Alphaleph
The Firstiest of First
in the word of Avalanche:
"The revenge of pomegranates."
Battle Action Harem Highschool Side Character Quest (No SV, you are the Waifu)
- Thread starter Avalanche
- Start date
- Original
"The revenge of pomegranates."
- Location
- Leeds
Looks like a watchamagig from evangelion
Type 2 Antagonist.
It's fucky. Each eye shoots lazas.
Olivebirdy
mook.
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Hi @Avalanche. I spellchecked the entire quest, here are my results. Buuuut, unfortunately SV wiped the rest of my Multiquote So now I only have corrections for the first couple of chapters.
Finally, you might want to change every instance of whom to who. Whom is object, not subject.
Hi @Avalanche. I spellchecked the entire quest, here are my results. Buuuut, unfortunately SV wiped the rest of my Multiquote
So now I only have corrections for the first couple of chapters.Koji? Humble?
who
dashes needed
analysts
swathes
Valkyrie units, who
the strongest
skewed
or so
roommate stares at you
Anna, cursing?
Anchorage
questions
space
blazers
nods.
mortified-looking
one,"
relative
Not sure, but don't you tend to put dashes at the end of memories?
you had stepped forward and grabbed
me,"
Arcology
bed-
is the
as you do me
who
classrooms
Renu - I still ship it!
- Pronouns
- They/Them
"I'll definitely make you smile!"
*3 weeks later*
"Still counts!"
(AKA Renu thinks up some silly stories for his ship)
*3 weeks later*
"Still counts!"
(AKA Renu thinks up some silly stories for his ship)
SolipsistSerpent
Endlessly Devouring
Well, if the goal of the game is to be popular in the pretend anime, I'm pretty sure being the lesbian side-character couple can work. It didn't turn out badly for Setsuna and Konoka, right?
- Location
- The Surface Of A Hostile Planet
If you want I can try to insult them, if that would make it more believable.
SolipsistSerpent
Endlessly Devouring
Well, most of them. If it makes you feel better I felt "In the End" didn't live up to the standard you'd set with the others, both comedic and serious.
Spectral Waltz
Scatterbrained Writer
- Location
- Walking the Endless Corridors
Wait really? No accounting for personal taste I guess, that one's my favourite.
- Location
- Illinois
how is that your favorite i wrote it while in two hours while i was off my adhd meds and had a splitting headache
Like I mean, I have nothing against you liking my omakes. But that one was, like, high on catnip, nyan.
Spectral Waltz
Scatterbrained Writer
- Location
- Walking the Endless Corridors
What can I say? Music resonates strongly with me, and things that work with it like that one did really -pardon the pun- strike a chord.
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Aranfan
Team Plasma Grunt
SolipsistSerpent
Endlessly Devouring
It occurs to me that while Sandra/Anna is fine, your ship does have competition from more than just Kojiro.
And technically Anna/Yukari leaves Kojiro with more people in his harem*, since (hopefully) Yukari was never a romance option.
*By Harem, I mean attractive, unattached girls that hang around him and provide ship tease material for fans.
Spectral Waltz
Scatterbrained Writer
- Location
- Walking the Endless Corridors
Inb4 Anna develops an even bigger harem than Coke Zero by the end of the series...
You thought it was a Mecha Harem series but it was a Mecha Yuri Harem series! That would certainly be an interesting plot twist for the anime viewers.
- Location
- Voidbetweenstars
No it would not.
Spectral Waltz
Scatterbrained Writer
- Location
- Walking the Endless Corridors
Isn't that the goal of this quest?
- Pronouns
- They/Them
No, it's the goal of the players.
- Location
- Voidbetweenstars
I meant the whole it would be a plot twist.
goal of some of them.
- Pronouns
- They/Them
To be fair, I don't want a harem. I just want Sandra/Anna and Kojirou/Setsuna.
- Location
- Leeds
Battle Action Harem High School Quest
Onmur
Archangel of Nutella.
Literally a victory condition.
Alphaleph
The Firstiest of First
Well shucks.
I don't want a harem as well, but I want more. Just Kouji/Setsu, Sandra/Shuri and Yukari/Anna.
