hum, I wonder how the MC shard will cheat on this 'fight'. it is aware that the experience is contaminated. and imagine that the some shards that like their host would object giving the smallest excuse to do so.

Plus the amount of data that it collected plus it 'ranking' (it is a vital shard of the main body right?) probably will allow for some bizarre shenanigans.

Plus I curious what multiple trumps, multiple tinker and multiple thinkers (and masters) will do with access to the MC. Because a boosted and resurrected (and mastered) Lung it is the last of the shenanigans possible. something truly bizarre like mastering the sleeper (let me dream^^) and/or res and controlled grey boy are things that are actually possible.

Plus this is the shard that have a (possible) answer to entropy give the input of food and material don't justify what the MC can do with some powers. the crows for example. unless that is the shard using it own power/energy/matter to allow for that.

Still using and controlling entropy would make for a SERIOUSLY good argument for why the MC should continue to exist. and that is without the bullshit that is fiction based tinker 'tech'.

edited: grammar.

p.s: I speed my reading a little bit so I will re-read this. But let me say what a joy this girl was to witness :D the best kind of adorable/bad ass with mad 'science' with a protag that take control of the story in the best way possible. with good and bad outcomes from her inclusion. and reducing the plot armor of the original story for villains :D
 
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So, @Unders, is she going to get the more cool/fun/versatile/weird stuff from Eberron? Cause she seems a bit rushed with the 'necessary' stuff, and I'm not sure exactly which of the hinted at things we discussed she managed to get this chapter...
 
Totally forgot to comment on that. LOVE that Addy is picking up the Daelkyr symbiotes. Awesome stuff! Pity there aren't rules for her to say... make a Beholder. But such a thing would be something a true Daelkyr could do because they made them in the first place in Eberron.

But yeah... god... I can only imagine her getting a Creation Forge... Warforged Army Get!
 
Just two hours warning? How early was Armsmaster and Dragon's prediction program able to predict ahead of time for Leviathan?

Addy should hand a couple dress spheres to her friends. Magicalgirls healing squad to the rescue!
While it is never said in canon most fanon puts it in terms of minutes. Prior to this they have been able to track Endbringer movements, but not their destination until the last second. As such engagements started as soon as the Endbringer made contact so no preparation existed. Unders has already said that they are basing everything on fanon so anywhere from a dozen minutes to an hour or so.
 
Longer tentacles, no poisonous barbs, larger eyes. Smaller than the previous catsquids. I'm pretty sure I gave a description in whichever chapter it was when she made it.
Piggot: They're evolving.

More seriously thou, is levi-tan early? Also what would happen if Noelle got a hold of a catsquid?
 
Noelle creates a small army of catsquids of warying sizes that need to be destroyed leading to the "family" of catsquids Addy "predicted" earlier.
 
How the f-hell does an Endbringer slip your mind?" Taylor demanded,
well to be fair she has another one slipping in and out her head for a while now.

Congrats Tay, you were actually conceived right where Aunt Rose's plate of lasagne is sitting."
Gotta love that line. Though I pity the older Hebert's now they can't experiment in the house much cause addy Lisa n Taylor all have their ways to know know.
 
Hmm, now that I think about it, if I make a scroll of speak with plants and scroll of speak with dead and then use both, would I be able to talk to furniture?

Sadly, while you might be able talk to a bench if it was made from actual wood, Abby (dubious, since SwD needs a 'sufficiently intact corpse', but let's say it counts), it wouldn't be able to tell you anything about its life as a bench — the 'creature' can only reveal information about events that occurred while it was still alive.

You'll have much better luck with the vegan thing…. and I am totally going to use that idea next time I get a chance because my current 5e character is a druid.
 
Someone who can cast speak with animals and speak with plants is probably going to have somewhat, unorthodox, opinions on what counts as food.
 
Did she manage to get all of her friends the Null Tide rings? I remember reading her giving out some things before, but also that she was still working on more of them in this chapter. Were those just extra or for less important people?
 
