This not a post I ever wanted to write.

I know this sounds ominous but it's not quite that bad. With @Azel and @Duesal taking a break from the thread, the recent mess with the moral choice update that fell like a pig from the sky (and has rightfully been called out for it) I find myself less enthusiastic about writing this. It's not that I lost all enjoyment or anything, but more and more I'm thinking less of themes and the flow of the story and instead focusing on the mechanics,on getting though this or that action without dragging or pushing the characters into doing something OOC, all things any storyteller should be concerned with of course, but it's taking a lot more of my time and effort to keep everything and everyone straight. Those moments when my fingers practically fly off the keyboard not able to keep up with the story that's in my head are getting rarer.

I'm not saying this to get sympathy or reassurances just to warn you that it is happening so that if one day I look at the thread and realize I can't go on it will not just be an abrupt closing. Once again it's nowhere near that bad right now, hopefully it will never get that bad I just felt it was right to tell you guys my concerns after all we've gone though.
I'll be quite honest, this, to me, feels like a beginning of the end.
I'm not sure how to handle this.

I've been on this quest for over two years.
Not a single day has passed without me coming here, reading and commenting.
Sure, there was salt, there were arguments... but in the end, it was all fine.

Yet it seems, that caustic atmosphere of certain posters prevailed in the end over some more active participants.
And I'll be quite honest here, for a while now I've been enjoying this most as a game, and a place where I interact with people, not as a story.
Just something of a personal preference, I suppose.

I hope this quest will exist for a while still.
But I really don't think it will be the same with most active posters leaving it.
Nor really the same enough for me to enjoy playing.

I suppose we'll see. Hopefully Duesal and/or Azel come back still and it all will go back to what it used to be.
...I don't think it will, but I like to pretend, yes.

I'll go and cry a bit
 
I'll be quite honest, this, to me, feels like a beginning of the end.
I'm not sure how to handle this.

I've been on this quest for over two years.
Not a single day has passed without me coming here, reading and commenting.
Sure, there was salt, there were arguments... but in the end, it was all fine.

Yet it seems, that caustic atmosphere of certain posters prevailed in the end over some more active participants.
And I'll be quite honest here, for a while now I've been enjoying this most as a game, and a place where I interact with people, not as a story.
Just something of a personal preference, I suppose.

I hope this quest will exist for a while still.
But I really don't think it will be the same with most active posters leaving it.
Nor really the same enough for me to enjoy playing.

I suppose we'll see. Hopefully Duesal and/or Azel come back still and it all will go back to what it used to be.
...I don't think it will, but I like to pretend, yes.

I'll go and cry a bit

I can't promise you everything will be alright, the fact it's gotten bad enough that I'm considering dropping what have been a fixture of my life for years should make that clear but there is one thing I can promise: you and the other regular postershave given me so much joy in sharing this story with me that if I do stop and start another quest I'm PMing all of you with the news. Maybe it's against forum etiquette I don't give a damn. We are all friends here.
 
I just don't know what to say. But I don't want to just ignore this either...

DP, do as you wish. You write for your own enjoyment, and we don't want to force you to spend time on things you hate.

It would be a huge shame to see this end, but it would also be disappointing for this to become horrible and twisted due to a burn-out author, so...

Still, perhaps write a few fun interludes as a palate cleanser? Slice-of-life moments involving your favourite characters? Maybe make them non-canon and threadmark them as apocrypha, whatever.
 
This thread has been a constant part of my daily routine for the past 2 years too. I'll be at loss on what to do if this just stop without resolution...
 
This thread has been a constant part of my daily routine for the past 2 years too. I'll be at loss on what to do if this just stop without resolution...
Read the next quest.

We have gotten a lot of fun from Viserys, but after reading all of DP's other quests I can say with certainty that I enjoy everything he writes, so I'll be happy to follow his next project if this is layed to rest.
 
I just don't know what to say. But I don't want to just ignore this either...

DP, do as you wish. You write for your own enjoyment, and we don't want to force you to spend time on things you hate.

I can't imagine myself ever hating this story not only because of the community I put too much of myself into it. I just felt you guys needed fair warning that I might not be able to carry it to the end.
 
I can't imagine myself ever hating this story not only because of the community I put too much of myself into it. I just felt you guys needed fair warning that I might not be able to carry it to the end.

To be fair, the end of the quest is something that we've complicated for ourselves just as much as the way you create stories, I feel. We've added on to the world you've built by taking things extraplanar, expanded the manner of play into the founding of Empire far more than a reconquest, the list goes on.

