A Reforged World (NO SV, You are King of Italy, in a Greatly Changed World)

the old Roman senate title of consul, as he was elected

You sure Luciano didn't add clauses that makes him "Consul for Life" while no one was looking?

All I would have done was mostly have the kid Marval in the fact that he from the worst timeline, because where an abolitionist king unified Italy in the British constitution sense almost 400 years early is absolutely forign to him and wonders what the fuck happened. To change history.

An Omake about that seems interesting..

If anyone is interested how the Da Vinci Canal would be operated..

Think of the Panama Canal.

Anyhow, Here's a few innovations from Da Vinci's Notebook and an additional one for Water:


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Only in America where we invent a steam powered tanks...

We are such mad bastards.
 
The World Rumor Mill 2
The World Rumor Mill 2

The Ottomans:D100 => 1
Suliman: D100 => 63
Severin and the Order of Solutions Escape:D100 => 80

He had chased them through his empire. He had chased the men who killed his friend. And he had them…

Rather they had him. Jon Charles Severin was the greatest master of war of this century, many would claim ever. But instead, he merely brought him before him.

Jon Charles was a strange man. He seemed jovial and loved battle, yet as he stared at you, alone with a sword and hand, he laughed but was serious in his tone. "I killed your friend? Didn't I?" he asked. "And why have you not brought your army with you?"

"Because it is my revenge, not theirs." Suliman stated.

"Then he should not have tried to hard to kill me and mine. You should have shown mercy to men when you murdered them, and took them prisoner." Jon said. "I aimed to kill because I wanted to escape, and no longer be part of a conflict when our contract had been voided by the Mamluks." Jon then took out his pistol and aimed it at the young Sultan's head. "I am showing you this mercy, so that I may get home, and nothing more."

"I should kill you all!" Suliman screamed.

"Perhaps. But you are not in any position to make those threats." Jon Charles said as he held his pistol at the Sultans head. "Now give me your word that we will pass unmolested back to Europe."

"Or what?"

"I'll kill you." Jon Charles said. "Simple as." He pulled back the hammer. "Make your choice."

The Order of Solutions would be allowed to leave the Ottoman Empire.

Reward: Through an act of emotion, Suliman was captured by the Order of Solutions, and managed to negotiate for safe passage out of the Ottoman Empire.
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Austria:D100 => 13
Poland/Lithuania:D100 => 85

Poland came to Vienna's aid, and saved the city from siege and destruction.

The Austrian Hapsburgs had all but thanked their saviors… because there was only one thing they could do. Pay them sums of coin, and pray to god the Ottomans did not return.
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France:D100 => 92+D100 => 17

The French Pope… or as he is called by his people, the Hammer of God, has brought forth a proclamation to the rest of Europe.

That the Pope is an apostate, who has sullied and corrupted God's word on earth. And that the only ones who have found Jesus will.

And tens of thousands… nay, hundreds of thousands from all over Europe headed the French King's call. Churches burned.

Bishops and priests were killed, and their livelihoods were sacked and brought to France, filling the French coffers richly.
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England:D100 => 31
The Papacy Diplomatic Efforts:D100 => 85

The Pope succeded in bringing the English back to the fold, after a fear that they would leave.

But the English were given a free opportunity to fight the French without harming their immortal soul and to finally take the throne that they had been fighting for for centuries.

England will rule France. Or failing that, show that they are the superior nation.
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Scotland:D100 => 48

Scotland just… followed the English's lead for the first time ever.

Mostly because they wanted to beat up the french for abandoning them.
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The HRE:D100 => 38

The emperor of the Germans sees many of the principalities burn. Many of his western Princes joined the new French Pope, and struck out for riches and glory, and the ability to become rich under this new regime.

And to the east, the fear of the Ottoman Turks still remains.
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Spain:D100 => 92+D100 => 97+D100 => 60

But in Spain, there was nothing of the sort of chaos or destruction from France. If anything there was fervor. Religious fervor from their new king, who had brought them gold from a new world. Gold and a place of refuge if they were to fail, and Europe becomes lost.

