With a good launching mechanism put into the Insect Glaive and some modified Long Fall Boots from Portal she could easily launch herself from the ground to a rooftop or vice-versa. Add in the effects of gathered 'essence' along with some workout routines and weapons training to help her better use the glaive and she might be given additional ratings.
I mean as horrible bio-tinker creations go they fit the bill.
For added fun infect everyone with the X before sitting back and watching. From my limited knowledge of Fusion, Metroids are the natural predator of the X and the X can create copies of what they east, as proven by SA-X, an X version of Samus' suit.
Hmmm, or maybe the abilities they use in game?
As good of reason as any for Addy to get retractable wings, though now the idea of Taylor with Tinkertech Moth Wings is in my head.
And bio-tinker plague? Sounds like Piggot's worst nightmare.
What makes it worse is that they don't actually start causing damage until they appear from within you(are drawn from your deck), so it could easily be a delayed bio-tinker plague that Taylor can activate at any moment.
 
Right so things are mostly fixed. Still gotta download steam and get my games reinstalled but w/e, I can do that later.
I had backups of some important documents, and this fic, but only up to chapter 12 so my buffer is completely gone and my muse is being a little uncooperative with helping me rewrite it (instead giving me ideas for new stuff. go figure...)
I'm extremely annoyed at losing my nice, heavily modded and more importantly stable Skyrim game. It took literally days of modding and troubleshooting to get that working how I wanted :cry:
Other than the loss of my stable skyrim game and my buffer for my fics (also the brief bit of the Lisa-insert i'd written is lost too) I didn't suffer any serious losses.
Ty for all the support guys.

Aiming to have next chapter out later today, but it'll depend on my internet as well. It's been playing up these last few days. If it ain't up today it'll definitely be up tomorrow (since if my net is down again today i'll grab the laptop and swing round my parents place to leach their internet for the day).

Fun fact, boobsneks were the thin men in the fist game. Since they won they didn't have to be spliced with human anymore
Yeah Addy has the option to make thin men too, but given the option between creepy g-man looking freaks or snakes with boobs I think we all know the obvious choice. Hint. It's boobs. It's always boobs.
I would read a QQ sidestory!
Just send the omakes there 😉
Might do eventually. The issue is just about every character I'd want to write about is underage, apart from Danny and Annette but the kinks I assume they have aren't really my kinks, so if I ever write that sort of omake it'll be a long way away. That and I suck at writing smut, so chances of an 'interlewd' being written are pretty low.
Looking forward to the "don't kill people" dressing down. Fortunately she has a lot of good will banked.
:whistle:
I just realized that Addy has only killed men who are rapists and deal in sex slaves. When Annette confronts Addy about this and realizes Addy isn't remorseful at all, she will worry that Addy inherited her twin sisters morals towards men.
Addy is also wilfully ignorant of exactly how many people she's killed. She figures it's maybe around three at most (the guys Fluffles the First bit) since in the heat of the moment she kinda forgot that having limbs ripped off leads to a good chance of people bleeding out or dying of shock. And that's completely ignoring the fire she set off in an apartment building occupied by druggies.
TBH I'm a carrier of the male reproductive equipment and I'm totally down with Addy culling out those types of people, but ya know the law is all about 'reasonable force' and 'not dismembering people with biological weapons'. Total killjoys.
Yeah they're definite killjoys there. Personally I think any decent person would be okay with culling that type of person. Rape and sexual slavery is absolutely abhorrent, but sadly the law wants stuff like evidence and due process and trials and stuff.
I mean, the mind-altering only became addicting after the started recycling ADAM, and addiction isn't much of a problem when you produce that stuff. (One could even claim technically glucose has all those properties.)

And even ignoring plasmids and tonics, a Slug gives you better than Wolverine regeneration.
Yup. There's really very little reason to not have a slug if you can handle it.
Also: If Annet was lector in university, there should be lot of people knowing her. I'm seriously surprised that noone already called her out.
She's been dead for a couple years now, so people seeing aren't immediately likely to assume it's the same person they knew. They're more likely to assume it's a stranger that looks like her. I know somebody at work who looks damn similar to me, and then there's the pub I used to work at where one of the patrons looks identical to my dad (though they both think they might be related. They can track ancestry back about a hundred years to the same village in wales).
I finished Subnautica a few weeks ago. Now I finished Subnautica Below Zero (it's still in open beta/Early Access). Architect (the precursor aliens) technology is wicked cool. And they also have some insane biotinkering in Subnautica Below Zero. It's right up Addy's ally.

