It's a Girl's World -- And Lilly wants Adventure
- Thread starter Slyvena
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TaliesinSkye
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- Northeast Ohio, United States
Seems like a clear choice to me. Things might need to be simplified a bit, but that's okay as long as they preserve the flavor.
[X] [YoN] Yay. We want to hear the rest of Lilly's story. Even if it gets slow and has occasional errors that need fixing.
[X] [YoN] Yay. We want to hear the rest of Lilly's story. Even if it gets slow and has occasional errors that need fixing.
[X] [YoN] Yay. We want to hear the rest of Lilly's story. Even if it gets slow and has occasional errors that need fixing.
- Location
- Head in the clouds
I just wanted to reiterate this. Typically authors do keep things vague except for ideas they are actively developing and bringing into the background.
I sometimes do the exact opposite but for all those ideas I'm actively playing with the timeline in a non chronological order. IE - If you write the present before the past you can have really big problems. And even them what happens is I'm writing snippets that hook into the general timeline I've already developed.
And the one story that doesn't fit that model is due to thematical reasons that are very specific.
[X] [YoN] Yay.
There is a caveat. It's as long as you are happy with it rather than that I am. If you are satisfied with what you put together, continue at whatever pace you can. If you aren't happy with it, then don't feel pressure to carry on when you aren't.
[X] [YoN] Yay. We want to hear the rest of Lilly's story. Even if it gets slow and has occasional errors that need fixing.
This is seriously one of the most fascinating stories I've read on SV in a good while and I would love to see it continue in some form or fashion.
This is seriously one of the most fascinating stories I've read on SV in a good while and I would love to see it continue in some form or fashion.
- Location
- Europe
[X] [YoN] Yay. We want to hear the rest of Lilly's story. Even if it gets slow and has occasional errors that need fixing.
There are quests that takes years to update if necessary, or that have frequent hiatus. I don't see the problem.
There are quests that takes years to update if necessary, or that have frequent hiatus. I don't see the problem.
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- Location
- Somewhere.
[X] [YoN] Yay. We want to hear the rest of Lilly's story. Even if it gets slow and has occasional errors that need fixing.
Absolutely Yea. 100% for sure.
Absolutely Yea. 100% for sure.
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- Ekaterinburg, Russia
[X] [YoN] Yay. We want to hear the rest of Lilly's story. Even if it gets slow and has occasional errors that need fixing.
Good quests are hard to find. Ones you want to keep voting for and following, harder still.
It's funny because it's true!
Good quests are hard to find. Ones you want to keep voting for and following, harder still.
Actually to me that sounds as either "you will need another significant Perception ability to help this along" or, even more likely, a "this is when you find something else as good to merge with RG, wink wink nudge nudge".
It's funny because it's true!
- Location
- Milky Way
[X] [YoN] Yay. We want to hear the rest of Lilly's story. Even if it gets slow and has occasional errors that need fixing.
- Pronouns
- They/Them
As long as you're having fun writing it I won't mind a slow update pace, you'd have to work real hard to become the slowest updating quest on these boards anyway.
- Location
- Somewhere.
- Pronouns
- They/Them
that is in fact exactly who I was thinking about, yeah
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- Pittsburgh, PA
[X] [YoN] Yay. We want to hear the rest of Lilly's story. Even if it gets slow and has occasional errors that need fixing.
God forgive me for my selfishness, but I was in a real funk yesterday over this being dead.
God forgive me for my selfishness, but I was in a real funk yesterday over this being dead.
- Location
- Czech Republic
[X] [YoN] Yay. We want to hear the rest of Lilly's story. Even if it gets slow and has occasional errors that need fixing.
[X] [YoN] Yay. We want to hear the rest of Lilly's story. Even if it gets slow and has occasional errors that need fixing.
With the caveat that a few others have mentioned that you only proceed as long as you're enjoying writing the story and want to continue. If it becomes a frustrating venture, or something you feel pressured to write, or you just become unsatisfied with then by all means you don't owe us anything.
With the caveat that a few others have mentioned that you only proceed as long as you're enjoying writing the story and want to continue. If it becomes a frustrating venture, or something you feel pressured to write, or you just become unsatisfied with then by all means you don't owe us anything.
Slyvena
I don't like pie.
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- Pie Shop
Well that settles it guys, the story lives on.
Have I ever told you how much I love these?
Well, I mean, you will. Just maybe not before 2023 😅
- Location
- Somewhere.
So do we get, like, a vote now? Or is this going to be "Captain Martin speedruns us the Dungeon we totally won't figure out is a dungeon until we've eaten it", up next?
- Location
- Who Knows Where
As the font of Lilly's power, Petal is a priority. I can't tell if Soul-Bonding her or Micah is the better pick though.
Micah is in Dreamspace, but Valerie's Command Node has aspects of other Sources besides Oath, so it isn't a stretch to say Dreamspace might be less than secure against unknown enemies.
On Captain Martin, it's a sign of how shaken he is that he almost actually said "dungeon" instead of "wolf attack" when he doesn't want Lilly to know it's a dungeon. I suppose we are dungeon raiding, then?
Also at some point recruiting Madame Silva, slowly easing into an onslaught of negative emotions bottled by {Affective Radiance}, letting Concordance recharge to see if we can subtly help Zach and possibly nudging Lilly's freshly traumatized parents to help him, and experimenting with using Dreamspace for secure comms. Or something like that, according to the plan.
Micah is in Dreamspace, but Valerie's Command Node has aspects of other Sources besides Oath, so it isn't a stretch to say Dreamspace might be less than secure against unknown enemies.
On Captain Martin, it's a sign of how shaken he is that he almost actually said "dungeon" instead of "wolf attack" when he doesn't want Lilly to know it's a dungeon. I suppose we are dungeon raiding, then?
Also at some point recruiting Madame Silva, slowly easing into an onslaught of negative emotions bottled by {Affective Radiance}, letting Concordance recharge to see if we can subtly help Zach and possibly nudging Lilly's freshly traumatized parents to help him, and experimenting with using Dreamspace for secure comms. Or something like that, according to the plan.
- Location
- Head in the clouds
Given that Siphon is still down right now and that Lilly has already made her decision I'd not be surprised if Madame Silva is already moving on getting her daughter and son in law packed.