Yet Charles has begun his own reforms. His reforms… that will bring Spain to the future.
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New Spain (Carribian):D100 => 95D100 => 92+D100 => 97+D100 => 48
Charles the V:D100 => 97+D100 => 87

With the King offering land and gold to his new settlers, the New Spain's population has been exploding.

But it was also exploding for another reason.

Bartolomé de las Casas, the king's newest governor, has had a change of heart, and a change of style. Inspired by the King of Italys crusade against slavery, and seeing the horrors that such a system has brought, even with the King ordaining it as God's mission to build Spain's new empire…

He used his wealth, his influence, and his power as Governor of New Spain… to free every man, woman, and child that was in bondage. He declared to his Sovrigen, under pain of death and treason this simple fact.

"My King has brought subjects of the Spanish crown, and God himself, into a cruel and unjust servitude. Through every fiber of my being, I despise it. I lash out at it. I use every avenue, legal and otherwise, to do one good thing in this world. We have been shown that men can be free from the oppression and servitude of slavery by others in the Old World. So I say this, to my King. Let us be free from those same chains in this New World."

The King, Charles said nothing about the treason. But rumors abound, that he smiling at a portrait of his friend. "You win." He had said.

Accepting that he had been defeated by his friend, both on the argument to him… and by the will of his own people and subjects.
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Pizzaro:D100 => 38
The Inca'sD100 => 33

A standstill, where no one can win… but no one can lose.

That is what Pizzaro finds himself.

But he and his enemy, cannot make the first move.
 
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"Then he should not have tried to hard to kill me and mine.
"so"

You should have shone mercy to men when you murdered them
"shown"

And that the only ones who have found Jesus will.
"will" what?

hundreds of thousands from all over europe headed the French Kings call.
"Europe heeded the French King's"

Mostly because they wanted to beat up the french for abandoning them.
"French"

to free every man woman, and child that was in bondage.
There should be a comma after "man".

He declared to his Sovrigen, under pain of death and treason this simple fact.
"Sovereign"

But rumors abound, that he smiling at a portrait of his friend.
There's a word missing here.
 
So, we got WW1
France is basically calling a crusade, England is ready to try and prove they are in the big boys, and the Ottomans got their blip kicked by Poland and Severin while poor Austria made out not as well as they would want. And between our arguments and his chosen leader of new Spain, we got the start of a super alliance ready to fight a holy war against France, whom might be more accurate to call a theocracy at this point. France and Germany vs Spain and Italy seems to be the big players at the moment. And England wants to become relevant.
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With the King offering land and gold to his new settlers, the New Spain's population has been exploding.

But it was also exploding for another reason.

Bartolomé de las Casas, the king's newest governor, has had a change of heart, and a change of style. Inspired by the King of Italys crusade against slavery, and seeing the horrors that such a system has brought, even with the King ordaining it as God's mission to build Spain's new empire…

He used his wealth, his influence, and his power as Governor of New Spain… to free every man, woman, and child that was in bondage. He declared to his Sovrigen, under pain of death and treason this simple fact.

"My King has brought subjects of the Spanish crown, and God himself, into a cruel and unjust servitude. Through every fiber of my being, I despise it. I lash out at it. I use every avenue, legal and otherwise, to do one good thing in this world. We have been shown that men can be free from the oppression and servitude of slavery by others in the Old World. So I say this, to my King. Let us be free from those same chains in this New World."

The King, Charles said nothing about the treason. But rumors abound, that he smiling at a portrait of his friend. "You win." He had said.

Accepting that he had been defeated by his friend, both on the argument to him… and by the will of his own people and subjects.
And so, a relationship is open to be saved, and New Spain's path to becoming a superpower has become more certain, removing a once developing achille's heel.
 
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No. mostly because England has no empire besides Ireland... and Wales.

France is kinda a super power right now, and has gold for days and people for days.

Germany is going to be fighting a civil war.

And my man Bartolome just decided that "Fuck Slavery, all my homies hate slavery" Mad lad himself, up and ended slavery in the New World.

For a time.
 
No. mostly because England has no empire besides Ireland... and Wales.