We'll see what happens. But damn, this is going to be a wild ride! The attack run begins and... why the fuck is Noelle even in Brockton Bay?! Coil isn't even there anymore!
Coil needed some favours from Accord to help get things back on track, and taking in the Travellers was part of the payment for that aid. It also helps out Coil in the sense he has some parahuman assets since he had to burn the Undersiders.
You're only naming a chapter derailment this far in?
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It's going to be a trainwreck, isn't it?
Edit: I was right!
The hardest part of doing updates is thinking of amusing chapter names that fit.
Yay, pre-cog paradox was brought up! I'm very excited to see how this goes, Addy is correct that she can kill an Endbringer, but I don't know if the series of events needed for it are viable. I'm unsure what's going to happen with Cauldron because Addy is an unreliable narrator, so her reading of their motivations might be off, but I have a feeling that if they kidnap her Addy will commit suicide to pop back up on Earth Bet.
Addy's got a bunch of plans to kill Leviathan, with some escalation if/when one plan fails. And if that fails she can do the boring 'have flechette shoot it' thing.
Addy committing suicide is one of the ways she'd escape. At least for now, she's got some ideas for later but needs time to tinker it up. Not that suicide would be easy for her at the moment since with all the ADAM in her system she's really hard to kill, so she'd mostly be stuck waiting for her dragonmark to grow so she can have more options.
I got two big insights from this chapter. The first is that the backup vita chamber hasn't been set up yet, so Addy and Taylor are actually in danger. The second is that her plan to piss off Eldion might have gone a bit too well since she both stated that Eldion would be irrelevant and that his dead friend wouldn't matter in the long run compared to her.
They're only mostly in danger. Addy also has some resurrection scrolls made up that she'll give to Danny, so having her original vita-chamber taken down would just prevent her from carrying on the fight. D&D has all sorts of ways to stop you from being dead.
As for the second point it certainly is an interesting coincidence that Leviathan went on his attack run moments after Eidolon finished watching a recording of the meeting.
It also occurs to me that while having Addy's specialty being a free tinker, there is a specialty she can give which is wide enough and humorous enough to cover her, physics. Since all interactions within four-dimensional space are going to be covered by this Addy could conceivably make anything, just like how everything is related to waves in someway, which is Hero could do anything. Then, to really boast she can say that the more an item breaks physics the better it works for her, and because all tinker tech inherently breaks physics, she can make every tinker tech item in existence. Finally to explain the magical girl theme, Addy can explain that since magic ignores physics entirely, magical items work the best for her.
At the moment they don't think she's a free tinker. Addy's idea (following a suggestion from Simmy) was that other tinkers imprint on her power since it'd be a way to explain away diverse tech switches (for example she only started making her 'nanite ink' after she met Armsmaster, a tinker with a focus on miniaturisation and efficiency). At least that was the idea. What the PRT heard was the words 'I copy other tinkers' coming from a 'psychic' girl with telekinesis, powerful precog/postcog abilities (among other powers ofc) and their minds went to something completely different. {All According to Keikaku}
Oh for god's sake stans exist in bet too.
Some horrors are multiversal
The kind of cat that gets on the shelves and knocks over stuff while you are looking at it.
My cat used to do that. Especially when he was annoyed.
I'm not sure but I believe that Taylor has shown healer abilities. Plus her white mage isn't a Striker ability so it would be an easier sell for Krouse to sell the rest of his crew on.
She's done some offscreen stuff at one of the hospitals after she got the white mage dressphere. It was part of the reason Addy made the ragnarok ring for her, because Taylor would totally do an Amy and exhaust herself healing random people.
Just two hours warning? How early was Armsmaster and Dragon's prediction program able to predict ahead of time for Leviathan?
Two hours warning, since that's how long it'll take Leviathan to swim over to the Bay. I'm placing Armsie's prediction thing at maybe 15-20 minutes (since I can't remember how long it actually was in canon). It's not a lot, but still better than only learning your city is under attack when Levi pops out the water.
So, I loved Addy casually shutting the PRT down, but I do wish you'd included some of the therapy scene. Can't wait to find out about Dr. Hedgeface's reaction.
I had some stuff typed out but cut it for an interlude instead, since I felt it fit better there.
Btw, Vita-Chamber will, probably, resurrect her right after her capture, because she will be no longer detectable (since, you know, different dimension).
It works using quantum bullshit similar to shard connections, so it can tell she's still alive despite her being in a different dimension.
This was a great Gilligan Cut and actually managed to make me laugh
Ty. I cut some of the actual stuff she said which as mentioned above will be in an upcoming interlude.
You just know there's no way that was anything like a remotely sane gripe session.
It was a sane griping session. Addy is a perfectly sane and normal preteen girl after all :whistle:
So, @Unders, is she going to get the more cool/fun/versatile/weird stuff from Eberron? Cause she seems a bit rushed with the 'necessary' stuff, and I'm not sure exactly which of the hinted at things we discussed she managed to get this chapter...
Some of the big draws of the eberron setting Addy doesn't actually need, or could get better from a different specialty (airships, etc). That said she's got or will be getting some of the cool setting specific stuff (shroud resonators to block PtV, some daelkyr symbiots, dragonmarks, different flavours of homunculi, etc). She's gonna also be making good use of some of the psionics handbook stuff too (<3 psionic tattoos), along with some things here and there from the other books I'm using. Addy hasn't had this tech tree that long after all, so there's still time for her to grab some of the fun stuff.
Totally forgot to comment on that. LOVE that Addy is picking up the Daelkyr symbiotes. Awesome stuff! Pity there aren't rules for her to say... make a Beholder. But such a thing would be something a true Daelkyr could do because they made them in the first place in Eberron.
I'm not adding beholders, though there may or may not be some fish-shaped aberrations in the future. Because they're psychic, and definitely not because they have tentacles :whistle:
But yeah... god... I can only imagine her getting a Creation Forge... Warforged Army Get!
While she can make a creation forge she really has no need for one. She wouldn't be allowed to use one as Magpie (because the PRT are wusses) and Splyce already has army creating options. That and Addy doesn't want to be bothered with socialising and raising people (and let's be honest, warforged are basically people). It's why she let Annette handle Codi and Annette/Lisa/Taylor handle the vipers/tattlesnakes.
Plus I've already rolled her next tech tree so I can try figure out a general plot for the next arc (which Addy will no doubt derail as she has with everything else) and it has waaaaaaaaay better army creation options.
That said, I am tempted to have her make a warforged titan, since that could be funny having a massive (and kinda stupid) war robot stomping about.
Did she manage to get all of her friends the Null Tide rings? I remember reading her giving out some things before, but also that she was still working on more of them in this chapter. Were those just extra or for less important people?
She hasn't given her friends any tinkertech yet, but will get round to it eventually.
 