edit: plus you get access to a plague that spreads across animal special and decimates planets
I cry a little inside each time Addy fails to roll subnautica. There's so much fun stuff in there to play with, both the original and below zero.
To people who haven't played either game I highly recommend them. Personally the original is my favourite of the two, but below zero adds some cool stuff and a bunch of quality of life changes.
Also Addy is definitely smart enough to not make a nasty planet-killing bacteria. Not without Panacea on hand to fix anything anyways.
I love the shard interaction subtext. I don't think it needs to be so low profile though. [Reminder] isn't something that Addy notices. It just nudges in the background. I think the reader can parse that with visible text.
It's staying invisitext for now since I like it in the background. There will be some more overt stuff in the future that Addy will be aware of, but the nudges from her Shard are all happening in the background.
Gu-uys?.. I have a question that I need to ask... Coil's main base is where Travelers (and Noelle) right now?
Oops? 😱
They're still in Boston at the moment pissing off Accord, so at least that problem isn't a problem. I actually need to double check when that one guy got sold off to the CUI.
(List of ideas for different spec rolls)
yeah there's loads of options and fingers crossed Addy will roll some of them. She's got about a month and a half till the canon Leviathan fight and those would give her some more options.
It's kinda funny how Coil got taken out almost accidentally.
The best part is Addy doesn't even know she's screwed Coil over this badly.
 
use google docs to backup your stuff. stuff like that happens sometimes for me, and I learned in the past to store backups somewhere else whenever it was on an external hard drive or online.
 
I am so sorry for your loss, Unders. Its a horrible feeling. I wish you all the best in finding your muse and your joy in it again. And if you need to get some other stories running to get your groove back, don't hesitate.

This is an amazing story, and it'll be wonderful for when you can get your muse back fully.

I hope you recover from your losses soon and well. Know your fans love your work and your writing, and eagerly look forward to whatever you share in the future!
 
Yeah they're definite killjoys there. Personally I think any decent person would be okay with culling that type of person. Rape and sexual slavery is absolutely abhorrent, but sadly the law wants stuff like evidence and due process and trials and stuff.
-It is an unfortunate fact of life that some people are still alive because it is illegal to kill them.-
 
I imagine that at some point coil will do everything he can to kill addie... And for some reason i don't think hes above attacking her at school (or in between school and home)
 
use google docs to backup your stuff. stuff like that happens sometimes for me, and I learned in the past to store backups somewhere else whenever it was on an external hard drive or online.
I do the same thing. Started doing it so I would have a reliable backup of my work. Then started using it work on stories anywhere I was stuck at a computer/phone for long stretches of time (i.e. work, home, DMV, family holidays, etc)
 
I do the same thing. Started doing it so I would have a reliable backup of my work. Then started using it work on stories anywhere I was stuck at a computer/phone for long stretches of time (i.e. work, home, DMV, family holidays, etc)

for me, it's hard to write out entire chapters on something like a phone. however, I've found it's great for writing down ideas and general outlines whenever I'm away from home. this way I don't forget the ideas I had at the time.
 
I had backups of some important documents, and this fic, but only up to chapter 12 so my buffer is completely gone and my muse is being a little uncooperative with helping me rewrite it (instead giving me ideas for new stuff. go figure...)
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I'm extremely annoyed at losing my nice, heavily modded and more importantly stable Skyrim game. It took literally days of modding and troubleshooting to get that working how I wanted
If you ever get it set back up mind sharing your modlist and order? Trying to get Skyrim vr set up myself.
 
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Chapter 13. Cause and Effect
Right sorry for the delay. As you all know Windows Update decided to murder my laptop and teach me a valuable lesson about regular backups.

Anyway, on with the show!

Chapter 13:
(28th​ March 2011)

I had Khanivore rip the safe open and dump the contents on the floor, before swapping over to Fluffles so I could sort through it. I was interested in the cash, so I moved the assorted (and likely stolen) wristwatches, guns and baggies of drugs off to one side so I could sort through the bundles of cash. Irritatingly the actual notes were mostly in the smaller denominations which meant despite the pile being fairly decent there was a lot less actual money than I expected.

Fucking cheapass Merchants. Even when being robbed they prove they're the shittiest gang in the city. Ugh next time I'm just going to rob the fucking Nazis. At least they have a budget. Seriously how shit do you have to be to wind up being worse than literal Goddamn Nazis.

A haul that I was hoping to be a couple thousand or so dollars wound up being just over six-hundred.

My tail swished in irritation.

Well whatever. I packed the cash into Tattletale's laptop bag along with the stolen watches, since I could probably use them for parts on something. Then I moved Fluffles over to her nest and then swapped back to Khanivore to carry the loot home. The trip was quick. I've gotten plenty used to manoeuvring Khanivore down streets invisible by now. I dropped off the bag right by the back door and then ran Khanivore back to the workshop so I could put it away in it's life support tank. As soon as it was secure I hopped off my bed, having briefly given the thought of using the ladder on the bunk bed to get down but discarding it, before heading upstairs to claim my spoils of war.

I retrieved the laptop bag and tucked it away safely in my room before heading off to the computer to get some work done. GREMLIN programming may be done but I still had to start on the Codex, and I needed to get this project done before I could start on the idea I had on Saturday. I made myself comfy on the computer chair and then moments later I was looking at a whole bunch of code for the AI that would run the Codex while Taylor was shaking my shoulder to get my attention.

"Dinner's ready." My big sister said. She looked pretty tired, and while not exactly looking worn out she did look fatigued.

"'Kay." I nodded to her, saving my progress and following her downstairs. I should be able to finish this up tomorrow.