France is kinda a super power right now, and has gold for days and people for days.

Germany is going to be fighting a civil war.

And my man Bartolome just decided that "Fuck Slavery, all my homies hate slavery" Mad lad himself, up and ended slavery in the New World.

For a time.
Yeah, Especially as France and England are soon going to eye the new world, looking to try and get their own piece of the pie. And for france, possibly to try and disrupt the economic power of a major enemy.

France with the power of money.
Italy with the Industrial Revolution power.
And Spain with ties of a Building up superpower across the sea.

It ain't a Crimean war YET. But depending on how long it lasts, it just might.
 
The World Rumor Mill 2

The Ottomans:D100 => 1
Suliman: D100 => 63
Severin and the Order of Solutions Escape:D100 => 80

He had chased them through his empire. He had chased the men who killed his friend. And he had them…

Rather they had him. Jon Charles Severin was the greatest master of war of this century, many would claim ever. But instead, he merely brought him before him.

Jon Charles was a strange man. He seemed jovial and loved battle, yet as he stared at you, alone with a sword and hand, he laughed but was serious in his tone. "I killed your friend? Didn't I?" he asked. "And why have you not brought your army with you?"

"Because it is my revenge, not theirs." Suliman stated.

"Then he should not have tried to hard to kill me and mine. You should have shown mercy to men when you murdered them, and took them prisoner." Jon said. "I aimed to kill because I wanted to escape, and no longer be part of a conflict when our contract had been voided by the Mamluks." Jon then took out his pistol and aimed it at the young Sultan's head. "I am showing you this mercy, so that I may get home, and nothing more."

"I should kill you all!" Suliman screamed.

"Perhaps. But you are not in any position to make those threats." Jon Charles said as he held his pistol at the Sultans head. "Now give me your word that we will pass unmolested back to Europe."

"Or what?"

"I'll kill you." Jon Charles said. "Simple as." He pulled back the hammer. "Make your choice."

The Order of Solutions would be allowed to leave the Ottoman Empire.

Reward: Through an act of emotion, Suliman was captured by the Order of Solutions, and managed to negotiate for safe passage out of the Ottoman Empire.

Bruh, John Severin is the GOAT commander who continues to earn his spot in top 10 general lists. Dude just crippled the Ottomans for a while and singlehandidly saved both Egypt and Central Europe with his capture of Suleiman. Definitely gotta hire the Order of Solutions for any war with France.

I assume thanks to the Order of Solutions, that Mamluk Egypt's independence is secure for the near future? If so that's of enormous help to limiting Ottoman ambitions and preventing them from entering the golden age. I know Egypt is prime colony territory, but perhaps it might be good to secure a commercial partnership between them and Italy.

Austria:D100 => 13
Poland/Lithuania:D100 => 85

Poland came to Vienna's aid, and saved the city from siege and destruction.

The Austrian Hapsburgs had all but thanked their saviors… because there was only one thing they could do. Pay them sums of coin, and pray to god the Ottomans did not return.

Poland continues to be a nation of Chads. Good on the Winged Hussars for defending Vienna, and hopefully the Ottoman's Nat 1 means that Lithuania was able to conquer some Crimean territory or Moldavia goes independent.
Magoose, what's going on with Hungary? They still had Louis II last world update and I would assume Polish aid and Suleiman being captured would allow Hungary to at least retain all their pre-war land, maybe get some small gains.

France:D100 => 92+D100 => 17

The French Pope… or as he is called by his people, the Hammer of God, has brought forth a proclamation to the rest of Europe.

That the Pope is an apostate, who has sullied and corrupted God's word on earth. And that the only ones who have found Jesus will.

And tens of thousands… nay, hundreds of thousands from all over Europe headed the French King's call. Churches burned.

Bishops and priests were killed, and their livelihoods were sacked and brought to France, filling the French coffers richly.

Poor Martin Luther, dude just wanted a good Church and here France is hijacking the Protestant reformation and making all Protestants appear to be evil devil worshippers to Catholic Europe. Well looks like we're going to war with France soon. Wouldn't mind getting back Avignon and getting some nice slices of southern France.

