It's a Girl's World -- And Lilly wants Adventure

Some fantastic work there Silverking, and while non-canon, you also hit on quite a few grains of truth.

Glad you enjoyed it, Slyvena. I guess I'll have to wait and see what was actually right during Infodump the Second. Although there are some ideas that I'm more attached to than others...

Evie: Now that I'm smart again, I'll keep Lilly informed of how the world works and continue to improve her soul.
Questors: And not try tricking her again, right?
Evie: ...
Questors: ...And not try tricking her again, right?
 
*Bing-Bong* This is the one month check-in from the last story update. We hope that everybody stays healthy and safe, and we're all looking forward to what's coming next. *Bing-Bong*.
 
I think the problem is that a lot of topics of discussion are on hold pending new information. There's still the "A Walk Amongst the Daisies" interlude which can tell us more about how Flower deals with her more "traditional" followers and what life is like in a nation that DOESN'T have to worry about their talented children being taken away to be made slaves or worse.

...If there's any topic that still niggles at me, it's contemplating if there are any Ethos that will allow us to detect the "field" behind Concordance, Oath, and Mana they way we can for the other sources. We've seen in this quest that "Perception is King", particularly since some Sources are able to interfere with us even when we're not aware of them. The Flow illusion before the relay fight was only overcome because we had "sight" in both Essence and Pithe. We overheard that one of Lord Water's men was trying to use Flow to compel us to agree to go with them, and it was only due to [Bedrock] and Hybrid Siphon that we were able to resist. Now that [Shine] has granted us perception of the Construct, we can now be more aware of such effects, rather than stumbling blindly.

[Shine] will eventually also give us access to the Oath Source, although it's unclear if this will also allow us to see the Realm of Infinite Possibility. It seems that our Domain sense has a bit of overlap with Oath, as it allowed us to locate the Command-Node within our family, but I think getting Oath proper will help us better understand how to interact with it (and hopefully if it is being used against us).

One particularly concerning blind-spot is that while we have a Concordance Ethos, we haven't seen any way to detect when Concordance has been used our proximity. Madame Silva's ball and cup trick completely took Lilly by surprise. Valerie's wind barrier was able to trick Sample Space, and our solution was less "figuring out the trick" and more "smash them hard enough so that ANY interference doesn't matter". Given that we've been told that Senus has a rather nasty Concordance ability, it would be good to get some method of early warning, but...I don't think "Concordance-detection" is necessarily within [Cleaver]'s wheelhouse, unless we were willing to Diverge the Ethos by quite a bit.

...And that's all I got for now.
 
[Cleaver] seems to show Lilly her own Concordance, but not anybody else's. It's very heavily internally focused, concerned only with Lilly's future and not any external Concordance. What it does seem to offer is some level of ability to mess up other Concordance users by rejecting external alterations to Lilly's Concordance due to being a stronger and more persistent influence there, at least if we use it properly. Though of all our powers, [Cleaver] is still one of the less well understood.
 
[Cleaver] seems to show Lilly her own Concordance, but not anybody else's. It's very heavily internally focused, concerned only with Lilly's future and not any external Concordance. What it does seem to offer is some level of ability to mess up other Concordance users by rejecting external alterations to Lilly's Concordance due to being a stronger and more persistent influence there, at least if we use it properly. Though of all our powers, [Cleaver] is still one of the less well understood.

It also messes with other concordance users by having it's ability to reject them effectually unnoticeable until the moment Lily uses cleaver to do so. Which qualifies as quite a nasty surprise.
 
With detecting Concordance, Senus seems to posses some sort of ability when it comes to that.
{Senus Marnic}: "I'm the generous sort. There was concordant tension around her. She has no fractures but… let's just call it a hunch. When we return we'll need to-"
Though maybe that's because his Ethos might be geared towards picking out Concordance users, and doing weird and bad things to them to do stuff wit Artifacts. I'm not sure on how his Ethos works, or what's up with the rose bush, but maybe his Ethos at least has a function that's meant to help him find targets.

I was never an expert, and it's been a while, but maybe Lilly could get something like this. Something that picks out where people could interfere with Concordance. But it seems like she's already specialized Cleaver in a different direction, if it could've done something like that in the first place.

So I guess something to keep in mind when we're presented with another Concordance Ethos, and how we should shape it as it levels.
 