Dinner was a bit more solemn and serious than it had been over the weekend, the ABB bombing attacks bringing down the mood. Taylor had stayed out for a long time, getting home shortly before Uncle Danny. Taylor was equal parts proud and happy with herself for being able to help people and depressed at the fact so many people had died in the attack.

After dinner I snuggled up with Taylor on the couch as we sat as a family to watch the news, ignoring Uncle Danny's amused 'I see how it is' comment when he took in the sight of all the women occupying the couch and forcing him to sit on a chair instead.

The news went on about the attack and got off a number of good aerial shots of the main blast site. It went on about how the heroes swiftly moved in to help, and actually impressed me with the impartiality by including mentions of both New Wave and Taylor (as Mothri) rather than focusing exclusively on the Protectorate like I thought they would.

I was actually expecting the press to be full of pro-Protectorate government lapdogs. Colour me pleasantly surprised.

Then it swapped over to talk about a savage and violent cape fight that had happened in the Asian side of the city between 'Whiplash' (seriously they give Khanivore a cool name but name me Splice? What the hell?!) and Oni Lee. It included a couple short, and definitely low quality, videos taken by cell phone of part of the fight.

Heads immediately turned to look at me.

Uh oh.

"Um, I can explain." I ventured. The looks intensified. I quickly hopped up with the intent of grabbing the loot from earlier. Sure my family looks angry now but when I explain why I had to attack the ABB and then also give them the money from the Merchants they'll definitely forgive me. "I need to grab something first."

I quickly rushed off down to my room, grabbed the laptop bag and carried it back upstairs. "Tadaaaa!" I exclaimed, handing the bag over to Uncle Danny. He opened it up and took in the goodies I'd brought home.

"Addy, where did you get this?"

"I may have hit a merchant safehouse with Khanivore earlier after I fought the ABB." I explained. Hopefully my bribe thoughtful gift should keep them from overreacting too much about things.

Sadly I was wrong.



I was sat down at the table by my aunt and uncle while Taylor was shooed upstairs. I had the feeling she was listening in with her bugs though. They circled round and took seats opposite me, faces stern.

"Adeline Serenity Mathews. We are disappointed. No, disappointed doesn't even begin to cover how we feel about this." Aunt Rose began. Uncle Danny was sitting next to her, radiating disappointment and anger, but obviously fine with letting his wife handle the situation. "What the hell possessed you to take a giant monster and attack the ABB!?

"I wanted to keep the ABB off balance so they couldn't cause trouble while the heroes were busy after setting off the bombs." I began to explain. Why is this such a big deal? I was fighting bad guys and helping the good guys at the same time.

"And just what makes you think they were the ones behind the bombing?" Her voice was frosty.

"I heard from Missy that she heard from her Uncle that the ABB has a bomb tinker." I lied, but it was believable and much easier than explaining meta knowledge.

"Oh so you heard a rumour from a schoolfriend and immediately leapt to conclusions, right before rushing off to go cause trouble. Is that what you're telling me?!" Her voice hardened further.

"Um."

"Do you even understand what you've done?! How bad things could turn out now?!"

"I was just trying to help. Taylor got to help out." That was obviously the wrong thing to say, if the way her glare instantly sharpened was any indication.

"Taylor didn't go behind our backs and pick a fight with a teleporting ninja assassin! Taylor asked for permission to help and then actually did something to help! Taylor didn't set off and make things worse! Not only did you rush off without permission but you did it twice!! What the hell possessed you to attack and steal from the Merchants after your attack on the ABB failed?!"

"We needed money and I was too scared of hitting the ABB again, so I went after the Merchants instead." My shoulders were hunched and I couldn't meet her gaze.

Uncle Danny spoke up, giving Aunt Rose a moment to calm herself a bit. "Addy, we appreciate the gesture but you're just a child. You should leave the money worries to us. You shouldn't be stealing it from the gangs, especially when you don't even let us know what you're doing in the first place. The entire city is on edge due to the bombings and you essentially just threw gasoline on everything."

"You deliberately broke the rules and grounding you obviously does nothing so you're going to be punished in other ways." Aunt Rose continued once Uncle Danny had said his piece. "First off. You're getting rid of Khanivore-"

"But-" I tried to object but my aunt swiftly cut me off.

"But nothing! It's extremely powerful and dangerous and you've proven that you can't handle the responsibility that comes with it. You can maybe make a new one when you're older, but at the moment you've proven you cannot be trusted to behave responsibly so it needs to go!"

Uncle Danny nodded in agreement.

"Second, no more Fluffles." She held up a finger to forestall any objections, giving me a stern look. "Taylor says it's poisonous, and judging by your current actions I'm not sure I can trust you not to bite anybody with it. So no, no more Fluffles. You can maybe make a new one without all the poison, but your current one needs to go."

"But-"

"Actions have consequences young lady!! If you aren't going to listen or follow rules then you're just going to have to deal with the fallout, which in this case means no more critters. Not until you prove you're responsible enough to handle them!!"