It occurs to me that Leviathan showing up and throwing everything he finds in the bay at them might be when Addy figures out that dumping ADAM into the sewer system might not have been the greatest idea. Also, what would an ADAM enchanced Leviathan be like?
 
It occurs to me that Leviathan showing up and throwing everything he finds in the bay at them might be when Addy figures out that dumping ADAM into the sewer system might not have been the greatest idea. Also, what would an ADAM enchanced Leviathan be like?
It would not enhance him - he has no biology
 
At the moment they don't think she's a free tinker. Addy's idea (following a suggestion from Simmy) was that other tinkers imprint on her power since it'd be a way to explain away diverse tech switches (for example she only started making her 'nanite ink' after she met Armsmaster, a tinker with a focus on miniaturisation and efficiency). At least that was the idea. What the PRT heard was the words 'I copy other tinkers' coming from a 'psychic' girl with telekinesis, powerful precog/postcog abilities (among other powers ofc) and their minds went to something completely different. {All According to Keikaku}

Now, all I'm about to say as potential outcomes don't matter because Addy is lying, but this very much is what I think should be the PRT/Protoctorate/Cauldron's view

The Simurgh parellels are very worrying, but it barely matters compared to an unrestrained Leet power, which is what Addie implied by saying she could use other Tinkers powers without restriction. Leet's power is "make anything once", but by removing the "once" limitation it means Addy's Tinker power is "make anything".

On the bad side, this means access to every S class technology, including biotinkering, self replicating AI, dimensional manipulation, and more. (This also means she can build the most powerful EMP ever, destroying all electronics on Earth and causing a civilization-wide collapse) On the good side this means access to a universal pancrea that can cure every disease in the world, ressurection technology, anti-Enbringer weaponary, and tinker tech that can repair others tinker tech.

Even without being aware of Sting, so long as Cauldron can figure out that a large scale multi dimensional refraction can kill Endbringers/Scion they can just have Costa Brown request Addy make the technology for them and then use it. Killing Scion comes down to having a weapon that can kill him, being able to hit him through a dimensional portal, and landing the hit. Assuming Addie makes devices for the three functions and fourth piece of tinker tech that can combine the functions, she would have a functional, perfectly accurate, unavoidable, dimensional unstable instant death weapon.

Addy would never be allowed freedom again, Cauldron would just use PTV on Piggot, Armsmaster Taylor, Annette, Danny, the local Youth Guard rep, and anyone else needed to get her transfered to LA where she would never leave the PRT building because something could happen to their silver bullet. Even assuming this doesn't happen, this is a check Addy fundamentally can not cash because the PRT can justifiably ask for a technological solution to any problem in the world. Then Addy would have to make things outside of the fields she actually can tinker things in and have to admit she lied about having the power to make anything.

In conclusion, Addy has the potential to be the worst S class threat there has ever been. Endbringers can destroy cities, Addy can split the Earth in half. The PRT believes her to be an absentminded interest troll with a disregard for authority and an inability to think about the consequences of her actions. (I don't think they've gotten around to figuring out she's crazy) The PRT would come down on her harder than fanon warlord Skitter because they have to control the walking WMD.
 
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Now, all I'm about to say as potential outcomes don't matter because Addy is lying, but this very much is what I think should be the PRT/Protoctorate/Cauldron's view

All of this is technically true, but in practice I don't think Cauldron understands enough about tinker powers to actually take advantage of this or realize what kind of a priority it is. Keep in mind that Eidolon doesn't really use Tinker Powers even though they logically should be some of his best abilities. They are quick to charge, and while he needs regular maintenance and would have to regularly swap back to the power it would still only be every week or so.

Imagine if David used a flying suit of power armor for his mobility and defense and freed up an entire power slot or even two as a result.

Imagine if David used his power to make Tinker medicines, then swapped over to a thinker power to let him analyze them and attempt to reverse engineer them with Dragon.

But because Cauldron as an organization doesn't really study power interactions, Eidolon seems to only use his power in the most brain dead (one offense, one defense, one utility) way possible.
 
Addy looks to have a lot of Ziz Parallels.

Mind rape - Check
Telekinesis- Check
Using the Specialty of other Tinkers - Check
Precog- Check
 
What are the chances of addie killing leviathan before dieing herself in a really horrifying way in front of Vista and/Or taylor? Could Vista second trigger from it and if so how would it change her powers?
 
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