To be quite honest, I'm impressed as hell that you've done so so successfully. Carrying this massive storyline to the end, especially as so many aspects of the world evolved into rocket tag, was always going to be challenging. I'd be truly sad to see this quest go, and I hope you can find a stable medium. But in the end, you write for the reasons you wish to. That's all you can do, and all anyone can expect.
 
I'll be sad to see it go if it does, but I'll raise a glass to it regardless.

I've enjoyed reading this quest daily, participating where I can, and simply riding the wave where I couldn't.

If it dies, well, I'll weep for sure, but I'll be damned if I can't say it was an amazing ride.

It's been an amazing few years @DragonParadox and you can be fucking sure of that.

Hopefully this will still be here and I'll see you all in the morning, but if I don't? Don't be afraid to wave at an old crazy fool if you see this name in another thread.
 
OK, I'm going to take @TalonofAnathrax's advice and write some interludes. Fair warning they are going to be dark because that is where I am right now, but also because I feel I have been a little too willing to sweep dark things under the rug and the story has suffered for it (as soon by the hypocrisy question that caused so much trouble)
 
OK, I'm going to take @TalonofAnathrax's advice and write some interludes. Fair warning they are going to be dark because that is where I am right now, but also because I feel I have been a little too willing to sweep dark things under the rug and the story has suffered for it (as soon by the hypocrisy question that caused so much trouble)

On May 4th, DragonParadox goes Nolan!!

:V
Please don't hurt me >.>
 
OK, I'm going to take @TalonofAnathrax's advice and write some interludes. Fair warning they are going to be dark because that is where I am right now, but also because I feel I have been a little too willing to sweep dark things under the rug and the story has suffered for it (as soon by the hypocrisy question that caused so much trouble)
I think you should write what feels natural, DP.

I can say for certain that you do existential horror and dark stuff well, as seen by Mantarys, Torturer's Deep reigned by Illithids, some of Lyceos, and beginning of the quest in general.
 
Make @Azel QM, watch everyone suddenly start losing in the late-game :D
To be quite honest, I wouldn't even mind at that point.
Planetos is almost entirely subjugateable by now.
Westeros is a pile of steaming shit, but not a danger.
Essos is only a danger because of how much administration it needs.
Yi-ti...
I have no idea, but we probably can take them over.
Eventually.

So, only Asshai, Long Night, the 15th and Illithids to really mind on planetosi-scale.

Everything else out in the Planes?
Devils, Gith (the asshole ones), greater Illithid forces, Demons,
Daemons, Feywild, whatever is in the Dreamspace, the entity behind Others?

We fought off so many different enemies for so long, that by the time we finish unifying our empire it is but expected to get a sudden curve in difficulty, because we'll be facing fellow multiplanar empires that want to eat us.

It's a very good thing we are a totalitarian regime, with Inquisition and Legions at hand and everywhere by then.
Without them we'd be completely fucked at a moments notice :V
 
I appreciate the effort you have put into this story DP. And thank you for a few months of wonderfull binging and lurking.
 
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No. DragonParadox or nothing.

<.<
>.>

#DragonParadoxForKing!

(Edit: In retrospect, I can see how this would be seen as/would be pressuring. It was meant only in terms of joy and enthusiasm)
 
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Well, this is a depressing turn of events to wake up to. :(

Whatever you decide to do, @DragonParadox, I just want to reiterate what I've said many times over the years. This quest has been an amazing amount of fun. It's become a major part of my life, like the biggest and longest running D&D game I ever played. If it ends, I'll be sad, but that won't take away from the enjoyment and memories. You made something awesome and I got to help just a little bit. That's really cool.
 
Interlude CDLVII: Innocence Lost
Innocence Lost

Eleventh Day of the Ninth Month 293 AC

Rhiam clutched the knife as tightly as he could, his fingers slick on the rough cloth, the corners of his eyes stung. It's just the smell, he told himself. He was fourteen now, a man grown, not a a bawling bade. Still, he could curse the stink and no one would think less of him. Cursing the stink was like cursing the magisters, the ones who made the slums into the festering pots of piss, shit, and offal that clung to you all the better so they would know you better if you dared to try and walk into the city proper.