Uncle Danny spoke up, adding his thoughts to the mix. "Addy, we just can't trust you. We made those rules of yours for a reason and you just straight up ignored them to go and kick up trouble.

"I was just trying to help." I blinked heavily, trying to keep the tears from forming in my eyes.

"Your 'help' has probably just started a gang war!" Uncle Danny countered angrily, his temper slipping. "You're a cape Addy. You have a lot of power and you need to start using that power responsibly. Running off and stirring up trouble during a major crisis is the exact opposite of that!"

My uncle visibly restrained his temper, with Aunt Rose putting a calming hand on his shoulder. She sighed. "Just...just go to your room Addy. We'll finish dealing with this tomorrow."

I nodded to her, quickly slipping off downstairs with my metaphorical tail between my legs and tears rolling down my cheeks.



Much later, as I lay in the dark sniffling and trying not to cry, Taylor came downstairs to check up on me. She climbed up onto my bed and stroked my hair. She didn't say anything, instead just keeping me company and letting me know she was there.

"I suck at being a hero." I confessed quietly. I knew she heard me as she simply let out an amused huff in return.

"Yeah you kinda do." She eventually said. Ouch, thanks Tay. That does wonders for my damaged pride. "But we're here to help. You just need to let us okay?"

"'Kay." I sighed, leaning my head into her hand as she gently massaged my scalp. We lay like that for a while before she gave me a fond pat on the head and hopped off my bed to head back upstairs.

She paused briefly at the bottom of the basement stairs and turned to me. "Don't worry Addy. You'll get there eventually. I believe in you." She turned and headed upstairs.

Warmth blossomed in my heart and I let out a new set of tears, a little happier than my earlier tears.

Thanks Taylor.


(29th March 2011)

School was surprisingly normal on Tuesday. It wasn't cancelled, although a fair number of students weren't in. This included Missy, though that was more likely because she was Vista than because she had parents worried about the school maybe being targeted.

Once I got home my aunt then made me get changed so we could go to my workshop and euthanise my innocent critters, which absolutely sucked. No amount of pleading or tears could change her mind. I don't want to do this, but I have no choice.

"I need to return this first." I told her, holding up the laptop bag I'd borrowed yesterday and wiping the wetness from my cheeks.

My aunt sighed at me. "Very well." Yeah she's definitely still annoyed with me.

I swapped over to Fluffles the Second for the last time, slipping outside and circling around the Undersiders' lair even as I explained to my aunt that I'd borrowed the bag from my neighbours and needed to check if they were in before returning it. If they were in I'd just leave it outside the front door instead.

I couldn't see any sign of them, though that wasn't a guarantee that nobody was in. As I'd learnt yesterday with Tattletale the shower wasn't visible from where I could look from after all. I decided on a different approach this time, since they already knew I'd visited so I didn't need to be as stealthy any more. I simply broken a window on the bottom floor near the back and climbed in that way, dragging the bag behind me, before slipping upstairs into the loft.

The place was messy and there was no sign of any of the Undersiders here at all. In fact it looked like they'd left in a hurry. I dropped the bag off in Tattetale's room, noting the missing laptop. Hopefully she doesn't hold me borrowing the bag against me. I was curious about where they were, but then again Coil had just suffered a major attack so I figure he'd probably sent them out to stir up trouble and keep the other gangs off balance or something until he could get things back under control. Hopefully Tatts will be able to use the knowledge I gave her to fuck him over, since a world without Mr Pedosnake would be a better place.

After the bag was returned I slunk Fluffles back to the workshop and had her climb into the same vat as Khanivore. My cruel, merciless aunt was unmoved by my pleas to and so I was forced to set the tank to 'reclaim' them. It'd take a day or two for them to be broken down into a sort of biological slurry, and then I'd need to retrieve the bioware processors as well.

On the way home I decided to send a text to Missy to tell her uncle that my 'precog friend' thinks Coil and the Undersiders are up to something, since I was concerned about them so obviously having rushed off. At least Dinah was probably safe this time around. It also helped keep my mind off the fact that I'd just had to euthanise my poor, innocent critters.

After we got home I sulked stayed in my room while Aunt Rose went off and did whatever it was she that did. There may have been some tears as well, but if there were then they were totally justified. Taylor got home soon after and joined me downstairs and together we worked on finishing up her suit. My aunt came down later to ask if I wanted to help her make dinner, and while I wasn't forgiven exactly for what I'd done yesterday she wasn't holding it over me. I'd been punished and now just had to move forward.

I also hated that I was lacking that mental ping that meant I could swap over into controlling a different body, but there was nothing I could do about it at the moment. At least things were going good for Taylor. Her suit was basically done, just needing to be dyed and then she could go out and help people. Unlike myself, who was stuck with exactly zero critters.

Though silver lining, I'm at least I'm going to be getting some silk pyjamas eventually, although I could've done without all the spiders crawling over me so Taylor could get my measurements.