England:D100 => 31
The Papacy Diplomatic Efforts:D100 => 85

The Pope succeded in bringing the English back to the fold, after a fear that they would leave.

But the English were given a free opportunity to fight the French without harming their immortal soul and to finally take the throne that they had been fighting for for centuries.

England will rule France. Or failing that, show that they are the superior nation.

POG. Nice Papal W and huge win for Catholicism since is England goes on to become as powerful as OTL, that means hundreds of millions more Catholics and America becomes Catholic. Really worried no Luciano was gonna mess things up, but I guess classic French hatred ensured the English would stay on the side of Rome.

Also whose the Pope right now?

Looks like it's time to build an official military alliance with England. Crazy thought, what if we betroth Niccolo to Mary Tudor, AKA Queen Mary I/Bloody Mary. Mary should be 2-3 years older than Niccolo and while she did become a tyrant OTL, that was after a very shit childhood where she watched her father call abandon her mother for Anne Boleyn, was proclaimed illegitimate and prohibited from succession, and basically seen as worthless by Henry overall. Henry having a son or Mary spending some time in Rome should adjust her better and Niccolo can always pull some Graziani romance and model his father and Isabella. Plus for children, she should be okay if she marries late teens, early 20s since Mary OTL got married when she was 38 and was very late with her pregnancies.

Speaking of the Tudors though, did Catherine ever give Henry a son and heir? There was a Prince Henry who was born in 1511 but died of a weird and sudden illness. Maybe Italian doctors help the baby live or help Catherine and her other pregnancies.

Scotland:D100 => 48

Scotland just… followed the English's lead for the first time ever.

Mostly because they wanted to beat up the french for abandoning them.

Huh, interesting. I wonder if there were marital alliances or other concessions to get Scotland to join the war. Maybe they get Ulster.

Spain:D100 => 92+D100 => 97+D100 => 60

But in Spain, there was nothing of the sort of chaos or destruction from France. If anything there was fervor. Religious fervor from their new king, who had brought them gold from a new world. Gold and a place of refuge if they were to fail, and Europe becomes lost.

Yet Charles has begun his own reforms. His reforms… that will bring Spain to the future.
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New Spain (Carribian):D100 => 95D100 => 92+D100 => 97+D100 => 48
Charles the V:D100 => 97+D100 => 87

With the King offering land and gold to his new settlers, the New Spain's population has been exploding.

But it was also exploding for another reason.

Bartolomé de las Casas, the king's newest governor, has had a change of heart, and a change of style. Inspired by the King of Italys crusade against slavery, and seeing the horrors that such a system has brought, even with the King ordaining it as God's mission to build Spain's new empire…

He used his wealth, his influence, and his power as Governor of New Spain… to free every man, woman, and child that was in bondage. He declared to his Sovrigen, under pain of death and treason this simple fact.

"My King has brought subjects of the Spanish crown, and God himself, into a cruel and unjust servitude. Through every fiber of my being, I despise it. I lash out at it. I use every avenue, legal and otherwise, to do one good thing in this world. We have been shown that men can be free from the oppression and servitude of slavery by others in the Old World. So I say this, to my King. Let us be free from those same chains in this New World."

The King, Charles said nothing about the treason. But rumors abound, that he smiling at a portrait of his friend. "You win." He had said.

Accepting that he had been defeated by his friend, both on the argument to him… and by the will of his own people and subjects.

Bartolome just cemented himself as one of the most based men in history and it's good to see that we smacked some sense into Charles and hopefully soon Spanish America may be free of slavery along with integration of the native peoples. Definitely worth not getting North America.
 
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Bruh, John Severin is the GOAT commander who continues to earn his spot in top 10 general lists. Dude just crippled the Ottomans for a while and singlehandidly saved both Egypt and Central Europe with his capture of Suleiman. Definitely gotta hire the Order of Solutions for any war with France.
Severin actually captured Suliman when he was trying to capture him, not destroy his army.

But yes, Severin is a chad who deserves all the respect.