"Are you alright kid?" Andrew asked, breaking the silence that had hung over the alleyway almost since they had made their way here to wait for their contact. Most of them were like a cat on a tin roof, but not Andrew. The Westerosi man as calm as if he'd just come out for a stroll, but you could still read the worry in his eyes, the suspicion.

By the Light and the Flame, please let this not be a magister plot, Rhiam prayed to the Lord of Light as his mother had taught him.

Among the dried leaves a rat moved, a fat one good for the pot. Rhiam's eyes weren't the only one to follow it, but no one said anything. They weren't just another gang scraping for the day's grub, they were the Breakers of Chains and they would break the magisters... all of them.

***​

The woman didn't look like she belonged here, she walked down the rutted alleyway like her feet didn't even touch the ground, her dark blue cloak not even frayed around the edges, her words like silk and honey: "I promised you gold and gold you will have, but it will serve you nothing if you do not learn to restrain your anger to those who are truly to blame for your plight. A burning husk of a city serves no one, neither does one cut off from all aid and trade. You have been..."

"Braavosi whore!" Andrew cursed shockingly, his eyes burning with hatred. "So this is what it's about, eh? You are not the real enemy since you don't have to watch them put collars on us, no, you just keep your hands clean and and our legs open. Well guess what? We ain't too stupid to count past twenty like you think of us. It's cheaper to to braid rope and spin pots with bondsmen, cheaper to grow grain for you to gorge yourselves on while our children starve. Your silver's no less stained with blood just because it has to pass through another pair of hands first. So here's my offer if you really want to free all the damn bondsmen in Pentos, strip off all your silks and jewels, hand it over, and then go fuck yourselves. Maybe we'll get around to doing something about that 'friendship' and 'trade' of yours in a few hundred years, that's how long it took you to think about 'helping' us isn't it?"

The woman looked at Andrew, then at the rest of the men and women standing behind him. Rhiam straightened as her gaze passed and then gritted his teeth seeing pity there. What right did the bitch had to pity them, like they were gnats beneath her boots?

"I am not Braavosi. If it soothes your mind to call me a whore than do so. I've answered to worse. I'm not here to use you, I'm not even here to persuade you to see things my way, only to see the world as it is. If you refuse to do so you will die as a man who walks into the sea convinced that there is no water will, surely drowning no matter how valiantly he charges in. I am offering to teach you to swim, far far away from here," she motioned to the filthy alleyway as though it were nothing, as though they were nothing, yet he could see some of those behind him were considering.

Old Tom who probably just wanted to drink himself to death, Maegie shuffling her feet and whispering, the damn snitch... Rhiam hated thinking of them like that, he hated that they were thinking about going against Andrew. Without them he really would be nothing. The boy moved up without even thinking of doing it. He had to.

He threw his knife at the woman and watched in horror as it bounced off her dress with a clink.

"I see," the Braavosi woman said as she turned on her heel and left.

***​

Thirteenth Day of the Ninth Month 293 AC

The Breakers held together, it had been touch and go there for a little bit, but when Andrew agreed to have Rhiam flogged for breaking parley the others had settled down. As he took his lashings cursing, but not begging them to stop, Rhiam felt more a man than he had ever done. He'd kept his crew, his family together. Andrew hadn't taken it well, he could tell from the way he had looked . He had not left his room since lunch...

Rhiam walked into the darkened chamber and for a moment he could not understand what his eyes were seeing.

Andrew slumped over the the chipped clay bowl, face turned blue, eyes staring and empty.

"No... no... no...no..." the boy babbled as he rushed toward the man who had taken him in off the streets, who had taught him how to fight and why to fight, but there was no one there, just another corpse. Soon there would be one more. Maegie had done this... he'd seen her carry the bowl in.

Clutching his knife, the knife Andrew had given back to him, the boy walked out of the room looking for her.

***​

The little bitch was a liar to the end, she screamed, begged, and pleaded that is wasn't her, but he didn't listen. She had killed him for Braavosi silver. He'd make sure she would never get to enjoy it. Hands red with blood the man looked t his handwork, the ruin of her face didn't look like Maegie anymore... it didn't even look like a person.

From behind him he heard the others calling, they'd find him soon.

Turning his left wrist down on the table, in some vague notion that is how things were done, Rhiam slammed the knife down hard.

OOC: Tyene could have probably stopped this but the reason she did not is because she could not justify the time spent turning a gang of twelve people, it was the right thing to do as a representative of the Imeprium and as one concerned about the greatest good for the greatest number. Some tragedies will happen even with the best of intentions.
 
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