The week began to pass by slowly. School was tense with the increasing tension amongst the gangs. Cape fights were on the rise as each gang began fortifying their borders. There were frequent pushes from the Merchants and ABB against Empire territory, both gangs smelling blood with the Empire being down some of their capes. Oni Lee was apparently a regular sight along the ABB border, now equipped with tinkertech grenades and providing absolute proof that Bakuda was behind Monday's bomb attack on Coil.

Oni Lee's new armaments had already taken a toll, with a lot of gossip spreading around school on Thursday about the deaths of Rune and Victor, both turned to glass when the ABB assassin teleported up to the floating platform being used as a sniper nest and leaving a Bakuda special behind. There was apparently nothing left of the two Nazis after their glassed bodies had fallen and shattered across the ground.

Not that everything was going wrong for the Empire. Purity had rejoined them, along with Night and Fog. Not that many people even knew she'd separated from them in the first place, what with Purity being a shit hero only going after minorities anyway. This just solidified the racist as definitely not being heroic in the slightest.

On the tinkering side of things my Codex project was coming along nicely. I'd finished off the coding on Wednesday and been given a bunch of cheap electronics for my lab, a mixture of old unwanted junk Uncle Danny had gotten from work and some cheap items bought using some of the money I'd collected from the Merchants. Despite being punished they did understand that I needed to to tinker and that getting in the way of that would probably be a bad thing.

My lab was coming along nicely too. Kurt (hmm, would it be weird to start calling him Uncle Kurt?) had been right and there were some old lockers and cabinets at the the Union that Uncle Danny was allowed to take and that were now lining one of the walls of my lab. Annoyingly my bat, landmines and stealth boy were locked in one of them and only Uncle Danny had the key, since I was apparently too irresponsible to be allowed to use my own stuff without supervision.

So unfair.

I made a lot of progress on the physical hardware for the codex, which was basically a skull with articulated neck. It wouldn't have the sweet, black synthetic polymer a proper one would have covering it since I lacked the stuff needed. Instead it was mostly polished metal. The rest of the body would of course be a golden, hardlight projection with the 'hair' being a corona of energy caused by the way the Codex would exist partially in hyperspace. By bedtime Thursday it was complete, only needing the software loaded in, which was going to happen tomorrow. I wanted to do it right away but Taylor wanted to go to bed and since she was supervising me while I was tinkering I had to listen.

Stupid rules. I totally don't need a spotter when I'm fuguing...
[Agreement]

(1st April 2011)

"Hey guys."

""Hey Addy.""

"Missy's parents still have her off school?" I asked, repeating the lie and glancing around for my blonde friend. So annoying my friend was a superhero and got to go fight crime or whatever it is Wards did when the city is facing a crisis.

"Yeah." Tall Girl Karen replied. "She's still off school."

"Well now that everyone who's meant to be here is here, any of you guys up for a sleepover tomorrow?" Brunette #2 asked.

There was a chorus of agreements, and a small 'hells yeah' from Black Girl, leaving only me to respond.

"I'll ask, but I'm still grounded." I sighed.

"Oh yeah!" Black Girl exclaimed, and then immediately began to use me as an arm rest. "You're a secret alcoholic."

"Am not. It was only half a bottle." I grumbled. Besides I didn't even drink any of it. I elbowed her in the side.

"Okay Addy's alcoholic deviancy aside," Brunette #2 began and I stuck my tongue out at her in protest, "if you guys can text me later if you're coming or not so I know how many snacks to get. I'll text Missy later asking if she wants to come as well."

She probably won't. They usually gripe that Missy doesn't join in on the group social stuff. I shook my head. The blonde spends too much time focusing on her Wards stuff instead of having fun. I bantered a bit with Black Girl before checking my timetable, remembering I have double History first today. Damn.

Is it wrong to hope Bakuda bombs the school a little so I can get out of class?



"Please." I begged my cruel, heartless, uncaring aunt.

"You're grounded young lady. That means no sleepovers with your friends." My aunt gave me a flat look.

"Aww but I want to go. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease."

Addy used puppy eyes.

Foe Rose was unaffected.

"No."



I ran my hand over the smooth metal 'head' sitting on the desk and hooked up to the computer. My earlier pleas for a sleepover had fallen upon deaf and uncaring ears, my aunt proving her true heartless nature by enforcing the fact that I'm still grounded. I'd texted Brunette #2 that I couldn't make it and received a text back in response:

:cry2: Nxt time b gud & dont gt grnded :cry2:. U missin funtimes 🥳 :rofl2:

I'm ashamed to say it took me far longer than it should've to figure out what she was talking about.

My friend's basically illegible message aside, the Codex was almost done. I just had to finish transferring the software over and then the fun could begin. Soon, so soon and then I can steal money from the bank accounts belonging to Coil and the Nazis.

Oh, and sort out my aunt's new identity too. I know she's been going a little stir crazy being cooped up indoors. She'd been a much loved college professor and suddenly going from having a busy but rewarding work life to being stuck at home must've been a bit jarring for her.

Still, better than being dead.

"So any reason you needed to make a shiny metal head?" Aunt Rose asked, eyeing the Codex's physical components.