...I think another thing we have to be careful about moving forward is the opposite problem, being detected. We got lucky with [Cleaver] in that it didn't ping the alarm when the Lore Warden was originally testing us, but Captain Martin made it clear that if people around us with separate Sources start comparing notes, then we have a problem. I suspect that "Flow recognizes Flow", or that Psions are fairly capable of detecting other Psions through how their Wakes interact with each other. I think I remember Slyvena saying something early on.
There are far more significant things out there than being an Essence Healer, the nature of your multi-power is that you will inevitably become a walking case of "NANI!!?!!" to anyone that takes too close a look.
 
I still exist. I'm still writing. An update will come... eventually.

I think I remember Slyvena saying something early on.
There are far more significant things out there than being an Essence Healer, the nature of your multi-power is that you will inevitably become a walking case of "NANI!!?!!" to anyone that takes too close a look.

What's funny is this has almost come back around to the start, in the sense that for all the amazing things you can do and the potential avenues for greater heights, what you've actually just pulled off in terms of Essence Healing overshadows all that in terms of immediate utility to nations and other continental actors.

There's still the "A Walk Amongst the Daisies" interlude which can tell us more about how Flower deals with her more "traditional" followers
It's got a smidge of that, but will actually tell you a bit more about another character you've heard of but have never met. (While not strictly aligned with Flower, they are what you might call a 'middleman of convenience').
 
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What's funny is this has almost come back around to the start, in the sense that for all the amazing things you can do and the potential avenues for greater heights, what you've actually just pulled off in terms of Essence Healing overshadows all that in terms of immediate utility to nations and other continental actors.
My first reaction to this was thinking that there's a magic plague or two going around that ANY nation would appreciate getting an optimized healer to try and get in front of.

My second reaction to this was that there's probably some xianxia cultivator out there who is recovering from some backlash or something, and now he may find a way to reduce the recovery period before his next breakthrough attempt from years to weeks (and he'd like to try ascending to godhood BEFORE the apocalypse, thank you very much).
 
What's funny is this has almost come back around to the start, in the sense that for all the amazing things you can do and the potential avenues for greater heights, what you've actually just pulled off in terms of Essence Healing overshadows all that in terms of immediate utility to nations and other continental actors.
...I've got to admit, I'm curious why. Is it what we can qualitatively do with it? Or just how much we can throw at a problem and make survivable?
 
Here's Slyvena's notes on how healing is "supposed" to work in this setting:
Healing itself is plenty common. But that's Mana healing. It's fast, its brutal, and sometimes the cure is worse than the disease. The really impressive stuff like regrowing limbs from combat or resurrecting the dead almost invariably comes with some truly punishing tradeoffs and setbacks for caster, recipient or both. It also has increasingly complex ritual and resource requirements to be properly applied. Better than being dead, mostly.

Essence healing is none of that. It is just true simple holistic restoration of desired original state. No complications, no feedback. It is also both far less common (because Essence Ethos are super uncommon to begin with, Mathew would have had some questions if you were still pure Essence when he came to train you) and very subtle/slow compared to Mana healing. But being able to regrow the lost limb of your kingdom's greatest fighter without any permanent maladies is still very much worth it even if it takes a year.
It also lets Mana healers apply specific negative tradeoffs that they know an Essence healer can remove later.
In the last update, Lilly used Essence to do "quick, brutal" healing on her mom before diving back in to remove the Command Node.
You've seen healing that was quick, you've seen healing that looked impressive, but this is the first healing that looks brutal. There is a change within some of the thick vicious essence within her, a critical density combined with your many talents insisting upon a certain result. With a deep crack like thunder as air is instantly displaced from where it had rested still moments ago, your mother writhes and snaps straight as a plank. In a singular momentary flash, bones and flesh snap, knit and fuse; her body is immediately hale and whole.
Quick efficient healing with no mana curses or side effects. To pretty much every other person on the continent, this is a freaking gamechanger.
 
Quick efficient healing with no mana curses or side effects. To pretty much every other person on the continent, this is a freaking gamechanger.
Speaking of - something for Lily to consider is whether or not she'll help the Guard get back on their feet before she leaves. Because there's several who do have damn bad injuries. Like Yola with her arm gone at the elbow.
 
Quick efficient healing with no mana curses or side effects. To pretty much every other person on the continent, this is a freaking gamechanger.
And with her essence linking she could do that to a whole army, if to a slightly lesser degree. Among all the other bonuses. Yet no matter what this would mean in the battlefield, even if she never participates it still means that the high-end warriors could go all out, aware that no matter how much backlash they get they can get healed once again for the next battle.
 
