CRX it is the idea that emotional responses are vectors of corruption that pervert the ideals of Fairness and Justice which are the foundation of what she believes is the world view that Shenhua intends for her to perpetuate.

But dont we have the meridian cleansing wand? We should be able to open two meridians with 1 AP. And Dusk Wind Studs is alreqdy equipped
To elaborate, Suyin only had access to the "upper" layers of corruption for making the wand not even as deep at Y'lith'kai where the rivers of corruption flow. This is potentially one of the things that Shenhua is hoping to get out of vassalizing the inhabitants of Ha'yth'kai the materials needed to make a higher quality meridian opening wand or otherwise similar resource on top of everything else so we might be seeing something like that coming around post-Sect time.
 
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