"I need specialised hardware for her to run on. It also means she can't just copy across the internet and go all Skynet or whatever." I shrugged, watching the progress bar on the screen.

"Her?"

"Well she's a girl. You'll see once I turn her on." I answered. Moments later the progress bar finished, indicating the software portion of my modified Codex had been uploaded. I clicked the button that would send the activation signal. "Watch."

Light flickered briefly in the Codex's eyes before before solidifying into solid white as a corona of black energy flickered out the back of the head, looking like hair made of dark energy. A glowing gold body began forming beneath the head, finally resolving into a lithe female form a couple inches shorter than Taylor, sitting calmly on the desk.

"Okay I see why you called her a her, though is she supposed to glitch out like that." My aunt asked, eyeing up the flickering form of the Codex with trepidation.

"Yeah that's normal. She exists partially in hyperspace."

My new AI shifted her head and looked at me, a synthetic but still female voice speaking up. "Primary Administrator recognised. State designation and task."

I was about to speak up when Aunt Rose nudged me in the side. "Addy..."

"Oh right. Set my aunt, Rose, as current primary administrator with myself as second." I sighed, gesturing to my aunt. This means she gets to override my decisions and has overall control, but I need to start acting 'responsibly'.

"New Primary Administrator recognised. Secondary Administrator Recognised. State designation and task."

I opened my mouth to begin explaining what to do but Aunt Rose spoke up before I could. "Addy why don't you head off and do your homework. I'll sort out her initial orders."

"Fine." I sighed. I build a kickass overpowered AI and I don't even get to play with it. She's lucky she's still my favourite aunt, even if I am still annoyed with her.

Then again I did make the Codex for her in the first place. And she's probably the best person in the house for raising it too. I thought briefly about how I'd go about raising a kid, which a baby nascent AI essentially was, and shuddered.

Yeah. The Codex is definitely better off in her hands.

Still it would've been nice to give it some orders though, like ruining Kaiser's social media accounts or something. That could've been fun.

I quickly worked my way through my homework, though annoyingly Taylor was at the library so I couldn't even rant at her about how stupid and annoying and what a waste of time this was. I was just finishing up when Aunt Rose came downstairs. I raised an eyebrow at her.

"She's off sorting out my identity now."

"I could've had her do that."

"Yes but I wanted to clarify things with her first, instead of just telling her to get me a new identity and then setting her loose, which is what I suspect your plan was."

"It sounds really bad when you put it that way."

"Well maybe it'll help teach you to plan ahead. Anyway it's being taken care of. Thank you Addy." She ruffled my hair.

"I'm happy to help, even if I don't get to play with my advanced AI just yet." I leaned into her touch.

"You can play with her later. She's a little busy right now okay. Now what should we do for dinner?"


(2nd April 2011)

Now that the Codex, apparently named Codi since my aunt has the same skill at naming things that I do, was finished I could finally start on the thing my power has been nagging me to do since last Saturday. Namely upgrading my vita-chamber into a fully functional psi chamber. This was going to be great. Psychic powers will be a great force multiplier for my whole family.

Of course I'll first have to spend about ten days unconscious in what amounts to extreme sensory deprivation as it forces changes onto my brain but whatever. No pain no gain.

Hmm, and my family will probably object. I suppose I could lie about things. That might work. Get myself killed somehow and then say the respawn took some extra time. That might work. I'll probably get grounded again since dying is meant to be a big thing but it'll be worth it. No wait, that plan won't work. I'm already grounded.

I'll have to think of something else.

I put the vita-chamber back together pretty quickly, though I needed Taylor's help with some pieces since I had Khanivore for heavy lifting last time.

Great and now I feel sad because my kickass heavy hitter is liquid mass of bio-slurry. Stupid rules.

"Hold it there please." I nodded to Taylor as I used the electric screwdriver to fit the last couple of panels in place. I'd ambushed her right after breakfast to ask for her help with putting the vita-chamber back together.

"Be quick. This is heavy." She grunted but did as I asked. I quickly fixed the last bits in place and gave her a confident smile.

"Okay vita-chamber is fully operational again. Now you can tell your mom it's safe for you to go out since if you die in a bomb or something we can bring you back." I grinned at her.

She rolled her eyes at me. "Oh I will, but not in those exact words." She sighed wistfully. "I'm itching to go out and make a difference. I know I can make difference. Between my own power and then the ones you gave me I'm one of the stronger capes in the city." A slight twitch of her hand and what looked like honeycomb shifted into existence, riddled with bees.

Yeah Insect Swarm is brokenly OP on her.

"Well you'll probably get to go out and do things soon." Unlike me, since I'm still grounded until I turn eighteen, "Your mom finally decided what powers she wanted."

"Oh? Which ones."

"Water and ice powers, along with the same invisibility and shield powers you have, and lastly one that lets her send out an invisible projection of herself that can use the powers too." And Metabolic Eve of course. That one is just too good not to have, especially since she doesn't have any actual parahuman powers to fall back on when her energy gets low. "Though I think she might want to sort out a costume first before she goes out for real. First though I want those pyjamas you promised me."