However, he mearly wanted to go home, back to europe. and he got that.
I assume thanks to the Order of Solutions, that Mamluk Egypt's independence is secure for the near future? If so that's of enormous help to limiting Ottoman ambitions and preventing them from entering the golden age. I know Egypt is prime colony territory, but perhaps it might be good to secure a commercial partnership between them and Italy.
... For a short time.

Suliman will get his shit together and egypt will not have Severin to help out.
Poland continues to be a nation of Chads. Good on the Winged Hussars for defending Vienna, and hopefully the Ottoman's Nat 1 means that Lithuania was able to conquer some Crimean territory or Moldavia goes independent.
Crimean territory. But then Russia might happen so... we'll see.
Magoose, what's going on with Hungary? They still had Louis II last world update and I would assume Polish aid and Suleiman being captured would allow Hungary to at least retain all their pre-war land, maybe get some small gains.
All I'm going to say is this.

Austrian control over hungry might happen because of France's bullshit.
Speaking of the Tudors though, did Catherine ever give Henry a son and heir? There was a Prince Henry who was born in 1511 but died of a weird and sudden illness. Maybe Italian doctors help the baby live or help Catherine and her other pregnancies.
no. she did not.

And Henry is not what I call in a good position.
Huh, interesting. I wonder if there were marital alliances or other concessions to get Scotland to join the war. Maybe they get Ulster.
Scotland is after the new world. just like england.
Bartolome just cemented himself as one of the most based men in history and it's good to see that we smacked some sense into Charles and hopefully soon Spanish America may be free of slavery along with integration of the native peoples. Definitely worth not getting North America.
Yep. Very based.

However, he might have killed himself with that.
 
Pizzaro:D100 => 38
The Inca'sD100 => 33

A standstill, where no one can win… but no one can lose.

That is what Pizzaro finds himself.

But he and his enemy, cannot make the first move.
Even if Pizarro fails, I don't see the Incas recovering for many years, without taking into account the new conquerors that may emerge from New Granada, Pizarro was very lucky in OTL but long before his arrival the Inca empire was in decline.
 
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...Ah...
There are 3 classes there, and the now freed slaves may be threatening the system the others are currently used to. With ironically the locals likely feeling most threatened due to being in the middle class of the three tier system. 😅
Ehh. That will be less of an issue when class matters little in the face of more affordable food and imports from innovations in farm equipment and the invention of the locomotive.
 
Bruh, John Severin is the GOAT commander who continues to earn his spot in top 10 general lists. Dude just crippled the Ottomans for a while and singlehandidly saved both Egypt and Central Europe with his capture of Suleiman. Definitely gotta hire the Order of Solutions for any war with France.
The Ottomans aren't crippled in the slightest. They suffered a setback, nothing more. Their Army is still wholly intact.

The Mamlucks got themselves five more years at most, but they suffered more casualties in this Campaign then the Ottomans did. Their days are numbered.
 
I mean good shit that we did build the forts in the mountain right ?, i mean even france will bleed to death trying to do that
 
Say @Magoose how would the world react if we proposed the creation of the U.N. And the European Union as a way to stabilized Europe and the world so a war like this doesn't happen again
Not a chance in hell.

The world hasn't gone through the most horrific war ever and atomic weapons aren't on the table yet.

Nor has political philosophy developed enough to where it is needed.
 
Yeah, I was going to say, you are like 300 years too early for that to even be a viable concept. Like, I could see Luciano writing about the idea, and being hailed even more as a visionary so far ahead of him time, but it is very very unrealistic that it would be taken seriously at all.
 
Say @Magoose how would the world react if we proposed the creation of the U.N. And the European Union as a way to stabilized Europe and the world so a war like this doesn't happen again
You gotta try and keep in mind that Luciano is an brilliant engineer, the way Mozart was a brilliant composer. Their beyond amazing in their field, and a little ahead of their time because they see where certain parts of society don't fit the Machine/Song of the future or even present.

However, Luciano is not a visionary statesman, or economic analyst, or tactician. He's bringing the world into a new age centuries ahead of schedule already, but he isn't going to inexplicably create modern society in the course of a lifetime.
 
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