Actually. the really big deal might be the part where we can actually cure mana curses. Even old, entrenched ones. No need for the mana-mages to hold back; sacrifice your legs to cast that doom-spell! We can always regenerate them later.
 
What is more retired warriors, war heroes, all restored. How many high-level warriors have an entrenched mana curse only Lilly's power and skill combo could cure?
 
Well, at least an Ethos is shaped by the person and grows with them?

Like, and Slughorn bringing reinforcements to the battle totally isn't a retcon. And Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff actually do matter.

and this isn't the derail you're looking for
*slowly waves hand*
 
Guys, I found the perfect video that encapsulates my reaction to people getting their Ethos picks at the cusp of puberty!
Heh.

In fairness to Hogwarts, regardless of what House you get assigned to, you get all the same classes- there isn't a different curriculum for Ravenclaw than for Slytherin or whatever. And insofar as the students are grouped, to a large extent they're being grouped more by learning style than by "ability" or anything like it.

Some students thrive on competition- it actually motivates them to do better. I bet that a lot of them end up in Slytherin.

Some students thrive on isolated study- they love the content and don't need, maybe even don't want, socialization distracting them from just learning the material. They get sorted into Ravenclaw.

Some students need a comfortable, accepting environment with a lot of teamwork, and thrive amazingly in that environment, but may not do so hot if lumped in with the competitors or the self-isolating studybugs. They tend to end up in Gryffindor (if they have high resistance to authority) or Hufflepuff (if not).
 
Guys, I found the perfect video that encapsulates my reaction to people getting their Ethos picks at the cusp of puberty!

(snip video)
Well, if you look at it this way, certainly it sounds bad.

Now let's ask Strawman Noble A and Strawman Spirit B what they think, mmkay?

Strawman Noble A: I approve of this System because I can give my offspring an upbringing that will allow them to reach the greatest heights - heights that peasants born in squalor will never be able to reach, therefore reaffirming the inherent superiority of my Noble bloodline over that of the plebs.

Strawman Spirit B: We who actually determine how the world functions, approve of this System, because it reduces the variables to a somewhat more manageable degree (insert any number of other "I know better than you ever will" excuses). And it's not like we don't have tools to adjust the Integration Vectors if it suits our goals.
 
Surprise! I live.
I really wanted to get back to writing sooner, but the business of getting married 5 months after the proposal and then coming down with crippling joint pain from 1 week after the wedding until... well, now. Finally found a medication that lets me type without pain.

For those that wish to wait, don't read the spoiler, it's a piece of the next interlude and contains some tasty tasty lore.
But I'll confirm, I am working on It's a Girl's World again and have figured out the kinks that made me have to take a break originally. Updates will be very slow as my health slowly improves, but they'll be coming.


For those that read the snippet, enjoy!
With that, Cirella Shrike released the holding note, and found herself back within her chambers on the other side of continent. Of all her experiments, Petunia was indeed the matriarch's most promising candidate for forging herself a legacy beyond the mediocre results of her natural-born children. All but one had plateaued before the ninetieth expansion. Her firstborn had reached his hundredth, yet when the time came, failed his trial. She missed him, a weakness of sentimentality she had yet to successfully remove. With any luck, a few decades from now, she could push Petunia past the hundredth, and gain the first member of a true family.
Mortals could not choose the Ethea they were offered, but no one said there was anything wrong with bribing a God. And she was one of the few dozen people that walked the Mortal Plane with something to offer they might actually want.

Contrary to what most believed, travel to the Deific Planes was still entirely possible despite the lack of patronage. It was getting back that was harder. Why the Flower would want massive volumes of Lirium delivered to her domain was not Cirella's concern. She would do what was required to ensure Petunia was given an Ascendent Ethos. The early Dungeons were already prepared to get her to at least the 2nd Tier, and the 3rd and 4th would be in place within the year.
A sour note informed her that a tactical team was encountering resistance in one of the border towns. She strengthened their reinforcement and lent them a few blaster blooms through the dimensional chords, if that was not enough then there was no point funding them further. She got back to work, mollifying the latest artefact to fall into her possession. Reaching a 4-piece equilibrium was likely impossible, but they'd said that about a 3-piece too until she'd been the first to do it.

So much work, never enough time.
 


Cause for every alarm ever.

It's good to hear from you again boss, you probably don't need me to tell you but do take care of yourself.
 
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Awesome to hear from you again!

Looking forward to this new scary scary lady.
 
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