Hmm actually Aunt Rose will probably make a good hero. She doesn't have the conflict drive thing like Taylor has so she'll be able to help keep Taylor from making stupid decisions. I'm lucky my power just makes me want to tinker. Conflict drive sounds annoying.

My big sister rolled her eyes at me. "Yeah yeah. I've got spiders working on it right now. Good thing you're so puny-"

"I'm not puny." I grumbled, poking her in the side angrily. I take this crap from my friends all the time. I shouldn't have to take it from my sister.

"Yes you are," My big, and ridiculously tall, sister continued mercilessly, "so it shouldn't take long. It's just a simple nightgown really."

"Don't care. It's a knife-proof silk nightgown made of spider silk. That automatically makes it awesome." Anyway better get her to spot for me while I upgrade the vita-chamber into a functional psi chamber, since I'm gonna have to fugue for that. "Anyway I'm getting the feeling I can improve the vita-chamber and I've got enough parts leftover from my supplies to do it. Wanna spot for me since I need supervision since I'll be fuguing." I rolled my eyes.

"Yeah no problem. I'll do my homework down here."

"Thanks." I smiled at her, then gathered up the leftover parts I'd saved for this task and placed everything near the vita-chamber. Then I reached for my power and slipped quickly and easily into a tinker fugue.

Moments later I staggered forward, the chamber opening up around me and disgorging me onto one of the soft rugs that littered the floor of my lab. I curled up in a fetal position, my pale, greying hands gripping my head. My glowing purple eyes reflected briefly off the metal to my right before I screwed my eyes shut in pain.

I could feel this presence, so much bigger, greater, larger than I was. So far away but I could feel it become aware of me, shifting it's focus onto me and transmitting a single concept that crushed all other thoughts from my mind and left my head feeling like it was going to explode.

{CURIOSITY}


A/N
Dun dun dun!
That punishment scene was a bitch to rewrite and is nowhere near as good as the one I lost, but sadly that was the best I could do to recapture the general mood and feel of the scene.
Also my internet is shitting on me, so sorry for the delay. Also replies might be a little spotty till it settles downs and stops being a piece of crap
 
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I'm ambivalent on the punishment scene, but the last bit made up for it. I knew that the rules would be tossed out the window when The Fugue hit, especially when RL agreed.
 
"You deliberately broke the rules and grounding you obviously does nothing so you're going to be punished in other ways." Aunt Rose continued once Uncle Danny had said his piece. "First off. You're getting rid of Khanivore-"

"But-" I tried to object but my aunt swiftly cut me off.

"But nothing! It's extremely powerful and dangerous and you've proven that you can't handle the responsibility that comes with it. You can maybe make a new one when you're older, but at the moment you've proven you cannot be trusted to behave responsibly so it needs to go!"

Uncle Danny nodded in agreement.

"Second, no more Fluffles." She held up a finger to forestall any objections, giving me a stern look. "Taylor says it's poisonous, and judging by your current actions I'm not sure I can trust you not to bite anybody with it. So no, no more Fluffles. You can maybe make a new one without all the poison, but your current one needs to go."

"But-"

"Actions have consequences young lady!! If you aren't going to listen or follow rules then you're just going to have to deal with the fallout, which in this case means no more critters. Not until you prove you're responsible enough to handle them!!"

First, I'll say I enjoy this story a lot. The newest development seems really interesting, really looking forward to where it goes.

Second, and this isn't a jab at you or anything, more a jab at the circumstances of the story, but I really don't like Annette's reasoning. I mean, I get it, kind of, Khanivore and Fluffles have led to problems and if you had a kid playing with matchsticks you'd take them away . . .

At the same time, just killing a unique biological organism, even if it's effectively braindead just seems wrong and heavy-handed. Adeline put a lot of work into them and by previous chapters it seems like she's at least a little emotionally attached.

If I was Annette I'd just lock them up for a while but still allow Adeline to keep them alive.

As it is, it reminds me of a parent who destroys their child's computer because they're spending too much time on it. Not quite the same, but that's my emotional response to it.
 
Thanks for the chapter. Ok what happened there better not be a copy of her or it means everyone that comes out of the vita chamber is just a copy or did she use it to improve her self somehow?
 
As it is, it reminds me of a parent who destroys their child's computer because they're spending too much time on it. Not quite the same, but that's my emotional response to it.
A better example might be this one story (real or not, I don't recall) I heard awhile back. It was about how whenever a kid broke the house rules, the parent would force the kid to choose one of his toys that would then be thrown out. That is, to this day, one of the most emotionally disturbing things I've ever seen (or read, or whatever)
 
I say the one {Curiosity} is a certain being up in orbit, floating, with wings.

Will the Bay now have someone looking towards them?
 
(...)
"Thanks." I smiled at her, then gathered up the leftover parts I'd saved for this task and placed everything near the vita-chamber. Then I reached for my power and slipped quickly and easily into a tinker fugue.

Moments later I staggered forward, the chamber opening up around me and disgorging me onto one of the soft rugs that littered the floor of my lab. I curled up in a fetal position, my pale, greying hands gripping my head. My glowing purple eyes reflected briefly off the metal to my right before I screwed my eyes shut in pain.

I could feel this presence, so much bigger, greater, larger than I was. So far away but I could feel it become aware of me, shifting it's focus onto me and transmitting a single concept that crushed all other thoughts from my mind and left my head feeling like it was going to explode.

{Curiosity}


A/N
Dun dun dun!

When you tinker fugue so darn hard, you attract the attention of {REDACTED}. Here's to hoping that it's just The Simurgh, and not something ser{Zion}ious.
 
If you ever get it set back up mind sharing your modlist and order? Trying to get Skyrim vr set up myself.
Yeah can do, though it'll be a while. I have phases where I binge Fallout 4 and Skyrim, so you'd need to wait till I'm in a binging mood.
First, I'll say I enjoy this story a lot. The newest development seems really interesting, really looking forward to where it goes.

Second, and this isn't a jab at you or anything, more a jab at the circumstances of the story, but I really don't like Annette's reasoning. I mean, I get it, kind of, Khanivore and Fluffles have led to problems and if you had a kid playing with matchsticks you'd take them away . . .

At the same time, just killing a unique biological organism, even if it's effectively braindead just seems wrong and heavy-handed. Adeline put a lot of work into them and by previous chapters it seems like she's at least a little emotionally attached.
Plus Addy has odd attachments to her critters anyway. Fluffles the First got a short little funeral and a hole in the ground and Addy did a complete 180 from sadness to indifference once she started growing Fluffles the Second.
THe thing is the only way she can really make sure Addy doesn't end up using them is to straight out euthanise them. They're also completely expendable which is why she settled for that option in the first place. She'll be allowed to make new ones in the future when she's not being punished.
A better example might be this one story (real or not, I don't recall) I heard awhile back. It was about how whenever a kid broke the house rules, the parent would force the kid to choose one of his toys that would then be thrown out. That is, to this day, one of the most emotionally disturbing things I've ever seen (or read, or whatever)
Okay that's just messed up. When I was a little shit I just computer privileges and whatnot.
I say the one {Curiosity} is a certain being up in orbit, floating, with wings.

Will the Bay now have someone looking towards them?
Well considering thistle is the same colour Ziz used in the interlude...

When you tinker fugue so darn hard, you attract the attention of {REDACTED}. Here's to hoping that it's just The Simurgh, and not something ser{Zion}ious.
Ziz: All according to keikaku
 
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I'm honestly just waiting for all of those restrictions to blow up in Anette's face. A tinker that's driven primarily by their shard will almost assuredly start to chafe and resent their restrictions before too long. Assuming she doesn't enter a destructive fugue.

Honestly the longer she goes without tinkering and conflict the bigger the fallout will be. This combined with her kill order may lead to a very bad situation.
 
First, I'll say I enjoy this story a lot. The newest development seems really interesting, really looking forward to where it goes.

Second, and this isn't a jab at you or anything, more a jab at the circumstances of the story, but I really don't like Annette's reasoning. I mean, I get it, kind of, Khanivore and Fluffles have led to problems and if you had a kid playing with matchsticks you'd take them away . . .

At the same time, just killing a unique biological organism, even if it's effectively braindead just seems wrong and heavy-handed. Adeline put a lot of work into them and by previous chapters it seems like she's at least a little emotionally attached.

If I was Annette I'd just lock them up for a while but still allow Adeline to keep them alive.

As it is, it reminds me of a parent who destroys their child's computer because they're spending too much time on it. Not quite the same, but that's my emotional response to it.
I'd usually feel the same but it's a walking WMD in the hands of a twelve year old. (Khanivore)

I don't feel that letting twelve year olds drive a fully armed main battle tank is a good idea.

Fluffles, yeah maybe she could have just had addy remove its venom glands and make it permanent.

Also, Addy does need to learn restraint so that she doesn't become the next Bonesaw.
Jack's power might affect Addy's power, so yeah her "Halping" might attract the nutjob to Brockton.

Although her being Psionic might make Jack Slashs power even more effective if she can hear [BROADCAST].
 
Oh god, she can talk to Ziz now.

Time for Friendbringer Ziz!

...and makes me wonder what happened when she went into the fugue and all that. And spent the 10 days inside it. ...Going to be kinda crazy, I suspect.

Also, I LOVE that the Undersiders noped the fuck out of there. Just like... Tattletale figured out Fluffles stole her bag and they all just BOOKED. Also probably learned Coil intended to kill them if he got out. Which he may never. Hell, Coil is probably a non-issue by now 10 days later...

...god, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Good luck and keep enjoying your muse, Unders!
 
Thanks for update.

Honestly the longer she goes without tinkering and conflict the bigger the fallout will be.
Well, as you can see, they allow her to tinker. But conflict - yes, that's gonna be problem. Conflict isn't something they can (and willing to) provide to her.

Although her being Psionic might make Jack Slashs power even more effective if she can hear [BROADCAST].
Or much less. Depends.
 
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